高二英语作文高分教案(1)
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in one's opinion/viewhold the view that …
it is widely shared that …
3.clever
wise bright smart intelligent cute
改变句子结构,与众不同
1.唐山曾在二十世纪八十年代发生过一次大地震。
影响给分的因素之一:作文的卷面
漂亮的书写是写作得分的亮点
2.Which sentence do you think attracts the teachers?
1)The character of this gala is that it relates people’s lives
2)The most striking feature of this gala is its traditionally close link with ordinary people’s lives.
→_________________, Mr. Smith was watering
_________________.
使用强势句式,增强语句表现力
1.We were glad to see crops and vegetables growing well.
→_______we were to see crops and vegetables growing well!
影响给分的因素之二:文中所采用的语言材料
人靠衣装,文靠词装
A.词汇的选择灵活新颖,出奇制胜;
B.句型结构运用灵活多变
Practice
Find some similar words or phrases of the followings
1.good
perfect excellent outstanding pleasant wonderful favorable magnificent
3.I studied Chinese, English and Physics at school.
→______________________________include Chinese, English and Physics .
4.It was early in the morning. Mr. Smith was in his garden. He was watering flowers.
3.影响给分的因素之三:行文的流畅
上下贯通、一气呵成正确而巧妙地使用好连接词
1.表递进
and,then,also,besides,morever,what'smore furthermore,in addition,more than that...
2.表转折
but,however,although,though,in spite of,despite after all,on the contrary,on the other hand...
课题
英语写作高分策略
课时
共1课时
本节第1课时
选用教材
人教
知识模块
课型
新授
教学目标
使学生英语书面表达提高一个等次,从而提高高考总分.
重点பைடு நூலகம்
1.整洁的卷面2.丰富的词汇,句型3.行文的流畅
难点
丰富的词汇,句型
教学方法
及课前准备
在运用中掌握方法.
教学流程
多媒体辅助教学内容
1.Which composition feels more attractive, why?
4.A notice is saying ”Please Save Water” on the wall.
→On the wall______________________________________.
5.Though he is a child, he knows a lot.
→___________________________________.
3.表因果
because,since,therefore,so,hence,thus,consequently as a result/consequence,on account of...
2.你八月十五的来信我今天早晨收到了.
I received your letter which was written on August 15th this morning.
Your letter of August 15th reached/got to me this morning.
改变句子语序,实现句子形式多样化
3)Young people don’t want to watch TV ,so they pay attention to other forms of celebration.
4)Young people focus their attention on other forms of celebration instead of immersing themselves in TV.
2. Radio broadcasts didn’t begin until 1920.
→Itwas__________________________________________.
3.He never speaks about his own family.
→Never__________________________________________.
1.He got excited when he heard the news.
→___ the news, he got excited.
2.The girl went home, because she was hungry and thirsty.
→_________________, the girl went home.
A strong/big earthquake happened inTangshanin the1980s.
There was a strong earthquake inTangshanin the 1980s.
A terrible earthquake hit/struck Tang Shan in the 1980s.