中考英语作文高分技巧和例题
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1 2020年中考英语提示作文高分技巧和经典例题
一、高分技巧
1.认真审题,确定时态人称,同时关注体裁格式
提示类作文要认真审题,切中题意。看到考题后先不要急于动笔,要仔细看清题目要求的内容,根据提纲或短文提供的资料和信息来审题。审题要审格式、体裁、人物关系故事情节、主体时态、活动时间、地点等。要在自己的头脑中构思出一个框架或画面,确定短文的中心思想。
2.找全信息点,紧扣主题,突出重点
要充分发挥自己的组织能力,把情景中给出的各个要点逐条列出。根据短文的中心思想考虑如何开头、展开和结尾,设想几个承上启下的连词,将主要句型、关键词语草草记下,形成提纲,写作时切忌结构分散,废话连篇,严重跑题。文章结构清晰,重点句型出彩可使文章在得分上提高一个档次。
3.成文时表述正确,文字流畅
要注意以下内容:
(1)内容要点;
(2)运用词汇和结构的数量;
(3)运用语法结构和词汇的准确性;
(4)上下文的连贯性。
二、写作模板
【参考提纲】
1 第一段:点明主旨,引入正文。
第二段:展开记叙具体事件或描述具体事物。
第三段:总结全文,前呼后应。
【参考模板】
Recently, what amazes us most is(题目中所描述的现象),it is true
that____(自己的观点或看法).
There are many reasons explaining ___(题目中所描述的现象),The
main reason is ___(出现这种现象的原因一),What is more,____
(原因二). Thirdly,____(原因三).As a result,____(总结).
Considering all there,____ (自己的观点). For one thing,____ (措施一),for another,____ (措施二). In conclusion ____ (结论).
三、经典例题
经典例题1
(中考真题改编)书包伴我学习,伴我成长,某英文报以“ My Schoolbag”为题,举办中学生征文活动。请根据下表信息,写一篇短文。内容包括:书包的外形特征、内部结构以及用途。
提示:
(1)短文应包括图表中所有信息,条理清楚,行文连贯,段落分明;
(2)短文中不能出现真实人名地名;
(3)词数不少于80,开头已给出,不计入总词数。
1
My Schoolbag
I have a choolbag....
【高分范文】
My Schoolbag
I have a schoolbag. It is used for carrying the school things
such as books, pens and so on. It looks like a luggage which
alwaysaccompanies me n the world of knowledge
My schoolbag is always by my side. love my schoolbag so
much because of its inner structure. My schoolbag is not
onlybeautiful. but the function is all good. It has eight pockets.
and eachhas its own purpose. The biggest bag can be used to put
books, penslunch boxes and other things. Inside the big bag there
is a smallerone, which is used to put some private things. such as
money. mealcards and so on. The outboard of schoolbag still has
a transparentsmall bag. and can put a few easy things in it. It is so
convenientOther small bags can also contain a lot of things. I can
put my keys,notes and other small things in them according to my
own habits.
This is my schoolbag, and what's yours like?
【高分词汇】
structure n.结构,构造,建筑物 v.组织,构成,建造
1 purpose n.目的,用途 意志 v.决心,企图,打算
private adj.私人的,私有的
【高分短语】
not only…but(also)… 不但……而且……
such as例如
be used to习惯于……
according to…根据……,由……得知
【高分句子】
(1)Inside the big bag there is a smaller one, which is used to put
some private things, such as money, meal cards and so on.在大包的内侧有一个小包,用来放一些私人物品.例如钱、饭卡等。
(2)Other small bags can also contain a lot of things. I can put my
keys, notes and other small things in them according to my own
habits.其他包里面也可以放很多东西。我可以根据自己的习惯来放钥匙、便签等小物件
经典例题2
(中考真题改编)你校将开设一些特色课程,学生可根据兴趣进行选择。请根据以下内容提示为学校英文网页写一篇短文,介绍这些课程的特色和用途,提出你建议增设的课程并说明理由。
注意:
(1)参考词汇:模型制作model making;
1 (2)80词左右(文章开头已给出,不计入总词数);
(3)不得透露任何真实信息。
Special courses
Students in our school are free to choose some courses
occording to their interest.......
【高分范文】
Special courses
Students in our school are free to choose some courses
according to their interest. These courses will help students relax
themselves after school. There are many courses for them to
choose,such as Enguish drama, football, model making and so on.
Here is more information.
If you want to improve your oral English. English drama may be
the first choice. It is a good chance to practice not only oral
English, but also performing skills, If you are interested in football,
take the football course. It can stregthen the body and enhance
the sense of teamwork. What about model making? You will enjoy
yourself in the science world and increase your interest in
studying science.
I hold the view that a painting course can be added. because
students like drawing so much. I hope these courses would be
1 helpful and each student would enjoy a bright and colorful school
life here!
【高分词汇】
oral adj.口头的,口述的 n.口试
strengthen v.加强,巩固;变强,变坚挺
enhance v.提高,加强,增加
sense n.感觉,功能,观念,道理, 理智 v.感觉到,检测
【高分短语】
acording to根据……
I hold the view that……我认为,我觉得(等问于I think……)
be interested in对……感兴趣
【高分句子】
(1)It is a good chance to practice not only oral English, but also
performing skills.
这不仅是一个练习口语的好机会,还是一个练习表演技巧的好机会。
(2)It can strengthen the body and enhance the sense of
teamwork.
它能强身健体,增强团队意识。
(3)I hold the view that a painting course can be added, because
students like drawing so much.
我认为可以增加一门画画课,因为学生非常喜欢画画。