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【创新+拓展设计】新高考英语题型优化之读后续写素材与练专题（1）续写微技能与思维点拨续写主要存在四个方面问题：1）对原文的理解不到位，续写文不对题；2）与段落开头语的衔接不合理，行文逻辑不清；3）情节安排不合理或无话可说；4）语言表达上，词汇低级且出现较多的语法错误，表达不准确。
此外，目前的续写教学以讲评课、分析课居多，真正系统有效的语言输入很少。
与概要写作一样，读后续写作为高考英语大作文，时间紧，任务重，考前一定要有足够的准备与积累。
微技能一动作描写一、动作描写的原则1.要精准使用精准化动作类词汇对动作进行细致描写,用一系列小动作而不用大动作或者用含义比较明确的动词而不用抽象或虚化的动词来描述,可以使描写更加具体生动。
试比较下面两句:①The little boy said sorry to his mother.②The little boy hung his head and mumbled an apology to his mother.分析:①句中“said sorry to”不带任何感情色彩,而②句中使用了具体化的表示“说”的动词mumbled,从而使一个不愿意道歉又不得不道歉的小男孩的形象栩栩如生地复现在读者脑海中。
2.有过程记叙文中有不少动作描写是一连串动作过程的展示。
尤其在展示人物个性的动作时,如果我们蜻蜓点水、一笔带过,就很难突出人物形象,也很难给人以深刻的印象,而通过细节描写展现出动作的过程,表现力便会大增。
如:①She went to catch the butterfly.②She crept along the path, bent over swiftly and cupped her hands around the butterfly gently.分析:①句在描写主人公捕捉蝴蝶的动作时,没有细节的动作描写,因此显得很平淡。
而②句运用了creep, bend, cup三个连贯的动词生动具体地描述了主人公小心翼翼捕捉蝴蝶的微妙过程,具有极强的画面感。
【创新+拓展设计】新高考英语题型优化之读后续写素材与练专题（1）Secret and methods续写微技能与思维点拨——适用于2021~2023届高考续写主要存在四个方面问题：1）对原文的理解不到位，续写文不对题；2）与段落开头语的衔接不合理，行文逻辑不清；3）情节安排不合理或无话可说；4）语言表达上，词汇低级且出现较多的语法错误，表达不准确。
此外，目前的续写教学以讲评课、分析课居多，真正系统有效的语言输入很少。
与概要写作一样，读后续写作为高考英语大作文，时间紧，任务重，考前一定要有足够的准备与积累。
微技能一动作描写一、动作描写的原则1.要精准使用精准化动作类词汇对动作进行细致描写,用一系列小动作而不用大动作或者用含义比较明确的动词而不用抽象或虚化的动词来描述,可以使描写更加具体生动。
试比较下面两句:①The little boy said sorry to his mother.②The little boy hung his head and mumbled an apology to his mother.分析:①句中“said sorry to”不带任何感情色彩,而②句中使用了具体化的表示“说”的动词mumbled,从而使一个不愿意道歉又不得不道歉的小男孩的形象栩栩如生地复现在读者脑海中。
2.有过程记叙文中有不少动作描写是一连串动作过程的展示。
尤其在展示人物个性的动作时,如果我们蜻蜓点水、一笔带过,就很难突出人物形象,也很难给人以深刻的印象,而通过细节描写展现出动作的过程,表现力便会大增。
如:①She went to catch the butterfly.②She crept along the path, bent over swiftly and cupped her hands around the butterfly gently.分析:①句在描写主人公捕捉蝴蝶的动作时,没有细节的动作描写,因此显得很平淡。
读后续写：成长类Part1：经典例文（街边按铃）阅读下面材料。
根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
Ring a BellMs. Tracy looked up from her yellow notebook and cleared her throat. The noise in the class died down as we turned toward her. "We're going to help a charity to collect money by ringing a bell. Each of you will ring it for four hours," she announced. As the words left her lips, complaints could be heard around the room. Unwillingly, I dug for my planner and look notes. Four hours of ringing a stupid bell. Four hours that I could be studying for the SAT. Was this supposed to be a joke? Ijoined the students around the table and signed up for 1he first day of break-to get it over with.A few weeks later, I was standing next to the big blue-and-white Walmart. There was another guy holding a jar across from me. Great, I was going to be stuck here ringing a bell with a guy who was trying to get donations for another charity. To top it off, it was only about 4.4℃.Slowly, I put on the red dress bearing the symbol of ow charity. I hoped that I already spent two minutes doing that, Ring! Ring! A group of olderwomen came up with their walking sticks to drop in some change. Аman with а broad-cimmеd bat came by and put some coins in. I checkedmy phone. Just 10 minutes had passed.A strong bitterly-cold wind blew against myfreezing face. I was starting to regret ignoring mymom's advice to wear a scarf. I looked up, wishingthat time would pass more quickly. A few birds sweptaround the poles. The sky was gently blue. Palm trees waved in thecold wind. How comfortable it might be to curl(蜷缩)up with a hot cupof tea and a book on the cozy sofa. Then another ring brought me back to reality.注意:1.续写词数应为150左右；From the parking lot stepped out a poorly-dressed man, walking with difficulty toward me._____________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________ Inspired by his generosity, I continued to ring my bell happily._____________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________【参考答案】From the parking lot stepped out a poorly-dressed man, walking with difficulty toward me. I saw his unbalanced shoulders and awkward figure. His hair was a mess and his shirt was dirty. I stopped ringing the bell, wondering what he was going to do. He pulled some change out of his worn pocket and reached towards the bucket. I couldn't help but say, "Thank you, sir." He turned to smile. The money he donated wasnot a lot, but it was clearly a lot to him. This act of charity, though not much, was worth so much more than donations given by those who were better off.从停车场从一个衣着不好的男人走出来，艰难地朝我走去。
班级考号姓名总分一、阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
My teenage son, Jordan, always complained about having to be home earlier than all his friends.He would tell me that he was already seventeen， but still had a curfew （宵禁），He believed he was practically an adult.I pointed out that he was not an adult as he was still in high school.“You don't trust me!” he yelled.Before I continued, he rolled his eyes, slammed the door and walked away.I sighed.How could I make Jordan see that I only wanted to keep him safe?I decided to go for a walk, hoping the December air would clear my head.I opened the front door and nearly stepped on her: a small black cat, just like a meatball.“Hi, Meatball," I said, bringing her into my arms.I walked back in, touching her neck gently.Meatball seemed happy enough to come in the house, but after an hour or two, she sat by the door, meowing to go back outside.“Why won't she just stay in with us all the time?” Nathan, my youngest son asked.I explained to him that she was happy here but she liked being able to come and go as she pleased.“That must be nice,” Jordan muttered from the other room, complaining why the cat, not him, could come and go.He even asked me to give Meatball a curfew.Meatball became a regular.One night, temperatures were unusually low.Meatball stood at the door, meowing to go outside.I shook my head at her, afraid that she might freeze to death.She stared at me and meowed again.I patted her head, “I know you're not happy, but it's for your own good.”“Mom's not being mean to you,” Nathan told the cat.“She's just trying to keep you from turning into a frozen meatball.”We both laughed at his joke.The next morning, I couldn't find Meatball.I asked the kids if anyone had seen her.【注意】1.续写词数应为150左右；2.请按如下格式作答。
【创新+拓展设计】新高考英语题型优化之读后续写素材与练专题（6）句型点拨与例文讲评建议——Jackson——适用于2021~2023届高考句子结构1. "....," he said,doing...--say后接分词作状语1) "I didn't know what I was doing," she said, laughing at the memory.2) "I'll get us some coffee," she said, heading for the kitchen.3) "That's nice," Alex said quietly, focusing on his plate.4) "Very clever," said the teacher, nodding his head as if pleased.5) "Uncle, forgive me, I did that... unintentionally," he said, pointing to the broken glass.6) "We don't do any harm," said the boy, evidently frightened by my words.2. "...," he said,as/when/before/as if...--say后接时间状语从句1) "Watch out!" she shouted, as the car started to move.2) "What a beauty!" said the nurse as she came to the door.3."....," he said,and(then he) did....--say后接and, 先后动作或构成并列句1) "Good morning, children!" said the minister; and he kindly shook hands with both.2) "Yes, I think so," he said reluctantly(无奈地), and left the study.3) "Come here," said the little man, and took her to one of the corners of the building.4."....," he said,“...”--say后接要说的另一句话1) "There was a letter from Prince Andrew today," he said to Princess Mary "Haven't you read it?"2) "Well, well!" said the man; "are there really people in this room?"3) "Since you love him so well," said the king, "I will tell you something.4) "She is a very admirable and excellent young woman," said she, "and you must go and call on her."5....did..,did,and said, “...”--say前有并列关系的先后动作He paused, looked straight into her eyes, and said in a quiet voice,"that's true."6."....," said the man,who... --用定语从句补充说明说话的人1) "I don't know," said Zeb, who was still confused.2) "To your health!" said Mr.White, who also emptied his glass, and wiped his mouth with his handkerchief.7."....," he said +方式副词(-ly)或短语,--作状语修饰say1）"Of course," Nacy replied with a smile.2）"I'm sorry," she said with a sigh.3）"But they don't understand our talk at all," said the dancer with a puzzled smile.4）"Natasha, you love me?" she said in a soft trustful whisper.5）"Come to your Papa at once, please!" said she with a strange, excited look.6）"If only I had known..." she said through her tears.强调一下，概要写作一般以议论文或说明文为主，提炼中心词，关键句，不忘承上启下的连接词，千万不要加上自己的观点，一般以第三人称概述。
高考读后续写真题汇总（适合新高考卷、浙江卷）2021年6月浙江卷（第一份工资）12021年6月新高考1卷（母亲节的惊喜）32021年1月八省联考（好心家庭帮我修车）52021年1月浙江卷（圣诞节的尴尬）82020年7月山东卷（爆米花救助穷人）102020年7月浙江卷（拍照北极熊遇险）122020年1月浙江卷（小狗Ponny的新玩伴）142018年6月浙江卷（山中遇险）172017年11月浙江卷（健忘的妈妈）202017年6月浙江卷（狼口脱险）232016年10月浙江卷（森林遇险）25浙江卷样题（银行抢劫）282021年6月浙江卷（第一份工资）My dad, George, only had an eighth grade education. A quiet man, he didn't understand my world of school activities. From age 14, he worked. And his dad, Albert, took the money my dad earned and used it to pay family expenses.I didn't really understand his world either: He was a livestock trucker, and l thought that I would surpass（超过）anything he had accomplished by the time l walked across the stage at high school graduation.Summers in the mid, 70s were spent at home shooting baskets, hitting a baseball, or throwing a football, preparing for my future as a quarterback on a football team. In poor weather, I read about sports or practiced my trombone（长号）.The summer before my eighth grade I was one of a group of boys that a neighboring farmer hired to work in his field. He explained our basic task, the tractor fired up and we were off, riding down the field looking for weeds to spray with chemicals. After a short way, the farmer stopped and painted at a weed which we missed. Then we began again. This happened over and over, but we soon learned to identify different grasses like cockleburs,lamb's-quarters, foxtails, and the king of weeds, the pretty purple thistle. It was tiring work, but I looked forward to the pay, even though I wasn't sure how much it would amount to.At home, my dad said, "A job's a big step to growing up.I'm glad you will be contributing to the household."My dad's words made me realize that my earning might not be mine to do with as wished.My labors lasted about two weeks, and the farmer said there might be more work, but I wasn't interested. I decided it was not fair that l had to contribute my money.注意：1．所续写短文的词数应为150左右；2．至少使用5个短文中标有下划线的关键词语；3．续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；4．续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。
高三英语读后续写专项（二）编者：从省模考的试题中，我们知道：我们的读后续写不同于浙江卷的读后续写，最大的不同在于没有划线词。
没有了划线词的限制，这也就意味着开放性更强，难度更大。
开放性更强意味着故事情节完整，合理就行，关键还是在语言的表达上。
因此，想要在读后续写中，赢得高分，关键看你的语言的地道，准确和丰富性以及句式结构的多样性。
在专项（一）中，我们侧重从故事情节的梳理方面进行了训练。
在专项（二）中，我们将侧重语言的地道，准确和丰富性——描写和句式结构的多样性方面进行梳理。
描写一：环境描写(1)天气：1.一个暴风雨之夜:_______________2.落日:_______________3.冉冉升起的太阳：______________4.（天气）放晴:______________5. 沐浴在温暖的阳光里:______________6.电闪雷鸣:____________________7.鹅毛大雪：______________8.狂风暴雨：_________________9.泥泞的：____________ 10.多雾的：_______________11.凉爽的微风：________ 12.冰冷的：_______________13.温和的__________14.潮湿的：______________15.一轮明月：_______________ 16.清新的空气__________________17.晴朗的：______________ 18.变化无常的___________(2)地理、方位：1.群山环绕的村庄：____________________2.位于/坐落于：________________________3.朝南的房间:__________________________4.蜿蜒的小路：_________________________5.偏僻宁静的村庄：____________________6.多山的:______________二：人物描写(1)外貌：1.苗条的身材:______________2.中等身材：_____________3.高/矮___________________4.戴眼镜/蓄胡子/戴项链__________________5.相貌平平的______________6.衣着干净整洁______________________7.超重的______________ 8.瘦骨嶙峋_____________9.便装___________ 10.衣衫褴褛_______________11.明亮的眼睛_____________12. 衣着考究的13.她的额头出现了一道皱纹。
20. 读后续写之故事结尾设计4法养成良好的答题习惯，是决定成败的决定性因素之一。
做题前，要认真阅读题目要求、题干和选项，并对答案内容作出合理预测;答题时，切忌跟着感觉走，最好按照题目序号来做，不会的或存在疑问的，要做好标记，要善于发现，找到题目的题眼所在，规范答题，书写工整;答题完毕时，要认真检查，查漏补缺，纠正错误。
21.【突破策略】突破策略1点题式结尾：增加文章的深刻性和感染力就是在结尾时用一两句话点明文章主旨,而文章的主旨一般可以通过阅读材料总结得出,这种结尾方式可以增加文章的深刻性和感染力,有画龙点睛的作用。
【真题示例】(2023·新高考Ⅰ卷) I went to my teacher’s office after the award presentation. With excited tearsin my eyes, I thanked him again, adding that it was he who let me get a taste for writing.Pattingme on the shoulder, he inspired me to continue writing in English and believed that I would makegreat achievements in writing.We talked a lot about writing.I promised that I would live up to hisexpectation and never stop writing.After this writing experience, I learned to conquer my fear withlove, persistence and confidence.【解答思路】本文讲述了作者上中学的时候,社会学老师邀请作者参加一个写作比赛。
高考英语读后续写素材和练习（成长篇）（一）【精彩句子】1.As years went by, I became stronger and stronger.随着岁月的流逝，我变得越来越强大。
2.She couldn’t help sobbing, tears rolling down like a broken string of beads.她情不自禁地抽泣起来，眼泪像断了的珠子一样滚落下来。
3.After saying that her face flushed, she handed the paper and the prize to the teacher.说完她的脸涨得通红，她把试卷和奖品递给了老师。
4.Swaying between honor and conscience, she had a restless night, tossing and turning on bed.在荣誉和良心之间摇摆不定，她一夜未眠，在床上辗转反侧。
5.The missing arm is like a wing folded by an angel.You can see the wings only if you are strong enough.失去的手臂就像天使收起的翅膀。
你只有足够强壮才能看到翅膀。
【精美语段】("勇敢地承认错误"续写首段范文)Later Dad came in with excitement." Where's your spelling test, Karie? " Dad asked eagerly.Karie looked away from her father.Anyhow, she reluctantly went to her room and pulled out the test paper.Dad fixed his eyes on the paper, a pleasant smile lifting the corner of his mouth.“I'm proud of you, sweetie.We need to celebrate it tonight.” Karie pretended to be smiling all the time.Meanwhile a sense of guilt rose inside her.Feeling she didn't deserve the prize, she had a sleepless night for the first time in her life.后来，爸爸兴奋地走了进来。
2023新高考读后续写高分素材积累与拓展英语景色描写类经典语句举例Natural Phenomena自然现象1. The Clear Sky 晴空When you look at the sky on a clear day, it seems as if the earth is covered by a blue dome. If you stand at a place where the surface of the earth is flat; the sky seems to meet the earth in any direction you look.在晴朗的日子,你看到天空就像一个蓝色的大圆盘.如果你极目远眺,无论从那个方向,看到的都是天地相接的地平线.2. Summer Evenings夏夜Sometimes I will see falling stars draw bright lines in the sky. There is harmony between the moonand stars in the quiet sky and the slow pace of the village. I really enjoy the peaceful summer evenings in the village.有时我得到流星在天空中划出明亮的线条,宁静的夜空中挂着一轮明月和闪烁的星星,与慢节奏的村庄形成一幅和谐的美景.我非常喜欢村庄宁静的夏夜.3. The Sun rises 日出The next day, the sunlight woke him very early, hiding the stars under a pink blue and blue sky. But the stars kept watching him from above.第二天,日出的光线很早就将他唤醒.夜晚的星星都被阳光藏在粉蓝色的天空下. 但是它们仍然从天上看着他.4. Beautiful Dawn 凌晨美景It was the perfect morning for our daily walk: A brisk wind sweeping ocean air across our faces, fresh mounds of kelp laughing in clumps along the beach, and the sun coming up from its flat bed of fog, red and new and full of promises.对我们每日的散步来说,这是一个宜人的清晨.清冽的微风夹着海洋的气息扑面而来.一簇簇新鲜的海藻在海滩随处可见.旭日从雾霭中冉冉升起,东升红彤彤,新鲜而充满生机.5. The Moon 月亮It is a beautiful and quiet night. The moon is like a disc hanging on the dark sky , which casts its light on everything.一个美丽而宁静的夜晚,月亮像一个圆盘挂在黑暗的夜空中,淡淡的月光普照万物.6. Enchantment 心醉Outside, the lopsided moon, the hacked-at trees and the hobbled moon garden shimmered and rustled and fluttered in the night wind,satisfied they worked their powerful enchantment still.外面,月儿弯弯,修剪过的树和残破的月牙形花园闪着微光,在夜风中沙沙作响,婆娑起舞,对它们创造的强烈的祥和气氛感到心满意足.7. Summer Rain 夏雨The first drops of rain are huge; they split into the dust on the ground, and plunk on the roof. The rain now becomes a torrent,flung by a rising wind. Together they batter the trees and level the grasses. Water streams off roofs. There is only water.开始雨点很大,溅起地上的灰尘,打在屋顶上丁当作响.接着大更大的风助威下, 瓢泼大雨倾盆而下,雨水砸向树木,踏平草地.立即,雨水像溪流一样从屋顶奔流而下.到处都是水的世界.8. Rainbow 彩虹I am drawn outside while the rain still falls. All around, there is cool and welcome feeling. I breathe deeply and watch the sun’s rays streak through breaking clouds. One ray catches the drops that from on the edge of the roof, and I am treated to a row of tiny, quivering colors—my private rainbow. They are red, orange, yellow, green, blue, indigo, and violet, which makes a wonderland.雨一直在下，我跑出去，享受周围那一丝丝清凉的感觉。
【创新+拓展设计】新高考英语题型优化之读后续写素材与练专题（2）Reading and accumulation阅读与积累（一）——适用于2021~2023届高考Once in Arabia, there lived a Sheik. He and his wife lived in a village. As she had no child, the Sheik married another woman for a second time. By his second wife, he had a son. He loved his son very much and he grew up happily as a handsome young man.However, the man's first wife hated the second wife and her son, so she began to plot against(密谋杀害) them. For years, she kept waiting for a chance to murder them with her magical power.One day the Sheik had to go out on a journey. He said to his son that he would return home before Bakrid and celebrated the festival. Now came the perfect chance long waited by the first wife. When the man was away, she used her magical power and changed the second wife and son as goats.When Bakrid was approaching, the man returned home, only to find his first wife in the house. He asked her where his son and his second wife were. The first wife lied that his second wife died in some unknown disease and that her son ran away from home and didn't come again. On hearing this, the man became sad but comforted himself that it was God's will.On the day of Bakrid, the Sheik asked his first wife to bring a goat for sacrifice. His first wife brought the second wife who had been changed into a goat. When it came near the man, it started to brush his hand with its tongue. He took pity on the goat and asked his first wife to bring another. So she brought the son goat. It also come near the Sheik and started to rub his leg with its head. Again, the man took pity on the goat. He said, "The two goats do like men. So I can't kill these two. " Then the first wife got angry and said, "If you refuse to kill all goats like this, we will not be able to sacrifice anything." Possible Version 1 Paragraph 1: Just then the butcher's wife, another woman with magical power, passed by. Glancing at these two goats, she instantly realized the woman's evil trick. She came up to the Sheik, explaining, "Actually, these two goats are your second wife and your son." Hearing the words, the man was startled and asked her if she could bring them back to him. The butcher's wife nodded, taking some water from her bottle and spraying it on the two goats. The next moment, they turned into his second wife and his son.Paragraph 2: So astonished was the man that he couldn't believe his eyes. "Dad! Dad!" the boy cried in a thrilledvoice, throwing himself at his father's hug. Three of them embraced each other tightly, tears streaming down. In the corner stood the first wife in a mixture of fright and annoyance. When she was about to run away, she was caught by the butcher's wife. Never had she predicted one day she would be changed into a silent fish. From then on, the man, his second wife and his lovable son lived a happy life in the village.Possible Version 2Paragraph 1: Just then the butcher's wife, another woman with magical power, passed by.The sight of the goats pacing around Sheik with care and love confused the butcher's wife, wondering why two goats acted like humans.With doubt in mind, she approached the two goats, hands gently on their heads to know what had happened.It dawned on her that the two goats were actually changed from humans through magicalpower. Having learnt the truth, the woman changed the two back to humans, making everyone present shocked, including Sheik.Paragraph 2: So astonished was the man that he couldn't believe his eyes. Never in his wildest dream had he thought they would reunite in this way. Tears of relief welling up in eyes, he hugged them tightly,asking what they had experienced. Eyes glued to the three, the first wife, with her hands clenched into tight fists, dashed to them in a flash, scolding and cursing. Sheik glared at her, realizing the truth and revealed her evil deeds on the spot. Furious but frightened by the roaring people around, the first wife fled away, leaving the family in the joyful celebration.例句学习1. the next moment 紧接着(尤指突然发生很大变化)The next moment there was an almighty crash接着发生了剧烈的撞击。
I gave her a cigarette and the next moment she was gone.我给了她一支烟，一眨眼她就走了。
2. clench (通常表示愤怒、决心或不安时) 捏紧，攥紧(拳头等), 咬紧(牙齿等)when you clench your hands, teeth, etc., or when they clench, you press or squeeze them together tightly, usually showing that you are angry, determined or upset He clenched his fists in anger.他愤怒地攥紧了拳头。
