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Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short
essay on the topic of Recreational Activities. You should write at least
120 words following the outline given below.
1. 娱乐活动多种多样
2. 娱乐活动可能使人们受益，也可能有危害性
3. 作为大学生，我的看法
Recreational Activities
The twenty-first century has
brought
with it an unprecedented variety of recreational
activities. They range from traditional outdoor
activities such as playing ball games to all kinds of
online ones.
Some people think those various
recreational activities brought by modern
technology are great and necessary because they
can help people relax from hard work and study
and broaden people’ horizon. However, some
people think that too many recreational activities
may have a bad effect on people’s lives. Some
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1. Young people may find going abroad appealing because they really enjoy it. (空洞句)
Young people may find going abroad appealingbecause we can learn a lot and broad oue view in
a different counties.
2. The reason I like surfing the Internet because it is my favorite hobby. （句子碎片）
The reason why is that ………
It is widely accepted/ believed that
It goes without saying that
3. Mobile phone is very common in our society, about 1/3 of city dwellers have become
accustomed to using it.
Mobile phone is very common in our society and about 1/3 of city dwellers have become
accustomed to using it（标点）
4. Some students did not choose their courses wisely, consequently, their credits for college
admission were inadequate.
Some students did nit choose their course wisely ,consequently; (分号)
5. I kept on thinking about failing in NINEM for MA/MS in last year. Why? Because of the
大学英语四级写作专项精讲
常用的句型
开头
Recently, the problem of •…has aroused people's concern・
最近，…问题已引起人们的关注.
Nowadays, ________ has become a problem we have to face.
如今，已成为我们不得不面对的问题了.
It is commonly believed that... / It is a common belief that...
人们一般认为…
Many people insist that.・•
很多人坚持认为…
With the development of science and tech no logy, more and more people believe that...
随着科技的发展,越来越多的人认为…
A lot of people seem to think that...
很多人似乎认为…
引出不同观点：
Peopled views on.・・ vary from person to person. Some hold that.…・ However，others
believe that... •
人们对…的观点因人而异•有些人认为..…然而其他人却认为.・.
People may have different opinions on...人们对…可能会有不同的见解.
Attitudes towards ____ vary from person to person.
人们对待….的态度因人而异.
There are different opinions among people as to...
关于.…人们的观点大不相同.
Different people hold different attitudes toward ____ .
(完整word版)大学英语四级范文(超详细讲解)
1。
Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay on the topic
of Recreational Activities. You should write at least 120 words following the outline
given below。
1. 娱乐活动多种多样
2. 娱乐活动可能使人们受益，也可能有危害性
3. 作为大学生,我的看法
Recreational Activities
The twenty—first century has brought with it an
unprecedented variety of recreational activities。 They range from
traditional outdoor activities such as playing ball games to all kinds of
online ones.
Some people think those various recreational activities
brought by modern technology are great and necessary because they
can help people relax from hard work and study and broaden people’
horizon。 However， some people think that too many recreational
activities may have a bad effect on people's lives. Some people may not
