高考英语第二轮专题强化练(二) 短文改错
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专题模拟训练(短文改错)短文改错(一)A(2022·江西省南昌市高三二模)When it comes to music, here is what I think :Music is one of the most important part in my life.The beautiful classical music not only helps us deal with stress, but brought me pleasure.Although some songs contain rock-and-roll beats, but they still can make me feel calm and comfort.I believe music is able to passing on all kinds of emotions.While prepared for the coming day, I love listening to music as my regular morning routine.Also, I am planning to learn to play piano.My life with songs and harmonies would be complete empty.【答案】When it comes to music, here is what I think :Music is one of the most important part parts in my life.The beautiful classical music not only helps us medeal with stress, but brought brings me pleasure.Although some songs contain rock-and-roll beats, but they still can make me feel calm and comfort comfortable .I believe music is able to passing passon all kinds of emotions.While prepared preparingfor the coming day, I love listening to music as my regular morning routine.Also, I am planning to learn to play ∧thepiano.My life with without songs and harmonies would be complete completelyempty. 【解析】 这是一篇说明文。
【走向高考】2017届高三英语二轮专题复习强化提升习题狂练:新短文改错题型1 高考体验题组(一)(全国Ⅰ)I hardly remember my grandmother. She used to holding me on her knees and sing old songs. I was only four when she passes away. She is just a distant memory for me now.I remember my grandfather very much. He was tall, with broad shoulder and a beard that turned from black toward gray over the years. He had a deep voice, which set himself apart from others in our small town, he was strong and powerful. In a fact, he even scared my classmates away during they came over to play or do homework with me. However, he was the gentlest man I have never known.答案:I hardly remember my grandmother. She used to holdingholdme on her knees andsing old songs. I was only four when she passespassedaway. She is just a distant memory for me now.I remember my grandfather very muchwell/clearly . He was tall, with broad shouldershouldersand a beard that turned from black towardto/intogray over the years. He had a deepvoice, which set himselfhim apart from others in our small town, ∧andhe was strongand powerful. In a\fact, he even scared my classmates away duringwhenthey came over to play or do homework with me. However, he was the gentlest man I have nevereverknown.(二)(全国Ⅱ)The book I'm reading of talks about afternoon tea in Britain. It is said to have started in the early 1800's. Have tea in the late afternoon provides a bridge between lunch and dinner, that might not be served until 8 o'clock at night. This custom soon becomes another meal of day. Interesting, it had a connection by the British porcelain(瓷器) industry. Tea in China was traditionally drank from cups without handles. When tea got popular in Britain, there was a crying need for good cup with handles to suit British habits. This made for the grow in the porcelain industry.答案:The book I'm reading of\talks about afternoon tea in Britain. It is said to havestarted in the early 1800's. HaveHavingtea in the late afternoon provides a bridgebetween lunch and dinner, thatwhichmight not be served until 8 o'clock at night. Thiscustom soon becomesbecame another meal of ∧theday. InterestingInterestingly,it had a connectionby with the British porcelain(瓷器) industry. Tea in China was traditionally drankdrunkfromcups without handles. When tea got popular in Britain, there was a crying need forgood cupcups with handles to suit British habits. This made for the growgrowthin theporcelain industry.(三)(浙江)Dear Diary,Here I am in the middle of a city, 350 miles far away from our farmhouse. Doyou want to know why we move last week? Dad lost his job, and as Mom explained ,“He was lucky to find other one.” His new job meant I had to say goodbye to my classmate, my school or just everything else I love in the world. To make matters bad, now I have to share a room with my younger sister, Maggie. Tomorrow is first day of school. I am awfully tiring, but I know I'll never fall sleep.Good night and remember you, dear diary, is my only souvenir from my past life and my only friend.Yours ,Rosemary答案:Dear Diary ,Here I am in the middle of a city, 350 miles far \ away from our farmhouse. Do you want to know why we move movedlast week? Dad lost his job, and as Momexplained ,“He was lucky to find other anotherone.” His new job meant I had to saygoodbye to my classmate classmates , my school or andjust everything else I love in the world.To make matters bad worse, now I have to share a room with my younger sister, Maggie.Tomorrow is ∧the/my first day of school. I am awfully tiring tired, but I know I'll never fallsleep asleep.Good night and remember you, dear diary, is aremy only souvenir from my pastlife and my only friend.Yours ,Rosemary(四)(辽宁)Mr. Johnson is a hardworking teacher. Every day, he spends too much time with his work. With little sleep and hardly any break, so he works from morning till night. Hard work have made him very ill. “He has ruined his healthy. We are worried about him.”That is which other teachers say. Yesterday afternoon, I paid visit to Mr. Johnson. I was eager to see him, but outside her room I stopped. I had to calm myself down. Quietly I step into the room. I saw him lying in bed, looking at some of the picture we had taken together. I understood that he missed us just as many as we missed him.答案:Mr. Johnson is a hardworking teacher. Every day, he spends too much timewithonhis work. With little sleep and hardly any break, so\he works from morning tillnight. Hard work havehas made him very ill. “He has ruined his healthyhealth. We areworried about him.”That is whichwhatother teachers say. Yesterday afternoon, I paid∧a visit to Mr. Johnson. I was eager to see him, but outside herhisroom I stopped. Ihad to calm myself down. Quietly I stepsteppedinto the room. I saw him lying in bed,looking at some of the picturepictureswe had taken together. I understood that he missedus just as manymuchas we missed him.(五)(陕西)My grandfather and I enjoy fishing.One Sunday morning we go fishing at a lake. We took ours fishing poles and headed for the lake. As soon as we arrived, so we dropped the lines into the water. Before waiting for about half an hour, I was beginning to get impatiently. I wanted to give up, and my grandfather told me to wait a little longer. Finally, there were a sudden pull at the pole and fish was caught. Within the next few minute, my grandfather also caught a fish.Felt hungry, we built a fire by the lake and barbecued the fish. It was delicious.答案:My grandfather and I enjoy fishing.One Sunday morning we gowent fishing at a lake. We took oursourfishing poles andheaded for the lake. As soon as we arrived, so\we dropped the lines into the water.Before After waiting for about half an hour, I was beginning to get impatientlyimpatient. I wantedto give up, andbut my grandfather told me to wait a little longer. Finally, there werewasa sudden pull at the pole and ∧a fish was caught. Within the next few minuteminutes,mygrandfather also caught a fish.FeltFeelinghungry, we built a fire by the lake and barbecued the fish. It was delicious.(六)(四川)Today we had a chemistry test. I found the test difficulty, but I tried hardly to do it. Suddenly Mary, my best friend, asking me to let her to copy my answers. After think for some time, I let her copy my answers. But after the test, all of us were called to the teacher's office. The teacher was angry because we had same answers in the tests. We were warned not to cheat again so she would need to see ourparents. I was very upset. I didn't cheat. I was just helping a friend. Why does she punish me?答案: Today we had a chemistry test. I found the test difficulty difficult , but I tried hardly hardtodo it. Suddenly Mary, my best friend, asking askedme to let her to \ copy m y answers.After think thinking for some time, I let her copy my answers. But after the test, all bothof uswere called to the teacher's office. The teacher was angry because we had ∧thesameanswers in the tests test . We were warned not to cheat again so orshe would need to seeour parents. I was very upset. I didn't cheat. I was just helping a friend. Why does didshe punish me ?题型2 高考模拟题组(七)(宁波市二模)Uncle Marion was one of my mother's younger brother. He has been died for a year. When I was a teenager, he taught us how to hunt in the New Jersey woods used the hours before dawn. We usually left home at three o'clock in the morning, stayed in local restaurant for breakfast, and then travel on to one of his hunting destinations. Just after dawn, he would find the right spot in the woods. He would show me how not to make a sound and a movement. Though I never hunted an animal successfully, but I learned to be brave and patiently through the experience.答案:Uncle Marion was one of my mother's younger brother brothers . He has been died deadfora year. When I was a teenager, he taught us me how to hunt in the New Jersey woods used usingthe hours before dawn. We usually left home at three o'clock i n the morning, stayed in ∧a local restaurant for breakfast, and then travel travelledon to one of his huntingdestinations. Just after beforedawn, he would find the right spot in the woods. He wouldshow me how not to make a sound and ora movement. Though I never hunted ananimal successfully, but \ I learned to be brave and patiently patientthrough theexperience.(八)(许昌平顶山新乡三市三调)My dream is to become a school teacher in the future. In fact, I had the dream of becoming a teacher since my childhood. In my opinion, without teachers, no society could make progresses. There is no doubt whether teachers play an important role in children growth. Not only do teachers pass on knowledge for children, but they also teach children how to behave themselves. Comparing with other jobs, teaching is hard and the pay is lower. And to me, what great fun it is to be with children! They make me to feel young foreve r. Because I'll study harder and try my best to realize my dream.答案:My dream is to become a school teacher in the future. In fact, I ∧havehad thedream of becoming a teacher since my childhood. In my opinion, without teachers, no society could make progresses progress . There is no doubt whether thatteachers play animportant role in childrenchildren's growth. Not only do teachers pass on knowledge fortochildren, but they also teach children how to behave themselves. ComparingComparedwithother jobs, teaching is hardharder and the pay is lower. AndButto me, what great fun it is tobe with children! They make me to\feel young forever. BecauseSoI'll study harder and try my best to realize my dream.(九)(昭通市统检)I'm sorry to tell you that I won't be able to visit Beijing with you in next weekend, just because my elder sister would come to visit us while my parents are very busy. They take it for granted what I should pick him up . You see, we haven't seen each other for ages. And she is eager to seeing what has great changed in our city.I want to express my apologize again for making you waiting for me. What is more, I hope that I can get another chances to go to Beijing with you when it is convenient to you. Are you free two weeks late? If you are available that time, please inform me.Thank a lot!答案:I'm sorry to tell you that I won't be able to visit Beijing with you in\next weekend, just because my elder sister wouldwillcome to visit us while my parents arevery busy. They take it for granted whatthat I should pick himherup . You see, we haven'tseen each other for ages. And she is eager to seeingsee what has greatgreatlychanged inour city.I want to express my apologizeapologyagain for making you waiting for me. What ismore, I hope that I can get another chanceschanceto go to Beijing with you when it isconvenient to you. Are you free two weeks latelater?If you are available that time, please inform me.ThankThanksa lot!(十)(绍兴市二模)I'm glad to tell you that I have made great progress in my English study since I became the senior high school student.When I started senior English, I found much more difficult than that we learned in junior school and I almost lost my heart. Later, I realized the important of English, so I got up early every morning, recite English word, listened to English tapes and did a lot of exercise. I also asked my teachers and classmates for better ways to learning English.Now, I'm improving my English greatly. But I'm getting more and more interested with learning it.Thank you so much for your great help in your class.答案:I'm glad to tell you that I have made great progress in my English study since I became theasenior high school student.When I started senior English, I found ∧it much more difficult than thatwhatwelearned in junior school and I almost lost my\heart. Later, I realized the importantimportanceof English, so I got up early every morning, reciterecitedEnglish word, listened to Englishtapes and did a lot of exerciseexercises. I also asked my teachers and classmates for betterways tooflearning English.Now, I'm improving my English greatly. ButAndI'm getting more and moreinterested withinlearning it.Thank you so much for your great help in your class.(十一)(东北三省三校第二次联考)Yesterday, Li Mei goes to a store to return a shirt without carrying the receipt(收据).When she got there,she refused. The salesman said that he wouldn't take it back if she showed him the receipt. Thinking it was no way out,Li Mei put the shirt back in her bag and left. Suddenly two shop guard stopped her and began to search for her. They found the shirt in the bag and looked at it careful. Many eyes were staring at her, what made Li Mei very embarrassing. Luckily, a salesman came up in time and she was allowed to go.答案:Yesterday, Li Mei goeswentto a store to return a shirt without carrying thereceipt(收据).When she got there,she ∧wasrefused. The salesman said that hewouldn't take it back ifunless she showed him the receipt. Thinking ittherewas no wayout ,Li Mei put the shirt back in her bag and left. Suddenly two shop guard guards stopped her and began to search for \ her. They found the shirt in the bag and looked at it careful carefully . Many eyes were staring at her, what whichmade Li Mei veryembarrassing embarrassed . Luckily, a thesalesman came up in time and she was allowed to go. (十二)(甘肃省部分学校第二次联考)I'm a senior student from China, aging seventeen. While surfing the Internet, I have found that your organization will hold a summer camp in Singapore. With greatly interest, I'd like to apply for them. I'm an outgoing girl who like communicating with others. I could speak English well. My written English is excellent, either. I wish to join in the activities. For one thing, I'm willing to introduce China to other students from all over world; for another, I expect to learn from more about other countries. In addition, I'd like to make friend. The chance is so precious as I'm really looking forward to your approval.答案:I'm a senior student from China, aging agedseventeen. While surfing the Internet, Ihave found that your organization will hold a summer camp in Singapore. With greatly great interest, I'd like to apply for them it . I'm an outgoing girl who like likes communicating with others. I could canspeak English well. My written English isexcellent, either too. I wish to join in the activities. For one thing, I'm willing tointroduce China to other students from all over ∧theworld; for another, I expect tolearn from\more about other countries. In addition, I'd like to make friendfriends. Thechance is so precious asthatI'm really looking forward to your approval.(十三)(琼海市质监)When I first learned to write in English, I run into many difficulties. The main problem was in that I always thought in Chinese and tried to translate anything into English. My teacher advised me to keep my diary. I followed her advice so put down 100 words or so each day. Soon I began to enjoy talk to myself on paper as I was learning to express me in simple English. One day I wrote a little story and showed to my teacher. She liked it very much and reading it to the class. All said the story was a good one. Their word were a great encouragement to me.答案:When I first learned to write in English, I runraninto many difficulties. The mainproblem was in\that I always thought in Chinese and tried to translate anythingeverythinginto English. My teacher advised me to keep mya diary. I followed her advice soandput down 100 words or so each day. Soon I began to enjoy talktalkingto myself onpaper as I was learning to express memyselfin simple English. One day I wrote a littlestory and showed ∧it to my teacher. She liked it very much and readingreadit to theclass. All said the story was a good one. Their wordwordswere a great encouragement to me.(十四)(石家庄市二模)Li Yue and Zhang Hua went to nursing home and did some voluntary work on May Day. At their arrival, they were warm welcomed. They presented the elderly people with flowers and fruits. Then, they started working at once, cleaning the windows and swept the floor. Everything done, they sit in the yard chatting with the elderly. When it was time for the volunteer to leave, the elderly thanked them for their kindness. Li Yue and Zhang Hua were very happy because of what they did bring joy to others. It also enriched our own experience. They made a promise which they would come again to see the elder ly whenever they were free.答案:Li Yue and Zhang Hua went to ∧anursing home and did some voluntary workon May Day. AtOn their arrival, they were warmwarmlywelcomed. They presented theelderly people with flowers and fruits. Then, they started working at once, cleaningthe windows and sweptsweeping the floor. Everything done, they sitsatin the yard chattingwith the elderly. When it was time for the volunteervolunteersto leave, the elderly thanked them for their kindness. Li Yue and Zhang Hua were very happy because of\whatthey did bringbrought joy to others. It also enriched ourtheirown experience. They made apromise whichthatthey would come again to see the elderly whenever they were free.(十五)(河南省六市第二次联考)It's reported that many people died of traffic accidents each year. Road safety has aroused the widely attention of the public. Many rules have made to reduce the traffic crashes, especially for the ones involved in the pedestrians. In my opinion, weshould make road saf ety seriously in our daily life. While used the road, we must walk on the pavement and learn to protect us. Besides, car drivers should obey the traffic rules, that is both good for themselves and others.In the word, obeying the traffic rules are what all of us should pay attention to particularly. After all, life is not a small matter.答案:It's reported that many people dieddieof traffic accidents each year. Road safetyhas aroused the widelywide attention of the public. Many rules have ∧beenmade toreduce the traffic crashes, especially for\the ones involved in the pedestrians. Inmy opinion, we should maketake road safety seriously in our daily life. While usedusingtheroad, we must walk on the pavement and learn to protect usourselves. Besides, cardrivers should obey the traffic rules, thatwhichis both good for themselves and others.In thea word, obeying the traffic rules areiswhat all of us should pay attentionto particularly. After all, life is not a small matter.(十六)(齐齐哈尔市二模)Dear David,I have recently felt guilty, stay sleepless at night. You may wonder how. To tell you the truth, it is just because of the fact that I seldom cheat in exams and I just can't stop me. In many exams, I used cellphones to surf the net for answer. Besides, I sometimes referred them to my notebooks so copied something. As you know, cheating do much harm to our learning and selfconfidence. It's time that I take action to stop it. I would appreciate it you could offer me some advice.Looking forward to your reply!答案:Dear David,I have recently felt guilty, staystaying sleepless at night. You may wonder howwhy. To tellyou the truth, it is just because of the fact that I seldomoftencheat in exams and I justcan't stop memyself . In many exams, I used cellphones to surf the net for answeranswers.Besides, I sometimes referred them\to my notebooks soandcopied something. Asyou know, cheating dodoesmuch harm to our learning and selfconfidence. It's timethat I taketook action to stop it. I would appreciate it ∧ifyou could offer me someadvice.Looking forward to your reply!(十七)(宝鸡市三模)Jack has regarded as a young hero in his town for his heroic deed.The other day, Jack was going home by bike as usual while he heard a woman screaming for help.Then he was riding quickly towards the direction of the voice.At the corner, he saw a woman stopping by a man with a knife in her hand.Without hesitation, Jack made a immediate dive for the robber and controlled him by held him down against the ground.A few minutes later, three policeman came and took the robber away.Slight wounded as he was in the left hand, but since then he has become well known as a young hero all over the town.答案:Jack has ∧beenregarded as a young hero in his town for his heroic deed.Theother day, Jack was going home by bike as usual whilewhenhe heard a womanscreaming for help.Then he was riding quickly towardsinthe direction of thevoice.At the corner, he saw a woman stoppingstopped by a man with a knife in herhishand.Without hesitation, Jack made aanimmediate dive for the robber andcontrolled him by heldholdinghim down against the ground.A few minutes later, threepoliceman policemen came and took the robber away.SlightSlightlywounded as he was in the lefthand, but\since then he has become well known as a young hero all over the town.(十八)(长春市第四次调测)I still remember my middle school life in Changchun. I was then in school for student from Wenchuan. As we were all left home of an early age, we met lots of problems in our daily life. We had to do the washing, cleaning and shopping by us. However, we seldom felt lonely or helplessly. We enjoyed our happy life. At weekends, we will play basketball on the playground, swimming in the pool or go for a picnic in the park. We were living in a big family. We treat each other as brothers and sisters. It has been five years when we graduated, but those memories are as sweet as ever before.答案:I still remember my middle school life in Changchun. I was then in ∧aschoolfor studentstudents from Wenchuan. As we were\all left home ofatan early age, we metlots of problems in our daily life. We had to do the washing, cleaning and shoppingby usourselves . However, we seldom felt lonely or helplesslyhelpless. We enjoyed our happy life.At weekends, we willwould play basketball on the playground, swimmingswimin the pool orgo for a picnic in the park. We were living in a big family. We treattreatedeach other asbrothers and sisters. It has been five years whensincewe graduated, but those memories are as sweet as ever before.(十九)(甘肃省二诊)Many teachers worried about the effects of television on young people. According to studies, any children spend more time watching television than they spend in school. Because so much viewing, children may not be develop the habit of read and the ability to enjoy themselves. No one worries much about the radio program young people listen to, although radios can be very noise.T eachers also wonder about the effects of television commercials. On one year the average child will see 25,000 television commercials, all planned and written by grownups to make children to want things that they don't real need.答案:Many teachers ∧areworried about the effects of television on young people.According to studies, anymanychildren spend more time watching television than theyspend in school. Because ∧ofso much viewing, children may not be\develop thehabit of readreadingand the ability to enjoy themselves. No one worries much about theradio program programs young people listen to, although radios can be very noise noisy.T eachersalso wonder about the effects of television commercials. On Inone year the averagechild will see 25,000 television commercials, all planned and written by grown ups to make children to \ want things that they don't real reallyneed.(二十) (乌鲁木齐三诊)Rock climbing is increasingly becoming a more popular sport for people of all ages. In my mind ,it is real positive in our life. On one hand ,it is great exercise. It not only build up our strength and endurance and it also helps increase our balance and determination. On the other hands, it allows us to get outside enjoy nature. For those of them who spend our days outside working or studying, getting out and seeing plants and animals in nature can be quite refreshed. For conclusion, it is a good to go climbing at least once a month. Working up a good sweat, having fun with friends, and finishing the route, we will get a sense of satisfaction.答案:Rock climbing is increasingly becoming a more popular sport for people of all ages. In my mind ,it is real reallypositive in our life. On one hand ,it is great exercise. Itnot only build builds up our strength and endurance and butit also helps increase ourbalance and determination. O n the other hands hand , it allows us to get outside ∧toenjoy nature. For those of them us who spend our days outside insideworking orstudying, getting out and seeing plants and animals in nature can be quite refreshed refreshing . For Inconclusion, it is a \ good to go climbing at least once a month.Working up a good sweat, having fun with friends, and finishing the route, we will get a sense of satisfaction.(二十一)(昆明市适应性检测)We had a discussion on “overnight fame ” last week. Nowadays, many people were crazy about instant fame and wealthy. To be honest, it is not bad be famous or have a lot of money, but I don't agree to the view that people rise to fame overnight. We all know “easy come, easy go ”. Let's take Li An as the example. Only after his hard works did he become successful. Or we can list more similar cases if need. What I do believe is that the process in which you try our best. It is what we have experienced along the way to success that we treasure and enjoy mostly.答案:We had a discussion on “overnight fame ” last week. Nowadays, many people were are crazy about instant fame and wealthy wealth . To be honest, it is not bad ∧tobe famous or have a lot of money, but I don't agree to the view that people rise to fame overnight. We all know “easy come, easy go ”. Let's take Li An as the anexample.Only after his hard works work did he become successful. Or Andwe can list more similarcases if need needed . What I do believe is that \ the process in which you wetry our best. It iswhat we have experienced along the way to success that we treasure and enjoy mostly most.(二十二)(浙江省五校联考)A young man called Low Carbon Brother become a hit on the Internet in 2011.He suggests living a lowcarbon life, which means using less energy in our daily life so that we can help reducing carbon dioxide in the air. For example, she always picks up some waste paper on the street or uses the blank side to write something. While he is watching TV, he always turns up the screen brightness to the minimum and turns off the light. Therefore, he goes to work by bike instead of driving. Some people think what he is doing is just a show. No one can live such a simply life with so many modern invention around us. As far as I am concerned, I am strongly in support his idea and his behavior. Although what he is doing has no huge effect on global warming, but he at least can enjoy a healthy life.答案:A young man called LowCarbon Brother becomebecamea hit on the Internet in 2011. He suggests living a lowcarbon life, which means using less energy in our daily lifeso that we can help reducingreduce carbon dioxide in the air. For example, shehealwayspicks up some waste paper on the street oranduses the blank side to write something.While he is watching TV, he always turns updownthe screen brightness to theminimum and turns off the light. ThereforeBesides,he goes to work by bike instead of driving. Some people think what he is doing is just a show. No one can live such asimply simple life with so many modern inventioninventionsaround us. As far as I am concerned, Iam strongly in support ∧ofhis idea and his behavior. Although what he is doing has no huge effect on global warming, but\he at least can enjoy a healthy life.。
训练2 短文改错(Ⅱ)A(2021·全国卷Ⅰ)Nearly five years before,and with the help by our father,my sister and I planted some cherry tomatoes(圣女果)in our back garden.Since then—for all these year—we had been allowing tomatoes to self-seed where they please.As result,the plants are growing somewhere.The fruits are small in size,but juicy and taste.There are so much that we often share them with our neighbors.Although we allow tomato plants to grow in the same place year after year,but we have never had any disease or insect attack problems.We are growing wonderfully tomatoes at no cost!【答案】Nearly five years beforeago,and with the helpbyofourfather,my sister and I planted some cherry tomatoes(圣女果)in our back garden.Since then—for all these year years—wehadhavebeen allowing tomatoes to self-seed where theyplease.As ∧a result,the plants are growingsomewhereeverywhere.Thefruits are small in size,but juicy and tastetasty.There are somuchmanythat we often share them with our neighbors.Although we allow tomato plants to grow in the same place year afteryear,but或yetwe have never had any disease or insect attackproblems.We are growing wonderfullywonderfultomatoes at no cost!B(2021·南昌一模)A woman was taken to the hospital.While having an operation, she had a nearly death experience.Seeing God, she asked how this was it.God said,“No, you had another 40 years.〞On recovery the women decided to have a plastic surgery.She had someone change her hair color, thinking since she had so many time to live, she'd better make full use from it.Finally she got out of the hospital.While crossing the street, she killed by an ambulance speeded by.Arriving in the front of God, she demanded,“They said I had another 40 years!〞God replied, “But I didn't recognize you.〞【答案】A woman was taken to the hospital.While having anoperation, she had a nearlyneardeath experience.Seeing God,she askedhowif/whetherthis was it.God said, “No, youhadhaveanother 40 years.〞On recovery the womenwomandecided tohave a plastic surgery.She had someone change her haircolor, thinking since she had so manymuchtime to live, she'dbetter make full use fromofit.Finally she got outof thehospital.While crossing the street, she∧was killed by anambulancespeededspeedingby.Arriving in ﹨the front of God, shedemanded, “TheyYousaid I had another 40 years!〞Godreplied, “But I didn't recognize you.〞C(2021·福州质检)Everyone of us are thinking about the future.I have decided to become a middle school teacher.Does it sound surprisedI have had this dream when I was a child.I love children.I don't think to deal with them all years round is just wastingtime.On the contrary, to me it means happiness.Like we all can see, teachers are badly needed in our country, and not many of us want to become teachers.One of the main reasons of this is teachers work too hard but get too little.In spite of that, I'm determining to devote all my life into the cause of education.【答案】Everyone of us areisthinking about the future.I havedecided to become a middle school teacher.Does it sound surprisedsurprisingI ﹨have had this dream when I was a child. I lovechildren.I don't think to deal with them all yearsyearround isjust wasting time.On the contrary, to me itmeans happiness. LikeAswe all can see, teachers are badly needed in ourcountry, andbutnot many of us want to become teachers.One of themain reasonsofforthis is∧that teachers work too hard butget too little.In spite of that, I'm determiningdeterminedto devote all mylife intotothe cause of education.D(2021·全国乙卷)My uncle is the owner of a restaurant close to that Ilive.Though not very big, but the restaurant is popular in our area.It is always crowded with customers at meal times.Some people even had to wait outside.My uncle tells me that the key to his success is honest.Every day he makes sure that fresh vegetables or high quality oil are using for cooking.My uncle says that he never dreams becoming rich in the short period of time.Instead, he hopes that our business will grow steady.【答案】My uncle is the owner of a restaurant close tothat whereIlive.Though not very big, ﹨but the restaurant is popular in our area.It is always crowded with customers at mealtimes.Some people even hadhaveto wait outside.My uncle tellsme that the key to his success is honesthonesty.Every day hemakes sure that fresh vegetablesorandhigh quality oil areusing used for cooking.My uncle says that he never dreams∧ofbecoming rich in theashort period of time.Instead, he hopesthat ourhisbusiness will growsteadysteadily.E(2021·长沙一模)In order to encourage the students to take outdoor exercise, our school organized a mountain-climbing on April 10.Hundreds us took part in it.It was a nice day.At 8:00 a.m., we gathered at the feet of Daqing Mountain and set out for the top in high spirits.All a way we were chatting, singing and laughing, enjoyed the fresh air and the beautiful scenery.While some fell behind, others would come and offer help.About 2 hours later, we both reached the top.Bathed in the sunshine, we jumped or cheered with joy.The activity benefited to us a lot.Not only did it get us closely to nature and give us relaxation from heavy school work, but it also promoted the friendship among us. How a wonderful time!【答案】In order to encourage the students to take outdoor exercise, our school organized a mountain-climbing on April10.Hundreds ∧of us took part in it.It was a nice day.At 8:00 a.m., we gathered at the feet footof Daqing Mountain and set out for the top in high spirits.Alla the way we were chatting, singing and laughing,enjoyedenjoyingthe fresh air and the beautiful scenery.WhileWhensome fellbehind, others would come and offer help.About 2 hours later,we bothallreached the top.Bathed in the sunshine, wejumped orandcheered with joy.The activity benefited ﹨t o us a lot.Not only did it get us closelycloseto nature and give us relaxation from heavy schoolwork, but it also promoted the friendship among us.HowWhatawonderful time!F(2021·西安质检)People living in the country enjoy several advantages thatpeople lived in a city cannot enjoy.They stay close to the nature.They make friend with trees and stones, and cows and dogs.They breath fresh air.They listen the songs of birds.This contact with nature is beneficial to our health.There are many diseases that is common in the city, but are not to be find in the country.For example, near-sightedness is almost unknown to country people.People living in the country can easy get fresh vegetables, fresh fruit and fresh milk.And they get them at low prices than in the city.Country people are mostly honest.They say that they mean.They make and keep promises with seriousness.They live simply and directly with happiness.【答案】People living in the country enjoy several advantages thatpeople livedlivingin a city cannot enjoy.They stay close to ﹨thenature.They make friendfriendswith trees and stones, and cowsand dogs.Theybreathbreathefresh air.They listen∧to the songs ofbirds.This contact with nature is beneficial to ourhealth.There are many diseases thatisarecommon in the city,but are not to befindfoundin the country.For example, near-sightedness is almost unknown to country people.Peopleliving in the country can easyeasilyget fresh vegetables, freshfruit and fresh milk.And they get them atlowlowerprices thanin the city.Country people are mostly honest.They say that whatthey mean.They make and keep promises with seriousness.They live simply and directly with happiness.【导学号:90892094】。
2021年高考英语二轮复习:短文改错 练习题精选假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文:文中有10处语言错误。
每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写上该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
I'm sorry to hear that you lose the Chinese Talent Contest holding in your city last week. I quite understand how I feel now. After all, you practiced hard and prepared well after the contest. Though you didn't win any award, but you did a good job. Personally what matters most is the process, not the results. While preparing for the contest, you have learnt a lot about Chinese, what will benefit you great in the future. As the old saying goes, ''Failure is mother of success." If you go on learning Chinese, you will have best opportunities in the future.【答案】I'm sorry to hear that youlose lost the Chinese Talent Contest holding holdin your city last week. I quite understand how I you feel now. After all, you practiced hard and prepared well be after forethe contest. Though you didn't win any award, but you did a good job. Personally what matters most is the process, not theresults result . While preparing for the contest, you have learnt a lot about Chinese, w what hich will benefit you great greatlyin the future. As the old saying goes, ''Failure is the mother of success." If you go on learning Chinese, you will havebe best tter opportunities in the future.假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。
语鹅市安置阳光实验学校短文改错分层训练·知能双升高考回顾A.2015·陕西卷My soccer coach retired in last week. I wanted to do anything special for him at his retirement party. My mum makes the better biscuits in the world, so I decided to ask her for help. Mum taught me some basic step of baking. I insisted on doing most of the baking myself. I thought the biscuits were really well. My only mistake was that I dropped some on the floor after I was packing them up.At a party,my coach, with a biscuit in his mouth, asked surprisingly who made them and joked, “I might have to retire again next year just get some more of these biscuits.”My favorite picture at the party is of my coach and me enjoy the biscuits with happy laughter!答案:My soccer coach retired inlast week. I wanted to do anythingsomething special for him at hisretirement party. My mum makes the betterbestbiscuits in the world, so Idecidedecidedto ask her for help. Mum taught me some basic stepstepsof baking.I insisted on doing most of the baking myself. I thought the biscuitswere really wellgood. My only mistake was that I dropped some on the floorafterwhen/whileI was packing them up.At atheparty,my coach, with a biscuit in his mouth, askedsurprisingly who made them and joked, “I might have to retire again nextyear just ∧toget some more of these biscuits.”My favorite picture at the party is of my coach and me enjoyenjoyingthebiscuits with happy laughter!B.2015·四川卷Hi, Janice,It's been a month since I came to this new school and I really wantshare with you some of the problems I have been experiencing.As I tell you last time, I made three new friend here. We hang outtogether during lunch and after school. We've been spending a lot of timesing in karaoke bars. It's been three Saturdays now and it really costs me many. And I started to see this as a time -wasting activity! In fact,I don't like to go anymore, so I'm afraid I'll lose their friendship.How do you think I should do? If you are me, would you talk to him?Please help with me and give me some advice.Grace答案:Hi, Janice ,It's been a month since I came to this new school and I really want∧toshare with you some of the problems I have been experiencing. As I tell told you last time, I made three new friend friends here. We hang out together during lunch and after school. We've been spending a lot of time sing singingin karaoke bars. It's been three Saturdays now and it reallycosts me many much . And I started to see this as a time -wasting activity!In fact, I don't like to go anymore, so but I'm afraid I'll lose theirfriendship. How What do you think I should do? If you are wereme, would you talkto him them ?Please help wit hme and give me some advice.GraceC.2015·浙江卷My old classroom was interesting because three side of the classroomwere made from glass. I enjoyed sit close to the windows and looking atthe view. On the left -hand side of the class, I could easy see thefootball field. In the mornings, it was full of students exercising. Theview from the back of the classroom is also splendid. Close to the schoolthere was a beautiful park with many trees around them. Farther in thedistance, I could not enjoy the view of snowy mountains. On the right side of the class was the road. I was always interested to see the drivers in hurry in the morning. The position of the classroom with its view mademe felt like I was dreaming. If I was only a child when I studied in that classroom, I will never forget it.答案:My old classroom was interesting because three side sidesof the。
语鹅市安置阳光实验学校短文改错二轮精炼(2)【由四川省成都市高三英语摸底测试模拟试题(二)改编】短文改错。
After watch “English TV” last Sunday morning, I phoned to my classmate and told him to go to see a film in the afternoon. Before the film was over, we returned to school to do our lessons. While we are having a rest in the corridor, I saw Mr. Liu, my China teacher. He told me that we had made some progresses in English, but my Chinese lagged behind, especially my Chinese composition. He suggested I must read more and keeping a diary every day. In the evening my father told me that reading newspapers would do me well for improving composition writing. That was really good idea! What they said was quite right, and I should follow their advice.短文改错(共10小题;每小题1.5分,满分15分)After watch “English TV” last Sunday morning, I phoned to my classmate and toldwatchinghim to go to see a film in the afternoon. Before the film was over, we returned to schoolWhen/After to do our lessons. While we are having a rest in the corridor, I saw Mr. Liu, my Chinawere Chineseteacher. He told me that we had made some progresses in English, but my Chineseprogresslagged behind, especially my Chinese composition. He suggested I must read more andshould/去掉keeping a diary every day. In the evening my father told me that reading newspaperskeepwould do me well for improving composition writing. That was really good idea! Whatgood a或 athey said was quite right, and I should follow their advice.短文改错My Favorite SportMy favorite sport is football. I was a member of 1. _______ our school football team. We practise for three times 2. _______ every week and often watch football match on TV 3. _______together. Play football not only makes us grow 4. _______ tall and strong but also give us a sense of fair play and 5. _______ team spirit. We must keep in mind that we play 6. _______ for the team instead ourselves. Also, the sport 7. _______ teaches us the important of obedience (服从). Each 8. _______ player must obey captain, who is the leader of 9. _______ the team. And they must not break the rules too 10. ______ often if we want to win the game.答案及解析1. was 改为 am。
专题强化练(二)短文改错第一组A主题语境:人与自我——学校生活建议用时:7’实际用时:正答率:/10We are required to collect our smart phones and keep it in the teacher’s during the weekdays.In fact the most of us obey this regulation,but some still play various trick against it.I’m among those.Once,I hand in a waste phone.Mr.Li,our head teacher,seemed ignore all that.So I felt very luckily to have an extra phone with me.And good times don’t last long.“Can I use your phone as a while?I forgot to take mine by chance.”Mr.Li said,pick out my waste phone and dialing.You can see how embarrassing I was at the scene!【语篇解读】这是一篇故事类阅读。
文章讲述了我上交了一部废手机,私藏了一部好手机,结果还是被老师发现的尴尬的故事。
第一句:it→them考查人称代词。
指smart phones,所以用them作宾语。
第二句:删除the考查固定搭配。
most of us“我们大多数人”,这是一个固定搭配,所以删除the。
第二句:trick→tricks考查名词的数。
trick为可数名词,前面有various修饰,用复数名词,所以trick改为tricks。
第四句:hand→handed考查时态。
once和一般过去时态连用,所以hand改为handed。
第五句:seemed后加to考查固定搭配。
seem to do sth.“好像要做某事”,所以seemed后面加to。
第六句:luckily→lucky考查形容词。
此处作表语,用形容词,所以luckily改为lucky。
第七句:And→But/Yet考查连词。
句意:我为多带了一部手机感到幸运,但好景不长。
前后句意是转折关系,所以用But/Yet。
第八句:as→for考查固定搭配。
for a while“一会”,为固定搭配,所以as改为for。
第八句:pick→picking考查非谓语动词。
pick和句子主语Mr.Li之间是主动关系,用动词-ing形式作状语,所以pick改为picking。
第九句:embarrassing→embarrassed考查形容词。
embarrassed修饰人,而embarrassing修饰物。
这里修饰人,所以embarrassing改为embarrassed。
B主题语境:人与社会——人生感悟建议用时:7’实际用时:正答率:/10(2019广东广州一模)During my last summer holiday,I go to the countryside to enjoy myself.I saw mother bird stay in her nest in a big tree,watching some of her baby flying away.I thought she must be very proud of her children,that were able to find her own food now.But she might also feel a sense of loss since they wouldn’t need of her day-to-day care any long.For my parents,things are much easier.We have set up ourfamily blog to posting our photos and journals.Once I leave for college,we can convenient share our experiences but support each other.Their “nest” will never be empty.【语篇解读】作者通过观察小鸟长大后离开鸟妈妈,想到了自己的父母。
庆幸的是,因为网络,父母的“巢”从来不会空。
第一句:go→went考查动词的时态。
由时间状语last summer holiday可知应用一般过去时态,故把go改成went。
第二句:mother前加a考查不定冠词。
句意:我看见一只鸟妈妈待在一棵大树上的巢里,看着她的一些孩子飞走了。
结合句意可知在mother前加a表泛指。
第二句:baby→babies考查名词的数。
some of后跟可数名词复数,故把baby改成babies。
第三句:that→who考查定语从句关系代词。
句意:我想她一定为她的孩子们感到非常自豪,他们现在能够自己找食物了。
引导非限制性定语从句,此处children作先行词,文章运用拟人的手法,故把that改成who。
第三句:her→their考查形容词性物主代词。
由children可知用代词复数替代,故把her改成their。
第四句:删除need后的of考查及物动词。
句意:但她可能也感到失落,因为他们不再需要她每天的照顾了。
此处need“需要”是及物动词,后面直接跟宾语,故把need后面的of删除。
第四句:long→longer考查固定搭配。
not...any longer“不再”,故把long改成longer。
第六句:posting→post考查谓语动词。
句意:我们创建了家庭博客,在上面张贴我们的照片和日志。
此处是不定式作目的状语,故把posting改成post。
第七句:convenient→conveniently考查副词。
share“分享”是动词,由副词来修饰,故把convenient 改成conveniently。
第七句:but→and考查并列连词。
句意:一旦我考上大学,我们能很方便地分享经历,并能互相支持。
前后是一种并列的递进关系,故把but改成and。
C主题语境:人与社会——冬令营建议用时:7’实际用时:正答率:/10Dear Jack,A winter camp will be held in our school with exchange students to experience the culture of traditional Chinese holidays.It is golden chance for you to learn more about Chinese culture,so I’m invited you to participate.The camp will begin in our school on February 6,last five days.A series of lectures on traditional culture will be giving by famous experts who they are from all walks of life.Student of various cultures can have a face-to-face talk with each other on the topic of Chinese culture.However,you will have the opportunity to taste various and deliciously traditional Chinese dishes.Coming and experience the real Chinese culture yourself!Yours sincerely,Li Hua第一句:with→for考查介词。
介词for “为了”。
第二句:golden前加a考查冠词。
句意:这是你了解中国文化的绝好机会。
不定冠词a表示泛指,一次机会。
第二句:invited→inviting考查动词的时态。
由句意可知,“我”正要请你参加。
用现在进行时,I与invite是主动关系。
第三句:last→lasting考查非谓语动词。
句子的谓语是will begin,camp与last是主动关系,用分词lasting作伴随状语。
第四句:giving→given考查被动语态。
A series of lectures与give是被动关系,故用被动语态。
第四句:删除they famous experts是先行词,其后是定语从句,在定语从句中引导词who作主语,they是多余的。
第五句:Student→Students考查名词复数。
student是可数名词,由句意可知主语是复数形式。
第六句:However→Besides考查连词。
了解中国文化和品尝传统中式菜肴是并列的关系,不是转折关系,故改为Besides。
第六句:deliciously→delicious考查形容词。
形容词修饰名词,由句中的various可知,此处应用形容词。
第七句:Coming→Come考查祈使句。
祈使句用动词原形,由后面的experience可知,设空的地方也用动词原形。
D主题语境:人与自我——学校生活建议用时:7’实际用时:正答率:/10(2019江西南昌二模)In my school,we have our own talent show every year,that has been a tradition for 15 years.This year,our school was held one as scheduled.A great many students took active part in it.I decided to play the violin with a partner naming Julia,who played the piano along for me.We had practiced many time before the talent show started.Everyone watched the show excited.Julia and I did a good job.Others students sang and danced happily.The talent show helped us relax but enriched our school life.We all enjoyed them very much.【语篇解读】本文是一篇记叙文。