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中考复习专题书面表达培优训练(附解析)一、中考英语书面表达汇编1．（·四川中考模拟）书面表达目前，学生考试作弊现象严重，请围绕以下要点谈谈其中原因以及个人建议。
原因：1.考试太滥2.自身勤奋不够3.把大量时间用在上网和玩游戏上4.为了骗取家长和老师高兴看法与建议：1.作弊有害； 2.要做人诚实，学习发奋； 3.学校应减少考试。
要求：1.字数 80-100； 2.围绕要点可适当发挥； 3.文章开头已给出，不计入总字数。
_______________________________________________________________________________ _【答案】At present, a number of middle school students have picked up a bad habit-cheating in examinations.There are three main reasons. First, schools have given students too many exams, some of which are too difficult. Second, some students are not hard-working and they don't work hard at their lessons. Third, they waste a lot of time playing games or surfing the Internet. So they haven't enough time to prepare for the exams. Finally, students have to do so to make their teachers and parents happy.In my opinion, cheating in exams does great harm to our study. We students should be honest and diligent, and only in this way can we improve our study and make progress. Besides, our teachers should offer us fewer exams and more time to study for ourselves.【解析】写作分析：本文需要就考试作弊这一主题展开讨论。
中考英语书面表达培优卷（word）一、中考英语书面表达（含答案详细解析）1．亲爱的同学们，初中生活即将结束，你们一定有很多的感触.假如你是Tony,名城中学九（1）班的学生。
请以 My junior high school life为题,写一篇80词左右的短文。
提示：1.个人基本情况介绍2.校园（校园干净而美丽，活动非富多彩）；老师（传授知识，教会做人,经常鼓励）；同学（和睦相处，互相学习，共同进步）。
3.对学校、老师、同学表达感谢和祝福。
要求：1. 文章包含以上提示内容，适当发挥。
2.文中不能出现真实的校名和人名。
【答案】My junior high school lifeMy name is Tony. I am studying in Grade 9.As time goes by, my colorful junior middle school life is coming to an end. I’m glad to tell you something about my school life.Our campus is clean and beautiful, and there are all kinds of activities. Our teachers teach us rich knowledge and how to behave ourselves. They also encourage us to work hard. We all get on well with our classmates. Besides, we learn from each other and make progress together.I thanks for my school, my teachers and my classmates. Wish them better.【解析】【分析】这是一篇给材料作文，介绍我的初中生活。
中考英语书面表达培优训练(附解析)一、中考英语书面表达（含答案详细解析）1．“扬帆起航新学期，学姐学长提建议”。
你马上就要毕业了，在初中的学习和生活中你一定有很多收获，请给学弟学妹们提几点建议吧！要求：1. 内容完整，语言流畅，书写规范清晰。
2. 短文中不能出现正式姓名，校名。
100 词左右。
【答案】I'm going to graduate from junior high school. As your senior, I have some suggestions to the young.As old saying goes, "all work and no play makes Jack a dull boy." To begin with, you should arrange both your study and life properly.Moreover, you should get along well with others. To have more friends, not enemies.Last but not least, you could be active in school team work. Ability is as important as your study, you can also enjoy your colorful school life as wellI hope these suggestions could make your junior school-life more wonderful.【解析】【详解】这篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短语，为文章增色不少，如be going to，graduate from，to begin with，both…and，get along well with others，be active in，as important as，as well等。
书面表达押题中考英语作文构思技巧（一）审：审就是仔细审题。
看清要求，确定体裁、人称、时态等。
（二）列：列就是抓要点。
根据要点列出英文短语形式提纲，避免遗漏。
（三）扩：扩就是扩展成句。
将所列提纲形成“主+谓+宾。
”和“主+系+表。
”基本句子结构，注意定语和状语修饰成分位置的使用以及避免中国式英语出现。
（四）连：连就是连句成篇。
使用适当的连词和过渡语将表达要点的句子连接成文。
（五）改：改主要从以下几个方面进行自我修改：1.内容是否完整2.时态是否正确3.拼写和标点是否正确4.主谓是否一致5.格式和字数是否符合要求6.层次是否清楚中考英语作文常见错误分析1.审题不清：依据作文的评分原则，若文章内容不切题，则不管语言如何规范、用词如何准确，都会被严重减分。
2.拼写错误：拼写是考生应该具备的最起码的基本功，但在考生的作文中却经常能发现很多拼写错误。
有拼写错误的作文肯定会被酌情扣分，而且有大量拼写错误存在的作文不仅体现出语言基本功差，同时也直接影响内容的表达，通常会降低作文的档次。
3.名词单复数问题：名词单复数会造成主谓不一致错误，名词前面缺少限定词造成泛指现象。
4.缺少动词：在汉语中没有动词的句子是允许的，但英语中每个完整的句子都必须有动词来构成。
5.中国式英语的排列：按照汉语表述顺序罗列单词组句。
6.代词的误用：英语中代词的形式很多，包括主格、宾格、物主代词、反身代词等。
而汉语中没有主格和宾格、形容词性物主代词和名词性物主代词之分；此外汉语中很多时候不用物主代词，而英语中要体现人与物的关系必须用物主代词。
7.句子不完整：因为对句子结构认识模糊，出现只写半句的现象，这也是造成失分的原因之一。
尤其体现在（及物动词/不及物动词运用）8.时态、人称和数的搭配错误：汉语动词无时态、人称和数的变化，而对英语来说，这些都至关重要。
9.综合性错误：综合性错误是指单词的大小写和标点符号的错误等，以及形容词和副词的混淆、连词的误用等等。
九年级英语专项训练————书面表达一．现在全世界都在倡导“低碳生活”(low-carbon life)，即：降低二氧化碳的排放，采取低能量、低消耗、低开支的生活方式。
低碳生活对我们大家都有好处，请你写一篇短文向一家英文报社投稿。
内容包括：你的具体做法、你的感受以及建议。
提示词语：be good for, everyone, ride a bike, think, make a difference, environment, suggest, reuse★范文Low-carbon life is good for everyone. To help with the environment, I always walk or ride a bike to school instead of taking a car. Besides, I will try to use things that can be recycled and I never forget to turn off the lights when I leave the classroom. I think it’s my duty to live a low-carbon life. And even the simplest activities can make a real difference to the environment. So I suggest we should reuse books as long as possible. And we’d better not spend much money on expensive clothes. If everyone does something for the environment, I believe the earth will be a better place.二．毕业感想：初中生活马上就要结束了,三年的初中生活一定给你留下了很多挥之不去的回忆。
最新中考英语书面表达培优卷（word）一、中考英语书面表达（含答案详细解析）1．书面表达我的英语学习初中即将毕业，你在英语学习方面积累了较多的经验与方法，请你向你的表弟介绍你的做法，根据下面表格中的内容，按要求用英语写一篇短文，要求：1．语句通顺，意思连贯，语法正确，书写规范；2．必须包含表格中所有内容，并作适当发挥3．行文中不得出现真实人名、校名或地名；4．词数80－100。
_______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________【答案】My English StudyHow time flies! My three-year middle school life will be over soon. Looking back, I have many memories of my English study.First, listen more. Listening to the radio is a good way to learn English. We can relax ourselves by listening to English songs. Second, say more. Use spoken English when communicating with classmates. Speaking English can enhance the ability and confidence to learn English well. Third, read more English books. Reading can broaden our horizon and help us understand English culture. In addition, learn some grammar rules to better understand and use English. Finally, we can write about our daily life.In a word, only when we develop interest in studying English can we learn it well.【解析】【详解】这篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短语，为文章增色不少，如look back，listen to the radio，a good way to learn English，relax ourselves，communicate with，help sb. do，do more reading，in addition，in a word等。
2020-2021年中考英语书面表达培优卷（word）一、中考英语书面表达（含答案详细解析）1．书面表达我的英语学习初中即将毕业，你在英语学习方面积累了较多的经验与方法，请你向你的表弟介绍你的做法，根据下面表格中的内容，按要求用英语写一篇短文，要求：1．语句通顺，意思连贯，语法正确，书写规范；2．必须包含表格中所有内容，并作适当发挥3．行文中不得出现真实人名、校名或地名；4．词数80－100。
_______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________【答案】My English StudyHow time flies! My three-year middle school life will be over soon. Looking back, I have many memories of my English study.First, listen more. Listening to the radio is a good way to learn English. We can relax ourselves by listening to English songs. Second, say more. Use spoken English when communicating with classmates. Speaking English can enhance the ability and confidence to learn English well. Third, read more English books. Reading can broaden our horizon and help us understand English culture. In addition, learn some grammar rules to better understand and use English. Finally, we can write about our daily life.In a word, only when we develop interest in studying English can we learn it well.【解析】【详解】这篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短语，为文章增色不少，如look back，listen to the radio，a good way to learn English，relax ourselves，communicate with，help sb. do，do more reading，in addition，in a word等。
初三英语提高题专题复习书面表达英语作文汇编练习题附解析一、中考英语书面表达汇编1．（·广东中考模拟）马上要初中毕业了，大家都是依依不舍的。
班主任决定在下周举办一场“My Life At School” 主题班会 , 邀请全班同学参加。
请你根据以下提示，写一篇发言稿。
My Life At SchoolHow time flies! It's unbelievable that I'm going to graduate from my beloved school.【答案】My Life At SchoolHow time flies! It’s unbelievable that I’m going to graduate from my beloved school. There are many things to remember.In the junior school, I got along well with my classmates. The teachers are very friendly and they are ready to help me. The most unforgettable thing is that I got a chance of becoming an exchange students and spent two months in Australia. I learned a lot from the experience. I also remember I served as volunteer to help others. Certainly, there were also unhappy things. My good friend Li Hua went to another school. I was very sad. Luckily, we kept in touch with each other through emails. Besides, I was not good at Chinese writing.I hope I can go to a dream school and make more new friends. I also wish I can do better in all subjects when I am in high school and can go to a good college.【解析】【详解】这篇作文要求我们以My Life At School为题，写一篇发言稿。
中考英语总复习书面表达培优训练(附解析)一、中考英语书面表达汇编1．（·福建中考模拟）书面表达91. 年3月9日，福建省教育厅在其网站发布《关于推迟中小学早上上学改革的相关举措征求意见》，向公众征求意见和建议。
你所在的学校就此进行了网上问卷调查，其中有92%的同学表示赞成，请根据下图提示，写一篇80字左右的短文，阐述你赞成的理由。
参考词汇：delay v.延迟要求：1. 必须包含所有提示信息，开头已给次，不计入总词数；2. 意思清楚，表达通顺，行文连贯，书写规范 3. 请勿在文中出现真实的信息。
Delay starting time for schoolOur school had a survey about delaying school starting time online. I agreed that students should go to school a little late. Here aer my reasons.【答案】Our school had a survey about delaying school starting time online. I agreed that students should go to school a little late. Here are my reasons.First of all, delaying starting time at school makes sure that we can have enough sleep for a day. A good sleep will make us more active in class so that we study more efficiently. Secondly, it also offers us more time to have breakfast. Breakfast provides energy for the whole morning. No breakfast will do harm to our health and our study. What’s more, we don’t have to go to school in such a hurry, and we can also do some exercise to keep fit.All in all, delaying school starting time does good to students, We are looking forward to it.【解析】这是一篇图表，要求阐述自己赞成推迟中小学早上上学的理由。
深圳2020-2024年中考英语真题专题07 书面表达-教师1．（2024·广东深圳·中考真题）假如你是李华，你的作品在“the Beauty of Nature”主题摄影展上获得了一等奖。
你的英语老师邀请你在“英语一分钟演讲”上给同学们做分享。
要点如下：1. 拍摄的时间，地点，内容；2. 选择这张照片的原因；3. 参赛感受。
Dear____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________ That’s all! Thank You!【答案】例文：Dear classmates,My name is Li Hua, who is interested in photography. Here I would like to share my picture with you.The picture was taken by me in Shenzhen on a sunny morning in April, which shows a beautiful park with colorful flowers and green grass. If you are careful enough, you will also find a few birds jumping in the grass in the picture. How cute they are!It is such a nice picture that I chose it for the photographic contest. Actually, it also shows us the harmony between the animals and nature. Taking part in this competition makes me realize the beauty of nature and let us protect our Earth together!That’s all! Thank you!【详解】[总体分析]①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为演讲稿；①时态：以“一般过去时”和“一般现在时”为主；①提示：写作要点已给出，注意不要遗漏信息，可适当补充细节。
【书面表达】一．中考命题作文的基本要求1.学生要有扎实的英语基本功底，对教材内容熟悉，英语基础知识牢固，对英语的书写、标点符号、词法、语法、句法等都要表达正确。
2.无论是写作内容还是体裁都要按照命题要求。
采用正确的行文格式，叙述层次要分明，结构要严谨，句式排练要整齐，段落过渡要自然，富有调理性。
说理性文体，要讲清道理，层层递进，做到以理服人。
3.文章内容前后照应，词语运用准确到位，语言流畅，言简意赅，内容充实，叙事完整，主题突出。
二．命题作文的写作技巧1.要认真审题，弄清所写的内容，确定人称、时态，同时关注题材、体裁、格式。
写作文最重要的是先审清题目，确立要表现的中心。
同时要注意时态是否正确：1）故事性文章一般用过去时，其中表达感受时可用现在时。
2）说明性或议论性文章一般用现在时，举例时可用过去时。
3）根据题目要求也会出现时态的交错使用，比如过去和现在的对比。
4）如果句中出现时间状语，时态要遵循时间状语，比如句中有in+时间段时，用将来时态。
4）注意句中人称是否一致。
例如：On my way home, I met a friend of mine. 5)特别要注意文章的格式是否正确，不同的文体其格式和写作方法是不一致的。
2.找全信息点，紧扣主题，突出重点。
一定要把作文题目反复读3遍，找出所有的信息点（包括隐含的），并且在稿纸上列出要点，并把要点按照从主到次的顺序逐一排练，动笔时依次写，这样可以做到重点突出，也可以根据题目的要求，适当增加合理内容，但是注意不能跑题或者喧宾夺主。
3.成文时表述正确，文字流畅。
绝不要按照汉语提示一一对应翻译出，而要使用所学表达方法把语意表达出来，即用所学知识将题目的要求表达出来。
为了使得文章完整流畅，动笔时首先要考虑句子结构（如主谓语、主系表等等），同时注意短语的正确使用和单词的拼写，尽量使用课本上学过的词、短语、句式，力求用你十拿九稳的语言形式来写，切切不要为了卖弄水平高而使用你不大懂的语言形式来写。
写作时应该多用简单句，少用无把握的复合句。
若遇到表达障碍，可以换用一种说法，将一句变成三句，只求达意。
4.写句子时要连贯，层次分明，切不能没有条理。
句子之间要连贯通达，特别要注意上下句的逻辑关系，适当使用递进、让步、转折、因果等关联词语，使文章层次分明，过渡自然，条理明晰。
写作文不能“脚踩西瓜皮，滑到哪里是哪里。
”一般而言，作文要分段写，至少要有头、有身、有尾。
作文一般要分这样五个层次：1）开始句2）向主体过度句 3）主体叙述 4）向结尾过度 5）结尾。
第一层开始句起着点题的作用，80字的作文一定要开门见山。
也就是第一句就能让人感觉到你将要写什么。
但是往往是概括性地笼统地指出。
所以往往是一句话就解决问题。
第二层往往是在第一层的基础上具体指出某人或某事。
第三层就这个某人或某事进行详细的叙述或议论或描写。
但一般以3至4句为宜。
因为中考作文的字数是60至80字之间，字数不足和过于超过都要扣分。
所以应该及时向结尾过渡，完成第四层，多半以谈感觉为主。
在主体叙述和结尾之间起着承上启下的作用。
但也应该一句话解决问题。
过渡的梯子搭好了，也就能够圆滑地圆满地结尾了。
结尾的一句话往往是感慨、感想、感叹之类的句子。
这样6至8句的作文，每句平均10字左右（每个句子的字数根据含义的需要调整），最后写好的作文就应该是在60至80字之间了。
5.最后检查修改，之后抄写到答题卷上。
抄写到答题卷上前，要检查所写内容是否涵盖了题目所要求的全部信息点，时态、人称是否一致，句子结构是否清晰，短语使用、单词拼写是否准确，段落结构是否合理，以及大小写、标点符号是否正确，句子是否有语病，行文是否连贯、条理明晰等等。
三、常用连接词。
1.表示时间顺序的过渡词：First of all, Firstly/First, To begin with/To start with, Secondly/Second…/And then, Finally, In the end, At last.2.表示转折对比关系的过渡词：However, But… ,Although+从句，On the one hand…,on the other hand…, Some….,while others…, even if/even though, in spite of., As for…3.表示因果关系的过渡词：Because…, since, so, as a result, therefore, then, thus, otherwise, for this reason…, That is the reason why… .4.表示举例说明的过渡词：For example+句子；For instance+句子; such as+n./doing5. .表示解释说明关系的过渡词：In fact, Actually, In this case , In other words.6. .表示递进关系的过渡词：Besides, also, and, then, moreover, again, What’s more..7.表示自己观点的过渡词：In my opinion, I think , I believe, I suppose.8. .表示目的关系的过渡词：for this reason, for this purpose, so that, in order that, so as to, in order to, to…9. 表示强调关系的过渡词：In fact, indeed, necessarily, certainly, truly, Above all, most important.10. .表示总结关系的过渡词：In all, In short, In total, Finally, At last, In the end, In a word, In a sentence, In conclusion, To sum up, It’s obvious that…, There is no doubt that…, Everyone knows that…., From the …point of view….(According to …point of view….).专题一提示性作文-----家庭、朋友和周围的人相关句型：1. He is my….2.He’sveryfunny/calm/quiet/outgoing/confident/generous/hard-working/kind-heart ed/warm-hearted…3. He’s of medium height( build).4. He is short(tall) with a big(small) nose /He is short(tall) with big(small) eyes.5. He has short(long) /curly(straight )/black(blonde) hair6.He is helpful. He gets on( along) well with…7.He used to be…,but now he is…8.His life has changed a lot in the last(past) few years/Great changes have taken place in his life in recent years(over these years/for years)9. He wants to be….when he grows up.10. He is going to be … in the future.11.He likes(enjoys/feels like) playing the basketball./His hobby(interest) is…12.He is very strict with sb in sth.13. He is kind/nice/friendly/good to sb.14. He is interested in…/He shows great interest in…15. My field of work is...I guess that's why I'm always interested in...我的工作范畴是有关。
我猜这也是为何我会一直对。
保持有高度兴趣的原因。
16.I enjoy (a certain hobby) whenever I have some free time...当我有所空闲时比较喜欢做些（某个兴趣和爱好）。
17.My favorite foods/books/movies/activities to do during free time are...我最喜欢的食物/书籍/影片/最热衷的业余活动是。
18.A long-time dream of mine has always been...一直以来我的一个长远理想是。
19.He has a stable personality and a high sense of responsibility.他个性稳重、具高度责任感。
20. He is energetic, fashionable , and Positive with bright mind他.精力旺盛、思想新潮头脑积极、灵活。
21.描述人物外貌和性格特征的常用词语:good - looking （长得好看的）funny - looking （长相滑稽的）ugly - looking （长得难看的）ordinary looking （长相一般的）white - haired （白头发的warm - hearted （热心肠的）kind - hearted（好心的）absent - minded （心不在焉的）bad - tempered （脾气不好的）near - sighted （近视眼的）far - sighted （远视的）tall （个高的）short （个矮的）pretty （漂亮的）naughty （淘气的）lovely （可爱的）easy - going （温和宽容的smart （精明的）wise （明智的）bright （聪明的）diligent （勤奋的）lazy （懒惰的）clever （聪明的）healthy （健康的）humorous （幽默的）funny （滑稽的）silent （沉默的）attractive （有吸引力的）talkative （多话的）22.描述人物心情的常用词语：sad （难过的）happy （高兴的）excited （兴奋的）pleased （高兴的）satisfied （满意的）angry （生气的）worried （担心的）disappointed （失望的）terrified （恐惧的）friendly （友好的）anxious （焦虑的）curious （好奇的）范文：My grandfather(我的爷爷)My grandfather is in his seventies now. He is a kind and warm-hearted old man. He used to live with my family. At that time he always spent more than one hour examining my homework every day. When I was ill, he took good care of me. He showed great concern. Grandfather is very warm-hearted to his neighbors and is always ready to help them. One day, a girl who is one of his neighbors injured her leg carelessly. My grandfather took her to the hospital at once and paid the fees with his own savings. Now my grandfather is living in another city with my aunt. My parents and I all miss him very much. And I hope that I can go to visit him soon.作文练习一 :亲爱的同学，你即将初中毕业了，在这三年的学习生活中，你一定结交了许多好朋友。
