考研英语写作部分评分标准详解与样卷参考
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考研英语写作部分评分标准详解与样卷参考————————————————————————————————作者:————————————————————————————————日期:ﻩ全国硕士研究生考试英语作文评分标准与样卷参考ﻫﻫ硕士研究生入学的最后一题是短文写作,根据国家教委公布的《全国硕士研究生入学考试英语》的规定,考生应能写不同类型的应用文,包括私人和公务信函、备忘录、摘要、报告等,还应能写一般描述性、叙述性、说明或议论性的文章。
短文写作时,考生应能:ﻫ1)做到语法、拼写、标点正确,用词恰当;ﻫ2)遵循文章的特定文体格式;ﻫ3)合理组织文章结构,使其内容统一、连贯;ﻫ 4)根据写作目的和特定读者,恰当选用语言。
ﻫﻫ英语短文写作要求考生在40分钟内完成不少于200词的英语短文,短文必须根据考试题目和提纲所规定的范围来写。
近年来作文的分数由15分提到了20分,更加突显了写作能力的重要性。
ﻫﻫ作为阅卷老师,评定短文写作的成绩,首先看内容是否切题,是否符合题意的要求,然后看语言表达是否清楚、连贯、正确,语言基本功是否扎实,根据内容、文字、句子和用词,采用通篇分档计分,计分标准如下:ﻫ20-17分:内容切题,包括提纲的全部要点;表达清楚,文字连贯;句式有变化,句子16-13分:内容切题,包括提纲的全部要点;结构和用词正确。
文章长度符合要求。
ﻫﻫ表达比较清楚,文字基本连贯;句式有一定变化,句子结构和用词无重大错误。
文章长度符合要求。
ﻫ12-10分:内容切题,基本包括提纲的要点;表达基本清楚;句子结构和用词有少量错误。
文章长度符合要求。
9-5分:内容基本切题,基本包括提纲的要点;语句可以理解,但有较多的句子结构和用词错误。
文章长度基本符合要求。
4-1分:基本按题写作,但只有少数句子可以理解。
ﻫ0分:文不切题,语句混乱,无法理解。
ﻫ此外,作文的字数也有规定,要求不少于200字,长度的具体计分标准分析:ﻫ 151-160词:扣1分ﻫﻫ141-150词:扣2.5分ﻫ131-140词:扣4分ﻫ 121-130词:扣6分111-120词:扣8分ﻫ101-110词:扣10分100词以下:扣12分ﻫ最后,向大家通报一下“差作文”的种种“劣迹表现”,请大家注意。
ﻫ1)不通顺,无段落,无结构,无明显主题;ﻫ 2)笑料多,出现很多基本语法错误,拼写错误;ﻫ3)不达意,词汇量很小,词不达意,缺乏英语表达能力;ﻫﻫ4)乱堆砌,不像一篇文章,仅是把一些不连贯的词语拼凑到一起。
附:参考样文大作文ﻫ第五档范文19分ﻫAs illustratedinthecartoon,each personsits in their own workroom. In front ofthem isa computer. Everyone looks at the screencarefully,and communicate withtheir colleagues throughthe net instead of talking faceto face.Theirwork placesare placedlike a net. And below the cartoon, thereisa topic which says: thenear and faramong the Internet.ﻫFromthecartoon, we can conclude that the cartoonistwantsto conveysuch amessage:with the popularity of computers, people from alloverthe world becomenearerbyusingthe internet to communicate with eachother. Meanwhile, people also becomefar away from their friends. All of usaccept the fact thatthedevelopment of theinternet brings lotsof conveniences to our daily life, for instance,we canbuy a book on th enet instead of goingtoa bookstore.Besides, we can communicate with our friendson the netwithoutgoing out of home. Butwe can't ignoretheother side of these: the timewe spendwith friendsor family becomes less. And wehardlysee them once in a week. It will make us feellonely ifwe continue touse the tool on thenet to talk with friends instead oftalkingwith them on thephone or going out with them.ﻫTo mybest understanding, weshoulduse the net tocommunicatewitheach other inaproper way.It is just a toolwhen we really need it toserve us. If we want to keepourfriendshipmore effectively, we should spend more time with them in ourreal life.Only inthis waycanwenot only makefull use of thecommunicationtool on the net butalso make our friendship stronger.评语:该文很好地完成了试题规定的任务,内容完整,既清楚描述了漫画内容又指出了其隐含的意思。
语言流畅,措辞准确,句型结构有变化,有效使用了连接手段,内容连贯,层次分明,文章易于理解,仅有个别语言错误,字数符合要求。
ﻫ第四档范文15分Asisvividly depicted in the drawing above, we can see clearly that some people areverynear by the computer whilesomepeople a remuchlong with eachotherinthe net world.ﻫWhatisconveyed in the pictureis most thought-provoking and worthdiscussing among people,especially the young people. Itis a mirror, reflecting t he relationshipsbetween thepeople are altering by theIn ternet.People'sopinions differ greatlyon thismatter.Some peoplebelievethat the Internet is very convenient for people who are li ving in alonger distance to keep connection with each other. Others argue that the Internet make thepeople livingin near areas meet very little. Stillothers hold that people'sfacingto face to communicateis redu cing toalowlevel.ﻫItstruck me that ifnothing isdoneto solvethe social phenomenon,itseffect will be soonshown,whichin evitably affects thedevelopment of theharmonious society.So we should regardthe trend rightly. We alsoshouldtake itinto our accounts strictly. We should use the Net more reasonably. On noaccount should we make the people longerby thecomputer.Only in this way can we have ag ood generation foreseen.And a moreharmonious society canbebuilt up.评语:文章较好地完成了试题规定的任务,内容比较完整,既描述了漫画又揭示了隐含的意思,使用了比较丰富的句型结构和词语,使用了一定的连接手段,语言基本通顺,文章结构完整,层次清晰,易于理解,但是有一定数量的语言错误。
ﻫ第三档范文11分As the picturevividly depictthat internet like a net connect differe ntpeoplein the world.You can communicatewith your friends. No matter where theylivein,the distance no longer an obstacle in our communication.The picture reflect a thought-provoking socialphenomenon that people inamountingnumbers use internetshopping, work,study and chatting with friends in order to meet each other faceand face. There are somewhat reasonable,but you weighing inmind,youcan find that distancebetween ourspirit longer than before.On theIntern et wecan notknoweach other very well, because some peopledon't use their realname, eventell lies on internet.On theconterary,if wemeet each otherface and face, it's betterforcommunication.ﻫInternetmakethe obstacle ofdistance vanished, benefit usa lot,we canchatingwith our friends who live in a city thatfar from us. However,weshouldtake that serious internetmake the distanceof ourspirit longer than before, internet is a double-edgesword.ﻫ评语:该文包含多数内容要点;语法结构与词汇基本能够满足任务要求;有一些严重语法与用词错误,但不影响理解;内容较连贯,层次较清晰。