雅思写作语料库
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1 雅思写作语料库(含母题) Education In schools and universities, lectures were used as a way to teach a large number of students. As new technology is now available for education, some people think there is no justification for lectures anymore. To what extent do you agree or disagree? 立场:主题演讲依然是教授学生的主要方式,经管科技使人们接受教育的选择更加多元化。 思路拓展: 让步段:高科技对于教育的辅助作用:(可以选择两点让步) 1. 在线教育费用较低。网络资源丰富,音频视频文件可根据学生需求自由选择,同时,教学资源可反复利用。 2. 在线学习,适应特殊群体,例如残疾学习者,忙碌企业家以及生病的学生,因为远程教育不仅仅克服了地域的障碍,也节省了往返的麻烦。 3. 远程教育提高了学习灵活性,尤其适合喜欢按照自己的节奏安排学习的学生。 反驳段:主题演讲(或者课堂教育的)的不可替代性: 1. 主题演讲营造的造良好的学习氛围是自学无法比拟的。同时,在真实课堂,老师的监督和同龄人的压力可以帮助没有自律性的学生专注于学习。相反,接受网络教育对人的自律性要求很好, 网络的娱乐功能容易使人懈怠,失去学习的兴趣和耐心。 2. 课堂教育中积极的课堂互动,小组讨论,面对面的交流可以激发学习热情,提高学习效率,同时,学生可以学习如何与人交往交流,提高群体性经验。 3. 教授们不仅仅是传授知识,还能关注学生的道德教育和性格培养,启迪学生智慧,树立学生自信,这些是网络教育无法实现的。 语料库: 2 基本语料库: 1. teachers = educators n老师 2. deliver a lecture = make a speech v演讲;授课 3. college professors n大学教授 4. professionally well-trained adj专业上训练有素的 5. highly qualified adj 合格的 6. knowledgeable = learned adj博学的 7. traditional classroom teaching = conventional education = conventional teaching 传统课堂教育 8. distance learning n远程学习 9. distance education = tele-education n远程教育 10. on-line education n在线教育 11. impart knowledge into one’s mind v教授知识 12. disseminate knowledge = pass on knowledge = convey knowledge v 传播知识 核心观点句语料库: 1. Some top educational institutions have chosen to deliver an internet-based program and thus geographical barriers have been lifted. 一些名校提供网络教育,因此学习不再受地域的限制。 2. On-line education brings huge convenience to those who are eager to update knowledge but are hard-pressed for time, therefore, it is more attractive to busy modern people. 在线教育给时间有限的学习者提供了便利,因此,对于繁忙的学习者极有吸引力。 3 3. Having the benefits of obtaining a higher qualification without going to the university campus is attractive to many students, especially those sick or disabled learners. 对于很多人而言,尤其残疾学习者或者生病的学生,不必亲临学校即可获得学位极有吸引力。 4. Conventional teaching usually means greater cost, while on-line educational programs are affordable, flexible and time-saving. 传统教育费用较高,相反,在线教育价格低廉,灵活省时。 5. Whether at home or at work, on-line learners can endeavor to achieve their academic qualifications without causing too much disruption to their career or family lives. 无论在家或者职场,在不干扰生活和事业的前提下,远程教育者可以通过努力获得学历。 6. Apart from affordable, flexible classes and greater convenience, self-learners also have access to the on-line learning resources of many of the world’s top educational institutions. 除了学费低廉,时间灵活,极度方便,自学者可以获得世界名校的优质在线资源。 7. A number of prestigious universities offer a range of online programs that are highly respected 许多顶尖名校提供多种在线学习项目,而这些网络课程得到大众认同。 8. Tele-education perfectly fits for adult learners who need to combine their studies with a working life. 很多人需要平衡学业和家庭,因此,远程教育适合他们。 9. A humorous and learned teacher could impart knowledge into the learners’ minds more vividly and efficiently, which is the most obvious merit of traditional classroom education. 老师幽默博学,传播知识生动高效,这是传统教育最明显的利好。 10. It is easy for students to resolve their academic problems and dispel their worries by means of resorting to teachers for help or having face-to-face communication. 通过面对面交流以及及时求助于老师,学习者很容易解决学业烦恼。 Nowadays,most people learn academic study in university, but others think we should encourage to learn vocational skills more, do you agree or disagree? (2015年11月21日B卷考题) 【标题解析】本题为经典教育话题改写:能够了解为职业教育比照综合教育,或者专才教育比照通才教育。 4 【相关话题】 In some countries, secondary schools aim to provide a general education across a range of subjects. In others, children focus on a narrow range of subjects related to a particular career. Which is appropriate in today's world. 在一些国度,中学生会学习普遍的课程,在一些国度,学生们会学习一些和将来择业相关的课程,哪一种教育方式愈加适宜? 【谋篇规划】(退让反驳) 首段:背景引见+争议焦点+作家立场 二段:退让原题观念的合理性 三段:反驳原题观念的不合理 尾段:再次亮明观念+总结理由 【思绪拓展】 【职业教育的利好】 1. 人们的精神和时间有限,普遍涉猎,难免走马观花。相反,集中精神学习一门课技艺,可使人成为一个范畴的专家。 人生的斗争的过程就是追求稀缺的过程,你要成为那个不可替代者。 2. 职业培训学校培育的学生, 择业更有竞争力,由于他们能够合适特殊企业的需求。 【大学教育的利好】 1. 通才教育协助人完成全面开展,培育多元的兴味和才气,能够使受教育者顺应将来不同范畴的工作,因而,能够减少单一职业选择带来的失业风险。 2. 职业教育通常传授的是以择业为导向的学问,和就业相关联的技艺,仅是一种生存技艺的培育,相反,通才教育不只是传授学问,还触及到人的道德教育、性格培育、心灵生长,因而,专才教育更能表现圆满教育的真理。 5 【范文赏析】 【首段】背景引见 + 争议焦点 + 立场 Education is one of the key words of our time. A man without education, many of us believe is the victim of adversity. However,people’s views differ greatly as to whether or not specialist is superior to generalist. To voice my opinion, focusing on academic study in university enjoys more benefits. 【二段】 学习职业技艺的利好 Granted,those who advocate vocational training are, to some extent, never without their reasons. First,zeroing in on vocational skills can help learners secure well-paid jobs quickly, therefore, the family’s financial burden can be greatly reduced. From our life, we can find some examples to prove that job candidates from vocational training schools are very popular because what they have learnt are career-oriented and job-related. Also,Jack-of-all-trades is master of none. In comparison with studying a wide range of subjects,specializing in specific field can make one stand out in a crowd considering that one’s time and energy is limited 【三段】承受大学教育的利好: What I want to rebut, however, is that we can never ignore the immense value of academic study at university. The most glaring merit is that those who receive university education have plenty of room for career development because they have access to manifold knowledge and techniques. In addition to tapping one’s unlimited potentials in various aspects and helping one realize overall development, experiencing university life can bring more wonderful memories of colorful campus life. Last, this can benefit a nation, all-round education can train more comprehensive talents for a country,which will inject new life into the further development of a nation. 【尾段】亮明立场 Overall,my stand is that compared with attending vocational training schools,receiving university education is more feasible and rational because it helps students realize comprehensive development and cultivate more personal talents. Likewise, our society need talents with a wealth of knowledge. 【全文点评】 本篇主题明白、行文顺畅、逻辑明晰、文风朴素、偶以亮点词汇装点,可为考生赏析之佳作。原创范文只是雅思写作之一种,文无定法,倡议童鞋打造属于本人的个性范文。