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慎小嶷:十天突破雅思写作范文大赏精研优秀范文而后反复练习反复修改是雅思写作提升的不二之途。
下面小编给大家带来慎小嶷雅思写作范文赏析，烤鸭加油。
【慎小嶷——十天突破雅思写作】政府类真题7分范文政府类真题【Creative artists should always be given the freedom to express their ideas. To what extent do you agree?】第四类真题政府类真题来啦~On the contrary, sometimes these artists tend to be unscrupulous. They convert rumors into facts and present them before us. This might impair the reputation of some illustrious people in today's society. On such occasions, certain restrictions are understandable. Nevertheless, we all do know what is right or wrong. Rules and regulations not always are the solution to how artists present their own ideas. Hence it is wrong-headed to be impetuous and the government should enforce alternative ways to control the media. Respect for one's ideas is not only hypothetical, but must be practised. It is through respect that each one of us can be recognised as a unique person in the world. This can be achieved by looking at the bright side of what the media display for us. Not a day can go by when we don't look out for colorful dreams and a beautiful life when we can find either through music, poetry, films, pictures everything that the creative artists offer us.有些情况下这些艺术家会有些违反道德，他们把流言当做事实来呈现到我们面前。
【慎小嶷——十天突破雅思写作】真题范文大全多多研读别人的优秀范文，在进行仿写和改进，也不失为提升雅思写作能力的有个好办法，下面小编给大家带来【慎小嶷——十天突破雅思写作】真题范文大全，希望可以帮助到大家。
【慎小嶷——十天突破雅思写作】文化类真题7分范文文化类真题【In some countries, traditional arts are going extinct. Some people think that we should try to keep them. To what extent you agree?】Today, many types of traditional arts and crafts are struggling on the brink of extinction. People have different attitudes toward this trend. As for me, I believe that traditional arts should still be cherished by us. Traditional arts are national treasures handed down from our ancestors; therefore, it is our responsibility as inheritors to keep them alive. A nation without abundant traditional arts, such as folk music, ethnic drawings or painting would feel rootless. Consequently, should those brilliant traditional arts die out, the nation's sense of belonging would be seriously eroded. Even worse once a form of traditional art disappears in history, it could never be truly revived. Only until then will the people realize that is a great loss, which at best would only result in nostalgia and regrets.如今，许多传统工艺正濒临灭绝。
慎小嶷十天突破雅思写作模板汇总今天我们要跟大家分享的雅思写作模板，是来自慎小嶷的雅思写作参考书系列。
接下来请看内容：慎小嶷十天突破雅思写作模板汇总。
【慎小嶷——十天突破雅思写作】动物类真题7.5分范文动物类真题【Humans should not use animals as sources of food and clothing. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this view?】需要注意的单词：animal-rightblood-thirstyIn ancient times, there was no opposition to the exploitation of animals. But now many animal-right activists object to consumption of animals as sources of food and clothing. I would not go along with their viewpoint. It may be true that animal consumption poses threats to our lives. For instance, not only is the hunting of endangered species such as whaling blood-thirsty, it can also ruin the ecosystem. Since citizens are increasingly aware of the far-reaching impact of the extinction of endangered species, it is reasonable for the government to regulate the consumption of endangered species as food and clothing.在古代，没有人反对将动物作为一种资源来使用。
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编辑推荐最新的十天纪念版对早期的第二版进行了全面修改，最深刻的变化是清晰地区分了不同英语基础的考生的不同需求。
对于有一定英文程度的考生，新版提供了大量范文和分析，旨在快速提高这部分考生的能力。
而对于基础薄弱的考生，新版则强调基本功的训练。
另外赠送一本含有需要读者背诵内容的小册子。
新版光盘邀请英国专家朗读高频话题加原创范文，希望练习英音的读者可以写作和口语同步提高。
内容推荐本书系慎小嶷老师的力作。
书中收录了所有雅思写作的应试技巧。
作者文笔流畅，讲述深入浅出，使学生一看就懂，一学就会，只要用就有提高。
?另外，本书还配有纯英音外教的朗读光盘，有助于学生理解和记忆，光盘内容为本书附赠的必备掌中宝的相关内容。
作者简介慎小嶷，我的中文名字叫慎小嶷，英文名字叫Patrick，很多朋友也喜欢简单地称呼我Pat。
长期在美国、加拿大两国生活，让我对英语这种世界上越来越多的人之间使用的沟通工具有了更直接的体验。
目录推荐序——风起云扬(纪念版序)新版推荐序——谢谢你，慎老师作者自序再版自序致读者Day 1 其实你不懂雅思写作多数考生无法回答的10个问题 /3我的答案 /4每日一练 /12练习答案 /13Day 2 我怎样想素材IELTS写作真题 /173种解题方法 /18测测你的进展 /23每日一练 /24练习答案 /25Day 3 多大的词汇量算大雅思议论文6分必备120个词汇分类讲解 /29 IELTS写作288个高分词汇完全词库 /34IELTS作文常用同义词替换表 /52IELTS 作文很容易用错的单词总结 /54每日一练 /55练习答案 /57Day 4 真正实用的IELTS作文语法正确理解5种句子成分/61区分3种句子 /63有效避免7种语法错误 /65正确使用4种特殊句式(高分内容) /68每日一练 /71练习答案 /73Day 5 复杂句的秘诀主句和从句之间的6种常见关系 /78IELTS议论文主体段20个最常用逻辑连接表达总结(高分内容)/84 特别值得我们注意的5个词组和1种逻辑关系(高分内容)/86每日一练/88练习答案/90Day 6 35和53IELTS写作35个基础句型 /93IELTS写作53个高分句型 /97每日一练 /104练习答案/106Day 7 经得起推敲的结构是“四段式”还是“五段式” /10910秒种确定文章结构 /111每日一练/115练习答案 /116Day 8 突破模板写作文Day 8(上)/121A.模板到底属于谁?/121B.IELTS议论文考场实战6步(“非大牛“必读)/135C.Report类范文/136Day 8 (中) /142只适合“大牛”的一边倒文章怎样写?(高分内容) /142Day 8 (下) /145突破模板写作文(高分内容，更多原创范文请看附录A和附录B)/145 每日一练 /156练习答案 /158Day 9 图表题，能提前写完吗Task 1的语言特色 /163图表题的3个要求 /164图表题的3个准备工作 /165图表题的3种段落 /169图表题的3种特殊题型(高分内容) /185每日一练 /188练习答案 /192Day 10 关于流程图的恶狼传说流程图的4要素 /197真题放送 /198流程图也有模板 /199每日一练 /204练习答案/207，G类考生特训书信的3大纪律/211书信的结构/212雅思书信分类范文/213雅思书信常用模板和书信10大最常用短语/218每日一练/221练习答案/222终于该上战场了附录附录 A 突破模板的1000种可能性(高分内容)/229附录 B 43个原创雅思作文高分背诵段落 /245附录 C 我怎么做预测 /259附录 D 2004~2009年亚太区写作真题分类汇总/263附录 E 雅思作文最常引用的名人名言汇总 /277附录 F 鲜为人知却极为实用的英文写作网站 /281结束语 /283以上就是本小编对于慎小嶷：十天突破雅思写作(第2版)(附赠光盘+一本小手册)一书的详细介绍，供大家参考和学习，希望能对大家有所帮助，最后祝大家一次就和雅思考试说拜拜。
General Knowledge•注意：1. 作文要有实质内容。
2. 6分：260~270个词左右；6.5分：280个词以上。
3. 没有必要一定写长难句，但要提高句子的准确度和多样性。
必须在对英语造句知识准确理解和把握的基础上流畅地写出复杂的长句子，而不是刻意、机械地拉长句子。
（准确、严密、多样、清晰）4. 对于零星出现的少量拼写错误，只要不引起歧义，是不会导致严重扣分的，但要努力减少作文里出现拼写错误的可能。
5. 考场里没有时间打草稿，但可以在印考题的试题纸上把看到题目后头脑里闪现出的ideas、考前准备的相关加分词汇和句型大致记录一下。
6. 当考官要求停笔时即使还没有写完也一定要停下来，否则会被判为违纪行为。
7. 考前练习一定要尽可能模拟实战：下载标准格式的答题纸；用铅笔写作，每行10~12个单词；严格控制时间，Task 1不应超过25 min，Task 2不应超过45 min。
备考初期，可将Task 1和Task 2分开练习，但在考前一周内，必须演练完整的写作考试全程，严格控制时间，写完后再核对或请有经验的老师批改。
8.如果Task 2准备得较为充分，有信心在40min写出一篇自己满意的议论文，那么就先完成Task 2。
反之，就先写Task 1。
9. 齐头式：每段开头顶格写，每两段之间空一行缩入式：每段开头后退3~4个字母的距离，每个段落之间不空行10. 可使用I/we、被动语态，但不宜滥用；可将But/So放在句首11. 7分或以上的作文对于用词的要求是准确，而不是冗长•Topics•学术类写作的特殊要求1. 不接受缩写形式2. 不使用非正式口语表达3. 英美拼写不能混淆4. 用词要有特色5. 句式不能过于短促6. 句式不能过于干瘪7. 感情色彩不能过于强烈8. 不要将宗教信仰或英语谚语作为逻辑证据想素材的方法写作的主要目的：考察考生用正确的、具有说服力的英文表达出reasonable ideas的能力•分类法（P22-P23）当题目的讨论对象过于广泛或抽象时，将讨论对象具体化，对其加以分类。
慎小嶷《十天突破雅思写作》总结注意：1、作文要有实质内容。
2、6分：260~270个词左右；6、5分：280个词以上。
3、没有必要一定写长难句，但要提高句子的准确度和多样性。
必须在对英语造句知识准确理解和把握的基础上流畅地写出复杂的长句子，而不是刻意、机械地拉长句子。
（准确、严密、多样、清晰）4、对于零星出现的少量拼写错误，只要不引起歧义，是不会导致严重扣分的，但要努力减少作文里出现拼写错误的可能。
5、考场里没有时间打草稿，但可以在印考题的试题纸上把看到题目后头脑里闪现出的ideas、考前准备的相关加分词汇和句型大致记录一下。
6、当考官要求停笔时即使还没有写完也一定要停下来，否则会被判为违纪行为。
7、考前练习一定要尽可能模拟实战：下载标准格式的答题纸；用铅笔写作，每行10~12个单词；严格控制时间，Task1不应超过25 min，Task2不应超过45 min。
备考初期，可将Task1和Task2分开练习，但在考前一周内，必须演练完整的写作考试全程，严格控制时间，写完后再核对或请有经验的老师批改。
8、Task1 图表题Task2 议论题Task achievement针对题目所给的图形详细介绍信息Coherence and cohensionLexical resourceGrammatical range and accuracyTask response论证要扣题且强有力Coherence and cohensionLexical resourceGrammatical range and accuracy客观、准确、详尽主观性使用的词汇有限，句式要求不高词汇量要求较高，句式灵活多变最高境界：让考官即使不看图表，只看考生作文也能够准确地想象出图表的内容在观点上没有标准答案，重点在于是否可以用英文比较准确地表达并且强有力地支持这种观点；不用纠结怎样的观点才是“正确的”，而应考虑这道题持怎样的论点才能写起来最顺手，最能充分利用自己考前准备的内容。
慎小嶷《十天突破雅思写作》怎么样
《十天突破雅思写作》是一本全面陈述雅思写作的书籍，由权威考试培训机构慎小嶷编写。
它运用先进的教学理念，由浅入深地讲解了雅思作文的思路和技巧，并且编写了大量的练习题，把握范文的技巧和方法介绍得清楚明白，让考生在短时间内，能快速掌握雅思写作技巧，从而轻松拿下雅思写作。
《十天突破雅思写作》能够帮助考生掌握雅思写作的技巧，如构思、词汇等，而且有详实的练习，能够满足考生的学习需求。
从内容上来看，它全面讲解了雅思写作的技巧，让考生能够更好地掌握写作技巧，为自身的考试做好准备。
总的来说，《十天突破雅思写作》是一本优秀的作文指导书，它的编撰者慎小嶷不仅仅是一位经验丰富的教师，而且是一位有着超群培训能力的教育家。
这本书改变了考生学习雅思写作的方式，能够让考生真正明白词汇、构思和结构的概念，帮助考生提高写作能力，在短时间内拿到好成绩。
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THE PROCESS DIAGRAMS------FRANK ON 2011.13.10 一．EXAMPLE ONE·RequirementThe diagram below shows how the Australian Bureau of Meteorology collects up--to--the--minute information on the weather in order to produce reliable forecasts.Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features,and make comparisons where relevant.·Main sectionThe process diagram illustrates in four stages how the Australian Bureau of Meteorology gathers its weather information in order to make weather forecasts.According to the diagram, in the first stage there is the " incoming information ". Specifically ,weather data is collected from outer space,on land,or at sea,using satellite,radar,and drifting buoy respectively.Next , in the second step,this data is analysed and forecast by experts. At this stage experts study satellite photos,radar screens ,and synoptic charts to determine weather conditions. Stage three of the process is when the information is prepared for broadcast. This is done through computer which sends all necessary data to the fourth stage. At this point the weather data is broadcast to the general public via TV,radio and telephone(recorded announcement).Thus ,the process diagram clearly shows how weather data is collected,studied,prepared,and finally broadcast.·Unknown wordsIncoming informationAnalysisForecastingPreparing the broadcastBroadcast二．EXAMPLE TWO·requirementThe chart below shows the shaping and growth of the forests in Yellowstone National Park after a fire disaster.Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features,and make comparisons where relevant.·MAIN SECTIONThe process diagram illustrated in four stages the recovery of the forests in Tellowstone National Park after a devastating forest fire.According to the diagram ,in the first picture ,while the old forests still exist,they drop bad wood to the soil under them,which makes the soil more fertile. Then lighting and fire strike, destroying the forests completely. And the growth of new forests starts right at this point. The second picture demonstrates that inthe first 50 years after the devastating fire,sapling emerge where the old forests used to stand. The second five decades see the sapling grow in build but diminish in overall number. In the next two centuries ,the young tres continue to thrive in Yellowstone,because of the fertile soil and the ample sunlight. Then,three hundred years after the fire,the forests begin to experience a turnaround and the number of trees decline to roughly the same as the old forest. These five pictures shows us that it takes as long as three centuries for a destroyed forest to fully recover.additionally,they vividly explain to us the natural law of survival of fittest.the number of the trees that a region can support is not limitless,which means the forest on earth will not be an inexhaustible resource.。
慎小嶷的十天突破雅思写作范文解析多多研读别人的优秀范文，再进行仿写和改进，也不失为提升雅思写作能力的有个好办法，下面小编给大家带来慎小嶷的十天突破雅思写作范文解析，希望可以帮助到大家。
【慎小嶷——十天突破雅思写作】地图题真题9分范文地图题真题【The map below is of the town of Garlsdon. A new supermarket ( S) is planned for the town. The map shows two possible sites for the supermarket.】注意地名：Garlsdon;Hindon;Cransdon.调皮的括号君：( S1)以及：no-traffic zone;out-of-town.In contrast, the suggested location, S2, is right in the town center, which would be good for local residents. Theoretically, the store could be accessed by road or rail from the surrounding towns, including Bransdon. But in reality, as the central area is a no-traffic zone, cars would be unable to park and access would be difficult. Overall, neither site is appropriate for all the towns, but for customers in Cransdon, Hindon and Garlsdon, the out-of-town site ( S1) would probably offer more advantages.相反，备选地点S2正好位于镇中心，这就方便了当地居民。
从理论上说，包括Bransdon镇在内的周边镇上的居民都可以驾车或坐火车来此购物。
但实际上，由于镇中心是步行区，汽车无处停泊，这为去超市造成了困难。
总之，没有一个选址适合于所有的镇，但是对Cransdon，Hindon和Garlsdon镇的顾客来说，位于镇外的S1可能具有更多优势。
【慎小嶷——十天突破雅思写作】教育类真题7分范文教育类真题【Some people believe that children are given too much free time. They feel that this time should be used to do more schoolwork. To what extent do you agree or disagree? 】The issue of whether children are given too much free time, in my view, it's not about the amount of free time they have, but about whether this time can be spent in socially productive activities. Clearly, giving students an excessive amount of spare time after school may cause a series of problems. Young students are at the best stage in their lives to acquire knowledge and skills, if this precious period is occupied with idle activities, they will have to do much more to compete with their peers when they become adults. What can be more disturbing is the possible increase in children's miss behaviour and even offenses after school. Some teenagers may linger on the streets instead of staying with their parents or guardians, which makes it very likely for them to be involved in criminal acts. Not only does school work can include writing essays and research papers, it may also offer a variety of social activities. Such as group discussions or preparation for team presentations, which hones children's cooperative skills. So it seems children should indeed spend more time on their schoolwork.【慎小嶷——十天突破雅思写作】科技类真题7分范文【Many people ignore basic science today. What are the causes and what are your solutions?】While technological developments are constantly covered bythe mass media, basic science is hardly getting any attention from the public. I tend to believe the public ignorance of basic science research is largely due to its unpredictable value. Compared with applied technology that can produce almost immediate benefits, basic science does not have short-term financial potential. In contrast, to develop basic science, scientists have to devote a great deal of time and energy to their research, while being very uncertain if this devotion will lead to the intended outcomes. Many scientists become dissatisfied with their working conditions and earnings and in the end, they choose to leave their laboratories for other jobs, which can help to explain why basic science is often ignored by the public. Since basic science is the foundation of most technological developments, some steps must be taken to reverse this trend. On the national level, the government should fulfill its responsibility in raising public awareness of the significance of basic science. Only when the government gives priority to this field in its policy can basic science get the funding and the public support that is urgently needed. Also, companies and institutes should financially support scientists who commit themselves to basic science, not just for the sake of profit, but for the development of science as well. Additionally, the public should be made aware that there would be very few technological advancements if basic science were largely ignored. Basic science deserves more public attention. Certainly none of us want it to become a completely stagnant field due to our ignorance.尽管媒体上关于科技发展的报道可谓铺天盖地，但基础科学却仍然很难引起公众的注意力。
我倾向于认为公众之所以忽视基础科学研究，很大程度上是因为它的价值是不可预知的。
相比那些能起到立竿见影效果的应用科学，基础科学在短期内并不具备太多的潜在经济效益。
而相反，要发展基础科学，科学家们需要投入大量的精力和时间来进行研究，而且他们的投入是否能达到预想的研究结果也是完全不确定的。
许多科学家到最后都渐渐变得对自己的工作环境和收入不满起来，进而离开实验室去寻找其他工作，这也就解释了为什么基础科学会经常被公众所忽视。
鉴于基础科学是绝大多数科学技术发展的基础，我们必须要对这种现状做些什么了。
