初中英语书面表达解题技巧和训练方法及练习题(含答案)及解析(1)

一、中考英语书面表达汇编

1．（·北京中考模拟）（题文）假如你是李华，本周六与好友相约去北京植物园。你的美国网友Fred正好也在北京，你邀他同去。请你向他发出邀请，告诉他去哪儿，做什么以及你的建议。

提示词语：Beijing Botanical Garden, have a picnic

提示问题：When and where are you going this Saturday?

What will you do there?

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What do you advise him to do?

【答案】I’m writing to invite you to join us this Saturday. This Saturday, I’m going to Beijing

Botanical Garden with my friends. We’ll meet at our school gate at seven in the morning. Then

we are going there by bike. We’ll enjoy the colorful flowers and plants there. We are going to

have a picnic in the open air. If you like to join us, prepare some food to take with you. Don’t

forget to take a bottle of water. I hope you can come and we’ll come back at five in the afternoon.

I’m looking forward to your early reply.

【解析】试题分析：书面表达题既不是汉译英，也不是可任意发挥的作文。它要求将所规定的材料内容经整理后展开思维，考查运用所学英语知识准确表达意思的能力。所以，考生不能遗漏要点，要尽量使用自己熟悉的单词、短语和句式，尽可能使用高级词汇和较复杂的句式结构以便得到较高的分数。本题根据提示内容应该用一般现在时，邀请对方并给出建议，需使用表达邀请和用于提建议的相关短语和句式，注意长短搭配，并在行文中增加细节和过渡，使文章读起来比较流畅。动笔前，一定要认真分析提示要点，理解要点要表达的含义。平时除了加强词汇积累和写作练习以外，还应该适当背诵一些类似的范文，这样在考试中可以起到事半功倍的效果。

亮点说明：这篇习作的层次清晰，内容饱满，表达流畅。文中使用了非常好的短语，例如join us，this Saturday，be going to，Beijing Botanical Garden，in the morning，by bike，have

a picnic，in the open air，like to do，forget to do，a bottle of water，come back，in the

afternoon，look forward to等。而If you like to join us, prepare some food to take with you. / I

hope you can come and we’ll come back at five in the afternoon.等多种从句和be going to结构的运用，使本文内容丰富，表达流畅，是本文的最大亮点。

2．（·江苏中考模拟）书面表达

时间过得飞快，似乎几个月前才进入初三，现在中考却近在眼前。请以“Are We Ready for

the Challenge?”为题，用英语写一篇短文，内容要点如下：

1．你发现老师现在上课语速很快。由于有太多的作业和考试，学生没有足够的时间来进行课外活动；

2．有的同学以前学习不太努力，但现在他们已经意识到这次考试的重要性，并且全身心投入到学习中去；

3．你在这最后一个月里的打算和安排……

注意：

1．短文须包括所有内容要点，要求语句通顺、意思连贯；

2．第3要点的内容须用2至3句话作适当发挥；

3．词数90左右，短文的开头与结尾已给出，不计入总词数。

Are We Ready for the Challenge?

How time flies! It seemed that we began our Grade Three only a few months ago, but the Senior

High School Entrance Examination is coming soon!

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I'm sure we will do well in the coming exam if we try our best!

【答案】Are We Ready for the Challenge?

How time flies! It seemed that we began our Grade Three only a few months ago, but the Senior

High School Entrance Examination is coming soon! I find the teachers speak more quickly than

usual in class now, and we have so much homework and so many exams that we do not have

enough time for any after-school activities．Some students did not study hard enough before,

but now they have realized the importance of the exam and are putting all their effort into

study．During the last month, I am going to listen carefully in class and pay more attention to

details, and it is also important for us to keep a balance between study and rest．

I'm sure we will do well in the coming exam if we try our best!

【解析】本文属于材料作文，要表达如今的学习和以前的区别以及你的计划和打算。根据要表达的内容确定并准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑，可适当增加内容。

【亮点说明】这是一篇优秀的作文，很好的完成了试题规定的任务，语言表达符合英语习惯，准确运用时态、主谓一致，特别适用一些亮点词句，如usual，so much，after-school

activities，the importance of，put ones effort into，pay attention to，it is adj for sb to do。增强逻辑关系，增加上下文意思连贯，用词准确，句子通顺，行文连贯。

点睛：写作时可以从以下几个方面做起：

认真审题。审好题是写好书面表达的关键。审题时要注意试题的要求，抓住要点，词数符合要求。

构思提纲。有了提纲，我们就可以根据提纲和主题确定相关的写作材料。通常书面表达给出的话题是开放的，而具体的内容要求学生自己发挥，因此选择恰当的素材也是使短文中心突出、明确的关键。

初写短文。一切都准备就绪，就可以动笔写作了，在写作的过程中我们要注意句子的准确性、连贯性以及简洁性。使用的词语、短语及句型尽量用自己有把握的词。同时还要注意使用恰当的连词，使句子衔接自然。

修改润色。修改润色是获取高分的必要步骤。这一步我们除了检查短文的各种错误外，还要检查语法结构是否合理，有无重复、啰嗦的语言，大小写是否正确，格式是否正确，词数是否符合要求等。

3．（·江苏中考模拟）书面表达

无锡被评为内地最宜居城市。假设你班对此进行了一次班级讨论，请你根据讨论主题并结合所给信息，以“Be a Beautiful City”为题写一份发言稿，号召广大学生为建设美好城市作贡献。内容提示如下：

1．政府修建了很多新路、大桥，甚至还有地铁；

2．新添了很多露天开放公园，每到周末和节假日，人们常常去那里野餐，游玩；

3．私家车越来越多，停车已成了大问题；

4．城市变化有利有弊；

5．你的希望：……

注意事项：

1．发言稿须包括所给内容要点，要求语句通顺、意思连贯；

2．第5个要点须用2至3句话展开合理想象。作适当发挥；

3．词数90左右，发言稿的开头已在答题卡上给出，不计入总词数；

4．发言稿内容必须写在答题卡指定的位置上。

Be a Beautiful City

There have been great changes in Wuxi in the past few years．

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【答案】Be a Beautiful City

There have been great changes in Wuxi in the past few years．The government has built lots of

new roads, bridges and even undergrounds．There have been a number of open parks．People