23雅思基础写作

雅思基础写作精讲班第1讲讲义基础写作基本框架Procedure of writing:How to distribute the time of 40 minutes一、议论文真题类型分类：练习题目：1. Studying the English language in an English-speaking country is the best but not the only way to learn the language. Do you agree?2. To what extent is nuclear technology a danger to life on Earth? What are the benefits and risks associated with its use?3. Describe some of the problems that overpopulation causes, and suggest at least one possible solution.4. Discuss the causes and some effects of widespread drug use by young people in modern day society. Make any recommendations you feel are necessary to help fight youth drug abuse.5. Scientific and technological advances have changed our lives. But some scientists in some fields say that scientists are not able to find solutions to the problems they havecreated. To what extent do you agree or disagree?6. Intelligent machines such as robots are increasingly being used. They can do many things that used to be done by human. Discuss the benefits and dangers.7. In order to solve the problems of traffic jam and air pollution, government is determined to raise the price of petrol. Do you believe it isthe best way? What other methods can you recommend?确定关键词Procedure of writing:How to distribute the time of 40 minutes一、议论文真题类型分类：练习题目：1. Studying the English language in an English-speaking country is the best but not the only way to learn the language. Do you agree?2. To what extent is nuclear technology a danger to life on Earth? What are the benefits and risks associated with its use?3. Describe some of the problems that overpopulation causes, and suggest at least one possible solution.4. Discuss the causes and some effects of widespread drug useby young people in modern day society. Make any recommendations you feel are necessary to help fight youth drug abuse.5. Scientific and technological advances have changed our lives. But some scientists in some fields say that scientists are not able to find solutions to the problems they have created. To what extent do you agree or disagree?6. Intelligent machines such as robots are increasingly being used. They can do many things that used to be done by human. Discuss the benefits and dangers.7. In order to solve the problems of traffic jam and air pollution, government is determined to raise the price of petrol. Do you believe it is the best way? What other methods can you recommend?雅思基础写作精讲班第2讲讲义07年真题回顾2. 真题思路扩展brainstorming（1）specific: I. from abstract to personal: air travel, oneself study—group study, fast food-traditional food （2）general: economy, environment, efficiency, safety, pleasure, science and technology避开主题句错误类型3. 确定主题句：ascertain topic sentencesI. Some mistakes of the thesis statement or topic sentences:（1）The subject of this paper will be my parents.（2）My parents have been the most influential people in my life.（3）My parents had only one child.（4）My parents helped me grow in important ways, although in other respects I was limited.4. 开始动笔写作：1. format: block,2. pencil3. handwriting: clean and clear4. time control: 34m5. 装饰和改错：decoration and correction（1）After I cashed my paycheck. I treated myself to dinner.（2）The instructor told everyone in the room to be quiet his favorite show was on.（3）How you react to the incident reveal what side you stand on.（4）The crowd has surged forward, showing their excitement.（5）There are more and more people go abroad nowadays.（6）The student who had sat down quickly put on the headphones. 雅思基础写作精讲班第3讲讲义必备模板第二种模板形式(五段式）雅思基础写作精讲班第4讲讲义Mixed typesMethod:Successful introduction:1. “Knowledge is power,” wrote Francis Bacon long ago.Today college students are hard at study to acquire all kinds of skills, such as English, computer, and driving.People, however, cannot reach a general consensus on what subjects should be attached more importance to,academic or practical.( academic subjects Vs. practical subjects) (As the old saying goes)Art is long, life isshort;(Rudyard Kipling wrote) East is east, and West is west, and never the twain shall meet!; Experience is the father of wisdom and memory the mother; Knowledge isa treasure, but practice is the key to it; Knowledgeadvances by steps, not by leaps; Great works areperformed not by strength but by perseverance; Genius is nothing but labor and diligence.2. What can be done to solve the problem of watershortage? Surely, modern people frequently are plagued with this question. As for me, there are three methods as followings.（the problem of water shortage）3. Is the history of no avail to modern society? Recentdiscussions concerning the function of history haveraised some very real doubts in the minds ofcontemporary people. As far as I am concerned, we can benefit a lot form the past.(whether history is useful to cotemporary society)4. A recent survey reports that there were about one thirdof college graduates who could not find an ideal job in2005. This fact prompts us to make a thorough analysis of the root reason of this alarming phenomenon.(theissue of unemployment of graduates)5. It is generally agreed that the main responsibility ofteachers is to pass on knowledge to students. As a result, if students can do well in academic subjects, theirteachers are qualified enough. However, I assert thatassisting students in distinguishing right from wrong is more significant for teachers.(the relationship between students and teachers)6. With the development of computer technology, books, asa traditional medium, are more and more challenged.Many libraries are faced with such a dilemma, whether they should invest on computers or on books. With every aspect taken into consideration, I believe that to invest on computers would be a better choice.(investment inbooks or computers for a library)Successful body:1. One main reason for water shortage is lack of theawareness of water conservation. For example, moreoften than not we can come across such a phenomenon that a person turns a faucet on and forgets to turn it off.Precious water has been totally squandered. （theproblem of water shortage）2. Smoking should be banned without any hesitation for it israther detrimental to people’s health. Cigarette smokecontains nicotine, several cancer producing or irritatingsubstances and carbon monoxide gas. Damage to the lining of the bronchial tubes is much more among cigarettesmokers than non smokers, even when there is no obvious disease. Some of these changes are considered to bepre-cancerous. Lung function is generally reduced among cigarette smokers. Cigarette smoking is a greater hazard than other factors---such as community air pollution—in the causation of lung cancer and chronic bronchitis.(nosmoking)3 Due to great strides of modern technology, dramatictransformations have taken place in our life. In the past, if we were anxious to contact friends, we had to drop in on them in person, which was inconvenient andtime-consuming. Now, fashionable cell phones can be an efficient bridge between acquaintances.(the benefit of modern technology)4. There are a lot of benefits of raising dogs. First, dogscontribute to the health of their owners. Often theirdemands for walks and play improve their owner’sexercise routine. In fact, statistics show that dog owners get more regular exercise than non-dog owners do. Also, they enhance health simply be being around to bepetted. Second, they provide a means for parents toteach their children responsibility. When parents givechildren a dog, they provide them the opportunity tofulfill the responsibilities of walking, feeding, and caring for its other needs. Finally and most important of all,dogs enhance the well-being and emotional stability of families. Older people who live alone especially rely on dogs to give them enjoyment and company. Childrenalso find a great deal of comfort in their dogs. As anexample, a family dog helps a little boy adapt when his mother leaves him with a sitter and goes towork..(advantage of keeping pets)5.lot of advantages. Firstly, after three or four years ofschooling, students can undoubtedly acquire valuableexpertise, which is essential to their future jobs. As weknow, through compulsory and optional courses,students lay a solid foundation in a particular field andare confident to solve the relevant problemsconfronted.(benefits of college education)6. By contrast, the opponents argue that its drawbacksshould not be ignored. For one thing, some existingmajors are so out of date that they serve no purpose for the future job. In such a dilemma, there is no doubt that graduation means exactly unemployment. If whatstudents learn in colleges is only theoreticalargumentation definitely unconnected with reality, what is the point in wasting such prime time? (drawbacks of college education)Successful conclusion:1. The extinction of species, the shortage of lumber anddrug ingredients, the reduction of oxygen and theincrease of carbon dioxide in the atmosphere all signal that we cannot afford to lose any moreforests.(protection of forests)2. To stop losing more forests, we should educate people,especially those who have destroyed and who are going to destroy forests for one reason or another, in why forestsmust exist on the earth. (protection of forests)雅思基础写作精讲班第5讲讲义写作的素材素材Topics:1. If a five-year old commits a crime, should his/her parents have the responsibility and are punished? What is the age of a child when parents no longer bear the responsibility for children's behavior? /Unlike other countries, police in UK donot carry guns. Some think it leaves citizen unprotected, while others think it reduces the overall violence in our society. Discuss both the views.2. We know that university graduates should earn higher salary than less well-educated members, so in this way they should pay all the full cost. /Quality of people that we need in our society can’t be learned in universities and other academic institutions. To what extent do you agree or disagree?3. International tourism creates tension rather than understanding between people from different cultures. To what extent do you agree or disagree?/ Government should build new buildings in a traditional way in order to protect traditional culture.4. The government should control the amount of violence in films and on television in order to decrease the violent crimes in society. To what extent do you agree or disagree? / Billions of money is spent on the space research. Some people say that it should be spent on improving the living standard of the people on the earth. Do you agree or disagree?5. Wild animals have no place in the 21st century, and the protection is a waste of resource. Agree or disagree? /Some people think killing animals for food is cruel and unnecessary and some people think is essential for dairy diet. To what extent what do you think about the both issues?6. Nowadays motorized flight is considered as the most important and influential invention in the world. Not any other invention has such a significant impact on our lives. Agree?/ Maintaining public library is a waste of money, because computer technology has already replaced its function. Do you agree or disagree?7. Traffic and housing problems in major cities could be solved by moving large companies and factories with their employees to the countryside. To what extent do you agree or disagree?/ The environmental problem is so serious to most countries and individuals that it needs the international cooperation. Do you agree or disagree?8. Mass media have a significant influence on our life and this is a negative development. Do you agree or disagree?/ Do thenegative effects of some international media such as TV and magazine for example overweigh the positive effects?Topic Word:I.1. society: Society is flooded with unhealthy substance in the mass media, such as violence and pornography, therefore having inevitably downside effect on people, Citizens are preoccupied by money worship to make profits by hook or by crook; parents never discipline children strictly, divorce rate rockets, children are in need of solicitude, youngsters fall victim to prevalent domestic violence and are prone to aggressive impulse; students are heavily encumbered by knowledge acquisition, psychological education has been neglected, confronted with frustration, children have no efficient outlet to alleviate stress.素材（2）犯罪处罚2. Government should mount a crackdown on crime and bring criminals to justice, the aim is to reform those who have gone astray, offenders can turn over a new leaf and are endowed withproficiency in a particular line, inferiority complex and psychological shadow should be avoided, delinquents harbor vengeful sentiments against others and society as a whole, lawbreakers resume committing crimes or committing suicide.II.1. students can acquire academic qualification, learners can develop expertise, pupils have practical ability to apply what they have learned to society; campus and dormitory life instill discipline into students, living together can cultivate cooperation and strengthen the skill of interpersonal relationship, learners get tolerant of others, schooling can help students tell right from wrong2. course framework ought to be more flexible, such as more optional subjects rather than compulsory ones, interests can be aroused, subjects are practical and related to future jobs, learners should be more motivated, they have convenient access to relevant information of majors.III.1. advantage: cultures are mutually beneficial, theycan pool and share resources, the platform of exchange of ideas will assist diverse countries in comprehending actual state of affairs of distinct cultures, globalization will facilitate mutual understanding and dispel misunderstanding; disadvantage: the conflict between mainstream and marginal cultures will result in lesser-known cultures on the verge of extinction, the world is turned into a similar and monotonous entity.2. tradition is precious and unique, it symbolizes identity of a nation, people in the homeland are bristled with pride, for example, Forbidden City, fantastic buildings witness resplendent culture of feudalism, the Bastille, time-honored prison appreciates glorious history of French Revolution; peaceful coexistence between tradition and modernity should be guaranteed, tradition serves as places of tourist interests and boost the development of economy, we can invest money in the conservation of tradition and promote the education of protecting tradition.雅思基础写作精讲班第6讲讲义第四大主题1. the ultimate purpose of government is to serve the people, dispelling adverse substance is the obligation, authority should make overall planning and give consideration to the interests of all sides in adopting policies, it can exercise executive power if necessary.V.1. animals are in an unfavorable situation, they are entitled to the right of subsistence and deserve impartial treatment, it is unjustifiable to expropriate the right of living,2. humans enjoy the right of priority, in medical field, human beings can carry out clinical experiment on laboratory animals, they can achieve breakthrough in medical treatment, vivisection is justifiable.3. a reciprocal relationship is strongly recommended, equilibrium in biosphere and harmonious development can be beneficial to each other, they are indispensable to each other,1. white-hot technology transforms the life of drudgery into a convenient and comfortable one, entertainment at a finger’s click is not beyond our wildest dream, the means of communications, traffic, and information have been changed dramatically, humans are more confident about the future2. people adhere to hedonist philosophy and become indolent, declined ability is accompanying the progress; humans are heavily dependent on modern science, they become alienated, environment falls victim to advance of science and technology, environmental pollution has been aggravated.素材7VII.1. modern society are flooded with one-off products, such as chopsticks, shopping bags, and purified water bottles, some of them are non-biodegradable, industry, fossil fuel in industrial development is widely applied, petrol, coal, gas, the increase of carbon dioxide leads to global warming and air pollution, it will deplete ozone layer, farming, fertilizer andpesticide give rise to erosion of soil.2. government should pursue strict policy and popularize biodegradable packaging, coordination should be ensured among various countries, education will fire the masses with enthusiasm for environmental protection.VIII.1. Readers are thoroughly informed of current affairs, they can have access to up-to-date information and enjoy the right to know the truth, the freedom of speech will be guaranteed.2. Because of lack of professional ethics, shameless and unscrupulous journalists always carry gloomy news, such as murder, to promote circulation, paparazzo(singular), hordes of paparazzi(plural), invade privacy, chequebook journalism leads to sham news, the mass media follow the fashion and pander to the low taste, it encourages vulgar interests雅思基础写作精讲班第7讲讲义写作中必备的词汇和句式词汇和句式：第一:1.appalling/drug-related/commit/tackle crime, turn to crime: bored youngsters turn to crime. hardened criminal, teach criminals salutary lessons, unwilling victims, fall victim to,2.decent education, enter higher education, education authority, education resources, encyclopedic knowledge, broaden knowledge,3. alien/indigenous/dominant/mainstream culture, assimilate the culture, experience culture shock, a mutual exchange of ideas, facilitate communication, eco-friendly tourismernment agency/backing, guarantee equality, maximize efficiency, supplement meagre income,5.prove medically beneficial for human beings, endangered animals, laboratory animals, slaughter animals,6. white-hot technology, communication/telecommunications technology, treat the world with difference,7. safeguard the environment, damage the environment, environment issues/protection, pollution of the environment, fragile balance, sit in traffic jam, strike a balance8.tabloid journalism, fashion/literary/science journalism, the world of journalism, information bombard, create serious disturbance to people, accurate information, misleading advertisements, classified advertisements,第二：1. give rise to/lead to/arouse a heated discussion/perplexity; when it comes to.., it is commonly believed that…; one indisputable fact is that….;it goes without saying that…; it cannot be denied that…; recently, …has been brought into focus; with the rapid of development of…, …has gained an ever-increasing popularity in modern people’s life;…..is not strange to modern people.I assert…; in my opinion…; what I emphasize is that…;2. the reasons are multiple, it is manifest that…., it is conceded that…, in other words, that is to say, for example.3. from what has been discussed above…, taking into account all the points.., from the above-mentioned facts,.. I am convinced that..第四种词汇第三：alarming issue/ thorny problem, crucial reason/contributing factor, profound impact/ disruptive influence, charismatic culture/ time-honored tradition, beneficialinterest/spectacular result, persistent effort/genuine dilemma, pollution prevention/prevailing attitude, efficient solution/mass production, harmoniousrelationship/sustainable development, rosy picture/ monotonous routine, infallible methodology, severepenalty/impending crisis, draconian measure/appropriate punishment, widespread phenomenon/current situation, rampant corruption/petty crime, improperly undoubtedly, inevitably, indiscriminately, absolutely, responsibly第四：1.In addition/additionally: Computers provide efficient work. In addition, they make our life more colorful.Furthermore/further: This method can, furthermore, be used in environmental protection. Moreover: private cars are cheap and, moreover, it can improve our life. In other words: Killing live animals is cruel, a murder in other words.2． Hence: The cost of transport is a major expense for a person. Hence job location is an important consideration. Consequently: Globalization is a widespread phenomenon and consequently the domestic culture has been affected. Thereupon: Nature will revenge on humans. Thereupon people begin to realize the power of nature.3．Whereas: Smoking is something personal whereas it will affect others’ right. Conversely: S ome policemen prefer to carry guns when on duty; conversely others are reluctant to do that.4．Although/though: Although some young men really have no idea of what a new culture is, they absorb it without any reservation. Granted: Granted that the deed is not perfect, the disadvantages are outweighed by the advantages.5. for example, specifically: Specifically, the departmentwanted answers to the following questions.6. On condition that: Television enrich our lives a lot on condition that we are not addicted to it. Given that: Given that pets have become an indispensable part of some people’s life, the key is to coordinate the relationship between them.雅思基础写作精讲班第8讲讲义第六种词汇positive words:1. strive for a harmonious society/greater efficiency/striveto do something争取2. take suitable/timely steps to address this problem.采取合适/及时的措施3. top the central government's agenda.位于…最重要的位置4. assist sb in sth.在…方面帮助5. play an increasingly more integral role in wealthdistribution.起到越来越整体的作用6. contribute to sth/doing做出贡献7. implement the policy执行8. exert a positive/baneful effect on9. embark on reform and opening开始做…10. t ake initiative to eliminate negative effects.主动做…11. l aunch a spate of stringent measures发动，采取12. n avigate one’s way through the difficult situation.通过13. P roblems triggered by income composition are easy toresolve.解决/ muster enough resolve to quit smoking.鼓起勇气/Distribution of wealth is tainted and distorted by corruption must be redressed.纠正14. P roblems arising from development-based factors can berelieved and eased.减轻/ improve and ease减轻 thedifficulties and frustrations faced by travelers15. e liminate/ weed out 消除the structure of unscientificdesign.16. u tilize利用 their rich resources.17. i mprove/upgrade/optimize改善 the conditions18. f acilitate 推动the country's future sustainabledevelopment.19. b oost 推进the employment20. s houlder 承担起greater social responsibilities/bridge 消除，减少the cultural differences./ sth is mirrored by被反映21. m ake a difference有很重要的作用22. a vail oneself of something利用23. a bide by traffic rules遵守24. e nhance their job opportunities/enrich one’s life丰富，提高25. a spire to careers in finance/aspire to study abroad努力想要26. v oice their support for the movement表示了27. m ake efforts to do努力做事情28. h elp with 帮助weight loss and control; improve 改善fitness; reduce 减少stress, and of course save 节省money on petrol and parking.29. m inimize 减轻air and noise pollution, traffic accidents,oil consumption, road repairs and beautifies cities. 30. T hose measures, coupled with 与…一起advanced science andtechnology, will be taken without any delay.31. H ouse prices will start to calm down, saving the sector.下降32. T he current campaign to curb控制 the use of tobacco shouldbe stepped up.加速33. n urture/ cultivate a great number of learned people/培养，培育34. F igures released 公布on World No Tobacco Day serve as asource of frustration for everyone who wants to curb smokingin China.35. a slew of/a spate of/ a skyrocketing number of多数量第五：negative words:1. fail to do没能做…2. be a heache to…对于..是个难题3. pose a potential threat to residents' health.有潜在的威胁4. mean a formidable battle to do艰苦的斗争5. is now confronted with the same question that haunts/ beplagued with/be afflicted with (overpopulation/youth drug abuse/traffic accidents) 受到…问题的困扰6. be detrimental to sth对..有害7. focus attention on/bring something to somebody's attention引起…注意8. be blind to this point注意不到，忽视9. be of no avail没有用处10. crack down on(严厉的处罚) smoking in public places andpenalize(处罚) those who sell cigarettes to juveniles.11. exert a negative effect on sth有负面的影响12. exacerbate income disequilibrium/ The situation wascompounded by…加剧了13. squander natural resources浪费14. deprive sb of sth剥夺15. We believe that car tax should be scrapped.废除16. If it is hard to rein in控制17. The move has aroused controversy引起争论18. Apart from that, numerous factors are to blame for thecurrent situation. 责备19. We must stop pampering children纵容20. take various measures to tackle such malpractices处理玩忽职守21. Air pollution has turned into a major hazard affecting urbanresidents' quality of life. 巨大的危险影响了.22. an apparent total lack of明显的完全缺乏23. social and economic disequilibrium/ gauge(衡量) incomeinequality/disparity不平衡24. the severity of the pollution levels严重性25. lung damage and respiratory problems肺部损害以及呼吸问题26 be mind-boggling/ a problem of mind-boggling complexity令人难以置信的27. People cannot help but wonder why efforts to cut the numberof smokers have proven to be so futile. 没有效果的28. Smokers are six times more likely to be infertile（不生育的）and have a greater chance of becoming disabled,（残疾的） while women who smoke have a higher chance ofcontracting（得…病） breast cancer.29. looming environmental and public health disaster逐渐显现的30. leave others to the mercy of market forces受到..控制31. The abuse（滥用） of power for financial gain veils behind(隐藏)monopolies32. a hard nut to crack is that..困难是…33. Emissions from car exhausts have been found to be one ofthe major sources of urban air pollution. 尾气的排放34. carbon dioxide and carbon monoxide二氧化碳，一氧化碳35. We have no reason to be optimistic about the improvementof urban air quality. 对..不乐观第六：同义必备词：66. youth, teenager, minor, fledgling67. the old, elderly, grizzled, grey-headed68. conserve, preserve保存，如：We must conserve our waterresources for future generations.69. assure, ensure(insure), guarantee, pledge, avouch保证，如：Government should assure consumers of the quality of commodities. /It is important to insure that universities have enough funds to carry out important research inscience subjects./ The law guarantees equal rights for men and women./ The new government pledged to reduce crime./ Some criminals avouched that they themselves wereinnocent.70. Ideal, aspiration(beyond normal expectation), ambition(aparticular end)理想，雄心71. compare with/to, contrast, analogize(elaboration on thefunction of families in social life, sociologists like to analogists them to the cells of a human body.) 比较72. change, alter, modify(change of function), convert into,transform(appearance),改变73. argue, controversy(long-continued argument),dispute(angry manner), debate(formal argument)争论74. standard, criterion, gauge, yardstick标准75. inevitable, inescapable, unavoidable难免76. wealth, property, assets, fortune财富77. attend, take part in, participate in(formal), partake in,join in,参与。

2023年4月22日雅思大作文题目及范文题目：经济发展的利弊Nowadays, most countries improve the standard of living through economic development. But some social values are lost as a result. Do you think the advantages of the phenomenon outweigh the disadvantages?如今，大多数国家通过经济发展提高生活水平。

但一些社会价值观却因此而丧失。

你认为这一现象利大于弊吗？范文：With the implementation of economic incentive, most countries have witnessed the flourishing economy while social values are ignored and even lost as a consequence. Although the process of developing economy should not sacrifice the social values, as far as I am concerned, economic development outweighs the disadvantages in terms of social values.Admittedly, while seeking the high speed of economy development, people tend to neglect traditional values and cultural practices. For example, mutual trust and support had always been honored in the tradition virtues, but nowadays this has been made a way for personal interests such as promotion or high salary, since people are more preoccupied with their own b usiness, indifferent with others’ troubles. These losses can have negative effects on people'ssense of identity and community, leading to social problems like alienation and disconnection.However, it is important for people to notice various tangible benefits brought by economic development. For one thing, with the thriving economy, increased job opportunities emerged in different sectors, resulting in higher wages and broad working options for workers. For another thing, the development of economy also advances other aspects that people have a better access to healthcare and education. Consequently, these factors contribute to an overall improvement in people's standard of living and have positive effects on society.To conclude, while there are certainly disadvantages to economic development, the benefits generally surpass the costs. By generating employment opportunities, elevating the standard of living, economic expansion ultimately fosters the improvement of society as an entirety. It falls upon governments and individuals to reconcile material development with the preservation of social values, guaranteeing a harmonious and sustainable future for generations to follow.。

雅思写作题目【通用4篇】在平凡的学习、工作、生活中，大家都经常看到作文的身影吧，写作文可以锻炼我们的独处习惯，让自己的'心静下来，思考自己未来的方向。

怎么写作文才能避免踩雷呢？它山之石可以攻玉，以下内容是为您带来的4篇《雅思写作题目》，如果能帮助到您，将不胜荣幸。

雅思写作题目篇一1、偏远地区考试松。

其实，以前考雅思的人不多的时候，一些偏远考点可能人数少确实会相对松一些。

但现在雅思处于全国爆满的状态，不管什么考场人都不少，所以标准都一样。

2、考官的问题有正确答案。

在雅思口语对话中，你可能会犯语法错误或发错音，但就内容而言，是没有对错的！雅思口语考察大家的交流能力，只要自圆其说即可。

3、语速越快越好。

考官不仅会听考生语言是否流畅，也要听是否连贯。

所以即使考生的语速很快，但如果不断重复，而且还出现很多逻辑错误，同样也得不了高分。

4、像老外一样讲话。

当你在使用第二语言时，很多因素会影响你的表达文化背景、所受教育、母语的语音系统等。

因此你完全没有必要非要像外国人一样讲话。

1、首先按照口语机经将话题整理出来，大约30个不到，整理好之后按照这些topic逐个写提纲，接下来就是要用准确的表达来将这些提纲串成完整的句子。

2、在地道短语和词汇上可以参考十天，注意是参考短语和单词而不是照着背句子。

可以常用过渡词，比如with regard to…。

as far as i’m concerned…。

. 显得你在思考，整个对话有逻辑。

3、拒绝内容空洞，要细节化。

比如说描述一个度假胜地三亚，你可以这样说：那里的气候很好，可以穿漂亮的裙子；那里阳光充足，可以在沙滩上晒日光浴；那里海水很蓝，很多漂亮的鱼，还能冲浪等等……4、每天坚持读英语1小时。

主要训练的是fluency and coherence。

建议在阅读时，每天认准2篇文章，读到烂为止，要读出感觉读出速度。

这就达到目的了。

5、找外教或者口语比自己好的partner练习，可以帮助指导对错6、烤鸭备考的时候一定要用自己身边的素材。

通过广泛阅读和积累词汇，学生可以进一步扩大 知识面和语言基础。
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• 雅思写作简介 • 雅思写作技巧 • 雅思写作题型解析 • 雅思写作常见问题及解决方案 • 雅思写作练习与模拟题 • 总结与展望
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雅思写作简介
雅思写作考试目的
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考试时长：1小时 考试题型：图表说明、议论文、书信等
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2023年6月17日雅思大作文范文及解析再犯罪的原因和解决办法一、2023年6月20日雅思大作文题目Many criminals continue to commit crimes even after being punished for it. Why do you think this happen? How can we solve this problem?二、范文及解析IntroductionA mushrooming number of criminals, after being released from the jail, will revert to crime, exerting ceaseless baneful influence on the social harmony and stability. Behind such a ticklish problem, from my perspective, are two predominant factors and viable solutions are in desperate need to avert the bleak future.解析本场考试重复1月14日大作文考题，虽然是很多考生害怕的犯罪类话题，但本题以说明文的形式考出，要求分析犯罪分子被释放出之后继续犯罪的原因及解决方法，是一个复古旧题，整体难度并不大；mushrooming adj.迅速增长的；越来越多的；ceaseless adj.不断的；不停的；baneful adj.不好的；有害的；ticklish adj.难对付的；棘手的；Body 1The chief culprit for re-offending would be the difficulty for the criminals to settle down and reintegrate into the society. Indisputably, one of the root causesfor anti-social behaviors is poverty, by which I mean living odds force some people to embark on a path of delinquency to support themselves by engaging in illegal activities such as stealing, larceny and the like. After being freed from the prison, with a criminal record, never would it be easy for the law-breakers who lack livelihood skills to secure a job and become economically independent. Another contributing factor for such a worrying trend has much to do with the psychology condition of the criminals. Suffering from improper treatment, be it physical punishment or verbal aggression, many offenders, when set free from the prison, are inundated with resentment instead of visions of life, for which they, running after revenge, are apt to fall back into perpetrating crimes.解析：再次犯罪的原因有：(1)物质层面：犯过罪的人出来之后在稳定生活重新融入社会上存在明显困难；(2)精神层面：报复心理；culprit n.不好的事情的原因；罪魁祸首；reintegrate into v.重新融入；living odds n.生活窘境；verbal aggression n.语言攻击；embark on a path of delinquency v.走上犯罪的道路；larceny n.盗窃；be inundated with v.充斥着；resentment n. 愤恨；怨恨；revenge n.复仇；are apt to v.倾向于；易于；perpetrate v.犯罪；作恶；Body 2Prickly as the issue is, steps can be taken to address this . Primarily, the government should play a leading role by enacting tougher laws and carrying out more severe penalties such as heavier fines or longer sentences for offenders toaccomplish the purpose of deterrence. The authorities should also polish the effectiveness of imprisonment with the aim to help criminals achieve rehabilitation. To specify, job-related training targeted at those released offenders are staunchly suggested, which enables them to be furnished with some employment abilities, be they a plumber, a hairdresser or a driver. In this case, they can be, in large part, encouraged to live a normal life rather than violate the law for survival. Efforts from family members, friends and the society are also indispensable to cure the mental disorders. To elaborate, showing enough respect and helping those ex-prisoners to find a job are great tender solicitude. The general public and the whole society should be made to believe are formed man deserves a new leaf.解析：解决方法：(1)政府层面：颁布更严格的法律配备更严厉的处罚以达到更好的震慑作用；进一步改进监禁的教育方式从而达到帮助犯罪分子真正改过自新；(2)家庭和社会：更多地尊重，接纳，包容改过自新的罪犯；prickly adj.麻烦的；address v.解决；enact v.制定；颁布法令；rehabilitation n.改过自新；staunchly adv.强烈地；be furnished with v.具有；配备有；solicitude n.安慰；关怀reformed adj.改过自新的；ConclusionIn conclusion, the problem for ex-prisoners to resort to offence, notwithstanding its gravity, can be brought under control with both the government and the public shouldering joint responsibility.解析：总结前文：notwithstanding prep. 虽然；尽管；gravity n.严重性;三、范文2There are a variety of punishments for criminals, including imprisonment, fines, and community service. However, even after serving their sentences, a significant proportion of ex-prisoners continue to commit crimes. This essay will explore the reasons behind this and propose solutions.对罪犯有各种各样的惩罚，包括监禁、罚款和社区服务。

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• 4. In recent years, the proportion of the crimes committed by youngsters is on the rise. Discuss causes to this problem and suggest solutions. • Causes: • 1. 家庭方面(single-parent households, children’s emotional needs cannot satisfy, improper parental care) • 2. 教育方面(limited access to education, receive no instruction in time) • 3. 社会方面(media violence, peer group effect, a

2023雅思写作评分标准对照表1.概述作为国际英语语言测试系统（IELTS）的一部分，雅思写作部分是考生们在申请留学或移民过程中必须面对的重要考试之一。

雅思写作考试是评估考生在书面交流能力方面的一个重要指标，了解雅思写作评分标准对于备考考生来说至关重要。

本文将介绍2023年最新的雅思写作评分标准对照表，分析各个评分维度的具体要求和标准，帮助考生更好地准备和应对雅思写作考试。

2. 任务响应(Task Response)任务响应是雅思写作评分的第一个维度，它着重于考生对于题目所要求的内容是否进行了详尽和准确的回答。

在2023年的雅思写作评分标准对照表中，任务响应的要求更加具体和明确。

考生需要在文章中清晰地表达对于题目要求的理解，确保在回答问题的过程中足够详细和全面。

考生还需注意提供具体的例子和论据来支撑自己的观点，确保文章的逻辑性和连贯性。

3. 语言（Lexical Resource）语言是雅思写作评分的另一个关键维度，它主要评价考生的词汇和表达能力。

在2023年的雅思写作评分标准中，语言的要求更加注重考生对于词汇的准确和丰富使用，以及表达能力的灵活和多样性。

考生需要在文章中运用恰当的词汇和短语来表达自己的想法，避免重复和简单的表达方式。

考生还需注意使用恰当的句式和语法结构，确保文章的流畅和连贯。

4. 语法和句子结构（Grammar and Sentence Structure）语法和句子结构是雅思写作评分的另一个重要维度，它主要评价考生对于语法和句子结构的掌握程度。

在2023年的雅思写作评分标准中，语法和句子结构的要求更加强调考生对于句子的准确性和多样性。

考生需要在文章中避免简单和重复的句式，尝试运用各种复杂的句子结构来表达自己的观点。

考生还需注意使用恰当的时态和语态，确保文章的表达准确和清晰。

5. 一致性和连贯性（Coherence and Cohesion）一致性和连贯性是雅思写作评分的最后一个维度，它主要评价考生在文章结构和段落间的连接上是否达到了一定的水平。

雅思写作基础作文题目汇总雅思考试的脚步临近了，在雅思写作中有哪些基础作文题目的出现几率都是比较大的呢？下面是小编整理的雅思写作基础作文题目汇总，欢迎大家阅读分享借鉴，希望对大家有所帮助。

雅思基础作文题目1. You are an university student who are living in the accommodation at the campus. One day you find something wrong with your accommodation. So you write a letter to the House Officer to tell them what happened, the reason you think, what you decide to do, and whether if it is right.2. It is wrong that our government pay more money to the artist projects, for instance, there are more and more paintings and sculptures appearing at the public places, because there are more important thing to do. What's you opinion? Do you agree or disagree with it?3. writing to an English speaking college about qualification, accommodation, fee, what courses do you want to choose and why.4. Participating in a sport is as important for psychological health as it is for physical condition and social development.5. You have left college. But you didn't say goodbye to your friend who live in the room with you because he had a course at that time. Write a letter to him to appology and tell hem how you spend that days before you leave and how you get home. Then invite him to visit you.6. Some people say the parents should except school to conduct their children's behavior and tell them what is 'right' or 'wrong'. Others say schools should take this responsibility. Please give your point about it.7. Write to the agency officer and complain about the rent car which has sth wrong. Tell them the problems of the car you rent from the agency and your requiring.8. As the developing countries and the third world countries, there are a funds, how to use it? Invest in the basic education or in the high-technology, for instance, computer? What's your opinion?9. You are a foreign student. Write to the Student Union, introduce your hobbies and interests and ask information of clubs and societies. You want to join a club or society enjoy your time when you study there.10. Fast food is developing more and more popular. It replaces other traditional food. Some people think it is good, some people disagree with it. What's your opinion about it. Give some reason of your opinion.11. A friend will visit Beijing. You will meet him at airport. But for some reason, you have to be late. Explain the reason. Since you haven't meet each other, tell the friend where you will meet and how to recognize each other.12. More and more children's writing & math ability are affected by computers and calculators. We should limit the use of those tools. Disagree or agree.13. you have broke your leg and have to stayed in hospital. you received many cards and letters from your classmates. write a letter to tell them your detail of your position and thank them at the same time.14. some people say that it is impossible for women to be an effective women and to be a good mother in home at the same time. they also suggest that the government should give the salary to mothers who stay at home to take care of their children.15. Your friend write to you and tell you that he is hesitating to chose computer or history as his major in university. Write to him and tell him your opinion.16. Participating in a sport is as important for psychological health as it is for physical conditions and social development.17. You live in a room in college which you share with another student. You find it very difficult to work there because he or she always has friends visiting. They have parties in the room and sometimes borrow your things without asking you. Write a letter to the Accommodation officer at the college and ask for a new room nest term. You would prefer a single room. Explain your reason.18. Who has responsible for our old people?19. Write to the agency officer to complain about a rent house by them. Tell them the problems of the house and your requiring.20. You read an ad about a sale of a shop in the local newspaper, when you came to buy the goods you wanted, you find the sale had ended. Write to the shop manager and complain about this. Require for the compensation.21. Write to an English speaking college about qualification, accommodation, fee, what courses do you want to choose and why.22. You are accepted as an oversea student by an university. Before you go to the university, write to the student officer and ask them sth about the accommodation, the transportation,and the class schedule.23. You are a history teacher at a high school. You see an ad at the local newspaper to introduce the local museum which coincidens with what you teach now. Write to the museum officerand tell them that you want to bring your students to visit it.24. Write a letter to your friend and express thanks for his present which was brought to you during you were ill at the hospital.25. The first car appeared on British roads in 1888. By the year 2000 there may be as many as 29 million vehicles on British roads. Alternative forms of transport should be encouraged and international laws introduced to control car ownership and use. What do you think? Give reasons for your answer.26. The threat of nuclear weapons maintains world peace. Nuclear power provides cheap and clean energy. The benefits of nuclear technology far outweigh the disadvantages. Give reasons for your answer.27. People can do longer expect a job for life. What should individuals and governments do to prepare the current and future environments for different working conditions?28. As technological innovation brings about rapid changes and retraining becomes a lifelong necessity, industry should take over more and more of the responsibility for education.29. It is more important for governments to ensure adequate standards of housing, education and health care for their citizens by developing the industrial base than to use their resources to develop the rural areas.30. Business education and training today must promoter environmental awareness.31. Whilst studying abroad provides an opportunity to broaden one's experience, it also presents the danger of negative influences from the host culture.32. Technological advances continue to improve manufacturing efficiency; the weight of a drinks can has comedown from thirty-five grams to about fifteen grams, for example, and modern cars and production techniques are much more energy efficient. Governments need to control the environment rather than controlling industry, as companies already control their resources very efficiently.33. Training for work is far more important than proving a broad-based education.34. What steps should a student take in preparing for tertiary education and what would be the benefit of taking such steps?35. The developed world should lead by example and not insist that aid to the Third World is used to develop rural areas.雅思大作文常见的题型有哪些一、教育类A.理论与实践1.知识和经验的重要性。

2023年6月3日雅思大作文示范写作老人缺乏锻炼的原因与解决方法一、2023年6月3日雅思大作文题目Doctors encourage older people to take regular exercise, but few of them take enough physical exercise. What are the causes and what can be done to encourage them to take exercise?二、范文及解析IntroductionTaking regular exercise, as is universally acknowledged, plays midwife to helping old people keep physical fitness, while most of them, in spite of strong recommendation from doctors, still fail to take ample exercises. Behind such a ticklish problem, from my own perspective, are three predominant factors and viable solutions are in desperate need to avert the bleak future.解析本次task 2是新考题，但是整体难度并不大，审题注意限定词older people；play midwife to v.促成;帮助；ticklish adj.不安定的；难对付的；viable adj.可望成功的，切实可行的；avert v.防止，避免；bleak adj.不乐观的；Body 1Primarily, much as many elders are pleased to enjoy their twilight years, it does not look feasible since most youngsters, bread winners in families, are swamped with work under this cut-throat competition, under which circumstance, their parents will voluntarily help them with chores and minister to their grandchildren. Consequently, hardly do they have sufficient time to take sports. Another major contributing factor would have much to do with the transformed lifestyles of the elderly. Unlike the past when people have limited forms of entertainment, the current digital era is saturated with intriguing activities, ranging from surfing the internet to shooting off to see amusing videos, which tightly grip the old's attention. Benefited from its online convenience and diversity, the old will be indisposed to step out for exercises. Undeniable is also the fact that the lack of tailored creational amenities in the vicinity of residence will dampen the old's zeal for taking sports. To illustrate, with a swimming pool being kilometers away, swimming would only be a wild wish.解析Causes：(1)年轻人忙碌，老人需要帮助照顾家庭，带孩子；(2)老人在现代生活中的生活方式也有明显变化；(3)缺乏适合老年人运动锻炼的基础设施；feasible adj.可行的，办得到的；be swamped with v.忙着做;忙的一塌糊涂；cut-throat adj.（竞争）残酷的，激烈的；minister to v.照顾；援助；be saturated with v.使充满，使饱和；intriguing adj.非常有趣的，引人入胜的；grip v.使感兴趣，吸引住（某人）的注意；be indisposed to v.不愿意；tailor v.定做；迎合，使适应；amenity n.便利设施；vicinity n.周围地区，邻近地区，附近；dampen v.减弱，抑制；Body 2In order to address the prickly problem of inadequate physical exercise among elderly, the government should play a leading role by earmarking funds to proffering more age-appropriate sports facilities with either installing handrails or perfecting walking path, which are expected to give the old easier access to recreational areas, opening up more opportunities for them to join in activities like jogging and hiking. Apart from fiscal policy from the government, disseminating information through public service advertising, community centers and senior organizations is also of tangible boons in boosting the awareness concerning the significance of physical health. Besides, young adults, instead of being boomerang children, are supposed to shoulder more family responsibility for the care of older people is firmly within the domain of the family.解析Solutions：(1)政府起主导作用，投资完善运动设施，定制一些适合老年人锻炼的器材；(2)宣传以提升老人锻炼的思想意识；(3)年轻人要学会承担更大的家庭责任；prickly adj.多刺的；棘手的；earmark vt.指定……的用途；划拨（款项）；proffer v.递上；提供，提出；disseminate v.散布，传播（信息、知识等）；tangible adj.明确的，真实的；boon n.裨益，优势，有用的东西；boomerang children 回归子女；啃老族；ConclusionIn conclusion, barriers for the lack of sufficient exercise among the older individuals are various and the thorny issue should not be downplayed. By tailoring exercise facilities and elevating their awareness, older generations will be more likely to engage in regular physical activities.解析总结前文信息；重申观点。

2023年6月10日雅思大作文真题全解，附高分范文6.10雅思大作文真题解析+高分范文话题：社会话题—人们是否应该交税题目：Some people think we should keep all the money we earn and not pay taxes to the state. To what extent do you agree or disagree?写作思路:公民纳税是合理合法的事情。

政府需要用税收的钱来维持社会的正常运转，比如建设和维护基础设施，提供各种公共服务。

此外，税收制度也是一种财富再分配的机制，高收入群体缴纳的税收比例更高。

政府将用税收资助弱势群体，建立社会保障体系，促进了社会的稳定和发展。

所以，除了部分低收入、困难的免税群体，大部分人都需要缴税。

雅思写作真题范文Taxes play a vital role in funding public services andensuring societal well-being. While some people arguefor keeping all the money earned and question thenecessity of paying taxes to the state, I disagree with thisopinion.Admittedly,individuals with low ines can retain allthe money they earn, which is a mon policy adoptedby many countries worldwide. This is to ensure everymember of society has the money to meet their basicsurvival needs.However, when a person s inesurpasses a certain threshold, they should fulfill theirobligation of paying taxes to the state.One primary reason for paying taxes is that governmentsneed money to maintain criticalinfrastructure andprovide public services. Education, healthcare.transportation, and public safety are all supported by taxrevenue. Without adequate funds, these essentialservices would suffer, affecting people' s lives andhindering societal progress. By contributing a portion oftheir earnings through taxes, individuals activelyparticipate in building a well-functioning society.真题范文Moreover, taxation serves as a mechanism forredistribution of wealth and the promotion of socialstability.In most tax systems, individuals with higherines contribute a larger proportion of their earningsThis policy can help address socioeconomic disparitiesand provide a safety net for the vulnerable members ofsociety. lf people were allowed to keep all the moneythey earn, it would widen the gap between the rich andthe poor, leading to various social problems, such asresentment towards the wealthy or even an increase inviolent crimes.In conclusion,I disagree with the idea of keeping all themoney people earn without paying taxes, as it fails toacknowledge the crucial role that taxation plays insustaining and advancing society重点词汇与语料fund提供资金necessity必要性retain保留surpass超过threshold门槛obligation义务infrastructure基础设施revenue收入adequate足够的hinder阻碍well-functioning 运转良好的mechanism机制重点词汇与语料redistribution重新分配disparity差距safety net安全保障vulnerable弱势的resentment憎恨sustain维持以上就是关于《2023年6月10日雅思大作文真题全解，附高分范文》介绍。

2023年12月雅思写作考试真题及范文解析英文回答:The topic for the December 2023 IELTS writing task is as follows: "Discuss the impact of technology on education."Technology has revolutionized the field of education, bringing about significant changes in how students learn and teachers teach. One major impact of technology on education is the accessibility of information. With the internet and various digital platforms, students now have access to a vast amount of knowledge at their fingertips. They can easily research and explore different subjects, enhancing their understanding and critical thinking skills.Additionally, technology has made learning more interactive and engaging. Multimedia tools such as videos, simulations, and virtual reality allow students to visualize complex concepts and make learning more enjoyable. This not only increases student motivation but also improves retention and comprehension.Furthermore, technology has facilitated distance learning and online education. Especially during the COVID-19 pandemic, online classes became the norm, enabling students to continue theireducation remotely. This flexibility in learning has made education more accessible to individuals who may have geographical or physical limitations.However, it is important to acknowledge the potential drawbacks of technology in education. Excessive use of technology can lead to distractions and reduced face-to-face interactions, affecting social skills and emotional development. Moreover, not all students have equal access to technology, creating a digital divide that may exacerbate existing educational inequalities.In conclusion, the impact of technology on education has been profound. It has opened up new possibilities for learning, making information more accessible and engaging. However, it is crucial to strike a balance and ensure that technology is used mindfully to maximize its benefits while addressing its potential drawbacks.中文回答：2023年12月雅思写作任务的主题是：“讨论科技对教育的影响”。

2023年12月2日雅思小作文段落一：
啊，这市中心真是热闹得不得了！高楼一幢接一幢，人群来来往往，都在忙啥呢？不过还好，有个小咖啡馆能让我歇口气。

进去一看，哟，真不错！装饰得精致得很，灯光也柔和，再加上咖啡的香气，简直就像个避世小天地。

段落二：
周末的清晨，我去公园溜达，结果发现湖面上飘着一层薄雾，整个公园都神秘兮兮的。

人们慢慢走着，还有的坐在长椅上，享受这份难得的清静。

那些小孩子在草地上跑来跑去，笑得可欢了，感觉整个空气都充满了活力和快乐。

段落三：
科技这玩意儿真是越来越牛了！智能家居现在家家都有，手机一点，家里啥都能控制。

还有那人工智能，不仅在医疗、教育上帮了大忙，还让我们的生活多了好多可能性。

感觉未来真是无限啊！
段落四：
说起这座城市的城墙，那可真是个历史的见证者啊！岁月在上面留下了深深的痕迹，就像是在讲着过去的故事。

晚上城墙上的灯亮起来，整个城市都多了几分神秘和浪漫。

游客们纷纷拍照留念，都想抓住这难忘的一刻。

2023年雅思写作题目汇总引言概述：雅思写作考试是国际上广泛接受的英语语言能力考试之一，对于想要出国留学或移民的人来说，取得高分是非常重要的。

随着时间的推移，雅思写作题目也在不断变化。

本文将对2023年雅思写作题目进行汇总，分析其主要内容和要求。

正文内容：1. 题目一：环境保护1.1 气候变化- 描述气候变化对环境和人类生活的影响- 分析应对气候变化的措施，如减少温室气体排放和推广可再生能源等1.2 垃圾处理- 讨论垃圾处理对环境的影响- 探讨减少垃圾产生和有效处理垃圾的方法，如分类回收和垃圾焚烧发电等2. 题目二：科技发展2.1 人工智能- 分析人工智能对社会和经济的影响- 探讨人工智能的优势和挑战，如就业机会和隐私问题等2.2 互联网- 讨论互联网对人们生活的改变- 分析互联网的利弊，如信息泄露和网络犯罪等3. 题目三：教育体制3.1 学校教育- 探讨传统学校教育的优点和缺点- 分析如何改进学校教育，如增加实践课程和个性化教学等3.2 在线教育- 讨论在线教育的优势和挑战- 分析在线教育对传统教育的影响，如学习方式和教师角色的改变等4. 题目四：社会问题4.1 贫富差距- 描述贫富差距对社会的影响- 探讨减少贫富差距的措施，如改善教育和提高就业机会等4.2 社会公平- 分析社会公平的重要性- 讨论如何实现社会公平，如减少歧视和提供平等机会等5. 题目五：全球化5.1 国际合作- 探讨国际合作的重要性和好处- 分析国际合作的挑战，如文化差异和利益冲突等5.2 跨国公司- 讨论跨国公司对经济和就业的影响- 探讨如何管理跨国公司，如加强监管和提高企业社会责任等总结：综上所述，2023年雅思写作题目涵盖了环境保护、科技发展、教育体制、社会问题和全球化等多个领域。

考生需要深入研究这些话题，了解其背景和影响，提出合理的观点和解决方案。

通过充分准备和实践，考生可以在雅思写作考试中取得优异的成绩，为自己的留学或移民计划打下坚实的基础。

雅思考试写作范文1there has long been controversy over the legality and apparent acceptance of tobacco in society .some hold that cigarettes and other tobacco containing products should be banned, that is, treated as agree with this point of view for the following reasons:although cigarettes do not offer as intense an effect as drugs like heroin and cocaine,they rank higher in the level of dependence it creates in the of smokers try to rid themselves of cigarettes but cannot,because of the physiological dependence they developed,chiefly imputable to its chemical explains why smokers continue their habit despite the numerous health warnings. furthermore,medical science has now proved beyond a doubt that smoking all the other causes of preventable deaths such as alcohol,illegal drugs,aids,suicide,road accidents,fire,and guns,cigarettes still account for more preventable deaths than all of those combined.more disturbingly,whilst the use of heroin is dangerous solely to the users,the use of tobacco endangers those who are in their vicinity as well. this phenomenon, known as passive smoking, nulls the counter-argument that putting one's own health at risk through smoking should be up to one's own individual have shown that the amount of second-hand smoke inhaled by a typical nonsmoker is equivalent to one cigarette smoked per day,and what is more,passive smoking can increase a nonsmoker's chance of getting cancer by ten to thirty two per cent.there are those who will say that the black market created by outlawing tobacco will produce deadlier cigarettes because the product standards of the bootleggers are not as should all bear in mind that legal cigarettes cause roughly four hundred thousand deaths a is hard to imagine the limited distribution provided by the criminal underworld could compete with this tragic figure.to sum up, the harm visited upon our society by tobacco usage is will be no solution other than to control tobacco much in the same way that the government now controls drugs which could allow people to remain attentive to the seriousness of the effects of these substances,and hopefully to prohibit their usage.雅思考试写作范文2Nowadays, the gap between the city and the countryside becomes more and more overt, which arouses colossal concerns. To understand t he solution, let’s take a closer look at the causes of the gap at first.The main reason of the gap is the unequal investment between city and rural area. China is a typical example. While more and more money is being invested to the coastal areas and big cities, such as Beijing and Shanghai, the lack of investment barriers greatly the society development of rural area and western regionsThe low education level partly sharps the gap. There is no doubt that the prime force of productivity is education. However, because of poverty, thousands of people go to work without graduating from primary school. The poorer, the few children go to school. This bad cycle finally leads to the dream of rich becoming a dream that is hard to realize.Moreover, the rural area is short of people with high quality. A survey proved that most of university students, whether they come from city or countryside, choose big cities instead of poor areas to work. The rural area can neither adept talent man nor attract talent man. No wonder the gap is increasing largely.Hence, The government ought to knock itself out to decrease the gap as soon as possible. First, balance the investment between city and rural area. In addition, the education level should be improved, especially pay attention on raising high quality people. Besides, let more people realize the latent capacity of rural area in order to attract talent and investment. The set up of CCTV channel12-western region channel is a good example.Only when the ways mentioned above are realized step by step, can the gap between the cities and the countryside be bridged.雅思考试写作范文3the birth of cars have made an enormous change to our the past,we travel from one place to another only by foot,nowaday,cars can do it .its goes withour saying that the invention of cars bring great benefit to all of as proverb goes:no garden without is not exception.owing a car has a lot of one thing,car provide us the most convient way of can get around freely without spenting a lot of always found driving is so another,its the comfortable to drive a always can stay warm and dry even in rainy whether,in addition,drivers are usually safe in their cars when they are out at night.Cars bring the human merits,their side-effects graudually come to the run a car need a lot of oil,which is getting less and increasing number of cars contribute the lacking of more and more cars are used,the traffic ecpecially in big cities is getting heaver and heavier,which lead to the serious social problem--traffic addition,the inceasing numbers of cars ,which excaust sent a huge quantities of carbon monoxide into make the air of cities unbreathabe,it strip people contact with frensh air.therefore,the new energy should be explored to replace the oil so that our envionmental pollution can be avioded .and the strick law should be issued to keep the numbers of cars under heavier traffic can be solluted!雅思考试写作范文4Private cars vs Public trafficAs traffic problems become more and more serious in many cities of developed and developing countries, their governments have to try hard and loads of money and energy have been spent to deal with them.Firstly, it is not efficient for the commuters to use their private cars to and back from their workplaces. Occasionally we can see they have to sit on the wheels wasting time and fuel in a heavy traffic jam. At the same time, through burning the fossil fuels, green house gas CO2, CO1, acid rain gas SO2, fumes and dusts are being released into the atmosphere, all of which heavily overload the environment. Thirdly, with the increase of private cars, the road trafficaccidents are also rise dramatically. For example, in a city with 5000 cars, there will be at least 250 accidents happening everyday, which also burden the public healthy services.On the contrary, expected public traffic may be an ideal solution to these problems. For example city buses and railways are widely used or being constructed by many cities. People can take buses easily, which can be found every 10 minutes or less in the peak time. Actually, Nottingham Transport Company is building its own light railway in the city, which is announced by the speak man of the company, “It will be completed in the next year, the tickets will be very competitive and at the same time the travel will be very safe and comfortable.”On the other hand, public traffic had its own disadvantages. Usually it cannot provide door-to-door service. It is inconvenient to go shopping by public vehicles. Sometimes you must wait a long time for the train. And quite a lot of people prefer to enjoy driving.In conclusion, developing the public traffic is a useful approach to deal with these difficulties. One possible way, if not the best, is to taxi private cars heavily and use these revenues to provide citizens cheaper public traffic services.雅思考试写作范文5Nowhere in the world has the issue of tobacco been so much debated as inour society. Nowadays, tobacco is more harmful than drug to people’shealth, therefore many people think that smoking is legal that is a direct andprimary reason to induce this kind of problem. The above point is certainlytrue; this essay will outline three reasons.The main reason is that tobacco is a silent killer to smokers. Tobacco isknown to be the probable cause of some 25 different diseases, and for some,such as lung cancer, bronchitis and emphysema, it is the main cause.According to a WHO report four million people die yearly from tobacco-related diseases, that is one death every eight seconds. Tobacco is significantlybecoming a greater cause of death and disability than any other single cause.Another reason is that more and more young people are under 18 years old who smoke cigarette have been blinded by the deceit of tobacconists. Tobacco among adolescents remains stubbornly persistent. Smoking among adolescents rose in the 1990s in several developed countries， such as China,Vietnam and Thailand . While new markets are being opened by the tobacco industry actions, old markets have not been closed. Tobacco is a global threat.Last but not the least reason is the increase in cigarette smuggling. Becauseof tobacco smuggling, the legal retailing and distribution systems are badlyaffected, and faced with increased lawlessness and heavy tax losses. This behavior severely affects the economy.In conclusion, the tobacco should be considered illegal. Perhaps a pack ofcigarettes is less harmful than another drug, but tobacco is actually thebiggest killer of all the drugs.雅思考试写作范文6travelling to a different culture can be an overwhelming,indeed,even an intimidating is very easy for misunderstandings to occur,and tourists are often deterred from places of cultural interest through fear of offending the indigenous would argue,it is up to the locals to accomodate visitors by speaking their language,serving their cuisine,and generally making them 'at home'.without doing this,local perple can be considered as unfriendly and viewed with suspicion by they are dissuaded from staying,which is ultimately detrimental to the local community,as the tourists take their spending-money with them.the counterview argues that acting naturally does not necessarily equate with being a local person wishes to live their life as his or her ancestors have done for centuries then visitors should show respect and allow them to do fact,many would argue that immersing one's self in a different culture is vital in order to truly appreciate is gained bytravelling,potentially,thousands of miles to experience the same language,food and culture that could have been found a few miles down the road from one's is a waste ofmoney,nothing is learned from the experience,and the memories saved will be less vivid. this is the point of view i it is vital for many countries' economies to welcome tourists,it does not have to imitate them so as to encourage their travellers have the right mind-set and show respect,all they need to do is to let the locals carry out their day-to-day lives to gain many insights into the this way,visitor and host can mutually benefit each other,through an increased income,and an enriching experience,respectively.雅思考试写作范文7Recent years, because traffic is convenient day-by-day, people have a more chance to travel around the world. The plane can make us reach any corner of the earth in a short time. Some people think visitors to others countries should imitated local custom and behaviors. Some people disagree; they think the host country should welcome culture different.As the a famous saying goes: Do as they do at Rome. The knowledge of local custom can help outside person adapt to the new environment rapidly. Moreover, each place has the own unique culture, may keep in touch more ideology and culture through the local folkways and customs. For instance, a Chinese people came to Britain, he can imitate British life style. Inthis way, He can understand British habit more thoroughly, thus, make himself live a more comfortable life in Britain.On the other hand, the outside thought has a lot of positive influence on local culture too. For example, the outside thought could bring the new theory and inject vigor into local culture. The exchanges of outside thought and traditional culture can help people to find out about the culture of other areas and countries.Making a general survey of human history, it is a positive trend that the nationality has been merging all the time. So, we should not only propagate local culture for the outside people but also study outside culture and custom. In this way, the earth would become a family, all the people would get along harmoniously.雅思考试写作范文8nowaday,the culture shock exists between the tourists and host people consider should try to model themselves on the local culture and totally agree with the above point.firstlly,by abserving and understanding of local culture,the tourists can reduce the chance of offending the locals and misunderstanding consiously and manchu area of china,people think the dog is their you come there,you must always show respects and love to dog,otherwise it will lead to the embarrassment and conflict.secondly,understanding and following the activites of local people can show our respects to doing things with their way,we will be easy to establish the good relationship with local residents often feel friendly when their culture are imitated and are unconsiously bring us into the members of them.in addition,imitating can let us gain insigts into other not only can know whats people's life is like in other counties,we also can be enlarged our knowledge and broaded our horizon,which will be cherish wealth in our life.to sum should adjust themselves adapt to the local habits and customs,which will make them fully enjoy their travel and live in harmony!雅思考试写作范文9Along with the mass use of computer technology in education circles, we are delighted to witness the uncountable conveniences be brought by computer. Some people even argue that teacher will not be important in classroom any more. Is this reasonable? Personal speaking, I oppose holding such a ridiculous conclusion.In the first place, the feature of teaching defines teachers as an essential part in education. It is well known that teaching is a process of mutual-communication: firstly, teachersimpart/initiate knowledge or ideas to students, then students should promptly transfer their feedback to teachers, moreover, teachers will give students the final interpretation according to their specific requirement. Besides, teachers also can (teach students in accordance of their aptitude). In contrast, what computers can do is merely to display materials which havealready stored in their EMS memory or mechanically execute operator’s commands. We actually can not image what our education will being if computers substitute teachers totally. As to another reason, it seems that teacher’s role as a supervis or is more and more overt. Computer is indeed a controversy, it not only can be an efficient education assistant, but also can become an addiction which includes too much violent and (pornographic propaganda). Youngsters do not mature fully in psychology, therefore, without teachers' supervision, many children would spend hours playing computer games or surfing unhealthy websites, which are regarded as a waste of valuable time and intelligence, instead of trying to have a good command of knowledge and skills.We never deny that computers are absolutely an available education implements, furthermore, the combination of teacher and computer technology will greatly improve our education quality. However, from all of the grounds of argument mentioned above, we can safely draw a conclusion that teacher will not be replaced by computer in the classroom. 雅思考试写作范文10Which element between nature and nurture plays the major role in children’s personality and development is always a controversial problem. Of course, which you prefer depends on your own experience, life style and emotional concern. Here, I would like to illustrate my point of view about it.Admittedly, different nature determines people have distinguished starting points in their lifetime. To beginning, i n light of medical research, a person’s blood type has considerable influence to his character. General speaking, for example, a person whose blood type is A means that his personality is amiable and tender probably. Besides, the physical condition, even a ppearance may influence a person’s development. Statistics shows that beautiful people are more confident than others, because they do not need to worry about the prejudice from public. Obviously, some parts of our personality have been decided when we born.On the other hand, although nature is important during the course of shaping personality, we cannot ignore another essential element, nurture. There are many factors which affect the development of children, both parental support and education being vital influence. It is reported that the kid whose parents are divorced is more likely has psychological troubles than those with a harmonious family. By contrast, as we all know, good education will positively cultivate a person’s personality and improve his self-restraint in a big way.In summary, from what has been discussed above, we may safely arrive at the conclusion that partly because of different nature, partly because of different nurture, people have their unique personality.雅思考试写作范文11The computer is widely used in education and some people think teachers are not playing an important role in the classroom. To what extend do you agree or disagree?With more and more extensive use of computers in education, some people claim that the importance attached to teachers has been jeopardized. Therefore, computers will replaceteachers in the classroom. However, it seems quite clear to me that learning from teachers is the most important way that cannot be substituted for students.Naturally, some people maintain that computer should instead of the old way of education. They hold that the strong function of the computer offers a new mode of education, which is more interesting, more vivid and more acceptable by children. The students will not face to the serious teachers and calm classes any more, which are replaced by a brand-new world offered by the Internet. In addition, this can decrease the investment on the foundational education and save the human resources and material resources.As an assistant, computers do help teachers with their work, but they can never replace the important role of a real teacher. The main functions of any computer are storage and calculation. It cannot think on its own anyway. All the teaching data stored in computers are the essence of teaching experience generalized by many teachers during their work. Hence, to assist education, what a computer can do is just to repeat the contents summarized by real teachers.In addition, each student has different talents and different defects, and accordingly, they may come across various problems during their study. Computer programmer designing the software, however, cannot predict these problems. Therefore, a single computer can never solve these problems without a teacher’s guidanceFurthermore, if the significance of teacher has been weakened, the number of teachers may be decreased, that is to say, many teachers may be laid-off. If such a case comes to reality, series of social problems will break out, such as the drop of working opportunity which will surely make the burden of whole society become heavier and heavier.In conclusion, although computer-aided-education has spread widely, teachers still play s crucial part in the classroom, which cannot and will not be replaced by computer.雅思考试写作范文12In this IT age, computers are widely used in the classroom in order to enrich the methods of teaching. This phenomenon gives some the illusion that the thing teaching students is no longer the teacher but a computer. Personally, I disagree with this opinion.As another machines, computer doesn’t enable to control itself. Though computers are capable of learning from their mistakes and improving on their performance, they need details instructions from human being in order to be able to operate. They can never, as it were lead independent lives, no mention teaching students. In case a computer lacks the control of a teacher, there is no difference between a computer and waste.Not only this, but computers, unlike a teacher, can’t solve a variety of new problems. Everything is developing in today’s society, including education. For example, a student suddenly asks a creative question that the computer isn’t programmed for, it can do nothing, while teacher can explain clearly though abundant teaching experience.Last but not least, the computer can’t communicate with students from emotion. Such as an eyesight or gesture of teacher can transfer his or her idea and feeling to students. In this way,students can feel more human touch in the class. In comparison, the computer is too dry and dusty to understand.All in all, no matter how nice a computer is, it can’t take the place of teacher. Of course, I don’t mean that computer is useless. In contrary, I believe it will become the most powerful assistants to teacher in further.雅思考试写作范文13Computer, the most exciting and significant invention in 20 century, will reshape our lives and our world. As a result, some people proclaim that computers should be involved into our classroom, and replace the roles of human teachers. However, I cannot agree with their point of view.Admittedly, as the useful tools, computers can become the optimum assistants for human teachers in the classroom. To beginning, vivid pictures shown on screen can motivate students’ interest and curiosity dramatically. Moreover, the combination of computers and Internet can provide children the abundant information. Although computers enjoy considerable merits, they cannot compare with human teachers for two main reasons. Among countless factors which influence my inclination, there is a most conspicuous one: computers are not as qualified as human teachers in academic fields. As we all know, students can get the final result of a mathematic question under the help of computers, however, they are still confused on the whole computing process. By contrast, our human teachers’ performance is much better in those cases. They not only can teach students how to analyze and compute the question, but also can remind them what are the possible errors that they may meet. Thus, human teachers are more adequate than computers in academic aspect. The second advantage of human teachers is they can guide students to deal with some psychological problems that they meet in schools. In China, sometimes, teachers even burden many responsibilities that students’ parents have. For example, as for the student with rebellious spirit, the important duty for teachers is to prevent the student from campus violence, even crime. Obviously, computers cannot do that.In summary, from what has been discussed above, we may safely arrive at the conclusion that the positions of human teachers are unshakable, and computers cannot take the places of them.。

雅思写作Task1曲线图考官范文(23)（最新版）编制人：__________________审核人：__________________审批人：__________________编制学校：__________________编制时间：____年____月____日序言作文(composition)是经过人的思想考虑和语言组织，通过文字来表达一个主题意义的记叙方法。

作文分为小学作文，中学作文，大学作文(论文)。

作文体裁包括：记叙文、说明文、应用文、议论文。

作文并不神秘，要想写好一篇文章，首先要多看，多想，勤于观察，积累素材。

只有细致的观察生活，积累素材才是写好作文的基础。

首先要明确你要写的主题，认真的审题，列出大纲，不要只注意题目中要求的字有多少，要多注意题目的本身，要多读多想，准确的用好词语和修饰语。

这是审题的关键，要确立好主题的依据，要精心的选材，布局列题，有的材料，还要分析整理。

这就要对材料进行分类，比较，概括，筛选。

我们不要象盖房子那样的把所有的材料都堆砌起来，要合理恰当的组合，具体的说开头和结尾要略写，那么经过就要仔细的推敲，修辞，润色，写好以后不要急于交稿，反复检查认真的修改。

古人说：书读百遍，其义自见。

熟读唐诗三百首，不会作诗也会吟。

这些都说明一个道理，只要你多看书，多读书对你的写作文有一定的好处。

只要你明白这样的一个道理，作文就是要你把生活中喜，怒，哀，乐用文字经过加工，修饰。

整理，也就是我们说的作文。

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The graph below gives information from a 2008 report about consumption of energy in the USA since 1980 with projections until 2030.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.Sample Answer:The given bar graph compares the consumption of energy in the USA from 1980 and also gives projection of it till the year 2030. As is presented in the graph, petrol and oil were the main two sources of energy while the use of coal would increase in the coming years.As is presented in the line graph, initially in 1980 35 quadrillion units of oil and petrol energy was consumedin the USA while 15-20 quadrillion units each of coal and natural gas was consumed. In this year less than 5 quadrillion energy got from nuclear, solar and hydropower was consumed. The consumption of all of these energy sources kept on increasing with some fluctuations. It is projected that in 2030 the consumption of petrol and oil will reach to over 50 quadrillion units while coal and natural gas’s consumption will reach from 20 to 30 quadrillions. The consumption of nuclear, solar/ wind and hydropower will also increase and would reach to over 5 quadrillion units.In 2030, oil and petrol would be mostly consumed to get energy while in the second most consumed energy source would be coal.。

雅思写作第一部分范文雅思写作第一部分，通常是图表类的描述，这部分可不能小瞧哦！它可是给整篇作文奠定基础的呢。

我拿到一个图表的时候，首先就是整体看一下。

比如说这个图表是关于不同年龄段人群的消费习惯的柱状图。

我不会急着去描述每个柱子具体的数值，先得有个整体的印象。

就像我们看一幅画，先看个大概布局一样。

我心里就想啊，“哦，这里面好像年轻人的消费在某些方面特别突出呢！”这时候你也可以试着这么做，先从宏观上把握一下图表的主要特征。

然后呢，我就开始挑重点描述啦。

像那些特别高或者特别低的数据点，那肯定是要着重讲一讲的。

比如说在这个消费习惯的图里，年轻人群体在娱乐方面的消费占比超级高。

我可能就会这么写：“年轻人群体在娱乐方面的消费占比高达百分之四十多，这一数据着实惊人！”我觉得这种表达更有力，能一下子抓住考官的眼球。

你也可以找到属于你的那个最有冲击力的数据点，用一种很直白又生动的方式写出来。

在描述数据变化趋势的时候我喜欢用一些简单又准确的词汇。

像“逐渐上升”“急剧下降”之类的。

要是数据是波动的呢，我就会说“上下起伏”。

可别小看这些简单的词，用好了效果超棒的！从我的经验来看，这样的用词在这部分足够了，不需要太花哨的词汇，关键是要把趋势表达清楚。

还有哦，这一段中，你可以根据个人的观点调整论述方向。

如果你觉得某个数据之间的对比很有趣，那就着重去对比一下。

比如说老年人群体和年轻人群体在生活必需品上的消费对比。

我可能会写：“老年人群体在生活必需品上的消费占比相对稳定，维持在百分之三十左右，然而年轻人群体在这方面的消费占比仅仅百分之十五左右，差距相当明显。

”这是不是让你有种豁然开朗的感觉呢？有时候，我还会在描述中穿插一点小的个人推测或者评价。

当然啦，不能太多，毕竟这是在描述图表事实。

我可能会说：“年轻人群体在娱乐方面如此高的消费占比，或许反映出当代社会娱乐产业对年轻人的巨大吸引力吧。

”你也可以适当这么做，让你的文章有点自己的思考在里面。

其他表达方式： In my view/opinion, ... I agree with the view that... , for the following reasons.
如果在第二句交代辩论话题时，用的是“一些人认为...， 而 另一些人认为... ”，第三句表达观点的时候可以简单地写成 如下形式： I agree with the former/latter view for the following reasons.
第四段 第一句 讨论反方观点 That is not to say we can ignore the other subjects, such as culture, art, PE, etc, or the country's progress will be constrained in long term.
第三段 第一句 本段中心句 Moreover, investing more money in science can cultivate large amounts of talents with scientific knowledge and technological skills for different industries, driving the progress of the whole country.
第五段 第一句 重申写作观点 In summary, government should input more money in science to promote the betterment of the country. 其他表达方式 In conclusion, To sum up, To conclude,
表示“进一步，增加信息”同义词 furthermore, as well as, besides, moreover, apart from this, in addition, additionally, what is more not only...but also,