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[留学英语作文]雅思8分范文：不同年龄段的学习原因
The charts below show the main reasons for study among students of different age groups and the amount of support they received from employers.
Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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这两个图分别对比了不同年龄段的学生参加学习的原因以及他们从雇主那里所得到的支持。
The two charts respectively indicate why students of different age groups decide to study and how much support they have received from their
employers.
第一个图反映出：随着年龄的增长，出于职业发展原因而学习的学生比例逐渐下降，为兴趣而学习的比重则逐渐加强。第二个图揭示：越年轻或越年老参加学习获得雇主的资助越多。
The first chart reflects that with the increase in age, the percentages of people who study for career prospects decline while those who study out of pure interest prevail. The second chart reveals that the younger or older people are, the more amount of support they get from their employers.
首先，我们看到：26岁至39岁年龄段里，为职业发展而学习的比例最高达到了80%，最低也有55%。然而步入40岁后，为工作而学习的动力减弱，为兴趣而学习开始加强。此阶段，我们看到两者比例各为40%。49岁开始，为工作学习的比例急剧下降到不足20%，而为兴趣而学的比例则大幅攀升到了70%。
Firstly, we see that from age 26 to 39, people who study for career considerations reach a percentage as high as 80% and a lower one is also as high as 50%. When they step into their 40s, people’s self-motivation to study for career declines, but the percentage of those who study out of interest rises. And in this period, we see that the percentages for both motivations draw even at 40%. Starting from 49 years old, people who study for career fall dramatically to less than 20% while people who study for interest rise sharply to 70%.
其次，在获得雇主资助方面，我们看到30-39岁是个明显的分水岭。之前，雇主给与的时间和资金方面的帮助最高占到了60%，而进入分水岭年龄段后，这些方面的资助下降到了30%，然后，随着年龄段的增长，比例又开始反弹，并在图表所示的最大年
龄段里回升到了40%。
Secondly, in terms of the support obtained from employers, we see that the period of 30-39 age division is a clear-cut dividing line. Before reaching this age division, the time off and help with fees offered by employers account for as high as 60%. However, after this dividing line, this kind of sponsoring drops to 30% and then, with the increase in age, this percentage begins to climb again, rising to 40% with the oldest age group as is shown in the chart.
由此，我们通过这两个图表所展示的数据对比了解了人们学习的原因之所在以及雇主方面提供资助的情况。
Thus, through a comparison of the figures exhibited in the two charts, we have learned about the reasons why people study at different ages and the help that employers would like to offer.
[留学英语作文]雅思8分范文：不同年龄段的学习原因
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三、询问信 模板：①I ’ m writing to inquire about … ②To start with, I’d like to get some details of … Additionally, I wonder if…. My utmost concern is… I’d be greatly grateful if you could furnish me with the relevant material regarding the above aspects. ③Your prompt and favorable reply would be highly appreciated. 例文: I’m LiHua, a middle school student from China. I’ll graduate from high school this year and I’m planning to apply for The Summer Session 2014. Now , I’m writing to inquire about several questions concerned. To start with, I’d like to get some details of the course arrangement. How many courses will you offer in all and what subjects will it cover? Additionally, I wonder if all the students live on campus or we shall rent houses in advance. My utmost concern is the timetable to see whether I’ll have time to visit some places of interest in America on weekends. I’d be greatly grateful if you could furnish me with the relevant material regarding the above aspects. Your prompt and favorable reply would be highly appreciated.
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雅思写作大作文范文雅思写作优缺点 living alone独自居住 今天我们雅思写作大作文范文的文章来研究下独自居住。以中国为例，许多年轻人到外地上大学。大学毕业之后就留在那个城市，而非回到家乡。他们通常自己居住在一个小房子里，承担各种各样的生活成本。这样固然是自由，但也容易引发各种各样的问题。那么这种趋势究竟是好是坏呢？小编搜集了一篇考官范文，以供大家参考。 雅思写作大作文题目 In some countries, many more people are choosing to live alone nowadays than in the past. Do you think this is a positive or negative development? 与以前相比，现在一些国家越来越多的人选择独自居住。你认识这一积极的发展还是消极的发展。 雅思写作大作文范文 In recent years it has become far more normal for people to live alone, particularly in large cities in the developed world. In my opinion, this trend could have both positive and negative consequences in equal measure. 最近几年，人们独自居住越来越常见，尤其是在发达国家的大城市中。在我看来，这一趋势带来的积极和消极影响基本相等。 The rise in one-person households can be seen as positive for both personal and broader economic reasons. On an individual level, people who choose to live alone may become more independent and self-reliant than those who live with family members. A young adult who lives alone, for example, will need to learn to cook, clean, pay bills and manage his or her budget, all of which are valuable life skills; an increase in the number of such individuals can certainly be seen as a positive development. From an economic perspective, the trend towards living alone will result in a greater demand for housing. This is likely to benefit the construction industry, estate agents and a whole host of other companies that rely on homeowners to buy their products or services. 从个人角度和更广的经济角度来看，独居家庭的上升可以被看作是有好处的。在个人层面，和那些与家庭共同居住的人相比，选择独居的人可能变得更加独立自主。例如，独居的年轻人需要学会做饭，打扫卫生，支付各种账单，并管理译文来自雅思自己的财产。所有这些都是有用的生活技能。这类人数量的上升当然可以被看作是有益的发展。从经济的角度来看，独自居住的趋势将会对住房产生更大的需求。这可能使建筑产业、房产中介以及一系列依赖房主购买他们产品或者服务的公司受益。 However, the personal and economic arguments given above can be considered from the opposite angle. Firstly, rather than the positive feeling of increased
范文第一段： Children who grow up in families which are short of money are better prepared to deal with the problems of adult life than children who are brought up by wealthy parents. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Some feel that the children of low income families are better equipped to deal with difficulties posed by the ‘real world’ when they grow up and they also believe the privileged children of wealthy families are less fit to deal with these difficulties . The implications and veracity of this argument seem self-evident, but in fact require closer examination. ( 58words ) 名师点评： 最后 1 句为主题句。此段的主题句稍微有点特殊，它的确否定了前面所提到的观点，从而表达出了自己的观点，此外还引出了下文。特别是最后半句： but in fact require closer examination ，感觉是在抛砖引玉。 范文第二段： The popular wisdom is that children of poorer families learn early on the value of a buck, and are thus naturally better suited to stretching moneywhen times get tough in adulthood.
雅思写作十大话题万能分类题库 一、教育 1. 教育应该包括哪些内容？ 母题：It is generally believed that education is of vital importance to the development of individuals and the well-being of societies. What should education consist of to fulfill both these functions? (050312) 提示：本题围绕教育的两大功能来展开（个人与社会），准备好这篇文章，即可应付教育类话题中的最大分支—教育的功能，做到以不变应万变。对于社会角度，可以从促进经济发展、增加社会流动性(social mobility)、维护社会稳定这几个方面 来展开，对于个人，可以写改变思维模式、有利于就业和便利生活来写。 子题：大学应当教授理论知识还是实践技能？大学的是应当把学生培养成吅格的公民还是让他们自己得益？准备未来职业最好的方法是上大学还是尽快离校积累工作经验？大学要不要扩招？中学阶段应当提供通才教育还是专才教育？要不要延长义务教育年限？要不要让农村地区的学生更容易上学？老师要教学生如何判断是非吗？ 2. 学校的科目谁来选择？ 母题：Some people think that the government should decide which subjects students should study at the university, while others think that students should be allowed to apply for the subject they prefer. Discuss the two views and give your opinion. (060916) 提示：这类题目采取的策略就是“双批判”，因为题目中提供的两种选择往往都是错误的。 子题1：政府选课or 老师选课？学生选择所有的科目or根据兴趣自行选择？ 子题2：只有学术科目重要，体育和音乐这样的课不重要，你同意吗？要不要学国 际新闻？要不要学历史？要不要中学阶段就学习外语？要不要学数学哲学这类的科目？ 提示：子题2与母题联系不大，需要准备这些科目各自的优点。 3. 什么样的教学方式最好？ 母题：Many people use distance-learning programmes (study material post, TV, Internet, etc.) to study at home, but some people think that it cannot bring the benefit as much as attending college or university. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion? (041113, 081023, 100515) 提示：远程教育最大的好处，就在于三个any：anybody, anywhere, any time. 缺点 是缺乏师生之间以及学生之间的interaction, 缺乏教师的moral guidance, 因为没有 体育课且久坐电脑前，会引发健康问题。 子题：私立学校好不好？留学好不好？要不要分快慢班？小组学习还是单独学习好？ 4. 谁来为学费买单？
It is argued that we are living in a throw-away society: people throw away what they use in daily life, instead of recycling or reusing them. Why has this happened and how to address this issue? Essay: Nowadays, citizens are likely to use products only once instead of keeping these items for a long time or get rebirth of these resources. It is important to know the reasons of this trend and the methods to change the phenomenon. Some people always cast away the produces which have used for only once because these products are not as expensive as before. The production processes, with the development of the society’s productivity, are more and more effective. As a result, the factories could use much less time to manufacture goods as same quantity as before so that the price of these produces would be much lower. Another reason is that people lack environmental awareness. Most of the citizens have not realized that their ways of life would bring about many pollutions of environment and energy consumption. They do not know that if they could use these productions for a long time there would be less waste of resources and less pollutions in the nature. If they are aware that recycling can make their lifestyles more sustainable, they will possibly try to do
（七分范文）Some people believe that studying at university or college is the best route to a successful career ，while others believe that it is better to get a job straight after school. Discuss both views and give your opinion. Whenthey finish school ，teenagers face the dilemma that whether to get a job or continue their education. While there are some benefits to getting a job straight after school ，I would argue that it is better to go to college or university. The option to start work straight after school is attractive for several reasons. Many young people want to start earning moneyas soon as possible. In this way，they can become independent ，and they will be able to afford their own house or start a family. In terms of their career ，young people who decide to find work ，rather than continue their studies ，may progress more quickly. They will have the chance to gain real experience and learn practical skills related to their chosen profession. This may lead to promotions and a successful career. Onthe other hand，I believe that it is more beneficial for students to continue their studies. Firstly ，academic qualifications are required in
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