湖南高考英语作文评分标准及满分作文详解
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1 湖南高考英语作文评分标准及满分作文详解
Section C（25 marks）
Directions: write an English composition according to the instructions given
below.
请你下列词语为关键词写一篇英语短文，
match winner loser result
内容：
1. 自己或他人的一次经历
2. 你的感受
注意：
1. 必须使用所给的4个关键词；
2. 次数不少于120词；
3. 不能使用真实姓名和学校。
湖南高考英语作文评分细则
评分角度
主题 评分要点
比赛（match）
1、有输赢结果的活动
2、可具体，可抽象 评分标准及细则
1、 空白（含仅写几个词或短语）计0分
2、 跑题（与主题完全无关，这通常是整篇抄袭试卷原文的结果）计0分
3、 完全不用英语（如用中文或汉语拼音）作答，计0分
4、切题的，依照“内容”和“形式”定 档计分
内容
15’ 1、 有经历描写
2、 有情感抒发 注意: 1、 切题 指紧扣主题，描了自己或他人的一次比赛（match）活动， 有感受抒发，直接使用了4个关键词，使用了所给关键词的同义说近义词的不算跑题
2、 对于内容切题而语言表达特别差的，按内容给分，最高记15分
3、 对于内容不太顺但语言表达很好的文章，按形式给分，最高计10分
4、 异常卷（如雷同，卷面无法辨认）转交学科组处理 形式
10’ 1、 词汇
2、 语法
3、 衔接及连贯
其他 1、 词数
2、 书写
3、 卷面 1、 词数不达标（明显少于12行，即剩余四行）扣1分
2、书写特别工整，卷面特别整洁 加1分
3、 书写一般，但基本能辨认，不要降档给分
4、 书写漂亮，不可随意凭印象提高档次给分
分数档
五档: 完全达到交际目的（perfect communication）21-25’ 2 1. 充分具体涵盖所有的内容要点
2. 语法结构使用广泛，准确而灵活，用词丰富而地道，句际及段际衔接自
然，紧密，语义连贯
3. 极少出现小错误，如标点，单复数，大小写等。
四档：有效达到交际目的（proper communication）16-20’
1. 完全而具体地涵盖所有要点
2. 语法结构使用丰富，正确而自然，词汇使用多样而流畅，信息和观点安
排有序，分段充分，适当
3. 有少数小错误
三档：基本达标（passable communication）11-15’
1. 涵盖所有内容要点
2. 多数词句语法结构正确，使用交际词汇量，信息和观点有一定组织性，
但缺少整体延续性
3. 语法，拼写，衔接及标点错误多，导致难以理解。
二档：微略达标 （partial communication）6-10’
1. 涵盖某一要点
2. 仅有极少数语法正确，使用的词汇和表达非常有限；信息和观点缺乏组
织性
3. 语法，拼写，衔接及标点错误非常多，严重影响信息传递
一档：略微达标 （problematic communication）1-5’
1. 仅涉及某个要点的部分内容
2. 除背诵和抄写的词外，无法写出正确而完整的句子；词汇使用极其有限，
基本没有掌握构词法和拼写规则
Excellent sentences adapted by Gail
1. “You will never be a loser unless you quit trying.” when I failed an important exam, my English teacher told me that, which I can’t agree with more.
2. Memories came flooding when looking at the 4 words.
3. In my opinion, there is no definition of winner and loser. If we have tried our best
when we are in trouble, we are still winners.
4. Only when a student begins to study can he know the power of knowledge; Only
when a child helps her mother do housework can he know the hardship of life; Only
when a person takes part in a match can he understand the most important thing in a
match is not the winner or loser, but the friendship.
5. Life is like a match where there is a winner, there is a loser.
6. Don’t let any failures discourage you, for you can never tell how close we may be
to victory.
7. The growing pains to us are like the struggles out of cocoons(蚕茧) for beautiful
butterflies.
8. Wherever you are, friendship is very important for everyone. Love your friend as
they love you, and you will find your world is more colorful because of friendship.
9. Whether you are a winner or loser, please remember it that the result of a match is
not important at all. The most important is the friendship, which can provide us with 3 real happiness.
10. It is not the result but the process of the matter that really counts. That is what I
learned from a basketball match.
满分作文No.1
It is inevitable that we may face match during our life. But from where I stand,
no matter what the result will be, the most important thing is to enjoy the process.
I
once took
part in a match held by a TV show. In order to win a prize, I
practiced my singing skills everyday and my parents both spared no efforts to help me.
Upon hearing the news that I didn’t win any prize after the match. I burst into tears,
thinking I was a total fool. To my surprise, my Mom told me that she was so proud of
me that I dared to perform on a stage alone. What she did impress me a lot: you are
the winner yourself.
As far as I am concerned, maybe sometimes we can be a loser when compared to
others, but as long as we put our heart into the task, we are sure that we are the winner.
It is the process of the match, not the result that shapes us into stronger people.
满分作文No.2
As the College Entrance Examination was around the corner, our teachers put
forward the advice that students spare some time to have a basketball match to release
stress.
With teachers and students cheering around the court, the players were, somehow,
in tension. Upon getting the ball, the players were chasing each other to score for
themselves. All of a sudden, one player of our class tripped over and fell down,
breaking his knee. It was such a great pain as to make him hard to get up. However,
another player came and gave him a hand, encouraging him. Finally the exciting
match ended up with a tie, about which all of us felt pleased. Nobody is the winner.
On a personal note, I hold the view that we should not think the winning position
so important that we get it by hook or crook(不择手段), or we will fall into abyss of
chasing winner. Therefore, the result concerning who is the winner or loser doesn’t
matterr. It was the touching help received from each other that is really of great
