Are We More Connected or More Alone(复旦大学命题、作文批改网、大学英语作文)

Are We More Connected or More Alone？在这个时代，人人都有手机，我们想要找朋友、找家人，网上联系十分方便。

与从前相比，我们是更加联系的。

但这同时又使我们更孤单。

从前，我们想要联系别人，我们会见面，我们将信息口口相传，无论是在时间上还是在空间上，我们都是一起的。

然而今天，我们跨越耳机听到对方的声音，我们隔着屏幕看到对方的脸。

但这是不可避免的、这是趋势，社会的发展注定我们不会永远待在一个地方，就像现在，我们离开从小到大一起生活的父母，到很远的地方上学，所以我们要感谢电子通讯的发展。

也许当声音停止你摘下耳机，你的心中有一丝惆怅，当视频结束你退出微信，你的心中会有一丝失落，这其实也是我们越来越联系的动力，正因我们的孤单是不可逆的，我们才要发掘越来越多的途径来世我们保持联系。

In this era, everyone has a cell phone, we want to find a friend, find a family, online contact is very convenient. Compared with the past, we are more connected. But it also makes us more lonely. In the past, we wanted to contact others, we will meet, we will word of mouth, whether in time or in space, we are together. Today, however, we hear each other's headphones across the headphones, and we see each other's faces across the screen. But it is inevitable that this is the trend, the development of society is doomed we will not stay in a place forever, just like now, we leave parents who live together from small to large, to go to school far away, so we would like to thank the development of electronic communications.Maybe when the sound stops you off the headphones, your heart has a trace of melancholy, when the end of the video you exit WeChat, your heart will be a trace of loss, which is actually more and more of our power, because our lonely is irreversible , We have to explore more and more ways to stay in the world we keep in touch.In my opinion, we aremore connected, and also more alone. The two are mutual influence, mutual promotion.。

Just Write！ 批改网，让英语学习更简单 Are We More Connected or More Alone？姓名：李同学 学校：长治市城区第一中学校 分数：92Nowadays, technology becomes more and more important in our lives.Computers, phones, ipads are used widely in our daily lives. There is no doubt that technology makes our life more convenient for example, we can go shopping, book tickets, even we can study by the Internet. How wonderful it is!But when we communicate with each other through the Internet, we will neglect to spend time with our parents, friends and so on.According to this picture, everyone is playing with their phones while their parents are having dinner. This appearance makes me upset because of their behaviors. I realize the relationship between parents and children has become estranged.In my opinion, we should put down our phones and communicate with your parents and friends instead of using some Social Network Sites. After all your family is the most valuable part of your life, isn't it?。

Just Write ！批改网，让英语学习更简单Are We More Connected or More Alone?姓名：张同学学校：江苏省天一中学分数：92Dear Tom,I have heard that you have been addicted to Internet and thus being more alone.It seems that nothing but Internet interests you.You spend so much time with computer and phone that less time is spent on chatting with friends and participating in outdoor activities.Your parents are really concerned about you,and so am I.During adolescence,it is common for teenagers to feel lonely and misunderstood.With the Internet developing,we have easier access to the world.However,on the oppsite,we have become more distant and felt more lonely.Faced with difficulties,we should struggle to our feet and try to find a correct way to deal with it.Judging from your situation,you may find yourself connected and relieved there.However,from my perspective,the Internet is not helpful for your physical and mental health.It only leads to loneliness and harmful emotions.After all,I want to tell you that you are not alone.You are supported by family and friends.It is important for you to learn to take control of yourself.Adjust your attitude and then you will find the true happiness.。

Are we more connected or more alone? With the development of technology, the mobile phones have more functions than before,they became thenumber one tool of communication for us, sometimes even surpassing face-to-face communication. As we know, almost everyone in our life spends too much time on phone, people text or surf the internet during meal time. They text and shop and go on socialsoftware during classes, during presentations, actually during all the time except sleeping. Those phones in our pockets are changing our minds and hearts because they offer us three grati fying fantasies. One, that we can put our attention wherever we want it to be; two, that we will al ways be heard; and three, that we will never have to be alone. And the third idea, is central to ch anging our psyches. Because the moment that people feel alone, even for a few seconds, they be come anxious, panic, fidget, they reach for a device. Being alone feels like a problem that needs to be solved. And so people try to solve it by connecting.I think we are more alone,I see that people can't get enough of each other, if and only if they can have each other at a dista nce, in amounts they can control, not too close, not too far, just right.Shopping experienceTo be honest, most of my shopping experiences are online shopping since I got my phone, actually I prefer to stay at home and do the shopping online rather than go out and walk along the street for a long time.Near the end of last semester, I wanted to knit a scarf for my mother in the cold winter, so I searched woolen yarns on Taobao, then the interface became colorful, there were many kinds of woolen yarns to choose. After considering, I decided to purchase the double knitting and the seller offer me a discount when I place an order and promise prompt service. But then I have waited for two weeks, it eventually arrived when I almost forgot it, and it’s really poor quality, so I kicked up a terrible fuss about it and make a complaint to the customer services. To my surprise, they promised me a full refund immediately.So the experience is not too bad.Collocations: online shopping, do the shopping, offer you a discount, place an order, prompt service, poor quality, kicked up a fuss, made a complaint。

Just Write！ 批改网，让英语学习更简单 Are We More Connected or More Alone？姓名：沈同学 学校：厦门海沧实验中学 分数：90Nowadays, our life is changed day after day with the development of the modern technology. The development of the Internet gives us more things to think about. Are we more connected or more alone? I think every coin has both sides. It isn't necessary to just praise or support the internet.First, internet gives us many things that are good in our daily life. For example, We Chat are one of the most popular social software that can not only let us make friends with others, but also give us more convenient way to pay for things which we buy.However, nothing is perfect. Internet also has bad influences for our life. One of the worst things is that if we are addicted to the internet's world, we will have less ability to talk with others in the true life. And we lost many things that are important. Things are dead but humans are alive. The good or bad of things depend on how people use it. We should use the internet properly to prevent lost things in our life.。

Just Write ！批改网，让英语学习更简单Are We More Connected or More Alone？姓名：马怡林学校：韶关学院分数：91With the development of information network,person chooses to communicate with others through the internet,and this trend is further strengthened.Writer and psychologist Sherry Turkle said,"We are getting used to a new way of being alone together".First of all,we can not resist the development of information network and it is more difficult to resist the convenience of information technology to our life and study.It is undeniable that the network technology accelerates dissemination of information therefore we can communicate with others well and quickly.There is one more point that there are more "connected"than ever before with the convenience of communication.We can speak our mind freely and our ability to connect with other person online makes us feel like a slice of something bigger.What's more,this kind of communication can motivate the identification of the communicators and help inferior rebuild their confidence.Nevertheless,everything has two sides.Provided that we care too much about the self in virtual worlds and spend all time and energy in creating the self in virtual worlds,we will ignore the true self in real life otherwise can not distinguish the two.When we are blinded or else unable to accept the real self,we choose to escape from the reality frequently until isolated from the real worlds.For what Sherry Turkle said,I can't deny it.For the cause that person does get used to this new way of being alone at present,in the long run,it is not conducive to humankind development.Human being is a kind of social animal that's why we need more emotional communication face-to-face not online.。

Just Write ！批改网，让英语学习更简单Are We More Connected or More Alone？姓名：毕翔宇学校：南京大学分数：92It is universally acknowledged that we are more 'connected'that ever before seemingly.Whereas,many individuals proclaim loudly that the fact is just the opposite:individuals are getting increasingly lonely than ever before.As far as I'm concerned,we are getting more alone currently.On the one hand,there is no denying that the Internet is of paramount significance to shorten the distances between individuals and that people can even chat with dozens of e-pals every day.Nevertheless,this kind of communication becomes a mere formality in recent years.What's more,the principally purpose is merely for a specific reason.People seldom consider their e-pals to be intimate friends.Moreover,people cannot reveal their secrets in the Internet is a common sense,which indicates that people can't be too prudent online,then how can we make actual friends with this attitude?On the other hand,it has been confirmed by numerous facts that the number of individuals who are suffering from mental illnesses,especially depressive disorder,are growing in an astonishing speed.It's apparent that citizens are getting increasingly lonely now.Additionally,provided that people have been more 'connected'nowadays,the fact mentioned above would be a paradox.In conclusion,people seem to be more connected on the Internet,but more alone in the real life,thus the perspectives that people are more 'connected'are nothing but superficial concepts.Individuals are getting increasingly lonely in recent years,and the consequence would be severe if we didn't take it seriously.On no account can we overlook this phenomenon.On account of this,it's our authority and society's responsibility to attach importance to this serious dilemma and go all out to solve it.。

Just Write ！批改网，让英语学习更简单Are We More Connected or More Alone？姓名：王心怡学校：同济大学分数：91Surrounded by all-time online friends are you feeling more connected?Being asked this question,I bet you will drop into confusion immediately.After racking your brains,you may finally reach an unexpected and depressing conclusion that you are actually feeling more isolated in this high-tech high-connected world.You should be aware of this,though,you are not the only one who's becoming more alone.Like Turkle said,"We are getting used to a new way of being alone together",on which I can not agree more,our condition in social life is becoming increasingly complicated due to involvement of virtual communication online.Admittedly,we indeed have easier access to connection with people,able to chat with friends anywhere at any time.While at the same time,we have gradually lost the capability to communicate with others frankly face to face.Because we are used to talking to someone without expressions or tone,only with words,which we are able to spend enough time deliberating on and modifying before we send them out.We are used to hiding our defects and looking always perfect.Correspondingly,we avoid revealing our real thoughts while chatting and posting our recent experiences online.As a consequence,we close the door from our hearts to the outside world,isolating ourselves from others.Equally worse,relationship between families and friends in real life is getting worse and we are getting estranged from each other.On a gathering with families we frequently take out our mobil-phones to check messages from friends online and sometimes even begin to chat,ignoring families'expectation of talking heart to heart with us.Thus,we leave ourselves to total isolation.From all above I can undoubtedly claim that,instead of being more connected,we are sadly getting more alone.。

Just Write ！批改网，让英语学习更简单Are We More Connected or More Alone？姓名：王子彦学校：华南师范大学分数：95According to a recent survey conducted by the British Mental Health Foundation,an increasing number of people believe that social networking platforms like Twitter are making people more alone rather than more connected.Additionally,scientists figured out that only when people are talking face to face,can several crucial hormones be produced by our brains,which provides a sense of trust,giving people assistance to cope with stress.Decades and centuries ago,we human communicated with each other in the most original and basic way,self-evidently demonstrating that no additional tool is essential for us to express our thoughts.Nevertheless,with the booming development of science and technology,we are today more capable to contact anyone via instant messages within seconds.Undeniably,the modern means of communication makes it easier to convey our feelings.Although modernized tools have enabled us to express ourselves more conveniently,our situation seems awkward -we are virtually more alone than ever before.The over dependence on modern technology literally fades out our real impression on others,eventually inclining us to be accustomed to talking to a machine rather than a living man.On account of the declining tendency and decreasing opportunity that we meet our friends face to face,the original image of our friends gradually slips from our memory.Therefore,the most significant and valuable part of our daily communication is unfortunately lost.From what has been mentioned above,we can briefly draw a conclusion that the way we communicate with others definitely shapes the pattern of our life.Under this circumstance:only if we strike a better balance between the poles of ancient way and today's high technology,finding a superior method to approach a better connected world,can this problem in modern communication be settled.。

Just Write ！批改网，让英语学习更简单Are We More Connected or More Alone？姓名：李义学校：四川工商学院分数：92Currently,due to the rapid development of Internet and communication technologies,quite a few citizens hold the view that we have become much more connected.Nevertheless,other citizens argue that we have become more alone.As time passes by,information technology develops fairly rapidly,which makes the world today is becoming smaller and smaller,lest we can get in touch with the distant relatives via visual telephone,or make cooperation with the foreign countries,which can broaden our circle of trading,more importantly,the Internet promotes the evolution of the humanity civilization and makes us more connected.Nevertheless,it has quiet a few deficiencies,some of them will make us alone.Imaging a situation,you're about to purchase some food on the Internet when your home has a sudden power outage,meanwhile,your electronic facilities are running out of power,but you are living alone and have no friends in this building.Depressed and hungry as you are,you feel frustrated.Subsequently,you begin to regret wasting too much time on the Internet,contributing to your terrible stly,you're determined to communicate with person face-to-face.There is some truth in both sides.To my mind,there is no doubt that Internet is beneficial to the humankind,nevertheless,it is likely to make individuals alone than connected.The public who abandon themselves in online surfing should attach importance to the real lives,such as travelling with friends or doing some voluntary actions,in order to enlarge one's horizon and integrate into the real lives.。