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2016-2018年高考短文改错题汇总假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。
文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。
每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（ ），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
2018全国卷1During my last winter holiday, I went to countryside with my father to visit my grandparents. I find a big change there. The first time I went there, they were living in a small house with dogs, ducks, and another animals. Last winter when I went here again, they had a big separate house to raise dozens of chicken. They also had a small pond which they raised fish. My grandpa said last summer they earned quite a lot by sell the fish. I felt happily that their life had improved. At the end of our trip, I told my father that I planned to return for every two years, but he agreed.2018全国卷2When I was little, Friday’s night was our family game night. After supper, we would play card games of all sort in the sitting room. As the kid, I loved to watch cartoons, but no matter how many times I asked to watching them, my parents would not to let me. They would say to us that playing card games would help my brain. Still I unwilling to play the games for them sometimes. I didn’t realize how right my parents are until I entered high school. The games my parents taught me where I was a child turned out to be very useful later in my life.2018全国卷3It was Monday morning, and the writing class had just begin. Everyone was silent, wait to see who would be called upon to read his and her paragraph aloud. Some of us were confident and eager take part in the class activity, others were nervous and anxious. I had done myself homework, but I was shy. I was afraid that to speak in front of a larger group of people. At that moment, I remembered that my father once said, "The classroom is a place for learning and that include leaning from textbooks, and mistake as well."Immediate, I raised my hand.2017全国卷1In the summer holiday following my eighteen birthday, I took driving lessons. I still remember how hard first day was. Before getting into the car, I thought I had learned the instructor’s orders, so once I started the car, my mind goes blank, I forgot what he had said to me altogether. The instructor kept repeating the word, “Speed up!” “Slow down!” “Turning left!” I was so much nervous that I could hardly tell which direction was left. A few minutes late, the instructor asked me to stop the car. It was a relief and I came to a suddenly stop just in the middle on the road.2017年全国卷2Mr. and Mrs. Zhang all work in our school. They live far from the school, and it takes them about a hour and a half to go to work every day. In their spare time, they are interesting in planting vegetables in their garden, that is on the rooftop of their house. They often get up earlier and water the vegetables together. They have also bought for some gardening tools. Beside, they often get some useful informations from the internet. When summer came, they will invite their students pick the vegetables！2017年全国英语卷3When I look at this picture of myself. I realize of how fast time flies. I had grown not only physically. and also mentally in the past few years. About one month after this photo was took, I entered my second year of high school and become a new member of the school music club. Around me in picture are the things they were very important in my life at that time, car magazines and musical instruments. I enjoyed studying difference kinds of cars and planes, playing pop music, and collecting the late music albums. This picture often brings back to me many happy memories of your high school days.2016全国卷1My uncle is the owner of a restaurant close to that I love. Though not very big, but the restaurant is popular in our area. It is always crowded with customers at meal times. Some people even had to waitoutside. My uncle tells me that the key to his success is honest. Every day he makes sure that fresh vegetables or high quality oil are using for cooking. My uncle says that he never dreams becoming rich in the short period of time. Instead, he hopes that our business will grow steady.2016全国卷2The summer holiday is coming. My classmates and I are talking about how to do during the holiday. We can chose between staying at home and take a trip. If we stay at home, it is comfortable but there is no need to spend money. But in that case, we will learn little about world. If we go on a trip abroad, we can broaden you view and gain knowledges we cannot get from books. Some classmates suggest we can go to places of interest nearby. I thought that it is a good idea. It does not cost many, yet we can still learn a lot. 2016全国卷3The teenage year from 13 to 19 were the most difficult time for me . They were also the best and worse years in my life. At the first, I thought I knew everything and could make decisions by yourself. However, my parents didn’t seem to think such. They always tell me what to do and how to do it. At one time, I even felt my parents couldn’t understand me so I hoped I could be freely from them. I showed them I was independent by wear strange clothes. Now I am leaving home to college. At last, I will be on my own, but I still want to have my parents to turn to whenever need help.2016浙江卷When I was a very young children, my father created a regular practice I remember well years late. Every time he arrived home at end of the day, we’d greet het at the door. He would ask who we was and pretend not to knowing us, Then he and my mother would have had a drink while she prepared dinner and they would talk about his day and hers. While they chat, my father would lift my sister and me up to sit in the top of the fridge. It was both excited and frightening to be up there！My sister and I thought he was so cool for putting us there.2016四川卷It is Mother’s D ay today. Though it’s a western festival, it’s popular in China now.Mom has a full-time job, so she has to do most of the houseworks. She is a great mother. Both Dad or I planned to do something on Mother’s Day. We get up early in the morning. Dad cleaned the house, and then went on shopping. When he came back, I found a bunch of flowers in her hand. I asked Mom to stayin the sitting room and I cooked in kitchen. The dishes what I cooked were Mom’s favoritiest. At dinner, we said to her, “Happy Mother’s Day！”Mom was grateful and moving.。
第20讲短文改错（测）时间：45分钟满分：50分(每题1分)姓名__________ 得分________假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。
文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。
每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(^)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;2．只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
（一）、（2022·全国·高考真题）We all know that cycling is a greatly exercise. A doctor tells me people who lives the longest are dancers and cyclists. Maybe it is because the combination of fresh air, smooth movement and exercise. Whether you ride a bicycle, you don’t use petrol. So they are not producing carbon dioxide and not cause air pollution. Just see how cars have been taken over our cities. They often run at high speeds, what may put our lives in danger. And there were traffic jams, too. Our cities will be better places if we replace cars with bicycle.【语篇解读】这是一篇议论文。
短文改错专题训练高考真题2018年高考英语全国卷I第一节短文改错(共10小题;每小题1分,满分10分)During my last winter holiday, I went to countryside with my father to visit my grandparents. I find a big change there. The first time I went there, they were living in a small house with dogs, ducks, and another animals. Last winter when I went here again, they had a big separate house to raise dozens of chicken. They also had a small pond which they raised fish. My grandpa said last summer they earned quite a lot by sell the fish. I felt happily that their life had improved. At the end of our trip，I told my father that I planned to return for every two years, but he agreed.2018年高考全国卷2When I was little，Friday’s night was our family game night. After supper，we would play card games of all sort in the sitting room. As the kid，I loved to watch cartoons，but no matter how many times I asked to watching them，my parents would not to let me. They would say to us that playing card games would help my brain. Still I unwilling to play the games for them sometimes. I didn't realize how right my parents are until I entered high school. The games my parents taught me where I was a child turned out to be very useful later in my life.2017年普通高等学校招生全国统一考试（新课标I）In the summer holiday following my eighteen birthday, I took driving lessons. I still remember how hard first day was. Before getting into the car, I thought I had learned the instructor’s orders, so once I started the car, my mind goes blank. I forgot what he had said to me altogether. The instructor kept repeating the word, “Speed up!” “Slow down!” “Turning left!” I was so much nervous that I could hardly tell which direction was left. A few minutes late, the instructor asked me to stop the car. It was a relief and I came to a suddenly stop just in the middle on the road.2017年普通高等学校招生全国统一考试二卷Mr. and Mrs.Zhang all work in our school.They live far from the school, and it takes them about a hour and a half to go to work every day. In their spare time, they are interesting in planting vegetables in their garden, that is on the rooftop of their house. They often get up earlier and water the vegetables together. They have also bought for some gardening tools. Beside, they often get some useful informations from the internet. When summer came, they will invite their students pick the vegetables！2016年普通高等学校招生全国统一考试The summer holiday is coming. My classmates and I are talking about how to do during the holiday. We can chose between staying at home and take a trip. If we stay at home, it is comfortable but there is no need to spend money. But in that case, we will learn little about world. If we go on a trip abroad, we can broaden you view and gain knowledges wecannot get from books. Some classmates suggest we can go to places of interest nearby. I thought that it is a good idea. It does not cost many, yet we can still learn a lot.2015年高考全国卷1When I was a child, I hoped to live in the ciyt. I think I would be happy there. Now I am living in a city ,but I miss my home in countryside. There the air is clean or the mountains are green. Unfortunately, on the development of industrialization, the environment has been polluted. Lots of studies have been shown that global warming has already become a very seriously problem. The airs we breathe in is getting dirtier and dirtier. Much rare animals are dying out . We must found ways to protect your environment. If we fail to do so ,we’ll live to regret it .2015年高考全国卷2英语试题One day , little T ony went to a shopping center with his parent. It was very crowded. Tony saw a toy on a shop window. He liked it so very much that he quickly walked into the shop. After looks at the toy for some time, he turned around and found where his parents were missing. Tony was scared and begun to cry. A woman saw him drying and telling him to wait outside a shop. Five minutes later, Tony saw parents. Mom said,“How nice to see you again! Dad and I were terrible worried. ” Tony promised her that this would never happen again.。
专题一动词的时态和语态考点1 一般时1.［2016•乙卷（全国Ⅰ）］So it was a great honour...I ____ (allow) to get up close to these cute animals at the 600-acre centre.2.［2015•新课标全国Ⅰ］It was raining lightly when I ____ (arrive) in Yangshuo just before dawn.3.［2015•江苏］The real reason why prices ____ (be), and still are, too high is complex, and no short discussion can satisfactorily explain this problem.4.［2015•湖南］I wasn’t able to hide my eagerness when I ____ (ask),"What do you wish me to do now?"5.［2015•湖南］That’s why I help brighten people’s days. If you____ (do), who’s to say that another person will?6.［2015•重庆］—Is Peter coming?—No, he ____ (change) his mind after a phone call at the last minute.7.［2014•新课标全国Ⅰ］In 1969,the pollution was terrible along the Cuyahoga River Cleveland, Ohio. It ____ (be) unimaginable that it could ever be cleaned up.8.［2014•湖南］Whenever you ____ (buy) a present, you should think about it from the receiver’s point of view.9.［2014•重庆］You’d better write down her phone number before you____ (forget)it.10.［2014•福建］—Haven’t seen you for ages! Where have you been?—I went to Ningxia and ____ (stay) there for one year, teaching as a volunteer.11. ［2013•安徽］I’m calling about the apartment you ____ (advertise) the other day. Could you tell me more about it?12.［2013•重庆］I felt very tired when I got home, and I ____ (go)straight to bed.13.［2013•陕西］On Monday mornings it usually ____ (take) me an hour to drive to work although the actual distance is only 20 miles.14.［2013•湖南］Around two o’clock every night, Sue will start talking in her dream. It somewhat ____ (bother) us.15.［2013•山东］I didn’t think I’d like the movie, but actually it ____ (be) pretty good.16.［2012•新课标全国］"Life is like walking in the snow," Granny used to say, "because every step ____ (show)."17.［2012•天津］The three of us ____ (travel) around Europe for about a month last summer.18.［2016•乙卷（全国Ⅰ）改错］It is always crowded with customers at meal times. Some people even had to wait outside.19.［2016•甲卷（全国Ⅱ）改错］The summer holiday is corning...I thought that it is a good idea.20.［2016•丙卷(全国Ⅲ)改错］They always tell me what to do and how to do it. At one time, I even felt my parents couldn’t understand me...21.［2015•新课标全国Ⅰ改错］When I was a child, I hoped to live in the city. I think I would be happy there.22.［2015•新课标全国Ⅱ改错］Tony was scared and begun to cry.23.［2015•新课标全国Ⅱ改错］A woman saw him crying and telling him to wait outside the shop.24.［2014•新课标全国Ⅱ改错］My dream school starts at 8:30 a.m. and ends at 3:30 p.m. ... We didn’t need to do so much homework.考点2进行时25.［2015•天津］Jane can’t attend the meeting at 3 o’clock this afternoon because she ____ (teach) a class at that time.26.［2015•湖南］He must have sensed that I ____ (look)at him. He suddenly glanced at me and said quietly, "Why are you staring at me like that?"27.［2014•重庆］James has just arrived, but I didn’t know he ____（come）until yesterday.28.［2014•北京］—Hi, let’s go skating.—Sorry, I’m busy right now. I ____ (fill) in an application form for a new job.29.［2014•四川］She ____ (phone) someone，so I nodded to her and went away．30.［2013•陕西］Jim ____ (watch) a late-night film at home when, right in the middle of a thrilling scene, the television went blank.31.［2013•湖南］—I don’t understand why you didn’t go to the lecture yesterday afternoon. —I’m so sorry. Bu t I ____ (do) my homework.32.［2013•四川］Hurry up, kids! The school bus ____（wait）for us!33.［2013•天津］The water supply has been cut off temporarily because the workers ____ (repair) one of the main pipes.34.［2012•湖南］"The moment ____ (come) soon,"he thought to himself,waiting nervously.35.［2012•福建］—When did the computer crash?—This morning, while I ____ (sort) the reading materials downloaded from some websites.36.［2012•四川］—Did you catch what I said?—Sorry. I ____ (answer) a text message just now.37.［2012•陕西］—Can I call you back at two o’clock this afternoon?—I’m sorry, but by then I ____ (fly) to Beijing.How about five?38.［2012•辽宁］I feel so excited! At this time tomorrow morning I ____ (fly) to Shanghai.考点3完成时39.［2016•北京］I ____（read）half of the English novel, and I’ll try to finish it at the weekend.40.［2016•浙江］Silk ____（become）one of the primary goods traded along the Silk Road by about 100 BC.41.［2015•北京］—Did you have difficulty finding Ann’s house?—Not really. She ____ (give)us clear directions and we were able to find it easily.42.［2015•北京］In the last few years, China ____ (make) great achievements in environmental protection.43.［2015•安徽］Just as I got to the school gate, I realized I ____ (leave) my book in the cafe.44.［2015•天津］Despite the previous rounds of talks, no agreement ____ (reach)so far by the two sides.45.［2014•山东］Writing out all the invitations by hand was more time-consuming than we ____（expect）.46.［2014•江苏］—How much do you know about the Youth Olympic Games to be held in Nanjing?—Well, the media ____ (cover) it in a variety of forms.47.［2014•浙江］Sofia looked around at all the faces: she had the impression that she ____ (see) most of the guests before.48.［2013•浙江］During the last three decades,the number of people participating in physical fitness programs ____ (increase) sharply.49.［2013•辽宁］He was unhappy when he sold his guitar. After all, he ____ (have) it for a verylong time.50.［2013•新课标全国Ⅰ］When I first met Bryan I didn’t like him, but I ____ (change) my mind.51.［2013•山东］—Oh no! We’re too late. The train ____ (leave).—That’s OK. We’ll catch the next train to London.52.［2013•湖南］—Have you heard about the recent election?—Sure, it____ (be) the only thing on the news for the last three days.53.［2012•浙江］—Alvin, are you coming with us?—I'd love to, but something unexpected ____ (come)up.54.［2012•江苏］The manager is said to have arrived back from Paris where he ____ (meet) some European business partners.55.［2012•江西］—Look! Somebody ____ (clean) the sofa.—Well, it wasn’t me. I didn’t do it.考点4完成进行时56.［2016•江苏］Dashan, who ____（learn）crosstalk, the Chinese comedic tradition, for decades, wants to mix it up with the Western stand-up tradition.57.［2015•福建］—Where is Peter? I can’t find him anywhere.—He went to the library after breakfast and ____ (write)his essay there ever since.58.［2015•陕西］Marty ____ (work) really hard on his book and he thinks he’ll have finished it by Friday.59.［2014•湖南］Since the time humankind started gardening, we ____（try）to make our environment more beautiful.60.［2014•江西］—Tony, why are your eyes red?—I ____（cut）up peppers for the last five minutes.61.［2013•福建］The girl has a great interest in sport and ____ (take) badminton classes twice a week over the last three years.62.［2012•安徽］In order to find the missing child, villagers ____ (do) all they can over the past five hours.63.［2011•北京］Tom ____ (work) in the library every night over the last three months.64.［2011•新课标全国］When Alice came to, she did not know how long she ____ (lie) there.65.［2014•新课标全国Ⅰ改错］Since then —for all these years —we had been allowing tomatoes to self-seed where they please.考点5将来时66.［2016•北京］The students have been working hard on their lessons and their efforts ____（reward）with success in the end.67.［2015•北京］—Dr. Jackson is not in his office at the moment.—All right. I ____ (call) him later.68.［2015•湖南］As you go through this book, you ____ (find) that each of the millions of people who lived through World War Ⅱhad a different experience.69.［2015•四川］More expressways ____ (build) in Sichuan soon to promote the local economy.70.［2015•陕西］At college, Barack Obama didn’t know that he ____ (be) to become the first black president of the United States of America.71.［2015•浙江］Albert Einstein was born in 1879. As a child, few people guessed that he ____ (go) to be a famous scientist whose theories would change the world.72.［2014•北京］—What time is it?—I have no idea. But just a minute, I ____（check）it for you.73.［2013•北京］—Do you think Mom and Dad ____ (be) late?—No. Swiss Air is usually on time.74.［2013•辽宁］We are confident that the environment ____ (improve) by our further efforts to reduce pollution.75.［2012•湖南］Close the door of fear behind you,and you ____ (see) the door of faith open before you.76.［2012•湖南］Don’t worry.The hard work that you do now ____ (repay) later in life.77.［2012•北京］By the time you have finished this book, your meal ____ (get) cold.考点6被动语态78.［2016•丙卷(全国Ⅲ)］Truly elegant chopsticks might ____ (make) of gold and silver with Chinese characters.79.［2016•江苏］More efforts, as reported, ____（make）in the years ahead to accelerate the supply-side structural reform.80.［2015•北京］—Did you enjoy the party?—Yes. We ____ (treat) well by our hosts.81.［2015•福建］To my delight, I ____ (choose)from hundreds of applicants to attend the opening ceremony.82.［2015•湖南］I had a strong desire to reach in and play with the toy, but ____ (hold) back thankfully by the shop window.83.［2014•天津］We won’t start the work until all the preparations ____ (make).84.［2013•北京］Shakespeare’s play Hamlet ____ (make) into at least ten different films over the past years.85.［2013•湖南］If nothing ____ (do), the oceans will turn into fish deserts.86.［2013•上海］The school board is made up of parents who ____ (elect) to make decisions about school affairs.87.［2012•安徽］After school we went to the reading-room to do some reading, only to be told that it ____ (decorate).88.［2012•北京］—Have you heard about that fire in the market?—Yes, fortunately no one ____ (hurt).89.［2016•乙卷（全国Ⅰ）改错］Every day he makes sure that fresh vegetables and high quality oil are using for cooking.专题二非谓语动词考点1非谓语动词作定语1.［2016•乙卷（全国Ⅰ）］...（when）I was the first Western TV reporter ____ (permit) to filma special unit caring for pandas rescued from starvation in the wild.2.［2016•四川］For 25 days, she never left her baby, not even to find something ____ (eat)!3.［2015•新课标全国Ⅰ］Abercrombie & Kent, a travel company in Hong Kong, says it (regularly) (regular) arranges quick getaways here for people ____ (live) in Shanghai and Hong Kong.4.［2015•新课标全国Ⅱ］The adobe dwellings (土坯房)____ (build) by the Pueblo Indians of the American Southwest are admired by...5.［2015•北京］The park was full of people,____ (enjoy) themselves in the sunshine.6.［2014•大纲］Today there are more airplanes ____（carry）more people than ever before in the skies.7.［2014•浙江］Amie Salmon,disabled,is attended throughout her school days by a nurse ____ (appoint) to guard her.8. ［2014•重庆］The producer comes regularly to collect the cameras ____ (return) to our shop for quality problems.9.［2013•陕西］The witnesses ____ (question) by the police just now gave very different descriptions of the fight.10.［2013•湖南］You cannot accept an opinion____ (offer) to you unless it is based on facts.11.［2013•天津］In some languages, 100 words make up half of all words ____ (use) in daily conversations.12.［2013•北京］V olunteering gives you a chance ____ (change) lives, including your own.13.［2013•四川］The airport ____ (complete) next year will help promote tourism in this area.14.［2013•辽宁］Laura was away in Paris for over a week. When she got home, there was a pile of mail ____ (wait) for her.15.［2013•新课标全国Ⅰ］They might just have a place ____ (leave) on the writing course —why don’t you give it a try?16.［2012•北京］Birds’singing is sometimes a warning to other birds ____ (stay) away.17.［2012•重庆］We’re having a meeting in half an hour. The decision ____ (make) at the meeting will influence the future of our company.考点2非谓语动词作状语18.［2016•丙卷(全国Ⅲ)］People probably cooked their food in large pots, ____ (use) twigs (树枝) to remove it.19.［2016•天津］The cooling wind swept through our bedroom windows, ____（make）air conditioning unnecessary.20.［2016•北京］____（make）it easier to get in touch with us, you’d better keep this card at hand.21.［2016•北京］____(order)over a week ago, the books are expected to arrive any time now.22.［2016•北京］Newly-built wooden cottages line the street, ____ (turn) the old town into a dreamland.23.［2015•北京］____ (catch) the early flight, we ordered a taxi in advance and got up very early.24.［2015•江苏］Much time ____ (spend) sitting at a desk, office workers are generally troubled by health problems.25.［2015•福建］____ (learn) more about Chinese culture, Jack has decided to take Chinese folk music as an elective course.26.［2015•福建］In recent years an English word "infosphere" has appeared,____ (combine)the sense of "information" and "atmosphere".27.［2015•湖南］When the clerk saw a kind face wrinkled in an apologetic smile, she stood rooted to the ground, ____ (wonder)whether to stay or leave.28.［2015•天津］_____ (work) for two days, Steve managed to finish his report on schedule.29.［2015•湖南］Sometimes I act as a listening ear for fellow students ____ (talk)over what is bothering them.30.［2015•重庆］____ (raise) in the poorest area of Glasgow, he had a long, hard road to becominga football star.31.［2015•重庆］Like ancient sailors, birds can find their way ____ (use) the sun and the stars.32.［2014•湖南］Children, when ____（accompany）by their parents, are allowed to enter the stadium.33.［2014•重庆］Group activities will be organized after class ____（help）children develop team spirit.34.［2014•山东］There’s a note pinned to the door ____（say）when the shop will open again.35.［2014•陕西］____ (work) out the difficult maths problem,I have consulted Professor Russell several times.36.［2014•四川］—I hope to take the computer course．—Good idea．____ (find) out more about it, visit this website．37.［2013•湖南］____ (stay) warm at night, I would fill the woodstove, then set my alarm clock for midnight so I could refill it.38.［2013•新课标全国Ⅰ］The sunlight is white and blinding, ____ (throw) hard-edged shadows on the ground.39.［2013•新课标全国Ⅱ］I got to the office earlier that day,____ (catch) the 7:30 train from Paddington.40.［2013•安徽］____ (found) in the early 20th century,the school keeps on inspiring children’s love of art.41.［2013•重庆］When I was little, my mother used to sit by my bed, ____(tell) me stories till I fell asleep.42.［2013•江苏］Lionel Messi, ____ (set) the record for the most goals in a calendar year, is considered the most talented football player in Europe.43.［2013•山东］____ (eat) at the cafeteria before, Tina didn’t want to eat there again.44.［2012•全国Ⅱ］The old man sat in front of the television every evening, happy ____ (watch) anything that happened to be on.45.［2012•山东］George returned after the war,only ____ (tell) that his wife had left him.46.［2012•辽宁］This machine is very easy ____ (operate).Anybody can learn to use it in a few minutes.47.［2015•陕西］Back from his two-year medical service in Africa, Dr. Lee was very happy to see his mother ____ (take) good care of at home.48.［2014•四川］The manager was satisfied to see many new products ____ （develop）after great effort．49.［2013•陕西］Let those in need ____ (understand) that we will go all out to help them.50.［2013•北京］When we saw the road ____ (block) with snow,we decided to spend the holiday at home.51.［2012•四川］I looked up and noticed a snake ____ (wind) its way up the tree to catch its breakfast.52.［2012•四川］Before driving into the city, you are required to get your car ____ (wash).53.［2012•江西］Having finished her project, she was invited by the school ____ (speak) to the new students.54.［2012•辽宁］The old couple often take a walk after supper in the park with their pet dog ____ (follow) them.考点4非谓语动词作主语、宾语和表语55.［2016•乙卷（全国Ⅰ）］My ambassadorial duties will include ____ (introduce) British visitors to the 120-plus pandas at Chengdu and others at a research centre in the misty mountains of Bifengxia.56.［2015•新课标全国Ⅱ］In addition to their simple beauty, what makes the adobe dwellings admirable is their (ability) (able) to "air condition" a house without ____ (use) electric equipment.57.［2015•安徽］____ (ignore) the difference between the two research findings will be one of the worst mistakes you make.58.［2014•湖南］____（understand）your own needs and styles of communication is as important as learning to convey your affection and emotions.59.［2014•福建］For those with family members far away, the personal computer and the phone are important in staying ____（connect）.60.［2014•山东］It’s standard practice for a company like this one ____（employ）a security officer.61.［2014•江西］When it comes to ____ (speak) in public, no one can match him.62.［2014•陕西］It’s quite hot today. Do you feel like ____ (go) for a swim?63.［2013•福建］____ (know) basic first-aid techniques will help you respond quickly to emergencies.64.［2013•浙江］____ (hear) how others react to the book you have just read creates an added pleasure.65.［2013•江苏］Shortly after suffering from a massive earthquake and ____ (reduce) to ruins, the city took on a new look.66.［2012•安徽］I remembered ____ (lock) the door before I left the office, but forgot to turn off the lights.67.［2012•陕西］If he takes on this work, he will have no choice but ____ (meet) an even greater challenge.68.［2012•湖南］We’ve had a good start,but next,more work needs ____ (do) to achieve the final success.69.［2012•北京］One learns a language by making mistakes and ____ (correct) them.70.［2016•甲卷（全国Ⅱ）改错］We can choose between staying at home and take a trip.71.［2016•丙卷(全国Ⅲ)改错］I showed them I was independent by wear strange clothes.72.［2015•新课标全国Ⅱ改错］After looks at the toy for some time, he turned around and found his parents were missing.专题三介词、介词短语和动词短语考点1介词1.［2016•甲卷（全国Ⅱ）］Most of us are more focused ____ our tasks in the morning than we are later in the day.2.［2016•丙卷(全国Ⅲ)］In India, for example, most people traditionally eat ____ their hands.3.［2016•浙江］The study suggests that the cultures we grow up ____ influence the basic processes by which we see the world around us.4.［2015•江苏］Many of the things we now benefit from would not be around but ____ Thomas Edison.5.［2015•重庆］Last year was the warmest year on record, with global temperature 0.68 ℃____ the average.6.［2015•浙江］Have you ever heard of the trees that are homes ____ animals both on land andsea?7..［2015•福建］A common memory they all have ____ their school days is the school uniform.8.［2014•浙江］People won't pay attention to you when they still have a lot of ideas of their own crying ____ expression.9.［2014•江西］It is unbelievable that Mr. Lucas leads a simple life ____ his great wealth.10.［2014•陕西］The Scottish girl ____ blue eyes won the first prize in the Fifth Chinese Speech Contest.11.［2014•安徽］What we expect from you is working hard rather ____ hardly working.12.［2013•新课标全国Ⅰ］It was a real race ____ time to get the project done. Luckily, we made it.13.［2013•新课标全国Ⅱ］A serious study of physics is impossible ____ some knowledge of mathematics.14.［2013•山东］The Smiths are praised ____ the way they bring up their children.15.［2013•安徽］Before you pay a visit to a place of interest, look in your local library ____ a book about it.16.［2012•全国Ⅱ］100 ℃is the temperature ____ which water will boil.17.［2012•福建］Nothing is so easy as ____ parents to raise their expectations of their children too high.18.［2012•浙江］____ all the animals I've ever had, these two dogs are the most sensitive to the spoken word.19.［2016•丙卷(全国Ⅲ)改错］Now I am leaving home to college.20.［2015•新课标全国Ⅰ改错］Unfortunately, on the development of industrialization, the environment has been polluted.21.［2015•新课标全国Ⅱ改错］Tony saw a toy on a shop window.22.［2014•新课标全国Ⅱ改错］Therefore, we have more time with after-school activities.考点2介词短语23.［2016•浙江］That young man is honest, cooperative, always there when you need his help. ____ short, he's reliable.24.［2015•新课标全国Ⅱ］When a new day breaks, the walls have given up their heat and are now cold enough (to cool) (cool) the house during the hot day; ____ the same time, they warm up again for the night.25.［2015•安徽］They believe that there are transport developments ____ the corner that will bringa lot of changes for the better.26.［2015•浙江］Most people work because it's unavoidable. ____ contrast, there are some people who actually enjoy work.27.［2015•浙江］These comments came ____ response to specific questions often asked by local newsmen.28.［2015•陕西］The little pupil took his grandma ____ the arm and walked her across the street.29.［2015•湖北］This meeting room is a non-smoking area.I would like to warn you ____ advance that if you smoked here you would be fined.30.［2014•湖北］Check carrots, potatoes, onions and any other vegetables ____ store and immediately use or throw away any which show signs of rotting.31.［2014•天津］____ addition to the school, the village has a clinic, which was also built withgovernment support.32.［2014•江西］Starting your own business could be a way to achieving financial independence. ____ the other hand, it could just put you in debt.33.［2014•福建］Our club is open to everyone regardless ____ age, sex or educational background.34.［2014•江苏］Tom always goes jogging in the morning and he usually does push-ups too to stay ____ shape.35.［2013•湖北］An artist who was recently traveling on a ferry to the southern island discovered ____ chance a long lost antique Greek vase.36.［2013•福建］Mrs. Smith finds it hard to clear up the mess, as her children are always ____ the way whenever she tries to.37.［2013•辽宁］____ behalf of everyone here, I wish you a pleasant journey back to your country.38.［2013•浙江］It will be a big help if you go to the store and get what we need for dinner. ____ the meanwhile, I'll set the table.39.［2013•江苏］I am always delighted when I receive an e-mail from you. ____ regard to the party on July 1st, I shall be pleased to attend.40.［2013•陕西］The manager wants to see changes in the company, and I am sure he will ____ time.41.［2012•安徽］You can change your job, you can move house, but friendship is meant to be ____ life.42.［2012•江西］He seems to be giving the impression that he didn't enjoy himself in Paris. ____ the contrary, he had a wonderful time.43.［2016•丙卷(全国Ⅲ)改错］At the first, I thought I knew everything and could make decisions by myself.考点3动词短语44.［2016•天津］Mary was silent during the early part of the discussion but finally she give voice ____ her opinion on the subject.45.［2016•天津］I hate it when she calls me at work —I'm always too busy to carry ____ a conversation with her.46.［2016•天津］I'm going to ____ advantage of this tour to explore the history of the castle.47.［2016•浙江］When their children lived far away from them, these old people felt cut ____ from the world.48.［2016•江苏］Many businesses started up by college students have taken ____ thanks to the comfortable climate for business creation.49.［2015•陕西］Peter will take ____ his post as the head of the travel agency at the end of next month.50.［2015•江苏］The whole team count ____ Cristiano Ronaldo, and he seldom lets them down.51.［2015•天津］Tom had to turn ____ the invitation to the party last weekend because he was too busy.52.［2015•湖北］There is no doubt that this candidate's advantage lies ____ his ability to communicate with foreigners in English.53.［2015•浙江］Body language can give ____ a lot about your mood, so standing with your arms folded can send out a signal that you are being defensive.54.［2015•福建］It is said that body language accounts ____ 55 per cent of a first impression whilewhat you say just 7 per cent.55．［2014•浙江］How could you turn ____ such a fantastic job when you have been out of work for months?56. ［2014•湖北］I've been trying to phone Charles all evening, but there must be something wrong with the network; I can't seem to get ____.57. ［2014•湖北］Is this your necklace, Mary? I came ____ it when I was cleaning the bathroom this morning.58. ［2014•安徽］Terry, please look up ____ your cell phone when Grandma is talking to you.59. ［2014•安徽］When the sports hero turned ____ at our party, he was welcomed with open arms.60. ［2014•福建］As a grassroots singer, she reads everything she can get hold ____ concerning music, and takes every opportunity to improve herself.61. ［2014•天津］The two countries are going to meet to break ____ some barriers to trade between them.62. ［2014•江苏］—Dad, I don't think Oliver the right sort of person for the job.—I see. I'll go right away and pay him ____.63.［2013•江苏］Team leaders must ensure that all members get ____ their natural desire to avoid the embarrassment associated with making mistakes.64.［2013•新课标全国Ⅰ］At the last moment, Tom decided to put ____ a new character to make the story seem more likely.65.［2013•安徽］Traditionally, college students hold a graduation ceremony to encourage themselves before they set ____ on their life journey.66.［2013•湖北］Butterflies feed ____ a sweet liquidproduced by flowers, which bees and other insects collect.67.［2013•江西］Mother always complains that children wear ____ their shoes very quickly.68.［2013•陕西］My uncle hasn't been able to quit smoking, but at least he has cut ____.69.［2012•四川］It's surprising that your brother picked ____ Russian so quickly —he hasn't lived there very long.70.［2012•陕西］He had to pause from time to time to wipe the sweat from his forehead, because the air-conditioning system broke ____ .71.［2016•乙卷（全国Ⅰ）改错］My uncle says that he never dreams becoming rich in a short period of time.72.［2014•新课标全国Ⅱ改错］We can lie on the grass for a rest, or sit by the lake listening music.专题四冠词考点1不定冠词的用法1.［2016•甲卷（全国Ⅱ）］Give your body and brain a rest by stepping outside for ____ while, exercising, or doing something you enjoy.2.［2015•四川］Brian is gifted in writing music; he is very likely to be ____ Beethoven.3. ［2015•重庆］I just heard ____ bank where Dora works was robbed by ____ gunman wearinga mask.4.［2014•陕西］____ village where I was born has grown into ____ town.5.［2014•江西］They chose Tom to be ____ captain of the team because they knew he was ____ smart leader.6.［2014•浙江］The paper is due next month, and I am working seven days ____week, often longinto ____ night.7.［2013•新课标全国Ⅱ］Four and ____ half hours of discussion took us up to midnight, and ____ break for cheese, chocolate and tea with sugar.8.［2013•山东］It was ____ cold winter night and the moon was shining brightly across ____ night sky.9.［2013•重庆］The parents were shocked by ____ news that their son needed ____ operation on his knee.10.［2013•福建］The "Chinese Dream" is ____ dream to improve people's well-being and ____ dream of harmony, peace and development.11.［2013•浙江］People develop ____ preference for a particular style of learning at ____ early age and these preferences affect learning.12.［2012•辽宁］I woke up with ____ bad headache, yet by ____ evening the pain had gone.13.［2016•乙卷（全国Ⅰ）改错］My uncle says that he never dreams of becoming rich in the short period of time.考点2定冠词的用法14.［2016•乙卷（全国Ⅰ）］...while one is being bottle-fed, ____ other is with mum —she never suspects.15.［2016•浙江］____ prize for the winner of the competition is ____ two week holiday in Paris.16.［2015•陕西］____ more learned a man is, ____ more modest he usually becomes.17.［2015•浙江］Jane's grandmother had wanted to write ____ children's book for many years, but one thing or another always got in ____ way.18.［2014•重庆］I can't tell you ____ way to the Wilsons' because we don't have ____ Wilson here in the village.19.［2014•广东］She apologized for the mistake and gave us a spare VIP room on ____ top floor.20.［2014•天津］Life is like an ocean: Only ____ strong-willed can reach the other shore.21.［2013•陕西］Marco Polo is said to have sailed on ____ Pacific Ocean on his way to Java in ____ thirteenth century.22.［2016•甲卷（全国Ⅱ）改错］But in that case, we will learn little about world.23.［2015•新课标全国Ⅰ改错］Now I am living in a city, but I miss my home in countryside.24.［2015•新课标全国Ⅱ改错］A woman saw him crying and told him to wait outside a shop. 考点3零冠词的用法25.［2013•江西］Animals are obviously ____ lower form of life than ____ man.26.［2013•新课标全国Ⅰ］India attained ____ independence in 1947, after ____long struggle.27.［2012•江西］The Smiths don't usually like staying at ____ hotels, but last summer they spenta few days at a very nice hotel by ____ sea.28.［2014•新课标全国Ⅱ改错］There are all kinds of the flowers and trees around the classroom buildings.专题五名词和主谓一致考点1常见名词后缀1.［2016•乙卷（全国Ⅰ）］But for tourists like me, pandas are its top ____(attract).2.［2016•甲卷（全国Ⅱ）］Then, handle the most important tasks first so you'll feel a real sense of ____ (achieve).3.［2016•丙卷(全国Ⅲ)］Some people think that the great Chinese scholar Confucius, who lived。
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2018全国卷1During my last winter holiday, I went to countryside with my father to visit my grandparents. I find a big change there. The first time I went there, they were living in a small house with dogs, ducks, and another animals. Last winter when I went here again, they had a big separate house to raise dozens of chicken. They also had a small pond which they raised fish. My grandpa said last summer they earned quite a lot by sell the fish. I felt happily that their life had improved. At the end of our trip, I told my father that I planned to return for every two years, but he agreed.2018全国卷2When I was little, Friday’s night was our family game night. After supper, we would play card games of all sort in the sitting room. As the kid, I loved to watch cartoons, but no matter how many times I asked to watching them, my parents would not to let me. They would say to us that playing card games would help my brain. Still I unwilling to play the games for them sometimes. I didn’t realize how right my parents are until I entered high school. The games my parents taught me where I was a child turned out to be very useful later in my life.2018全国卷3It was Monday morning, and the writing class had just begin. Everyone was silent, wait to see who would be called upon to read his and her paragraph aloud. Some of us were confident and eager take part in the class activity, others were nervous and anxious. I had done myself homework, but I was shy. I was afraid that to speak in front of a larger group of people. At that moment, I remembered that my father once said, "The classroom is a place for learning and that include leaning from textbooks, and mistake as well."Immediate, I raised my hand.2017全国卷1In the summer holiday following my eighteen birthday, I took driving lessons. I still remember how hard first day was. Before getting into the car, I thought I had learned the instructor’s orders, so once I started the car, my mind goes blank, I forgot what he had said to me altogether. The instructor kept repeating the word, “Speed up!” “Slow down!” “Turning left!” I was so much nervous that I could hardly tell which direction was left. A few minutes late, the instructor asked me to stop the car. It was a relief and I came to a suddenly stop just in the middle on the road.2017年全国卷2Mr. and Mrs. Zhang all work in our school. They live far from the school, and it takes them about a hour and a half to go to work every day. In their spare time, they are interesting in planting vegetables in their garden, that is on the rooftop of their house. They often get up earlier and water the vegetables together. They have also bought for some gardening tools. Beside, they often get some useful informations from the internet. When summer came, they will invite their students pick the vegetables！2017年全国英语卷3When I look at this picture of myself. I realize of how fast time flies. I had grown not only physically. and also mentally in the past few years. About one month after this photo was took, I entered my second year of high school and become a new member of the school music club. Around me in picture are the things they were very important in my life at that time, car magazines and musical instruments. I enjoyed studying difference kinds of cars and planes, playing pop music, and collecting the late music albums. This picture often brings back to me many happy memories of your high school days.2016全国卷1My uncle is the owner of a restaurant close to that I love. Though not very big, but the restaurant is popular in our area. It is always crowded with customers at meal times. Some people even had to waitoutside. My uncle tells me that the key to his success is honest. Every day he makes sure that fresh vegetables or high quality oil are using for cooking. My uncle says that he never dreams becoming rich in the short period of time. Instead, he hopes that our business will grow steady.2016全国卷2The summer holiday is coming. My classmates and I are talking about how to do during the holiday. We can chose between staying at home and take a trip. If we stay at home, it is comfortable but there is no need to spend money. But in that case, we will learn little about world. If we go on a trip abroad, we can broaden you view and gain knowledges we cannot get from books. Some classmates suggest we can go to places of interest nearby. I thought that it is a good idea. It does not cost many, yet we can still learn a lot. 2016全国卷3The teenage year from 13 to 19 were the most difficult time for me . They were also the best and worse years in my life. At the first, I thought I knew everything and could make decisions by yourself. However, my parents didn’t seem to think such. They always tell me what to do and how to do it. At one time, I even felt my parents couldn’t understand me so I hoped I could be freely from them. I showed them I was independent by wear strange clothes. Now I am leaving home to college. At last, I will be on my own, but I still want to have my parents to turn to whenever need help.2016浙江卷When I was a very young children, my father created a regular practice I remember well years late. Every time he arrived home at end of the day, we’d greet het at the door. He would ask who we was and pretend not to knowing us, Then he and my mother would have had a drink while she prepared dinner and they would talk about his day and hers. While they chat, my father would lift my sister and me up to sit in the top of the fridge. It was both excited and frightening to be up there！My sister and I thought he was so cool for putting us there.2016四川卷It is Mother’s D ay today. Though it’s a western festival, it’s popular in China now.Mom has a full-time job, so she has to do most of the houseworks. She is a great mother. Both Dad or I planned to do something on Mother’s Day. We get up early in the morning. Dad cleaned the house, and then went on shopping. When he came back, I found a bunch of flowers in her hand. I asked Mom to stayin the sitting room and I cooked in kitchen. The dishes what I cooked were Mom’s favoritiest. At dinner, we said to her, “Happy Mother’s Day！”Mom was grateful and moving.。
短文改错2018年Correction 1 2018全国卷I，10分During my last winter holiday, I went to countryside with my father to visit my grandparents. I find a big change there. The first time I went there, they were living in a small house with dogs, ducks, and another animals. Last winter when I went here again, they had a big separate house to raise dozens of chicken. They also had a small pond which they raised fish. My grandpa said last summer they earned quite a lot by sell the fish. I felt happily that their life had improved. At the end of our trip, I told my father that I planned to return for every two years, but he agreed.Correction 2 2018全国卷II，10分When I was little, Friday’s night was our family game night. After supper, we would play card games of all sort in the sitting room. As the kid, I loved to watch cartoons, but no matter how many times I asked to watching them, my parents would not to let me. They would say to us that playing card games would help my brain. Still I unwilling to play the game for them sometimes. I didn’t realize how right my parents are until I entered high school. The games my parents taught me where I was a child turned out to be very useful later in my life.Correction 3 2018全国卷III，10分It was Monday morning, and the writing class had just begin. Everyone was silent, wait to see who would be called upon to read his and her paragraph aloud. Some of us were confident and eager take part in the class activity; others were nervous and anxious. I had done myself homework, but I was shy. I was afraid that to speak in front of a larger group of people. At that moment, I remembered that my father once said, "The classroom is a place for learning and that include learning from textbooks, and mistake as well." Immediate, I raised my hand.2017年Correction 1 2017全国卷Ⅰ，10分In the summer holiday following my eighteen birthday, I took driving lessons. I still remember how hard first day was. Before getting into the car, I thought I had learned the instructor s orders, so once I started the car, my mind goes blank. I forgot what he had said to me altogether. The instructor kept repeating the word, "Speed up!" "Slow down!" "Turning left!" I was so much nervous that I could hardly tell which direction was left. A few minutes late, the instructor asked me to stop the car.It was a relief and I came to a suddenly stop just in the middle on the road.Correction 2 2017全国卷Ⅱ，10分Mr. and Mrs. Zhang all work in our school. They live far from the school, and it takes them about a hour and a half to go to work every day. In their spare time, they are interesting in planting vegetables in their garden, that is on the rooftop of their house. They often get up earlier and water the vegetables together. They have also bought for some gardening tools. Beside, they often get some useful informations from the Internet. When summer came, they will invite their students pick the fresh vegetables!Correction 3 2017全国卷Ⅲ，10分When I look at this picture of myself, I realize of how fast time flies. I had grown not only physically, and also mentally in the past few years. About one month after this photo was took, I entered mysecond year of high school and become a new member of the school music club. Around me in picture are the things they were very important in my life at that time: car magazines and musical instruments.I enjoyed studying difference kinds of cars and planes, playing pop music, and collecting the late music albums. This picture often brings back to me many happy memories of your high school days.2012—2016年Correction 1［2016·乙卷(全国Ⅰ)］My uncle is the owner of a restaurant close to that I live. Though not very big, but the restaurant is popular in our area. It is always crowded with customers at meal times. Some people even had to wait outside. My uncle tells me that the key to his success is honest. Every day he makes sure that fresh vegetables or high quality oil are using for cooking. My uncle says that he never dreams becoming rich in the short period of time. Instead, he hopes that our business will grow steady. Correction 2［2016·甲卷（全国Ⅱ）］The summer holiday is coming. My classmates and I are talking about how to do during the holiday. We can chose between staying at home and take a trip. If we stay at home, it is comfortable but there is no need to spend money. But in that case, we will learn little about world. If we go on a trip abroad, we can broaden your view and gain knowledges we cannot get from books. Some classmates suggest we can go to places of interest nearby. I thought that it is a good idea. It does not cost many, yet we can still learn a lot.Correction 3［2016·丙卷（全国Ⅲ）］The teenage year from 13 to 19 were the most difficult time for me. They were also the best and worse years in my life. At the first, I thought I knew everything and could make decisions by yourself. However, my parents didn't seem to think such. They always tell me what to do and how to do it. At one time, I even felt my parents couldn't understand me so I hoped I could be freely from them. I showed them I was independent by wear strange clothes. Now I am leaving home to college. At last, I will be on my own, but I still want to have my parents to turn to whenever need help.Correction 4［2016·四川］It is Mother's Day today. Though it's a western festival, it's popular in China now.Mom has a full-time job, so she has to do most of the houseworks. She is a great mother. Both Dad or I planned to do something on Mother's Day. We get up early in the morning. Dad cleaned the house, and then went on shopping. When he came back, I found a bunch of flowers in her hand. I asked Mom to stay in the sitting room and I cooked in kitchen. The dishes what I cooked were Mom's favoritest. At dinner, we said to her, "Happy Mother's Day!" Mom was grateful and moving. Correction 5［2016·浙江］When I was a very young children, my father created a regular practice I remember well years late. Every time he arrived home at end of the day, we'd greet her at the door. He would ask who we was and pretend not to knowing us. Then he and my mother would have had a drink while she prepared dinner and they would talk about his day and hers. While they chat, my father would lift my sister and me up to sit in the top of the fridge. It was both excited and frightening to be up there! My sister and I thought he was so cool for putting us there.Correction6 [2015·新课标全国卷Ⅰ]When I was a child, I hoped to live in the city.I think I would be happy there.Now I am living in a city, but I miss my home in countryside.There the air is clean or the mountains are green.Unfortunately, on the development of industrialization, the environment has been polluted.Lots of studies have been shown that global warming has already become a very seriously problem.Theairs we breathe in is getting dirtier and dirtier.Much rare animals are dying out.We must found ways to protect your environment.If we fail to do so, we'll live to regret it.Correction7 [2015·新课标全国卷Ⅱ]One day, little Tony went to a shopping center with his parent. It was very crowded.Tony saw a toy on a shop window. He liked it so very much that he quickly walked into the shop. After looks at the toy for some time, he turned around and found where his parents were missing. Tony was scared and begun to cry. A woman saw him crying and telling him to wait outside a shop. Five minutes later, Tony saw parents. Mom said, "How nice to see you again! Dad and I were terrible worried." Tony promised her that this would never happen again.Correction8 [2015·陕西]My soccer coach retired in last week. I wanted to do anything special for him at his retirement party. My mum makes the better biscuits in the world, so I decide to ask her for help. Mum taught me some basic step of baking. I insisted on doing most of the baking myself. I thought the biscuits were really well. My only mistake was that I dropped some on the floor after I was packing them up.At a party, my coach, with a biscuit in his mouth, asked surprisingly who made them and joked, "I might have to retire again next year just get some more of these biscuits."My favorite picture at the party is of my coach and me enjoy the biscuits with happy laughter! Correction9 [2015·四川]Hi, Janice,It's been a month since I came to this new school and I really want share with you some of the problems I have been experiencing.As I tell you last time, I made three new friend here. We hang out together during lunch and after school. We've been spending a lot of time sing in karaoke bars. It's been three Saturdays now and it really costs me many. And I started to see this as a time-wasting activity! In fact, I don't like to go anymore, so I'm afraid I'll lose their friendship. How do you think I should do? If you are me, would you talk to him?Please help with me and give me some advice.Grace Correction10 [2015·浙江]My old classroom was interesting because three side of the classroom were made from glass. I enjoyed sit close to the windows and looking at the view. On the left-hand side of the class, I could easy see the football field. In the mornings, it was full of students exercising. The view from the back of the classroom is also splendid. Close to the school there was a beautiful park with many trees around them. Farther in the distance, I could not enjoy the view of snowy mountains. On the right side of the class was the road. I was always interested to see the drivers in hurry in the morning. The position of the classroom with its view made me felt like I was dreaming. If I was only a child when I studied in that classroom, I will never forget it.Correction11 [2014·新课标全国卷Ⅰ]Nearly five years before, and with the help by our father, my sister and I planted some cherry tomatoes (圣女果) in our back garden. Since then —for all these year —we had been allowing tomatoes to self-seed where they please. As result, the plants are growing somewhere. The fruits are small in size, but juicy and taste. There are so much that we often share them with our neighbors. Although we allow tomato plants to grow in the same place year after year, but we have never had any disease or insect attack problems. We are growing wonderfully tomatoes at no cost!Correction12 [2014·新课标全国卷Ⅱ]My dream school starts at 8:30 a.m. and ends at 3:30 p.m. They are three lessons in the morning and two in the afternoon. We didn't need to do so many homework. Therefore, we have more time with after-school activities. For example, we can do reading for one and a half hour and play sports for one hour every day.My dream school look like a big garden. There are all kinds of the flowers and trees around the classroom buildings. We can lie on the grass for a rest, or sat by the lake listening music. The teachers here are kind and helpfully. They are not only our teachers but also our friends.Correction13 [2014·浙江]I was taking a train to London's Victoria Station. I had noticed that the carriage was noise and filled with people.Before long, a train inspector comes to check our tickets. A passenger realized he couldn't find his ticket but became quite upset. Then everyone in the carriage began searching the ticket, which was eventually found under a seat several rows from his owner. The person who found a ticket smiled with pleasure at his success.No one in the carriage had previous spoken to or even noticed the ticket-owner before. Yet they had so quickly offered the strangers their help. If we could show concern to others on need, the world would be a better place to live in.Correction14 [2014·陕西]My father took me out camping for the first time when I was seven. He wanted teach me about animals,insects and trees. My uncles all come along with bows and arrows for hunting.One evening at sunset,we sat by the fire,have our barbecue.Just then a bird was flying over us.My uncles immediate jumped up and shot their arrows on the bird. Neither of the arrows hit the target.Suddenly the arrows was flying down at us from the sky — they were looked like rain! We ran to escape but fortunately no one was injured.That day I didn't learn much about animals, insects or trees, but I learnt a impressive lesson about gravity!Correction15 [2014·四川]Hello, boys and girls! Today，I am going to talk with what you should do when a fire alarm go off. If you hear the alarm, stand in line at the door and wait your teacher to lead you outside. Stay close to your teacher and classmate. Don't panic or get out of line, and trying to remain quiet and calmly. Soon the firefighters will come and put out a fire. If it's a false alarm and there is no fire, your teacher will lead us back to the classroom. If you notice that when someone is missing and hurt, tell your teacher immediately.Correction 16 [2014·辽宁]Dear Jeremy and Alice,Although we've been delighted to have you as neighbors, we're hoping to settle something that bothers to us. In a word, your dog — Cleo.We've called several time about Cleo's early morning barking. It is difficult to understanding why she barks every minute she's outside. The early morning barking have been disturbing us as we are often up all night with the baby. Beside, Cleo tends to bark a average of six hours a day. This morning she starts barking even before 5 o'clock. That is too much for us, considering how closely the houses are.We appreciate our apologies and goodwill, but we hope that you can figure a good way ofsettling the matter.Sincerely,Jack and Rose Correction17 [2013·新课标全国卷Ⅰ]I hardly remember my grandmother. She used to holding me on her knees and sing old songs. I was only four when she passes away. She is just a distant memory for me now.I remember my grandfather very much. He was tall, with broad shoulder and a beard that turned from black toward gray over the years. He had a deep voice, which set himself apart from others in our small town, he was strong and powerful. In a fact, he even scared my classmates away during they came over to play or do homework with me. However, he was the gentlest man I have never known. Correction18 [2013·新课标全国卷Ⅱ]The book I'm reading of talks about afternoon tea in Britain. It is said to have started in the early 1800's. Have tea in the late afternoon provides a bridge between lunch and dinner, that might not be served until 8 o'clock at night. This custom soon becomes another meal of day. Interesting, it had a connection by the British porcelain (瓷器) industry. Tea in China was traditionally drank from cups without handles. When tea got popular in Britain, there was a crying need for good cup with handles to suit British habits. This made for the grow in the porcelain industry.Correction19 [2013·陕西]My grandfather and I enjoy fishing.One Sunday morning we go fishing at a lake. We took ours fishing poles and headed for the lake. As soon as we arrived, so we dropped the lines into the water. Before waiting for about half an hour, I was beginning to get impatiently. I wanted to give up, and my grandfather told me to wait a little longer. Finally, there were a sudden pull at the pole and fish was caught. Within the next few minute, my grandfather also caught a fish.Felt hungry, we built a fire by the lake and barbecued the fish. It was delicious.Correction20 [2013·四川]Today we had a chemistry test. I found the test difficulty, but I tried hardly to do it. Suddenly Mary, my best friend, asking me to let her to copy my answers. After think for some time, I let her copy my answers. But after the test, all of us were called to the teacher's office. The teacher was angry because we had same answers in the tests. We were warned not to cheat again so she would need to see our parents. I was very upset. I didn't cheat. I was just helping a friend. Why does she punish me? Correction 21 [2013·辽宁]Mr.Johnson is a hardworking teacher. Every day，he spends too much time with his work.With little sleep and hardly any break, so he works from morning till night. Hard work have made him very ill. "He has ruined his healthy. We are worried about him." That is which other teachers say. Yesterday afternoon, I paid visit to Mr. Johnson.I was eager to see him,but outside her room I stopped. I had to calm myself down.Quietly I step into the room. I saw him lying in bed, looking at some of the picture we had taken together. I understood that he missed us just as many as we missed him.Correction 22 [2013·浙江]Dear Diary,Here I am in the middle of a city, 350 miles far away from our farmhouse. Do you want to know why we move last week?Dad lost his job, and as Mom explained,"He was lucky to find other one." His new job meant I had to say goodbye to my classmate, my school or just everything else I love in the world.To make matters bad, now I have to share a room with my younger sister,Maggie.Tomorrow is first day of school.I am awfully tiring, but I know I'll never fall sleep.Good night and remember, you, dear diary, is my only souvenir from my past life and my only friend.Yours,Rosemary Correction 23 [2012·新课标全国]I learned early in life that I had to be more patient and little aggressive. From the time I was about four until I was about six, I destroyed each of my toy. I was happy when the toys worked, but when things did wrong, I got angry and broke it. For a while parents bought me new toys. But before long they began to see which was happening. When I tear apart my fifth birthday toy train, my father said, "That's it. No more toys to you." My punishment lasted a year. Meanwhile, I found out that with more patience I must make my toys to last. My attitude changed from then on.Correction 24 [2012·陕西]My father and I stayed at the South Lake Hotel for a week when we visit Beijing last month.It is in the downtown area, but it is easy to go to anywhere from the hotel by public transport.We lived in a comfortably double-room with a big bath.What I liked best were the free high-speed Internet connection in the room.I checked my email messages every day.I also shared for my friends many photos taking in Beijing.The food was wonderful with reasonable prices, and we enjoyed several local dish.It is such great hotel that I would recommend it to any friend of me who is going to Beijing. Correction 25 [2012·辽宁]Dear Diana,Thank you for the lovely day we have with you. It was so kind for you to let us bring Anne's friend, Gina. Unfortunate, the only problem was the journey home. There had been a terrible accident on the highway and, for a result, there was a long line of traffic for at least six mile. In the end, we drove to a service station and waited there unless the road was clear. In the car park here Gina nearly got knocked over as car drove out far too quickly from behind a lorry. They finally dropped Gina off at her parents' and made our own way to home.Much love,Fiona短文改错答案2018年Correction 1①考查冠词。
短文改错28篇附解析答案43页2017年Correction 1 2017全国卷Ⅰ，10分In the summer holiday following my eighteen birthday, I took driving lessons. I still remember how hard first day was. Before getting into the car, I thought I had learned the instructor s orders, so once I started the car, my mind goes blank. I forgot what he had said to me altogether. The instructor kept repeating the word, "Speed up!" "Slow down!" "Turning left!" I was so much nervous that I could hardly tell which direction was left. A few minutes late, the instructor asked me to stop the car. It was a relief and I came to a suddenly stop just in the middle on the road.Correction 2 2017全国卷Ⅱ，10分Mr. and Mrs. Zhang all work in our school. They live far from the school, and it takes them about a hour and a half to go to work every day. In their spare time, they are interesting in planting vegetables in their garden, that is on the rooftop of their house. They often get up earlier and water the vegetables together. They have also bought for some gardening tools. Beside, they often get some useful informations from the Internet. When summer came, they will invite their studentspick the fresh vegetables!Correction 3 2017全国卷Ⅲ，10分When I look at this picture of myself, I realize of how fast time flies. I had grown not only physically, and also mentally in the past few years. About one month after this photo was took, I entered my second year of high school and become a new member of the school music club. Around me in picture are the things they were very important in my life at that time: car magazines and musical instruments. I enjoyed studying difference kinds of cars and planes, playing pop music, and collecting the late music albums. This picture often brings back to me many happy memories of your high school days.2012—2016年Correction 1［2016·乙卷(全国Ⅰ)］My uncle is the owner of a restaurant close to that I live. Though not very big, but the restaurant is popular in our area. It is always crowded with customers at meal times. Some people even had to wait outside. My uncle tells me that the key to his success is honest. Every day he makes sure that fresh vegetables or high quality oil are using for cooking. My uncle says that he never dreams becoming rich in the short period of time. Instead, he hopes that our business will grow steady.Correction 2［2016·甲卷（全国Ⅱ）］The summer holiday is coming. My classmates and I are talking about how to do during the holiday. We can chose between staying at home and take a trip. If we stay at home, it is comfortable but there is no need to spend money. But in that case, we will learn little about world. If we go on a trip abroad, we can broaden your view and gain knowledges we cannot get from books. Some classmates suggest we can go to places of interest nearby. I thought that it is a good idea. It does not cost many, yet we can still learn a lot.Correction 3［2016·丙卷（全国Ⅲ）］The teenage year from 13 to 19 were the most difficult time for me. They were also the best and worse years in my life. At the first, I thought I knew everything and could make decisions by yourself. However, my parents didn't seem to think such. They always tell me what to do and how to do it. At one time, I even felt my parents couldn't understand me so I hoped I could be freely from them. I showed them I was independent by wear strange clothes. Now I am leaving home to college. At last, I will be on my own, but I still want to have my parents to turn to whenever need help.Correction 4［2016·四川］。
专题一记叙文2016年高考题Cloze 12016全国卷Ⅰ，30分词数：269A Heroic DriverLarry works with Transport Drivers, Inc. One morning in 2009, Larry was 1 along 165 north after delivering to one of his 2 . Suddenly, he saw a car with its bright lights on. 3 he got closer, he found 4 vehicle upside down on the road. One more look and he noticed 5 shooting out from under the 6 vehicle. Larry pulled over, set the brake and 7 the fire extinguisher(灭火器). Two good bursts from the extinguisher and the fire was put out.The man who had his bright lights on 8 and told Larry he had 9 an emergency call. They 10 heard a woman’s voice coming from the wrecked(毁坏的) vehicle. 11 the vehicle, they saw that a woman was trying to get out of the broken window. They told her to stay 12 until the emergency personnel arrived, 13 she thought the car was going to 14 . Larry told her that he had already put out the fire and she should not move 15 she injured her neck.Once fire and emergency people arrived, Larry and the other man 16 and let them go to work. Then, Larry asked the 17 if he was needed or 18 to go. They let him and the other man go.One thing is 19 —Larry went above and beyond the call of duty by getting so close to the burning vehicle! His 20 most likely saved the woman’s life.1.A. walking B. touring C. traveling D. rushing2.A. passengers B. colleagues C. employers D. customers3.A. Since B. Although C. As D. If4.A. each B. another C. that D. his5.A. flames B. smoke C. water D. steam6.A. used B. disabled C. removed D. abandoned7.A. got hold of B. prepared C. took charge of D. controlled8.A. came down B. came through C. came in D. came over9.A. returned B. received C. made D. confirmed10.A. then B. again C. finally D. even11.A. Starting B. Parking C. Passing D. Approaching12.A. quiet B. still C. away D. calm13.A. for B. so C. and D. but14.A. explode B. slip away C. fall apart D. crash15.A. as if B. unless C. in case D. after16.A. stepped forward B. backed off C. moved on D. set out17.A. woman B. police C. man D. driver18.A. forbidden B. ready C. asked D. free19.A. for certain B. for consideration C. reported D. checked20.A. patience B. skills C. efforts D. promiseCloze 22016全国卷Ⅲ，30分词数：277When I was 13 my only purpose was to become the star on our football team. That meant1 Miller King, who was the best2 at our school.Football season started in September and all summer long I worked out. I carried my footballeverywhere for 3 .Just before September, Miller was struck by a car and lost his right arm. I went to see him after he came back from 4 . He looked very 5 , but he didn’t cry.That season, I 6 all of Miller’s records while he 7 the home games from the bench. We went 10-1 and I was named most valuable player, 8 I often had crazy dreams in which I was to blame for Miller’s 9 .One afternoon, I was crossing the field to go home and saw Miller 10 going over a fence —which wasn’t 11 to climb if you had both arms. I’m sure I was the last person in the world he wanted to accept 12 from. But even that challenge he accepted. I 13 him move slowly over the fence. When we were finally 14 on the other side, he said to me, "You know, I didn’t tell you this during the season, but you did 15 . Thank you for filling in for 16 ."His words freed me from my bad 17 . I thought to myself, how even without an arm he was more of a leader. Damaged but not defeated, he was 18 ahead of me. I was right to have 19 him. From that day on, I grew 20 and a little more real.1.A. cheering for B. beating out C. relying on D. staying with2.A. coach B. student C. teacher D. player3.A. practice B. show C. comfort D. pleasure4.A. school B. vacation C. hospital D. training5.A. pale B. calm C. relaxed D. ashamed6.A. held B. broke C. set D. tried7.A. reported B. judged C. organized D. watched8.A. and B. then C. but D. thus9.A. decision B. mistake C. accident D. sacrifice10.A. stuck B. hurt C. tired D. lost11.A. steady B. hard C. fun D. fit12.A. praise B. advice C. assistance D. apology13.A. let B. helped C. had D. noticed14.A. dropped B. ready C. trapped D. safe15.A. fine B. wrong C. quickly D. normally16.A. us B. yourself C. me D. them17.A. memories B. ideas C. attitudes D. dreams18.A. still B. also C. yet D. just19.A. challenged B. cured C. invited D. admired20.A. healthier B. bigger C. cleverer D. coolerCloze 32016北京，30分词数：457A Race Against DeathIt was a cold January in 1925 in Nome, Alaska. The town was cut off from the rest of the world due to heavy snow.On the 20th of that month, Dr. Welch 1 a sick boy, Billy, and knew he had diphtheria, a deadly infectious(传染的) disease mainly affecting children. The children of Nome would be 2 if it struck the town. Dr. Welch needed medicine as soon as possible to stop other kids from getting sick. 3 , the closest supply was over 1,000 miles away, in Anchorage.How could the medicine get to Nome? The town’s 4 was already full of ice, so it couldn’t come by ship. Cars and horses couldn’t travel on the 5 roads. Jet airplanes and big trucks didn’t exist yet. 6 January 26, Billy and three other children had died. Twenty more were 7 . Nome’s town officials came up with a(n) 8 . They would have the medicine sent by 9 from Anchorage to Nenana. From there, dogsled(狗拉雪橇) drivers —known as "mushers" —would 10 it to Nome in a relay(接力).The race began on January 27. The first musher, Shannon, picked up the medicine from the train at Nenana and rode all night. 11 he handed the medicine to the next musher, Shannon’s face was black from the extreme cold.On January 31, a musher named Seppala had to 12 a frozen body of water called Norton Sound. It was the most 13 part of the journey. Norton Sound was covered with ice, which could sometimes break up without warning. If that happened, Seppala might fall into the icy water below. He would 14 , and so would the sick children of Nome. But Seppala made it across.A huge snowstorm hit on February 1. A musher named Kaasen had to brave this storm. At one point, huge piles of snow blocked his 15 . He had to leave the trail(雪橇痕迹) to get around them. Conditions were so bad that it was impossible for him to 16 the trail again. The only hope was Balto, Kaasen’s lead dog. Balto put his nose to the ground, 17 to find the smell of other dogs that had traveled on the trail. If Balto failed, it would mean disaster for Nome. The minutes passed by. Suddenly, Balto began to 18 . He had found the trail.At 5:30 am on February 2, Kaasen and his dogs 19 in Nome. Within minutes, Dr. Welch had the medicine. He quickly gave it to the sick children. All of them recovered.Nome had been 20 .1.A. examined B. warned C. interviewed D. cured2.A. harmless B. helpless C. fearless D. careless3.A. Moreover B. Therefore C. Otherwise D. However4.A. airport B. station C. harbor D. border5.A. narrow B. snowy C. busy D. dirty6.A. From B. On C. By D. After7.A. tired B. upset C. pale D. sick8.A. plan B. excuse C. message D. topic9.A. air B. rail C. sea D. road10.A. carry B. return C. mail D. give11.A. Though B. Since C. When D. If12.A. enter B. move C. visit D. cross13.A. shameful B. boring C. dangerous D. foolish14.A. escape B. bleed C. swim D. die15.A. memory B. exit C. way D. destination16.A. find B. fix C. pass D. change17.A. pretending B. trying C. asking D. learning18.A. run B. leave C. bite D. play19.A. gathered B. stayed C. camped D. arrived20.A. controlled B. saved C. founded D. developedCloze 42016四川，30分词数：276Lainey finished third grade. She had good grades and could read 1 grade level, but shedid not like to read. On a family car trip, her Aunt Dede pulled out a copy of Harry Potter, as a surprise for her 2 . But Lainey took one look at it, 3 her eyes, and said, "Borrrring!"Aunt Dede, a teacher, had read the book to her students, and they loved it. 4 the youngest children in the class were 5 by the story. They 6 with great interest, and then 7 joined in grand conversations about Harry’s adventures."How can you say it’s 8 ?Have you read it?"asked Aunt Dede."No, it’s too long and it doesn’t have any 9 ," complained Lainey."Oh, that’s where you are 10 ;there are lots of pictures. Every page is full of pictures; you just have to read the words to 11 them. It’s like magic.""Nice try, Aunt Dede," Lainey replied 12 from the back seat.Another 13 was in order. "Well, if you don’t want to read it, give it 14 .Maybe your mom would 15 hearing the story." The book sailed through the air to Aunt Dede and she began to read it aloud. By the end of the first chapter, 16 were coming from the back seat:"Please read a little 17 ."Lainey is an example of an 18 reader.As shown here, Lainey can become 19 about reading when 20 with literature on topics that interest her, and when the people around her model involvement in the reading process.1.A. within B. on C. to D. above2.A. daughter B. niece C. student D. friend3.A. opened B. dried C. rolled D. shaded4.A. Even B. Still C. Just D. Yet5.A. surprised B. annoyed C. puzzled D. attracted6.A. read B. told C. listened D. wrote7.A. suspectedly B. anxiously C. calmly D. enthusiastically8.A. amazing B. boring C. ridiculous D. humorous9.A. pictures B. stories C. adventures D. conversations10.A. crazy B. foolish C. wrong D. different11.A. see B. match C. show D. recognize12.A. sourly B. patiently C. eagerly D. shyly13.A. idea B. try C. belief D. behavior14.A. away B. out C. in D. back15.A. enjoy B. admit C. mind D. finish16.A. decisions B. requests C. comments D. promises17.A. more clearly B. longer C. louder D. more carefully18.A. unpleasant B. innocent C. unwilling D. independent19.A. astonished B. worried C. confused D. excited20.A. presented B. concerned C. disturbed D. replacedCloze 52016天津，30分词数：350The journey my daughter Cathy has had with her swimming is as long as it is beautiful.Cathy suffered some terrible 1 in her early childhood. After years of regular treatment, she 2 became healthy.Two years ago, while Cathy was watching the Olympics, a dream came into her sweet little head — to be a swimmer. Last summer, she wanted to 3 our local swim team. She practicedhard and finally 4 it. The team practice, 5 , was a rough start. She coughed and choked and could hardly 6 her first few weeks. Hearing her coughing bitterly one night, I decided to 7 her from it all. But Cathy woke me up early next morning, wearing her swimsuit 8 to go! I told her she shouldn’t swim after a whole night’s coughing, but she refused to9 and insisted she go.From that day on, Cathy kept swimming and didn’t 10 a single practice. She had a 11 intention within herself to be the best she could be. My ten-year-old was growing and changing right before my eyes, into this 12 human being with a passion and a mission. There were moments of 13 of course: often she would be the last swimmer in the race. It was difficult for Cathy to accept that she wasn’t a 14 —ever. But that didn’t stop her from trying.Then came the final awards ceremony at the end of the year. Cathy didn’t expect any award but was still there to 15 her friends and praise their accomplishments. As the ceremony was nearing the end, I suddenly heard the head coach 16 , "The highest honor goes to Cathy!" Looking around, he continued, "Cathy has inspired us with her 17 and enthusiasm. 18 skills and talents bring great success, the most valuable asset(财富) one can hold is the heart."It was the greatest 19 of my daughter’s life. With all she had been 20 in her ten years, this was the hour of true triumph(成功).1.A. failure B. pressure C. loss D. illness2.A. usually B. finally C. firstly D. frequently3.A. improve B. train C. join D. contact4.A. increased B. found C. created D. made5.A. however B. therefore C. otherwise D. instead6.A. use B. survive C. save D. waste7.A. pull B. tell C. hide D. fire8.A. afraid B. nervous C. ready D. free9.A. take off B. set off C. give up D. show up10.A. attend B. miss C. ban D. start11.A. rich B. weak C. firm D. kind12.A. trusted B. determined C. experienced D. embarrassed13.A. frustration B. delight C. excitement D. surprise14.A. beginner B. learner C. partner D. winner15.A. cheer on B. compete with C. respond to D. run after16.A. admitting B. explaining C. announcing D. whispering17.A. humor B. will C. honesty D. wisdom18.A. Although B. Since C. Once D. Because19.A. discovery B. choice C. influence D. moment20.A. through B. under C. across D. around2012—2015年高考题Cloze 12015新课标全国Ⅰ,30分词数:259My kids and I were heading into the supermarket over the weekend. On the way, we spotted a man holding a piece of paper that said, " 1 my job. Family to Feed."At this store, a 2 like this is not normal. My 10-year-old noticed him and made a 3 on how bad it must be to have to stand 4 in the cold wind.In the store, I asked each of my kids to 5 something they thought our "friend" there would6 . They got apples, a sandwich and a bottle of juice. Then my 17-year-old suggested giving hima 7 . I thought about it. We were 8 on cash ourselves, but...well, sometimes 9 from our need instead of our abundance is 10 what we need to do! All the kids 11 something they could do away with for the week.When we handed him the bag of 12 , he lit up and thanked us with 13 eyes.When I handed him the gift card, saying he could use it for 14 his family might need, he burst into tears.This has been a wonderful 15 for our family. For days the kids have been looking for others we can 16! Things would have played out so 17 if I had simply said, "No, we really don’t have 18 to give more." Stepping out not only helped a brother in 19 , it also gave my kids the 20 taste of helping others. It’ll go a long way with them.1.A. Lost B. Changed C. Quit D. Finished2.A. condition B. place C. sight D. show3.A. suggestion B. comment C. decision D. call4.A. outside B. proudly C. by D. angrily5.A. draw B. say C. arrange D. pick6.A. order B. supply C. appreciate D. discover7.A. dollar B. job C. hot meal D. gift card8.A. easy B. low C. soft D. loose9.A. giving B. saving C. spending D. begging10.A. yet B. even C. still D. just11.A. declared B. shared C. ignored D. expected12.A. toys B. medicine C. food D. clothes13.A. sleepy B. watery C. curious D. sharp14.A. whoever B. whatever C. whichever D. whenever15.A. experience B. example C. message D. adventure16.A. rely on B. respect C. learn from D. help17.A. suddenly B. vividly C. differently D. perfectly18.A. time B. power C. patience D. money19.A. fear B. love C. need D. memory20.A. strong B. sweet C. strange D. simpleCloze 22015湖南，18分词数:226It was a rainy morning and the children, mainly boys with various learning difficulties, refused to settle for the start of the lesson. As an inexperienced teacher, I tried every means to get them to be 1 , but in vain. My panic was rising and I could feel my heart beating wildly. This was the 2 of my job as a music teacher, I thought — teaching was not for me. Then I had an idea. Hoping that no one would notice that I was 3 inside, I threw my voice as far as it would reach: "Put your heads on the desks and close your 4 ! We are going on a journey."5 , the children fell silent. "Now what should I do?" I thought to myself. Reaching over to my collection of CDs, I blindly6 , put it in the machine and played it.Obediently(顺从地), my class lay their heads on their desks, closed their eyes and7 . When the music started, the room was filled with the most beautiful tones and musical colors I could have ever imagined. All thechildren were 8 . When the music finished, I asked them all to raise their 9 slowly so that we could share our musical journeys.At this point, when all the children were willing to share their experiences, I began to learn how to 10 . The music allowed me to learn that teaching is about sharing and respect, tears and smiles, the knowing and the 11 and, most of all, an understanding of each other. This was the power that 12 in the classroom could have.1.A. glad B. safe C. kind D. quiet2.A. end B. aim C. rule D. plan3.A. guessing B. shaking C. responding D. laughing4.A. eyes B. mouths C. books D. doors5.A. Punctually B. Importantly C. Amazingly D. Obviously6.A. passed one on B. gave one back C. turned one in D. took one out7.A. slept B. nodded C. waited D. continued8.A. talking B. singing C. dancing D. listening9.A. legs B. heads C. arms D. shoulders10.A. teach B. imagine C. play D. understand11.A. unprepared B. unspoken C. unknown D. unforgotten12.A. games B. music C. tears D. knowledgeCloze 32015陕西,30分词数:354Dad had a green comb. He bought it when he married Mum. Every night, he would hand me his 1 and say, "Good girl, help Daddy clean it, OK?"I was 2 to do it. At age five, this dull task brought me such 3 . I would excitedly turn the tap 4 and brush the comb carefully. Satisfied that I’d done a good job, I would happily return the comb to Dad. He would 5 affectionately at me and place the comb on his wallet.Two years later, Dad started his own 6 , which wasn’t doing so well. That was when things started to 7 . Dad didn’t come home as early and as much as he used to, Mum and I became 8 with him for placing our family in trouble. With 9 , an uncomfortable silence grew between us.After my graduation, Dad’s business was getting back on track. On my 28th birthday, Dad came home 10 . As usual, I helped him carry his bags into his study. When I turned to leave, he said, "Hey, would you help me 11 my comb?" I looked at him a while, then 12 the comb and headed to the sink.It hit me then: why, as a child, 13 Dad clean his comb was such a pleasure. That routine(习惯) meant Dad was home early to 14 the evening with Mum and me. It 15 a happy and loving family.I passed the clean comb back to Dad. He smiled at me and 16 placed his comb on his wallet. But this time, I noticed something 17 . Dad had aged. He had wrinkles next to his eyes when he smiled, 18 his smile was still as 19 as before, the smile of a father who just wanted a good 20 for his family.1.A. bag B. wallet C. comb D. brush2.A. annoyed B. relieved C. ashamed D. pleased3.A. joy B. sadness C. courage D. pain4.A. out B. over C. in D. on5.A. stare B. smile C. shout D. laugh6.A. family B. business C. task D. journey7.A. progress B. change C. improve D. form8.A. satisfied B. delighted C. mad D. strict9.A. time B. patience C. speed D. ease10.A. occasionally B. early C. frequently D. rarely11.A. sharpen B. repair C. clean D. keep12.A. dropped B. took C. handed D. threw13.A. watching B. letting C. helping D. hearing14.A. find B. lose C. waste D. spend15.A. affected B. broke C. meant D. supported16.A. firmly B. hurriedly C. casually D. carefully17.A. different B. exciting C. interesting D. urgent18.A. for B. or C. so D. yet19.A. convincing B. heartwarming C. cautious D. innocent20.A. origin B. life C. reputation D. educationCloze 42015四川,30分词数:324My previous home had a stand of woods behind it and many animals in the backyard. That first year, I 1 feeding peanuts to the blue jays, then the squirrels. The squirrels had no 2 coming up right to me for them. As the months went by, the rabbits saw that I was no 3 and didn’t escape. When I threw carrot slices (薄片), they even came for a nibble (啃) . Slowly they came to 4 me, and by the end of the year they were eating out of my hand.That second year, the rabbits 5 me, and one would even sit up for slices! While I was feeding them, I 6 that a groundhog who used to run away was now taking an 7 interest in this food situation. I carefully extended a long 8 , with a keen eye on those teeth, and 9 , there were times I would have the groundhog sitting next to a rabbit, both munching (津津有味地咀嚼) on carrots. A few months later, while 10 , she would even turn her back to me. 11 when she was facing away, I reached out and 12 scratched (搔) her back with my finger. She didn’t move.By year three, the rabbits and the groundhog were back. The groundhog 13 didn’t have a problem with me scratching her back, and I got an idea. I’d always 14 , while slicing up carrots, that the end looked like a cap. 15 one day, just to see what she would do, I gently 16 one on top of the groundhog’s head. Again, not a 17 . The next time, I had my camera ready to record what you see here, one of several dozen such pictures. 18 she had a slice to eat, she never 19 the one on her head. It was a fair 20 —I got a pleasure, and she had yet another tasty treat.1.A. avoided B. started C. canceled D. suggested2.A. business B. fun C. problem D. privilege3.A. help B. cheat C. threat D. exception4.A. trust B. miss C. admire D. appreciate5.A. feared B. ignored C. discovered D. remembered6.A. proved B. decided C. noticed D. understood7.A. extreme B. increasing C. additional D. inspiring8.A. squirrel B. rabbit C. peanut D. carrot9.A. before long B. long ago C. over and over D. all over again10.A. eating B. playing C. sitting D. sleeping11.A. Next B. Once C. Soon D. Lately12.A. carefully B. suddenly C. violently D. patiently13.A. also B. thus C. just D. still14.A. thought B. doubted C. admitted D. recognised15.A. While B. Or C. So D. For16.A. fixed B. placed C. hung D. kept17.A. tremble B. move C. delay D. hesitation18.A. Even if B. Ever since C. As far as D. So long as19.A. welcomed B. required C. bothered D. expected20.A. trade B. competition C. task D. affairCloze 52015北京,30分词数:425A Welcome GiftDario and his mother loved their new apartment. The living room was large enough for their piano. That night, the two of them 1 side by side at the piano. They played jazz music to celebrate their new home. The loud 2 filled the room and made them feel very happy.The next morning, 3 , their happiness disappeared. Someone had left a 4 under their door during the night. One of their neighbors had written to complain(抱怨) about the sound of the piano. Dario’s mother asked the building superintendent(管理员) if he knew anything about it. But he said that they were all 5 people and he couldn’t imagine any of them had done that. Later that morning, Dario suggested that they write a letter to their 6 and apologize for their playing."Maybe we could go and 7 everyone in person," his mother said."What if we invited them to come here for a 8 instead?"Dario asked.They both loved the 9 . Over the next few days,they sent out invitations and prepared desserts 10 their guests. They decorated the apartment with streamers(彩带) and party lights.Finally, the day of the party 11 . Some guests brought presents. Others brought flowers. Some even brought desserts to 12 . One woman, Mrs. Gilbert, 13 Dario’s mother with a book of piano music by Chopin."I heard you playing the other night," she said. "The sounds woke me out of bed. I 14 that you might play like this every night. So I wrote a short note. I hope you don’t think I disliked the playing."Dario’s mother smiled at Mrs. Gilbert. "I think maybe we 15 you an apology," she said. "I didn’t 16 how late it was when we were playing. Maybe we should play some quieter music at night.""You play, you play!" Mrs. Gilbert said."I like what you play! Just not so loud at night." She pointed to the book she had given them."These songs are not such 17 music.""These songs are beautiful music,"Dario’s mother said. "We will be 18 to play them in the evening.""And we won’t play so loud or late!"Dario said. He was already looking forward to 19the new music. More than that, however, he was happy to see the big smile on his mother’s face. It gave him a feeling of 20 and made him feel that they were home at last.1.A. sat B. stood C. lay D. walked2.A. voice B. ring C. music D. cry3.A. therefore B. however C. otherwise D. instead4.A. note B. poster C. bill D. report5.A. proud B. rich C. lucky D. nice6.A. neighbors B. friends C. relatives D. audiences7.A. blame B. instruct C. question D. visit8.A. party B. concert C. show D. play9.A. experience B. idea C. performance D. action10.A. to B. with C. for D. from11.A. continued B. arrived C. passed D. finished12.A. order B. sell C. share D. advertise13.A. treated B. presented C. helped D. served14.A. promised B. admitted C. agreed D. worried15.A. give B. send C. offer D. owe16.A. realize B. remember C. understand D. accept17.A. sweet B. strange C. funny D. loud18.A. brave B. sorry C. happy D. afraid19.A. changing B. practicing C. recording D. writing20.A. equality B. freedom C. warmth D. sympathyCloze 62015湖北,20分词数:306"Daily Star,sir,"called Jason,carrying some newspapers under his arm.The little boy had been running up and down the street,but there were still twenty 1 left.His voice was almost gone and his heart was 2 .The shops would soon close, and all the people would go home.He would have to go home too, carrying the papers 3 money.He had hoped to sell more papers tonight to make more money to buy a 4 for his mother and some seeds for his bird.That was why he had bought the papers with all his money.He 5 as he thought of his failure to sell all his papers."You don’t know the 6 of selling papers.You must shout,‘Hot news! Bomb bursting!’"another newsboy Chad told Jason." 7 it’s not in the paper at all," replied Jason."Just run away quickly 8 they have time to see, and you’ll 9 out and get your money,"Chad said.It was a new 10 to Jason.He thought of his bird with no 11 and the cake he wanted to buy for his mother,but was 12 that he would not tell a lie.Though he was 13 a poor newsboy,he had been 14 some good things.The next afternoon Jason went to the office for his papers 15 . Several boys were crowding around Chad,who declared with a 16 smile that he sold six dozen the day before.He added that Jason 17 money because he would not tell a lie.The boys 18 at Jason."You wouldn’t tell a lie yesterday,my boy?" A gentleman at the office came up and patted Jason’s shoulder 19 ."You’re just the boy I am looking for."A week later Jason started his new 20 . He lost the sale of twenty papers because he would not tell a lie,but got a well-paid job because he told the truth.1.A. shops B. coins C. people D. papers2.A. open B. heavy C. pure D. weak3.A. instead of B. in return for C. regardless of D. in exchange for4.A. cup B. card C. comb D. cake5.A. gave in B. broke down C. got away D. showed up6.A. difficulty B. process C. goal D. secret7.A. And B. But C. For D. So8.A. before B. since C. though D. unless9.A. call B. drop C. sell D. reach10.A. edition B. idea C. policy D. task11.A. bread B. insects C. seeds D. water12.A. concerned B. amazed C. excited D. determined13.A. still B. already C. just D. also14.A. taught B. handed C. awarded D. allowed15.A. at once B. by chance C. as usual D. on purpose16.A. proud B. gentle C. warm D. polite17.A. borrowed B. lost C. made D. saved18.A. laughed B. shouted C. nodded D. stared19.A. bravely B. gratefully C. fondly D. modestly20.A. duty B. business C. job D. methodCloze 72014新课标全国Ⅱ,30分词数：275Joe Simpson and Simon Yates were the first people to climb the West Face of the Siula Grande in the Andes mountains. They reached the top 1 , but on their way back conditions were very 2 . Joe fell and broke his leg. They both knew that if Simon 3 alone, he would probably get back 4 . But Simon decided to risk his 5 and try to lower Joe down the mountain on a rope (绳).As they 6 down, the weather got worse. Then another 7 occurred. They couldn’t see or hear each other and, 8 , Simon lowered his friend over the edge of a precipice (峭壁). It was 9 for Joe to climb back or for Simon to pull him up. Joe’s 10 was pulling Simon slowly towards the precipice. 11 , after more than an hour in the dark and the icy cold, Simon had to 12 . In tears, he cut the rope. Joe 13 into a huge crevasse (裂缝) in the ice below. He had no food or water and he was in terrible pain. He couldn’t walk, but he 14 to get out of the crevasse and started to 15 towards their camp, nearly ten kilometers 16 .Simon had 17 the camp at the foot of the mountain. He thought that Joe must be 18 , but he didn’t want to leave 19. Three days later, in the middle of the night, he heard Joe’s voice. He couldn’t 20 it. Joe was there, a few meters from their tent, still alive.1.A. hurriedly B. carefully C. successfully D. early2.A. difficult B. similar C. special D. normal3.A. climbed B. worked C. rested D. continued4.A. unwillingly B. safely C. slowly D. regretfully5.A. fortune B. time C. health D. life6.A. lay B. settled C. went D. looked7.A. damage B. storm C. change D. trouble8.A. by mistake B. by chance C. by choice D. by luck9.A. unnecessary B. practical C. important D. impossible。
2018年全国高考英语试题分类汇编之短文改错（精校版附答案）--since 77them---us 78for---with 79正确 80去掉much 81staying---stay 82day----days 83fly---fle84trip前 a 85better----more3（2018 辽宁卷）4（2018 四川卷）短改错（共10小题；每小题15分，满分15分）此题要求改正所给短中的错误。
对标有题号的每一行作出判断如无错误，在该行右边横线上画一个沟（√）；如有错误（每行只有一个错误），则按下列情况改正；此行多一个词把多余的词用斜线（／）划掉，在该行右边横线上写出该词。
并也用斜线划掉。
此行缺一个词在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），在该行右边横线上写出该加的词。
此行错一个词在错的词下划一横线，在该行右边横线上写出改正后的词。
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高考复习题之短文改错9篇(含参考答案及解析)练习一We had guests last night who have stayed 1________In a B&B hotel ago. They did not want breakfast 2______Because that they were going out early in the 3_______Morning. They came back lately and had some 4______tea. I came into the living room and saw one of 5_______them just go through the kitchen door but turn 6________on the light. He was looking for a glass the 7________cupboard. He had no ideas that the kitchen was 8______not for guests. I just smiled to me and thought, 9_______“What can I do? We are guests after all.”10. ________练习二I always wanted to be great scientist. I had these dreams 1. ________of discovering a new drug that would save the life of hundreds 2. ________of people. Unfortunate, I was never very good at chemistry 3. ________at school and the teacher used to getting very cross with me. 4. ________After a while, I decided I would become an inventor and designed 5. ________An amazing new product which would become a household 6. ________name. My parents were quite encouraged, but told me to be a little 7. ________more realistic. A few weeks late, I had brilliant idea for a pen 8. ________that would write with upside down. To my disappointment, a 9. ________friend of me pointed out that it was not a new discovery. 10. ________练习三A public competition is held last year in a small town in 1. ________ Scotland to find out who could eat most in the shortest time. At 2. ________last, a man succeeded setting a new record. In the time given 3. ________by the judges he ate a big bowl of fishes, soup, and a whole chicken 4. ________ cooked by different ways with ten big pieces of bread and a large 5. ________cake. On top of all this, he had ten glasses of beer. Before winning 6. ________the competition the new champion went home with two of her 7. ________ friends. As they were coming near his house, he sudden stopped 8. ________and said: “I say friends, please don’t tell my wife anything about 9. ________the competition today, or she w on’t give me something to eat.” 10. ________练习四My secret of staying young is simple: Keeping your mind awake 1. ________and you will stay young all over. Take an interest in world 2. ________around you, and learn at least the new thing ever y day. Don’t 3. ________think that you are ever enough old to go back to school. I know 4. ________a man who entered into a medical college at 70. He got his degree 5. ________with honors and became a famous doctor. Other man went to a 6. ________law school at 71 and is now an active lawyer. You may say 7. ________that staying young is easy only for those live in the future. 8. ________In fact, you can do it whether you care enough to try to keep 9. ________Your mind awake and active ,which is the only thing to be always young 10. ________练习五I eager to go to college because I know there is 1. ________so many to learn about the world and about human 2. ________being. Knowledge is a source of pleasure for me. I 3. ________want to study at a college for the fun to knowledge. 4. ________I know the college education can prepare me better for 5. ________my future. Better education meant, more often than not, 6. ________better jobs, better opportunities and better choices.I want to go to college because I know that my 7. ________parents and other people care for me will be happy 8. ________with that, Unless I cans study at a nice university, I 9. ________will make them happier. I’d hate to let you down.10. ________That’s why I must go to college.练习六One day morning, I with mother went to the People’s Hospital in 1. _______ Shandong because she had caught a bad cold. While we sitting in 2. _______the waiting room, some people smoked. The smell was very strong 3. _______that I found hard to breathe, so did my mother. We couldn’t ask 4. _______all of them to stop to smoke though, so we had to go to another 5. _______room. So there, the situation was worse. Why do so many 6. _______people smoke in public places? The sign, “Smoking is harmless 7. _______to health”, is printed on cigarette packets to remind smokers that 8. _______ smoking not only harms them but the people around them either. 9. _______So we should take actions to reduce some of smoking’s bad effects. 10. _______练习七Several weeks ago, our college decided to stopping students from 1. _______ bringing their computers to school if they did no pass all exams 2. _______from the previous semester(学期). Students didn’t welcome by 3. _______the decision. The computer was one of the greatest invention of 4. _______the 20th century and has become important part of modem life. 5. _______Therefore, it is also a headache for school leaders. Many students 6. _______ignore their studies and spend too much time play online 7. _______games, watching films, and chatting online. Leaders 8. _______wanted to deal this serious problem in this way. They didn’t 9. _______expect that something worse will happen as a result. 10. _______练习八In my village a lot of children were leaving school for 1. _______various reason. Some families are too poor to send their children 2. _______to school, and they have to earn money to support their families. 3. _______Many parents think it useful to send their children to school. 4. _______They would rather let their children to stay at home. 5. _______I feel worried about this. I think every child should have a 6. _______chance to go to school. We should pay many attention to the 7. _______education of children, for we will play an important part in 8. _______our socialist construction in the future. Ways must be found 9. _______prevent children from leave off their studies. 10. _______练习九One day people on the shore listened shouts 1. _______for help. They ran up to the sea. A soldier jumped 2. _______into the water and swim to the man. He was a good 3. _______swimmer and soon pulled the man back the shore. 4. _______Now everyone saw that the man was a very rich man. 5. _______He went to the soldier, taking out a shilling 6. _______and gave it to him. And the soldier refused to take 7. _______it and went far away. The people there were very 8. _______angry to the rich man. But an old woman said, 9. _______laughing, “I’m sure the rich man knows how many his 10. _______life is worth!” Everyone there agreed with the woman and laughed too.参考答案及讲解练习一：1. 答案：have→had解析：本句主句用的是过去时，从句时态应是过去完成时，因此应将have 改成had。
2012——2016年短文改错Correction 1［2016·乙卷(全国Ⅰ)］My uncle is the owner of a restaurant close to that I live. Though not very big, but the restaurant is popular in our area. It is always crowded with customers at meal times. Some people even had to wait outside. My uncle tells me that the key to his success is honest. Every day he makes sure that fresh vegetables or high quality oil are using for cooking. My uncle says that he never dreams becoming rich in the short period of time. Instead, he hopes that our business will grow steady. Correction 2［2016·甲卷（全国Ⅱ）］The summer holiday is coming. My classmates and I are talking about how to do during the holiday. We can chose between staying at home and take a trip. If we stay at home, it is comfortable but there is no need to spend money. But in that case, we will learn little about world. If we go on a trip abroad, we can broaden your view and gain knowledges we cannot get from books. Some classmates suggest we can go to places of interest nearby. I thought that it is a good idea. It does not cost many, yet we can still learn a lot.Correction 3［2016·丙卷（全国Ⅲ）］The teenage year from 13 to 19 were the most difficult time for me. They were also the best and worse years in my life. At the first, I thought I knew everything and could make decisions by yourself. However, my parents didn't seem to think such. They always tell me what to do and how to do it. At one time, I even felt my parents couldn't understand me so I hoped I could be freely from them. I showed them I was independent by wear strange clothes. Now I am leaving home to college. At last, I will be on my own, but I still want to have my parents to turn to whenever need help.Correction 4［2016·四川］It is Mother's Day today. Though it's a western festival, it's popular in China now.Mom has a full-time job, so she has to do most of the houseworks. She is a great mother. Both Dad or I planned to do something on Mother's Day. We get up early in the morning. Dad cleaned the house, and then went on shopping. When he came back, I found a bunch of flowers in her hand. I asked Mom to stay in the sitting room and I cooked in kitchen. The dishes what I cooked were Mom's favoritest. At dinner, we said to her, "Happy Mother's Day!" Mom was grateful and moving. Correction 5［2016·浙江］When I was a very young children, my father created a regular practice I remember well years late. Every time he arrived home at end of the day, we'd greet her at the door. He would ask who we was and pretend not to knowing us. Then he and my mother would have had a drink while she prepared dinner and they would talk about his day and hers. While they chat, my father would lift my sister and me up to sit in the top of the fridge. It was both excited and frightening to be up there! My sister and I thought he was so cool for putting us there.Correction6 [2015·新课标全国卷Ⅰ]When I was a child, I hoped to live in the city.I think I would be happy there.Now I am living in a city, but I miss my home in countryside.There the air is clean or the mountains are green.Unfortunately, on the development of industrialization, the environment has been polluted.Lots of studies have been shown that global warming has already become a very seriously problem.The airs we breathe in is getting dirtier and dirtier.Much rare animals are dying out.We must found ways to protect your environment.If we fail to do so, we'll live to regret it.Correction7 [2015·新课标全国卷Ⅱ]One day, little Tony went to a shopping center with his parent. It was very crowded.Tony saw a toy on a shop window. He liked it so very much that he quickly walked into the shop. After looks at the toy for some time, he turned around and found where his parents were missing. Tony was scared and begun to cry. A woman saw him crying and telling him to wait outside a shop. Five minutes later, Tony saw parents. Mom said, "How nice to see you again! Dad and I were terrible worried." Tony promised her that this would never happen again.Correction8 [2015·陕西]My soccer coach retired in last week. I wanted to do anything special for him at his retirement party. My mum makes the better biscuits in the world, so I decide to ask her for help. Mum taught me some basic step of baking. I insisted on doing most of the baking myself. I thought the biscuits were really well. My only mistake was that I dropped some on the floor after I was packing them up.At a party, my coach, with a biscuit in his mouth, asked surprisingly who made them and joked, "I might have to retire again next year just get some more of these biscuits."My favorite picture at the party is of my coach and me enjoy the biscuits with happy laughter! Correction9 [2015·四川]Hi, Janice,It's been a month since I came to this new school and I really want share with you some of the problems I have been experiencing.As I tell you last time, I made three new friend here. We hang out together during lunch and after school. We've been spending a lot of time sing in karaoke bars. It's been three Saturdays now and it really costs me many. And I started to see this as a time-wasting activity! In fact, I don't like to go anymore, so I'm afraid I'll lose their friendship. How do you think I should do? If you are me, would you talk to him?Please help with me and give me some advice.Grace Correction10 [2015·浙江]My old classroom was interesting because three side of the classroom were made from glass. I enjoyed sit close to the windows and looking at the view. On the left-hand side of the class, I could easy see the football field. In the mornings, it was full of students exercising. The view from the back of the classroom is also splendid. Close to the school there was a beautiful park with many trees around them. Farther in the distance, I could not enjoy the view of snowy mountains. On the right side of the class was the road. I was always interested to see the drivers in hurry in the morning. The position of the classroom with its view made me felt like I was dreaming. If I was only a child when I studied in that classroom, I will never forget it.Correction11 [2014·新课标全国卷Ⅰ]Nearly five years before, and with the help by our father, my sister and I planted some cherry tomatoes (圣女果) in our back garden. Since then —for all these year —we had been allowing tomatoes to self-seed where they please. As result, the plants are growing somewhere. The fruits are small in size, but juicy and taste. There are so much that we often share them with our neighbors. Although we allow tomato plants to grow in the same place year after year, but we have never had any disease or insect attack problems. We are growing wonderfully tomatoes at no cost!Correction12 [2014·新课标全国卷Ⅱ]My dream school starts at 8:30 a.m. and ends at 3:30 p.m. They are three lessons in the morning and two in the afternoon. We didn't need to do so many homework. Therefore, we have more time with after-school activities. For example, we can do reading for one and a half hour and play sportsfor one hour every day.My dream school look like a big garden. There are all kinds of the flowers and trees around the classroom buildings. We can lie on the grass for a rest, or sat by the lake listening music. The teachers here are kind and helpfully. They are not only our teachers but also our friends.Correction13 [2014·浙江]I was taking a train to London's Victoria Station. I had noticed that the carriage was noise and filled with people.Before long, a train inspector comes to check our tickets. A passenger realized he couldn't find his ticket but became quite upset. Then everyone in the carriage began searching the ticket, which was eventually found under a seat several rows from his owner. The person who found a ticket smiled with pleasure at his success.No one in the carriage had previous spoken to or even noticed the ticket-owner before. Yet they had so quickly offered the strangers their help. If we could show concern to others on need, the world would be a better place to live in.Correction14 [2014·陕西]My father took me out camping for the first time when I was seven. He wanted teach me about animals,insects and trees. My uncles all come along with bows and arrows for hunting.One evening at sunset,we sat by the fire,have our barbecue.Just then a bird was flying over us.My uncles immediate jumped up and shot their arrows on the bird. Neither of the arrows hit the target.Suddenly the arrows was flying down at us from the sky — they were looked like rain! We ran to escape but fortunately no one was injured.That day I didn't learn much about animals, insects or trees, but I learnt a impressive lesson about gravity!Correction15 [2014·四川]Hello, boys and girls! Today，I am going to talk with what you should do when a fire alarm go off. If you hear the alarm, stand in line at the door and wait your teacher to lead you outside. Stay close to your teacher and classmate. Don't panic or get out of line, and trying to remain quiet and calmly. Soon the firefighters will come and put out a fire. If it's a false alarm and there is no fire, your teacher will lead us back to the classroom. If you notice that when someone is missing and hurt, tell your teacher immediately.Correction 16 [2014·辽宁]Dear Jeremy and Alice,Although we've been delighted to have you as neighbors, we're hoping to settle something that bothers to us. In a word, your dog — Cleo.We've called several time about Cleo's early morning barking. It is difficult to understanding why she barks every minute she's outside. The early morning barking have been disturbing us as we are often up all night with the baby. Beside, Cleo tends to bark a average of six hours a day. This morning she starts barking even before 5 o'clock. That is too much for us, considering how closely the houses are.We appreciate our apologies and goodwill, but we hope that you can figure a good way of settling the matter.Sincerely,Jack and Rose Correction17 [2013·新课标全国卷Ⅰ]I hardly remember my grandmother. She used to holding me on her knees and sing old songs. I was only four when she passes away. She is just a distant memory for me now.I remember my grandfather very much. He was tall, with broad shoulder and a beard that turned from black toward gray over the years. He had a deep voice, which set himself apart from others in our small town, he was strong and powerful. In a fact, he even scared my classmates away during they came over to play or do homework with me. However, he was the gentlest man I have never known. Correction18 [2013·新课标全国卷Ⅱ]The book I'm reading of talks about afternoon tea in Britain. It is said to have started in the early 1800's. Have tea in the late afternoon provides a bridge between lunch and dinner, that might not be served until 8 o'clock at night. This custom soon becomes another meal of day. Interesting, it had a connection by the British porcelain (瓷器) industry. Tea in China was traditionally drank from cups without handles. When tea got popular in Britain, there was a crying need for good cup with handles to suit British habits. This made for the grow in the porcelain industry.Correction19 [2013·陕西]My grandfather and I enjoy fishing.One Sunday morning we go fishing at a lake. We took ours fishing poles and headed for the lake. As soon as we arrived, so we dropped the lines into the water. Before waiting for about half an hour, I was beginning to get impatiently. I wanted to give up, and my grandfather told me to wait a little longer. Finally, there were a sudden pull at the pole and fish was caught. Within the next few minute, my grandfather also caught a fish.Felt hungry, we built a fire by the lake and barbecued the fish. It was delicious.Correction20 [2013·四川]Today we had a chemistry test. I found the test difficulty, but I tried hardly to do it. Suddenly Mary, my best friend, asking me to let her to copy my answers. After think for some time, I let her copy my answers. But after the test, all of us were called to the teacher's office. The teacher was angry because we had same answers in the tests. We were warned not to cheat again so she would need to see our parents. I was very upset. I didn't cheat. I was just helping a friend. Why does she punish me? Correction 21 [2013·辽宁]Mr.Johnson is a hardworking teacher. Every day，he spends too much time with his work.With little sleep and hardly any break, so he works from morning till night. Hard work have made him very ill. "He has ruined his healthy. We are worried about him." That is which other teachers say. Yesterday afternoon, I paid visit to Mr. Johnson.I was eager to see him,but outside her room I stopped. I had to calm myself down.Quietly I step into the room. I saw him lying in bed, looking at some of the picture we had taken together. I understood that he missed us just as many as we missed him.Correction 22 [2013·浙江]Dear Diary,Here I am in the middle of a city, 350 miles far away from our farmhouse. Do you want to know why we move last week?Dad lost his job, and as Mom explained,"He was lucky to find other one." His new job meant I had to say goodbye to my classmate, my school or just everything else I love in the world.To make matters bad, now I have to share a room with my younger sister, Maggie.Tomorrow is first day of school.I am awfully tiring, but I know I'll never fall sleep.Good night and remember, you, dear diary, is my only souvenir from my past life and my only friend.Yours,RosemaryCorrection 23 [2012·新课标全国]I learned early in life that I had to be more patient and little aggressive. From the time I was about four until I was about six, I destroyed each of my toy. I was happy when the toys worked, but when things did wrong, I got angry and broke it. For a while parents bought me new toys. But before long they began to see which was happening. When I tear apart my fifth birthday toy train, my father said, "That's it. No more toys to you." My punishment lasted a year. Meanwhile, I found out that with more patience I must make my toys to last. My attitude changed from then on.Correction 24 [2012·陕西]My father and I stayed at the South Lake Hotel for a week when we visit Beijing last month.It is in the downtown area, but it is easy to go to anywhere from the hotel by public transport.We lived in a comfortably double-room with a big bath.What I liked best were the free high-speed Internet connection in the room.I checked my email messages every day.I also shared for my friends many photos taking in Beijing.The food was wonderful with reasonable prices, and we enjoyed several local dish.It is such great hotel that I would recommend it to any friend of me who is going to Beijing. Correction 25 [2012·辽宁]Dear Diana,Thank you for the lovely day we have with you. It was so kind for you to let us bring Anne's friend, Gina. Unfortunate, the only problem was the journey home. There had been a terrible accident on the highway and, for a result, there was a long line of traffic for at least six mile. In the end, we drove to a service station and waited there unless the road was clear. In the car park here Gina nearly got knocked over as car drove out far too quickly from behind a lorry. They finally dropped Gina off at her parents' and made our own way to home.Much love,Fiona2012——2016年短文改错答案Correction 11.that→where。
