湖北高考英语话题作文

1 第五模块 短文写作

【考纲解读】

短文写作是一个高度综合性的题目，旨在考查考生的英语表达能力，看考生是否能够运用所学的英语知识和掌握的技能进行思想交流。该题要求考生根据提示语要求，应用所学知识将所提示的信息组成行文连贯、文理畅通、语言得体的文章。它不但要求考生有丰富的语言语法知识，而且要有较强的语言表达能力和逻辑思维能力，是一种复合型的题型。

• 【命题透视】

• 分析湖北高考短文写作，不难发现如下特点：

• 湖北卷“短文写作”一改以往命题给出具体内容要点的做法，要求考生根据英文提示，结合生活中的一个事例，根据所给的英语提示，写一篇话题作文。这种“开放式”的论述文的命题形式给考生很大的自由发挥空间，对写作的布局谋篇提出了较高要求，要求考生既要会发表观点认识，又要会进行描写叙述。这种写作命题有利于立体考查学生的语言知识、创新思维能力和价值观，具有较强的选拔功能；同时，也有助于引领高中教师在新课改的教学中认真落实“知识与能力、过程与方法、情感态度与价值观”的三维目标。

针对湖北短文写作的命题特点，在具体写作时要注意以下几点：

一、 读“提示语”，锁定写作“话题”

湖北高考的英文提示语其实是让学生在英文语境中选择一个恰如其分的话题，所以读懂提示语，选择合适的话题是写作的关键。近年来，话题的写作始终围绕中学生的健康成长、社会人生观、价值观等方面进行，写作时要做到“观点”和“事例”的统一性、互衬性。

二、 拟定提纲，按照规律行文写作

湖北高考英语短文写作多采用三段式结构，即引言(introduction)——主体(body)——结尾(conclusion)。引言部分通常给出，让学生在限定的范围内组织要点，完成主体部分和结尾部分。写作时要遵循以下规律：

1．开头部分

开头部分必须点题，用 2－3个句子完成，其中要有一个漂亮的过渡句。

2．主体部分

主体部分其实是让学生用言简意赅的语言叙述一个结构完整、思想意义饱满的事例。注意所讲的事例一定要能突出话题的中心，可用8—10个句子完成。

3．结尾部分

结尾部分要用概括性的语言来总结全文主题，得出结论，回归话题。其实，该部分就是在叙事的基础上加以评论，是记叙文写作中的“小抒情”。

真题典例

（2013年湖北高考作文）请你根据以下提示，结合生活中的一个实例，用英语写篇短文。

We all know that “sticks and stones may break our bones”, but we should also be aware that

words can hurt people, too.

注意：①无须写标题，不得照抄英语提示语；

②除诗歌外，文体不限；

③文中不得透露个人姓名和学校名称；

④词数为120左右。

Sometimes, bad words are to us what knives are to our body. I learned this from one of my

experiences that I went through during Senior One school life.

One day, when I was playing volleyball with my classmates in my PE class, I missed 2 several chances that I should have grasped to meet the ball. What surprised me most was that my

best friend Peter called me “fool”. I was so hurt that I almost accepted the fact that our friendship

came to an end. It was my classmates’ comfort and persuasion as well as Peter’s apology and

explanation that helped me realize he did have a strong sense of cooperation and teamwork. It

wasn’t long before I forgave him and we were again close friends as ever.

From this story, I am definitely convinced that bad words really have a bad influence on

us, and that only with a good understanding of them can we get through and get along well.

(一)

[2012·湖北卷]

请根据以下提示，并结合事例，用英语写一篇短文，谈谈昨天，今天及明天。

You cannot choose what you are given, but you can choose how you make use of it.

注意： ①无须写标题，不得照抄英语提示语；②除诗歌外，文体不限；③文中不得透露个人姓名和学校名称；④词数为120左右。

【思路点拨】本篇作文属于夹叙夹议的半开放式作文，要求考生结合生活中的事例来诠释“我们不能选择我们被给予的东西，但我们能选择如何利用好给予我们的东西”。考生在写作过程中一定要结合生活中的事例(事例的篇幅应该占大部分)进行总结和提炼，起到点睛作用。注意生活事例列举部分应该用一般过去时，而最后的总结部分应该用一般现在时。以2～3段为宜。写作过程中应适当注意素材及词语的选择，注意对生活感知能力的挖掘。

One possible version：

Three years ago I failed an important exam in my life and became a student in an ordinary

school. Disappointed as I felt at the shabby campus and the poorlyequipped classroom, I found the

teachers patient and considerate. Besides, I enjoyed the friendly atmosphere in class. I decided to

make the best of it. I worked hard and got along well with my teachers and classmates. Whenever

I had difficulties, they were always available. Soon, I became one of the top students in my class,

which greatly increased my confidence and got me motivated.

My experience tells me that it is not what you are given but how you make use of it that

determines who you are.

(二)

[2011·湖北卷]

请根据以下提示，结合你校园生活中的一个事例，就与人合作这一话题，用英语写一篇短文。

Working in groups at school is an opportunity to learn more about teamwork. Teamwork

shows us how other people's roles fit the purpose of the group, and it teaches us to be patient and

how to respond to different people.

注意：①无须写标题，不得照抄英语提示语；②除诗歌外，文体不限；③内容必须结合校园生活中的一个事例；④文中不得透露个人姓名和学校名称；

One possible version：

Years of school life has taught me a lot of things, of which teamwork is the most important

for me.

In fact, I didn't realize its importance until I was chosen monitor of my class in my senior

middle school. At first, I did most of the duties myself while other students care little about class

activities. As a result, I was tired out and depressed. Then I turned to my teacher and he advised 3 me to cooperate with others. Thus I began to recognize the strengths of my classmates and have

everyone do their part in class.

It is working in teams instead of on my own that has freed me of trouble and made my work more

efficiently.

(三)

[2010·湖北卷]

请你根据以下提示，结合生活中的一个事例，用英语写一篇短文，谈谈微笑的作用。

The best example of universally understood body language may be the smile. A smile can

help us get through difficult situation and find friends in a world of strangers. A smile can open

doors and tear down walls.

注意：①无须写标题；

②内容只需涉及一个方面；

③词数为100左右。

One possible version：

No body language can be more attractive/ fascinating than smiling. Not only can a beautiful