2013年高考英语作文热门话题
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1 2013年高考英语作文热门话题:微博 随着微博的普及,许多行业精英或公众人物通过微博发布消息和表达观点,给社会带来不同影响。现在请用英语就此写篇简评,内容包括:1、上述情况日趋普遍;2、这种做法的利与弊;3、微博是否应该受到监管?为什么? 注意:1.词数:120字左右; 2.参考词汇:微博 micro-blogs n (pl.);行业精英 industry elites n. (pl) “高考直通车认证空间”将陆续推出2013年高考英语最有可能的考的书面表达,属于考前押题系列。考前每天发布一个专题,大家可以先练练手,然后再对照范文。考前给自己充充电吧!欢迎关注微信号80796072,每天为你传递最新高考资讯! 2013年高考英语作文热门话题:旅游景区涨价利弊 随着五一“小长假”旅游旺季的到来,国内景区掀起了新一轮“涨价潮”,网友们感叹景区越来越“玩不起”。请你写一篇短文,叙述景区门票涨价的利与弊,并陈述你自己的看法。 注意: 1.词数不少于100; 2.不可逐条翻译; 3.可适当增加细节,以使文章连贯。 “高考直通车认证空间”将陆续推出2013年高考英语最有可能的考的书面表达,属于考前押题系列。考前每天发布一个专题,大家可以先练练手,然后再对照范文。考前给自己充充电吧!欢迎关注微信号80796072,每天为你传递最新高考资讯! 参考范文: With the tourist season coming, the ticket price of some of the places of interest has been raised again. Some people think that the price lift can limit the number of visitors so that the environment can be better protected. However, other people believe that this is not at all fair because the beautiful scenery belongs to all people who have the right to appreciate it. They think that the price lift will discourage those with a lower income from visiting these places. I firmly hold that the ticket price should not be raised so that more ordinary people can enjoy the fantastic nature of our great country.
2013年高考英语作文热门话题:H7N9流感 书面表达(满分35分) 假设你是李华,从电视上看到H7N9流感仍然在上海流行,并有少部分人因此而丧生,你为你正在上海上学的笔友Anderson的健康与安全担心。请你给他写一封信询问他的情况,并给他提出防护建议。 要点: 1、询问(他的健康状况;人们对流行疾病的反应:是否感到恐惧等) 2、建议(至少三点) 注意:词数:120左右; Dear Anderson, __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua “高考直通车认证空间”将陆续推出2013年高考英语最有可能的考的书面表达,属于考前押题系列。考前每天发布一个专题,大家可以先练练手,然后再对照范文。考前给自己充充电吧! 【参考范文】 Dear Anderson, 2
From TV I know there are still many H7N9 flu cases reported recently in Shanghai and some people are even killed as a result. I’m so worried about you. So I’m writing to get to know some information about you. Are you all right ? Are there any H7N9 flu cases in your school ? Are you still afraid of this widespread disease ? To stay away from the disease, I strongly suggest you doing the following things. Firstly,you’d better stay at home as much as possible and not go to places where there are many people. Then it would be a good idea to wash your hands more often to keep them clean. Besides, open the window to have more fresh air in the room.And last but not least, eat more fruits and vegetables to keep yourself fit and strong. So far the disease is not so deadly as it seems to be. Do be at ease ! Take care and you’ll be OK. 2013年高考热门话题:光盘行动 策略指导:长句有风险,使用需谨慎。高级句型:如何表达重要性 热点作文:光盘行动,减少浪费 ◎策略指导 经过多年对学生的英语作文批阅,很多好学生感叹“怀才不遇”,自己的作文总是得不到高分,为此忿忿不平。 为赋新词强说愁,是好学生写作文时最容易犯的通病。这些学生喜欢卖弄一些高级词汇和复杂结构,误以为高级词汇和复杂结构越多,作文就会显得越有档次。于是在写作文时,就一门心思地堆砌辞藻,刻意制造复杂句,把简单的问题复杂化,结果弄巧成拙,不是造成行文晦涩难懂,就是有故意炫耀之嫌,给阅卷老师留下班门弄斧的坏印象。在追求高级词汇和复杂结构的过程中,存在的主要问题有: 1.吃不透高级词汇的用法。 中文大意 “光盘运动”倡导人们用餐时吃光盘中的所有食物,不要浪费。 不当表达 The campaign advocates people to eat up the food when having meals 简单表达 The campaign calls on people to eat up the food when... The campaign publicly asks people to eat up the food when... 高级表达 The campaign appeals to people to eat up the food when... The campaign advocates that people should eat up the food when…. Advocate是高级词汇,但是它后接名词、动名词或从句,很少后接动词不定式的复合结构。当表示提倡某人做某事时,我们可以使用以下结构:call on someone to do…或appeal to someone to do…,在考试中,我们宁缺毋滥,宁愿舍弃高级表达,也要确保正确,减少犯错误的几率 2.表达高级,但词不达意。 中文大意 令人高兴的是,浪费现象正在变得越来越少。 不当表达 What is rewarding is that waste is terribly reduced. 简单表达 We’re glad to find that the less food is being wasted at the table. 高级表达 People’s awareness has been greatly raised to stop food from being wasted. 写作的主要目的是为了表达意思,在于沟通,而不是唬人,没有必要“为了复杂而复杂”,我们要根据表达内容和实际行文的需要,恰当使用英语词汇和结构,准确无误地表达出我们的所思所想。在上面表格中的三种表达中,“不当表达” 不知所云,已经背离了中文意思,变成了:有回报的事情是垃圾废物被大大减少。 3.句子越长,越容易失控。 中文大意 针对随意浪费食物的现状,发起了光盘运用,提醒人们珍惜粮食。
不当表达 Faced with the situation that many Chinese people waste food at random,the campaign is launched to raise people’s awareness of treasuring food.
简单表达 Much food is being wasted in China. In order to improve the situation, the government has launched the campaign to raise ...
复杂表达 Faced with the situation that many Chinese people waste food, the government has launched the campaign to raise people’s …
长句有风险,使用需谨慎。句子越长,结构越复杂,表达就越容易失控。中学生驾驭长句的能力有限,如果达不到一定的火候,就容易犯错误。在上面的“不当表达”中,faced with与句子的主语没有逻辑主谓关系。我的个人建议是,没有金刚钻别揽瓷器活,如果没有十足驾驭长句的把握,倒不如把长句拆分几个短句,也可以去收到异曲同工之妙。 ◎高级句型 在作文中,我们经常要描述事物的特征,其中,重要性就是一个主要的方面。现在,我们就来总结一下,看一看到底有多少高级结构来表达事物的重要性。 简单表达 高级表达 Education is important. Education is of much importance. The work he does is important. The work he does is absolutely vital. A good diet is important for us. A good diet is essential for everyone. Education is important to our future. Education is critical to our future. Money is the only thing that’s important to him. Money is the only thing that matters to him.