2019版高考英语二轮复习第3板块专题5短文改错第2节三类错误分解学案含解析

2019高考英语二轮巩固练习—短文改错（详解）31In10thAprilthisyear,asLiMingwasleavinghishomein 76、themorning,hegotintothelifttogetherawoman.Whenthelift 77、gottothefourfloor,itstoppedandamiddle-aged 78、manenter.Oncethemangotin,hesnatchedthewoman’s 79、handbag.HepulledbothLiMingandthewomanoutofthe 80、Lift.LiMingrandownstairs.Whenhereachedfortheground 81、floor,hesawthemanwalkedout.Hetoldthecaretaker 82、atonceandtheybothfollowedthethieftoarestaurant 83、nearbywhichtheymettwopolicemen.LiMingtoldthemall 84、Aboutthecaseandthethiefhasfinallycaught. 85、2OnedaylastweekIwentawalkinthecountry. 76.______________ Inthemorningtheweatherwaswellandthesunwas 77.______________ shining;theskywasblueandtherewerenocould. 78.______________ Soonacoolwindstartedblownandblackclouds 79.______________ werecoveredthesunandthenitstartedtorain. 80.______________ Therewerenohousesinsight,butIgotverywet. 81.______________ Afterahourorso,Imanagedtocatchabuswhich 82.______________ tookmehome.ButwhenIarrivedIwasshivering 83.______________ andIknewIhadcaughtabadcold.Imust 84.______________ havetakenmycoat.Ihadnothingtodobutto 85.______________ stayathomeandwaitforadoctor.[参考答案]177、together后加with78、four改为fourth79、enter改为entered80、pulled改为pushed81、for去掉82、walked改为walking83、正确84、which改为where85、has改为was276.went/\→forgo后可以接v－ing;todosth.;forsth.77.well→fine/nicewell作“健康”讲是adj.，作“好”讲是adv.。

2019届二轮复习短文改错解题指导《普通高等学校招生全国统一考试大纲的说明》中“考试形式与试卷结构”部分对短文改错题的表述如下：本题给出一篇约100个单词的短文，文中有10处错误，错误类型包括词法、句法、行文逻辑等。

要求考生对每个句子进行判断，如有错即将其改正。

在高考英语试卷中，短文改错属于第四部分写作的第一节，共10小题，每小题1分，满分10分。

题目要求为：假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。

文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。

每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线(﹨)划掉。

修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2. 只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。

短文改错旨在考查考生在语篇中发现、判断与纠正语言错误的能力，从而获取在语篇中综合运用语言的能力。

短文改错设错点有词汇、语法、篇章结构和行文逻辑等方面，并不是单纯检测考生的语法知识，而是检测考生写作能力中的校验能力。

1. 短文特点卷别体裁题材词数句数2017全国卷Ⅰ记叙文 18岁的暑假学车经历108 82017全国卷Ⅱ记叙文张先生和张太太的日常生活安排92 72017全国卷Ⅲ记叙文照片唤起的回忆110 62016全国卷Ⅰ记叙文叔叔餐馆的成功秘诀93 82016全国卷Ⅱ记叙文和同学讨论暑假计划106 92016全国卷Ⅲ记叙文青春期和父母的代沟问题118 92015全国卷Ⅰ夹叙夹议文环境污染问题，呼吁大家保护环境105 102015全国卷Ⅱ记叙文 Tony在商场迷路的故事105 10近几年，短文改错词数通常与书面表达一样，在100词左右。

选材源于学生自己的作文，话题贴近学生日常生活，句式以单句和并列句为主，基本上没有偏、难、怪的句子和单词，符合中国学生的英语实际水平。

第1节三年真题再做A篇（2018·全国卷Ⅰ)During my last winter holiday，I went to countryside with my father to visit my grandparents.I find a big change there。

The first time I went there，they were living in a small house with dogs，ducks，and another animals。

Last winter when I went here again，they had a big separate house to raise dozens of chicken。

They also had a small pond which they raised fish.My grandpa said last summer they earned quite a lot by sell the fish.I felt happily that their life had improved.At the end of our trip，I told my father that I planned to return for every two years，but he agreed。

【答案】During my last winter holiday，I went to 错误!countryside with my father to visit my grandparents.I 错误!a big change there.The first time I went there，they were living in a small house with dogs，ducks，and 错误! animals。

第3节 题型模拟演练A 篇(2018·成都高三测试)I enjoyed many performances in Argentina.But what impressed me more was the dance performance.I used to dance a lot when I am young ，although I never was a good dancer.But Argentinian dancers who made dancing so easily that everyone felt like dancing with them.Visit some distant villages also gave me deeper taste of the original Argentinian culture.Among all those place of interest ，my favorite one was a mountain. Fortunately ，when I arrived there in a cold winter morning ，I couldn't see much.However ，the unusual peace and snow-blanketed winter views still impressed you a lot.【答案】I enjoyed many performances in Argentina.But what impressed me more mostwas the dance performance.I used to dance a lot when I am wasyoung ，although I never was a good dancer.But Argentinian dancers who ﹨ made dancing so easily easythat everyone felt like dancing with them.Visit Visitingsome distant villages also gave me ∧a deeper taste of the original Argentinian culture.Among all those place placesof interest ，my favorite one was a mountain. Fortunately Unfortunately ，when I arrived there in ona cold winter morning ，I couldn't see much.However ，the unusual peace and snow-blanketed winter views stillimpressed you mea lot. B 篇(2018·郑州一中高三检测)The incident had happened on my way to a bookstore on the rainy Sunday afternoon.I was waiting for the green light when a girl about ten was knocked down by a passing car ，that drove off quickly.A man immediately rushed to the girl to give him first aid.I joined in without any hesitate.A young woman called 110 and the polices soon arrived at the scene.Fortunate she was not badly injured and we sent her to the nearest paring with the escaped driver ，I am proud of that I did.【答案】The incident had ﹨ happened on my way to a bookstore on the arainy Sunday afternoon.I was waiting for the green light when a girl ∧of about ten was knockeddown by a passing car ，that whichdrove off quickly.A man immediately rushed to the girlto give him her first aid.I joined in without any hesitate hesitation.A young woman called 110 and the polices police soon arrived at the scene.Fortunate Fortunatelyshe was not badly injured and we sent her to the nearest paring Comparedwith the escaped driver ，I am proud of that whatI did. C 篇(2018·湖南长郡中学高三测试)One day when I was on my way to home from school.I found a building on fire.Immediately I called the firefighters.Several minutes late ，the firefighters arrived and tried their best to control the fire.With the help of the firefighters ，a lot of peoples left the building safely.Sudden a foreign woman came in a hurry to tell the firefighters everything.But they can't understand what she said.I went to the woman and asked her that was happening.She told me that his daughter was still in the building.I told the firefighters about it at once ，but they immediately ran into the building and rescued little girl.【答案】One day when I was on my way to ﹨ home from school.I found a building on fire.Immediately I called the firefighters.Several minutes late later，the firefighters arrived and tried their best to control the fire.With the help of the firefighters ，a lot of peoples peopleleft the building safely.Sudden Suddenlya foreign woman came in a hurry to tell the firefighters everything something .But they can't couldn'tunderstand what she said.I went to the woman and asked her that what was happening.She told me that his herdaughter was still in the building.I told the firefighters about it at once ，but andthey immediately ran into the building and rescued ∧the little girl.D 篇(2018·甘肃重点中学协作体联考)Welcome to our English Corner.This Corner was set up three years before.Every Sunday morning ，students from different school and some foreigners often took part.Gather around here ，we practise spoken English by talking about everything we are interested.We also exchange my experience in English study.We all have a good time here.Thousands of people have been here since it is set up.We think that theyhave learned a lot of by taking part in activities here.However, it is a really supplement (补充物)to our English class.If you want to know much about the corner ，you may talk to the students here.【答案】Welcome to our English Corner.This Corner was set up three years before ago.Every Sunday morning ，students from different school schoolsand some foreigners often took part.Gather Gatheringaround here ，we practise spoken English by talking about everything we are interested ∧in .We also exchange my ourexperience in English study.We all have a good time here.Thousands of people have been here since it is wasset up.We think that they have learned a lot of ﹨ by taking part in activities here.However Besides， it is a really real supplement (补充物)to our English class.If you want to know much moreabout the corner ，you may talk to the students here.E 篇(2018·湖北部分重点中学联考)Nowadays ，more and more Confucius Institutes are being building all over the world ，that shows our Chinese culture has become more popular than ever.On the one hand ，the ancient Chinese culture once had a great influence in other cultures, especially those of Asian country.On other hand ，our Chinese culture constantly developed throughout the long history ，thus made it more colorful and more brilliant.Confucius Institutes are good places where to learn about the Chinese culture. Whoever want to know more about it must spend more time. Therefore ，he or she cannot have a well knowledge of the Chinese culture.【答案】Nowadays ，more and more Confucius Institutes are being building builtall over the world ，that whichshows our Chinese culture has become more popular than ever.On the one hand ，the ancient Chinese culture once had a great influence in onother cultures, especially those of Asian country countries.On ∧the other hand ，our Chinese culture constantly developed throughout the long history ，thus made makingit more colorful and more brilliant.Confucius Institutes are good places where ﹨ to learn about theChinese culture. Whoever want wantsto know more about it must spend more time. Therefore Otherwise ，he or she cannot have a well goodknowledge of the Chinese culture. F 篇(2018·合肥市高三调研)I am writing to tell you anything about the transportation in China. Over the past few decades we have developed an amazed network of public transportation.Besides ，we have been decided to make efforts to make them much better.I am sure a network will satisfy your needs for traveling everywhere more convenient.People usually chose the means of transportation based with some aspects ，such as the cost and the time needed. For example ，businessmen are more likely travel by plane or high-speed train to save time while office worker tend to take buses or drive to work themselves.【答案】I am writing to tell you anything somethingabout the transportation in China.Over the past few decades we have developed an amazed amazingnetwork of public transportation.Besides ，we have been ﹨ decided to make efforts to makethem it much better.I am sure a thenetwork will satisfy your needs for traveling everywhere more convenient conveniently .People usually chose choose the means of transportation based with onsome aspects ，such as the cost and the time needed. For example ，businessmen are morelikely ∧to travel by plane or high-speed train to save time while office worker workerstend to take buses or drive to work themselves.。

2019-2020年高考英语二轮复习 短文改错精编（5） 短文改错。 假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。 增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。 删除：把多余的词用斜线(划掉。 修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。 注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词； 2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。 Once a man got on a bus for New York. He hid herself in the toilet，because he did not want to pay. But the passenger saw him. She tapped the person in front of her on the shoulder and say，“There's a bum (流浪汉) in the toilet. Tell the bus driver.” The message was pass from person to person. But anywhere along the way，it told that there was a bomb in the toilet. He immediate stopped bus and telephoned the police. When the police came，they told the passengers to get off the bus or stay far away. Then they closed the highway，which resulted from a traffic jam. The police searched for several hour. Of course they found no bomb at all！ 【参考答案】1. 第二句 herself 改为 himself 第三句the改为a 第四句say改为said 第五句pass改为passed 第六句anywhere改为somewhere 第七句told前加was 第八句immediate改为immediately 第九句or改为and 第十句from改为in 第十一句hour改为hours 短文改错 以下标有题号的每一行均有一个错误，请找出，并按下列情况改正： 此行多一个词：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉，在该行右边横线上写出该词，并也用斜线划掉。 此行缺一个词：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），在该行右边横线上写出该加的词。 此行错一个词：在错的词下划一横线，在该行右边横线上写出改正后的词。 Li Hua is a senior three student who devote himself to his 1. lessons every day. Last Saturday, as usual, he went to several courses.In the evening, he studies at home until deep into 2. the night.He was too sleepy and tired that he couldn’t work 3. effectively. In Sunday morning, Li Hua was about to study 4. when his father came up and advised him to have a break. Soon they had good idea. They bought a kite which they 5. liked it very much and then the family went to the suburbs 6. where Li Hua enjoyed himself fly the kite. The family had a 7. picnic together but felt very relaxed in the open air. On 8. Monday, Li Hua was energetic and actively in class. He 9. said it was only why he had a better weekend. 10. 【参考答案】2. 1. devote---devotes 2. studies---studied 3. too sleepy---so sleepy 4. In Sunday--- On Sunday 5. had good--- had a good 6. liked it---去掉it 7. fly---flying 8. but---and 9. actively---active 10. why---because