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2024年新高考英语一轮复习写作专题02 建议信1．（江苏省2023-2024学年高三学情调研试题）假定你是李华，你的笔友Tom给你来信说他下学期将到北京的一所高中做交换生，向你请教如何提升汉语口语水平。
请你给他回信，内容包括：1. 表示关注；2. 提出建议；3. 期待进步。
注意:1. 词数80左右；2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
Dear Tom,____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________Yours,Li Hua 【答案】Dear Tom,How is everything going? Knowing you would like to improve your spoken Chinese, I am offering you the following suggestions.First of all, try exposing yourself to some Chinese programmes, thus improving your pronunciation gradually. Besides, it is advisable to read Chinese newspapers, magazines or novels in your spare time. In this way, you can not only enlarge your vocabulary, but also learn to use Chinese as we native speakers do. Last but not least, you should be brave and make use of every opportunity to practise speaking Chinese aloud.Looking forward to your progress.Yours,Li Hua 【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。
高考英语应用文写作范文（建议信）1、给你所在学校的图书馆写一封信，就改善图书馆服务提出一些意见。
范文：Dear Sir or Madam,I am a student in the school and regularly spend my spare time in the school library. Generally speaking, the services you provide are good; however, I have some suggestions for you to consider. I hope you would take them into consideration.In the first place, I hope that you would prolong the time for reading in that most students have no time to go to the library when attending class in the daytime. I would also recommend you purchase more recent books for that some books in the library are out of date. Last but not least, the study rooms need to be furnished with a better lighting system for the sake of students’ eye health.I really wish to have an excellent library. Thank you for you time and consideration.Yours sincerely,Li Hua(141字，备注字数不要写到考卷，这是参考用的，切记！)。
高考英语作文之应用文“建议信1. 简介建议信写作注意事项：写作目的是针对某事向对方提出合理化的建议和忠告，使对方接受自己的想法、主张和建议，从而解决问题。
（常用一般现在时和一般将来时）写作风格：简明扼要、目标明确、条理清晰、逻辑性强、有说服力，语言文雅，礼貌当先写作内容：写信的原因+建议的内容+这样建议的理由2. 写作方法首段 1 ）自我介绍/ 问好（不要啰嗦）一两个句子，概括性2）复述背景，表明目的主体 1 ）提出具体建议2）篇幅允许的话，可适当先肯定对方优点，再提出建议3）适当说明原因或这样做的好处结尾 1 ）总结建议，注意礼貌2 ）希望采纳/ 希望建议有用3. 范文练习假如你是李华，你的澳大利亚朋友Steven 向你咨询怎样学好中文，请根据下列要点给他写封建议信：1）参加中文学习班2）看中文书刊，电视3）学唱中文歌曲4）交中国朋友开头：自我介绍/ 问好认识→问好(可问可不问)最近好吗？How are you doing?How are you these days?How do you do?How is it going?How is everything going?好久不见Long time no see.收到你的来信真好!How nice to hear from you!不认识→自我介绍我是李华，育才学校学生会主席。
I ' m Li Hua, chairman of the Student Union of Yucai Middle School.我来自高二一班的李华，I' m Li Hua from class one,senior two.复述背景，表明目的1．收到来信，得知你在中文学习上有困难，我写信来给你一些建议。
I have received your letter saying you have difficulty (in) learning Chinese so I ' m woffer you some suggestions.2．得知你在学习中文上有困难，我写信来给你一些建议。
二建议信模板（单面打印）Dear______,1 写信的原因I am very pleased to know that_______. / I am very glad to have received the letter you sent me _______ ago. 2引出建议You have asked me for my advice with regard to ________. 3 表述建议的内容In my opinion / To my view, ______________ 4提出该建议的理由一On one hand/For one reason,_________________. 5 提出该建议的理由二On the other hand/ for another reason, ____________. 6 总结并重申自己的建议Therefore, I think it is a good idea for you to _____________.7 针对某个具体问题的建议As to __________ , I suggest ___________. 8 鼓励对方I amsure_____________ .9 表达自己愿意帮助的愿望Please inform me if there is something I can do for you. 10 提出希望I am looking forward to ____________.Yours sincerely,Xxxxxxxxx经典句式：1 It seems to be a good idea that.....看来....是个好主意2 I would like to offer my suggestion that...我想建议....3 I hope you will find these suggestions helpful我希望这些建议对你有帮助建议信一：假如你是李华，你的美国笔友Tom 最近在学习汉语，但是他感觉汉语太难了，想要放弃。
建议信1．假定你是李华，你的英国朋友Tom来信说他准备参加学校组织的运动俱乐部，征求你的意见。
请你给他写一封回信，内容包括：1.表示支持；2.谈谈好处；3.给出建议。
注意：1.词数80左右：2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear Tom,_______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _________________________________Yours,Li Hua 2．假如你是李华，你的好友Sam给你写信说最近在中文学习上遇到了一些困难，心情很沮丧。
请你写封回信，内容包括:1.表示理解:2.提出建议(不少于2点);3.给予鼓励。
注意:1.写作词数应为80左右:2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
3.书信格式已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Sam,_______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________Best wishes!Yours,Li Hua 3．假设你叫李华，你的朋友John沉迷于抖音不能自拔，写信向你寻求帮助，请你给他回一封电子邮件。
高考英语作文练习（10）应用文：建议信【篇首句】说明写信目的。
1 I have received your letter saying you plan to play a visit to China for ten days next month. Perhaps the following suggestions are helpful to you.我已经收到了你的来信。
信上说你打算下个月来参观中国十天。
可能下面的建议对你是有帮助的。
2 You have asked me for my advice with regard to how to learn Chinese , and I will try to make some suggestions here.你关于如何学习汉语询问我的建议，那么我就在这里给出一些建议。
3. I'm very glad to receive your letter asking for my advice on how to fit in the new school life. Here are a few suggestions.很高兴收到你的来信，信上询问我关于如何适应新的学校生活。
下面是我的一些建议。
4. I'm very glad to have received your e-mail. Now I'm writing to give you some advice on how to learn English well in high school.很高兴收到你的电子邮件。
现在，关于如何在高中学好英语，我写信给你一些建议。
【篇中句】介绍详情、提出具体建议。
1. I'd like to suggest that...我想要建议......2. In my opinion,...在我看来，......3. If I were you, I would...如果我是你，我会......4. You'd better do.../not do...你最好/最好不......5 First of all, you should………….What’s more, ………………Last but not least, you shoul d………………【篇尾句】提出希望采纳建议，并祝福。
高考英语应用文写作建议信原创总结1.3建议信：生活习惯建议（金牌例题）假如你是李华，你的朋友Simon写信告诉你他沉迷于打篮球，每天花很多时间打球，结果家庭作业不能准时上交，父母和老师很不满意，要他放弃这个爱好，他很生气、难过。
根据下列提示，请你就Simon的问题给他一些有用的建议并给与鼓励：1. 认真计划好自己的时间2. 保持学习和爱好之间的平衡3. 给与鼓励注意：1. 词数80左右；2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear Simon,_______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________Yours,Li Hua 【预备加油站】1. 高级备用单词及词组搭配：1.1. Commitment -承诺1.2. Prioritize -优先考虑1.3. Time management -时间管理1.4. Balanced lifestyle -平衡的生活方式1.5. Self-discipline -自律1.6. Productivity -生产力1.7. Efficiency -效率1.8. Success -成功1.9. Aspiration -志向1.10. Goal-oriented -以目标为导向1.11. Persistence -坚持1.12. Resilience -弹性1.13. Adaptability -适应性1.14. Proactive -主动的1.15. Problem-solving -解决问题1.16. Critical thinking -批判性思维1.17. Creativity -创造力1.18. Innovation -创新1.19. Collaboration -合作1.20. Communication skills -沟通能力1.21. Leadership -领导力1.22. Teamwork -团队合作1.23. Vision -愿景1.24. Passion -激情1.25. Motivation -动机1.26. Inspiration -灵感1.27. Personal growth -个人成长1.28. Self-awareness -自我意识1.29. Emotional intelligence -情商1.30. Conflict resolution -冲突解决1.31. Negotiation skills -谈判技巧1.32. Cultural sensitivity -文化敏感性1.33. Global perspective -全球视野1.34. Lifelong learning -终身学习1.35. Continuous improvement -持续改进1.36. Personal development -个人发展1.37. Professional growth -职业成长1.38. Skill development -技能发展1.39. Knowledge acquisition -知识获取1.40. Competence -能力1.41. Mastery -精通1.42. Excellence -卓越1.43. Quality -质量1.44. Achievement -成就1.45. Succession planning -继任计划1.46. Legacy -遗产1.47. Reputation -声誉1.48. Brand -品牌1.49. Market position -市场地位1.50. Strategic planning -战略规划2. 模板套句：开头部分：2.1. It is with great concern that I have noticed your recent struggles in managing your daily responsibilities and pursuing your passion for basketball.2.2. I am writing to offer my support and guidance as you navigate the challenges of balancing your academic obligations and your love for the sport.2.3. I understand that basketball has become an integral part of your life, but it is essential to prioritize your academic responsibilities.2.4. As a friend who cares about your well-being and success, I believe it is important to finda harmonious balance between your passion and your academic obligations.2.5. I have observed that your dedication to basketball has impacted your ability to complete your homework on time, leading to dissatisfaction from your parents and teachers.中间行文：2.6. To address this issue, I encourage you to develop a structured schedule that allows for dedicated time for both your studies and your basketball practice.2.7. By establishing clear boundaries between your academic and personal life, you can maintain your passion for basketball without compromising your academic performance. 2.8. Additionally, communication with your parents and teachers about your commitment to both areas can help alleviate their concerns and generate support.2.9. It is crucial to remember that your academic success is a stepping stone to your future aspirations and should not be overlooked.2.10. I suggest exploring time management techniques and study skills that can enhance your productivity and help you manage your time more effectively.结尾部分：2.11. I have confidence in your ability to overcome this challenge and find a balance that satisfies both your passion for basketball and your academic goals.2.12. Remember, success often requires sacrifice, and prioritizing your education will pay off in the long run.2.13. Y our dedication and hard work on the court have shown that you have the determination and grit to excel in both sports and academics.2.14. I encourage you to view this situation as an opportunity for personal growth and self-discipline.2.15. Y our passion for basketball is valuable, but it must be harmoniously integrated with your academic life.2.16. By showing responsibility and adaptability, you can demonstrate to your parents and teachers that you are capable of managing your time and commitments effectively.2.17. I am here to support you every step of the way, and I am confident that you can achievea balance that will allow you to excel in both areas.3. 精彩范文及点评：范文1：Dear Simon,I was disheartened to hear about the tension between your passion for basketball and your academic duties. However, I believe that with proper time management, you can strike a balance between the two.It's crucial to prioritize your studies, as they pave the way for your future aspirations. At the same time, your dedication to basketball showcases your commitment and perseverance, qualities that are valuable in any pursuit. I suggest setting aside specific times for practice and homework, ensuring that you allocate your time efficiently.Remember, success is about making sacrifices and prioritizing. By managing your time effectively, you can excel in both academics and basketball. I have faith in your ability to overcome this challenge and find a harmonious balance.Yours,Li Hua范文2：Dear Simon,I understand the frustration you're experiencing due to the criticism from your parents and teachers regarding your basketball obsession. However, it's important to note that balance is key in life.Your passion for basketball is commendable, but it should not come at the expense of your academic obligations. I recommend creating a schedule that allocates specific time for both activities. This way, you can ensure that you meet your academic goals while still enjoying your favorite sport.Additionally, communicate openly with your parents and teachers about your commitment to both basketball and your education. They may appreciate your dedication and be more supportive if they understand your perspective.Stay determined and focused, and remember that hard work and perseverance lead to success. I am confident that you can achieve a harmonious balance and excel in both areas.Yours,Li Hua 点评：用词角度：两篇文章都用到了一些高级词汇，如"disheartened"、"strike a balance"、"prioritize"、"commitment"、"perseverance"等，这些词汇能够准确地表达作者的观点和情感。
高考英语应用文写作练习与讲解一、建议信：外国朋友因文化差异被误解的建议假定你是李华，你的交换生朋友Mike因为文化差异经常被同学误解，他感到非常苦恼，于是写邮件向你寻求帮助。
请给他写一封回信，内容包括：1.给予安慰；2.提出建议；3.表达祝愿。
注意：1.词数80左右；2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
写作注意要点1.基本时态为一般现在时。
2.写作思路：三段论。
第一段给予安慰（要点1）；第二段提出具体建议（要点2）；第三段表达祝愿（要点3）。
【参考范文】Dear Mike,I’m sorry to learn that you are often misunderstood by your classmates because of cultural differences. As a matter of fact, it is not uncommon for many exchange students to find themselves in your situation. Just take it easy and here comes my advice.It always comes first to learn the Chinese language and culture, and master some common vocabulary and expressions, in order to avoid unnecessary misunderstandings in communication. Understanding Chinese customs is also preferable. After all, culture differs from country to country. Finally, why not make friends with some peers and adapt to the life here as soon as possible?I hope my advice is of some help to you and that you can rid yourself of the trouble soon. (122 words)Yours,Li Hua【中文翻译】亲爱的麦克:听说你因为文化差异经常被同学误解而感到非常苦恼。
建议信1.建议信是向收信人对某事提出写信人的建议和忠告。
2建议信有可能是写给个人，就其遇到的某个问题提出自己的看法和观点；也可能是写给某个组织和机构，就改进其服务提出建议或忠告。
3建议信要写出写信的原因，建议的内容，提出建议的理由，提出的理由要入情入理，语气一定要礼貌当先。
因此建议信要写得简明扼要、目的明确、具有合理性和说服力。
篇章结构及内容：首段：表明写作意图。
陈述事由，简单介绍自己，注意语气。
主体段落：应该首先肯定对方的优点，然后再写需要改进的地方或针对具体情况提出具体建议或忠告。
结尾段：对提出的建议进行总结，要注意有礼貌使读者容易接受。
(注意事项：语言要委婉、礼貌，顾及对方感受。
)A．建议信开头常用句式 (照应材料,表明写作意图)1．After I read your letter, I am sorry to know that …2．I know you have trouble in…after reading your letter3.I am writing to you for the purpose of -----4. You have asked me for my advice with on…and I’ll try to make some suggestions.5.I am writing to express my views concerning.....B. 表达建议（body）1 .I think it would be more beneficial if you co uld …2. I would like to suggest/recommend that…3. If I were you, I would…4. In my opinion, it would be wise to take the following action.5.I suggest that…6. You would better do/ not do…7. You may consider doing…8. first，firstly，secondly…．then，after that，in the end．finally．Meanwhile, what’s more．．．C.建议信结尾常用句式1. I believe you will take my advice into account/consideration.2. I hope you will find these proposals/suggestions practical/useful/helpful.3. In the end, I will be glad if you find my suggestions useful.模板:Dear____,You have asked me for my advice with regard to _____, and I’ll try to make some conductive suggestions here.In my humble opinion(以我拙见), you would be wise to take the following actions: _____.I hope you’ll find these proposals useful and I would be ready to discuss this matter with you to further details.Good luck with you.Yours,XXX历年考题:(2017 北京卷)你的英国朋友Jim所在的学校要组织学生来中国旅行，有两条线路可以选择：“长江之行”或者“泰山之旅”。
Jim来信希望你能给些建议。
请你给他回信，内容包括：1.你建议的线路；2.你的理由；3.你的祝愿。
注意：1.词数不少于50；2.开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Jim,Yours,Li Hua【参考范文】Dear Jim,I’m happy receive your letter and know you’re coming to China.Of the two trips to the Yangtze River and Mount Tai, both are highly recommended. Personally, I prefer the tour along the Yangtze, the longest river and one of the mother rivers of Chinese civilization. You can learn a lot about the history of China and Chinese people. Moreover, the scenery along the river is amazing, with many well-known sightseeing spots. That’s why I think the trip along the Yangtze will be a better choice.Hope you’ll have a good time in China.YoursLi Hua(2014年浙江卷书面表达)学校图书馆需要购置一批新书，现向学生征求意见。
假如你是李越，你认为学校图书馆最需要购置科普类图书(popular science books)和文学类图书(literary books)。
请你用英语给图书馆王老师写一封100-120个词的信，推荐这两类书，并分别说明推荐理由。
注意：信的抬头与落款已给出(不计入词数)。
Dear Mr. Wang,__________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours sincerely,Li Yue【参考范文】Dear Mr. Wang,Knowing that our library is going to buy books, I’d like to give some suggestions.What we need most are popular science books. Usually popular science books explain basic principles of nature in a simple and interesting way. They help us understand science subjects better and arouse our curiosity about scientific discoveries.In addition to reading for knowledge, we read for fun and inspiration. That iswhy I recommend another category of books: literary books. Classic works, written by masters, present great thoughts through fascinating stories and language. They not only offer us joy and excitement, but also encourage us to think critically.I’ll be glad if you can consider my recommendation.Yours sincerely,Li Yue writing 1假如你是营养师Mr. Li,李华向你写信咨询有关如何保持健康的建议：1.健康的重要性2.如何保持健康Dear Li hua,How nice to hear from you ! In your letter you asked me how to keep healthy. I would like to give you some advice.As the proverb says, “No one knows the value of health until he loses it”. In other words, nothing is more important than health. Good health is beneficial to your work and study. But how to keep healthy? Here I want to give you some advice.First, you should have a regular life: go to bed and get up early. Second, keep a healthy and balanced diet: eat more vegetables and fruits and other food full of energy and fiber; eat as little sugar and oily food as possible. Don’t eat food which has gone bad. Third, get rid of the bad habits such as smoking, drinking or staying up too late. Physical exercise can make your body strong, so we should exercise every day.In a word, health is more valuable than anything else. We should do everything we can to keep us healthy.yours,XXX writing 2假定你是李华,你所喜爱的Global Mirror周报创刊五周年之际征集读者意见.请你依据以下内容给主编写封信，内容主要包括:1说明你是该报的忠实读者 2.赞赏该报优点：1)兼顾国内外新闻2)介绍名人成功故事3．提出建议：刊登指导英语学习的文章Dear Editor-in-Chief,Congratulations on the 5th anniversary of Global Mirror!I’m a regular reader of your newspaper. I like it so much that I hardly miss anycopy.There are many advantages of Global Mirror. Firstly, Global Mirror covers both national and international news. By simply turning the pages, I can know all important things that have happened both home and abroad. Besides, the success stories of world-famous people are also attractive to me, which help me learn a lot from them. In a word, thanks to Global Mirror, we are well-informed and keep up with the changing world.As a young student, I wish that I can be a master of English language. Therefore, I suggest that Global Mirror provide articles about English learning for us.Finally, I hope that Global Mirror will become more and more popular. Thank you for your time!Sincerely yours,Li Hua赠送以下资料考试知识点技巧大全一、考试中途应饮葡萄糖水大脑是记忆的场所，脑中有数亿个神经细胞在不停地进行着繁重的活动,大脑细胞活动需要大量能量。
