广东高考英语书面表达基础写作指导
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广东高考英语卷基础写作指导(系列1)第一讲记叙文:如何写人一、写作指导高考英语基础写作中的写人侧重人物的介绍,可以用第一人称(如写求职信),也可以用第三人称,时态常常用一般现在时和一般过去时,具体的人称和时态要依据写作的要求来确定。
写作过程中要注意以下几个方面的问题:1.人物写作通常需要介绍人物的姓名、年龄、外貌、学历、经历、专业、爱好、特长、事迹、性格等多个方面,但英语基础写作需要严格按照写作要求来写,包括所给的全部信息点,既不能遗漏,也不能随意添加。
2.对题目所给的信息要进行适当重组,安排好写作顺序,突出重点信息。
重点信息通常是写作的目的所在,比如求职要重点突出学历、经历,新闻报道要重点突出事迹,介绍自己的老师、朋友要突出他们的特点,等等。
3.正确运用描写人物的词汇和句型。
4.注意运用正确的时态。
描写人物的外貌、性格、兴趣等常用一般现在时,而描写人物的出生、教育背景、经历、事迹常用一般过去时。
二、常用词语外貌特征:beautiful, big nose, black eyes,fat, good-looking,handsome, healthy, near-sighted,ordinary-looking,pretty,short,strong, tall,thin, with a big nose, with a big smile, white-haired,1.80 metres tall, etc.性格特点:absent-minded, attractive,bad-tempered,be ready to help others, bright,charming,confident, diligent,friendly, generous, have a good temper, humorous,independent, kind, kind-hearted,lazy,narrow-minded, naughty,patient,think of others, smart,talk ative,warm-hearted,wise,etc.出生年龄:a twenty-five-year-old young man, as a boy of 15, at the age of 20, be born on February 12th, 1987 , d uring his childhood, in one’s fifties, live a happy/ hard life, spend his childhood in the countryside, the son of a poor family, when he was a small boy, etc.兴趣爱好:be angry with sb for sth, be angry about, be delighted in doing, be good at singing, be interested in English, be fond of music, be crazy about, be pleased with, be sick for, be sorry for, be strict in one’s work, be worried about, do well in his research work, ,enjoy doing, expect to do, feel surprised at, have a strong desire to do, look forward to doing sth., long for (long to do), make rapid progress in, put one’s heart into, take a pleasure in doing; wish to do, work hard at his studies, etc.教育背景:be admitted to Beijing University, be enrolled in, fail in the test,a master’s degr ee, get on well with one’s lessons, give sb. a passing grade, ,go abroad to further one’s study, graduate from Physics Department of Qinghua University, his father was very strict with him, lay a good foundation in English, major in history, receive a d octor’s degree, pass the examination, study hard at, take several courses at school, take an active part in classwhen at college, etc.经历事迹:become a member of the team, concentrate oneself to doing sth., devote oneselfto one’s business, do sth with gr eat determination and perseverance, do research into this field, encourage sb to do sth, fight for our revolutionary course, give up one’slife for sth, have a good way of doing sth, have a talent for language, make up one’s mind to do sth., overcome many difficulties, receive the Nobel Prize for physics, serve as nurse, set a new world record of 110 metre hurdling, try one’s best to dosth., win the first prize in the competition, win a gold /silver/ bronze medal, etc.他人评价:an inspiring leader, a model worker, an advanced teacher, be respected by all his students, be honored as, be considered as, be famous/known as, be regarded as, his hard work brought him great success, make great contributions to our country, one of the most important persons in the past ten years, consider sb. as a genius, consider sb. as the greatest leader, set a good example for all of us, speak highly of him, etc.参考范文:Dear Manager,I am writing you a letter in order to apply for a position in your company. My name is Li Hua and I was born in Foshan City of Guangdong Province in August 1981. I studied in Foshan No. 1 Middle School from 1994 - 2000, and then I came to study in the Computer Department of Guangzhou University for four years.I studied computer science, Chinese, maths, English, P.E,and now I am working for a computer company. I like pop music and swimming very much, and I once won the first prize for swimming in the school competition.I am waiting for your reply.Thank youYours TruelyLi Hua参考例文:Hi, everyone. I would like to introduce two famous sport stars, Yao Ming and Liu Xiang. Yao Ming, born in Shanghai in 1980, is a world famous basketball player. He is now one of the best players in Team Rocket in NBA, and he has been in All-Star Team for several times. Liu Xiang, who was also born in Shanghai but three years younger than Yao Ming, is a world champion in the 110-metre hurdls. He won the first prize in the Athens Olympic Games and broke the world record soon after that. Both of them love music, but Yao Ming likes listening to pop music while Liu Xiang likes singing.参考范文1. Li Ming, the monitor of Class 1 Grade 2, is healthy and lively. She does well in all her subjects, and she is fond of sports, singing and dancing. When she came to school, she had quite a lot of difficulties with the language, but with great efforts she made a lot of progress in her English language study. In 2006 she took part in the National Physics Olympic Competition and won the first prize. Li Ming is very strict with herself in her work and daily life,and is always ready to help other people.2.请根据下面的英文短诗,展开适当的想象,写一篇短文。
广东新高考英语作文指导随着广东省新高考改革的推进,英语作文对于广东考生来说变得更为重要。
本文将为考生提供一些指导,帮助他们在新高考英语作文中取得好成绩。
1. 理解题目要求在写作之前,首先要仔细阅读并理解题目要求。
注意关键词,了解所要求的主题、角度以及要求的文体。
这样可以帮助你更好地掌握写作的方向。
2. 确定立意在写作之前,要先确定自己的立意。
可以通过思考、头脑风暴等方式,找到对于所给主题最合适的观点或主张。
立意要明确,确保思路清晰。
3. 选取合适的素材写作过程中,选取合适的素材可以使文章更具说服力和可读性。
可以通过举例、引用数据、引用名人观点等方式来支持自己的观点。
但需要注意的是,引用的内容必须经过确认,避免引入无法确认真实性的内容。
4. 合理组织文章结构文章结构的合理性对于作文的质量至关重要。
可以采用“提出观点-列举理由-总结观点”的结构,或者根据具体情况选用其他结构。
段落之间要有过渡自然,保持逻辑的连贯性。
5. 注意语言表达作文中使用准确、生动的语言表达可以增加文章的表现力和吸引力。
要注意使用恰当的词汇和句式,避免重复和冗余。
注意语法和拼写错误,确保语言准确无误。
6. 增加亮点在写作过程中,适当增加亮点能够引起阅卷老师的兴趣,提升作文的质量。
可以通过使用比喻、修辞手法、适当的幽默等方式来增加文章的亮点。
7. 注意篇幅控制在新高考英语作文中,篇幅控制很重要。
要根据题目要求合理安排文章的篇幅,控制在适当的字数范围内。
以上是关于广东新高考英语作文的一些建议和指导。
希望以上内容能对广东考生在新高考英语作文中有所帮助。
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广东高考英语作文提纲一、引言1. 介绍高考英语作文的重要性2. 阐述作文在英语考试中的分值比重二、作文类型1. 议论文- 定义- 常见题型- 写作技巧2. 记叙文- 定义- 常见题型- 写作技巧3. 说明文- 定义- 常见题型- 写作技巧4. 应用文- 定义- 常见题型(如书信、通知等)- 写作技巧三、作文结构1. 开头- 引入话题- 明确观点2. 正文- 论点阐述- 论据支持- 段落结构3. 结尾- 总结全文- 重申观点- 展望未来四、写作技巧1. 词汇运用- 准确使用同义词 - 避免重复词汇2. 句型变化- 使用复杂句型- 避免简单句型重复3. 逻辑清晰- 论证逻辑清晰- 段落间逻辑关系4. 时态运用- 正确使用时态- 时态一致性五、常见错误分析1. 语法错误- 时态错误- 语态错误- 名词单复数错误2. 拼写错误- 单词拼写错误- 专有名词拼写错误3. 标点符号错误- 标点符号使用不当- 标点符号遗漏六、备考策略1. 阅读理解- 通过阅读提升词汇量- 学习文章结构和写作技巧2. 写作练习- 定期练习写作- 模拟考试环境下写作3. 作文批改- 自我批改- 同学互批- 老师批改七、实例分析1. 历年高考作文题目2. 优秀作文示例3. 错误作文示例及改进建议八、结语1. 强调作文在高考中的重要性2. 鼓励学生积极备考,提高写作能力九、附录1. 高考英语作文评分标准2. 高考英语作文常用词汇表3. 高考英语作文常用句型集锦十、参考文献1. 教育部门发布的高考英语考试大纲2. 高考英语作文指导书籍3. 英语写作教学论文此提纲旨在帮助广东地区的考生系统地准备高考英语作文部分,通过结构化的内容安排,确保考生能够在考试中取得优异的成绩。
---------------------------------------------------------------最新资料推荐------------------------------------------------------ 2012广东高考英语书面表达基础写作指导高考题型解题策略点拨2012 广东高考英语书面表达基础写作指导Basic Writing 请根据以下的情景说明, 使用 5 个规范的英语句子描述全部所给的信息内容。
标题为 My English Learning 【情景说明】我学英语已经六年了,在英语学习上有了一定的进步,但总是觉得英语难学,尤其是英语中的一些习惯用法。
自己今后一定要努力学习这门有用的外语,争取早日掌握这门语言。
Basic Writing 从上述例子同学们可以明白什么样的句子叫“规范的英语句子”。
其实,“规范的英语句子”就是我们经常讲的三种句子: A) Simple sentence: 听到这个消息他很高兴。
B) Compound sentence A: 他给我一本书但我忘记带回家了。
C) Compound sentence B: 他所做的事与我无关。
Here are 3 ways to make sentences: I.巧妙运用短语,写出规范的简单句: 1)借助名词短语做同位语如:李立,男,19 岁,1986 年生;籍贯:广东。
2)借助介词短语做定语如:李飞,男,10 岁,棕色短发,身穿白色茄克。
3)借助介词短语做状语如:有了 Tom 的帮助,我们很快就找到1/ 10了他们的村子。
4)借助非谓语动词短语做定语或状语如:他们站在大树下,等待着总统的到来。
II. 巧用连接词,写出规范的并列句:如:他给我钱,我不要。
He gave me a lot money but I refused. 如:我刚到拐角处,就见到你啦。
I was just walking down the street corner when I saw you. III. 用好从句和引导词,写出规范的复合句: 1) 名词性从句1---------------------------------------------------------------最新资料推荐------------------------------------------------------ 高考题型解题策略点拨如:老师生气。
原因:王力迟到。
2) 定语从句如:中国,地处亚洲东部;特点:地大物博、人口众多。
3) 状语从句如:雷锋还活在我们心中,我深受感动。
实战练习 1. [情景说明] 请根据以下的情景说明, 使用 5 个规范的英语句子描述全部所给的信息内容。
通知:新光中学高三年级学生将于 9 月 9 日去体检。
体检地点:第一人民医院体检时间:9 月 9 日,星期六注意:1、7:45 在医院门口集合,可以骑车或步行前往; 2、体检前空腹;3、在医院要保持安静,听从医生和护士的安排。
实战练习 2 理清答题思路写作内容:第 25 届潍坊国际风筝节将于 2008 年 4 月在山东潍坊举行,请你以导游的身份写一篇介绍潍坊基本情况的 5 句话短文。
地理位置气候资源风筝节历史位于山东半岛,总面积 1.59 万平方公里,人口 863 万。
宜人的气候,春季风多雨少,年平均气温摄氏 12.3 度。
悠久的历史,富饶的矿产和水资源,是中国优秀旅游城市。
1984 年开始举办国际风筝节,一年一度。
eful words and expressions: 位置23/ 10高考题型解题策略点拨占地面积富饶的平方公里矿藏人口水产宜人的气候旅游城市多风举办城市雨少一年一度年平均气温国际风筝节悠久的历史 II.Translate the following sentences: 潍坊位于山东半岛中部。
潍坊的总面积 1.59 万平方公里。
潍坊的人口 863 万。
潍坊气候宜人。
潍坊春季风多雨少。
潍坊的年平均气温摄氏 12.3 度。
潍坊有着悠久的历史。
潍坊有富饶的矿产和水产资源。
潍坊是中国优秀旅游城市。
潍坊自 1984 年开始举办一年一度的国际风筝节。
bine the sentences : How to write complex sentences? How to make it fluent? 分词(定语,主语,状语) / with 结构 1. 潍坊位于山东半岛中部,总面积 1.59 万平方公里, 人口 863 万。
How to write complex sentences? 分词(定语,主语,状语) / with 结构 / 从句(定语,状语……) 潍坊气候宜人,春季风多雨少。
年平均气温摄氏 12.3 度。
How to write complex sentences? 分词(定语,主语,状语) / with 结构 / 从句 / as (作为)潍坊有着悠久的历史,富饶的矿产和水产资源,是中国优秀旅游城市。
---------------------------------------------------------------最新资料推荐------------------------------------------------------ How to write complex sentences? 分词(定语,主语,状语) /with 结构/ 从句3/ as5/ 10高考题型解题策略点拨潍坊自 1984 年开始举办一年一度的国际风筝节。
组织成文:2012 广东高考英语书面表达基础写作指导Basic Writing 注:所给情景有时是中文要点,有时是表格。
4答案---------------------------------------------------------------最新资料推荐------------------------------------------------------ 高考题型解题策略点拨①I have been learning English for over 6 years. ②I have made some progress in my English. ③But I always feel English is hard to learn, especially some English idioms are difficult. ④I will work hard at this useful foreign language. ⑤I will try hard to grasp this foreign language. My English Learning ① It is six y ears since I began to learn English. ② With the help of my teachers and classmates, I have made progress in my English. ③ Now I’m doing well both in writing and reading in English. ④ But I still find it hard to learn English, such as some difficult idioms. ⑤Difficult as it is, I have made up my mind to master this useful language by my hard work. A) Simple sentence: Hearing the news, he was happy. B) Compound sentence A: He gave me a book but I forgot to bring it back home. C) Compound sentence B: What he is doing has nothing to do with me. Here are 3 ways to make sentences: I.巧妙运用短语,写出规范的简单句: 1)Li Li, a boy of 19, was born in Guangdong in 1986. 2) Li Fei is a ten-year-old boy with short brown hair and a white jacket. 3)With the help of Tom, we soon found their village. 4)They are standing under the big tree, waiting for the president. II. 巧用连接词,写出规范的并列句: He gave me a lot money but I refused. I was just walking7/ 10down the street corner when I saw you. III. 用好从句和引导词,写出规范的复合句: 1) 名词性从句 That Wang Li came late to school made the teacher very angry. 2) 定语从句 China, which lies in the east of Asia, is a great country with a large area and population as well as rich natural resources. 3) 状语从句 I was deeply moved by this, because I know Lei Feng is still living in our hearts. 实战练习 1. Notice ① The students in Senior Three of Xinguang Middle School will go to have a physical examination in the First People’s Hospital on Saturday, 9th Sept. ② We’ll meet at the hospital gate at 7:45. ③ You may either walk there or go there by bike. ④ We are not allowed to eat or drink anything before the examination. ⑤ Please keep quiet and listen to the doctors and nurses when you are there. 实战练习 2 答案 I.be located in windy seafood products cover an area of little rain tourist city square kilometers a long history host city a population of be rich in annual a pleasant climate mineral resources yearly average temperature International Kite Flying Festival II.1. Weifang is located in the middle of Shandong Peninsula.5---------------------------------------------------------------最新资料推荐------------------------------------------------------高考题型解题策略点拨2. Weifang covers an area of 15.9 thousand square kilometers. 3. Weifang has a population of 8.63 million.4. Weifang has a pleasant climate.5. Weifang has a windy spring with little rain.6. The yearly average temperature of Weifang is 12.3° C.7. Weifang has a long history.8. Weifang is rich in mineral resources and seafood products.9. Weifang is an outstanding tourist city in China. 10. Since 1984, Weifang has been the host city of the annual International Kite Flying Festival. III.1. Located in the middle of Shandong Peninsula, Weifang covers an area of 15.9 square kilometers with a population of 8.63 million. 2.The climate here is pleasant and enjoyable, especially in spring when it is windy and has little rain. 3.The average temperature of Weifang is 12.3° C 4. As an outstanding tourist city with a long history in China, Weifang is rich in both mineral resources and seafood products.5. Since 1984, Weifang has been the host city of the annual International Kite Flying Festival. Welcome you to Weifang!Located in the middle of Shandong Peninsula, Weifang covers an area of 15.9 square kilometers with a population of 8.63 million. The climate here is pleasant and enjoyable, especially in spring when it is windy and has little rain,and the average9/ 10temperature of Weifang is just 12.3° C. What’s more, as an outstanding tourist city with a long history in China, Weifang is rich in both mineral resources and seafood products. Therefore, Weifang has been the host city of the annual International Kite Flying Festival since 1984. I wish you a pleasant stay here!6。