how to polish your writing写作技巧

We had a short rest. Then we began to play happily. We sang and danced. Some told stories ;some played chess.
Having had a short rest,we began to play happily, singing and dancing. Some told stories, while others played chess.
She shouted loudly , “I’ve succeeded!” She shouted at the top of her voice, “I „ve made it!”
二、连 接 词
高考写作中常用的连接词:
• 表并列补充关系的:
what is more, besides, also, as well, moreover, furthermore, in addition to…
高考写作中常用的连接词:
• 表时间关系的:
when, after, before, until, as soon as, afterwards, soon, lately, recently, since, from then on, in the meantime, at the same time, at last, suddenly, all of a sudden…
5、 繁简有度——文章总有详写与略写，尤 其是图画类短文，学会筛选是非常必要的， 如其不然，事无巨细全部点到，不仅使文章 成了流水帐，而且空耗了时间还使文章显得 冗赘若再因超长而被扣分岂不得不偿失？！ 6、亮点突出——较高级词汇和较复杂的语 法结构的合理适时使用，这最能影响或打动 改卷教师，是求得高档次及该档次高端分值 的保证
How to Polish Your Writing
Part One:
General introduction to writing
了解NMET书面表达的评分标准和要求
按5个档次给分, 写一篇100个单词左右的书面材 料。情景包括目的、对象、时间、地点、内容等; 提供情景的形式有图画、图表、提纲、短文等。 书面表达的要求是: 1. 覆盖所有的语言要点。 内容要点可用不同方 式表达。对紧扣主题的适当发挥不予扣分。 2. 应用词汇和语法结构的数量和准确性。值得 注意的是语法结构或词汇方面虽有些许错误, 但为尽力使用较复杂结构或较高级词汇所致; 具 有较强的语言运用能力。
巧用习语---增加文采
巧用一些介词短语,名词短语,形容词短语 使文采不同凡响 1).Many houses are being built.
Many houses are under construction. 2).When I thought of the coming holiday, I just couldn’t help smiling . At the thought of the coming holiday, I just …
7、书写认真——不求文字隽秀力保规范工 整，这是留下好印象的起码条件
8、卷面干净——事先打草稿然后誊改是使 文Leabharlann 通畅的关键Part Two:
Polish your writing
一、句 式 变 化
改变句子的开头方式.不要一味地用主语开头,适当使用状 语或其他形式提前
1).We met at the school gate and went together early in the morning. Early in the morning, we met in the school gate and went together. 2) We all know that internet will help us a lot if we use it properly. As is known to us all/As we all know, internet will help us a lot if we use it properly
• 表因果关系的:
since, as, because (of), so, thus, therefore, as a result, so that…
• 表条件关系的:
if, on condition (that), as long as, unless, or else…
• 表特定的顺序关系:
above all, first of all, first, firstly, secondly, the next, finally, in the end, at last…
Dear Bob, It's very kind of you to write me and let me know about your beautiful city. Now I'd like to tell you something about my hometown Jiangcheng. The city stands on the bank of the Changjiang River. It is a beautiful place for people to live in. Its economy has been developing rapidly in the past ten years. New factories, houses, and roads have been built. More schools' and hospitals are available for its people. However, there are still some problems, such as water and air pollution and heavy traffic in rush hours. In my opinion, Jiangcheng should develop its economy scientifically. I would also think that the growth of its population should be brought under control so that we'll have a better hometown in future. Yours,
• 表总结:
on the whole, in short, all in all, in a word, in conclusion, in summary…
Improve the following sentences: 1.China joined the WTO. That ended its many years of talks. China joined the WTO, thus ending its many years of talks. 2. Time goes fast. Mr. Smith came to our school for two years. How time flies! It is two years since Mr. Smith came to our school.
3).When the man got on the bus ,he was tired and hungry.
Tired and hungry, the man got on the bus.
洋味十足---才是好文章
I don’t want to live with a stranger in a hotel room. I don‟t want to share a hotel room with a stranger.
• 表换一种方式表达:
in other words, that is to say, to put it another way…
高考写作中常用的连接词:
• 表进行举例说明:
for instance, for example, like, such as…
• 表陈述事实:
in fact, actually, as a matter of fact, to tell you the truth…
写作要领
1、 细读提示——明白写什么，日记、信函、 报导或叙事描写 2 、写全要点——了解核心内容，非重要情 节，图画作文应认真分析判断才能分清主次。 表格类原则上一个不能少 3 、层次分明——为使短文令人感到赏心悦 目分成2甚至3段为好 4、承上启下——简而言之是连接词、过渡 句他们是组成文章粘和剂，上下沟通的纽带
• 表转折对比关系的:
but, however, yet, instead, nevertheless, on the contrary, despite, in spite of, unlike, on one hand…on the other hand, some…others...
高考写作中常用的连接词:
Enjoy the following passages and pick out the shining points of them:
What a fine Sunday! I was planning to play football with Xiao Ming, but while I was going out, I found my mother was washing clothes. Mum was busy working and doing housework after work day and night without complaining. She was so tired. Thinking about this, I decided to help do the washing. I began to feel tired after washing for several minutes. And Xiao Ming came to ask me to go out for football at that moment. I nearly gave up washing. But I persuaded myself to go on finally. Mum came back, only to find all the clothes were hanging on the line. She smiled.