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一.内容相关度不够,结构不严谨,语句不连贯,缺少高级词汇
二.内容相关:围绕中心,主题的词语。
(多写几遍中心词也是可以的)三.如:主题是education,正文应该有schooling(学业),academy,extra-curriculum activities(课外课程活动),required course (必修课)optinoal course(选修课) generalist(通才),lifelong education(终身教育)……
四.如:主题是Internet 与real world,正文应该有cyber/netizen(网民),virtual , Wireless Fidelity(wifi),interaction交集,sphere of activity(活动范围),an age of technology andcommunication(信息时代)InformationHighway(信息高速公路),digital,the Internet age(互联网时代),Internet addiction(网瘾),network games(网游)……
五.(彩蛋:批改网作文和读写课本还是有联系的,毕竟老师出题,unit1的fresh start(新的征程)和第一次作文的教育,unit2的digital campus数字校园和第二次作文的虚拟现实)
六.二.篇章结构:过程性词语,结构不严谨,上下文衔接,缺少衔接词,行文不流畅……
七.errr这些都是少了(承)连(转)接(起)词 (合)……
八.表相似:Similarly /resembly /approximately be similar /identical /parallel /proportional to表比较: Comparable/ correspond to(相应,一致) opposed to 其他: an equivalent of /to(等价)indistingui****le (难以区分的)be considered /interpreted /regarded /thought of as be different /distinct from(和…有所不同)‘
九.’三.高级词汇(长单词要有几个,生僻单词个别或没有,注意语境)
consequently,significantly,indispensable,coincidentally,correspondent ly,advisable,nevertheless……高级短语,词组In a nutshell(用的烂的不能再烂了)
十.Likewise(similarly),A counterpart in the worldadj改为be of + n.(超级好用)
十一.高级句型It is high time that sb. did /should do
十二.It goes without saying .......has aroused wide public concern 十三.Whether it i s a blessing or a course is……(凑字数
十四.there is no doubt that
十五.注:用there is ,it is系列句型不要缩写’s 否则判定无效)。