2016届高考英语写作复习课件3

【思路导航】 根据写作要求，我们应给美国朋友彼得写一封约 稿信。内容包括四项：1.介绍校英文报开设的“外国文化”栏目的主 要内容；2.向他约一篇英语稿件；3.稿件的长度约为400词；4.交稿日 期为6月28日前。 值得注意的是，写作时我们切不可直接使用数字把四项要点简单 罗列。
【范文赏读】 Dear_Peter， I'd_like_to_ask_you_to_write_an_article_for_our_school's_English_ newspaper. The “Foreign Cultures” section in our newspaper is very popular among us students. It carries articles written by foreign friends about the cultures of their home countries. Would you please write something about the culture in your part of the United States? And we would especially welcome articles about how Americans spend their holidays and festivals, and the life of American high school students. You can write anything relevant so long as it's interesting and informative. 400 words would be fine. Could we have your article before June 28? I'm looking forward to hearing from you. Yours， Li_Hua

主谓一致
考点诠释 对点演练
高频考点 深化突破
考点二 倒装
考点诠释 对点演练
1．全部倒装 (1)表示地点或方位的副词或介词短语，如 here， there，up，down，in， away，off，out， under the tree 等置于句首，且主语是名词时。 South of the river lies a small factory. There goes the bell for break.
高频考点 深化突破
考点二 倒装
考点诠释 对点演练
Hardly/Scarcely...when...“刚„„ 就„„” No sooner...than...“刚„„ 就„„”
Hardly had he arrived in Beijing when he called me. No sooner had he arrived in Beijing than he called me.
高频考点 深化突破
考点二 倒装
考点诠释 对点演练
So＋adj.＋n....＋ that...“如此„„ 以至于„„”
So kind a person is he that we all admire him.
Not only...but(also)．..“不仅„„而 Not only can he dance， but also he 且„„” Not until...“直到„„才„„” can sing. Not until Tom finished his homework did he go to bed.
高频考点 深化突破
考点二 倒装
考点诠释 对点演练
高频考点 深化突破
考点二 倒装
考点诠释 对点演练

• Having sent them to your e-mail, could I have the modified version before June 28.
• Thanks for your kindness！
2021年新课标II卷
假定你是李华，你校摄影俱乐部〔photography club〕将举办 国际中学摄影展。请给你的英国朋友Peter写封信。请他提供作 品。信的内容包括：
• In order to get some practical experience, I am planning to take a part-time job in a foreign capital company. I have already finished my job application and personal resume. But this is the first time that I have written an application and the personals resume, so I don’t even know if there are something to pay attention to. So, I’m writing you the letter , hoping you can give me some help. I will be very grateful if you can help me.
Thank you.
2021年四川卷
• 某中学生英文报正举办“The Season I Like Best〞的征文活动。请用英文写一篇短文投稿， 内容包括：
• 1如：气候、景色、
活动、感受……〕。
2021年浙江卷

复合句、简单句的互换
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The fact that I might be defeated worries me.
句型转换
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I was so nervous that I might lose the competition
It is the possibility of losing that makes me anxious.
①Hua Fei, a sporting robot of the 23rd century, who is good at high flying exercises got a silver medal in the 78th Olympics. However/But/While/Though
Huafei was defeated in the 79th Olympics for his progmmer 's illness,which makes him nervous.What's the worse, his parachute went wrong .
Add twostep linking words to summary make the coherent passage coherent Writing 4: Make the
A. Argumentation B. A self-introduction
（Narration）
C. Exposition
Para 1：Basic information about the robot
• Name: __________ Hua Fei Who When
In the 23rd century • When: ____________________