2019秋外研版九年级英语下册Module 5模块话题写作同步测试

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Module 5模块话题写作[见学生用书B68]【好题在线】为了宣传六月六日“全国爱眼日”,《英语周报》正在组织征文活动。

请你结合实际生活写一篇题目为“How to Protect Our Eyes”的征文稿。

内容:1.眼睛的重要性;2.保护眼睛的措施。

要求:80~100词。

How to Protect Our Eyes_____________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ ___【话题分析】本模块的话题为“急救和锻炼”,其书面表达的命题形式主要有以下两种:1.描述如何保证安全;2.描述如何养成健康的生活习惯。

【佳作欣赏】How to Protect Our EyesEyes are the window of our mind.①We use our eyes to see everything around us.Without eyes,nothing is left beside you but darkness.②How to protect our eyes?③ It's not right to keep your eyes working for a long time.④You'd better not read in strong or poor light.④Don't read in bed or a moving bus.④Remember to keep your books away from your eyes for about a foot and do eye exercises every day.④ What's more,a balanced diet is necessary.Follow my advice and form a good habit.It's time to say goodbye to thick glasses.⑤【精彩点评】①开篇就让人眼前一亮,使用俗语阐述眼睛的重要性,更具有说服力。

②这句话写得很精彩,通过一个假设句,让读者更深切地感受到失去眼睛的不幸。

介词without使用得很别致;“nothing…but +名词/代词”意为“除……以外,什么也没有;只有”,这是一个高级句式,让人印象深刻。

③作者使用一个疑问句开头,通过发问,引起读者对“how to protect our eyes”这一问题的思考,从而引出下文保护眼睛的措施。

④本文最大的亮点在于句式的多样性,尤其是提建议的不同句型:“It is +形容词+(for sb.)to do sth.”句型语气坚决,告诉读者不要让眼睛一直处于工作状态;“You'd better not do sth.”句型语气稍委婉,劝解读者不要在昏暗的灯光下或强光下看书;两个祈使句(don't do sth.和remember to do sth.)语气强硬,强烈要求人们不要在床上和移动的车上读书。

这些句型与所提的建议匹配恰当,提升了文章的档次。

⑤结尾句旧句式新用。

“It's time to do sth.”意为“做某事的时间到了”,作者借助这一句式用幽默的语言提醒读者遵循上述建议,养成良好的习惯,告别厚厚的镜片。

【学以致用】Ⅰ.根据短文意思和括号里的要点提示完成短文Nowadays students' physical fitness is declining year by year.I think there are some reasons.On the one hand,__some____students__eat__too__much__junk__food__(一些学生垃圾食品吃得太多了).That's bad for their health.__On__the__other__hand__(另一方面),students have too much homework to do,__so__(连词)they have little time to do sports.__Here__is__some__useful__advice__(这里有一些有用的建议).First,students __should__be__given__more__time__to__do__exercise__(应该被给予更多的时间锻炼).Second,students should eat a balanced diet.They should __eat__more__vegetables__and__fruit__(多吃瓜果蔬菜),and try to eat less junk food.Finally, __enough__sleep__is__also__very__important__(充足的睡眠也很重要).Ⅱ.写作微技能:1+n(n≤3)写作拓展策略请欣赏下面的片段:Many__students__don't__get__as__much__exercise__as__they__need__nowadays. Because they al w ays sit on the sofa and do no exercise at all.To keep fit,you should get off the sofa and exercise at least half an hour each day.Exercise helps us build a strong body.划线部分就是“1”,相当于主题句,斜体部分就是“n”,将学生缺乏锻炼进行拓展:原因(坐在沙发上根本不锻炼)+建议(每天锻炼半小时)+益处(使身体强壮)。

请对下列句子进行1+n(n≤3)拓展:1.Many students don't have enough time to sleep.__One____of__the__reasons__is__that__they__often__spend__too__much__time__ on__computer__games__so__that__they__don't__go__to__bed__early.In__order__to __get__enough__sleep,we__should__keep__away__from__computer__games.If__we__have__enough__slee ping__time,we'll__be__energetic__the__next__day.__2.More and more teenagers take up smoking nowadays.__Most____of__them__think__it's__cool__to__do__so.If__you__want__to__look__ after__your__body__well,you'd__better__say__no__to__smoking.Giving__up__smoking__not__only__does__ good__to__your__health,but__also__to__your__family's.__Ⅲ.书面表达选做一学生的安全问题已引起学校、家长和社会的高度关注,为了进一步增强中学生的安全意识,提高自我保护能力,你校开展了以“How to keep safe”为主题的英语演讲比赛。

请你根据以下提示写一篇演讲稿。

要求:1.须包括所给的全部要点,可适当发挥;2.表达清楚,语句通顺,意思连贯,书写规范;3.80~100词(开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数)。

参考词汇:be careful;go bad;turn off;obeyHello,everyone!I'm glad to share my ideas about how to keep safe here.As middle school students,we should always keep safety in mind.But how can we keep safe?First,we__should__be__careful__when__we__make__friends,especially__on__the__Internet.We__shouldn't__tell__strangers__our__personal__inf ormation,such__as__the__home__address__and__telephone__number.Second,we__should__eat__healthily__and__safely.Eating__food__that__goes__bad__will__ do__harm__to__our__health.We__should__also__be__careful__to__use__electricity __and__water.If__we__are__in__danger,we__must__call__the__police__for__help__in__time__so__that__we__can__keep__ ourselves__safe.Third,we__must__pay__attention__to__traffic__safety.We__must__obey__the__traffic__ru st__but__not__least,be__in__order__when__we__are__going__upstairs__or__downstairs__and__make__ sure__to__be__safe__when__we__are__doing__sports.Try__not__to__be__hurt. Thanks for listening.选做二安全是我们成长中最需要关注的话题。