The Problems of Increasing Cars Traffic
Increasing cars are not only bringing convenient for people, but also bringing the problems for us. Traffic jams, air pollutions, energy shortage, costs of society and drivers’ pressures are typical problems of increasing cars in China. This has been the one of hottest spots of society in China. The governments and the dependence organizations are began to solve those problems.
Firstly, if we want to solve problems that we need to know problems are what. In 2009 year, China was become the biggest country in product cars and sell cars; just in 2010 year, the dates had exceeded 18 millions. Traffic jams is the most direct result. There was an actual story that there was a new couple drove to church celebrating their marriage, while traffic was so jammed that they had to celebrating their marriage in the road. Drivers are often in nervous and fret. That is very harmful for drivers’ healthy and society orders. Now, with cars increasing, car exhausts have become the biggest sources of air pollutions. Furthermore governments and citizens have to spend much money to build the public installations, such as parking lots, roads, and bridges. It means over 1 billion RMB are cost by bad traffic every day in China. How to solve those problems became the point that people focus on.
Therefore, the Chinese governments according to the situations have issued new policies to limit the number of the increasing cars. For example, in Beijing you need line up to buy cars, and the numbers have been limited every month. Government also encourages the automobile factory use the hybrid technology. And will give some compensation to customers who buy hybrid cars and battery cars. We can also use the vehicle radio to help people relax through light music and funny stories. It’s a good orientation that there are more and more people select bicycles and electrical bicycles as their transport. It will be long processes that solve increasing cars, and it needs the cooperation between governments and citizens.
As I have shown, the problems of increasing cars are really needed attaches great importance and solve. But except technology and science support, the cooperation of governments and citizens are also very important. Governments should carry out the new policies, at the same time; they should listen to the voices from the public people. As we know, China is a developing country which needs more experiences to treat and solve those problems.
By Lee
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英语作文：关于共享单车的4篇范文 共享单车确实是今年最热的话题之一，很多小伙伴们留言问共享单车要怎么写英语作文，这一份写作指南想必大家都很需要。 词汇篇 bicycle-sharing /sharing bike /shared bikes 共享单车 bicycle /bike /cycle 自行车 ride a bicycle /take a ride /cycling /cycle /bicycle /bike 骑自行车 park 停车 Bluegogo 小蓝单车 Ofo bicycle 小黄车 Mobike 摩拜单车 APP 应用程序(全称为application) scan the QR code 扫描二维码 unlock the smart lock 解开智能锁
timer 计时器 user 用户 smartphone 智能手机 keep fit 健身 environmental protection/ environment friendly/ help the environment 环保的 In full swing 如火如荼 brightly coloured 色彩鲜艳 The combination of technology, creativity and market forces 科技、创意、市场力量的结合 has changed the image of the city 改变了城市形象 curb carbon dioxide emissions 减少二氧化碳排放 reduce road congestion 减少道路拥堵的情况 random parking 随机停车 illegal parking
本技术公开了一种英语作文自动评分系统，涉及作文批改技术领域，包括作文读取模块、作文评判模块、人工评分模块、机器评分模块、评分输出模块和权重修改模块，所述作文评判模块电连接所述作文读取模块、所述人工评分模块、所述机器评分模块、所述评分输出模块和所述权重修改模块，所述权重修改模块电连接所述机器评分模块。本技术不仅能够自动对英语作文进行评分，总结出错地方、给出改正意见，而且各项评分标准的比重也可以由操作者自行设定，同时还能够自由设置人工评分和机器评分的比重，适应于多种英语作文的自动评分情况。 技术要求 1.一种英语作文自动评分系统，其特征在于，包括作文读取模块、作文评判模块、人工评分模块、机器评分模块、评分输出模块和权重修改模块，所述作文评判模块电连接所述 作文读取模块、所述人工评分模块、所述机器评分模块、所述评分输出模块和所述权重 修改模块，所述权重修改模块电连接所述机器评分模块； 所述作文读取模块用于识别英语作文、并进行字数统计和格式检查；所述人工评分模块 用于通过人工对英语作文进行评分；所述机器评分模块用于通过系统内的多项评分标准 自动对英语作文进行评分；所述作文评判模块用于对英语作文进行综合评价，并按照人 工评分比重和机器评分比重计算英语作文最终得分；所述评分输出模块用于输出最终评 分并总结错误、给出修改建议；所述权重修改模块用于修改所述机器评分模块内的多项 评分标准的权重系数。
作文识别模块、字数统计模块和格式检查模块，所述作文识别模块用于识别读取出英语作文，所述字数统计模块用于统计英语作文字数，所述格式检查模块用于对英语作文进行格式检查。 3.如权利要求1所述的一种英语作文自动评分系统，其特征在于，所述机器评分模块包括拼写检查模块、语法检查模块、单词高级度模块、要点覆盖模块、整体美观模块和评分汇总模块，所述拼写检查模块、所述语法检查模块、所述单词高级度模块、所述要点覆盖模块、所述整体美观模块均与所述评分汇总模块电连接； 所述拼写检查模块用于对英语作文的单词拼写进行检查，所述语法检查模块用于对英语作文的语法进行检查，所述单词高级度模块用于对英语作文的高级度进行判别，所述要点覆盖模块用于对英语作文的要点覆盖程度进行判别，所述整体美观模块用于对英语作文整体美观程度进行判别，所述评分汇总模块用于汇总所述拼写检查模块、所述语法检查模块、所述单词高级度模块、所述要点覆盖模块和所述整体美观模块的各项比重得分并计算出最终得分。 4.如权利要求3所述的一种英语作文自动评分系统，其特征在于，所述评分汇总模块内的评判公式为： 汇总得分＝拼写检查得分*拼写检查权重+语法检查得分*语法检查权重+单词高级度得分*单词高级度权重+要点覆盖得分*要点覆盖权重+整体美观得分*整体美观权重。 5.如权利要求4所述的一种英语作文自动评分系统，其特征在于，所述拼写检查权重、所述语法检查权重、所述单词高级度权重、所述要点覆盖权重和所述整体美观权重均由操作者自行设置且满足总和等于1。 6.如权利要求1所述的一种英语作文自动评分系统，其特征在于，所述评分输出模块包括错误总结模块、改正建议模块和评分结果模块，所述错误总结模块用于对英语作文中出现的错误进行总结，所述改正建议模块用于针对英语作文中出现的错误给出改正建议，所述评分结果模块用于输出英语作文的最终结果。
(一) 假定你是红星中学初三学生李华。你的美国朋友Jim在给你的邮件中提到他对中国新近出现的一种共享单车“mobike”很感兴趣，并请你做个简要介绍。请你给Jim回信，内容包括： 1. 这种单车的使用方法(如：APP查看车辆、扫码开锁等); 2. 这种单车的优势; 3. 你对这种单车的看法。 注意：1. 词数不少于80; 2. 开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 提示词：智能手机smartphone, 二维码the QR code 参考范文 Dear Jim, I’m writing to tell you more about the new form of sharing bike mobike mentioned in your latest letter. It’s very convenient to use if you have a smartphone. What you do is find a nearest mobikethrough the APP, scan the QR code on the bike, and enjoy your trip. Compared to other forms of sharing bike, the greatest advantage of mobike is that you can easily find one and never worry about where to park it. It is becoming a new trend as a means of transportation, which relieves the traffic pressure and does good to the environment as well. Hope to ride a mobike with you in China. Yours, Li Hua (二) 最近很多大城市都投放了共享单车(shared bikes)，比如摩拜单车(Mobike)、Ofo共享单车等。由于它们方便停放，骑车也能起到锻炼身体的作用，作为代步工具很受大家欢迎。但是，各地也出现了很多毁车现象，比如刮掉车上的二维码(QR code)、上私锁等。 你对这种现象怎么看?你对共享单车公司有什么建议吗?写一篇符合逻辑的英语短文，80词左右。 参考词汇：bike-sharing companies 共享单车公司，Mobike 和Ofo 是两家共享单车公司，convenience 方便，register登记 参考范文 The shared bikes like Mobike and Ofo bring great convenience to people. You needn’t lock them by simply using your smart phone. They can take you where the subway and bus don’t go. And they can be left anywhere in public for the next user. However, bad things happen. Some people damage the QR code on the bike, or use their own lock, which causes trouble to other users. In my opinion, it’s difficult to turn these people’s ideas in a short time. Therefore, bike-sharing companies like Mobike and Ofo need to do something. For example, those who damage the bike should pay for their actions. Also, because people use their real name toregister as a user, it’s a good way to connect to one’s personal credit. In the end, what I want to say is to take good care of public services. (三) 共享单车(bicycle sharing)已成为时下最热的话题之一，请你就这一话题写一篇短文。内容须包括三方面：1. 共享单车蓬勃发展，成为社会热潮;2. 共享单车带来便利，但也存在问题;3. 我对解决问题的建议。 参考范文 Bicycle Sharing With the development of technology, bicycle sharing comes into people's lives. It becomes more and more popular and much news reported it. At the same time, we should see that there are some problems caused by bicycle sharing. On one side, bicycle sharing makes it very convenient of people traveling. You can find a bicycle anywhere at any time when you want to go out for a cycling, and the price of one trip is very low. It can save time for people. On the other side, its management is not perfect. Even kids can open the lock and ride the bicycle, there is no doubt that such behavior is very dangerous.
AGREEMENT ON TRADE-RELATED INVESTMENT MEASURES Members, Considering that Ministers agreed in the Punta del Este Declaration that "Following an examination of the operation of GATT Articles related to the trade restrictive and distorting effects of investment measures, negotiations should elaborate, as appropriate, further provisions that may be necessary to avoid such adverse effects on trade"; Desiring to promote the expansion and progressive liberalisation of world trade and to facilitate investment across international frontiers so as to increase the economic growth of all trading partners, particularly developing country Members, while ensuring free competition; Taking into account the particular trade, development and financial needs of developing country Members, particularly those of the least-developed country Members; Recognizing that certain investment measures can cause trade-restrictive and distorting effects; Hereby agree as follows: 与贸易有关的投资措施协定 各成员， 考虑到部长们在《埃斯特角城宣言》中同意“在审查与投资措施的贸易限制作用和扭曲作用有关的GATT条款的运用情况之后，谈判应酌情详述为避免此类对贸易的不利影响而可能需要的进一步规定”； 期望促进世界贸易的扩大和逐步自由化，便利跨国投资，以便提高所有贸易伙伴、特别是发展中国家成员的经济增长，同时保证自由竞争； 考虑到发展中国家成员、特别是最不发达国家成员特殊的贸易、发展和财政需要； 认识到某些投资措施可能产生贸易限制作用和扭曲作用： 特此协议如下： Article 1 Coverage This Agreement applies to investment measures related to trade in goods only (referred to in this Agreement as "TRIMs"). 第1条 范围 本协定仅适用于与货物贸易有关的投资措施(本协定中称“TRIMs”)。 Article 2 National Treatment and Quantitative Restrictions 1. Without prejudice to other rights and obligations under GATT 1994, no Member shall apply any TRIM that is inconsistent with the provisions of Article III or Article XI of GATT 1994. 第2条 国民待遇和数量限制 1. 在不损害GATT 1994项下其他权利和义务的情况下，各成员不得实施任何与GATT l994第3条或第11条规定不一致的TRIM。
共享单车大学英语作文 Sharing bike can be seen in every corner of the street, which is very popular by the public. The foreigners speak highly of sharing bike, because they can ride the bikes to look around the city and the expense is very cheap. As people enjoy the convenience of these bikes, the problem comes. We can see that many bikes have been broken and some are even put in the main road, which brings trouble to the public. Of course when the media reported the phenomenon, everybody condemned the negative behavior. Sharing bikes are public property, all the people have the responsibility to protect them, so after using them, we should just find a right place to lock them. The small act can present a person’s nature, so don’t let yourself be the rude one. 在街道的每个角落都可以看得到共享单车，深受大众欢迎。外国 人对共享单车的评价很高，因为他们可以用花一点点钱就可以骑自行车 游览城市。当人们享受这些自行车的便利时，问题也来了。我们看到很 多自行车都被弄坏了，有些甚至被放到了主干道上，这给公众带来了麻 烦。当然，当媒体报道这一现象时，大家都谴责这种消极的行为。共享 单车是公共财产，所有人都有责任保护它们，所以当我们在使用它们的 时候，要找一个合适的地方把它们锁起来。一个小小的行为可以体现出 一个人的本性，所以不要让自己成为粗鲁的人。 tips:感谢大家的阅读，本文由我司收集整编。仅供参阅！
大学英语六级英语作文评分方法 大学英语六级考试作文的目的旨在考核学生英语书面表达的能力。作文考试时间为30分钟，要求写出不少于120个词的短文。六级考试作文的出题方式有：命题作文，看图画或图表作文，根据所给文章（英文或中文）写出文章摘要或大意，给出关键词作文章。考试的作文内容为社会、文化或日常生活的一般常识，不涉及知识面过广、专业性太强的内容。对作文的要求是：切题，文理通顺，表达正确，意思连贯，无重大语言错误。下面介绍六级考试作文的评分原则和标准，并通过五份样卷作一个详细说明。 （一）、作文评分原则 1．CET是检查考生是否达到大学英语教学大纲规定的六级教学要求，对作文的评判应以此要求为准则。 2．CET作文题采用总体评分方法。阅卷人员就总的印象给出奖励分,而不是按语言点的错误数目扣分。 3．从内容和语言两个方面对作文进行综合评判。内容和语言是一个统一体，作文应表达题目所规定的内容，而内容要通过语言来表达。要考虑作文是否切题，是否充分表达思想，也要考虑是否用英语清楚而确切地表达思想，也就
是要考虑语言上的错误是否造成理解上的障碍。 4．避免趋中倾向。该给高分的给高分，包括满分；该给低分的给低分，包括0分，一名阅卷人员在所阅的全部作文卷中不应只给中间的几种分数。 （二）、作文评分标准 1．本题满分为15分。 2．阅卷标准共分五等：2分、5分、8分、11分及14分。各有标准样卷一至二份。 3．阅卷人员根据阅卷标准，对照样卷评分，若认为与某一份数（如8分）相似，即定为该分数（即8分）；若认为稍优或稍劣于该分数，即可加一分（即9分）或减一分（即7分），但不得加或减半分。 4．评分标准：2分……条理不清，思路紊乱，语言支离破碎或在部分句子均有错误，且多数为严重错误。5分……基本切题。表达思想不清楚，连贯性差。有较多的严重语言错误。8分……基本切题。有些地方表达思想不够清楚，文字勉强连贯；语言错误相当多，其中有一些是严重错误。11分……切题。表达思想清楚，文字连贯，但有少量语言错误。14分……切题。表达思想清楚，文字通顺，连贯性好。基本上无语言错误，仅有个别小错误。[注：白卷，作文与题目毫不相关，或只有几个孤立的词而无法表达思想，则给0 分。] 累记字数CET6 100-119
[标签:标题] 篇一：关于汽车的英语作文 好的 Nowadays, with the rapid improvement of people’s living standards, cars have become an indispensable part of people's lives,so that more and more people have a car of their own, especially in cities. It brings some benefits for us but also causes many problems at the same time. For one thing,there’s no doubt that cars provide much convenience for people to go where they want to quickly and easily. Especially on weekday,driving a car can save a lot of time for us to go to work.When some places are too far away from our home, driving our own car is also convenient, we can go wherever we want. However,for another, too many cars will lead to the pressure of public transport, a series of problems will appear.First of all,it will bring about more air pollution,a large amount of polluted air given off by cars do great harm to our health.What’s more, as the existing roads are not so wide for the increasing number of cars,undoubtedly,traffic jams will become more and more serious. Last but not least, cars also place burden on the public facilities in providing more parking lots. As far as I am concerned,everything has its advantages and disadvantages. It’s high time that effective action must be token to limit the ever growing number of cars, the government should take measures to control the air pollution from the cars. Some roads should be widened and more new roads should be constructed. Only in this way，will people benefit from the popularity of cars. 坏的 Nowadays, with the rapid improvement of people's living standards, cars have become an indispensable part of people's lives,so that more and more people have a car of their own, especially in cities.It brings some benefit for us but also causes many problems at the same time. For one thing,it's no doubt that that cars provide much convenience for people to go where they want to quickly and easily. Especially on weekday,driving a car can save a lot of time for us to go to work.When some places are too far away from our home, driving our own car is also convenient, we can go wherever we want. However,for another, too many cars will lead to the pressure of public transport, a series of problems will appear.First of all,it will bring about more air pollution,a large amount of polluted air given off by cars do great harm to our health .What's more, as the existing roads are not so wide for the increasing number of cars,undoubtedly,traffic jams will become more and more serious. Last but not least, cars also place burden on the public facilities in providing more parking lots. As far as I am concerned,everything has its advantages and disadvantages. It's high time that effective action must be token to limit the ever growing number of cars, the government should take measures to control the air pollution from the cars. Some roads should be widened and more new roads should be constructed. Only in this way,will people benefit from the popularity of cars. 篇二：雅思作文高分范文：私家车的利与弊 智课网IELTS备考资料 雅思作文高分范文：私家车的利与弊
2020考博英语作文预测：白色污染问题现象与措施 2020考博各研究生院已陆续开始初试，考前考博英语作文押题是 考博生们喜闻乐见的信息，俗话说考前磨刀不快也光，作文考前一定 要充分准备好，常考的话题就那么几类，多练多总结并不难。以下是 小编整理的一些考博英语作文预测范文，供大家参考复习。 1. 开头(介绍背景)：先下定义，白色污染(white pollution)是随意丢弃塑料袋(disposal of plastic bags)，难以降解处理(hard to be decomposed in nature)，造成环境破坏：影响市容(destroy the look of city)，同时对人体有潜在危害(has hazards to human’s health)。 2. 问题产生根源：居民为其方便(for the sake of convenience)，大量使用，造成不可逆转的污染(cause irreversible damage to environment)。 3. 措施1：政府制定政策(make policies and regulations)，限制污染企业(place a limitation on the development of factories that pollute; 4. 措施2：政府大力探索新材料(make an effort to seek new material)，用清洁环保材料代替(use environmental-friendly materials to replace old ones) ，既清洁又便利; 5. 措施3：政府应做好民众的宣传(make known to people the danger of white pollution)，提升民众环保意识(raise the public awareness towards environmental protection)，比如多用环保袋去替代产生白色污染的塑料袋(encourage people to use reusable bags more); 5.结尾(号召)：解决白色污染问题不是梦，要考政府和民众的齐 心努力(requires the collaboration of the government and the population)。
共享单车英语作文 导语：随着摩拜单车的出现，共享单车席卷各大城市。不同颜色、不同造型的共享单车遍布街头，下面是小编为大家整理的英语作文，欢迎阅读与借鉴，谢谢! Citystreetsaroundthecountryhaveseenanexplosionofthecolo urfulbikesthatuserscanrentondemandwithasmartphoneappand thenparkwherevertheychoose. CompaniessuchasOfoandMobike,withtheirrivalfleetsofbumbl ebeeyellowandfluorescentorangebikes,havebeenlockedinacu t-throatbattleforcustomers. China’smobilebicycle-sharingplatformshaveseentheirbikessabota gedinmanycities,astheirexpansionacrossthecountryrunsint olocalresistance. Ofo-brandsharingbicyclesinXiamen,EastChina’sFujianProvince,acitypopularwithtourists,havebeensabota ged,withtheQRcodesusedtounlockthebikesbeingdefacedorloc alsattachingtheirownlockstothebikes,thelocalWestStraitM orningPostreportedonSunday. 【参考译文】
英语作文电脑智能自动评分系统的使用和启示 英语作文电脑智能自动评分系统的使用和启示内容简介： 英语作文电脑智能自动评分系统的使用和启示 在英语作文教学中，对学生作文进行批改一直被师生共识为提高写作能力的有效手段。但是，考虑到时间、精力、作文收发等方面，又不得不承认效率不高。在大规模语言考试中，作文又是必不可少的题 论文格式论文范文毕业论文 英语作文电脑智能自动评分系统的使用和启示 在英语作文教学中，对学生作文进行批改一直被师生共识为提高写作能力的有效手段。但是，考虑到时间、精力、作文收发等方面，又不得不承认效率不高。在大规模语言考试中，作文又是必不可少的题型，阅卷工作量和阅卷的信度等问题一直以来都不能让我们如意。针对这一难题，电脑智能自动评分系统提供了可以信赖、值得期盼的解决方案。在PEG、IEA、E-rater、冰果、MY Aess、IntelliMetri等几种智能评分系统中，选取IntelliMetri系统进行研究，对其评价标准进行理论分析，对其所评分的作文进行跟踪评析，发现其通过对学生作文按照若干评分标准问题进行回应和打分的方法能够快速、有效地解决了作文评分的效率问题，可靠性和准确性不亚于人工评分的水平，完全可以作为人工评分的补充手段。由此看来，智能评分系统的发展值得期盼。
一、IntelliMetri系统概述IntelliMetri系统发布于1998年1月，是第一个提供给教育机构的智能作文评分软件，相比传统的人工评阅具有许多优点，如： 准确度大于个人评分，尤其大于单人人工评分；提供即时反馈等等。发布以后，系统得到了广泛的应用。IntelliMetri系统作为一个智能评分系统，充分模拟了人工评分的过程。系统开发时经过了大量的测试培训，即不断通过人工纠正其自动认定的给分点，直至契合。值得提出的是，系统不是将所有的给分点简单地相加，而是通过分析给分点之间的聚合关系，模拟人工从整体上看待作文并给出判断，这一点上跟人工评分的过程是一致的。对于每一个给分点刺激和提示，IntelliMetri系统创建了一个独特的解决方案，主要的给分点、次要的给分点、聚群给分点和分散给分点，都有不同的分数赋值。每一个刺激或提示，这相当于人工阅卷时我们先将作文的得分点做上标记，然后回过头来审视通篇看所有的这些给分点是否形成整体，主题是否突出，连贯是否流畅。正因为如此，IntelliMetri系统能够实现令人满意的高匹配的评阅结果。 二、IntelliMetri系统评分依据IntelliMetri系统的评分依据主要根据其对作文进行的300多个变量的分析，这些变量包括语义学、造句法等与主题有关的一切因素，其数量和认定的准确度还在发展当中。概括起来，IntelliMetri系统评分依据从宏观到微观具有几个方面功能特征： 首先是聚焦度（Fous）和整体性（Unit），系统高度关注指向写作目的的聚焦度和一致性，对给分点的聚合关系赋值有统筹考虑，同时，也不排斥出现的单个观点的出现，注意到意义的关联度，做到点
作文评分标准 本题满分为15分。 2．阅卷标准共分五等：2分、5分、8分、11分及14分。各有标准样卷一至二份。 3．阅卷人员根据阅卷标准，对照样卷评分，若认为与某一份数（如8分）相似，即定为该分数（即8分）；若认为稍优或稍劣于该分数，即可加一分（即9分）或减一分（即7分），但不得加或减半分。 4．评分标准：2分……条理不清，思路紊乱，语言支离破碎或在部分句子均有错误，且多数为严重错误。5分……基本切题。表达思想不清楚，连贯性差。有较多的严重语言错误。8分……基本切题。有些地方表达思想不够清楚，文字勉强连贯；语言错误相当多，其中有一些是严重错误。11分……切题。表达思想清楚，文字连贯，但有少量语言错误。14分……切题。表达思想清楚，文字通顺，连贯性好。基本上无语言错误，仅有个别小错误。[注：白卷，作文与题目毫不相关，或只有几个孤立的词而无法表达思想，则给0分。] [注] 1.如题目中给出主题句，起始句，结束句，均不得计入所写字数 2.只写一段者：0~4分；只写两段者：0~9分（指规定三段的作文） 长度计分标准: 91～100词: 扣1分 81～90词: 扣2.5分 71～80词: 扣4分 61～70词: 扣6分 60词以下: 扣8分 3.为了便于阅卷人员掌握评分标准，现将各档作文分相当于百分制的得分，列表如下，称为得分率。其中9分的得分率为60（相当于百分制的60分）。 作文分15 14 13 12 11 10 9 8 7 6 5 4 3 2 1 得分率100 94 87 80 74 67 60 54 47 40 34 27 20 14 7 经原国家教委批准，四、六级考试已从1997年6月份起采用“作文最低”制计算成绩，其中足见国家对提高大学英语写作能力的重视程度。按规定，考生作文若为0分，无论其总分是否高于60分，均作不及格处理；若其作文分高于0分，低于6分，报导成绩时，需从总分中减去6分，再加上实得作文分。也就是说，要从总分中减去实得作文分与6分之间的差额部分。 评分标准分五个档次，14分，11分、8分、5分、2分，它分两个档次，14分上可以给到15，下可以给到13，8分上可以给到9分，下可以给到7分，5分上可以给多6分，下可以给到4分，2分上可以给到3分，下可以给到1分，这就是从1到15它分了五个档次。这五个档次我们再可以分三大档，14分和11分的这算是两个合起来，叫一大档，这大档的它相同点是内容切题，文字连贯，条理清楚，这是14分和11分它的相同点，也就是说只要你达到内容切题，文字连贯，条理清楚，你就可以得到11分以上的这么一个分数。 11分和14分两个档之间区别在什么地方？在于用词上，你的用词是不
《共享单车英语作文》 共享单车英语作文（一）： 共享单车 The shared bikes like xx and xx bring great convenience to people。You neednt lock them by simply using your smart phone。 They can take you where the subway and bus dont go。 And they can be left anywhere in public for the next user。 However， bad things happen。 Some people damage the QR code on the bike， or use their own lock， which causes trouble to other users。 In my opinion， its difficult to turn these peoples ideas in a short time。 Therefore， bike-sharing panies like xx and xx need to do something。For example， those who damage the bike should pay for their actions。 Also，because people use their real name to register as a user， its a good way to connect to ones personal credit。 In the end， what I want to say is to take good care of public services。 【译文】 共享自行车像xx的偿还给人们带来很大的方便。你不需要透过简单地使用智能手机来锁定它们。他们能够带你去地铁和公共汽车不去的地方。他们能够在公共场所为下一个用户留下。 然而，坏事总会发生。有些人在自行车上损坏QR码，或者使用自我的锁，这给其他用户造成麻烦。 在我看来，很难在短时光内改变这些人的想法。因此，自行车共享公司像xx 的偿还需要做些什么。例如，那些损坏自行车的人就应为他们的行为付出代价。此外，因为人们使用实名注册用户，这是连接个人信用的好方法。 最后，我想说的是好好照顾公共服务。 共享单车英语作文（二）： The problems of bike sharing Bike sharing， taking the convenience and environment protection as their selling points， now is in full swing around the whole country。Nevertheless， bike sharing falls short of suitable supervision at the
评分标准 在评分时，主要针对三个方面进行评估：语言、内容和文采。 *语言考查英语表达是否正确，包括单词拼写、标点符号、词汇搭配、句子的语法结构是否正确等。 *内容考查文章内容是否得当，要求包括：主题明确、结构清晰、内容切题、语言精练等。 *文采考查语言的丰富性和连贯性，要求包括：恰当运用所学的英语单词、词组和各类句型，以及句子之间的合理过渡。 写作中存在的不足 考生在写作中，普遍存在着以下三个方面的不足： * 语言不规范 英语句子必须有谓语动词，要使用正确的语态和时态。动词、名词、介词、副词也有各自特定的搭配。另外，句子中若有多个谓语，必须用并列连词或者从句来处理。但考生由于受中文语法习惯的影响，对这方面的概念比较淡薄，导致语法错误以及不符合英语习惯的Chinglish(中式英文)出现。 * 句型单一，简单句偏多 英语是讲究形式的语言，但考生往往过于注重把所思所想用英语翻译出来，导致千篇一律地用简单句和主动语态，忽略了句型的变化和逻辑关系的表达。 *谋篇能力不足 考生拿到题目，经常是想到哪里就写到哪里，对文章的内容没有事先做筛选和安排，不注意文章的层次和句子间的逻辑关系，有时甚至缺乏主题句，使得文章主题不明确。 写作“五步曲” 针对上述问题以及中考作文的评分标准，考生可运用以下五步应对中考英语写作： 第一步审题 主要包括以下几方面的内容： 1. 确定文章的体裁 中考英语写作以记叙文为主，但有时会要求考生在文章最后发表观点，即我们所说的“夹叙夹议”。 2. 确定文章的格式要求 中考英语写作有时会要求考生写书信或日记，这一类的应用文都有其相应的格式要求。如书信的开篇必须有称呼(Dear...)，结束必须有谦称(Yours,)，正文的第一段一般写“收到来信很高兴”、“抱歉很久没写信”或者“很高兴给你写信”之类的话，而正文最后一段一般写“期待你的来信”或者“祝你..”等内容。日记在正文前必须写日期、星期和天气。 3. 明确题目要求，确定必写内容 考题有时会对内容有详细的文字要求，如2002年上海卷题目为“My Favorite Thing(s)”，在题目要求中明确注明要考生描写该事物，说明其来历，并阐述最喜爱它的理由。而有时题目的要求则比较隐晦，如2005年上海卷题目为“Growing Pains and Gains”，虽然没有对必写的内容做明确的文字说明，但是很显然，pains和gains是必写的，缺一不可。 另外，考题有时会通过图画给出提示。这种情况下，考生必须首先弄清楚图画是仅供参考还是文章的必写内容。此外，对于记叙文，有6个要素是必备的，即“时间(when)、地点(where)、人物(who)、发生什么事(what)、发生原因(why)、怎样进行(how)”。 4. 确定文章的字数 若文章字数不够，会被扣去相应的分数；字数过多，又会浪费答题时间，所以建议考生把篇幅控制在80～100 词。相应的，文章的句子数量建议控制在8～10句。