2022高考英语读后续写训练六篇(精编)

2022高考英语读后续写训练六篇（精编）

（一）

阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。续写的词数应为150左右。

A boulder(巨石)，as big as a house. That’s how the guidebook described Giant

Rock. Dad said it arrived here millions of years ago. I was finally going to see it, in

snowshoes, with my two older cousins, my dad, and my uncle Don. I’d been

snowshoeing before, and I liked the adventure of hiking through deep snow.

At the parking area, after putting on our snowshoes, we studied the map. Due to the

geographical location, electrical devices are inaccessible here. The map is our only guide.

"We start here，" Dad said,” on the red trail(小路）. Then we turn left onto the purple

road. That’s where Giant Rock is. " " Remember to stick together and don’t wander off,

guys，" Uncle Don said.

The trail ran uphill alongside a stone wall. It was easy to follow because red markers

were nailed to the trees and the snow had been packed down by other hikers. At the top

of the hill, we turned onto the purple trail. We settled into a pattern，with Dad and

everyone else in front and me in the back，crunching(嘎吱嘎吱地踩）through the snow.

I saw lots of animal tracks — mostly deer, squirrel, and rabbit prints. As the trail wound

down, my cousin Andrew said what I’d been thinking ："Will we ever reach Giant

Rock?" My cousin Aiden smiled and turned to me, "Luke, do you think your dad

invented this idea just to get us away from the TV for a while?" I laughed. "You never

know."

Finally, we climbed a hill and saw the massive boulder sitting alone in the forest. It

really is as big as a house! My cousins and I high-fived each other and jogged until we

stood at the base, breathless. Standing in the boulders broad shadow, I noticed the sun

had sunk lower.

“Let’s head back，" Dad said after a few minutes. "I here will be several crossroads

on the way back. Guys, keep up with the team. " Soon we were crunch-crunch-crunching

our way home. I was a little behind the group when we approached a crossroads. And I

noticed a set of animal tracks I didn’t recognize, so I followed them for a closer look.

Paragraph 1 ：

I looked up when I suddenly realized how quiet it had gotten.

Paragraph 2 ：

As going worriedly, I heard voices, someone calling far away.

参考答案

Paragraph 1：

I looked up when I suddenly realized how quiet it had gotten. "Where is everyone?"

I shouted. Nothing. “They couldn't have gone far. I’ll catch up if I hurry.” I comforted

myself. After a short walk, I came to the crossroads where I could turn left or go straight,

but both trails had red markers. I turned to the left which looked familiar. Unfortunately, it got quieter and quieter. Soon it might be too dark to tell what color the markers were.

What if I couldn’t find my way back?

Paragraph 2:

As going worriedly I heard voices, someone calling far away. Following the voices,

I noticed the stone wall, the trail running alongside it. It must be right way back! I rushed

downhill with big steps. Then, I saw the parking area, and my family! I shouted as I ran

toward them. "Luke? Are you OK?" The voice of Dad was urgent. I’d only been lost for

minutes, but it seemed like forever. Now all I wanted was a bear hug from Dad and to

make tracks for home.

【解析】

【分析】本篇书面表达是读后续写。通过阅读所给文章可知，作者和家人一起去参观巨石，没有导航只有地图的情况下，作者一行通过一条小路爬上山，最终作者一行找到了巨石，观赏之后开始归程，然而返程路上作者因为观察动物的足迹而跟丢了队伍。

【详解】续写部分分为2段，第一段的开头是我抬头看，然后发现四周很安静……， 所以这里写作者跟丢队伍之后的场景。作者大声呼喊人都去哪里了，但是没有回应，所以作者加快速度想要跟上队伍，但是面前的路口都有红色标记，没有办法分辨，所以作者选择了看起来熟悉的一条，但是却越来越安静，天也越来越暗了。

第二段开头是我焦急地走着，听到远处有人在叫……， 所以这里要描写作者迷路之后听到队伍喊叫的声音，跟随着声音，作者找到了父亲，虽然只走丢了几分钟，但是好像过了很久，作者紧紧抱住父亲。

【点睛】本文的续写比较有趣，故事情节比较吸引读者，使用了高级词汇和句子。如：comfort；familiar；worriedly；alongside；urgent等高级词汇，定语从句After a

short walk, I came to the crossroads where I could turn left or go

straight。宾语从句Soon it might be too dark to tell what color the markers

were.等高级句式。

（二）

阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。

Holly was confused as she opened the birthday present from her best

friend，Susan—it was a twelvebyeight inch dark blue carpet.Her “thanks” was hardly

heard as Holly tried hard not to show her disappointment.

The next morning，I carried a kitchen rubbish bag outside only to find Susan’s

carpet lying there.I immediately reached in and pulled it out of the rubbish can.After

giving it a brushing，I brought it into the house and put it away.

Before Holly’s birthday，Susan had been a regular visitor in our home.But suddenly

I realized that it had been nearly three weeks since we’d heard the mention of Susan’s

name.I missed her warm smile very much.

“Susan invited us to go to her house after school tomorrow.” Holly said as soon as

she arrived from school.From her voice，I sensed she was pleased with the invitation.