五年高考真题 专题短文改错
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2013-2017 近五年高考英语全国卷I 短文改错汇总(附答案)2013 年第一节短文改错(共10小题;每小题1分,满分10 分)假定英语课上老师要求同桌中间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。
文中共有10 处语言错误,每句中最多有两处,每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加:把缺词处叫个漏字符号(人),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线()划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意: 1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;2. 只允许修改10 处,多者(从第11 处起)不计分。
I hardly remember my grandmother. She used to holding me on her knees and sing old songs.I was only four when she passes away. She is just a distant memory for me now.I remember my grandfather very much. He was tall, with broad shoulder and a beard that turned from black toward gray over the years. He had a deep voice, which set himself apart from others in our small town, he was strong and powerful. In a fact, he even scared my classmates away during they came over to play or do homework with me. However, he was the gentlest man I have never known.2014 年第一节短文改错(共10 小题;每小题1分,满分10 分)假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。
2012——2016年短文改错Correction 1[2016·乙卷(全国Ⅰ)]My uncle is the owner of a restaurant close to that I live. Though not very big, but the restaurantis popular in our area. It is always crowded with customers at meal times. Some people even had towait outside. My uncle tells me that the key to his success is honest. Every day he makes sure that fresh vegetables or high quality oil are using for cooking. My uncle says that he never dreams becoming rich in the short period of time. Instead, he hopes that our business will grow steady. Correction 2[2016·甲卷(全国Ⅱ)]The summer holiday is coming. My classmates and I are talking about how to do during the holiday. We can chose between staying at home and take a trip. If we stay at home, it is comfortablebut there is no need to spend money. But in that case, we will learn little about world. If we go on atrip abroad, we can broaden your view and gain knowledges we cannot get from books. Some classmates suggest we can go to places of interest nearby. I thought that it is a good idea. It does not cost many, yet we can still learn a lot.Correction 3[2016·丙卷(全国Ⅲ)]The teenage year from 13 to 19 were the most difficult time for me. They were also the best and worse years in my life. At the first, I thought I knew everything and could make decisions by yourself. However, my parents didn't seem to think such. They always tell me what to do and how to do it. Atone time, I even felt my parents couldn't understand me so I hoped I could be freely from them. I showed them I was independent by wear strange clothes. Now I am leaving home to college. At last, I will be on my own, but I still want to have my parents to turn to whenever need help.Correction 4[2016·四川]It is Mother's Day today. Though it's a western festival, it's popular in China now.Mom has a full-time job, so she has to do most of the houseworks. She is a great mother. Both Dad or I planned to do something on Mother's Day. We get up early in the morning. Dad cleaned the house, and then went on shopping. When he came back, I found a bunch of flowers in her hand. I asked Mom to stay in the sitting room and I cooked in kitchen. The dishes what I cooked were Mom's favoritest. At dinner, we said to her, "Happy Mother's Day!" Mom was grateful and moving.Correction 5[2016·浙江]When I was a very young children, my father created a regular practice I remember well yearslate. Every time he arrived home at end of the day, we'd greet her at the door. He would ask who we was and pretend not to knowing us. Then he and my mother would have had a drink while she prepared dinner and they would talk about his day and hers. While they chat, my father would lift my sister and me up to sit in the top of the fridge. It was both excited and frightening to be up there! My sister and I thought he was so cool for putting us there.Correction6 [2015·新课标全国卷Ⅰ]When I was a child, I hoped to live in the city.I think I would be happy there.Now I am living ina city, but I miss my home in countryside.There the air is clean or the mountains are green.Unfortunately, on the development of industrialization, the environment has been polluted.Lotsof studies have been shown that global warming has already become a very seriously problem.Theairs we breathe in is getting dirtier and dirtier.Much rare animals are dying out.We must found ways to protect your environment.If we fail to do so, we'll live to regret it.Correction7 [2015·新课标全国卷Ⅱ]One day, little Tony went to a shopping center with his parent. It was very crowded.Tony saw a toy on a shop window. He liked it so very much that he quickly walked into theshop. After looks at the toy for some time, he turned around and found where his parents were missing. Tony was scared and begun to cry. A woman saw him crying and telling him to wait outside a shop.Five minutes later, Tony saw parents. Mom said, "How nice to see you again! Dad and I were terrible worried." Tony promised her that this would never happen again.Correction8 [2015·陕西]My soccer coach retired in last week. I wanted to do anything special for him at his retirement party. My mum makes the better biscuits in the world, so I decide to ask her for help. Mum taught me some basic step of baking. I insisted on doing most of the baking myself. I thought the biscuits were really well. My only mistake was that I dropped some on the floor after I was packing them up.At a party, my coach, with a biscuit in his mouth, asked surprisingly who made them and joked,"I might have to retire again next year just get some more of these biscuits."My favorite picture at the party is of my coach and me enjoy the biscuits with happy laughter! Correction9 [2015·四川]Hi, Janice,It's been a month since I came to this new school and I really want share with you some of theproblems I have been experiencing.As I tell you last time, I made three new friend here. We hang out together during lunch and after school. We've been spending a lot of time sing in karaoke bars. It's been three Saturdays now and it really costs me many. And I started to see this as a time-wasting activity! In fact, I don't like to go anymore, so I'm afraid I'll lose their friendship. How do you think I should do? If you are me, wouldyou talk to him?Please help with me and give me some advice.Grace Correction10 [2015·浙江]My old classroom was interesting because three side of the classroom were made from glass. I enjoyed sit close to the windows and looking at the view. On the left-hand side of the class, I couldeasy see the football field. In the mornings, it was full of students exercising. The view from the backof the classroom is also splendid. Close to the school there was a beautiful park with many trees around them. Farther in the distance, I could not enjoy the view of snowy mountains. On the right sideof the class was the road. I was always interested to see the drivers in hurry in the morning. The position of the classroom with its view made me felt like I was dreaming. If I was only a child when I studied in that classroom, I will never forget it.Correction11 [2014·新课标全国卷Ⅰ]Nearly five years before, and with the help by our father, my sister and I planted some cherry tomatoes (圣女果) in our back garden. Since then —for all these year —we had been allowing tomatoes to self-seed where they please. As result, the plants are growing somewhere. The fruits are small in size, but juicy and taste. There are so much that we often share them with our neighbors. Although we allow tomato plants to grow in the same place year after year, but we have never had any disease or insect attack problems. We are growing wonderfully tomatoes at no cost!新课标全国卷Ⅱ]Correction12 [2014·My dream school starts at 8:30 a.m. and ends at 3:30 p.m. They are three lessons in the morning and two in the afternoon. We didn't need to do so many homework. Therefore, we have more timewith after-school activities. For example, we can do reading for one and a half hour and play sportsfor one hour every day.My dream school look like a big garden. There are all kinds of the flowers and trees around theclassroom buildings. We can lie on the grass for a rest, or sat by the lake listening music. The teachers here are kind and helpfully. They are not only our teachers but also our friends.浙江]Correction13 [2014·I was taking a train to London's Victoria Station. I had noticed that the carriage was noise andfilled with people.Before long, a train inspector comes to check our tickets. A passenger realized he couldn't findhis ticket but became quite upset. Then everyone in the carriage began searching the ticket, which was eventually found under a seat several rows from his owner. The person who found a ticket smiled with pleasure at his success.No one in the carriage had previous spoken to or even noticed the ticket-owner before. Yet they had so quickly offered the strangers their help. If we could show concern to others on need, the world would be a better place to live in.陕西]Correction14 [2014·My father took me out camping for the first time when I was seven. He wanted teach me about animals,insects and trees. My uncles all come along with bows and arrows for hunting.One evening at sunset,we sat by the fire,have our barbecue.Just then a bird was flying over us.My uncles immediate jumped up and shot their arrows on the bird. Neither of the arrows hit the target.Suddenly the arrows was flying down at us from the sky — they were looked like rain! We ran to escape but fortunately no one was injured.That day I didn't learn much about animals, insects or trees, but I learnt a impressive lesson about gravity!Correction15 [2014·四川]Hello, boys and girls! Today,I am going to talk with what you should do when a fire alarm go off. If you hear the alarm, stand in line at the door and wait your teacher to lead you outside. Stayclose to your teacher and classmate. Don't panic or get out of line, and trying to remain quiet and calmly. Soon the firefighters will come and put out a fire. If it's a false alarm and there is no fire, your teacher will lead us back to the classroom. If you notice that when someone is missing and hurt, tell your teacher immediately.Correction 16 [2014·辽宁]Dear Jeremy and Alice,Although we've been delighted to have you as neighbors, we're hoping to settle something that bothers to us. In a word, your dog — Cleo.We've called several time about Cleo's early morning barking. It is difficult to understanding why she barks every minute she's outside. The early morning barking have been disturbing us as we are often up all night with the baby. Beside, Cleo tends to bark a average of six hours a day. This morning she starts barking even before 5 o'clock. That is too much for us, considering how closely the houses are.We appreciate our apologies and goodwill, but we hope that you can figure a good way of settling the matter.Sincerely,Jack and Rose 新课标全国卷Ⅰ]Correction17 [2013·I hardly remember my grandmother. She used to holding me on her knees and sing old songs. I was only four when she passes away. She is just a distant memory for me now.I remember my grandfather very much. He was tall, with broad shoulder and a beard that turned from black toward gray over the years. He had a deep voice, which set himself apart from others inour small town, he was strong and powerful. In a fact, he even scared my classmates away during they came over to play or do homework with me. However, he was the gentlest man I have never known. Correction18 [2013·新课标全国卷Ⅱ]The book I'm reading of talks about afternoon tea in Britain. It is said to have started in the early 1800's. Have tea in the late afternoon provides a bridge between lunch and dinner, that might not be served until 8 o'clock at night. This custom soon becomes another meal of day. Interesting, it had a connection by the British porcelain (瓷器) industry. Tea in China was traditionally drank from cups without handles. When tea got popular in Britain, there was a crying need for good cup with handlesto suit British habits. This made for the grow in the porcelain industry.陕西]Correction19 [2013·My grandfather and I enjoy fishing.One Sunday morning we go fishing at a lake. We took ours fishing poles and headed for the lake. As soon as we arrived, so we dropped the lines into the water. Before waiting for about half an hour, I was beginning to get impatiently. I wanted to give up, and my grandfather told me to wait a littlelonger. Finally, there were a sudden pull at the pole and fish was caught. Within the next few minute,my grandfather also caught a fish.Felt hungry, we built a fire by the lake and barbecued the fish. It was delicious.Correction20 [2013·四川]Today we had a chemistry test. I found the test difficulty, but I tried hardly to do it. Suddenly Mary, my best friend, asking me to let her to copy my answers. After think for some time, I let hercopy my answers. But after the test, all of us were called to the teacher's office. The teacher was angry because we had same answers in the tests. We were warned not to cheat again so she would need to see our parents. I was very upset. I didn't cheat. I was just helping a friend. Why does she punish me? Correction 21 [2013·辽宁]Mr.Johnson is a hardworking teacher. Every day,he spends too much time with his work.With little sleep and hardly any break, so he works from morning till night. Hard work have made him veryill. "He has ruined his healthy. We are worried about him." That is which other teachers say. Yesterday afternoon, I paid visit to Mr. Johnson.I was eager to see him,but outside her room I stopped. I had to calm myself down.Quietly I step into the room. I saw him lying in bed, looking at some of the picturewe had taken together. I understood that he missed us just as many as we missed him.Correction 22 [2013·浙江]Dear Diary,Here I am in the middle of a city, 350 miles far away from our farmhouse. Do you want to know why we move last week?Dad lost his job, and as Mom explained,"He was lucky to find other one."His new job meant I had to say goodbye to my classmate, my school or just everything else I love inthe world.To make matters bad, now I have to share a room with my younger sister, Maggie.Tomorrow is first day of school.I am awfully tiring, but I know I'll never fall sleep.Good nightand remember, you, dear diary, is my only souvenir from my past life and my only friend.Yours,Rosemary Correction 23 [2012·新课标全国]I learned early in life that I had to be more patient and little aggressive. From the time I was about four until I was about six, I destroyed each of my toy. I was happy when the toys worked, but when things did wrong, I got angry and broke it. For a while parents bought me new toys. But beforelong they began to see which was happening. When I tear apart my fifth birthday toy train, my father said, "That's it. No more toys to you." My punishment lasted a year. Meanwhile, I found out that with more patience I must make my toys to last. My attitude changed from then on.Correction 24 [2012·陕西]My father and I stayed at the South Lake Hotel for a week when we visit Beijing last month.It isin the downtown area, but it is easy to go to anywhere from the hotel by public transport.We lived in a comfortably double-room with a big bath.What I liked best were the free high-speed Internet connection in the room.I checked my email messages every day.I also shared for my friends many photos taking in Beijing.The food was wonderful with reasonable prices, and we enjoyed several local dish.It is such great hotel that I would recommend it to any friend of me who is going to Beijing. Correction 25 [2012·辽宁]Dear Diana,Thank you for the lovely day we have with you. It was so kind for you to let us bring Anne's friend, Gina. Unfortunate, the only problem was the journey home. There had been a terrible accidenton the highway and, for a result, there was a long line of traffic for at least six mile. In the end, wedrove to a service station and waited there unless the road was clear. In the car park here Gina nearly got knocked over as car drove out far too quickly from behind a lorry. They finally dropped Gina offat her parents' and made our own way to home.Much love,Fiona2012——2016年短文改错答案Correction 1。
浙江高考英语5年改错真题及答案(2009-2013)(2009年)One rainy day while I was walking home with one of my friend, a truck came to a stop besides us. The driver put the window down and offered us a umbrella because he found we were wet through. I stood there and couldn’t believe in that a complete stranger is so thoughtful. The man insisted, so I grateful accepted the offer, thanked him and watched the truck disappear down the road. This man might need the umbrella himself, and he preferred to give it to everyone else. It was a lesson to us that it was possible give without expect anything in return.【答案】friend-friends【解析】考查名词数。
one of 后受one of影响必须用名词复数形式,应改为friends.【答案】besides----beside【解析】考查介词用法。
按句意是在商店旁边,用beside.【答案】a----an【解析】考查冠词用法。
由umbrella 的发音可知,元音前应使用冠词an .【答案】去掉believe后的in【解析】考查动词用法。
believe 为及物动词。
【答案】is----was【解析】考查动词时态。
近五年高考英语真题短文改错专练第二部分写作第一节短文改错(共10小题;每小题1分,满分10分)假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。
文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。
每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;2. 只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
(2020年全国卷I)Today I tried cooking a simply dish myself. I like eating frying tomatoes with eggs, and I thought it must to be easy to cook. My mom told me how to preparing it. First I cut the tomatoes into pieces but put them aside. Next I broke the eggs into a bowl and beat them quickly with chopstick. After that I poured oil into a pan and turned off the stove,I waited patiently unless the oil was hot. Then I put the tomatoes and the beaten eggs into pan together. "Not that way,"my mom tried to stop us but failed. She was right. It didn’t tum out as I had wished.(2019年全国卷I)During my last winter holiday, I went to countryside with my father to visit my grandparents. I find a big change there. The first time I went there, they were living in a small house with dogs, ducks, and anotheranimals. Last winter when I went here again, they had a big separate house to raise dozens of chicken. They also had a small pond which they raised fish. My grandpa said last summer they earned quite a lot by sell the fish.I felt happily that their life had improved. At the end of our trip, I told my father that I planned to return for every two years, but he agreed. (2018年全国卷I)I became interesting in playing football thanks to a small accident. One afternoon where I was in primary school, I was walking by the school playground. Suddenly football feel just in front of me but almost hit me. I stopped the ball and kicked it hardly back to the playground. To everyone`s surprising, the ball went into the net. All the football player on the playground cheered loudly, say that I had a talent for football. From now on, I started to play my football with classmates after school. I am a good player now.(2017年全国卷I)In the summer holiday following my eighteen birthday, I took driving lessons. I still remember how hard first day was. Before getting into the car, I thought I had learned the instructor’s orders, so once I started the car, my mind goes blank. I forgot what he had said to me altogether. The instructor kept repeating the word, “Speed up!” “Slowdown!” “Turning left!” I was so much nervous that I could hardly tell which direction was left. A few minutes late, the instructor asked me to stop the car. It was a relief and I came to a suddenly stop just in the middle on the road.(2016年全国卷I)My uncle is the owner of a restaurant close to that 1 live .Though not very big ,but the restaurant is popular in our area .It is always crowded with customers at meal times .Some people even had to wait outside My uncle tells me that the key to his success is honest. Every day he makes sure that fresh vegetables or high quality oil are using for cooking. My uncle says that he never dreams becoming rich in the short period of time. Instead, he hopes that our business will grow steady.参考答案2020Today I tried cooking a s s i imply mple dish myself. I like eating frying friedtomatoes with eggs, and I thought it must to be easy to cook. My mom told me how topreparing prepare it. First I cut the tomatoes into pieces but andput them aside. Next I broke the eggs into a bowl and beat them quickly with chopstick chopsticks . After that I poured oil into a pan and turned off onthe stove, I waited patientlyunless until/till the oil was hot. Then I put the tomatoes and the beaten eggs into the∧ pan together. “Not that way,” my mom tried to stop us me but failed. She was right. It didn't tum out as I had wished.2019I became in playing football thanks to a small accident. One afternoonI was in primary school, I was walking by the school playground. Suddenly football fell just in front of me almost hit me. I stopped the ball and kicked itback to the playground. To everyone’s , the ball went into the net. All the football on the playground cheered loudly, that I had a talent for football. From on, I started to play football with classmates after school. I am a good player now.2018During my last winter holiday, I went to ∧countryside with my father to visitinteresting int erestedwhere when a ∧but andhardly hard surprising surprise player playerssay sayingnow then mythe my grandparents. I find a big change there. The first time I went there, they werefound living in a small house with dogs, ducks, and another animals. Last winter whenother I went here again, they had a big separate house to raise dozens of chicken. They alsothere chickenshad a small pond ∧which they raised fish. My grandpa said last summer they earnedin 或wherequite a lot by sell the fish. I felt happily that their life had improved. At the end ofselling happy our trip, I told my father that I planned to return for every two years, buthe agreed.and2017In the summer holiday following my eighteen eighteenthbirthday, I took driving lessons. I still remember how hard the/myfirst day was. Before getting into the car, I thought I had learned the instructor’s orders, but so /yet once I started the car, my mind goes wentblank. I forgot what he had said to me altogether. The instructor kept repeating thew word ords , “Speed up!” “Slow down!” “Turning Turnleft!” I was so much nervous that I could hardly tell which direction was left. A few minutes late later, the instructor asked me to stop the car. It was a relief and I came to a suddenly sudden stop just in the middle on ofthe road.20161. that →where2. but 去掉3. had →have4. honest → honesty5. or → and6. using →used7. becoming 前加of8. the →a9. our → his 10. stead →steadily。
短文改错2018年Correction 1 2018全国卷I,10分During my last winter holiday, I went to countryside with my father to visit my grandparents. I find a big change there. The first time I went there, they were living in a small house with dogs, ducks, and another animals. Last winter when I went here again, they had a big separate house to raise dozens of chicken. They also had a small pond which they raised fish. My grandpa said last summer they earned quite a lot by sell the fish. I felt happily that their life had improved. At the end of our trip, I told my father that I planned to return for every two years, but he agreed.Correction 2 2018全国卷II,10分When I was little, Friday’s night was our family game night. After supper, we would play card games of all sort in the sitting room. As the kid, I loved to watch cartoons, but no matter how many times I asked to watching them, my parents would not to let me. They would say to us that playing card games would help my brain. Still I unwilling to play the game for them sometimes. I didn’t realize how right my parents are until I entered high school. The games my parents taught me where I was a child turned out to be very useful later in my life.Correction 3 2018全国卷III,10分It was Monday morning, and the writing class had just begin. Everyone was silent, wait to see who would be called upon to read his and her paragraph aloud. Some of us were confident and eager take part in the class activity; others were nervous and anxious. I had done myself homework, but I was shy. I was afraid that to speak in front of a larger group of people. At that moment, I remembered that my father once said, "The classroom is a place for learning and that include learning from textbooks, and mistake as well." Immediate, I raised my hand.2017年Correction 1 2017全国卷Ⅰ,10分In the summer holiday following my eighteen birthday, I took driving lessons. I still remember how hard first day was. Before getting into the car, I thought I had learned the instructor s orders, so once I started the car, my mind goes blank. I forgot what he had said to me altogether. The instructor kept repeating the word, "Speed up!" "Slow down!" "Turning left!" I was so much nervous that I could hardly tell which direction was left. A few minutes late, the instructor asked me to stop the car.It was a relief and I came to a suddenly stop just in the middle on the road.Correction 2 2017全国卷Ⅱ,10分Mr. and Mrs. Zhang all work in our school. They live far from the school, and it takes them about a hour and a half to go to work every day. In their spare time, they are interesting in planting vegetables in their garden, that is on the rooftop of their house. They often get up earlier and water the vegetables together. They have also bought for some gardening tools. Beside, they often get some useful informations from the Internet. When summer came, they will invite their students pick the fresh vegetables!Correction 3 2017全国卷Ⅲ,10分When I look at this picture of myself, I realize of how fast time flies. I had grown not only physically, and also mentally in the past few years. About one month after this photo was took, I entered mysecond year of high school and become a new member of the school music club. Around me in picture are the things they were very important in my life at that time: car magazines and musical instruments.I enjoyed studying difference kinds of cars and planes, playing pop music, and collecting the late music albums. This picture often brings back to me many happy memories of your high school days.2012—2016年Correction 1[2016·乙卷(全国Ⅰ)]My uncle is the owner of a restaurant close to that I live. Though not very big, but the restaurant is popular in our area. It is always crowded with customers at meal times. Some people even had to wait outside. My uncle tells me that the key to his success is honest. Every day he makes sure that fresh vegetables or high quality oil are using for cooking. My uncle says that he never dreams becoming rich in the short period of time. Instead, he hopes that our business will grow steady. Correction 2[2016·甲卷(全国Ⅱ)]The summer holiday is coming. My classmates and I are talking about how to do during the holiday. We can chose between staying at home and take a trip. If we stay at home, it is comfortable but there is no need to spend money. But in that case, we will learn little about world. If we go on a trip abroad, we can broaden your view and gain knowledges we cannot get from books. Some classmates suggest we can go to places of interest nearby. I thought that it is a good idea. It does not cost many, yet we can still learn a lot.Correction 3[2016·丙卷(全国Ⅲ)]The teenage year from 13 to 19 were the most difficult time for me. They were also the best and worse years in my life. At the first, I thought I knew everything and could make decisions by yourself. However, my parents didn't seem to think such. They always tell me what to do and how to do it. At one time, I even felt my parents couldn't understand me so I hoped I could be freely from them. I showed them I was independent by wear strange clothes. Now I am leaving home to college. At last, I will be on my own, but I still want to have my parents to turn to whenever need help.Correction 4[2016·四川]It is Mother's Day today. Though it's a western festival, it's popular in China now.Mom has a full-time job, so she has to do most of the houseworks. She is a great mother. Both Dad or I planned to do something on Mother's Day. We get up early in the morning. Dad cleaned the house, and then went on shopping. When he came back, I found a bunch of flowers in her hand. I asked Mom to stay in the sitting room and I cooked in kitchen. The dishes what I cooked were Mom's favoritest. At dinner, we said to her, "Happy Mother's Day!" Mom was grateful and moving. Correction 5[2016·浙江]When I was a very young children, my father created a regular practice I remember well years late. Every time he arrived home at end of the day, we'd greet her at the door. He would ask who we was and pretend not to knowing us. Then he and my mother would have had a drink while she prepared dinner and they would talk about his day and hers. While they chat, my father would lift my sister and me up to sit in the top of the fridge. It was both excited and frightening to be up there! My sister and I thought he was so cool for putting us there.Correction6 [2015·新课标全国卷Ⅰ]When I was a child, I hoped to live in the city.I think I would be happy there.Now I am living in a city, but I miss my home in countryside.There the air is clean or the mountains are green.Unfortunately, on the development of industrialization, the environment has been polluted.Lots of studies have been shown that global warming has already become a very seriously problem.Theairs we breathe in is getting dirtier and dirtier.Much rare animals are dying out.We must found ways to protect your environment.If we fail to do so, we'll live to regret it.Correction7 [2015·新课标全国卷Ⅱ]One day, little Tony went to a shopping center with his parent. It was very crowded.Tony saw a toy on a shop window. He liked it so very much that he quickly walked into the shop. After looks at the toy for some time, he turned around and found where his parents were missing. Tony was scared and begun to cry. A woman saw him crying and telling him to wait outside a shop. Five minutes later, Tony saw parents. Mom said, "How nice to see you again! Dad and I were terrible worried." Tony promised her that this would never happen again.Correction8 [2015·陕西]My soccer coach retired in last week. I wanted to do anything special for him at his retirement party. My mum makes the better biscuits in the world, so I decide to ask her for help. Mum taught me some basic step of baking. I insisted on doing most of the baking myself. I thought the biscuits were really well. My only mistake was that I dropped some on the floor after I was packing them up.At a party, my coach, with a biscuit in his mouth, asked surprisingly who made them and joked, "I might have to retire again next year just get some more of these biscuits."My favorite picture at the party is of my coach and me enjoy the biscuits with happy laughter! Correction9 [2015·四川]Hi, Janice,It's been a month since I came to this new school and I really want share with you some of the problems I have been experiencing.As I tell you last time, I made three new friend here. We hang out together during lunch and after school. We've been spending a lot of time sing in karaoke bars. It's been three Saturdays now and it really costs me many. And I started to see this as a time-wasting activity! In fact, I don't like to go anymore, so I'm afraid I'll lose their friendship. How do you think I should do? If you are me, would you talk to him?Please help with me and give me some advice.Grace Correction10 [2015·浙江]My old classroom was interesting because three side of the classroom were made from glass. I enjoyed sit close to the windows and looking at the view. On the left-hand side of the class, I could easy see the football field. In the mornings, it was full of students exercising. The view from the back of the classroom is also splendid. Close to the school there was a beautiful park with many trees around them. Farther in the distance, I could not enjoy the view of snowy mountains. On the right side of the class was the road. I was always interested to see the drivers in hurry in the morning. The position of the classroom with its view made me felt like I was dreaming. If I was only a child when I studied in that classroom, I will never forget it.Correction11 [2014·新课标全国卷Ⅰ]Nearly five years before, and with the help by our father, my sister and I planted some cherry tomatoes (圣女果) in our back garden. Since then —for all these year —we had been allowing tomatoes to self-seed where they please. As result, the plants are growing somewhere. The fruits are small in size, but juicy and taste. There are so much that we often share them with our neighbors. Although we allow tomato plants to grow in the same place year after year, but we have never had any disease or insect attack problems. We are growing wonderfully tomatoes at no cost!Correction12 [2014·新课标全国卷Ⅱ]My dream school starts at 8:30 a.m. and ends at 3:30 p.m. They are three lessons in the morning and two in the afternoon. We didn't need to do so many homework. Therefore, we have more time with after-school activities. For example, we can do reading for one and a half hour and play sports for one hour every day.My dream school look like a big garden. There are all kinds of the flowers and trees around the classroom buildings. We can lie on the grass for a rest, or sat by the lake listening music. The teachers here are kind and helpfully. They are not only our teachers but also our friends.Correction13 [2014·浙江]I was taking a train to London's Victoria Station. I had noticed that the carriage was noise and filled with people.Before long, a train inspector comes to check our tickets. A passenger realized he couldn't find his ticket but became quite upset. Then everyone in the carriage began searching the ticket, which was eventually found under a seat several rows from his owner. The person who found a ticket smiled with pleasure at his success.No one in the carriage had previous spoken to or even noticed the ticket-owner before. Yet they had so quickly offered the strangers their help. If we could show concern to others on need, the world would be a better place to live in.Correction14 [2014·陕西]My father took me out camping for the first time when I was seven. He wanted teach me about animals,insects and trees. My uncles all come along with bows and arrows for hunting.One evening at sunset,we sat by the fire,have our barbecue.Just then a bird was flying over us.My uncles immediate jumped up and shot their arrows on the bird. Neither of the arrows hit the target.Suddenly the arrows was flying down at us from the sky — they were looked like rain! We ran to escape but fortunately no one was injured.That day I didn't learn much about animals, insects or trees, but I learnt a impressive lesson about gravity!Correction15 [2014·四川]Hello, boys and girls! Today,I am going to talk with what you should do when a fire alarm go off. If you hear the alarm, stand in line at the door and wait your teacher to lead you outside. Stay close to your teacher and classmate. Don't panic or get out of line, and trying to remain quiet and calmly. Soon the firefighters will come and put out a fire. If it's a false alarm and there is no fire, your teacher will lead us back to the classroom. If you notice that when someone is missing and hurt, tell your teacher immediately.Correction 16 [2014·辽宁]Dear Jeremy and Alice,Although we've been delighted to have you as neighbors, we're hoping to settle something that bothers to us. In a word, your dog — Cleo.We've called several time about Cleo's early morning barking. It is difficult to understanding why she barks every minute she's outside. The early morning barking have been disturbing us as we are often up all night with the baby. Beside, Cleo tends to bark a average of six hours a day. This morning she starts barking even before 5 o'clock. That is too much for us, considering how closely the houses are.We appreciate our apologies and goodwill, but we hope that you can figure a good way ofsettling the matter.Sincerely,Jack and Rose Correction17 [2013·新课标全国卷Ⅰ]I hardly remember my grandmother. She used to holding me on her knees and sing old songs. I was only four when she passes away. She is just a distant memory for me now.I remember my grandfather very much. He was tall, with broad shoulder and a beard that turned from black toward gray over the years. He had a deep voice, which set himself apart from others in our small town, he was strong and powerful. In a fact, he even scared my classmates away during they came over to play or do homework with me. However, he was the gentlest man I have never known. Correction18 [2013·新课标全国卷Ⅱ]The book I'm reading of talks about afternoon tea in Britain. It is said to have started in the early 1800's. Have tea in the late afternoon provides a bridge between lunch and dinner, that might not be served until 8 o'clock at night. This custom soon becomes another meal of day. Interesting, it had a connection by the British porcelain (瓷器) industry. Tea in China was traditionally drank from cups without handles. When tea got popular in Britain, there was a crying need for good cup with handles to suit British habits. This made for the grow in the porcelain industry.Correction19 [2013·陕西]My grandfather and I enjoy fishing.One Sunday morning we go fishing at a lake. We took ours fishing poles and headed for the lake. As soon as we arrived, so we dropped the lines into the water. Before waiting for about half an hour, I was beginning to get impatiently. I wanted to give up, and my grandfather told me to wait a little longer. Finally, there were a sudden pull at the pole and fish was caught. Within the next few minute, my grandfather also caught a fish.Felt hungry, we built a fire by the lake and barbecued the fish. It was delicious.Correction20 [2013·四川]Today we had a chemistry test. I found the test difficulty, but I tried hardly to do it. Suddenly Mary, my best friend, asking me to let her to copy my answers. After think for some time, I let her copy my answers. But after the test, all of us were called to the teacher's office. The teacher was angry because we had same answers in the tests. We were warned not to cheat again so she would need to see our parents. I was very upset. I didn't cheat. I was just helping a friend. Why does she punish me? Correction 21 [2013·辽宁]Mr.Johnson is a hardworking teacher. Every day,he spends too much time with his work.With little sleep and hardly any break, so he works from morning till night. Hard work have made him very ill. "He has ruined his healthy. We are worried about him." That is which other teachers say. Yesterday afternoon, I paid visit to Mr. Johnson.I was eager to see him,but outside her room I stopped. I had to calm myself down.Quietly I step into the room. I saw him lying in bed, looking at some of the picture we had taken together. I understood that he missed us just as many as we missed him.Correction 22 [2013·浙江]Dear Diary,Here I am in the middle of a city, 350 miles far away from our farmhouse. Do you want to know why we move last week?Dad lost his job, and as Mom explained,"He was lucky to find other one." His new job meant I had to say goodbye to my classmate, my school or just everything else I love in the world.To make matters bad, now I have to share a room with my younger sister,Maggie.Tomorrow is first day of school.I am awfully tiring, but I know I'll never fall sleep.Good night and remember, you, dear diary, is my only souvenir from my past life and my only friend.Yours,Rosemary Correction 23 [2012·新课标全国]I learned early in life that I had to be more patient and little aggressive. From the time I was about four until I was about six, I destroyed each of my toy. I was happy when the toys worked, but when things did wrong, I got angry and broke it. For a while parents bought me new toys. But before long they began to see which was happening. When I tear apart my fifth birthday toy train, my father said, "That's it. No more toys to you." My punishment lasted a year. Meanwhile, I found out that with more patience I must make my toys to last. My attitude changed from then on.Correction 24 [2012·陕西]My father and I stayed at the South Lake Hotel for a week when we visit Beijing last month.It is in the downtown area, but it is easy to go to anywhere from the hotel by public transport.We lived in a comfortably double-room with a big bath.What I liked best were the free high-speed Internet connection in the room.I checked my email messages every day.I also shared for my friends many photos taking in Beijing.The food was wonderful with reasonable prices, and we enjoyed several local dish.It is such great hotel that I would recommend it to any friend of me who is going to Beijing. Correction 25 [2012·辽宁]Dear Diana,Thank you for the lovely day we have with you. It was so kind for you to let us bring Anne's friend, Gina. Unfortunate, the only problem was the journey home. There had been a terrible accident on the highway and, for a result, there was a long line of traffic for at least six mile. In the end, we drove to a service station and waited there unless the road was clear. In the car park here Gina nearly got knocked over as car drove out far too quickly from behind a lorry. They finally dropped Gina off at her parents' and made our own way to home.Much love,Fiona短文改错答案2018年Correction 1①考查冠词。
考点五:短文改错—(2019—2023)五年高考英语真题专项汇编【老高考版】1.【2023年全国甲卷】假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。
文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。
每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;2. 只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
I used to afraid of insects, but last Friday's biology class make a big change in me. In that class, Miss Zhao, our biology teacher, showed we insects on stamps. The bees, butterfly and many other insects looked lovely and beautifully on the stamps. Miss Zhao told us the names of the insects or described their living habits. She even played some recordings of their singing, what was fun. Now, I've come to love those of small living things. In the evening, when I take the walk in the school garden, the singing of insects become more meaningful to me.2.【2023年全国乙卷】假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。
2013-2017近五年高考英语全国卷I短文改错汇总(附答案)2013年第一节短文改错(共10小题;每小题1分,满分10分)假定英语课上老师要求同桌中间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。
文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处,每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加:把缺词处叫个漏字符号(∧)删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11nshepassesaway.Sheisjustadistantmemoryformenow.2014年10分)10处错删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Nearlyfiveyearsbefore,andwiththehelpbyourfather,mysisterandIplantedsomecherrytomatoes(圣女果)inourbackgarden.Sincethen–foralltheseyear–wehadbeenallowingtomatoestoself-seedwheretheyplease.Asresult,theplantsaregrowingsomewhere.Thefruitsaresmallinsize,butjuicyandtaste.Therearesomuchthatweoftensharethemwithourneighbors.Althoughweall owtomatoplantstogrowinthesameplaceyearafteryear,butwehaveneverhadanydiseaseorinsectattackproblems .Wearegrowingwonderfullytomatoesatnocost!2015年第一节短文改错(共10小题;每小题1分,满分10分)假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。
短文改错是一种综合技能,主要考查词汇和语法知识,对考生理解和记忆的准确度有较高的要求。
在历年真题中,短文改错考点基本上是比较固定的。
一、熟悉设错方式:多词、少词、错词。
多词现象:大多出现在冠词、介词、助动词、连词、语义重复及行文逻辑等方面。
少词现象:主要出现在冠词、介词、副词、助动词、不定式符号to、连词等。
错词现象:主要在冠词、介词、名词单复数、动词时态、非谓语动词、主谓一致、代词、连词、词形。
二、对全文的宏观把握学生应把改错内容当作一篇小短文来理解,对上下文全面的了解。
在理解篇章的基础上逐句审读,分析判断,上下兼顾,把拿的准的题先做完,这样可以缩小范围,且有助于对全文的进一步理解。
三、具体常见错误(干货来喽~~~)1、查看文中句子时态是否一致。
看一篇文章,要有一种大局观,看看上下文的时态是否一致。
例如:When I was a child, I hoped to live in the city. I think I would be happy there.此题的think应改为thought。
短文第一句使用了过去时态,而第二句承接第一句的时间,故原文中的动词应用think的过去形式thought。
2015 全国卷I2、查看主谓是否一致。
例如:Though it may appear simple, it required a lot of ideas and efforts.此题的required应改为requires。
根据may可知,本句为一般现在时,且主语为it,故谓语动词应用第三人称单数形式。
2019 全国卷Ⅲ3、查指代是否一致。
在短文改错中常会出现指代错误,you与your,it’s与its,it与they或them,one与ones,宾格(如me)与反身代词(如myself)等。
例如:In the cafe, customers will enjoy yourselves in the historical environment that is created for them.yourselves应改为themselves。
1.Three friends and I was driving on a highway. While we were going at least 50 milesper hour, we passed over a car. It had broken down, stopped on the side of the road. My friend slows down, and pulled behind the other car. He got out of the car immediate and before I knew it he was helping the other person push the car down the road to a spot where wasn ’ t so close to the passing cars. From the way they were pushing the car, it looked as if my friend was pushing them all by himself. I thought my friend help a complete stranger like this was a great thing, but I won ’ t forget his good nature or character.2.Dear Brad,I’ m very glad to hear from you. In your last letter you ask about the post-80s in China. Actually I am the boy who belongs to this group. Comparing with our parents, life for us is getting much hard. The job market is tough and the house is expensively to afford. Now many girls prefer to marry with a man who owns a house and a car. Therefore, I don ' t think love built on house and cars is true love, and I doubt how long it will last.As a matter of fact, though situations are tough today, a lot of we post-80s are making great efforts live a good life. I believe we will have a nice future.Li Hua3.Good morning, ladies and gentlemen,Some of us are having problems about our parents, as they often look into our school bags or read our diaries. I fully understand why we are comfortable about it, but it is no need to feel too sadly. Our parents are checking in our bags or diaries to make sure we re notgetting into troubles. They have probably heard of some horrible stories about other kids and thinking we might do the same. Or perhaps they just want to connect with us and are doing it all wrong. My suggestion is: Tell them we want them to trust us as many as we ’ d like to trust them. If you don ’ t think you can talk to them, write them a letter and leave it lie around --- they are bound to read it. Thank you!4.We spend two weeks in London last year. We went there in the autumn .We think it is the best season to visit England. The weather is usually good but there aren ’ t too many tourists in October. We stayed in a small hotel in the West End .It was convenient as we did most of our traveling by foot. We went to look at the places where all tourists see. We saw Buckingham Palace and the National Gallery. We went to shopping in Oxford Street and spent too many money .What we liked most, though, was going to theatre. We don’ t have the chance to see so wonderful plays at home .A lot of people say English food is very badly. We didn ’t think so. It’s true that most of the restaurants are French or Italian or Chinese, but we had some very good meal.5.Tom is a senior two students who devotes himself to his lessons every day. Last Saturday, as usual, he went to several courses. In the evening, he studies at home until deep into the night. He was too sleepy and tired that he couldn ' t work effectively. In Sunday morning, Tom was about to study when his father came up and advised him to have break. Soon they had a good idea. They bought a kite which they liked it very much and then the family went to the suburbs where Tom enjoyed fly the kite himself.The family had a picnic together but felt very relaxed in the open air. On Monday, Tom was energetic and actively in class. He said it was only why he had a better weekend.1.People often have troubles getting used to a new culture. They are usually curious when they first arrive a foreign country. Therefore, if they stay for a long time, they may start to feel different stages of culture shock. They can feel alone or sad because he can’ t deal with the local people. How quick people get used to culture differences may be depend on the way they learn. That' s a problem if they can' t speak the language. On other hand, some can study the situation and make good guesses about the culture. When they finally began to understand some of the language and make some new friends, they will gradually enjoy themselves and feel satisfying.2.I' m the only daughter of my parents. So they worried about everything I do.For example, when I ride my bike, my parents won ' t let me to ride by myself. Theyare afraid I might fall off my bike and hurt myself. They are taking great trouble to support a bike, with my mother even carried a first-aid box. I ' m not free to ride and I often say angry, “Why not let me ride alone? ” Now, most family have one child. Parents want to do everything for his children. This does no good on them. Too many love from parents may prevent children from independent. In my opinion, parents should lettheir children do that they should do alone.8.Maria was afraid that she was going to have to deliver a bad news to her friend Freddy. She was upsetting about the news herself. In the spring, Maria ' s mother had said Maria might be allowed bring a friend along on the family two-week vacation at the beach. Since then, Maria and Freddy had been doing nothing and planning all the thing they would do together. By the time August had arrived, Maria s mother had total forgotten her promise. When Maria reminded her, she said that she was sorry but that it wouldn ' t be enough room for Freddy because Maria ' s cousin, Theresa, would be going to the shore with them. Now Freddy was in his way to Maria ' s house.9.Get a good education is more important today than ever before .In Canada mostly children attend public schools. Public schools are mainly found by governments through tax income. Students in Canada taught in English and in French. The rests of Canadian children attend private schools, that are supported mainly by fees paying by parents. By law, children must attend the school from age 5 to 16. There are several different levels in the Canadian education system. The first was called Elementary Schools, which includes kindergartens through grade 7 or 8.10.My friend Dick was seven years old, and her sister Katherine was five. One day their mother takethem to their aunt ’s to play while she went to the city buy some new clothes. They played for a hour, and then their aunt took Dick into the kitchen. She gave him a nicely cake and a knife and said, “Dick, cut this cake in half, and give one of the piece to your sister. But remembering to do it like a gentleman.”“How do gentlemen do it” Dick asked. “They always give the bigger one piece to the other person, ” answered his aunt. Dick thought up this for a few seconds. Then he took the cake to his sister but said to her, “Cut this cake in half, Katherine.11.Attention please, everyone. I have announcement to make. You will pay a visit to the museum on October 1st. I think we will be interest in it. In the course of the visit, the guide will give us an account of the past or the development of the city. She say something about the advanced workers, included some teachers. We will see many pictures there. I’ m sure of that we can learn a lot. After the visit, we’ ll have a discussionin group and each of us must write a composition. We are to start out as earlier as 7:00 am. We must gather against time at the school gate. That’ s all. Thanks. 12.A few days ago I saw an instructive program on TV . It was about what the traffic problem in cities. It seems that a great deal of damages is done by traffic . All our cities are suffering from this. Some buildings are actual falling to pieces . It's often fast to walk than to go by car and by bus. The problem has been getting worse day by day.This is only one of the thousands problems in our cities. All sorts of terrible things were happening to our cities.The question is how we can do about it. 0ur roads were never designing for such heavy traffic.It is time the government does something about these problems.1..One day I pushed my cousin Li Dong in wheelchair on an especial narrow sidewalk. We struggled along with one wheel on the sidewalk or the other on the road. Suddenly, a man riding his motorcycle past us rapidly, missing Li Dong by several inch. Immediately, he turned round, stopped his motorcycle and came over. We were worried she would blame us for have stood in his way. To our surprise, he said nothing at all and helped out push the wheelchair until we reached a slightly wider sidewalk. Then he left after we could say thanks to him. We were leaving ashamed of what we thought.14.Good morning, everyone. It ’ s great honor for me to speak here. My name ’ s Li Xiaojun, born in a harmonious family. My father and mother are all high school teachers. Influenced by them, I read widely during my early age, but I ’ ve developed a great interest in arts and sports. I ’ m easy-going, get along well with my classmates.It is this personality which helps me win over all my classmates ’ friendships, and also help me overcome many difficulties both in academic and personal life. Being admitted in your university has always been a beautiful dream for me. I dream constantly that I, along with mine classmates, will study happy with the help of the respectable professors.I dream that I will swim freely in the sea, enjoying the waves of knowledge.I hope all my dream will come true in the near future. Thank you.15.Recently I have been quarrelling about my mother over whether I can watch TV afterthe school. She holds the view that Senior Three students have to make fully use of every minute to work hard at their lesson. It seem to her that I am allowed to watch TV, I won’ t be able to control me and I’ ll forget all about my studies. She also thinks that it is bad to my eyes. But I really can ' t accept her ideas. In my opinion, watch TV can set my mind at rest after a day ’s hard work. Besides, it is important for me to know what had happened both at home and abroad. However, I shouldn ' t be forbidden to watch TV.16.I still remember my middle school life in Zhengzhou. I was then in school for student from Tibet. As we were all left home of an early age, we met lots of problems in our daily life. We had to do the washing, cleaning and shopping by us. However, we seldom feltlonely or helplessly. We enjoyed our happy life. At weekends, we will play basketball on the playground, swimming in the pool or go for a picnic in the park. We were living in a big family. We treat each other as brothers and sisters. It has been three years when we graduated, but those memories are as sweet as ever before.17. Our school lies on the foot of a mountain with a small river passes by. It used to bea quiet, clean and beautiful place for a school. It is a pity which things have changed after a chemical factory was built near our school one year ago. Every day the factory produces many waste water and some harmful gases. The terribly pollution is harmful to our health. What ’ s bad, the great noise from the factory had a bad effect on our activities. As a result, our school is no longer what it used to. Our teachers and students are miserable beyond the description.18.I’ m glad to know what you have been studying Chinese in an university in Beijing for about one month. Just as you have found, Chinese differ from English greatly. The pronunciation and the spelling of the Chinese words are very complicated, and so is the sentence structures. That is because many people, especially the foreigners, have great difficulty in learning Chinese. However, practice makes perfect.If you can read and write Chinese as many as you can, you have a good command of it. In addition, you should look for more opportunities to communicate with the native people to get familiar to different accents as well as our cultures, which will help you a lot.Don’ t give up. I’ m sure you can learn Chinese well. I can offer you some help if it necessary.19.Three years ago I failed a important exam in my life and became a student in a ordinary school. Disappointing as I felt at the shabby campus and the poorly-equipped classroom, I found the teachers patiently and considerate. Besides, I enjoyed the friendly atmospherein class. I decided make the best of it. I worked hard and get along well with my teachers and classmates. Whenever I had difficulties, they were always available. Soon, I became one of the top student in my class, and which greatly increased my confidence and got him motivated.My experience tell me that it is not what you are given but how you make use for it that determines who you are.【答案】1、1. was—were 2.去掉over 3. stopped—stopping 4. slows—slowed5.在pull 后力口up6. immediate —immediately7. where —which/that8.them —it9. help一helping 10. but一and2、1.ask__asked 2. the_a 3. 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完整版)高考短文改错专项训练(带答案)College students have us ways to pay for their college fees。
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physics。
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as these are subjects I excel in。
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I hope to make paying for college more manageable.I am frustrated with the prevalence of dishonesty during exams。
While I am not claiming to be a perfect student who has never cheated。
2015~2011年各省市高考题Passage 1(2015·新课标全国Ⅰ)假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。
文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。
每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(﹨)划掉。
修改:在错的词下画一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
When I was a child,I hoped to live in the city.I think I would be happy there.Now I am living in a city,but I miss my home in countryside.There the air is clean or the mountains are green.Unfortunately,on the development of industrialization,the environment has been polluted.Lots of studies have been shown that global warming has already become a very seriously problem.The airs we breathe in is getting dirtier and dirtier.Much rare animals are dying out.We must found ways to protect your environment.If we fail to do so,we'll live to regret it.答案When I was a child,I hoped to live in the city.Ithinkthought I would be happythere.Now I am living in a city,but I miss my home in countryside.There theair is cleanorand the mountains are green.Unfortunately,onwith the development ofindustrialization,the environment has been polluted.Lots of studies haveshown that global warming has already become a very seriouslyserious problem.Theairsairwe breathe in is getting dirtier and dirtier.MuchMany rare animals are dying out.We mustfoundfind ways to protectyourour/the environment.If we fail to do so,we'll live to regret it.1.解析考查动词的时态。
根据前面一句可知,这是发生在小时候的事情,故用一般过去时态。
答案第2句:think→thought2.解析考查冠词的用法。
in the countryside (在乡村)为固定短语。
答案第3句:countryside前加the3.解析考查并列词的用法。
那儿的空气洁净,群山葱绿。
由句意可知两个分句之间显然为并列关系,而非选择关系。
答案第4句:or→and4.解析考查介词的用法。
with the development of...为一固定短语,意思是“随着……的发展”。
答案第5句:on→with5.解析考查被动语态的用法。
众多研究表明,全球变暖已经成为一个十分严重的问题。
由句意可知,studies和谓语show之间为主动关系,故要用主动语态。
答案第6句:去掉been6.解析考查形容词的用法。
修饰名词problem应当用形容词。
答案第6句:seriously→serious7.解析考查不可数名词的用法。
air作“空气”讲时为不可数名词。
答案第7句:airs→air8.解析考查代词的用法。
Animals为可数名词复数,故用many。
答案第8句:Much→Many9.解析考查情态动词的用法。
情态动词后面要接动词原形。
答案 第9句:found →find10.解析 考查语境中代词的用法。
依据前后句的语境及逻辑关系可知your 与上下文相悖,结合句意应当改为our/the 才能使句意通顺。
答案 第9句:your →our Passage 2 (2015·新课标全国Ⅱ)假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。
文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。
每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下画一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词; 2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
One day ,little Tony went to a shopping center with his parent.It was verycrowded.Tony saw a toy on a shop window.He liked it so very much that he quickly walked into the shop.After looks at the toy for some time ,he turned around and found where his parents were missing.Tony was scared and begun to cry.A woman saw him crying and telling him to wait outside a shop.Five minutes later ,Tony saw parents.Mom said ,“How nice to see you again !Dad and I were terrible worried.”Tony promised her that this would never happen again. 答案One day ,little Tony went to a shopping center with his parentparents .It was verycrowded.Tony saw a toy onin a shop window.He liked it somuch that hequickly walked into the shop.After lookslooking at the toy for some time ,he turnedaround and foundhis parents were missing.Tony was scared andbegun began to cry.A woman saw him crying and telling told him to wait outside atheshop.Five minutes later ,Tony saw parents.Mom said ,“How nice to see youagain !Dad and I were terribleterribly worried.”Tony promised her that this would never happen again.1.解析 考查名词复数。
由第五句中的“his parents were missing.”可知此处应当用复数形式。
答案 第1句:parent →parents2.解析 考查介词的用法。
玩具是摆放在商店的橱窗里面的,故用介词in 。
答案 第3句: on →in3.解析 考查固定句型的用法。
由语境可知,托尼非常喜欢这个玩具,于是快速走进商店。
so...that...为固定句型,意思是“如此……以致于……”,故去掉very 。
答案 第4句: 去掉very4.解析 考查省略的用法。
After 之后省去了主语he ,he 与look at 之间为逻辑上的主谓关系,故应当用现在分词。
答案 第5句: looks →looking5.解析 考查宾语从句连接词的用法。
动词found 之后为宾语从句,从句为系表结构,意思完整,故将where 去掉或改为没有词义且不作成分的that 。
答案 第5句: 去掉where 或where →that6.解析 考查并列谓语的用法。
由句子结构可知,begin 与was scared 并列,因此,要用一般过去时。
答案 第6句:begun →began7.解析 考查并列谓语的用法。
有一位妇女看到他哭泣就告诉他去商店外面等。
由句意可知,tell 这一动作是这个妇女发出的,应当与saw 构成并列谓语。
故改用told。
答案第7句:telling→told8.解析考查冠词的用法。
表示谈话双方共知的名词前要用定冠词。
答案第7句:a→the9.解析考查物主代词的用法。
根据句意及英语表达习惯,应当在parents前加上与主语相一致的物主代词。
答案第8句:saw后加his10.解析考查副词的用法。
形容词worried之前要用副词来修饰。
答案第10句:terrible→terriblyPassage 3(2015·四川)下面短文中有10处语言错误。
请在有错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词。
增加:在缺词处加一个漏词符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下画一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每句不超过两个错误;2.每处错误及其修改均仅限一次;3.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Hi, Janice,It's been a month since I came to this new school and I really want share with you some of the problems I have been experiencing.As I tell you last time, I made three new friend here.We hang out together during lunch and after school.We've been spending a lot of time sing in karaoke bars.It's been three Saturdays now and it really costs me many.And I started to see this as a time-wasting activity! In fact,I don't like to go anymore, so I'm afraid I'll lose their friendship.How do you think I should do? If you are me,would you talk to him?Please help with me and give me some advice.Grace 答案Hi, Janice,It's been a month since I came to this new school and I really want ∧to share with you some of the problems I have been experiencing.As I telltold you last time, I made three newfriendfriends here.We hang out togetherduring lunch and after school.We've been spending a lot of timesingsinging in karaokebars.It's been three Saturdays now and it really costs me manymuch.And I started to seethis as a time-wasting activity! In fact,I don't like to go anymore, sobut I'm afraid I'lllose their friendship.HowWhat do you think I should do? If youarewere me,would you talkto himthem?Please help me and give me some advice.Grace1.解析考查动词want的用法,want后用不定式作状语,故加上to。