英汉互译之文学名篇翻译赏析

名篇名译00‎11.原文：It is an ill wind that blows nobody‎good.译文：世事皆利弊并‎存。

赏析：原句结构比较‎特殊（"It‎is‎…‎that‎…"），理解起来有点‎困难。

“对谁都没有好‎处的风才是坏‎风”，也就是说大多‎数情况下风对‎人都是有好处‎、有坏处，在引申一步就‎是成了上面的‎译句。

林佩耵在《中英对译技巧‎》一书中（第68页）还给了几个相‎同结构的英文‎句子。

翻译的前提是‎理解。

有人指出。

市面上见到的‎翻译作品，有好多都带有‎因理解不正确‎而产生的低级‎错误，“信”都谈不上还妄‎谈什么“达”和“雅”！初学翻译的朋‎友，在理解原文上‎当不遗余力。

2.原文：Their langua‎g e was almost‎unrest‎r ained‎by any motive‎of pruden‎c e.译文：他们几乎爱讲‎什么就讲什么‎，全然不考虑什‎么谨慎不谨慎‎。

赏析：如果硬译，译文势必成了‎“他们的言论几‎乎不受任何深‎思熟虑的动机‎的约束”。

译者本其译，化其滞，将原句一拆为‎二，充分运用相关‎翻译技巧，译文忠实、通顺。

3.原文：Get a liveli‎h ood,and then practi‎s e virtue‎.译文：先谋生而后修‎身。

（钱钟书译）赏析：原句是祈使句‎，译句也传达出‎了训导的意味‎。

用“谋生”来译“Get‎a‎liveli‎h ood"，用“修身”来译“practi‎s e virtue‎",可谓精当。

巧的是，原句七个词，译句也是七个‎汉字。

4.原文：I enjoy the clean volupt‎u ousne‎s s of the warm breeze‎on my skin and the cool suppor‎t of water.译文：我喜爱那洁净‎的暖风吹拂在‎我的皮肤上使‎我陶然欲醉，也喜爱那清亮‎的流水把我的‎身体托浮在水‎面。

篇一：英文诗歌(shīgē)欣赏The LambLittle lamb, who made thee? 小羊羔(yánggāo)谁创造了你Dost thou know who made thee? 你可知道(zhī dào)谁创造了你Gave thee life, and bid thee feed 给你生命(shēngmìng)，哺育着你By the stream and o'er the mead;在溪流(xīliú)旁，在青草地Gave thee clothing of delight,给你穿上好看的衣裳Softest clothing, woolly, bright;最软的衣裳毛茸茸多漂亮； Gave thee such a tender voice,给你这样温顺的声音，Making all the vales rejoice? 让所有的山谷都开心；Little lamb, who made thee?小羔羊谁创造了你Dost thou know who made thee? 你可知道谁创造了你；Little lamb, I'll tell thee, 小羔羊我要告诉你，Little lamb, I'll tell thee: 小羔羊我要告诉你；He is called by thy name, 他的名字跟你的一样， For He calls Himself a Lamb. 他也称他自己是羔羊；He is meek, and He is mild; 他又温顺又和蔼，He became a little child.他变成了一个小小孩I a child, and thou a lamb,我是个小孩你是羔羊We are called by His name. 咱俩的名字跟他一样。

Little lamb, God bless thee! 小羔羊上帝保佑你Little lamb, God bless thee! 小羔羊上帝保佑你。

文学英译汉（世界名篇《瓦尔登湖》）I had three chairs in my house; one for solitude, two for friendship, three for society. When visitors came in larger and unexpected numbers there was but the third chair for them all, but they generally economized the room by standing up. It is surprising how many great men and women a small house will contain.我的屋子里有三张椅子，寂寞时用一张，交朋友用两张，社交用三张。

访客要是来了一大堆，多得出乎意料，也还是只有三张椅子给他们支配，他们一般都很节省地方，只是站着。

奇怪的是一个小房间里竟可容纳这么多的男人和女人。

I have had twenty-five or thirty souls, with their bodies, at once under my roof, and yet we often parted without being aware that we had come very near to one another. Many of our houses, both public and private, with their almost innumerable apartments, their huge halls and their cellars for the storage of wines and other munitions of peace, appear to be extravagantly large for their inhabitants.有一天，在我的屋脊底下，来了二十五至三十个灵魂，外加上他们这许多个身体；然而，我们分手的时候似乎不觉得我们曾经彼此十分接近过。

散文英译汉佳作赏析散文英译汉佳作赏析汉译英散文佳作赏析：冯骥才《西式幽默》Western Humour冯骥才Feng Jicai学院请来一位洋教师，长得挺怪，红脸，金发，连鬓大胡须，有几根胡子一直逾过面颊，挨近鼻子，他个子足有二米，每迸屋门必须低头，才能躲过门框子的拦击，叫人误以为他进门先鞠躬，这不太讲究礼貌了吗？Our institute employed an English teacher. He looked very strange red-faced, golden-haired, with a thick growth of whiskers that reached all the way to the nose. He was really tall-- no less than six foot five. When he came in through the door, he had to lower his head to avoid banging against the door frame. It looked as though he always bowed to you at the door and that was much too polite.顶怪的是，他每每与中国学生聊天，聊到可笑之处时，他不笑，脸上也没表情，好象他不喜欢玩笑；可是有时毫不可笑的事，他会冷不防放声大笑，笑得翻江倒海，仰面朝天，几平连人带椅子要翻过去，喉结在脖子上乱跳，满脸胡子直抖。

常使中国学生面面相觑，不知这位洋教师的神经是不是有点问题？What was more, he never laughed, when he chatted with his Chinese students on amusing stories, nor did his face show any expression as if he knew no sense of humour. However, when it came to topics of the most dull nature, he would burst into uncontrollable laughter, roaring while rocking in his chair, almost falling flat on his back, his Adam's apple dancing up and down in his throat and his whiskers fluttering all over his face. Thestudents would then look at each other, wondering if he was in his right mind.一天，洋教师出题，考察学生们用洋文作文的水准，题目极简单，随便议论议论校园内的一事一物，褒贬皆可。

名篇名译0011.原文：It is an ill wind that blows nobody good.译文：世事皆利弊并存。

赏析：原句结构比较特殊（"It is … that …"），理解起来有点困难。

“对谁都没有好处的风才是坏风”，也就是说大多数情况下风对人都是有好处、有坏处，在引申一步就是成了上面的译句。

林佩耵在《中英对译技巧》一书中（第68页）还给了几个相同结构的英文句子。

翻译的前提是理解。

有人指出。

市面上见到的翻译作品，有好多都带有因理解不正确而产生的低级错误，“信”都谈不上还妄谈什么“达”和“雅”！初学翻译的朋友，在理解原文上当不遗余力。

2.原文：Their language was almost unrestrained by any motive of prudence.译文：他们几乎爱讲什么就讲什么，全然不考虑什么谨慎不谨慎。

赏析：如果硬译，译文势必成了“他们的言论几乎不受任何深思熟虑的动机的约束”。

译者本其译，化其滞，将原句一拆为二，充分运用相关翻译技巧，译文忠实、通顺。

3.原文：Get a livelihood,and then practise virtue.译文：先谋生而后修身。

（钱钟书译）赏析：原句是祈使句，译句也传达出了训导的意味。

用“谋生”来译“Get a livelihood"，用“修身”来译“practise virtue",可谓精当。

巧的是，原句七个词，译句也是七个汉字。

4.原文：I enjoy the clean voluptuousness of the warm breeze on my skin and the cool support of water.译文：我喜爱那洁净的暖风吹拂在我的皮肤上使我陶然欲醉，也喜爱那清亮的流水把我的身体托浮在水面。

（章振邦译）赏析："voluptuousness"不会"clean",是"breeze""clean","support"不会"cool", 是"water""cool"，这种“甲乙两项相关联，就把原属于形容甲的修饰语移属于乙”的修饰手法叫“移就”（transferred epithet）（《英语修辞赏析》，第145页）。

经典古诗的英文翻译赏析带翻译我国从第一部诗歌总集《诗经》到现在，三千年的文学史，诗歌占有举足轻重的地位。

下面是店铺带来的经典古诗的英文翻译赏析，欢迎大家阅读!经典古诗的英文翻译赏析篇一五言律诗司空曙贼平后送人北归世乱同南去，时清独北还。

他乡生白发，旧国见青山。

晓月过残垒，繁星宿故关。

寒禽与衰草，处处伴愁颜。

Five-character-regular-verseSikiong ShuTO A FRIEND BOUND NORTHAFTER THE REBELLIONIn dangerous times we two came south;Now you go north in safety, without me.But remember my head growing white among strangers,When you look on the blue of the mountains of home....The moon goes down behind a ruined fort,Leaving star-clusters above an old gate....There are shivering birds and withering grasses,Whichever way I turn my face.经典古诗的英文翻译赏析篇二五言律诗刘禹锡蜀先主庙天地英雄气，千秋尚凛然。

势分三足鼎，业复五铢钱。

得相能开国，生儿不象贤。

凄凉蜀故妓，来舞魏宫前。

Five-character-regular-verseLiu YuxiIN THE TEMPLE OF THE FIRST KING OF SHUEven in this world the spirit of a heroLives and reigns for thousands of years.You were the firmest of the pot\'s three legs;It was you who maintained the honour of the currency;You chose a great premier to magnify your kingdom....And yet you had a son so little like his fatherThat girls of your country were taken captiveTo dance in the palace of the King of Wei.经典古诗的英文翻译赏析篇三五言律诗张籍没蕃故人前年伐月支，城下没全师。

中文古诗翻译成英文品析诗歌独特的艺术性使诗歌翻译成为文学翻译中的一大难题。

下面小编整理了中文古诗翻译成英文，希望大家喜欢!中文古诗翻译成英文品析屈原《楚辞·离骚》跪敷衽以陈辞兮，耿吾既得此中正。

驷玉虬以乘鹥兮，溘埃风余上征。

朝发轫于苍梧兮，夕余至乎县圃。

欲少留此灵琐兮，日忽忽其将暮。

吾令羲和弭节兮，望崦嵫而勿迫。

路曼曼其修远兮，吾将上下而求索。

饮余马於咸池兮，总余辔乎扶桑。

折若木以拂日兮，聊逍遥以相羊。

前望舒使先驱兮，后飞廉使奔属。

鸾皇为余先戒兮，雷师告余以未具。

吾令凤鸟飞腾兮，继之以日夜。

飘风屯其相离兮，帅云霓而来御。

纷总总其离合兮，斑陆离其上下。

吾令帝阍开关兮，倚阊阖而望予。

时暧暧其将罢兮，结幽兰而延儜。

世溷浊而不分兮，好蔽美而嫉妒。

Li SaoQu YuanSoiling my gown, to plead my case I kneeled;Th'ancestral voice the path to me revealed.Swift jade-green dragons, birds with plumage gold,I harnessed to the whirlwind, and behold,At daybreak from the land of plane-trees grey,I came to paradise ere close of day.I wished within the sacred grove to stay,The sun had sunk, and darkness wrapped the way;The driver of the sun I bade to stay,Ere with the setting rays we haste away.The way was long, and wrapped in gloom did seem,As I urged on to seek my vanished dream.The dragons quenched their thirst beside the lakeWhere bathed the sun, whilst I upon the brakeFastened my reins; a golden bough I soughtTo brush the sun, and tarred there in sport.The pale moon's charioteer I then bade lead,The master of the winds swiftly succeed;Before, the royal blue bird cleared the way;The lord of thunder urged me to delay.I bade the phoenix scan the heaven wide;But vainly day and night its course it tried;The gathering whirlwinds drove it from my sight,Rushing with lowering clouds to check my flight;Sifting and merging in the firmament,Above, below, in various hues they went.The gate-keeper of heaven I bade give place,But leaning on his door he scanned my face;The day grew dark, and now was nearly spent;Idly my orchids into wreaths I bent.The virtuous and the vile in darkness merged;They veiled my virtue, by their envy urged.经典的中文古诗翻译成英文屈原《楚辞·离骚》朝吾将济于白水兮，登阆风而緤马。

文学翻译赏析一、雄健阳刚类艰难的国运与雄健的国民李大钊历史的道路，不会是坦平的，有时走到艰难险阻的境界。

这是全靠雄健的精神才能够冲过去的。

一条浩浩荡荡的长江大河，有时流到很宽阔的境界，平原无际，一泻万里。

有是流到很逼狭的境界，两岸丛山迭岭，绝壁断崖，江河流于其间，回环曲折，极其险峻。

民族生命的进展，其经历亦复如是。

人类在历史上的生活正如旅行一样。

旅途上的征人所经过的地方，有时是坦荡平原，有时是崎岖险路。

老于旅途的人，走到平坦的地方，固是高高兴兴地向前走，走到崎岖的境界，愈是奇趣横生，觉得在此奇绝壮绝的境界，愈能感到一种冒险的美趣。

中华民族现在所逢的史路，是一段崎岖险阻的道路。

在这一段道路上，实在亦有一种奇绝壮绝的景致，使我们经过此段道路的人，感得一种壮美的趣味。

但这种壮美的趣味，是非有雄健的精神的人不能够感觉到的。

我们的扬子江，黄河，可以代表我们的民族精神。

扬子江及黄河遇见沙漠，遇见山峡都是浩浩荡荡的往前流过去，以成其浊流滚滚，一泻万里的魄势。

目前的艰难境界，那能阻抑我们民族生命的曲调，在这悲壮歌声中，走过这崎岖险阻的道路。

要知在艰难的国运中建造国家，亦是人生最有趣味的事。

The Bad Luck of China and the Strong Will of the ChineseLi DazhaoThe progress of history sometimes comes into a territory full of hardships and hindrances, and only by means of strong will can it run through the territory.Sometimes in an extensive and open terrain with boundless plains, a huge and mighty river flows vigorously down thousands of miles. Sometimes it runs in an imposing and narrow terrain with ranges of high mountains, crags and cliffs. It zigzags its way down through them, which is drastically hazardous and precipitous. The progress of a nation undergoes the same experience.The life of human race in history is just like a journey. The places the travelers have traversed are open and flat here, but craggy and risky there. Walking on a flat and level road, an experienced traveler certainly feels delighted. However, walking in a rugged and rough terrain, one can enjoy more wits and humor. Walking in such an area of wonderful and magnificent scenes, one can savor more tastes of adventure.The road of history taken today by the Chinese nation is one full of twists and turns. But in this section of the road, there is an extremely fabulous and magnificent view which makes those of us who are going and have gone through it feel glorious and hallowed. It is a feel only those strongly-determined people are capable of enjoying.The Yangtze River and Yellow River stand well for our national spirit. They run into deserts and mountains, and mightily they run. They develop into huge muddy streams and vigorously theydash and roar down thousands of miles. The current crisis can never stop our nation from advancing forward. Strongly determined, we should sing a march and, accompanied by this touching and tragic song.白杨礼赞矛盾……那就是白杨树，西北极普通的一种树，然而实在不是平凡的一种树。

《荷塘月色》英译文赏析《荷塘月色》两译文赏析散文翻译原则●1、文气贯通,气韵生动●英国散文翻译家Hilaire Belloc(希莱尔·贝洛克)为文学散文翻译制定了6 条原则，认为翻译的本质是异地之魂假借本地之躯的复活(The essence of translating is the resurrection of an alien thing in a native body) ,强调散文的翻译不能拘泥于原文之字句,要视段落或部分为整体。

翻译要“以意译意( translate intention by intention) ”●2、传神写照———“意,气,文”三位一体●在散文翻译中,我们要想译得曲尽其妙,须得传神地摹写作者的气质神韵。

每一个作者有每一个的个性特点、气质精神,着手翻译之前,要先对作者进行深入的研究,把握其时代背景、人生经历、创作风格等,这样的翻译方能做到传神达意,否则,难免貌合神离。

●PS：文学翻译非文字翻译●文学翻译，讲求整体效果，即“神韵”。

有些表面忠实的译文，失去了散文的文采、文雅，这样便失去了自身的价值，终究是失败的译文。

“美”是散文翻译的重点。

美感层面●Alongside the Lotus Pond runs a small cinder footpath. It is peaceful andsecluded here, a place not frequented by pedestrians even in the daytime; now at night, it looks more solitary, in a lush, shady ambience of trees all around the pond. On the side where the path is, there are willows, interlaced with some others whose names I do not know. The foliage, which, in a moonless night,would loom somewhat frighteningly dark, looks very nice tonight, although the moonlight is not more than a thin, greyish veil. （朱纯深译文）●动感美：run、frequent、interlace、loom●韵味美：peaceful、secluded、solitary、lush、shady●比喻手法：…a thin, greyish veil .美感层面●All over this winding stretch of water, what meets the eye isa silken fieldof leaves, reaching rather high above the surface, like the skirts of dancing girls in all their grace. Here and there, layers of leaves are dotted with white lotus blossoms, some in demure bloom, others in shy bud, like scattering pearls, or twinkling stars, or beauties just out of the bath. A breeze stirs, sending over breaths of fragrance, like faint singing drifting from a distant building.At this moment, a tiny thrill shoots through the leaves and flowers, like a streak of lightning, straight across the forest of lotuses. The leaves, which have been standing shoulder to shoulder, are caught trembling in an emerald heave of the pond. Underneath, the exquisite water is covered from view, and none can tell its colour; yet the leaves on top project themselves all the more attractively.（朱纯深译文）●音韵效果 (节奏美）：● stirs---sending---singing；● breeze---breaths---building；● fragrance---faint---from；● drifting---distant；● sen ding---singing--building；● leaves---streak；● streak---straight；● leaves---like---lightning---lotuses.●heave ：双关语义●emerald ：“通感”●project ：选词确切词汇层面●今晚却很好，虽然月光也还是淡淡的。