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（英语）初三英语书面表达解析版汇编及解析一、英语书面表达1．“扬帆起航新学期，学姐学长提建议”。

你马上就要毕业了，在初中的学习和生活中你一定有很多收获，请给学弟学妹们提几点建议吧！要求：1. 内容完整，语言流畅，书写规范清晰。

2. 短文中不能出现正式姓名，校名。

100 词左右。

【答案】I'm going to graduate from junior high school. As your senior, I have some suggestions to the young.As old saying goes, "all work and no play makes Jack a dull boy." To begin with, you should arrange both your study and life properly.Moreover, you should get along well with others. To have more friends, not enemies.Last but not least, you could be active in school team work. Ability is as important as your study, you can also enjoy your colorful school life as wellI hope these suggestions could make your junior school-life more wonderful.【解析】【详解】这篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短语，为文章增色不少，如be going to，graduate from，to begin with，both…and，get along well with others，be active in，as important as，as well等。

而To begin with,/ Moreover,/ Last but not least,等短语的运用，既丰富了短文内容，使表达多样化，更使短文很有条理，是本文的亮点。

在学习中注意总结牢记一些固定句式及短语，写作时就可以适当引用，使文章表达更有逻辑性，也更富有条理。

【点睛】书面表达题既不是汉译英，也不是可任意发挥的作文。

它要求将所规定的材料内容经整理后展开思维，考查运用所学英语知识准确表达意思的能力。

所以，考生不能遗漏要点，要尽量使用自己熟悉的单词、短语和句式，尽可能使用高级词汇和较复杂的句式结构以便得到较高的分数。

2．书面表达每年的4月23日是世界读书日，这个纪念日的意义在于推动更多人去阅读。

假如你校将开展“读好书，促成长”活动，请你根据这项活动的主题，向全校同学发出倡议。

注意：1. 词数90左右。

短文的开头已为你写好，不计入总词数；2. 短文须包括所有要点，不要逐词翻译，可适当发挥，使短文连贯、通顺；3. 短文中不得出现真实的人名、校名等相关信息。

Dear classmates,Reading is very important in our daily life._______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ Let’s start reading now!【答案】Reading is very important in our daily life．First of all，reading will/can help us get knowledge from all kinds of books．It can also help to open up a whole new world to us．Second，reading will/can make us clever and happy．It is good for our study and it can help us grow up．Third，reading can help us think more and further and make our life more colourful．However，there is usually so much homework for us to do that we don't have enough time for reading．Moreover，some of us don't have a good habit of reading but often spend too much time watching TV and searching the Internet．In my opinion，our school can have a"Reading Week"once a term．Teachers should encourage students to borrow books from the library．We must spend more time reading some useful books．As a result，we can have a better future．Let's start reading now!【解析】亮点说明：这篇习作的层次清晰，内容饱满，表达流畅。

文中使用了非常好的短语，例如first of all，all kinds of books，help to do，be good for，more and further，so much，spend too much time doing，search the Internet，in my opinion，as a result等。

同时First of all，/ Second，/ Third等时间副词和However/ Moreover / As a result等结构副词的运用，既使文章的思路清晰、层次分明，还丰富了习作内容，使表达多样，是本文的最大亮点。

点睛：书面表达题既不是汉译英，也不是可任意发挥的作文。

它要求将所规定的材料内容经整理后展开思维，考查运用所学英语知识准确表达意思的能力。

所以，考生不能遗漏要点，要尽量使用自己熟悉的单词、短语和句式，尽可能使用高级词汇和较复杂的句式结构以便得到较高的分数。

3．书面表达初三的学习生活繁忙中有困惑、泪水，也有进步、喜悦。

请根据表格提示，写一篇题为“Our school life in Grade Nine”的短文，介绍九年级的学校生活，并提出希望和建议。

要求：1．所写内容必须包括以上表格提供的所有信息，并适当发挥：2．文章不少于90词，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数；3．语意通顺，意思连贯，条理清楚，书写规范；4．文中不得出现真实姓名、校名等信息。

Our school life in Grade NineIt is more than half a year since we became a Grade Nine student. Here is what our school life is like now.【答案】Our school life in Grade NineIt is more than half a year since we became a Grade Nine student. Here is what our school life is like now.At school, all of our teachers work very hard. Most of them are patient enough to help us with all kinds of problems, whether in our study or in our life. As a result, they won high respect from us. As for students, in class we listen to the teacher carefully and think actively. After class, we are busy doing our homework. Every student is making efforts to try to achieve our dreams.At weekends, we usually spend a lot of time doing our homework, too. So we can't afford time for our hobbies any more. I feel a bit stressed actually, so I try to spare some time to play basketball or turn on my favorite TV program to get relaxed.No pains, no gains. But the more carefully we plan our day, the more colorful our school life will be.【解析】亮点说明：这篇习作的层次清晰，内容饱满，表达流畅。

文中使用了非常好的短语，例如at school，work hard，most of，patient enough，help sb. with sth.，all kinds of problems，in our life，as a result，as for students，listen to，be busy doing，try to do，spend a lot of time doing，not any more，play basketball等。

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(英语)初三英语书面表达题20套(带答案)含解析

(英语)初三英语书面表达题20套(带答案)含解析

一、中考英语书面表达汇编1．（·江苏中考模拟）书面表达初三的学习生活繁忙中有困惑、泪水，也有进步、喜悦。

请根据表格提示，写一篇题为“Our school life in Grade Nine”的短文，介绍九年级的学校生活，并提出希望和建议。

要求：1．所写内容必须包括以上表格提供的所有信息，并适当发挥：2．文章不少于90词，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数；3．语意通顺，意思连贯，条理清楚，书写规范；4．文中不得出现真实姓名、校名等信息。

Our school life in Grade NineIt is more than half a year since we became a Grade Nine student. Here is what our school life is like now.【答案】Our school life in Grade NineIt is more than half a year since we became a Grade Nine student. Here is what our school life is like now.At school, all of our teachers work very hard. Most of them are patient enough to help us with all kinds of problems, whether in our study or in our life. As a result, they won high respect from us. As for students, in class we listen to the teacher carefully and think actively. After class, we are busy doing our homework. Every student is making efforts to try to achieve our dreams.At weekends, we usually spend a lot of time doing our homework, too. So we can't afford time for our hobbies any more. I feel a bit stressed actually, so I try to spare some time to play basketball or turn on my favorite TV program to get relaxed.No pains, no gains. But the more carefully we plan our day, the more colorful our school life will be.【解析】亮点说明：这篇习作的层次清晰，内容饱满，表达流畅。

初三英语书面表达解析版汇编

初三英语书面表达解析版汇编

初三英语书面表达解析版汇编一、英语书面表达1．你有没有因为没能好好管理时间而影响了学习的经历?请你写一篇文章谈谈这件事及你的看法。

内容包括：1.你没完成学习任务的经历（事情，原因及后果）；2.针对如何管理好时间给出几点建议。

作文要求：1.短文须包括所有提示内容，可适当发挥。

2.文中不得出现真实的人名、校名和地名。

3.词数80个左右（开头已给出，不计入总词数）。

Once, I couldn't make good use of time and it had a bad influence on mystudy.__________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________【答案】Once, I couldn't make good use of time and it had a bad influence on my study.I had an experience like this. Last weekend, my good friend, Jim taught me how to play a kind of computer game. It was interesting. So I spent more time on it. I forgot to do my homework in the end. My teachers and parents were angry with me. I was also upset.How to make good use of our time? I think we should make a weekday plan. We should write what we are going to do on the paper, mark the deadline of each thing clearly and put the paper up somewhere we can see it easily. It can help us to remember what we have to do next.【解析】【详解】这篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短语，为文章增色不少，如make good use of，last weekend，how to do，play a game，a kind of，spent more time on，forget to do，in the end，be angry with，be going to do，on the paper，put up等。

(英语)九年级上册英语书面表达解析版汇编及解析

(英语)九年级上册英语书面表达解析版汇编及解析

（英语）九年级上册英语书面表达解析版汇编及解析一、英语书面表达1．书面表达假定你是李华，最近你们班就低碳生活方式进行了讨论，你的英国朋友Peppa向你来信询问讨论情况。

请你用英语写封回信，简单介绍以下讨论结果：1．节水节电． 2．垃圾分类 3．少用纸巾，重拾手帕4．步行、骑自行车或公交出行、参考词汇：low carbon低碳；tissue纸巾词数：100词左右。

开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数。

Dear Peppa,Thank you for your last letter asking about our discussion on low-carbon lifestyle. Here is something about it．_______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ Best wishes,Yours,Li Hua【答案】Dear Peppa,Thank you for your last letter asking about our discussion on low-carbon lifestyle. Here is something about it．We can do a lot in our daily life to achieve the goal of low carbon life. First, we’d better turn off lights if possible and spend less time watching TV or surfing the Internet. Saving water also matters much. Besides, we should sort out the rubbish, hoping that we might recycle some, which will surely benefit us a great deal. In addition, we suggest using handkerchiefs instead of tissues so that we can prevent more trees from being cut down. More importantly, when we go out, walking, riding bikes or taking buses should be our first choice, which contributes to a cleaner world.Best wishes,Yours,Li Hua【解析】【分析】这是一篇给材料作文，向我的英国朋友Peppa写信，介绍我们班就低碳生活方式进行的讨论情况。

【英语】九年级上册英语英语书面表达汇编题20套(带答案)及解析

【英语】九年级上册英语英语书面表达汇编题20套(带答案)及解析

【英语】九年级上册英语英语书面表达汇编题20套(带答案)及解析一、中考英语书面表达汇编1．（·山东中考模拟）书面表达今天早上你目睹了一起事件（下图），你想以"Mother Stops Him"为题写一篇短文，向你校英语报社投稿。

短文内容如下：1. 描述亊件。

2. 发表你的想法。

要求：1.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

2.不得出现真实的人名、校名、地名等相关信息。

3. 100个词汇左右。

参考词汇：lift…up扶起，knock…down撞倒，trust信任Mother Stops Him_______________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________【答案】This morning, my mother took me to school. On the way, I saw a car knock an old man down and the car ran away. The old woman fell to the ground and could not move. I saw this situation and immediately went over to help the old man lift up, but my mother stopped me saying, "Don't lift him up, or he 'll say you hit him." But I think helping others is what we should do. That old woman will certainly appreciate me, so I trust that as long as everyone gives a little love, the world will become a better place.【解析】【详解】这是一篇看图作文，所给材料较为详细，逻辑清楚，我们要做的就是用正确的英语把这些内容表达出来。