【Selected】描述性英语作文写作技巧(雅思必备).ppt

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大家学习辛苦了，还是要坚持
继续保持安静
ห้องสมุดไป่ตู้ask 1: The chart shows student expenditure over a three-year period in the United Kingdom.
Task 2: Some people believe the range of technology available to individuals today is
文章布局 审题
CC: Coherence & Cohesion （内容连贯与篇章衔接）
使文章结构紧凑的连接词
LR:Lexical Resource （词汇资源)
GRA:
Grammatical
丰富并且正
Range and Accuracy 确的句式
（语法范围与精确性)
自我定位图示
GRA语法 7分
rich experience on IELTS &TOEFL(I passed those exams with very high marks, especially on WRITING.)
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Why are we so
worried
?
雅思写作: 试题结构
20 ms /40 ms
n) Followed by The ending Sentence
(if possible with link to next paragraph)
Essay Framework
原因（例证）
重申论点
确立论点
TS1 + SS TS2 + SS TS3 + SS

the latest development of science and technology and the
fashion trend nowadays
being from Internet and TV
to us, without any energy resource to obtain information
in the library, in the
book stores, in your pocket or even beside your pillow. After day’s work, laying on bed to relax by reading some novels or newspaper has become
the most comfortable and popular among modern
citizens. While TV and Internet would not be that convenient and further, which could cause
tiredness sometimes if you sit in front of TV and computer for a very long time.
雅思作文分析
❖ 题目:TV, internet and radio are very popular nowadays. Some people say that they will replace books and written words as the main sources of information. Do you agree or disagree to this position?

专业选择类--分析思路
平等 分配
优点：各科均有涉猎（个人） 平衡行业（社会）
缺点：既非通才也非专才（个人） 不符合市场需求（社会）
专业选择类--分析思路
专长 学习
优点：精通知识（个人） 专才培养（社会）
缺点：知识面窄（个人） 行业不平衡（社会）
专业选择类—积累素材
Specialization:Biblioteka 专业选择类真题回顾
Some people think that all students should learn a foreign language . Others think students should not be required to learn a foreign language if they don’t have talent for it.
1.Specialization makes life easier: It allows you to focus on only one new skill rather than two. 2.Specialization can also help you build a reputation as an "expert" in a particular field. 3.Concentration on certain subjects allows students to gain specialized knowledge and skills more efficiently.
教育功能
Nation: 1.Inculcation of social responsibility 2.National integration 3.National development 4.Real education is an essential ingredient for all ages and stages of the life of an individual, society as well as the nation. 5. Education can be a real panacea for all social evils.

Writing Task 1 – Task Types
Writing Task 1 – Task Types
Writing Task 1 – Task Types
Writing Task 1 – Task Types
Writing Task 1 – Task Types
Writing Task 1 – Task Types
Writing Task 1 – Testing Points
Tests the ability to: ❖ describe & interpret graphic data ❖ describe stages of a process ❖ describe an object or event or
Brainstorming/Expanding the ideas Classifying/Grouping Choosing the main ideas and theme (well-
developing the main points & discarding weak points)
❖ Discuss both views and give your opinion ❖ Causes and solutions or causes and
consequences ❖ What’s your opinion ❖ Do you agree or disagree? or to what extent
Create a logical flow (ordering & ranking) Outlining the structure Draft the key words, thesis statement and

Assignment- Descriptive Essay
Remember: you need a thesis. ie: The train station waiting room was
frightening. The exam room was tense. The study room was quiet.
Question- example 1
Does the author have a thesis?
Can you picture this ‘perfect restaurant’ the author describes?
Pro essay- Body 1
At Lou’s Kosy Korner Koffee Shop, the mock abuse flows like a cup of spilled Folgers. Customers are yelled at, lectured, blamed, mocked, teased, and ignored. They pay for the privilege of pouring their own coffee and scrambling their own eggs.
maaakeeee someone happy,” he croons as
he lifts the steaming pot that has
infused the room with the rich aroma of
freshly brewed coffee. He carries it to
As in a fond but dysfunctional family, Lou displays his affection through criticism and insults, and his customers respond in kind. If Lou’s had a slogan, it might be, “If I’m polite to you, ask yourself what’s wrong.”

IELTS Writing Task 1 作文写作教学全能版
共有5种图形 1. The bar chart 柱状图 2. The line graph 折线图 3. The pie chart 扇形图/饼图 4. The table 表格 5. The flow chart 流程图 * The map 地图/地形图
In addition
Then
Further more
Next
Meanwhile
Before, followed by
while
After that
At the same time
雅思小作文写作教学全能版
most second most last
Adj. +属性
雅思小作文写作教学全能版
• The highest percentage of vehicle companies that are used in the USA are GM. It accounted for 19.1% in the market in 2010.
stayed constant, maintained
the same level + at
Fluctuated from…to…, moved up and down
A fluctuation from…to…,
雅思小作文写作教学全能版
表示变化程度很大、很显著
Adjectives Dramatic Sharp Significant Considerable Huge Enormous Rapid Quick Sudden
雅思小作文写作教学全能版
流程型(procedure)图表
• 逻辑关系 • 起承转合，顺序

the media?
Examiner’s comments
What are the advantages and disadvantages of making children do exams?
此课件下载可自行编辑修改，此课件供参考！ 部分内容来源于网络，如有侵权请与我联系删除！感谢你ct ideas • Show relationships between
paragraphs and sentences or parts of sentences
Task response/Task achievement
• Degree to which the exam question has been answered properly
– Use of tenses – Comparatives – Conditionals – Modal verbs – Passive tense – Use of complex structures (who,
what, why) – Punctuation
What are the pros and cons of using public transport?
– Supporting your opinion with relevant ideas
Lexical Resource
• Range and accuracy of vocabulary used in your writing
• How can you improve your vocabulary?
English Writing Course
Week 4
How are the IELTS essays marked?

认识到了贫困户贫困的根本原因，才 能开始 对症下 药，然 后药到 病除。 近年来 国家对 扶贫工 作高度 重视， 已经展 开了“ 精准扶 贫”项 目
定从省略/分词状语后置
• By 2000, nuclear power had developed into the main source.
• Nuclear power produced almost 75% of electricity, at 126 units.
范文例句
• By 2000, nuclear power had developed into the main source, producing almost 75% of electricity, at 126 units.
认识到了贫困户贫困的根本原因，才 能开始 对症下 药，然 后药到 病除。 近年来 国家对 扶贫工 作高度 重视， 已经展 开了“ 精准扶 贫”项 目
• 真题例句：These causes affected different regions differently in the 1990s, with Europe having as much as 9.8% of degradation due to deforestation
认识到了贫困户贫困的根本原因，才 能开始 对症下 药，然 后药到 病除。 近年来 国家对 扶贫工 作高度 重视， 已经展 开了“ 精准扶 贫”项 目
Between 1940 and around 1960, The percentage of elderly people in the USA increased/rose/grew slightly/slowly to 10% while/whereas that of (the figure for) Japan decreased/declined/fell rapidly/sharply/significantly by 2%.

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3. 小幅度上升：
go up / ascend / grow / increase / rise/ climb up +
modestly / slightly / marginally / moderately
experience a slight growth in…
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4种数字类：
1.倍数基础表达法： ①A +is…times +as+ adj.原级+as +B ②A +is…times+ adj.比较级+than +B ③A +is…times+ the
size/length/height/width/depth +of + B ④The size/length/height/width/depth…
reach the minimum / the smallest part of bottom out at … reach the bottom at… reach the lowest point at…
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3.多于…
more than …, over…, above…, upwards of… upwards of 60 years old exceed, surpass, overtake, ---v.
是原来的3倍 / 增加或减少了2倍 例: Between 1971 and 1975, the population
was up eight-fold. 是原来的8倍,增加了7倍
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2. 一半：half，50%

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Descriptive Essay
n Goal is to share an experience with the reader appealing to their senses.
n How does the last sentence about the fan appeal to the senses?
scrambling their own eggs. As in a fond but
dysfunctional family, Lou displays his affection
through criticism and insults, and his customers
respond in kind. If Lou’s had a slogan, it might
Description
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First some Review
n Think back to our previous lessons about writing essays.
n In groups of 3-4 write down a step by step process to writing an essay including different writing suggestions.
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Assignment- Descriptive Essay
Write your own descriptive essay using a place familiar to you.
a library study area a waiting room at a train station a small shop an internet bar a place in your hometown