大学英语四级作文改卷老师对资料讲解

四级作文模板阅卷老师阅卷老师。

阅卷老师是学生们学习生活中的重要人物，他们承担着对学生们学业成绩的评定和指导工作。

在学生们的成长道路上，阅卷老师扮演着至关重要的角色。

本文将从阅卷老师的工作内容、工作态度和对学生的影响三个方面来探讨阅卷老师的重要性。

首先，阅卷老师的工作内容主要是对学生的考试卷进行评分和批改。

他们需要对学生的答卷进行认真仔细的阅读，准确评定学生的答题情况，并给予合理的分数。

在这个过程中，阅卷老师需要严格按照评分标准进行评定，确保公平公正。

他们需要具备扎实的专业知识和丰富的经验，以确保评分的准确性和客观性。

在这个过程中，阅卷老师需要保持专注和耐心，确保每一位学生都能够得到公平的对待。

其次，阅卷老师的工作态度至关重要。

他们需要以严谨的态度对待每一份答卷，不偏不倚地进行评定。

在批改过程中，阅卷老师需要注重细节，确保每一处错误都能够被及时发现并指正。

同时，他们还需要注重与学生的沟通，及时给予学生反馈和建议，帮助他们改正错误，提高成绩。

阅卷老师需要保持公正、客观和严谨的态度，以确保评分的准确性和公平性。

最后，阅卷老师对学生的影响是深远的。

他们的评定和指导直接影响着学生的学业成绩和学习态度。

一位严谨公正的阅卷老师可以激励学生努力学习，提高自己的成绩；而一位苛刻不公的阅卷老师则可能让学生产生厌学情绪，影响学生的学习兴趣和动力。

因此，阅卷老师的工作不仅仅是对学生答卷的评定，更是对学生学习态度和学习动力的影响。

一位严谨公正的阅卷老师可以激励学生努力学习，提高自己的成绩；而一位苛刻不公的阅卷老师则可能让学生产生厌学情绪，影响学生的学习兴趣和动力。

综上所述，阅卷老师在学生的学习生活中扮演着至关重要的角色。

他们的工作内容、工作态度和对学生的影响都是不可忽视的。

因此，我们应该尊重和理解阅卷老师的工作，同时也希望阅卷老师能够以严谨公正的态度对待每一份答卷，给予学生合理的评定和指导，帮助他们提高成绩，成为更好的学习者。

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There are a lot of details to consider, but al1 in all, I support the idea that _________.While it is true that the argument I disagree hold a little bit of water, I think that ____________. 问题解决提出解决方案Measures must be taken toIt is high time we had toIt is pressing/indispensable/essential that proper actions/effective measures should be taken to Great efforts should be put into/focused onWe need to take a fresh/clear look/view at this matter/problem/situation /in a new perspective/ from a new standpoint.最佳、最重要解决方案的句型What we can do is simply toThe best approach/solution to … isIt is urgent/pressing/significant/practical/feasible to应用文常用句型常见辩论话题理由1．SmokingFor：1．it is pleasurable and relaxing2．it is one's right3．it is difficult to stop smoking4．it is an old custom going back hundreds of years5．it is not always dangerous to one's health6．it makes socializing easier7．it is an important source of tax revenue8．intoxication is a natural drive (e.g., coffee, drugs, alcohol)Against:1．it is harmful to one's health (e.g., heart disease, bronchial trouble, lung cancer )2．it is harmful to those nearby3．it is a dirty and expensive habit4．it is addictive (i.e., nicotine)5．it is quickly being banned in public areas6．it lives off deceptive advertising2．School UniformsFor：1．they build character2．they eliminate class differences3．they allow students to better concentrate on their studies4．they are popular with parents and administrators5．they are inexpensive6．they are attractive and neat7．they eliminate the need to choose what to wear every day8．many countries have themAgainst：1．they lead to conformity2．they are disliked by students (students like to primp)3．they create a military mentality4．they are an infringement on our freedom (different strokes for different folks) 5．they are ugly and childish6．they deprive youths of an important choice: what to wear7．they are losing popularity everywhere3．Legalized GamblingFor：1．it reduces taxes2．it is a source of government revenue3．it is gaining popularity in the world4．it is an old practice dating back thousands of years5．it is pleasurable (e.g., horse racing, casinos)6．it is voluntary7．many people play poker and mahjongAgainst：1．it is banned in most countries2．it is condemned by most religions3．it can become addictive4．it encourages people to throw away their hard-earned savings5．it teaches people not to work for money6．it can destroy happy families7．it can lead to suicide8．it is easily controlled by the Mafia (e.g., bookmakers )4．City LifeFor：1．it is exciting2．it attracts people from the countryside3．it offers the best schools, hospitals, and stores4．it offers many amenities (e.g., swimming pools, bowling alleys, and sports stadiums ) 5．it offers many chances of employment6．its noise and overcrowding are hardly noticeable7．cities have an efficient public transportation system8．city planners can create a good living environment 9．crime can be found in the countryside as wellAgainst ：1．it is unhealthy (e.g., water and air pollution )2．it is not a good environment for children3．it is devoid of Nature and distinct seasons4．it is noisy and dangerous5．it makes people nervous and even neurotic6．it has created awful slums7．cities are overcrowded and expensive8．many city dwellers long to return to the countryside 9．city housing projects are unpopular5．Informing Patients Of CancerFor：1．patients want to know2．it is wrong to hide the truth3．it is not a shock for the patient but for his family4．it gives the patient a chance to plan his last days5．it is the patient' s body, not the doctor' s6．doctors are for it (in the U. S.)7．it allows a person to choose alternate means of treatment Against：1．it is heartless and cruel2．it may make the patient give up3．it causes depression4．it can lead to suicide5．most relatives are against it6．a white lie can save undue suffering7．doctors are against it (in Japan)6．Social SecurityFor：1．the state should help the poor, aged, unemployed, and sick 2．the state should provide good health care for its citizens 3．the strong must help the weak4．Social Darwinism is outdated5．there will always be social misfits that need help6．all religions stress charity7．all advanced countries have some form of social securityAgainst ：1．it costs too much2．it encourages laziness and destroys the work ethic3．it does not work efficiently4．people should look after themselves5．it results in heavy taxes6．Social Darwinism tells us that life is the "survival of the fittest" 7．there are no freebies in life7．CoeducationFor ：1．it is natural (i.e., adult society is not segregated )2．it gives men and women a chance to better understand one another 3．it gives men and women a chance to compete with one another 4．it is the modern trend5．it has many practical advantages (e.g., school plays, music groups) 6．it produces well-adjusted adults7．most parents prefer coeducation.8．separate schools foster sexual rivalry9．women become neurotic in all-women' s schoolsAgainst ：1．women do better academically in their own colleges2．women are in college to get an education, not a husband 3．women have their own values to develop4．it can lead to intimacy and promiscuity5．it is still rare in some countries6．it is opposed by some parents7．it robs women of their self-confidence8．separate schools have existed for centuries9．marry great men and women attended separate schools8．Corporal PunishmentFor ：1．children are not adults2．children respect discipline3．it is a check on excessive permissiveness4．it does no permanent damage because children are hardy creatures 5．it is opposed only by mixed-up psychologists6．it is a form of training7．it builds real character8．it reinforces the authority of teachers and parents9．it works to control juvenile delinquency10. there is the saying: Spare the rod and spoil the childAgainst ：1．it is barbarous2．Freud said it is wrong3．love is better than physical punishment4．it can cause psychological problems5．it is not necessary if children are raised correctly6．it is an emotional, irrational response7．it can result in a lawsuit8．beatings have been known to result in death9．there is the saying : Violence begets violence9．Organ TransplantsFor ：1．they prolong life2．they are supported by the medical profession3．they enhance medical science4．they are a challenge to surgeons5．critically ill people want transplants in order to live6．costs will come down as the surgery becomes routine7．there is no "time" to die8．death is defined as brain death9．the drugs cyclosporine and FK-506 have helped eliminate the problem of rejection Against ：1．they are too expensive2．they favor the rich3．they encourage the poor in Third World countries to sell their organs4．they are unnatural as seen by the body' s rejection5．they are often unsuccessful6．the idea is sinister7．Nature has decided when we should die8．the process of deciding who gets the next available organ is unfair9．there is as yet no agreement on what constitutes death (brain -dead versus heart-dead)10．Civil DisobedienceFor ：1．it draws attention to unjust of unconstitutional laws2．it is a matter of religious or moral convictions3．it is the only way to fight oppression4．it is usually nonviolent5．it is used only in extreme circumstances6．it goes back to the time of Jesus Christ7．it is common, like cheating on taxes and illegal parking8．God' s laws take precedence over man' s laws9．protestors are ready to accept punishment for their beliefs10．many famous people have engaged in civil disobedience (e.g., Mahatma Gandhi and Andrei Sakharov)11．there are many famous examples such as the Boston Tea Party and conscientious objectors during the Vietnam WarAgainst ：1．no one is above the law2．it can quickly destroy law and order3．it leads to anarchy4．it leads to contempt for all laws5．protestors are cowards trying to escape punishment6．protestors often resort to violence7．the democratic process should be used to effect change11．AbortionFor ：1．it is a woman' s fundamental right, say abortion-rights advocates2．it is necessary for unwed mothers3．it is necessary for rape victims4．it is necessary in some cases to save a mother' s life5．procreation is a couple' s choice6．it is a form of birth control7．poor, illiterate women want it8．most women support it9．it is necessary to prevent overpopulation10．it prevents unwanted babies from coming into the world11．it is not murder because a fetus is not yet a human beingAgainst：1．it is murder (infanticide), say anti-choice groups2．life begins at conception3．it is an unnatural practice4．it is immoral because only God can take a life5．a fetus is a human being-unborn but viable6．the rights of a fetus must be protected7．it is painful for the fetus-a barbaric practice8．it is not the same as other modern birth-control devices9．it causes many women to have guilt feelings10．unwanted babies can be put up for adoption12．CensorshipFor ：1．it is for the good of society2．it protects children3．every society has some form of censorship4．the individual is less important than the community 5．absolute freedom leads to anarchy6．many adults are not mature enough to make their own decisions 7．it can be carried out wisely8．pornography is not art9．pornography is in the hands of unscrupulous people 10．obscene works should be banned11．it is necessary in times of warAgainst ：1．it limits the individual' s freedom and human rights2．it is not consistent with democracy3．it is subjective and not objective4．it creates the problem of who will censor5．it is disappearing in advanced countries6．it deprives adults of their right to make decisions7．it can be applied to all aspects of our lives8．it is the first step toward totalitarianism9．it draws attention to banned works and increases sales 10．voluntary censorship is better13．Equality Of the SexesFor ：1．we all have the same Creator2．matriarchal societies go back thousands of years3．all advanced societies have given women equal rights 4．most companies have adopted equal pay for equal work 5．there are no skills women cannot master6．there are even women body builders7．men have a basic inferiority complex8．women are more interested in peace than men9．some world leaders are women (e.g., Margaret Thatcher )10．women are superior to men in some fields11．no scientific studies back up the stereotypes men have of women Against ：1．women have a different biological function2．women are physically weaker than men3．women can' t be mothers and career women at the same time 4．many women want to depend on men5．most women want to stay at home and be mothers6．women haven' t been given the vote in some countries 7．women are emotional and irrational8．women think intuitively (no famous women philosophers) 9．hormones cause women to behave differently14．Foreign AidFor ：1．it is humane2．the rich should help the poor3．all religions teach charity4．it seeks to end poverty, disease, and illiteracy5．it can be used to help refugees and combat slavery6．it is given by all advanced countries7．it is supported by the Red Cross and the United Nations8．it helped rebuild Japan and Germany9．it increases world trade10．it achieves political objectives11．it promotes national securityAgainst ：1．it is degrading to the recipient2．it is never appreciated3．it leads to feelings of inferiority4．it limits the independence of developing countries5．it subsidizes laziness6．it often goes into the pockets of corrupt officials7．it supports Third World dictatorships8．it can be culturally damaging9．it has divided the United Nations10．the money should be spent at home for one' s own people15．DivorceFor ：1．it is the logical solution to a bad marriage2．it allows both persons to seek happiness in a second marriage3．it dates from as early as ancient Babylonia4．it is legally recognized by most countries5．it is accepted by most people6．remarriage is a right7．it is necessary in cases of adultery, alcoholism, desertion, drug addiction, and mental and physical cruelty8．children are better off living with one parent than with both in an unhappy environment 9．feminists support itAgainst ：1．it breaks up the family2．it makes it too easy for two persons to walk out of their marriage3．it is opposed by various religions4．it is banned by some countries5．it was uncommon until fifty years ago6．marriage is a serious responsibility7．it is a sign of immaturity8．counseling is the solution9．it harms children emotionally10．children need both parents11．child custody decisions are messy16．Compulsory Military ServiceFor ：1．it aims to strengthen national defense2．it teaches young men discipline3．it builds character and physical fithess4．it teaches valuable skills5．it nurtures a spirit of comradeship an equality6．it offers opportunities for overseas travel7．it exists in many countries (e.g., Switzerland, Singapore)8．it reduces unemployment9．it instills a sense of patriotismAgainst：1．it is unnecessary in view of today' s professional armies2．it is a step away from peace3．some countries have abolished it (e. g., the U.S., Japan)4．today' s armies do not need unskilled manpower5．it interrupts young men' s studies and careers6．it is a useless experience7．it is a source of slave labor8．it results in bullying and conformity9．it does not build character10．it can cause mental disorders11．military skills are useless in private industry17．V oluntary EuthanasiaFor ：1．it is a basic right-the right to die2．the Greek origin of the word euthanasia means "good death "3．it allows one to die with dignity4．it allows one to choose the time and place of death5．it is logical and humane6．it can be regulated with safeguards (e.g., the person must be rationally lucid) 7．it is painless8．it is the solution to a terminal illness with suffering9．the dying want it10．some doctors will assist the patient to end his life11．it recognizes death as a natural, biological process12．doctor-assisted suicide is legal in Holland, under certain guidelines Against ：1．it is murder or suicide2．it is illegal in most countries3．most doctors oppose it4．it is a first step to killing the old and infirm5．it is irreversible in the event of a new cure6．only God can end a life7．most religions oppose it8．suicide is always irrational9．the dying are too sick to know what they want10．the dying should look to hospices that dispense painkillers11．it can be abused by greedy persons seeking an inheritance18．Capital PunishmentFor：1．it frightens would-be criminals (acts as a deterrent )2．it serves as a just reward for killers3．it lowers crime rates4．it is more economical than a life sentence (saves the state money)5．in rare cases it may lead to the death of an innocent person, but this cannot be helped 6．most countries practice it7．killers should not be allowed to become hero-figures8．a life sentence is never for life but for only a few years9．killers are heartless and cruel and should not be protected by sociologistsAgainst ：1．it frightens no one2．it is motivated by revenge and not justice3．it does not lower crime rates4．it can lead to the death of an innocent person (a mistake)5．it is a barbaric practice (hanging, electric chairs, gas chambers)6．it is unjust because only God can take away life7．the real solution to crime is the elimination of social injustices and rehabilitation 8．killers are often mentally ill and in need of medical treatment9．the death penalty is being abandoned by many countries19．Trade ProtectionismFor ：1．industries need government protection2．no nation can allow its industries to be destroyed3．agriculture must be protected for national security reasons4．real free trade doesn' t exist and never has5．national security is more important than idealistic trade principles6．it has made Japan, South Korea, and Taiwan prosperous7．every nation ' s economy is shaped by its own culture8．there are various forms of free-market economy9．every nation should have an industrial policy10．governments must provide jobs for their workers by whatever meansAgainst ：1．it invites retaliation2．it invites reciprocity based on a quid pro quo basis3．it impedes world trade and prosperity4．it hurts poor, underdeveloped countries5．it leads to trade wars6．it makes industries less competitive7．it costs taxpayers large sums of money8．it gives consumers less choice9．it is denounced by most nations10．it is based not just on high tariffs but also on government regulations, inspections, certification, and distribution20．Nuclear PowerFor：1．it provides huge amounts of energy from small amounts of fuel2．it is the best source of energy for countries without oil3．the world' s supply of oil will be exhausted in 90 years4．it already produces most of the energy needs of some countries5．it could supply all the world' s electricity for millions of years if fully developed6．it is safe if properly supervised7．nuclear power plants create less air pollution than fossil-fuel power plants8．the issue has become far too emotionalAgainst ：1．it is too dangerous (e.g., Chernobyl accident)2．most people are afraid of it3．the world' s supply of uranium is fast decreasing4．it is better to develop other sources of energy (e.g., fusion)5．radioactive wastes cannot be disposed of6．it can produce nuclear weapons for warfare7．certain radical world leaders are trying to buy nuclear weapons8．nuclear plants are expensive to build9．the U.S. is slowly closing down its nuclear power plants10．nuclear wastes can cause cancer。

大学英语四级改革适用（作文）模拟试卷234(题后含答案及解析) 题型有：1. WritingPart I Writing1．For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay entitled The Importance of Mutual Understanding by commenting on the remark, “In every great faith and tradition, one can find the values of tolerance and mutual understanding” You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.正确答案：In every great faith and tradition, one can find the values of tolerance and mutual understanding, as the saying goes. It highlights the importance of mutual understanding, a virtue which is often absent from our daily life. A typical case in point is international relations. Mutual understanding is important in many aspects. To begin with, it helps to uphold a country’s dignity since mutual understanding is based on mutual respect. In addition, mutual understanding boosts effective communication. If the Cold War had continued, the world would not be what it is now. Finally, mutual understanding facilitates problem-solving. People are increasingly aware mat global warming could not be solved without mutual understanding in international community. The importance of mutual understanding goes far beyond what’s mentioned above. Chances are that lack of mutual understanding might ignite wars between nations. Therefore, it’s not difficult to see mat mutual understanding should be cultivated anytime anywhere. 涉及知识点：作文2．For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay entitled Better Act Now than Later by referring to the saying, “Don’t put off till tomorrow what should be done today.” You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.正确答案：Since childhood, I always like to put off things to the last moment, whether homework or housework. For this I have been urged, blamed, or scolded, once and again. “Don’t put off till tomorrow what should be done today,” my parents and teachers often say. Pitifully, however, I let them down. Worse still, it is not just me; it seems I am just one soldier of a grand army. Common as it is, delaying intentionally and habitually turns out to be rather harmful. First of all, it ruins the notion of punctuality, a virtue of modern civilization. Let me explain, if we put things off, chances are good that we often fail to meet the deadline. Secondly, the quality of our work may suffer. With deadline approaching, people will rush to get the work done; usually more haste, less speed, not to mention quality. “Better act now than later”, I shouted to myself and the whole legion. Otherwise, we are not just harming ourselves, but also hurting those who care about us. 涉及知识点：作文3．For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay entitled On Seizing Opportunity by referring to the saying, “Chance favors the prepared mind.” You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.正确答案：History has taught us that opportunity is essential to success. Napoleon Bonaparte said “ability is of little account without opportunity.”Many people believe that all men are equal before opportunity, in other words, “every dog has his day”. But reality once and again tells us that chance favors the prepared mind. It is true that the prepared mind is more likely to seize an opportunity, which perhaps only knocks once. First, he/she is “mentally” prepared like a watchful leopard waiting for its prey. Once the opportunity shows up, he/she can swiftly grasp it. Otherwise, he/ she who hesitates is lost. Second, he/she is “physically” prepared like a veteran athlete who trains hard. Once the chance presents itself, he/ she is able to seize it. Since chance is rare, and fleeting, anyone who desires success should always be ready to seize the opportunity when it appears. For one thing, he/she should constantly sharpen his/her skills to be “physically” prepared; for another, he/she should have his/her eyes open for opportunity to stay “mentally” prepared. 涉及知识点：作文4．For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay entitled Should We Tell White Lies? following the outline given below．You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words．1．诚实是传统美德，但有时候不得不说善意的谎言2．善意的谎言该不该说，请给出适当的理由正确答案：We have been taught not to lie and to be honest since childhood. However, in our daily lives we still have to tell white lies from time to time. From my viewpoint, white lies are indispensable in certain circumstances. The reasons are as follows. Firstly, white lies bring harmony to our lives sometimes. When a friend gives us a gift and asks us if we are fond of it, it is better to say yes even if we do not feel very contented. Secondly, sometimes white lies help people achieve success. Forest Gump was born mentally deficient. However, his mother used white lies to encourage him. She told him that he was not different from other normal kids. That eventually made Forest a national hero. To sum up, white lies help us avoid embarrassment and raise others’confidence. Indeed honesty is an important virtue, but white lies, in some cases, should be tolerated. 涉及知识点：作文5．For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay. You should start your essay with a brief description of the picture and then express your views on the importance of punctuality. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.正确答案：As can be seen from the picture, a man named James is late for work again. This picture depicts something that haunts people of almost all agegroups: unpunctuality. Of course, everyone is late sometimes due to unavoidable circumstances. But I think we’d better try our best to be punctual as the importance of punctuality is demonstrated in each and every aspect of work and life. To begin with, punctuality is one of the most valued qualities in today’s business. To be late for an appointed meeting with one’s customers may send out a clear signal that he is untrustworthy. In this way, one’s career may be hindered by his bad sense of time. Secondly, being punctual is a sign of respect. If you want to win others’ respect and make friends with others, you should learn to be punctual. For my part, to understand the importance of punctuality and raise the awareness is the root of being punctual. And since punctuality is such a precious quality, we should make every effort to cultivate the habit of punctuality. 涉及知识点：作文。

大学英语四级改革适用（作文）模拟试卷123(题后含答案及解析) 题型有：1. WritingPart I Writing1．For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay. You should start your essay with a brief description of the picture and then express your views on the importance of seizing every opportunity. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.正确答案：Seizing Every Opportunity In the above picture, metaphor is employed to compare opportunity to the sand. The sand is leaking from the hand little by little, which symbolizes that in many cases opportunities are missed by us from time to time. Nowadays, many people strive for success but fail again and again. The reason, in my opinion, doesn’t lie in their capability, but their attitude and action towards opportunity. Everybody is sure to have encountered some precious opportunities throughout the life. However, some people manage to grasp the opportunities and succeed while others pass up the opportunities and achieve nothing. The reasons may be as follows. Firstly, opportunity only favors those who cherish it. Secondly, lessons in history tell us that only those who have captured chances and paid efforts can eventually achieve success. Last but not least, there are so many theories which prove the importance and scarcity of opportunity. We have no reason to underestimate any opportunity. In my view, there is no reason for us to neglect or desert any opportunity. Instead, we need to seize every opportunity. It is certain that if we grasp every opportunity and work for it heart and soul, we can definitely walk to the shore of success.解析：这篇文章激励学生学会抓住人生的每一个机会。

四六级判卷老师给的作文模板一、开头段。

1.开门见山地引出话题。

2.引用名言或者有代表性的事件。

3.引出下文。

二、中间段落。

1.分析现状，解释原因。

2.举例论证。

3.结合个人经历或者身边事例。

三、结尾段。

1.总结全文，呼应开头段。

2.给出建议或者展望未来。

3.得出结论。

作文内容：四六级判卷老师给的作文模板。

在当下社会中，英语水平的重要性日益凸显。

然而，许多人在学习英语时却遇到了困难。

这其中的原因主要有两点，一是缺乏有效的学习方法，二是缺乏学习的动力。

在本文中，将分别从这两个方面展开讨论。

首先，缺乏有效的学习方法是许多人学习英语困难的主要原因之一。

在传统的教学模式下，学生们往往只是被动地接受知识，而缺乏主动学习的机会。

这导致了他们在实际运用中出现了困难。

因此，我们需要转变教学方式，采用更加灵活多样的教学方法，比如说结合实际情境的语言运用，通过互动式的学习让学生们更好地掌握英语知识。

其次，缺乏学习的动力也是影响许多人学习英语的主要原因之一。

在当今社会，许多人对于学习英语缺乏了兴趣，他们认为学习英语是一件枯燥乏味的事情。

因此，我们需要通过激发学生的学习兴趣，让他们在学习英语的过程中感到快乐和愉悦。

比如说，可以通过举办英语角、组织英语演讲比赛等方式来增加学生们的学习动力。

总的来说，要想提高英语学习的效率，我们需要既有有效的学习方法，又有充足的学习动力。

只有这样，我们才能更好地掌握英语知识，提高英语水平。

希望在未来的学习中，我们能够更加注重学习方法的改进和学习动力的激发，让更多的人能够轻松地掌握英语。

预测与范文的目的1让你在作文上如何得高分2让你知道什么是四级作文的惯用写法3 让你知道的作文差距作文阅卷教师的倾向由于阅卷量大，几乎每份阅卷时间为40秒左右，如果超过60秒则属于比较慢的速度，每天的阅卷两将无法完成。

阅卷是一读定分数档，这样的分数档才不会出错。

1 书写要规范（不需要你的花体字，连体字）2 文章要干净利落，不要杂七杂八凑在一起（每一段的内容不要放错位置）3开头段落切忌基本错误（阅卷俗称“硬伤”）主要包括人称，时态，主要词汇拼写错误，这点非常关键，阅卷老师主要从这些错误作为定分数档得标准之一。

4 不会用从句不要乱用，影响文章的可读懂性5 字数严格控制在120左右，太长阅卷老师拒绝看完。

作文评分标准作文采取总体评分（Global Scoring）评卷员就总体印象给分评判参考系数：从内容和语言两个方面进行综合评判。

学生最容易得到的分数是8分档14分档次的参考标准是：切题，表达思想清楚，文字通顺，连贯性好，基本无语言错误，仅有个别不影响大局的小小错误具体解读是：“爽”；漂亮，老炼，基本上找不错错误，（可以允许一个小毛病错误）An increasing number of people are getting used to shopping online nowadays and online shopping is really enjoying a boom.There is no doubt that online shopping has many advantages. First, almost everything you want can be purchased online. Besides, instead of going shopping outdoors, you can just comfortably sit in front of your computer and scan web pages, which certainly saves your time and energy.However, the disadvantages are arising. Consumers are likely to be cheated because the deal is not made face to face. The purchase they get may might not match the descriptions on line. Worse still, some shop owners fail to mail the goods after they get the remittance. Then, faced with a large abundance of goods online, buyers often get lost and find it hard to select the ideal items.In my opinion, some measures can be taken to improve the conditions of online shopping. For instance, government should set down strict regulations to protect the interest of the customers. Meanwhile consumers should be more cautious while purchasing online.11分档次的参考标准是：切题，表达思想清楚，文字连贯，有少量语言错误具体解读是：“可以”；清楚，欠老炼，个别地方表达不地道，（一般出现2，3个小毛病错误）Nowadays the information technology develop rapidly and shopping online has been popular and a fashion for the youngsters.Online shopping has made our daily life more convenient and comfortable. For example, shopping on the internet can save students a great deal of time on the way between home and store. So they would be able to concentrate more time and energy on their academic work. The internet has shorten the distance between manufactures and consumers and thus we can buy goods in other countries. On the other hand, online shopping may not be reliable and trustworthy. What’s more, the delivery will increase the risk of item’s damaging.In my opinion, shopping on the internet is a necessary trend. More and more people will be accustomed to it. It will be much more popular in the near future. And at the same time we should take some measures to make it perfect.8分档次的参考标准是：基本切题，有的地方思想表达不清楚，文字勉强连贯，语言小错误相当多，有严重错误出现具体解读是：“马马虎虎”；十有八九是正确，中国式语言表达较多，个别地方表达不明，（一般出现1/3毛病错误）Nowadays, many people pay attentions to online shopping when something is, especially the young people prefer shopping online.In fact, it is convenient to buy something online. First there is a widethe prices of goods online are always lower. Xx But there are a lot of problems when shopping online.First, we know nothing about the things we buy, we just can’tSo we can’t judge it is good quality. Second, if we are it is difficult to defend ourr ight. Since shopping online is easy, we often buy something we don’t need. (思路混乱As I can see, shopping online is a good choice because it saves money and keep a clear mind in the unknown internet world.5分档次的参考标准是：基本切题，大多数地方思想表达不清楚，文字连贯性差，严重语言错误相当多具体解读是：“稀里糊涂”；有句子框架结构，可以找得出几个正确的地方，与八分档相反（一般出现2/3句子都有毛病错误）Currently, online shopping become a fashion. An increasing number of people are shopping online instead go to market. Of cause, online brought us benefition. It makes our life more convivenced.On the country, online shopping has many problem. Whether the products are true or not we’re not sure. We can see the products just from the picture. So may different from the picture which have seen in the internet. However, we really can not trust the “boss” every time. Because somebody looking forward to getting money, not in business.In my opinion, it is suggests that business should be more clearly. On one hand, we can choose the products carefully. On the other hand, the true boss will be in good future.2分档次的参考标准是：条理不清，思路紊乱，语言支离破碎或大部分句子有错误，且为严重语言错误具体解读是：“乱七八糟；无句子框架结构，（基本上没有语法知识）如果纠正错误或修改，那完全是老师重写。