雅思7分大作文范文批改和解析

More men and women decide to have children later in life. why is it happening ? what influences does it have on society and family life ？cause and consequences It seems to be an increasingly widespread concern that young citizens like to have their babies later in their life. The internet and ken, I think, should be responsible for this phenomenon. Intense rivalryUnlike baby boomers and X generation, who gave birth to their children at an earlier age, the Millennials are inclined to put off having babies.Baby boomers 1946-1965X generation 1965-1975Y generation/Millennials 1980-20003Paradoxically,Appalling =suprisingCompromiseConflictsIn the past, it was not un common to see a couple of young people have their first kid in their early 20s. T his is no longer the case. Nowadays, both men and women have to work to cover increasing costs of living. Moreover, due to globalization and booming population, modern people have to compete with qualified job applications/applicants. So, this intense social rivalry is one of the root causes of why young couples are less likely to have children in their early age.Another important factor contributing to this phenomenon is the advanced technology. For example, smart phones and the internet help people finish their jobs efficiently on one hand, but on the other hand they are totally obsessed with their phones. Too much di stractio ns occupie these young lovers’energy and therefore they are less willing to give brith at their young age.Of course, this issue is bringing some negative effects to both family life and society. Companies who main busiess focused on providing products and services to infants and toddlers will have less revenue and eventually bankcrupt, if this phenomenon/trend continues. Also, it can be seen that one day, the society is lack of workforce, which will influence the development of a country. Even more appalling, this trend will accelerate the development of aging population.。

社会类07.01.06The world of work is changing rapidly. Working conditions today are not the same as before and people no longer rely on taking one job for life. Discuss thepossible causes for these changes and give your suggestions on how people should prepare for work in the future.07.04.28 =04.09.18Air transport is increasingly used to export types of fruits and vegetables to countries where they cannot be grown or are out of season. Some people say itis a good thing, but other people think it can't be justified. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.07.06.02 ≈ 06.05.20Many developing countries are currently expanding their tourist industries Why is this the case? Is it a positive development?07.06.16In many countries traditional foods are being replaced by international fastfoods. This is having a negative effect on both families and societies. To what extent do you agree or disagree?07.07.26 （加考）Team activities can teach more skills for life than those activities which are played alone. To what extent do you agree or disagree?07.08.25Some people say that it is the responsibility of individuals to save money for their own care after they retire. To what extent do you agree or disagree? 07.09.08The unlimited use of cars may cause many problems. What are those problems? In order to reduce the problems, should we discourage people to use cars? 07.09.20 （北京、杭州、深圳）Many countries spend a lot of money in art. Some people think investment in artis necessary, but others say money is better spent on improving health and education. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.07.09.22Higher education can be funded in several ways including the following three:1. All costs are paid by the government.2. All costs are paid by the student.3. All costs are paid by the student using loans from the government that mustbe repaid after graduation.Discuss the benefits of each option. Which is the best one?07.10.06 （加考）Today’s children are living under more pressure from the society than children in the past. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?07.10.13Some employers think that formal academic qualifications are more importantthan life experiences and personal qualities when they look for an employee. Why is it the case? Is it a positive or negative development?07.10.25Some people think the only purpose of prison is to punish crime. Others think it has other functions. Discuss the two views and give your opinions.07.12.15Today, it is common that TV news programmes show the images of disasters and violence to the public. Discuss the reasons and the effects on the individual and the society.教育类07.01.13Some people think universities should provide graduates with the knowledge and skills needed in the workplace in the future. Others think the true function of the university is to give access to knowledge for its own sake. What do you think are the main functions of a university?07.03.03 ≈04.12.04Some people think that schools should select pupils according to their academic abilities, while others believe that it is better to have pupils with different abilities study together. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.07.05.12 ≈06.09.23Some people believe that some unpaid community service should be a compulsory part of high school programmes (e.g. working in a charity, improving the relationship of neighbourhood or teaching sports to children) To what extent do you agree or disagree?07.05.19Computers are increasingly used in education. In which areas do you think are computers more important and in which areas are teachers more important?07.07.07In some countries, secondary schools aim to provide a general education across a range of subjects. In others, children focus on a narrow range of subjects related to a particular career. For today's world, which system is appropriate?07.07.14In the last, lecture lectures were used as a way of teaching large numbers of student, but now with the development of technology for education, many people think there is no justification for attending lectures. To what extent do you agree or disagree?07.09.01Some people think that studying in a college or university is the best way for students to prepare for their future career. But others think they should leave school as soon as possible to develop their career through work experience. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.07.10.20Some people think it is better for children to begin to learn a foreign language at primary school than at secondary school. What's your opinion? Do you think the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?07.12.08Many people believe that main aim for university education is help graduates to find better job, while some people believe that university education has wider benefit for individual and society. Discuss both view and give your opinion.政府类07.01.20 =05.07.09Some people say the government should pay for the health care and education,but others say that it is not the government’s responsibility. Discuss both views and give your opinion.07.03.22 （深圳加考）Some people think that the government should provide assistance to all kinds of artists including painters, musicians and poets, etc. However, other people think that is a waste of money. Discuss both views and give your opinion. 07.11.03The government should pay for the course fees for everyone who wants to study at the university. To what extent do you agree or disagree?环境类Individuals can do nothing to improve the environment. Only governments and large companies can make a difference. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?07.12.01We have entered a throw-away society and fill the environment with rubbish.What are the causes and what are your solutions?科技类07.02.10 ≈05.11.26Maintaining public libraries is a waste of money since computer technology is now replacing their functions. To what extent do you agree or disagree?07.03.10With the increase in the use of mobile phones and computers, fewer people are writing letters. Some people think that the traditional skill of writing letters willdisappear completely. To what extent do you agree or disagree? How important do you think is letter-writing?07.03.31 =05.02.26People can perform everyday tasks, such as shopping and banking as well asbusiness transactions, without meeting other people face-to-face. What are the effects of this on an individual and the society as a whole?07.06.09Some people claim that public museums and art galleries will not be needed because people can see historical objects and works of art by using a computer. Do you agree or disagree with this opinion?07.08.11It is known to all that the technological and scientific advances have made greater changes to the range and quality of our food. Some people regard it asan improvement while others believe that the change is harmful. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.广告媒体类07.04.14The society would benefit from a ban on all forms of advertising because it serves no useful purpose, and can even be damaging. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?Consumers are faced with increasing numbers of advertisements from competing companies. To what extent do you think are consumers influenced by advertisements? What measures can be taken to protect them?07.11.17Nowadays, a large amount of advertising is aimed at children, some people think there are lots of negative effects for children, and should ban it. To what extent you agree or disagree?能源类07.06.28 ( 加考)The natural resources such as oil, forests and fresh water are being consumed at an alarming rate. What problems does it cause? How can we solve these problems?07.08.16（加考）The consumption of the resources on the earth is increasing at an alarming rate and above a dangerous level. What are the causes of this? What can be done to reduce it?国际类07.07.21As we are facing more and more problems which affect the whole planet, good relationships between different countries are becoming more important than ever before. To what extent do you agree or disagree?07.11.24Some people believe that giving aid to poorer countries has more negative effects than the positive effects. To what extent do you agree or disagree?语言文化类07·08.18Some people think that we should invent a new language for international communication. Do the benefits of this outweigh the problems?。

雅思7分作文1．The Internet has dramatically altered our lives over the past few decades. Although some of these changes have been negative, the overall effect of this technology has been positive. What are your opinions onthis?The Internet has brought significant changes to our lives in recent years. Yet, there remains some disagreement as to whether the overall effect of this technology has been positive or negative. While there are certainly valid arguments to the contrary, I personally believe that the benefits of the Internet far outweigh its drawbacks. These benefits are twofold.First of all, it is an indisputable fact that the Internet has revolutionized the way we communicate. Despite therisk of social isolation—a problem occasionally seen in people who spend too much time at their computer terminal rather than relating to people in the real world--- most of us have benefited greatly from e-mail and internet chat programs like MSN Messenger. These incredibly useful and powerful tools of communication facilitate both contact with loved ones in faraway places and global trade.Equally importantly, though, the Internet has placed the entire world (and all of the information in it) at our fingertips. In earlier times, conducting research entailed long hours searching library shelves. Now, however, the same information can be accessed at the click of a button. Admittedly, not all of the information available on the Internet is reliable or helpful---there is a vast amount of material online that some would consider offensive or dangerous, ranging from pornography to instructions on how to make bombs. Nonetheless, I would contend thatthis free flow of information has generally been a very positive development.By way of conclusion, I once again reaffirm my position that the Internet has had a positive impact on modernlife because of its influence on communication and the flow of information.2．Fast food is now universally available in most countries and is becoming increasingly popular. Some feel thatthis is a positive trend, while others do not. What are your opinions on this?The past 50 years have seen a dramatic increase in the availability of fast food. Some laud its convenience and relatively low cost; however, in this essay I intend to argue that this kind of food is detrimental both to the individuals that consume it and to society at large. There are two primary reasons for this.First of that, it is an undeniable fact that consuming fast food to excess results in serious health problems. Foodssuch as fried chicken, hamburgers and chips---which are incredibly high in fat and salt---are responsible for such ailments as high blood pressure, obesity and heart disease. Moreover, although I certainly agree that fast food isboth affordable and convenient, the cost and inconvenience of treating the illnesses it causes in later life are significant. In order words, while fast food is beneficial in the short term, its long-term effects are generally negative.Further and even more importantly, though, some fast food chains deliberately attempt to attract children in order to shape their future eating habits. One particularly good example of this is the character Ronald McDonald---the bright clothes and smile of the McDonald clown are a beacon to children. Having grown up eating in McDonald restaurants, people are likely to continue eating there throughout their adult lives. It is also interesting to note that McDonald provides playgrounds and frequently holds children’s birthday parties in order to attract young children and their parents.By way of conclusion, I believe that fast food will continue to become more popular as the pace of life increases. Given the health risks associated with this trend, I believe that public education campaigns warning people aboutthe dangers of fast food would be warranted.3．International tourism is now more common than ever before. Some feel that this is a position trend, while others do not. What are your opinions on this?The past 50 years have seen a considerable increase in global tourism. Despite the undeniable economic prosperity it has brought to many host countries, I would argue that the overall impact of international holidaymaking has in fact been negative. Two of the primary drawbacks associated with this trend are as follows.First of all, global tourism tends to export many negative aspects of western culture. Since it is only the wealthy who can afford to travel abroad, developing countries like Thailand and Indonesia have become the playgrounds of tourists from more affluent ones. In many such nations, this influx of mainly western tourists has brought with it problems such as prostitution as well as alcoholism and drug abuse. Admittedly, international tourism does have the potential to foster greater understanding and tolerance between people of different cultures. However, this is unlikely to occur while it remains such a potent symbol of western cultural domination and moral decadence.Even more disturbing, though, is the environmental degradation that international tourism has caused in many parts of the world. One particularly salient example of this is the Great Barrier Reef in Australia --- the countless boats, divers and snorkelers that have visited the reef over the past few decades have gradually destroyed vast sections of coral. Similarly, world renowned Kuta Beach in Bali has become heavily polluted in recent years. In order to be sustainable, greater regulation of global tourism is required.In conclusion, the challenges presented by the booming international tourist industry are numerous and complex. Although they are by no means insurmountable, it is highly unlikely that they will be resolved in the foreseeable future.4. Nowadays, more people are migrating to other countries than ever before. In order to become integrated into society in their adopted countries, immigrants should abandon their old ways and adapt to local customs and codes of behavior. Do you agree or disagree?These days, it seems that more people are migrating to other countries than ever before. This raises certain questions about the integration of newcomers into society. Although there are valid arguments to the contrary, inthis paper I will argue that it is the responsibility of immigrants to adapt to accepted rules of behavior in their adopted country, both written and unwritten. The reasons for this are twofold.Firstly, it is vitally important that newcomers observe the laws of their adopted country for the sake of social order. Imagine the chaos that would ensure if people refused to drive on the same side of the road. It is, therefore, necessary for all immigrants to ensure that they observe the law in their new country regardless of any differencesto laws in their home country. Two further instances of practices which are permitted in some countries but prohibited in orders are the possession of firearms and gambling.Secondly and more importantly, though, in order to maintain societal cohesion it is essential that newcomers respect the social norms of their adopted country. Of course, having a mixture of different cultures and traditionsgives a country colour and vibrancy; however, I would contend that too much cultural diversity undermines a society by alienating people from each other. It is my belief that similarities unite people, whereas differences havea tendency to divide. A strong society is a homogenous society with shared values and goals.By way of conclusion, I believe that this issue is likely to become even more important in the future as borders between countries become increasingly blurred. It, therefore, demands our further consideration.5. Men and women are difficult in terms of their characteristics and abilities. For this reason,some jobs are better done by men and others by women. Do you agree or disagree?These days, it seems that more women are entering “male occupations” than ever before and vice vers some still hold to the conservative view that certain jobs are better performed by men and others by women, it ismy personal belief that people of either sex are capable of doing any job effectively. The reasons for my positionare as follows.First of all, I believe it is a mistake to base our views on broad generalizations about the characteristics of menand women as such stereotypes are often inaccurate. Although there are certainly traits which are typical of menand others which are typical of women, there are exceptions to every rule. Not all women are physically weak, justas not all men are poor interpersonal communicators; conventional gender roles are not appropriate for everybody.If a man or woman desires to pursue a career which is traditionally reserved for the opposite sex, I believe he/sheshould be provided the opportunity to prove him/herself capable.Secondly, I would contend that the presence of both males and females in a workplace brings a sense ofbalance. Men and women frequently, though by no means always, have different methods of doing things. Ratherthan judging these differences to be weaknesses, I feel that we should view them as opportunities for innovationand the discovery of more effective and efficient work practices. A person’s weaknesses can thus be transformedinto strengths.In summary, I once again reaffirm my position that both male and female employees are an asset to anyindustry and as our stereotypes about men and women are not always appropriate, we must not discourage anyonefrom choosing an occupation simply because of his/her gender.6. Smoking is a major cause of serious illness and death throughout the world today. In theinterest of public health, governments should ban cigarettes and other tobacco products. Do youagree or disagree?There are widely differing views on the issue of whether tobacco should be banned or not.Some people would suggest that it is their right to smoke and that prohibiting cigarettes would be aviolation of their civil liberties; however, I personally believe that tobacco should indeed be madeillegal. There are two principal reasons for this.One point which I believe to be absolutely pivotal is the fact that tobacco is a drug. Themajority of governments around the world take a prohibitionist approach to the problem of substanceI believeabuse. If governments wish to be consistent in pursuing their “war on drugs”, therefore,they must ban tobacco as well. This is particularly heroin and marijuana---have legitimate medical applications, while tobacco has none.However, perhaps the strongest argument in favor of banning cigarettes and other tobaccoproducts is that of public health. It is an irrefutable fact that smoking leads to lung cancer and othersuch potentially fatal diseases. Pro-smoking groups would no doubt argue that each individual hasthe right to determine what goes into his/her own body. Nevertheless, I would suggest that theinterests and rights of society at large must override those of the individual. The medical treatmentthat smokers require is often incredibly costly, and it is frequently governments and society thatcover these costs rather than the individual smoker. Hence, I feel that laws prohibiting smokingwould be entirely justified.In reality, of course, the widespread prohibition of smoking is unlikely in the near future. However, given the seriousness o f the problems that it causes, I believe that this should be theultimate goal.7. Trying to save endangered animal species from extinction is a waste of valuable resources. Do you agree or disagree?The issue of whether we should attempt to save endangered species from extinction or not is certainly a contentious one. Despite the arguments of some people that such animals serve no useful purpose and should be allowed to die out just as many others (including the dinosaurs) have in the past, it is my personal belief that they should in fact be preserved. Two of the principal reasons for this are as follows.Firstly, it is vital that we appreciate the importance of endangered species in maintaining the balance of nature. Ecosystems are delicate arrangements where plants and animals all depend on each other for survival. The disappearance or introduction of any animal species disrupts the balance and negatively impacts upon other plants and animals by breaking the food chain and altering the habitat in which they live. Such imbalances frequently return to haunt us in unexpected ways. Just as rabbits that were introduced to Australia soon after European settlement now compete with native species for food and destroy farmers’ crops, the extinction of a predator can cause plagues by allowing its prey to multiply unchecked. Therefore, since ecological change constitutes a potential risk to us and our environment, it is clearly I our own interests to protect endangered species.Yet, perhaps the strongest argument in favor of preserving endangered species is that all life has intrinsic value; even if endangered species are not useful to us in any practical way they should be preserved nevertheless. Further, given that we humans are responsible for destroying the natural habitat of many endangered animals, we should make every possible effort to save them.In conclusion, I once again restate my view that saving endangered species is worthwhile. Not only do theyhelp to maintain the balance of nature, but they also have value in and of themselves.8. With divorce rates and family breakdowns increasing globally, it is generally accepted that families today are not as close as they used to be. Discuss the causes of this problem and offer some possible solutions to it.Divorce and family breakdown were virtually unheard of just 100 years ago. Now, however, almost half of all marriages fail. This phenomenon is symptomatic of the growing distance between family members in modern society. In this essay, I intend to explore the sources of this problem along with some possible solutions to it.Chief among the causes of this problem is the modern lifestyle. Today’s parents have to work harder than those of previous generations to support their families. Traditionally, one parent assumed the role of breadwinner, while the other---typically the mother----acted as the homemaker. Recently, though, double income families have become the norm. Consequently, an increasing number of children now grow up in a parentless environment. Little wonder, then, that they feel alienated. Another contributing factor is the passive and solitary nature of many modern forms of entertainment.In order to resolve this sense of alienation within families, I believe we must first address its root causes. Perhaps the most effective method of doing this would be for governments to offer financial incentives to parentswho choose to remain at home and take care of their families. Admittedly, such incentives would probably not full compensate couples for lost income; however, they would at least soften the hardship of living on a single incomeand provide an alternative for parents who would rather remain at home but are unable to do so because of financial constraints. One further measure would be to promote more interactive leisure activities in the community through public education campaigns.In conclusion, I believe that this is clearly a problem of such complexity that to no solution is likely in theshort term. However, I believe that the measures outlined above would constitute a good first step.。

雅思大作文之语言文化类7分作文题目：有人认为学习语言是为了在国外旅行/工作，其它人认为还有别的目的。

讨论两种观点并且给到你的观点Some people say that the only reason for learning a foreign language is in order to travel to or work in a foreign country.Others say that these are not the only reasons why someone should learn a foreign language.Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.同替Learn/master/pick up/speak/handleAt present /contemporarily /nowadays改开头It is true that presently there are some controversies in the purpose of foreign language studying.While it seems natural to some people that travelling or job-seeking tend to be the sole reason, I would argue that historical and anthropological research are also crucial reasons for learning a foreign language.1, Some people who are in favor of learning language for travel and work purpose base their ground on the fact that language is just a tool for their personal development.2, That is to say, / This means that mastering a foreign language is extremely helpful during trips abroad.3, When travelling overseas, communicating with local folks with their language fluently is more likely to generate a genuine and immersive experience.4, Besides, for job-seekers, a sharpened foreign language skill serves as a weapon to win the potential recruitment opportunity since nowadays an international language such as English, has already been incorporated into daily work5Computer engineers, for example, rely heavily on English to accomplish various sorts of programming and update their knowledge continually.6, Consequently, those who could combine the expertise learned in mother country with a foreign language could gain more access to international openings and quickly adapt to the new job environment once being hired.There are, however, more intellectual reasons weshouldn't neglect.For historians and archeologists who research a foreign country’s history, directly reading the original works is a vital and inevitable part for the truth that language is more than just a way to communicate.Specifically, language is also an integral part of its native speaker’s culture and civilization, and there are unique cultural features hidden in words and phrases in oral or written forms of minority languages.In addition, certain characterizations of a language may help decode the mystery of its native people's settling patterns or migration routes.编不下去了，不是语言学专业的不建议这么写Recent studies show that, in ancient time, when different tribes of people were geographically close, certain language integration could take place with some languages borrowing words or phrases from others.In short, by comparing different languages, we are able to discover those clues uncovered in languages as potent evidence of possible migration tracks of its speakers.In conclusion, I believe that travelling oremployment is not the sole aim for foreign language studying.Instead, language also acts as a useful tool in learning a foreign country’s history and helps demystify the anthropological myth of its native speakers.。

1..作文题目：It is generally believed that some people are born with certain talents，for instance for sport or music，and others are not。

However，it is sometimes claimed that any child can be taught to become a good person or musician.Discuss both these views and give your own opinion2.学生原文：Everyone believed that talents is the essential requirement to be successful. However, some famous and successful person always recognize them that they are no any talents but success in the final. So, weather the talents can decide the future is hard to illustrate. And here are my own view.I think that talents is an very important factor to decide the future of a person, because there are lots of examples can also demonstrate it. If someone has unique talents for some sports or music, it must help him progress more than others who not have this talents. And there is another advantage of talents is that they will be saw by more people because gift always can attract people. This feature causes the talents to have more chance to performance. The famous basketball player named Curry, who is the famous talents. In 2014, Curry showed a sharply increase in his basketball skills. The most surprising thing is that he start to play basketball when was study in university, and it later than the date of all the nba basketball players. Curry demonstrate the truth of gifts make a people spend less time and energy to get success.On the other hand, it is also true that some people who have no any talents but they still success rely on their teachers and endeavor. I also trust that the endeavor can replace the talents. Although some children have no innovation to study some kinds of skills, they still can try their best to break out the weakness of without talents. Kobe is a famous basketball player too, but experts said that the gift of curry is better than the talents of Kobe. However, Curry never belong the Kobe in basketball. When someone asked Kobe why, he answered:" Have you seen the sun on 5 am." So, Kobe told us that the strive and confident is the second key to get success.In the conclusion, the significance of the strive is the same important as the talents. If you want to be a sported or musicals, the talents and strive both can take you to the path of success.3.老师批改文中标识：用词不当逻辑错误语法错误修改添加Everyone believed that talents is the essential requirement to be successful.(这句话说everyone 太绝对了一些，可以改为：it is often considered that talent is ...) However, some famous and successful person always recognize them that they are no any talents but success in the final. (这里只是说了一些名人，听上去有点虚，用词改进：there do exist examples where success comes out of those without outstanding gifts.) So, weather the talents can decide the future is hard to illustrate. And here are my own view.I think that talents is an (a) very important factor to decide (表达在...方面可以用：in terms of deciding) the future of a person, because there are lots of examples can alsodemonstrate it (1. 语法上这句话出现了are和can demonstrate两组谓语。

剑7Test3大作文As most people spend a major part of their adult life at work,job satisfaction is an important element of individual wellbeing.What factors contribute to job satisfaction?How realistic is the expectation of job satisfaction for all workers?1.话题和题型分类工作类2.题目分析工作满意度的构成；“全民皆满意”的可能性3.思路提示A.工作满意度的构成感受到自身价值具有归属感团队合作精神浓厚获得成就感具有竞争力的薪酬B.可能性每个人很难找到自己适合的工作知识技能不匹配与个人性格不匹配Nowadays,many adults have full‐time jobs and the proportion of their lives spent doing such jobs is very high.So one’s feelings about one’s job frequently reflect how an individual feels about his or her life as a whole.Because of this,job satisfaction is indeed very important for the wellbeing of thatperson.Factors such as positive feedback,a sense of progression and a sense of belonging contribute to job satisfaction.However,not everyone can achieve such satisfaction.内容详细条目段落此段结构1描述现实2表达观点此段功能首段开篇摆明观点:工作满足感非常重要，受工作中的积极反馈、归属感等因素影响，但并不是每个人都能获得这种满足感。

雅思7分大作文范文批改和解析雅思7分大作范文批改和解析雅思写作提高第一步：结构(5.0 - 5.5)问题：出国留学的优点(the advantages of disadvantages of study abroad)同学：One reason for those who decide to go overseas to get a higher degree is that they believe they can get better education in certain fields. That is to say, different universities in different countries have their specialized courses and rich resources can be provided according to their needs and requirements. Another reason is that they can learn a foreign language in a more efficient way. There is no denying that living in an all-round English environment and being affected by local culture make people quick learners.解析：出国留学和高学历完全是两回事(出去读初中和高中都算出国);出国就是better education，在国内就不是better? 出国留学可不仅仅是上大学，而该同学认为出国留学就是去上大学的(因为她可能就是去上大学的，所以觉得所有人也都如此)，偏激。

此外，第四句论述变成了英语环境了(因为大家都去英语国家，所以主观认为，所有出国的人就是去学英语的)，再次带来了内容偏激。

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2018年11月10日雅思大作文写作7分范文：职场社交能力重要性大作文写作题目是：Nowadays, many employers think that social skills are as important as good qualifications for employing people. To what extent do you agree or disagree?雅思大作文解析今天的考题是一个旧题，重复的是2012年1月14日的考题，不过由于过于久远，想必很多同学都没有复习到。

但这个题目的问题，我们多数同学都应该思考过，即到底文凭重要，还是社交能力重要?就这个问题，我们的思考方向依然是三种：A. 双边讨论：认为两者都很重要B. 一边倒讨论：只认为文凭更重要，或社交能力更重要C. 批判思维：对某些工作而言，文凭更重要，而对其他工作而言，社交能力更重要。

考生可以在以上思维方式中任选一个进行写作。

以下是老雅的高分范文。

本范文中，老雅遵从主流意见，认为文凭和社交能力都重要。

本题还应注意的是，要结合“招聘”来讨论问题。

老雅认为，在招聘的时候，文凭很重要，因为文凭背后代表的是求职者具有某种能力，而没有文凭，应聘者可能连面试的机会都得不到;同时，社交能力也很重要，因为这种能力意味着求职者可以和各种人和谐快乐地相处，从而提高工作效率。

请大家认真阅读范文，看老雅是如何把以上思路落实到具体文字表达的。

It is important for job seekers to highlight both their professional qualifications and social skills. Employers are looking to hire those who have the right mix of professional qualifications as hard skills and social skills as soft skills.(1) 本段开门见山，直接表明观点，即专业资质和社交能力同等重要。

雅思大作文突破7分总结（背景引入-题目改写-撰写观点）（利弊）讨论型1.People nowadays are surrounded by all kinds of advertising. Some people believe that advertising has more negative than positive influences on people’s lives. To what extent do you agree or disagree?2.As global trade increases, many goods, even some daily goods, are exported to another country, which includes long-distance transport during shipping. Do you think its benefits outweigh its drawbacks?观点对比型3.Some people think it is acceptable to use animals for the benefit of humans. Other people think it is wrong to exploit animals for human purposes. Discuss both views and give your own opinion4.Nowdays the trend of fashion changes very rapidly, and gradually people become the slaves of it. Some people think that a person should choose comfortable clothes he or she likes, regardless of fashion.5.Some people think rich countries should help the poor countries by giving money directly. Others believe that there are more effective forms of international aid.原因-结果型、6.The range of technology is increasing the gap between the rich and the poor. To what extent do you agree?7.Today advertising can be seen everywhere in daily life. It has influenced what people think is important, and sometimes has negative effects on our life. To what extent do you agree or disagree ?手段方法型8.Riding a bicycle is the best way than other transportation methods. Do you agree or disagree.9.Some people believe that become successful in adult life, it depends on the way parents bring up their children. Do you agree or disagree.趋势或者现象讨论型10.It is important for all towns and cities to have large public outdoor places like squares and parks. To what extent do you agree?11.Caring for children is probably the most important thing of the society. It is suggested that all mothers and fathers should be required to take the childcare trainning courses.。

雅思作文批改英语批改雅思作文范文：原文：Nowadays, the issue of whether to give homework to students has sparked a heated debate. Some people believe that homework is an essential part of the learning process, while others argue that it is an unnecessary burden on students. In my opinion, I believe that homework can be beneficial if it is given in moderation and is used as a tool to reinforce learning.Firstly, homework can provide students with the opportunity to review and practice what they have learned in class. This can help to reinforce the concepts andskills that have been taught, and can lead to a deeper understanding of the material. Additionally, homework can also help to develop important study habits and time management skills, which are essential for success inschool and in life.However, it is important to recognize that too much homework can have negative effects on students. Excessive amounts of homework can lead to stress, anxiety, and a lack of sleep, which can have a detrimental impact on students' mental and physical health. Furthermore, if homework is not carefully planned and thoughtfully assigned, it can become a mindless and repetitive task that does not contribute to meaningful learning.In conclusion, while homework can be a valuable toolfor reinforcing learning and developing important skills, it is important that it is given in moderation and is carefully planned. Teachers should consider the individual needs and abilities of their students when assigning homework, and should strive to create assignments that are meaningful and engaging. By doing so, homework can be a beneficial and valuable part of the learning process.批改：Nowadays, the issue of whether to assign homework to students has sparked a heated debate. Some people believe that homework is an essential part of the learning process, while others argue that it is an unnecessary burden on students. In my opinion, I believe that homework can be beneficial if it is given in moderation and is used as a tool to reinforce learning.Firstly, homework can provide students with the opportunity to review and practice what they have learnedin class. This can help to reinforce the concepts andskills that have been taught, and can lead to a deeper understanding of the material. Additionally, homework can also help to develop important study habits and time management skills, which are essential for success in school and in life.However, it is important to recognize that too much homework can have negative effects on students. Excessive amounts of homework can lead to stress, anxiety, and a lack of sleep, which can have a detrimental impact on students' mental and physical health. Furthermore, if homework is notcarefully planned and thoughtfully assigned, it can become a mindless and repetitive task that does not contribute to meaningful learning.In conclusion, while homework can be a valuable toolfor reinforcing learning and developing important skills, it is important that it is given in moderation and is carefully planned. Teachers should consider the individual needs and abilities of their students when assigning homework, and should strive to create assignments that are meaningful and engaging. By doing so, homework can be a beneficial and valuable part of the learning process.改进版：In today's educational landscape, the debate over whether to assign homework to students has become increasingly contentious. While some argue that homework is an essential component of the learning process, others contend that it places an unnecessary burden on students. In my view, I believe that homework can be advantageous if it is assigned in moderation and serves as a tool toreinforce learning.To begin with, homework offers students the opportunity to review and practice the material covered in class. This can help to solidify their understanding of key concepts and skills, leading to a deeper comprehension of the subject matter. Additionally, homework can also foster the development of crucial study habits and time management skills, which are vital for academic success and personal growth.However, it is crucial to acknowledge that an excessive amount of homework can have adverse effects on students. The overwhelming workload can lead to heightened stress, anxiety, and sleep deprivation, all of which can significantly impact students' mental and physical well-being. Moreover, if homework assignments are not thoughtfully planned and tailored to students' needs, they can become mindless and repetitive tasks that do not contribute meaningfully to their learning.In conclusion, while homework can be a valuable toolfor reinforcing learning and cultivating essential skills, it is imperative that it is assigned judiciously and with careful consideration. Educators should take into account the individual needs and abilities of their students when assigning homework, and should strive to create assignments that are meaningful and engaging. By doing so, homework can serve as a beneficial and integral part of the learning process.总结：以上是对原文的改进版本，通过对原文进行修饰和扩展，使得文章更加丰富和生动。