考官是如何巧妙改写雅思写作话题的

雅思写作的套路解析应对雅思写作大作文，一样讲套路。

多看一些范文，学习大作文的行文思路和写作结构，然后照着模板来练习，雅思写作提升很快哒！下面来看看雅思写作的套路解析这篇文章吧。

雅思写作必看“套路”!5.5到7全靠这几招我相信很多烤鸭都有过一样的经历。

很多考生在写文章的时候也经常用这样的语句彰显人类复读机的本质。

比如之前很多学生在写作中常出现的，令人头大而大家又意外地用着很顺手的“模版”：It is very importantfor the government to alleviate poverty (扶贫) as this isreally useful. This will bring many advantages to the country, so it is very necessary. In many cases, the benefits brought by this can be seen everywhere, and people will think that it is really good to live in such a good country.考官看完的心路历程：Wait, 我是不是刚才改了一个复读机的卷子?这段话一共60个词，但反反复复就强调了一个意思：这事儿超重要。

这位考生你莫不是给考官念了一段洗脑经?不用说，这段文字出现在雅思写作卷子上，是拿不到高分的。

那么我们怎么能摆脱“复读机”的本质，在雅思写作考试中拿个高分呢?方法一：换同义词这是最简单粗暴的方法，考官也喜欢花里胡哨的词汇，同义词越多，文章就能越漂亮。

这段文字中出现的表示“褒贬”的词汇是在雅思写作中十分常见的，建议我们每类至少记三个。

好[adj.] advantageous, beneficial, profitable, worthwhile, rewarding, expedient, conducive[n.] advantage(s), benefit(s), strength(s), merit(s), bright side(s), virtue(s)有助[v.] benefit, contribute to, aid to, be conducive to重要[adj.] important, necessary, significant, essential, vital, crucial, principal, noteworthy, imperative, substantial促进[v.] enhance, promote, facilitate, foster, optimize, stimulate, boost, cultivate, accelerate获得[v.] accomplish, achieve, complete, finish, fulfill支持[v.] favor, be for, approve of, side with, stand on the side of, consent to, vote for坏[adj.] disadvantageous, harmful, adverse, problematic, detrimental, prejudicial[n.] disadvantage(s), drawback(s), weakness(es), demerit(s), downside(s), shortcoming(s)阻碍/破坏[v.] damage, impair, spoil, endanger, undermine, hinder, hamper, obstruct, deteriorate, aggravate, jeopardize, eradicate 导致(多为贬)[v.] cause, result in, lead to, trigger, give rise to, bring about, contribute to, generate方法二：换词性假如我们词汇量不够大，或因备考时间太短没办法短期内背这么多单词，这种方法其实是比较事半功倍的一种技巧，能有效用上我们背过的仅有单词，只需要把词性一换，又摇身变成另一个词。

雅思小作文开头改写技巧一、改变句子结构，例如将主动句改为被动句。

使用同义词替换例如将“The chart shows the percentage of people who use different modes of transportation to go to work.”改写为“Different modes of transportation used to go to work are presented in the chart, with the percentage of people using each mode.”二、通过转变它的句式来改写，例如将长句改为短句。

1.替换表达方式例如将“In this report, we can see the number of students who passed the exam in each subject.”改写为“The table demonstrates the amount of students who passed the exam in each subject.”2.增加细节或解释性信息例如将“As can be seen from the table, the percentage of people who use public transportation to go to work is decreasing.”改写为“As can be seen from the table, the percentage of people who use public transportation to go to work is decreasing. This may be due to the factthat more and more people are choosing to drive to work, causing a decrease in the number of public transportation users.”3.采用反面论证例如将“As the graph shows, the use of pesticides on farms has increased significantly over the past few decades.”改写为“As the graph shows, the use of pesticides on farms has NOT increased significantly over the past few decades.”雅思小作文开头段的改写需要根据实际情况选择合适的方式，同时需要注意保持句子的准确性和流畅性。

灵活应对雅思写作考试大作文题目中的偏题怪题（优秀范文五篇）第一篇：灵活应对雅思写作考试大作文题目中的偏题怪题雅思考试时很多考生候遇到过这种情况，在考试前准备了很多大作文需要的素材和材料，但奇怪的是真正到了考场，碰到某些题目这些素材好像就没有用了，心情就变的紧张起来从而影响正常的发挥。

根据笔者这几年所积累的教学经验，雅思大作文绝大多数情况下出题还是比较常规和正常的，但也确实存在着某些偏题或者难题、怪题（大家不用紧张，雅思怪题和难题出现的频率不高）。

于是今天朗阁海外考试研究中心的雅思培训专家就给大家介绍一下如何应对雅思大作文偏题怪题。

Example 1 Advertising encourages people to buy in quantity rather than promoting itsquality.To what extent do you agree or disagree?广告鼓励人们购买大量的产品而不是促进提升产品的质量。

你同意还是不同意？其实这道题目是典型的广告类题目：考生拿到这个题目，首先要读三遍，理解题目本质的含义。

广告的本质之一其实就是帮助卖家(selling agencies)或者厂商(manufactures)提升产品知名度(increase the brand reputation),从而打开市场(explore the wider markets), 提升产品的销售额(boost the sales rates),怂恿或者引领消费者购买更多的产品(encouraging and leading the consumers to spend their salaries to purchase large quantities of products), 所以考生从正面来回答(agree)的话，就可以从以上这些角度来入手，写起来应该不难。

而且考生们还要知道厂商或者销售商是付钱给广告商的(advertisement agencies receive payment from manufacturers）, 如果人们买得多，对广告商本身也有好处。

【雅思作文高分经验】考官倾囊相授如何完美回应问题编者：当一只烤鸭从考试楼外的等候，到楼内的等候，再到考场教室的等候，再到听读的洗礼，再到小作文的折磨，终于，ta来到了这一天雅思考试的最后的一个关口-大作文，很多又马不停蹄地开始飙单词。

可是殊不知，一部分人在下笔之初就已经开始了快速掉分的进程。

对于如何审题，看看考官是怎么说的吧。

小编翻译。

In your academic essay, a considerable number of points are availableaccording to how well you answer the question in the title. Therefore, it’s veryimportant to make sure you understand the title fully before you begin. Don’tjust find a keyword in the title and start writing. Examine the question carefully first.在你的雅思大作文写作中，按照你回答题目中所提的问题的优劣程度，有不少得分点你是有机会拿到手的。

因此，确保动笔之前已充分理解题目非常重要。

不要在题目中找到个关键词就死怼它。

首先仔细审题You need to consider:你需要考虑：1. How many things are you being asked to do?你被要求做多少事情?Some essay titles may have two parts, so make sure you address bothquestions.有些题目的问题部分有两部分，所以你务必两个问题都要回答。

2. What are the question words in the title?问题中的疑问词是什么?Make sure you understand what the question words mean. Here are a few of thecommonest question words:确保你搞清楚了疑问词的意思。

雅思大作文分段思路总结一、雅思大作文分段思路如下：第一段：提出观点，引出话题。

根据提示性词语（比如I believe that...；I suggest that...），首先明确作者的观点，即认为什么是重要的、有价值的。

此处需要适当阐述观点，以便让读者了解作者的态度和看法。

第二段：阐述理由，展开论述。

这一段需要进一步阐述自己的观点，给出令人信服的理由来支撑观点。

分段展开，让论述更有条理。

第三段：比较异同，补充观点。

如果话题涉及两个事物，这一段可以比较它们的异同，并补充自己的观点。

分段展开，让论述更有条理。

第四段：总结观点，强调价值。

这一段可以总结前文所述的观点，并强调其价值或意义。

二、示例：2019年12月的题目作为例子：Nowadays people are living in a 'thrown-away' society where they use things for a short time and then throwaway. What cause this and what problem it may lead to?审题：利用1分钟弄清题目、类型。

包括：题目类型是什么?要求讨论的话题是什么?有几个问题?常见大作文题型有以下五个大类：To what extent do you agree or disagree?Discuss both views and give your opinion.Do you think the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?What are the reasons and is there any solution can be taken?To what extent do you agree or disagree? Do you think it is a positive trend or negative?那么上题就是第四种报告说明类型的题目，讨论的话题就是人们用完就丢弃这种现象，两个问题：原因和影响利用3-5分钟列提纲好多考生在真实考试中会省略这一步，觉得费时间、没必要。

英语考试作文考官雅思口语写作观点词汇语料：传统与现代再好的雅思范文，也只能告诉你如何写好一篇文章的骨架，而要做到有血有肉，言之有物，则要靠大量的话题观点及相关词汇的支撑，而simon同学也告诉反复在讲，提升写作最快的两点：一点是减少语法错误，另一点就是积累并运用大量的话题词汇。

本文分享的话题观点语料是：传统vs现代。

注意文末还附上数道相关雅思写作历史真题供练习。

合集分享：考官9分写作口语观点词汇语料库绝对干货Traditional vs Modern传统vs现代Losing traditional skillsBecause of industrialization and global trade, many traditions have disappearedGlobal advertising encourages everyone to buy the same productsMost products are now made in factoriesMachinery has replaced skilled human labourFactory work is boring and leaves people feeling unfulfilledGoods are produced very quickly and in large numbersProducts are cheaper, which means that more people can buy themExamplesClothes are mass produced in standard sizesPeople wear similar clothes, rather than traditional costumesJeans and T-shirt are now worn throughout the worldHistoric buildings took skilled craftsmen years to buildModern concrete, steel and glass buildings are built in only weeks or monthsThere are fewer people who can create hand-made goodsTraditional customsTraditional customs are still important during weddings and religious festivalsPeople wear traditional costumers and eat special foodsIt is important to maintain our different cultural identitiesWe should celebrate festivals, teach traditional skills and protect historic places相关雅思历史真题1.When a country develops its technology, the traditional skills and ways of life die out. It is pointless to try and keep them alive.To what extent you agree or disagree with the statement?2.he older generations tend to have very traditional ideas about how people should live, think and behave. However, some people believe that these ideas are not helpful in preparing younger generations for modern life.3.To what extent do you agree or disagree with this view?People should follow the customs and traditions when people start to live in a new country. To what extent do you agree or disagree?。

题目：Some people who have been in prison become good citizens later, and it is often argued that these are the best people to talk to teenagers about the dangers of committing a crime.To what extent do you agree or disagree?有些人进了号子之后放出来就变乖了，一些人觉得他们这伙人是最适合去给懵懂少年现身说法的。

多大程度上同意还是不同意？考官范文：1.开头段：完全同意题目的观点It is true that ex-prisoners can become normal, productive members of society. I completely agree with the idea that allowing such people to speak to teenagers about their experiences is the best way to discourage them from breaking the law.讲真有犯罪前科的前科的人是可以变成有益于社会的。

我完全同意让他们去给懵懂少年现身说法的主意，这是一种警示他们不要触犯法律的好办法。

2.主体段：(第一个理由)：犯人可以告诉青少年他们真实的犯罪经历。

年轻人会相信并被这些真实的故事所震慑，然后举例子In my opinion, teenagers are more likely to accept advice from someone who can speak from experience. Reformed offenders can tell young people about how they became involved in crime, the dangers of a criminal lifestyle, and what life in prison is really like. They can also dispel any ideas that teenagers may have about criminals leading glamorous lives. While adolescents are often indifferent to the guidance given by older people, I imagine that most of them would be extremely keen to hear the stories of an ex-offender. The vivid and perhaps shocking nature of these stories is likely to have a powerful impact.在我看来，骚年们更喜欢接受有实践经历的人来讲道理。

雅思大作文开头改写分析3篇1）场景或背景信息，即题目中出现的phenomenon.2）一些人的观点（some people’s opinion）,这局部在改写文章首段时可要可不要，考生可按照自己的情况来安排。

3）个人观点，这一局部在有些文章的开头首段中也可以不要。

大作文要求字数至少到达250字，在写作中考虑到字数的合理安排，第一段最好写3-5句话，大约40字左右，并且切忌在第一段就掏心掏肺把什么话都说完。

因此总结出大作文开头的方式通常有以下几种情况：1）题目中包含了背景信息（phenomenon）,有时也出现一些人的观点，并且题目中字数较多。

这种情况下最保险的方法是将题目中的背景信息及一些人的观点重新表达（paraphrase）,可以做：主动语态换成被动语态主谓宾换成主系表某些近义词互换Example:At present,it is hard for college students to find jobs.Many people claim that college teachers should give priority to practical courses like puter science and business over such traditional ones as history and geography.To what extent do you agree转换成The number of college graduates is surging while a substantial proportion of them have difficulties in finding employment after their graduation.Numerous people blamethis on the university education and believe that more emphasis should be laid on practical courses such as puter science and business than on traditional courses like history and geography.其后再加考生自己的观点即可。

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