高考英语二轮专题复习 提纲作文提分训练(含真题含解析)

手惰市安逸阳光实验学校提纲作文

(2013·安徽卷)

假设你校英语社团举办以“讲求文明,从我做起”为主题的征文活动,请你以“On the Way to School”为题,写一篇英语短文。

内容主要包括:

1.遵守交通法规;

2.注意举止文明。

注意:1.词数120左右;

2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;

3.短文中不能出现与本人相关的信息;

4.短文的题目已为你拟好,不计入总词数

On the Way to School

【参考范文】

On the Way to School

These days, breaking traffic rules and littering are not uncommon,

causing serious harm to life and the environment. Changing this situation

requires considerable effort on the part of everyone. As for me, it should

start on my way to school.

I will keep traffic rules in mind all the way. If I ride a bike, I’ll

always keep to the right and never cross a road until the traffic light

turns green. If I walk, I’ll never forget to use the pedestrian crossing. Meanwhile, I will regard it as my duty to help keep our environment clean

and healthy. Not only will I keep from littering and spitting anywhere.

I will also help clean up the roadside litter whenever possible. I hope

my behavior will make a difference.

(2013·山东卷)

第二节:写作(满分30分)

假设你是新华中学的学生李华, 你的朋友Tom一周前给你发电子邮件, 询问你暑假里的打算, 但你因准备期末考试未能及时回复。请根据以下要点给他回封邮件:

1.未及时回信的原因;

2.你假期的打算(如做兼职、旅行、做志愿者等)。

注意:1.词数:120~150;

2.可以适当增加细节, 以使行文连贯。

【试题点评】

, 时隔一年之后重新回到“书信题”的大框架中, 考了一篇“以道歉信为外因, 以活动安排为主体段”的提纲作文, 相当于山东卷(道歉信)和四川卷(假期安排)的合体。这种作文是我们平时经常练习的, 因此套路很完善、套话很丰富。此外, 本文中需要同学们翻译的难句不多, 因此, 只要在备考过程中有意识地了解过高考英语作文的提分方法, 掌握了常用的亮点词汇、加分句型和过渡词,

并加以针对性训练, 这篇应该不难写。

【经典套路】

第一段:问候+写信背景+写信目的 第二段:“道歉”部分(相当于“写信背景”)

第三段:“假期安排”部分

第四段:补充说明+客套话

【高分范文】

Dear Tom,

How is everything going on with you? (问候)You asked me in your last

letter about my plan for the coming summer vacation. (写信背景)I am sorry

that I didn’t reply without delay. (写信目的)

How I wish I would read and reply to your e-mail as soon as I received

it. However, I was busy preparing for my final exam at that time, which

was of vital importance for me. As a result, I had no choice but to

completely focus on my study. I believe that if you were me, you would

make the same choice. (第二段为道歉信常见套路)

By the way, I have a busy schedule for my summer vacation. (主题句)First and foremost, I will do a part-time job so that my interpersonal

skills will be improved. (拓展句1)In addition, I will take a short trip

to Beijing to take a summer course in the New Oriental School. (拓展句2)Last but not least, maybe I will work as a volunteer for the school

as a teaching assistant. (拓展句3)

That is my plan for the summer vacation. What’s yours? I am looking

forward to your earliest reply. (以合理的客套话结尾)

Yours sincerely Li Hua

(2013·四川卷)

第三节 书面表达(共35分)

某中学生英文报近期开辟专栏,讨论学习习惯问题。请你结合自身学习实际,按以下提示,用英文为该专栏写一篇稿件。

1.说明学习习惯与学习效果之间的关系;

2.介绍一种好的学习习惯并提出养成该习惯的建议;

3.描述自己在学习习惯方面存在的某个问题并给出改进措施。

注意:

1.词数120个左右,开头语已为你写好;

2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;

3.

It’s useful and necessary to discuss learning habits.

【参考范文】

It’s useful and necessary to discuss learning habits. There is a

famous saying that“Good habits lead to good endings.”, which shows the

importance of habits. “An apple a day keeps doctor away.”also shows

how a healthy everyday habit helps to build up our body. In the same way,

good learning habits can help us gain great learning results including

high scores and abundant knowledge.

As middle school students, learning habits form our ways of thinking

and attitudes towards the content of our learning. Obviously, a good habit can help us to speed up to reach our destinations. As we can see,

cultivating a good habit is so important that I would like to introduce

one kind of good learning habit—keeping a learning diary everyday. We

can start the habit by writing learning summary and recording something

impressive and meaningful. Keep it in mind, and gradually we can gain

this good learning habit and benefit from it.

To be honest, I also find that I still have some bad learning habits.

For example, I can just concentrate on reading for a short time. It does

no good to study. So I will conquer this problem by making more effort

on concentration practice.

I believe that through constant efforts, good learning habits will

lead me to greater success.

(2013·重庆卷)写作二

调查显示,中国长江江豚(finless porpoise)受人类活动影响而濒临灭绝,目前总数不足1000只。假设你是李华,现请用英文给WWF(世界自然保护基金组织)写一封信,请他们关注这一状况并提供帮助。内容应包括:

●说明写信目的

●简述江豚现状

●希望WWF如何帮助(比如:资助江豚保护项目等)

●表示感谢并期待回复

注意:(1)词数不少于80;

(2)在答题卡上作答; (3)书信格式及开头均已给出(不计入总词数)。

Dear Sir or Madam,

I’m a student from Chongqing,

Yours sincerely,

Li Hua

【参考范文】

Dear Sir or Madam,

I’m a student from Chongqing, China. I am writing to ask you to pay

attention to the situation of Finless Porpoises. They are under threats

of humans and as a result, the numbers have fallen to no more than 1,000.If

the situation remains the same, within 10 years, Yangtze Finless

Porpoises will become extinct forever.

In order to protect Finless Porpoises, we sincerely hope you can help

take some measures. You can finance Finless Porpoises projects, in which

way we can establish the Finless Porpoise conservation station and