英语写作模考
高等教育自学考试英语写作基础模拟试卷（一）
（公共课）
本试卷分满分100分，考试时间为150分钟。
Ⅰ、重写句子（15 points, 1.5 points each）
Revise the following sentences according to the requirement.
Example:
The history of English words is the history of our civilization in many ways. (periodic sentence)
In many ways, the history of English words is the history of our civilization.
1、It's true whether you believe it or not. (periodic sentence)
答案
Whether you believe it o r not, it’s true.
解析：
本题目考查的是loose sentence和periodic sentence之间的转换。
（1)明确两种句型的特点：就语义结构而论，periodic sentence（掉尾句）中主要信息在后，次要信息在前，使句子的重心置于句尾，旨在造成悬念，引人入胜；而loose sentence （松散句）则正相反，将句义重心放在句首，使主要信息一目了然。就语法结构而言，periodic sentence（掉尾句）将句子成分中的修饰部分放在主要成分（一般为主谓结构）之前；而loose sentence（松散句）则反之。
(２)本题原句主要信息为It’s true，放在次要信息whether you believe it or not 之前，原句是loose sentence（松散句）,变换句型只要将主次信息换位即可。
2、The Wangs must have gone away for the summer holidays because we have not seen them for about two or three weeks. (compound sentence)
答案
The Wangs must have gone away for the summer holidays, for we have not seen them for about two or three weeks.
解析：
本题目考查的是complex sentence和compound sentence之间的转换。
（1）了解complex sentence（复合句）的构成：complex sentence（复合句）包含一
个主句及一个或多个从句。从句分为名词性从句、形容词性从句和副词性从句，由从属连词引导。compound sentence（并列句）包含两个或两个以上的分句，并由并列连词（and, nor, but, yet, or, for, so）引导。
（2）原题原句是complex sentence（复合句），两个分句为因果关系，要把complex sentence（复合句）重写成compound sentence（并列句）时，只需将第二个分句改为由并列连接词for引导的原因状语从句即可。既保证句子意思的不变，又将句子按要求进行了转化。
3、Badly frightened by the explosion, the boy rushed out of the laboratory.(complex sentence)
答案
The boy rushed out of the laboratory because he was frightened by the explosion badly
解析：
本题旨在考查独立短语与complex sentence之间的转换。
（1）独立短语（包括形容词短语，介词短语，现在分词短语，过去分词短语，不定式短语等）在句子中通常做状语，并可转化为相应的状语从句，达到将原句转化为complex sentence或compound sentence的目的。
（2）本题目中的独立短语是过去分词短语，在句中做原因状语，若要将原句转化为complex sentence，把独立短语转化为由because引导的原因状语从句即可。
4、Students wish to park in the campus parking lots. They must pay for the permit. The campus police will tag their cars. (compound-complex sentence)
答案
If students wish to park in the campus parking lots, they must pay for the permit, or the campus police will tag their cars.
解析：
本题考查对compound-complex sentence的掌握和运用。
（1）了解compound-complex sentence（并列复合句）的构成：顾名思义，compound-complex sentence（并列复合句）是由复合句并列而形成的。具体地说，compound-complex sentence（并列复合句）可以是一个简单句与一个主从复合句用并列连接词连接起来的，也可以是两个主从复合句的并列。
（2）题目原句中的三个句子都是简单句，要想使之成为一个并列复合句，就必须先将其中的两个简单句合成为一个complex sentence（复合句），然后将之再和第三个简单句用并列连词连接。这样就合成了compound-complex sentence（并列复合句）。先将第一、二句用从属连词“If”连接成为complex sentence（复合句），再将之用并列连词“or”与第三句并列即可。
5、During the day in the countryside, the peasants taught us the care of domestic animals; they also taught us how to cultivate new fruits and vegetables. (parallel structure)
答案
During the day in the countryside, the peasants taught us the care of domestic animals and the cultivation of new fruits and vegetables.
解析：
本题是考查对parallel structure概念的掌握和运用。
（1）明确parallel structure（平行结构）的特点：parallel structure（平行结构）是把两个或两个以上意思并列的成分用同等的语法形式表示出来。平行的结构可以是单词、词组、从句，也可以是句子。
（2）题目中包含有两个分句，并且两个分句的主语和谓语都相同，可形成parallel structure（平行结构）的只有其宾语。如果把两句简单的合并为：During the day in the countryside, the peasants taught us the care of domestic animals and how to cultivate new fruits and vegetables. 又违背了用同等的语法形式表现意思并列的成分的原则。故而将第二句中的how to cultivate new fruits and vegetables改为the cultivation of new fruits and vegetables以达到与care of domestic animals在语法形式上的一致。
6、It was a poor quarter. There were a lot of small huts. They had mud wall and straw roof. They dotted the hillside. (long sentence)
答案
A lot of small huts with mud wall and straw roof dotted the hillside in the poor quarter.
解析：
本题是考查将几个独立短句合并成一个长句的能力。
（1）将短句合并为长句，根据实际情况，可用并列连词，从属连词，非谓语动词形式，
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