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Writing practice(记叙文)
国庆节刚过,你有什么难忘的事?请写一
封信向你的朋友Tom介绍令你难忘或印象深
刻的一件事情。
要求:
1.要有信的格式及用语。
2.介绍事情要写记叙文。注意写记叙文的句子,
连接词、过渡词,不要写成了议论文,要有文体
意识。
3.不必面面俱到,记叙事情要突出难忘或印
象深刻。
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记叙文常用句式(写作必备P52) 1.On our arrival , we were warmly welcomed by
the local people . 2. No sooner had we arrived there than we were
warmly welcomed . 3. We set off early in the morning and it took us
more than 2 hours to get there. 4. On the way home , I caught sight of a car
knocking into a big truck. 5. We were chatting happily when I suddenly
remembered that I had left my handbag in the taxi. 6.My teachers encourage us to take part in some social practice in our summer holidays, which they think can help get ourselves fully developed .
arrived and stood behind the mountain with the
traming scene in our eyes, our hearts opened brightly.
As we were on the way to the top, the fresh air cleaned
Though tired and hungry, we were rewarded with beautiful sight, which impressed us a lot .
Hoping you can visit her学生习作2
DearTom,(student’s work)
7. To our delight ,they thought highly of what we did . 5
学生习作1.
Dear Tom, I am glad to hear from you that you had a wonderful time during the holiday . And so did I . Now I’d like to introduce my happy experience to you. On October 1st, my friends and I went to climb Yangling Mountain, which is the second high mountain in our county .We met at the gate of the park at about 7:30am. As we had expected , there were a lot of people there .Then we started climbing .With flowers blooming and leaves turning red and yellow, fragrance was floating in the air and the sight here became more beautiful, which add delight to our trip. After four hours, 6
our brains ,the sounds of nature softed our ears, and
I am writting to share a funtastic trip to Yangling in the
National day,which is a impressive trip.
I was taken to the mountain unwillingly ,but when we
seeing the top, we were all excited .We stood on the top of the mountain, from where we can see the whole county. Wearing smiles on faces ,we had a photo taken .
4.120词左右。
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Writing process
一,审题:新闻报道(记叙文)、时态(一般过去式)
二,扣题,拟要点,想句式和词汇。 三,开始写,注意连贯词和时态 四,检查
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记叙文的连接词一般用时间连接词,体现事情发 展的时间顺序,常用的连接词有(写作必备P10) now ,after ,afterwards ,after that ,after a while ,at first ,in the beginning ,to begin with ,later ,next ,finally ,all of a sudden/suddenly, at that moment, as soon as ,from now on ,from then on , meanwhile ,not …until , in the end /eventually, last week ,On dong…, (一。。。 就。。。)句式,having done … ,(with) everything done , when it is time to …, to one happiness /joy ,