看图作文写作技巧和注意事项：
技巧：
1.适当运用形容词和副词的修饰作用。但要注意不能“过”，不该用的时候不要用。
2.注意使用恰当的linking words and sentences
3.“学以致用”是写好
各类作文通用的方法。善于借用他山之石。把自己学到的新东西有意识地用到自己的写作当中，没有利用新的知识等于自己没有上高中。
4.模仿是提高写作水平的有效方法。
5.最后一段要写自己的感悟，根据自己的
写作水平可多写或者少写。
注意事项：
1.注意审题，确定时态，人称。确定故事发生的时间地点人物过程和结果。
2.审题后把需要用的好词，句式，需要使用的连接词连接句提
前写到草稿纸上备用。
3.故事人物故事发生过程和结果必须交代清楚。不能省略必要的细节。
4.从自身的写作能力出发定位自己作文。高分作文，合格作文。不能盲目求高。
5.注意动词的过去式
的拼写。
6.注意卷面整洁。
高分范文：
。。。。At that time all the people were boating very happily .All at once a girl fell into the water from the boat .Her parents screamed out the terrifying word ”Help!”Just at the moment , a young man ran straight the girl as fast as possible .He jumped into the water without thinking twice .He swam to the girl at great speed .He spent all his efforts pushing the girl to the bank of the lake. The parents burst into tears. The young man left before they could say thanks to him .The girl narrowly escaped.
Without the young man’s help , the girl would have died .I hope everyone can reach out hand when help is needed in our society.
王之琳
…..At that time , the wind calmer , the sun was shining. All at once , a little boy fell into the water .His parents were very worried .They screamed out the terrifying word !”.At that moment, a man was running in the direction of the lake at great speed .He saved the boy .The boy had a narrow escape .Soon afterwards , an ambulance arrived and took the boy to the hospital .The man disappeared into the sea of people.
I am happy that the boy can survive .The man is a very kind man and we should learn from him. 于杰
…. At that time a family was boating on the lake and enjoying the beautiful view ,their daughter standing on the edge of the boat. All at once the girl fell into the water ,struggling with terror, screaming out the terrifying word “Help!”Her parents was too shocked to know how to deal with it. Just at this moment , a young man ,without thinking twice ,jumped into the lake and swam in the direction of the girl and took her to the bank. Slowly the girl recovered herself .The crowds were more than happy to see she was saved. Cheers came out from the crowds as the parents thanked him for his kind act .
What the young man did really impressed me .What a brave man ! 董相男
