高考英语作文训练 高级句式课件
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高中英语书面表达中的高级句子优秀课件
Step I: 交流分享 合作再探
Let's find some ways to change a sentence structure.
Xiao Ming knows everything; we are very surprised.
Step I: 交流分享 合作再探
Possible ways:
Besides'm sure you
will be happy in the activity.
I really hope that you can attend the music festival and please let me know
your decision soon.
Your sincerely
surprised.
to combine
4. It surprises us that Xiao Ming knows everything.
5. Xiao Ming knows so much that we are very surprised.
6. What surprises us is that Xiao Ming knows every提升
To simplify
He decided that he would buy a digital camera online. →He decided to buy a digital camera online.
The man who is talking with Mary is my brother. →The man talking with Mary is my brother.
Li Hua
Step III: 当堂检测 反响评价one possible version
2023届高考英语作文句式训练-无灵主语 课件
• 看到直升飞机，Jane 高兴地笑了起来。 • The moment she caught sight of the helicopter, a bright smile
lit up Jane's face/eyes./ Jane's eyes/ face lit up with delight. • 刚想到这个主意的时候，Amy脸上露出了笑容。 • A smile took hold of Amy when the idea first came to her. • 一个愉快的声音响起，“是我。” • A cheerful voice replied, “It’s me.”
the competitive volleyball final on the playground.
• 地震到来，犹如夜贼，不作预告。 • An earthquake came like a thief in the night，without warning. • 雨使得游客无法欣赏到满月。 • The rain prevented tourists from enjoying the full moon.
• 校园里的大树见证了学生们的成长。 • The trees on campus have witnessed the growth of students. • 过去的经验告诉我们某些成就是无法获得的。 • Past experience has taught us that certain accomplishments are
beyond attainment. • 在罗马发生过许多重大历史事件。 • Rome witnessed many great historic events．
高考英语作文句式提升课件
2) 我正沿着马路走，突然我听到有人叫我。 when was walking along the road ______ I ____________ suddenly I heard my name called.
六、将两个简单句合并为一个由which引 导的非限制性定语从句
1. Recently many students spend their money on unnecessary things. Different people have different opinions about it. Recently many students spend their money on unnecessary things, about which different people have different opinions. 2. Many boys learn to smoke. It does harm to their health. which does harm to Many boys learn to smoke, ________________ their health. _______________
1) 这个地区占地2000平方千米，人口10万。
This area covers an area of 2000 square with a population of 100,000. kilometers, ________________________ 2)我们学校周围种了很多花，吸引了大量的 学生来参观。
三、将简单句改为强调句 1. Smoking did great harm to his health. It was smoking that did great harm to his health. 2. Our money is earned through hard work by our parents. It is through hard work that our money is earned by our parents. 3. He went there yesterday. He did go there yesterday.
最新高考英语书面表达 高级句型常用句式与仿写 PPT课件
定语从句
今年夏天高中毕业后，我将去美国进行为 期10天的观光旅游，这将是一次体验美国 文化、练习英语口语的好机会。
I will make a 10day tour of America after my graduation from senior high school this summer, which will be a good chance for me to experience American culture and practice my oral English.
What impresses me most is its fresh air and amazing scenery around the West Lake.
20. I would appreciate it if you could ...“如果你能……我将感激不尽”
I would appreciate it if you could do me the favour of correcting my paper. 如果你能帮忙批改一下我的论文，我将感 激不尽。
21. It is worthwhile to do/doing sth.“做某事是值得的”
Personally, it is worthwhile to provide children with a chance to get educated. 依我看来，为孩子们提供受教育的机会是值 得的。
7. 俗语说As an old saying goes
例句：俗话说，熟能生巧。As an old saying goes, “Practice makes perfect."
仿写：没有付出就没有收获
As an old saying goes,“No pain, no gain.”
高考英语作文高级句型速成PPT课件
高考英语作文高级句型速成PPT课件
高考英语作文高级句型速成PPT课件
一.固定句型类 11.It is believed that...＝People believe that...= It is universally acknowledged that..... 人们认为 It is universally acknowledged that health is
一.固定句型类 9. From my point of view ,we should take the
following measures to cope with the problem. 我认为，我们应采取如下措施解决这个问题。
高考英语作文高级句型速成PPT课件
高考英语作文高级句型速成PPT课件
高考英语作文高级句型速成PPT课件
高考英语作文高级句型速成PPT课件
一.固定句型类 13.我认为...... I am convinced that…. As far as I am concerned, ….. From my point of view, ….. From where I stand, ……
happy ,but aslo it enables others to feel delighted.
一.固定句型类
2.It is very important for us to … because we/sth …
sb做...很重要，因为..... It is very important for us to protect the
environment because we have only one earth.
一.固定句型类
3.Only in this way can we …. 只有通过这种方式我们才能.... Only in this way can we achieve great success. only by doing...can sb do.... 只有做....我们才能.... Only by taking exercise can we always stay
高考英语作文高级句型速成PPT课件
一.固定句型类 11.It is believed that...＝People believe that...= It is universally acknowledged that..... 人们认为 It is universally acknowledged that health is
一.固定句型类 9. From my point of view ,we should take the
following measures to cope with the problem. 我认为，我们应采取如下措施解决这个问题。
高考英语作文高级句型速成PPT课件
高考英语作文高级句型速成PPT课件
高考英语作文高级句型速成PPT课件
高考英语作文高级句型速成PPT课件
一.固定句型类 13.我认为...... I am convinced that…. As far as I am concerned, ….. From my point of view, ….. From where I stand, ……
happy ,but aslo it enables others to feel delighted.
一.固定句型类
2.It is very important for us to … because we/sth …
sb做...很重要，因为..... It is very important for us to protect the
environment because we have only one earth.
一.固定句型类
3.Only in this way can we …. 只有通过这种方式我们才能.... Only in this way can we achieve great success. only by doing...can sb do.... 只有做....我们才能.... Only by taking exercise can we always stay
高考英语优秀写作句式(三)PPT
2.为了丰富我的生活，拓宽我的视野尤其是提升我的写作水平，最近几周我阅读 了各类书籍像历史书、科普书、文学书。 Aiming to enrich my life, broadening my horizons and especially improving my writing, I have, in recent weeks, read a variety of books like history books, science books, literary books and so on. 3.为了发挥自己的商业才能，发展推进电子商务系统，马云创建了诸如阿里巴巴、 淘宝等著名的电子商务品牌. Aiming to enlighten his talent in business and advancing his e-commerce system, Jack Ma has, in recent years, created such famous e-commerce brands as Alibaba and Taobao. 4.为了养成容易相处的性格，增强与人交流的能力，最近几周，我积极参加各种 学校活动。 Aiming to develop easygoing character and enhancing capability of communicating with others, I have, in recent weeks, actively participated in various school activities .
Whenever I talk about the American films , I can’t help thinking of Audrey Hepburn, a famous actress in American history. Her films, once seen, can remind people of elegance and fashion.
Whenever I talk about the American films , I can’t help thinking of Audrey Hepburn, a famous actress in American history. Her films, once seen, can remind people of elegance and fashion.
高三英语上学期作文复习专项：读后续写七大高级句式精讲课件
主题二：助人为乐
1. 赠人玫瑰，手有余香。 Rose given, fragrance in hand. 2. 小善举能带来大不同。 Small kindness can bring rich reward.
3. 这就是奇迹：我们与人分享的越多，我们拥有的就越多。 The miracle is this: the more we share, the more we have.
Hesitating for a while, Mark promised to Annie that
he would work hard at his English.
犹豫了一会儿，马克向安妮承诺他会努力学习英语。
次要动作-用非谓语动词表示（主动形式ing） 主要动作-用谓语动词表示（时态）
Finding a clinic nearby, she went inside to see what happened.
03 情感类形容词作状语 表情感类的形容词，主语+谓语
情感类的形容词单独拎出来作状语，说明主语的状态，也是写作时的 一大加分句型。
Eager and excited, she flagged her yellow blouse, trying to attract others' attention.
She opened the letter, her hands trembling with excitement.
动作1
动作2
主语1
主语2
主要动作-用谓语动词表示（时态） 次要动作-用非谓语动词表示（主动形式ing）
A boy stood by the door, his hands covered with dirt.
高考书面表达高分句型突破(115张ppt)
13. 毫无疑问，跳槽既有优点，又有缺 点。
毫无疑问 There’s no doubt that… 跳槽 job-hopping
There is no doubt that job-hopping has its drawbacks, as well as merits.
14. 应该了解，在我们目前的条件下， 态度决定一切。
考虑到…… take … into consideration 得出结论 get to/come to/reach/arrive at a conclusion 就某人的年龄来说 for one’s age
Taking all these factors into consideration, we naturally come to the conclusion that Tom is a great boy for his age.
As far as I am concerned, playing video games not only takes much time but is also harmful to health.
9. 据我所知，下列方法对我帮助很大。
据我所知 as far as my knowledge is concerned
11. 在我的求学过程中，我忘不了学习 英文所遇到的巨大困难。
在……过程中 in the course of 求学 school 遇到 encounter
In the course of my schooling, I will never forget the great difficulty I encountered in learning English.
与…不同 be different from/vary from
高考英语11种应用文写作句式积累课件
5.It was because of your help that…
6.Please do not hesitate to let me know if there is anything I could do to pay you back.
7.My true gratitude is beyond the words’ description./ Words fail to express my gratitude deep in my heart ./ No words are strong enough to convey how grateful I am.
Thank you for your kindness, and your early reply to this letter will be highly appreciated.
询问信 开头句
Please share with me some specific information about your schedule. Expecting to hear from you as soon as possible.
What deserves my special attention is whether there is enough time for shopping.
询问信 尾句 1. 如果您能给我提供一些这门课的相关资料，那就再好不过了。
Nothing can be better if you can take the trouble to offer me some relevant materials about the course. 2. 感谢您的好意，如果能及时回复此信，将不胜感激。
6.Please do not hesitate to let me know if there is anything I could do to pay you back.
7.My true gratitude is beyond the words’ description./ Words fail to express my gratitude deep in my heart ./ No words are strong enough to convey how grateful I am.
Thank you for your kindness, and your early reply to this letter will be highly appreciated.
询问信 开头句
Please share with me some specific information about your schedule. Expecting to hear from you as soon as possible.
What deserves my special attention is whether there is enough time for shopping.
询问信 尾句 1. 如果您能给我提供一些这门课的相关资料，那就再好不过了。
Nothing can be better if you can take the trouble to offer me some relevant materials about the course. 2. 感谢您的好意，如果能及时回复此信，将不胜感激。
高考英语书面表达升级高级句式精讲课件：专题01 高级句式升级(定语从句专项训练)
定语从句专项训练距离高考还有一段时间，不少有经验的老师都会提醒考生，愈是临近高考，能否咬紧牙关、学会自我调节，态度是否主动积极，安排是否科学合理，能不能保持良好的心态、以饱满的情绪迎接挑战，其效果往往大不一样。
以下是本人从事10多年教学经验总结出的以下学习资料，希望可以帮助大家提高答题的正确率，希望对你有所帮助，有志者事竟成！养成良好的答题习惯，是决定高考英语成败的决定性因素之一。
做题前，要认真阅读题目要求、题干和选项，并对答案内容作出合理预测;答题时，切忌跟着感觉走，最好按照题目序号来做，不会的或存在疑问的，要做好标记，要善于发现，找到题目的题眼所在，规范答题，书写工整;答题完毕时，要认真检查，查漏补缺，纠正错误。
总之，在最后的复习阶段，学生们不要加大练习量。
在这个时候，学生要尽快找到适合自己的答题方式，最重要的是以平常心去面对考试。
英语最后的复习要树立信心，考试的时候遇到难题要想“别人也难”，遇到容易的则要想“细心审题”。
越到最后，考生越要回归基础，单词最好再梳理一遍，这样有利于提高阅读理解的效率。
另附高考复习方法和考前30天冲刺复习方法。
一、关系代词who, whom, whose, that, which, as引导的定语从句1.我们都知道，《一起成长》这部优秀的英文短片看起来很有趣。
__________________________________________________________________________ __________________________________________________________________________ 2.她就是这样一个总是乐于助人的女孩。
__________________________________________________________________________ 3.我们先摘颜色最漂亮的，然后是成熟柔软的。
高考英语作文常用黄金句型课件
• 4. 在各种 之中？… 在各种…之中 之中？ • • • • Among various kinds of …，… ， = Of all the …， … ， 在各种运动中我尤其喜欢慢跑。 例︰在各种运动中我尤其喜欢慢跑。 Among various kinds of sports， I like ， jogging in particular.
句型活用
• 就我所知，学校将在下学期每周增加一节 就我 know, one more PE lesson will be added each week in our school from next semester. • 每个人都知道，老虎的屁股摸不得。 每个人都知道，老虎的屁股摸不得。 • Everyone knows that the butts of a tiger is not easily touched.
• 8. (A) 每个人都知道 每个人都知道… • Everyone knows (that)子句 子句 • (B) 就我所知 就我所知… • As far as my knowledge is concerned， … ， • 就我所知下列方法对我帮助很大。 例︰就我所知下列方法对我帮助很大。 • As far as my knowledge is concerned， the following ways are of ， great help to me.
句型活用
• 不用说，好的开始是成功的一半。 • It goes without saying that well begun is half done. • 很显然，经济的发展取决于良好政策的执 很显然， 行。 • Obviously, the development of the economy depends on the performance of beneficial politics.
2025届高考英语书面表达句型提升策略与实例课件(共16张PPT)
ormance last night was very good. ➢The performance last night was really amazing/fantastic/fascinating. 2. He went home directly after school. ➢He headed home directly after school. 3.The program made our life interesting. ➢The program enriched our life. 4. You should say sorry to him. > You should apologize to him.
4. I _______ to tell you that I can’t make it..我很抱歉.. 5. I ______ ______ much trouble in writing an essay…. 遇到困难 6. Your prompt _______ will be highly a________. 如能尽快回复将不胜感
3. 用高级的句型代替普通的表达
• 1. I realized that I wouldn’t pass the exam. • > It occurred to me that it would fail the exam. • 2. I’m very happy to attend the competition. • > It’s my pleasure to take part in the competition. • 3. I want to go to the party very much. • > I can’t wait to go to the party. • 4. He does best in our class in math. • > When it comes to math, he is second to none in our class.
4. I _______ to tell you that I can’t make it..我很抱歉.. 5. I ______ ______ much trouble in writing an essay…. 遇到困难 6. Your prompt _______ will be highly a________. 如能尽快回复将不胜感
3. 用高级的句型代替普通的表达
• 1. I realized that I wouldn’t pass the exam. • > It occurred to me that it would fail the exam. • 2. I’m very happy to attend the competition. • > It’s my pleasure to take part in the competition. • 3. I want to go to the party very much. • > I can’t wait to go to the party. • 4. He does best in our class in math. • > When it comes to math, he is second to none in our class.
高考英语作文训练4 高级句式课件(共27张)
连贯词 5. 注意卷面整洁。
挑战极限
---高级句式写作
一. 巧用非谓语动词 用非谓语动词会使句子显得更简洁、更
级，必能获得阅卷老师较好的印象，为自己 的作文加分。请比较： 1. 去年在洪水中被毁的那座桥已被重新修了。 普通：The bridge which was destroyed in the flood last year has been rebuilt. 高级：The bridge destroyed in the flood Last year has been rebuilt.
挑战极限
---高级句式写作
一. 巧用非谓语动词 3. 他回到家，发现门是锁着的。
普通：When he arrived home, he Found the door was looked.
高级：Arriving home, he found the door was locked.
挑战极限
---高级句式写作
---高级句式写作
四. 巧用名词性从句
表从
4）今天讨论的题目是未来的学校是什么样。
The discussion topic for today is
What schools will be like in the…
5）我们举行了一场辩论，讨论是否应克隆人类。
We had a debate on whether
挑战极限
---高级句式写作
二. 巧用倒装句
谁也不喜欢说话“颠三倒四”，但是有时打破 常规会收到意想不到的效果。倒装句能够起到
加强语气的作用，会让阅卷老师对所强调的内容有 较深的印象。请比较下列的句子。
挑战极限
---高级句式写作
二. 巧用倒装句
挑战极限
---高级句式写作
一. 巧用非谓语动词 用非谓语动词会使句子显得更简洁、更
级，必能获得阅卷老师较好的印象，为自己 的作文加分。请比较： 1. 去年在洪水中被毁的那座桥已被重新修了。 普通：The bridge which was destroyed in the flood last year has been rebuilt. 高级：The bridge destroyed in the flood Last year has been rebuilt.
挑战极限
---高级句式写作
一. 巧用非谓语动词 3. 他回到家，发现门是锁着的。
普通：When he arrived home, he Found the door was looked.
高级：Arriving home, he found the door was locked.
挑战极限
---高级句式写作
---高级句式写作
四. 巧用名词性从句
表从
4）今天讨论的题目是未来的学校是什么样。
The discussion topic for today is
What schools will be like in the…
5）我们举行了一场辩论，讨论是否应克隆人类。
We had a debate on whether
挑战极限
---高级句式写作
二. 巧用倒装句
谁也不喜欢说话“颠三倒四”，但是有时打破 常规会收到意想不到的效果。倒装句能够起到
加强语气的作用，会让阅卷老师对所强调的内容有 较深的印象。请比较下列的句子。
挑战极限
---高级句式写作
二. 巧用倒装句
高考英语作文训练4 高级句式课件(共27张)
四. 巧用名词性从句
---高级句式写作
1）这就是我能做到的。表从 This is what I can do. 主从 2）他是否能和我们一起去还不肯定。 Whether he can go with us or not is not certain. 3）未来的生活是什么样很难预测。 主从 What life will be like in the future is difficult to predict.
挑战极限
---高级句式写作
一. 巧用非谓语动词 用非谓语动词会使句子显得更简洁、更 级，必能获得阅卷老师较好的印象，为自己 的作文加分。请比较： 1. 去年在洪水中被毁的那座桥已被重新修了。 普通：The bridge which was destroyed in the flood last year has been rebuilt. 高级：The bridge destroyed in the flood Last year has been rebuilt.
---高级句式写作
---高级句式写作
五. 其他 完整的句子中可以加进定语从句、同位语从 句或者是插入语，对内容进行补充说明。加 进这些内容后，句子更复杂，意思也更丰富。 请看下面的句子。
---高级句式写作
请看： 1）你昨天见到的那个人是我的一个朋友。 The man whom you met yesterday is a friend of mine. 2）我不喜欢你读的那本书。 I don’t enjoy the book you are reading. 3）我想他是一个老师。
挑战极限
二. 巧用倒装句
---高级句式写作
3. 只有改变我们的生活方式，我们才能拯救 地球。 普通: We can save the earth only by changing the way we live. 高级: Only by changing the way we live can we save the earth.
高考英语作文技巧(21张PPT)-经典通用课件资料
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常用句子
• It can be seen from this that there is no difficulty in the world we cannot overcome. • These volunteer’s activities can help us to gain some social experience and make good sense of our
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• I think • I firmly believe that … • In my opinion, • Personally speaking,… • As far as I am concerned, … • From my point of view, ….
表达个人观点的用语
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How to summarize an argumentation
Skill: 议论三步法 论点—观点 主题句 论据— （事例）
结论
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典型模板
评论某一事物利与弊的套用格式
1. 提出要评论的事物或观点. 2. 分别陈述利与弊(或不同的观点) 3. 归纳得出作者的结论. 4. a. 有定论的,作者可明确表态(赞成或反对) 5. b. 争议较大的或尚无定论的, 可不明确表态, 提出扬长避短的方法,也可以平衡其利弊,提出某种
4) From what has been discussed above, we may draw the conclusion that… All in all , In conclusion, On the whole
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高考英语续写之高分句式(二)课件-2024届高三下学期英语作文复习专项
3.With growing fear, Elli and I packed up our camp as quickly as possible. 随着恐惧的增加，艾莉和我以最快的速度收拾了我们的 营地。
4.With growing anxiety, I shouted at the top of my lung, “Help!” 随 着焦虑的增加，我大声喊道：“救命！
2．David sat still with a deep breath, wondering what to do next. I said gently and quietly，“No one can change your mind, except yourself. If you desire to challenge yourself, there is nothing to do with others' thoughts.”大卫静静地坐 着，深呼吸，不知道下一步该做什么。我轻轻地说：“除了你自己，没有 人能改变你的想法。如果你想挑战自己，那与别人的想法无关。”
表示“心里想”场景 【句式1】An inner voice told sb that...内心的声音告诉某人…… 【句式2】An inner voice whispered, “…”/ Sb thought / said to oneself, “…” 【句式3】Doing sth, sb felt as if sb did sth / sb had done sth 1.An inner voice whispered, “Stay clear-headed. I can make it.” 一个内心的声音 低声说：“保持清醒的头脑。我能做到。 2.An inner whispered, “You can do this.” 一个内在的人低声说：“你可以做到。 3.Looking at the man, she felt as if she had known him for years. 看着这个男人， 她觉得自己好像认识他很多年了。 4.Talking about pyramids, he felt as if he had seen them himself. 说起金字塔， 他觉得自己好像亲眼见过金字塔。
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普通: To my surprise, my mother was sitting on the stage.
高级:
To my surprise, on the stage was sitting my mother.
挑战极限
---高级句式写作
二. 巧用倒装句 倒装句常用的几种句型：
1. Never shall I forget these days. 2. Only in this way can we learn
挑战极限
---高级句式写作
二. 巧用倒装句
5. 他是如此诚实，我们都信任他。
普通: He is so honest that we all trust him.
高级:
So honest is he that we all trust him.
挑战极限
---高级句式写作
二. 巧用倒装句
6. 让我吃惊的是，坐在台上的竟是我的妈妈。
挑战极限
---高级句式写作
一. 巧用非谓语动词 2. 我不喜欢排长队，那是浪费时间。
普通：I don’t like waiting in a long queue. It is a waste of time.
高级：Waiting in a long queue is a waste of time.
it well. 3. Not until yesterday did I
realize it. 4. So careless was he that he
挑战极限
---高级句式写作
二. 巧用倒装句
3. 只有改变我们的生活方式，我们才能拯救 地球。
普通: We can save the earth only by changing the way we live. 高级: Only by changing the way we live can we save the earth.
挑战极限
---高级句式写作
一. 巧用非谓语动词 用非谓语动词会使句子显得更简洁、更
级，必能获得阅卷老师较好的印象，为自己 的作文加分。请比较： 1. 去年在洪水中被毁的那座桥已被重新修了。 普通：The bridge which was destroyed in the flood last year has been rebuilt. 高级：The bridge destroyed in the flood Last year has been rebuilt.
挑战极限
---高级句式写作
一. 巧用非谓语动词 5. 她发现手提包不见了之后，就去警察局
求助。 普通：After she had found that her handbag was missing, she went to the police for help.
高级：Having found that her handbag was missing, she went to the police for help.
一. பைடு நூலகம்用非谓语动词 4. 虽然萨姆被一个人留在家里，但他一点也
不害怕。 普通：Although he was left alone at home, Sam did not feel afraid at all.
高级：Left alone at home, Sam did not feel afraid at all.
挑战极限
---高级句式写作
二. 巧用倒装句
谁也不喜欢说话“颠三倒四”，但是有时打破 常规会收到意想不到的效果。倒装句能够起到
加强语气的作用，会让阅卷老师对所强调的内容有 较深的印象。请比较下列的句子。
挑战极限
---高级句式写作
二. 巧用倒装句
1. 工厂绝不应该把废物往河海里倾倒。 普通: Factories should never pour waste into rivers or seas.
挑战极限
---高级句式写作
一. 巧用非谓语动词 3. 他回到家，发现门是锁着的。
普通：When he arrived home, he Found the door was looked.
高级：Arriving home, he found the door was locked.
挑战极限
---高级句式写作
高级: Never should factories pour waste into rivers or seas.
挑战极限
---高级句式写作
二. 巧用倒装句
2. 被污染的水既不能用来饮用，也不能用来 灌溉。
普通: Polluted water cannot be used for Drinking or irrigation. 高级: Polluted water cannot be used for drinking, nor can it be used for…
写作专练
1. 脚踏实地 －－ 练习基础句子 2.2. 妙笔生辉 －－ 练习常用句型 3.3挑. 战挑极战限极限－－－练习练高习级高句级子句子 4.4. 高分杀手锏－－ 谋篇与连贯 5.5. 最后冲刺－－ 作文模板训练
写作专练
自我提示和审查： 1. 重视句子谓语部分（时态，语态等） 2.2. 使用几处高级词汇及短语，展示亮点 3.3. 一两个复合句，谚语、格言、比喻等 4.4. 谋篇时起承上启下和滋润作用的 5. 连贯词 6.5. 注意卷面整洁。
挑战极限
---高级句式写作
一. 巧用非谓语动词 6. 我不知道该怎么办，特地写信向你请教。
普通：I don’t know what to do. I’m writing to ask you for advice.
高级： Not knowing what to do, I’m writing to ask you for advice.
挑战极限
---高级句式写作
二. 巧用倒装句
4. 我的朋友直到昨天下午四点半才到。
普通:
My friend didn’t arrive until 4:30 yesterday afternoon.
高级: Not until 4:30 yesterday afternoon did my friend arrive.
高级:
To my surprise, on the stage was sitting my mother.
挑战极限
---高级句式写作
二. 巧用倒装句 倒装句常用的几种句型：
1. Never shall I forget these days. 2. Only in this way can we learn
挑战极限
---高级句式写作
二. 巧用倒装句
5. 他是如此诚实，我们都信任他。
普通: He is so honest that we all trust him.
高级:
So honest is he that we all trust him.
挑战极限
---高级句式写作
二. 巧用倒装句
6. 让我吃惊的是，坐在台上的竟是我的妈妈。
挑战极限
---高级句式写作
一. 巧用非谓语动词 2. 我不喜欢排长队，那是浪费时间。
普通：I don’t like waiting in a long queue. It is a waste of time.
高级：Waiting in a long queue is a waste of time.
it well. 3. Not until yesterday did I
realize it. 4. So careless was he that he
挑战极限
---高级句式写作
二. 巧用倒装句
3. 只有改变我们的生活方式，我们才能拯救 地球。
普通: We can save the earth only by changing the way we live. 高级: Only by changing the way we live can we save the earth.
挑战极限
---高级句式写作
一. 巧用非谓语动词 用非谓语动词会使句子显得更简洁、更
级，必能获得阅卷老师较好的印象，为自己 的作文加分。请比较： 1. 去年在洪水中被毁的那座桥已被重新修了。 普通：The bridge which was destroyed in the flood last year has been rebuilt. 高级：The bridge destroyed in the flood Last year has been rebuilt.
挑战极限
---高级句式写作
一. 巧用非谓语动词 5. 她发现手提包不见了之后，就去警察局
求助。 普通：After she had found that her handbag was missing, she went to the police for help.
高级：Having found that her handbag was missing, she went to the police for help.
一. பைடு நூலகம்用非谓语动词 4. 虽然萨姆被一个人留在家里，但他一点也
不害怕。 普通：Although he was left alone at home, Sam did not feel afraid at all.
高级：Left alone at home, Sam did not feel afraid at all.
挑战极限
---高级句式写作
二. 巧用倒装句
谁也不喜欢说话“颠三倒四”，但是有时打破 常规会收到意想不到的效果。倒装句能够起到
加强语气的作用，会让阅卷老师对所强调的内容有 较深的印象。请比较下列的句子。
挑战极限
---高级句式写作
二. 巧用倒装句
1. 工厂绝不应该把废物往河海里倾倒。 普通: Factories should never pour waste into rivers or seas.
挑战极限
---高级句式写作
一. 巧用非谓语动词 3. 他回到家，发现门是锁着的。
普通：When he arrived home, he Found the door was looked.
高级：Arriving home, he found the door was locked.
挑战极限
---高级句式写作
高级: Never should factories pour waste into rivers or seas.
挑战极限
---高级句式写作
二. 巧用倒装句
2. 被污染的水既不能用来饮用，也不能用来 灌溉。
普通: Polluted water cannot be used for Drinking or irrigation. 高级: Polluted water cannot be used for drinking, nor can it be used for…
写作专练
1. 脚踏实地 －－ 练习基础句子 2.2. 妙笔生辉 －－ 练习常用句型 3.3挑. 战挑极战限极限－－－练习练高习级高句级子句子 4.4. 高分杀手锏－－ 谋篇与连贯 5.5. 最后冲刺－－ 作文模板训练
写作专练
自我提示和审查： 1. 重视句子谓语部分（时态，语态等） 2.2. 使用几处高级词汇及短语，展示亮点 3.3. 一两个复合句，谚语、格言、比喻等 4.4. 谋篇时起承上启下和滋润作用的 5. 连贯词 6.5. 注意卷面整洁。
挑战极限
---高级句式写作
一. 巧用非谓语动词 6. 我不知道该怎么办，特地写信向你请教。
普通：I don’t know what to do. I’m writing to ask you for advice.
高级： Not knowing what to do, I’m writing to ask you for advice.
挑战极限
---高级句式写作
二. 巧用倒装句
4. 我的朋友直到昨天下午四点半才到。
普通:
My friend didn’t arrive until 4:30 yesterday afternoon.
高级: Not until 4:30 yesterday afternoon did my friend arrive.