五.2012年12月英语四级高分范文
Judging from the table, we can see that people’s income increases along with their education levels. Above all,the average college graduates earn much more than the typical high-school graduates.
二.写作的六项基本原则
1.长短句原则 长短句交错结合,在文章主体部分,要先用一个短句解释 主要意思,然后在阐述几个要点的时候可以采用先短后长 的句群形式
2.主题句原则 主题句通常放在句首
3.阐述观点的一二三原则
To begin with,then,furthermore,finally
To start with,next,in addition to,finally
Judging from 是一个由现在分词转化而来的独立主格结构,在句子单独使用, 不受主语的影响.为文章添色不少,可以一下就吸引到阅卷者的注意力
The fact revealed by these data is obvious: a degree does bring distinctive financial benefits to its holders. But is it true that a degree alone can ensure a bright future? I don’t think so because, on the one hand, the financial value of high education depends heavily on what skills graduates can gain from it instead of the degree itself. After all, an employer only pays for your ability and performance, not for your certificate. On the other hand, the most valuable bless high education brings to graduates is the ability to learn quickly and efficiently. People received more education tend to keep lifelong learning habits after their graduation, which would help them gain more opportunities in their career path.