五年高考(2014-2018年)英语满分作文解析及写作素材积累：话题05 人生感悟

话题03 人际关系人际关系指人与人之间的交往与友谊，与家人、朋友、邻居、亲戚或他人之间的情感交流或沟通，如师生关系、父子关系、同学之间的友情等；对他人的感谢、感恩、宽容、道歉、赞扬、微笑等，请求他人同意和帮助、解决问题、处理矛盾冲突、和解，等等.针对个人感情话题，高考命题人可能会要求考生叙述发生在身边的一件事，并表达自己的情感；描述考生在学校所参加的一次活动，并谈谈自己的体会.人际关系方面，高考命题人可能会选择上述“课标解读”中的某一个话题，如宽容、赞扬等，要求考生通过自己或他人的一次经历来发表看法.以下几个具体话题值得关注：(1)有的同学抱怨父母的期望高、作业多、压力太大，或对生活中的其他方面感到不满，请写一篇短文，准备在“我们应该抱怨生活吗”的主题班会上发表你的看法.(2)假如你是李华，一年前你随父母迁移到某地并进入一所当地高中就读，由于不懂当地的话，学习、生活很不顺心，请你向某中学英文报写一封求助信.(3)写一篇短文，参加“增进父母与孩子之间的理解，构建和谐家庭”的演讲比赛.(4)就“如何构建和谐班集体”谈谈你的看法.(5)描写你和你的同学是怎样建立起友好关系的.（6）与中国礼仪有关的相关话题.一、话题常用单词1. acquaintance熟人2.admiration敬佩3. candidate候选人4. communicate交流5. face to face面对面6. contact联系7. relationship关系8. interact互动9.privacy隐私10.mutual相互的二、话题常用短语1. learn from each other 互相学习2. promote the friendship 增进友谊3. improve the relationship改善关系4. show love and concern for sb. 爱护和关心某人5. with the booming of the economy随着经济的繁荣6. with the remarkable improvement of people's living standard随着人民生活水平的显著提高7. advanced science and technology 先进的科学技术8. add much spice / flavor to our daily life为我们的日常生活增添了情趣9. It is commonly believed that …人们普遍认为10. I give my vote to the former / latter opinion.我同意前者(后者)的观点11. exchange ideas/emotions/information交流思想/情感/信息12. Undoubtedly/There is no doubt that毫无疑问13. relieve stress/burden解压减负14. financial burden经济负担15. widen one's horizen/broaden one's vision开阔眼界16. It is undeniable that./There is no denying that. 不可否认17. take effective measures to do sth./something effective must be done to. 采取措施18. make full use of/take advantage of充分利用19. do good to/be beneficial to大有裨益20. lead to/give rise to/contribute to导致、引起21. do harm to/be harmful to对…..有害22. make contributions to society奉献社会三、参考语句话题常用句型1. Good listening can really enable us to get closer to each other.善于倾听使我们彼此走得更近.2. A good relationship between teachers and students is of great importance for our studies. 良好的师生关系对我们的学习很重要.3. To build a good relationship, we should trust in each other. 要建立良好的关系，我们应该彼此信任.4. Only in this way can we enjoy an equal relationship. 只有这样我们才能享有平等的关系.5. They find it easy to communicate with their teachers.他们发觉很容易和老师沟通.6. With their help, I tried my best to study hard and succeeded in entering a key university. 在他们的帮助下，我努力学习，成功地被一所重点大学录取.7. We should value this harmonious relationship between teachers and students.我们应该珍惜师生之间这种和谐的关系.8. With the encouragement and support of my father, I have overcome many difficulties in our life. 在父亲的鼓励和支持下，我克服了生活中的许多困难.9. There’ll be a football game in our school this week.本周我们学校有一场足球比赛.10. Think twice before you do. 三思而后行.11. Great hopes make great man.伟大的抱负造就伟大的人.12. Hope for the best, but prepare for the worst. 抱最好的愿望，做最坏的打算.13. Nowadays, many students always go into raptures at the mere mention of the coming life of high school or college they will begin. 当前，一提到即将开始的学校生活，许多学生都会兴高采烈.14. We should spare no effort to beautify our environment.我们应该不遗余力地美化我们的环境.15. The majority of students believe that part-time job will provide them with more opportunities to develop their interpersonal skills, which may put them in a favorable position in the future job markets.大部分学生相信业余工作会使他们有更多机会发展人际交往能力，而这对他们未来找工作是非常有好处的.16. It is commonly thought that our society had dramatically changed by modern science and technology, and human had made extraordinary progress in knowledge and technology over the recent decades.人们普遍认为现代科技使我们的社会发生了巨大的变化，近几十年人类在科技方面取得了惊人的进步.17. Unfortunately, for most young people, it is not pleasant experience on their first day on campus.然而，对多数年轻人来说，校园刚开始的日子并不是什么愉快的经历.【典例01】（2018·新课标卷I）假定你是李华，你的新西兰朋友Terry将去中国朋友家做客，发邮件向你询问有关习俗.请你回复邮件，内容包括：1．到达时间；2．合适的礼物；3．餐桌礼仪.注意：1．词数100左右；2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯.____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ 【思路点拨】本文是一篇电子邮件类应用文写作.餐桌礼仪也是考生比较熟悉的话题.成文时注意以下几点：一、内容要点要齐全1．到达时间；2．合适的礼物；3．餐桌礼仪.二、时态：主要用一般现在时和将来时；三、人称：第二、三人称.四、注意使用恰当的高级词汇、短语或句型，以提高作文的水平；五、适当使用一些连接词和插入语，使文章表达自然、流畅.1. 浏览信息要点2.三个任务点，第一段内容：问候对方，马上呈现对方所涉及的话题，拜访中国家庭，做客时间的要求和忌讳! 第二段内容：做客拜访的合适礼物，可以适当延展，初次拜访，亲密朋友之间拜访，二次拜访，家庭情况适合的礼物，通用的礼物等.第三段：table manners,可以描述两三个通常的中国人的餐桌礼节和忌讳的地方，有鲜明特色之处，最后一句表达祝愿.3.时态，给对方的建议和说明，用一般现在时，描述风俗礼仪这是客观规律性的东西，用一般现在时.4.头脑风暴短语、句型结构，开始打草稿5.行文6.检查拼写和语法.【满分范文】Dear Terry,How are you doing? Learning that you are about to pay a visit to a Chinese friend and confused about the Chinese customs, I am writing to put forward some advice.If you have any other problems, please don’t hesita te to contact me.YoursLi Hua 【素材积累】做客礼仪：1. 预先约定一个时间以便对方事先作好安排.如果事先已经约定好了时间，就应遵守约定，准时到达，如需提早十分钟二十分钟之内可以接受，不要迟到，以免主人等候，也不要太早到，以免主人未作好准备.这是一个基本礼节问题.2.如果有专属地域文化特色的礼物是最好的.如果朋友家有长辈，带点烟酒和茶叶或一些老人家用的保健品等；如果朋友家有小孩，带点儿童玩具或买箱牛奶，然后加点烟酒或茶叶；不要送钟、梨、伞等这些东西，被认为不吉祥.3.主人会请客人入座上席，再请长辈入座客人旁.入座的时侯要从椅子的左边进入.在中餐结束时，筷子应整齐地放在靠碗右边的桌上，并应等客人们都放下筷子以后，主人示意离席后方可以离开，不能自己吃完了放下筷子就走，这样做是很没礼貌的表现.【典例02】（2016新课标I卷）假定你是李华，暑假想去一家外贸公司兼职，已写好申请书和个人简历（ resume ）.给外教MS Jenkins 写信，请她帮你修改所附材料的文字和格式（format）.注意：1. 词数 100 左右;2. 可以适当增加细节，已使行文连贯.____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ 【写作指导】这是一篇书信类作文，要求给外教 MS Jenkins 写信，请她帮修改申请书和个人简历的文字和格式.考生成文时应注意：1. 要点要齐全：（1）说明目的；（2）请求帮忙；（3）表示感谢.2. 时态：以一般现在时为主；3. 人称：第一人称为主；4. 注意恰当使用一些连词，使文章自然、流畅.5. 适当使用一些高级句型和词汇以提高作文档次.【范文赏析】Dear Ms Jenkins,Yours,Li Hua【典例03】（2016新课标Ⅲ卷）假定你是李华，与留学生朋友Bob约好一起去书店，因故不能赴约.请给他写封邮件，内容包括：1.表示歉意；2.说明原因；3.另约时间.注意：1.词数 100 左右；2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯.____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ 【写作指导】这是一篇书信类作文，要求给留学生朋友Bob写信，告知展览情况和不能去的原因.考生成文时应注意：1. 要点要齐全：（1）表示歉意；（2）说明原因；（3）另约时间.2. 时态：以一般将来时为主；3. 人称：第一人称为主；4. 注意恰当使用一些连词，使文章自然、流畅.5. 适当使用一些高级句型和词汇以提高作文档次.【范文赏析】Dear Bob,Looking forward to your early reply.Yours,Li Hua【典例04】（2016天津卷）假设你是晨光中学的学生会主席李津.一批来自英国的高中生与你校学生开展了为期两周的交流活动.现在，他们即将回国，你将在欢送会上致辞.请根据以下提示写一篇发言稿.1．回顾双方的交流活动（如学习、生活、体育、文艺等方面）；2．谈谈收获或感想；3．表达祝愿与期望.注意： 1．词数不少于 100；2．可适当加入细节，使内容充实、行文连贯；3．开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数.Dear friends,____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ Thank you.【写作指导】这是一篇提纲类作文，要求写一篇发言稿.考生成文时应注意：1. 要点要齐全：（1）回顾双方的交流活动（如学习、生活、体育、文艺等方面）；（2）谈谈收获或感想；（3）表达祝愿与期望. 2. 时态：以现在完成时为主；3. 人称：第一人称为主；4. 注意恰当使用一些连词，使文章自然、流畅.5. 适当使用一些高级句型和词汇以提高作文档次.【范文赏析】Dear friends,At last, on behalf of all the students in our school, I wish you have a safe and happy journey home and that there will be more programs like this in the future.Thank you.（1）假定你是李华，亚洲冬季运动会将在你居住的地方举办，现在正在招募志愿者，你希望成为其中一员.请按要求用英文给组委会写一封申请信，内容应包括：1. 个人情况：年龄、性别、学历；2. 个人条件：英语好、爱好体育、善于交往、乐于助人、熟悉本地情况；3. 承诺：提供最佳服务.注意：1. 词数100左右；2. 开头语已为你写好；可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；参考词汇：申请 apply（v.）,application (n.)；志愿者 volunteerDear Sir /Madam,My name is Li Hua. I would like to work as a volunteer for the Winter Asian Games.____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________（2）假如你是某英文杂志负责“与读者对话”栏目的编辑.请根据下面这封读者来信写一封回信，帮助解决读者来信中提出的问题.注意：1. 词数120左右；2. 邮件的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总数；3. 可根据要点适当增加细节，使行文连贯.Dear Editor,I am going to take the college entrance examination soon. I have to work harder and harder to prepare for it so that I could enter a good college. However, it’s hard for me to understand what my teachers say in class. Though I tell myself again and again I should hold on, I have little confidence in myself. What should I do now?Best wishes,Li Hua Dear Li Hua,Thank you for your letter.____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ Best wishes.Editor 【范文】Dear Li Hua,Thank you for your letter. As for the entrance exams, you have come too far and worked too hard to quit now. There are only a few months left until the exams so you can make a final push to get the best result you can. I have some tips for you and I hope they are helpful.Above all, building up confidence is essential to success. Only when you believe in yourself, can you keep up your spirits and be successful.Now, take some time to be with your family and enjoy yourself for Spring Festival, then get to work.Best wishes,Editor 【写作指导】本文对考生的要求较高，要求考生首先读懂原文，再根据文字提示写作.原文是一位高三的学生学习上遇见困难在寻求帮助.回信的要点都隐含在信中，再读懂文章的基础上，要考生自己归纳出来，再一一进行解决，考生需要使用合适的连接词把这些要点连接成文，如to begin with首先；besides而且；what’s more 等.也要注意运用适当的高级句型如定语从句，强调句等让文章不显得那么平淡，而有文采.在词汇的运用上也要注意，使用相对高级的词汇提升文章的档次.【亮点说明】所给范文语言简洁，运用了一些词组：make the most out of充分利用， have a good knowledge of 很好了解，Above all最重要的是, building up增强，范文中的句式多变，运用不同的语法知识：The first thing you should do is to make a good study plan. 这句话用了定语从句和不定式，If you follow the plan and concentrate on what you’re doing, it helps you study effectively. 这句话用了宾语从句， Do review what is done wrong and learn lessons from mistakes.这句话用个强调句， Only假如你是新华中学的学生李华，上周在外教Mr. Jackson的口语课上使用手机被老师发现,手机被收走.请用英语给Mr. Jackson写一封道歉信，内容应包括以下要点:1.表示歉意；2.解释上课使用手机的原因；3.提出自己的请求并适当表态.注意：1. 词数：120左右；2. 信的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数.3. 可适当添加细节以使行文连贯.Dear Mr. Jackson,I am really sorry about my using the mobile phone in your class last week.____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ Best wishes!Yours sincerely,Li Hua（4）假定你是李华，刚刚以优异成绩从美国某大学毕业.你的美国朋友Tony邀请你去他的公司工作，但是你想回国工作.请给Tony写一封邮件婉拒他的邀请.内容要点包括：1.报效祖国；2.照顾父母；3.发展空间大.注意：1.词数100左右;2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；3.开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数.Dear TonyThanks for offering me a job in your company, but I have decided to go back to work in China.________________________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________________________Yours truly,Li Hua 【范文】Dear Tony,Thanks for offering me a job in your company, but I have decided to go back to work in China. The reasons are as follows.I would appreciate it if you can understand my choice. Wish you a splendid future.Yours truly,Li Hua 【写作指导】本文要求用英文给Tony写一封邮件婉拒他邀请你去他的公司工作.要点包括：1）报效祖国； 2）照顾父母； 3）发展空间大.学生写作的时候重点是将要点全覆盖，不要遗漏了任何一个要点.同时注意遣词造句，用自己最熟悉的单词、句型来表达自己的意思.在写作过程中还要注意使用起承转合的连词和高级词汇，这样作文就能得到比较高的分数.【素材积累】此文语言流畅，言简意赅，要点齐全.关联词语运用得恰到好处，使整个语篇衔接紧密,逻辑清楚.而短文中较多高级词语和句式的使用也提升了文章的得分档次.关联词语：Firstly, Secondly, besides, lastly等.亮点词汇：as follows, devote, take good care of, offers more opportunities, familiar environment 等.（5）假定你是李华，你的外教Mr. Pick回国前向你推荐了American School Life网站，希望你借此提高英语水平.请你用英语给他写一封电子邮件，告诉他你的收获，要点如下：1.表达思念；2.上网收获；3.表示感激.注意：1. 词数100词左右；2.可适当发挥，以使行文连贯；3.开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数.Dear Mr. Pick,____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua。

节假日活动是指春节、元旦、国庆节、植树节、教师节、重阳节、圣诞节、复活节、情人节、母亲节等各种中西方节假日的起源、发展、庆祝方式和假日活动安排，还有生日、周年纪念日、毕业典礼等各种庆祝活动，以及参加这些活动的经历和感受等。

暑期、寒假等的活动、社会实践活动或者青年志愿者的活动安排及感受等等。

命题人可能从下列方面出题：(1)直接给出某一个中西方节日的活动安排；(2)假设考生参加了某个盛大节日或者某个活动，要求他对节日场面或活动情况进行描述；(3)某个节日或寒暑假要来了，准备举行一个活动，以通知的形式告诉大家，希望踊跃参加；(4)以图片的形式体现节日的盛况，要求考生进行描述；(5)节日去某地度假了，回来后写信表示感谢，其中以回忆的形式体现假日活动；(6)节日物品，例如饺子的制作、红包等；(7)中西方节日的对比；(8)对节日的盛大状况的态度，觉得如此豪华，盛况空前，有没有必要性；(9)现在中国逐步开始流行过“洋”节，那么你认为西方节日会不会代替中国传统节日；(10)你的节假日如何安排，如何有意义地度过节假日。

一、中国节日名称1.The Spring Festival春节2.The Dragon Boat Festival端午节3.The Mid-autumn Festival中秋节4.New Year’s Day元旦5.National Day国庆节6.International Labor Day五一劳动节7.Teachers’ Day教师节8.Children’s Day儿童节9.Women’s Day妇女节10.Tomb-sweeping Day清明节11.Double Ninth Festival重阳节ntern Festival元宵节二、西方节日名称1. Christmas day 圣诞节2.Thanksgiving Day 感恩节3. Valentine’s Day 情人节4.April Fool’s Day 愚人节5.Halloween Day 万圣节6.Easter Day 复活节7.Mothers’ Day 母亲节8.Fathers’ day 父亲节三、常用词汇1.celebrate庆祝2.observe遵守，庆祝3.congratulation祝贺4.in honor of为了庆祝5.approach靠近6.paradise游行7.celebration庆祝活动8.feast盛宴9.popularity受欢迎10.on holiday度假11.ask for leave请假12. cradle of culture文化摇篮13. traditional culture传统文化14. artistic taste艺术品味15. stick to the tradition坚持传统16. cultural needs文化需求17. give publicity to…宣传… 广受欢迎18. enjoy great popularity 16. cultural treasures文化宝藏19. historical site古迹20. material civilization物质文明21.fall on恰逢三、参考语句话题常用句型1. National Day is coming. 国庆节快到了。

高考英语满分作文2014年的深度解析与仿写Title: Embracing Change: The Journey of Personal Growth In the ever-evolving world, change is inevitable. The journey of life is fraught with transitions, some welcome, others not so. The year 2014 marked a significant milestone in my personal growth, one that taught me to embrace change and find beauty in the unknown.It was the year of my high school graduation, a time filled with excitement, nervousness, and a hint of sadness for the end of an era. My high school days were filled with memories, both joyful and challenging, that shaped me into the person I am today. As I stood on the cusp of a new chapter, I realized that the key to success was not just in the destination, but in the journey itself.The most profound lesson I learned in 2014 was the importance of adapting to change. As I prepared for college, I realized that the familiar surroundings of my high school would give way to new challenges and opportunities. The transition was not easy, but it taught me resilience andadaptability. I learned to navigate through unfamiliar territories, to make new friends, and to explore new interests.Another valuable lesson was the power of perseverance. College life brought with it a newfound freedom and responsibility. I had to manage my time effectively,balance academics with extracurricular activities, and make informed decisions about my future. Through the ups and downs of college life, I learned to persevere, to nevergive up, and to believe in myself.Moreover, 2014 taught me the significance of gratitude. As I looked back on my high school years, I realized how fortunate I was to have had such wonderful teachers, friends, and family who supported me and believed in me. I learned to appreciate every moment, every success, andevery failure as they all contributed to my personal growth. Looking ahead, I am excited about the opportunities and challenges that lie ahead. I know that with the lessons learned in 2014, I am better prepared to embrace change, persevere through difficulties, and be grateful for every experience. The journey of life is full of surprises, and Iam ready to take on the adventure with an open mind and a grateful heart.**拥抱变化：个人成长的旅程**在不断变化的世界中，变化是不可避免的。

指在校学习的课程，学校、班级或学生会等举行的各项比赛或课外活动，包括聚会、野餐、烧烤、春游等课外活动；也包括学生的穿着、发型，还包括预习、复习、讨论、归纳等学习活动或教师的教学方法。

命题者可能会要求考生就某项比赛或课外活动等写一份通知，或就具体的聚会、野餐、烧烤、春游等课外活动写一份通知或写活动后的日记。

可能要求考生就学生的穿着、发型、行为举止等发表看法；就预习、复习、讨论、归纳等课堂学习活动和教师教学方法等发表看法；就学生对任课教师开展评教活动发表看法；学校在节假日该不该补课；学生该不该参加校外各种形式的特长训练，如钢琴培训、外语培训、勤工俭学等。

一.话题常用单词1. campus n. 校园2. playground n. 操场3. laboratory/lab n. 实验室4. dining hall n. 食堂5. dormitory n. 宿舍6. club n. 俱乐部7. teaching building教学楼8. the Students’Union学生会9. achievement/result成绩10. marks/grades/scores分数11. hobby n. 爱好，嗜好12. volunteer n. 志愿者13. learning habits 学习习惯14. the class meeting 班会二.话题常用短语1. prepare for/preview lessons预习功课2. review/go over lessons 复习功课review what you have learned 复习已学知识3.listen to the teachers attentively in class 上课认真听讲4. stay away from school旷课5. work hard at English 努力学习英语6. put one’s heart into专心于7. concentrate on 全神贯注；专心于8. be absorbed in/be buried in 专心于……9. take notes 做笔记10. refer to the reference books 查阅参考书11. turn to the teachers for help向老师求助12. learn...by heart/keep... in mind 记住13. work out a problem解决一个问题14. make progress in ... 在……方面取得进步15. improve oneself in...在某方面提高自己16. have a good command of English 精通英语17. be interested in 对...感兴趣18. lose interest in 对...失去兴趣19. be good at/do well in擅长...20. be poor at/be weak in不擅长...21. be tired of study 对学习感到厌倦22. major in... 主修...23. be busy in preparing for the exam忙着为考试做准备24. be well prepared for the test 为考试做好了准备25. take the test/exam 参加考试26. pass the examination通过考试27. fail（in）the exam 考试不及格28. get full marks (for.)..得满分29. cheat in the exam考试作弊30. win the first prize in the English speech contest 获得英语演讲比赛第一名31. be active in class 积极参与课堂32. take an active part in group discussion.积极参加小组讨论33. after-school activities课外活动34. carry out social investigations做社会调查35. take part in voluntary work参加义务劳动36. join in physical activities参加体育活动37. do social practice 做社会实践38. have part-time jobs 做兼职39. have a picnic/barbecue去野餐/烧烤40. hold a sports meeting举行运动会41. live up to one’s hope 不辜负某人的期望42. broaden one’s horizons开拓视野43. enrich one’s knowledge 丰富知识44.enrich our school life 丰富我们的校园生活45. the best way to improve reading skills提高阅读技能的最好方法46. release one’s pressure 释放压力47. relax oneself 放松身心48. increase the pleasure of life增加生活乐趣49. graduation ceremony 毕业典礼50. have trouble in learning English学习英语有困难51.be admitted into your ideal university考上理想的大学52. take a break between classes课间休息53.take exercise 锻炼身体do some exercises 做练习题54. graduate from high school 高中毕业55. work as a volunteer 担任志愿者三、参考语句话题常用句型1. Where there is a will, there is a way有志者事竟成。

兴趣爱好指音乐、舞蹈、表演、体育运动、游戏(包括网络游戏)、集邮、阅读、烹饪、看电影、看电视、听收音广播、欣赏戏剧、音乐会、观光旅行、招待客人、访问博物馆、饲养宠物等.关于“兴趣爱好”这一话题，就基础写作而言，命题人可能要求考生介绍某一项兴趣爱好，写一份校园比赛的海报，给英国笔友写一封信描述自己如何度过课余时间等.就读写任务而言，命题人可能就家长如何培养孩子的兴趣爱好、电影与电视的优劣比较、现场看表演和看电视转播的比较、极限运动兴起的原因分析等话题发表看法.如：(1)你班进行了一次以“我的爱好”为主题的演讲比赛，请你谈谈你的爱好及缘由，并号召同学和你一起发展这项爱好.(2)假设你有一位英国笔友叫Jack，请你给他写一封信简介你在课余时间的兴趣爱好，并询问他在课余时间的兴趣爱好.(3)你想约志同道合的同学一起去参观自然博物馆，请你在布告板上写一份邀请函，包括自然博物馆的特点和参观博物馆的好处等.(4)现在很多学生都是“追星一族”，他们密切注视着明星们的一举一动.试分析当下流行文化对青少年兴趣爱好的影响.一.话题常用单词1.hobby爱好2.interest兴趣1.adore喜爱1.appreciate欣赏2.admire敬佩，欣赏1.affection喜爱2.adventure冒险8.collection收集9.explore探索10.amusement娱乐11.architecture建筑12.adaptation适应8.ambition决心8.taste口味9.assessment评估10.availability有效;有益11.amusement娱乐8.attend参加9.favorite最喜欢的8.appetite嗜好二.话题常用短语1.surf the internet上网2.chat online在线聊天1.enjoy popular music喜欢流行音乐2.be fond of/be keen on喜欢…3.have some hobbies有一些爱好4.be interested in对……感兴趣5.take an interest in对……感兴趣6.be crazy about...对……着迷e to like...越来越喜欢8.develop a great liking for...渐渐爱上1.be addicted to对……上瘾2.be hooked on喜欢3.fall for喜欢上4.prefer doing to doing与做某事相比更喜欢做某事15.would rather do than do宁愿做某事而不愿16.have a gift for有……天赋17.feel like doing想要做17.participate in参加18.spare time空余时间19.have a taste in有品位20.develop an interest in培养某方面的兴趣21.read novels读小说22.play football/basketball踢足球/打篮球23.play games玩游戏24.collect stamps集邮25.make e-friends交网友26.climb mountains爬山17.watch TV看电视三、参考语句话题常用句型1.I prefer watching a TV show to going to a concert.我宁愿看电视表演，而不愿去听音乐会.2.He goes for playing on-line games.他喜欢玩在线游戏.3.Shopping is my favorite hobby in my spare time.购物是我闲暇时最喜欢的爱好.2.I hate visiting museums, for I think they are boring.我讨厌参观博物馆，因为我觉得它们让人感到无趣.3.The latest surveys show that quite a few children have unpleasant associations with homework.最近的调查显示相当多的孩子对家庭作业没什么好感.4.Many experts point out that physical exercise contributes directly to a person's physical fitness.许多专家指出体育锻炼直接有助于身体健康.7. A proper part—time job does not occupy students'too much time. In fact, it is unhealthy forthem to spend all of time on their study. As an old saying goes: All work and no play makes Jack a dull boy.一份适当的业余工作并不会占用学生太多的时间.事实上，把全部的时间都用到学习上并不健康，正如那句老话：只工作，不玩耍，聪明的孩子会变傻.8. People equate success in life with the ability of operating computer.人们把会使用计算机与人生成功相提并论.9. It must be noted that learning must be done by a person himself.必须指出学习只能靠自己.10.An investigation shows that many older people express a strong desire to continue studying in university or college.一项调查显示许多老人都有到大学继续学习的愿望.11.For the majority of people, reading or learning a new skill has become the focus of their lives and the source of their happiness and contentment after their retirement.对大多数人来讲，退休以后，阅读或学习一项新技术已成为他们生活的中心和快乐的来源.12. For people who want to adopt a healthy and meaningful life style, it is important to find time to learn certain new knowledge. Just as an old saying goes: it is never too late to learn.对于那些想过上健康而有意义的生活的人们来说，找时间学习一些新知识是很重要的，正如那句老话：活到老，学到老.13. From what has been discussed above, I am fully convinced that the leisure lifestyle isundergoing a decline with the progress of modern society, it is not necessary a bad thing.通过以上讨论，我完全相信，随着现代社会的进步，悠闲的生活方式正在消失并不是件坏事.14.The problem of international tourism has caused wide public concern over the recent years. 近些年，国际旅游的问题引起了广泛关注.15.Furthermore, people who addict to fashion clothes have to spend more time going shopping andpay more attention to the impression they make on others.而且，沉湎于时尚服装的人们不得不花费更多时间逛商店，更加注意自己给别人的印象.16. As a result, it is impossible to devote enough time and energy in their study and job.因此，他们不可能有足够的时间用于学习或工作.【典例01】（2018·天津卷）假设你是晨光中学的机器人兴趣小组组长李津，你的美国朋友C hris就读于天津某国际学校，他曾在机器人技能竞赛中获奖.你打算邀请他加入你的团队，参加即将于7月底在天津举行的世界青少年机器人技能竞赛.请根据以下提示代表兴趣小组给他写一封电子邮件.（1）比赛的时间、地点；（2）邀请他的原因；（3）训练计划将发送其邮箱，请他提出建议.注意：（1）词数不少于100；（2）可适当加入细节，使内容充实、行文连贯；（3）开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数.参考词汇：世界青少年机器人技能竞赛the World Adolescent Robotics CompetitionDear Chris,I have good news to tell you.______________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ I’m looking forward to your reply.Yours,Li Jin【思路点拨】本篇书面要求写一封邀请信.写作的时候要注意以下几点：一、动笔前，一定要认真分析要点，理解要点要表达的含义，不能遗漏要点，跑题偏题.内容要点包括：1.代表兴趣小组发出邀请；2.介绍比赛的时间、地点等安排；3.说明邀请他的原因，包括Chris曾在机器人技能竞赛中获奖；4.告诉他训练计划将发送其邮箱，请他提出建议.二、写作时注意准确运用时态，对于本文来说，以一般将来时为主，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次.【满分范文】Dear Chris,With this email I also send you our training plan,about which I wish to get your advice because you are more experienced than us.We sincerely hope that we can participate in the competitionas team partners.I’m looking forward to your reply.Yours,Li Jin【典例02】（2017·新课标卷II）假定你是李华，想邀请邀请外教H enry一起参观中国剪纸（paper-cutting）艺术展.请给他写封邮件，内容包括：1.展览时间、地点；2.展览内容.注意：1.词数 100左右；2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯.____________________________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【写作指导】剪纸是中国的国粹，出现在作文中很常见，这种内容的写作贴近学生生活，使他们感到熟悉.考生成文时应注意：1.要点要齐全：（1）时间和地点；（2）展览内容.2. 时态：以一般将来时为主；3. 人称：第一人称为主；4.注意恰当使用一些连词，使文章自然、流畅.5.适当使用一些高级句型和词汇以提高作文档次.【范文赏析】Dear Henry,It must have been heard by you that there’ll be an art exhibition organized to display elegantChinese paper-cuttings.Remembering your devotion to Ch inese culture, I’m writing to invite you to come with us.As for the timetable and specific information, the activity will be held next Wednesday at the stadium.One graphic scene to which you might readily relate is numerous charming paper-cuttings of distinctive appearance shown together along with splendid history of China. Owing to frequent media coverage,it is paper-cutting that has aroused huge attention.Not onlywill the works produced by eminent craftsmen be offered, but also some created by kids in kindergarten are planned to be included.Were I you,I wouldn’t miss this opportunity.What a delightful day it’ll be if you can come!YoursLi Hua【典例03】（2016·四川卷）某中学生英文报正举办“T he Season I Like Best”的征文活动.请用英文写一篇短文投稿，内容包括：1.你最喜欢的季节；2.你喜欢该季节的两条理由（如：气候、景色、活动、感受……）.注意：1.词数100左右；2.题目已为你写好；3.行文连贯，语篇完整；4.文中不得透露个人真实信息.The Season I Like Best____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【思路点拨】该篇书面表达是开放类命题作文，学生可以按照要点自由发挥.在写作本文时考生需注意以下几点：1.确定文章的文体：命题作文.2.确定文章的要点：你最喜欢的季节；你喜欢该季节的两条理由（如：气候、景色、活动、感受……）.3. 确定文章的布局.4.确定文章的时态，在本文中根据要求判断应该用一般现在时.5. 正确使用较高级词汇和多种句式，如定语从句，状语从句，主语从句等.6.准确使用一些恰当的连接成分以使语意更连贯.【满分范文】The Season I Like BestSpring,the symbol of beauty and hope,is the season I like best.I am fond of spring becauseit treats me poetic scenery of nature.Blooming flowers add vivid colors to my sight. Also, the symphony of all kinds of insects and birds brings aesthetic(美学的)harmony to me.What’s more, the gentle rain makes spring a fantasy world. And it’s because spring arouses everyone’s hopethat I’m keen on spring most. Look! The frozen ice is melting. Listen! All living creatures are waking up. Spring pictures a world where cold and death are fading away while warmth and lifeare coming back. Thus, everyone is bound to be filled with hope and love. I love spring, which can’t be too admirable and cherished.【典例04】你们班同学打算周六去爬香山.请给外教Chris写一封英文信，邀请他参加此次活动.具体内容如下： 1.时间：8a.m—5p.m;2.集合地点：校门口;3.交通工具：公交车;4.携带物品：雨具，午餐，相机.注意：1.词数不少于50;2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯;3.开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数.Dear Chris，________________________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours,Joe【思路点拨】本题是一篇应用文.作文要点已经给出，包含：1.时间：8a.m—5p.m；2. 集合地点：校门口；3.交通工具：公交车；4.携带物品：雨具，午餐，相机.可以分段分别论述所给要点，注意作文的连贯性，做到流畅、自然.最好使用第一人称和一般将来时来写.【满分范文】Dear Chris，We are planning to climb the Xiangshan Hill this Saturday and sincerely invite you to go with us.We will get together at the school gate at 8am and probably come back at5 pm. To make ita green travel,we will take the bus there.You’d better take your camera to record the beautifulscenery. And don’t forget to take some food, because we plan to have lunch on the top of the hill. Remember, take your umbrella or raincoat in case it rains.If you can join us, we will be very happy.Yours,Joe 【典例05】（2016·北京卷）假设你是红星中学高三学生李华.你的英国朋友Jim在给你的邮件中提到他对中国历史很感兴趣，并请你介绍一位你喜欢的中国历史人物.请你给 Jim回信，内容包括：1.该人物是谁；2.该人物的主要贡献；3.该人物对你的影响.注意：1.词数不少于50；2.开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数.Dear Jim,It’s great to hear from you. _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,Li Hua【思路点拨】本文要求考生以李华的身份给英国朋友Jim写信，介绍一位你喜欢的中国历史人物.文章要使用第三人称和一般现在时为主的时态.要点：1.该人物是谁；2.该人物的主要贡献；3. 该人物对你的影响.在写作时，注意书信的格式以及过渡用语的正确使用；同时尽量使用熟悉的词汇及短语，尤其注意不要出现中国式英语，恰当使用一些复合句或者谚语以增加获得高分的可能性.【满分范文】Dear Jim,It’s great to hear from you.I feel proud to know your interest in Chinese history. As for试题习题、尽在百度my favorite figure in Chinese history, it must be Wei Yuan, a great thinker in the late Qing Dynasty.He, in his book, Haiguo Tuzhi(Maps and Records of the World), introduced moderntechnologies andideas to China. That opened our eyes to the world. In fact, he inspires me to major in English in college and to be a bridge between China and the world.Interested in knowing more? I can find you some books! Just let me know. Cheers!Yours,Li Hua（1）假设你是李华，你们学校下周举办英语艺术节.请根据下边的节目安排调整表，给外教老师 Dave 写一 封 100 词左右的电子邮件，告知他调整的内容并给出你认为恰当的理由.Schedule for English Art FestivalDateTimeActivitiesPlace14:00—15:00English Talk ShowArt TheaterJan 6th13:30—14:3015:00—16:0016:00—17:00English Speech Contest LibraryEnglish Corner Playground________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【范文】Dear Dave,I ’m sorry to inform you that there are two changes to the schedule for English Artstival.FeFirst, there will be a very important meeting after lunch in our school, so English Talk Showwill be put off by 30 minutes. That is, it starts at 14:00 and ends at 15:00. Second, the placewhere the English Corner will be held is to be changed from Playground to the School Hall becausethe weather report says it ’s going to rain that afternoon. In order to have the Festival going．．．．． ．．well, we have to do the changes.Please come and join us on time.We are all expecting you!Yours,Li Hua【写作指导】这是一篇开放式作文，要求根据表格内容写信告知D ave节目安排调整的内容和时间并给出理由，学生首先要根据表格内容找出变化的时间，地点，再用适当的语言表述出来.文章应该使用一般将来时和第一人称.写作时尽量使用多种句型结构，使句式富于变化，增加文章的亮点.此外，为了使文章衔接紧凑，自然流畅，还要注意关联词、插入语的使用.【素材积累】此文语言流畅，言简意赅，要点齐全.关联词语运用得恰到好处，使整个语篇衔接紧密,逻辑清楚.而短文中较多高级词语和句式的使用也提升了文章的得分档次.关联词语：first,second, finally等.亮点词汇：schedule,gain, in order to, on time, put off，that is等.高级句式：because引导的原因状语从句；says后面是宾语从句等.（2）假如你热衷集邮，但家长并不支持，于是你向一个学生心声的专栏写信咨询解决的办法.内容包括：1.你的意见：(1)增长知识；(2)减压；(3)挣钱.2.家长意见：(1)浪费钱；(2)占了学习时间.注意：1.词数不少于100；2.可以适当增加细节.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________【范文】Dear Sir，However，my parents are strongly against it for they consider it as a waste of money and theyalso think that sorting out my stamps may take up too much of my time，which should be spent on my studies.I don’t want to argue with them any more. Could you help me out?Looking forward to your early reply!A Worried Reader 【写作指导】这篇书面表达是书信类写作，语言一定要准确简洁、通俗易懂、逻辑性强、结构多变、节奏感强.题目已经要求内容包括你的意见和家长的意见，每个要点又包含次要点，因此重点是将所要表达的语言点都表达到位，不要遗漏了某一点.同时应尽量选择自己最熟悉的单词、句型来表达自己的意思.在写作过程中注意使用起承转合的连词和高级词汇，这样作文就能得到比较高的分数.【素材积累】此文语言流畅，言简意赅，要点齐全.关联词语运用得恰到好处，使整个语篇衔接紧密,逻辑清楚.而短文中较多高级词语和句式的使用也提升了文章的得分档次.关联词语：besides,what’s more等.亮点词汇：valuable,As far as I’m concerned,a meaningful hobby, a waste of money,sort out, take up too much of my time, argue with等.高级句式：helping me to know a lot.现在分词作状语，not only…but also…结构；my parents are strongly against it for they consider it as a waste of money and they also think that sorting out my stamps may take up too much of my time，which should be spent on my studies.which引导非限制性定语从试题习题、尽在百度句等.（3）培养孩子的兴趣爱好是非常必要的，但现在有很多家长一味地追求子女的多才多艺，迫使孩子学习他们不感兴趣的东西，请你以大约120个词谈谈对这种现象的看法，内容包括：(1)你是否赞同上述家长的做法；(2)以你或你朋友的经历说明你的观点；(3)呼吁家长们要尊重孩子的意愿.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【范文】Today’s children are lucky to have many opportunities to develop their talents.But on the other hand，a lot of parents push their children too hard.Therefore,parents should see the bad effects from their over-effort to cultivate children’stalents. Parents are supposed to help children learn what they are interested in. Only in this way can they learn well and be happy!【写作指导】这篇书面表达是提纲类作文，话题是针对现在家长一味地让学生培养兴趣的问题，要点包括：(1)你是否赞同上述家长的做法；(2)以你或你朋友的经历说明你的观点；(3)呼吁家长们要尊重孩子的意愿.基本时态应该为一般现在时态.写作时考生需注意适当地使用一些过渡性的连接词，使行文流畅贯通.同时也要注意整个语篇的层次，即要分好段落,不能是一段式的.最后，在用词上尽量做到准确达意,，并选用一些高级词汇,句式要丰富多样，避免单调.亮点点击：关联词：however,on the other hand，therefore等;亮点词汇：push their children too hard,find it a burden等;高级句式：what引导宾语从句；Only in this way can they learn well and be happy!倒装句等.（4）假定你是李华，你的英国笔友Helen正在写一篇关于各国中学生课外阅读情况的调查报告.她给你发了一封邮件，想了解相关情况.请你根据以下提示，给她回一封电子邮件：1.你校学生课外阅读的现状；2.原因分析；3.你的看法.注意：1.根据所给提示，适当发挥，要求内容充实，语意连贯；2.词数120左右.开头和结尾已经写好，不计入总词数；3.邮件中不得提及考生所在的学校和本人姓名.参考词汇：课外阅读extra-curricular readingDear Helen’Thank you for your email. Now I would like to tell you something____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ Best wishes!Yours,Li Hua【范文】Dear Helen,Thank you for your email. Now I would like to tell you something about the extracurricular reading in our school.I’m sorry to say that most of the students in our school haven’t realizedthe importance of reading,especially extracurricular reading, as a result, the time and energystudents devoted to reading are very limited. Besides, some students prefer to read cartoons, magazines and newspapers rather than classic reading materials.I think the reasons behind that are various.First of all, quite a lot of students are burdenedwith too much homework. Still others haven’t formed a habit of reading.They would rather spend their spare time on TV or on the Internet.However,reading has many benefits.Through reading we can learn more about the world.Reading can help us think better and make our life more colorful.So it is quite necessary for the studentsto take up reading and for the teachers to limit the amount of our homework so that we can have more time to read.Best wishes!YoursLi Hua 【写作指导】考查半开放性作文写作.半开放性作文给出了一个话题，并有部分的文字提示.给考生自由发挥的余地较大.对于考生的综合能力要求较高，要求考生有很强的谋篇布局的能力和组织要点的能力.这篇作文是关于中学生课外阅读情况的调查报告.考生可以从本校学生的阅读情况入手，每天阅读时间为多少，一个月要读多少本书等等.分析原因可以从学习的时间太长，留给阅读的时间不够等.在保证内容要点全部概括的基础上可以充分发挥自己的想象，进而用自己的语言来表达某种观点或看法，增添了写作的灵活性，同时能较好地考查考生的想象能力和英语语言表达能力.首先要选择自己熟悉的短语或者句型，在你的能力范围之内，选择句式时要赋予变化，因为这样你才可以更好的驾驭.同时也要选择合适的连接词，把各个要点组织成一个完整的整体，如besides, further,last but not least等.在发表个人观点的时候，可以使用谚语来提升整个文章的档次和文采，也能增加得高分的可能性.【亮点说明】所给范文语言简洁，应用了一些较好的词组和句子：as a result因此,prefer to do…rather than do…宁愿做…而不愿…，be burdened with负担，form a habit of形成…，the time and energy students devoted to reading are very limited.这句话用了定语从句，So it is quite necessary for the students to take up reading and for the teachers to limit the amount of our homework so thatwe can have more time to read.这句话用了it做形式主语和so that句型.还有范文使用了B esides,First of all, However,这样的关联词使文章更加连贯.（5）假设你是王磊，最近，你的笔友David沉迷于网络小说，难以自拔，他向你求助，请按下列要点给对方写一封信：1.阐述网络小说的危害；2.提出建议和解决办法；3.表达信心.词数：120词左右.可以适当增加细节，使行文连贯.Dear David,I’m worried about the situation you are faced with.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours,Wang Lei【范文】Dear David，I’m worried about the situation you are faced with, in which you find it difficult to get rid of the habit of reading online novels.Slightly as reading online might relieve us,spending too much time on it is a waste of time. Meanwhile, we are more likely to suffer from failing eyesight if staring at it frequently. Therefore, I can’t wait to give you some suggestions,for fear that you would deserve to have a great loss in your study. As we all know, we, senior 3students, must take advantage of every minute every day. You can relax yourself by reading some materials in a certain period of time, for example, lunch break. For the rest of the day,you’d better value it more efficiently.I’m willing to wait for your good news, and you can make it, can’t you?Yours ,Wang Lei【写作指导】本题要求写一则关于书法展的通知，要点包含1.阐述网络小说的危害；2.提出建议和解决办法；3.表达信心.使用第二人称和一般现在时.写作时考生需注意适当地使用一些过渡性的连接词，使行文流畅贯通.同时也要注意整个语篇的层次，即要分好段落,不能是一段式的.最后，在用词上尽量做到准确达意,，并选用一些高级词汇,句式要丰富多样，避免单调.。

2021年(高|考)英语总分值作文1.2021年新课标全国卷I假定你是李华,方案暑假期间去英国学习英语,为期六周.下面的广告引起了你的注意,请给该校写封信,询问有关情况(箭头所指内容) .注意：1.词数100左右.2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯.____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________2.2021年新课标全国卷II1.家庭；2.工作；3.业余生活.注意:1.词数100左右；2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯；你写好.I often imagine what my life will be like in the future.____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________3.2021重庆卷(1 )请结合材料,按要求用英文写作."My friend falls, I laugh; my phone falls, I cry."要求：(1)就此材料发表你的看法；(2)紧扣材料,有明确的观点；(3)词数不少于60 .____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________4.2021年浙江卷学校图书馆需要购置一批新书,现向学生征求意见.假设你是李越,你认为学校图书馆最||需要购置科普类图书(popular science books)和文学类图书(literary books) .请你用英语给图书馆||王老师写一封100 -120个词的信,推荐这两类书,并分别说明推荐理由.注意：信的抬头与落款已给出(不计入词数) .Dear Mr. Wang,____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________Yours sincerely,Li Yue5.2021年天津卷假设你是晨光中学高二(1)班的班长李津,得知美国学生Chris作为交换生,下学期将到你班学习.请你根据以下提示,给他写封邮件：(1)表示欢迎；(2)介绍与本地生活相关的信息(如气候、饮食等)；(3)介绍本班情况；(4)希望Chris做哪些事情,以增进中美学生间的了解和友谊.注意：(1)请勿提及与考生相关的真实信息；(2)可适当参加细节,使内容充实、行文连贯；(3)词数不少于100；开头已给出,不计入总词数.参考词汇：交换生exchange studentDear Chris,I'm Li Jin, monitor of Class One, Grade Eleven.____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,Li Jin6.2021年北京卷第|一节(15分)你给英国笔友Chris写一封信,内容包括：1. 你们原方案7月份一同去云南旅游；2. 由于脚部受伤,你无法按原方案前往；3. 表达你的歉意并建议将旅行推迟到8月份.注意：1. 词数不少于50 .2. 可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯.3. 开头和结尾已给出,不计入总次数.Dear Chris,____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours,Joe第二节假设你是红星中学高三(1 )班的学生李华,请根据以下四幅图的先后顺序,为校刊"英语园地〞写一篇短文,记述你和同学们向学校提建议,解决自行车存放问题的过程.注意：1. 词数不少于60 .2. 短文的开头已给出,不计入总字数.There was a problem with the parking place for bikes in our school.____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________7.2021年安徽卷为了帮助中学生健康成长,某中学英文报开辟了"HEART -TO -HEART〞专栏.假设你是该栏目的编辑Jamie ,收到一封署名为Worried的求助信.信中该同学向你诉说了自己的困扰：近日容易发脾气,使正常的学习和生活受到了影响 .请用英文给该同学写一封回信.内容要点如下：1．表示理解并给予抚慰；2．提出建议并说明理由.注意：1．词数120左右；2．信中不能出现与本人相关的信息；3．信的开头与结尾已为你拟好,不计入总词数.________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____Yours,Jamie8.2021年陕西卷假定你是中学生李华.美国一个中学校长代表团即将访问你校并出席英语周的一项活动.请根据写作要点和写作要求写一篇欢迎词.写作要点：1.表示对客人的欢迎；2.介绍此项活动(如活动目的、内容等)；3.表达对客人的祝愿.写作要求：1.词数不少于100；2.称呼已经给出,请写欢迎词正文；3.不能使用真实姓名和学校名称.Dear American guests,____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________9.2021年福建卷如何理解"成功" ,不同的人有不同的看法. 请认真阅读下面的引语(quotation) ,按要求用英语写一篇短文."Success is the ability to go from one failure to another with no loss of enthusiasm."-Sir Winston Churchill 内容要求：1.你对该引语的理解；2.你的相关经历；3.恰当的结尾.注意：1.短文开头已给出,不计入总词数；2.文中不能出现考生的具体信息；3.词数:120左右.This quotation from Winston Churchill tells us that____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________10.2021年四川卷假设你是李夏,你的美国笔友Sam来信关心你参加(高|考)的情况,请根据以下要点回信告知.1.考试日期与科目；2.考试准备情况；3.考试时的状态；4.对试题的感受；5.可能的考试结果.注意：1.词数120左右；2.开头语和结尾语已为你写好；3.可以适当增加细节, 以使行文连贯；4.文中不能出现考生真实姓名和学校名称.参考词汇：(高|考)college entrance examinationDear Sam,Thank you for your.____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ Best wishes!Yours,Li Xia11.2021年湖北卷请根据以下提示,并结合具体事例,用英语写一篇短文.Small things make a big difference. The small things we do can make us a responsible member of the society.注意：①无须写标题；②除诗歌外,文体不限；③内容必须结合你生活中的具体事例；④文中不得透露个人姓名和学校名称；⑤词数不少于120 ,如引用提示语那么不计入总词数 .____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________12.2021年湖南卷学校正在组织科技创新大赛,你想为日常生活中某件物品(如钢笔、书包、鞋子……)设计添加新功能来参赛.请以"My Magic "为题写一篇英语短文,介绍你的创意.内容：1. 说明设计理由；2.介绍新功能.注意：1.词数不少于120个；2.不能使用真实姓名和学校名称.____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ 【范文赏读】My Magic ShoesAs is known to us all, shoes play an important role in our life, for it can protect our feet from being hurt. However, as a boy who has athlete's foot, I am looking forward to inventing a pair of shoes helping my feet keepdry and me walk conveniently. Therefore, this new kind of shoes has come into being recently.To keep the feet dr y and comfortable, this new kind of shoes is equipped with a micro -fan. When you walk, a small machine changes the energy produced by walking into electric energy and stores it. If you stop walking, the micro -fan can work immediately to dry your feet. However, what amazes you most is the foll owing new function. There is a special red button in each of the shoes. If the road you are walking is flat, you can press the red button, which helps your shoes change into a roller skate with two rollers appearing beneath your shoes, and you can reach your destination quickly. On arriving at your destination, press the red button again and the rollers will return to your shoes, so you can walk normally like others.That's my magic shoes. Do you like it or would you like to have a try?13.2021年江西卷假定你是星光中学的高中毕业生李华,母校将为高一新生举办主题为"What to learn in senior high school?"的英语沙龙活动,特邀请你结合自身经历谈谈自己的体会.请根据以下提纲准备一份英语发言稿. ：方法、习惯等；：真诚、友善等；：考生自拟.注意：；2.发言稿开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数.Good morning, everyone! It is my honor to be here to share with you my opinions on what to learn in senior high school.____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ Thank you!14.2021年山东卷15.2021年辽宁卷假定你是学生会主席李华 .学校将举办一次以"校园生活·创意无限"(Innovations on Campus)为主题的创意作品展评活动.请你根据以以下列图示,以短文形式用英语写一份书面通知.注意：；,以使行文连贯；,不计入总词数.参考词汇：校园campus创意作品innovation颁奖prize-givingNoticeAn exciting event "Innovations on Campus" is around the corner.____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ Come on, everybody! It's your show time.Student Union2021年(高|考)英语总分值作文1.2021年新课标全国卷I假定你是李华,方案暑假期间去英国学习英语,为期六周.下面的广告引起了你的注意,请给该校写封信,询问有关情况(箭头所指内容) .注意：100左右.2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯.3.参考词汇：住宿- accommodation____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________【写作指导】(一)仔细审题理思路看到英语作文试题后,不要急于往答题卷上书写,应该先对试题所提供的材料及要求进行仔细地审读,理清写作思路,明确写作任务.在审题时,要审清写作文体,审清动词时态,审清使用的人称,审清写作要点及具体的写作要求等.只有进行了充分地试题,才可能有的放矢,才可能圆满地完成写作任务.李华方案暑假期间去英国学习英语为期六周,看到广告后自己感觉有一些问题广告里不清楚,想要给校方写信咨询有关事项,考生要清楚这是一封信,要符合信的格式.这是考生非常熟悉的一个应用文文体.考生要注意动词时态的变化,以一般现在时为主,兼有将来时,比方：功课什么时间开始?这是将来的事情.注意恰当使用一些连词,使文章自然、流畅.使用一些高级||句型和词汇来提高作文档次.(二)精心布局谋好篇在经过仔细审题之后,考生还需要进一步对所要写的作文进行总体精心设计,包括需要涵盖几方面的内容要点,需要分成几个段落来写,需要使用哪些句型等.有些考生可能会感觉这样做没有必要,感觉这样做浪费时间.其实不然,这一环节是为下一步写好作文奠定坚实的根底.(三)搭好框架信心足如果不是因为时间问题,考生最||好先在草稿纸上草拟一个写作小提纲,搭好写作的整体框架,列出主要的要点提纲,列出需要使用的主要词汇、短语、句型等,这样再往答题卷上书写时,就会信心十足,就会条理更加清晰.(四)扩展提纲连成文紧接着就是对写作提纲进行充实扩展,在答题纸上进行书写.写作时应注意要点的完整性,上下文的连贯性,词汇及句式的多样性,语言的准确性.而且需要注意内容充实,积极健康,逻辑清晰,语言标准,交际得体,建议词数保持在80至||120之间.应尽可能运用比较熟悉的词汇、短语和句型,尽量变换句式,在有把握的情况下,才可使用一些使短文能够增色的较高级||的词汇、短语或者句式.(五)过渡词语文紧凑考生在写作时,可在文中穿插一些过渡性词汇、短语或句型,这样会使短文过渡自然,衔接紧密,行文紧凑.例如：表示困果关系- -therefore ,so ,hence ,thus ,accordingly ,consequently ,as a result表示举例示范- -for example ,in other words ,for instance ,that is ,that is to say表示总结概括- -in summary ,to sum up ,in brief ,in short ,on the whole ,in a word ,all in all ,in conclusion ,as has been noted ,on the whole表示递进过渡- -again ,also ,worsestill ,obviously ,then ,besides ,further ,furthermore ,moreover ,next ,similarly ,after a while ,at the same time ,in addition ,meanwhile, suddenly, later, soon, in the same way, what ,s more表示转折让步- -unfortunately ,though/ although ,anyway ,but ,howeve r, otherwise ,still ,yet ,after all ,in spite of ,on the contrary ,on the other hand ,in any case ,whatever(六)卷面整洁悦人目英语作文毕竟是一项主观性试题,考生的作文分数除了受写作水平影响以外,还受阅卷老师的主观评价影响.干净整洁的卷面,漂亮工整的字体,会使人赏心悦目,会使阅卷老师眼前一亮,从而给阅卷老师留下非常好的印象,无疑会使作文增色不少.这样的英语作文相对来说,分数会明显高于写作水平相当,但是卷面比较差的考生.因此,在写作时,书写与卷面是考生应该留意的一个重要方面,需要做到英语字母书写标准,工整清晰,大小适中,卷面整洁,忌潦草凌乱,乱涂乱改,卷面一塌糊涂,令阅卷老师头痛不已.(七)耐心复查把好关作文写完后,并不是完事大吉了,考生还需要对自己的作文进行从头至||尾耐心地复查,把好写作的最||后一道关.这是写作中不可缺少的一个重要环节.在复查的过程中,考生需要查看是否由于粗心而出现了一些低级||错误,如单复数、拼写、搭配、时态、标点符号等.对于查找出来的错误,切忌乱涂乱改,可以按照短文改错的纠错方法在原文上进行单词的添加、删除或者修改.【总分值范文】Dear Sir/Madam,I'm looking forward to your early reply.Yours faithfully,Li Hua 【亮点说明】短文用了一些短语,增加了文章的色彩,如：plan to do sth ;would like to do sth; pay for; look forward to doing/sth等；用了一些过渡词如：First ,Besides等,使文章过渡自然；用了一些连词使句子结构复杂化不再单一.如：I ,d also like to know how much I have to pay for the course and whether accommodation is included.并且wish后用了虚拟语气,增加了文章的亮点.2.2021年新课标全国卷II一家英语报社向中学生征文,主题是"十年后的我" .请根据以下要点和你的畅想完成短文.1.家庭；2.工作；3.业余生活.注意：1.词数100左右；2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯；3.开头语已为你写好.I often imagine what my life will be like in the future.____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ 【写作指导】这是一篇典型的提纲式半开放书面表达.主题是"十年后的我〞.在写作时要注意从家庭、工作和业余生活三方面要点着手,因为提示信息较少,所以要充分发挥想象,增加适当的细节以使行文连贯,充实内容.比方可以联想到的内容有健身,度假,聚会等等.在写作时尽量使用恰当的连接词或者插入语以使文章层次清楚,条理清晰.还要正确使用多种句式结构和高级||亮点词汇来提高文章的档次,如定语从句,宾语从句和状语从句等.此外,因为是畅想未来,所以要用一般将来时.【总分值范文】【亮点点击】本篇范文短小精悍,要点全面,语言简练,时态人称准确,很好的完成了写作任务.在文章开头作者紧扣题目,提出自己对未来的畅想,然后从生活,工作,家庭三个方面描述了自己十年后的生活.在文中作者用到了短语In my free time , In a word , such as等介词短语,防止了文章句式的单一.此外,还用到了宾语从句in whatever I do、I will work in a computer company as a program designer等,这些都给朴素的语言带来了亮点.3.2021重庆卷(1 )请结合材料,按要求用英文写作."My friend falls, I laugh; my phone falls, I cry."要求：(1)就此材料发表你的看法；(2)紧扣材料,有明确的观点；(3)词数不少于60 .____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________【总分值范文】When I hear that someone says, "My friend falls, I laugh; my phone falls, I cry." I feel rather annoyed and surprised. What he says suggests that he cares little about others' pain or trouble, even if they're his friends. Moreover, it seems that he always thinks more of himself than of others.I argue that every one of us should try our best to help those in need. Then we can have someone to turn to when in trouble. Otherwise we'll have to answer for our selfishness sooner or later. That is what the saying goes: "A friend in need is a friend indeed." Only when you learn to give can you expect to receive.(2 )青少年研究专家Susan Beacham在自己的英文网站上开辟专栏,邀请大家分享心目中的"最||好礼物" .她认为,礼物贵在心意,应为之付出时间和精力.假设你是李华,请用英文发帖,内容应包括：●赞同Susan的看法●你收到或送出的最||好礼物是什么●该礼物的意义●期待大家回复注意：(1)词数不少于80；(2)符合语言标准；(3)开头已给出(不计入总词数) .I am a high school student from China.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________【总分值范文】I am a high school student from China. I quite agree with you that gifts should be worth time and energy if you want to send them to someone you love. It does't matter whether it is expensive or not. What really matters is whether it comes from your inner heart.Now, it is still hanging on the wall of my bedroom. Whenever I look at it, I couldn't help thinking of my friend. However far away we are, we feel close to each other. So I think a gift full of love and effort is a true and most valuable one.4.2021年浙江卷学校图书馆需要购置一批新书,现向学生征求意见.假设你是李越,你认为学校图书馆最||需要购置科普类图书(popular science books)和文学类图书(literary books) .请你用英语给图书馆||王老师写一封100 -120个词的信,推荐这两类书,并分别说明推荐理由.注意：信的抬头与落款已给出(不计入词数) .Dear Mr. Wang,____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________Yours sincerely,Li Yue 【写作指导】根据提示你用英语给图书馆||王老师写一封100 -120词的信,可知这里应该是考生比较熟悉的书信格式.学校图书馆需要购置一批新书,现向学生征求意见.先写这个内容来引出你要提出的建议.在写推荐的两类书时,要写出为什么要推荐这些书.【总分值范文】Dear Mr. Wang,Knowing that our library is going to buy books, I'd like to give some suggestions.What we need most are popular science bo oks. Usually popular science books explain basic principles of nature in a simple and interesting way. They help us understand science subjects better and arouse our curiosity about scientific discoveries.Yours sincerely,Li Yue 【亮点说明】短文用了一些短语和句式增加了文章的色彩,如：would like to do；help sb do sth；not only...but also;encourage sb to do sth;That is why…等,还用了一些连词使句子结构复杂化,如：What we need most are popular science books这里what引导的主语从句；That is why I recommend another category of books：这里why引导的表语从句；I ,ll be glad if you can consider my recommendation.这里是if引导的条件状语从句 .5.2021年天津卷假设你是晨光中学高二(1)班的班长李津,得知美国学生Chris作为交换生,下学期将到你班学习.请你根据以下提示,给他写封邮件：(1)表示欢迎；(2)介绍与本地生活相关的信息(如气候、饮食等)；(3)介绍本班情况；(4)希望Chris做哪些事情,以增进中美学生间的了解和友谊.注意：(1)请勿提及与考生相关的真实信息；(2)可适当参加细节,使内容充实、行文连贯；(3)词数不少于100；开头已给出,不计入总词数.参考词汇：交换生exchange studentDear Chris,I'm Li Jin, monitor of Class One, Grade Eleven.____________________________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________Li Jin 【写作指导】本试题只给了要写的信的大致内容,而具体的细节需要考生自己发挥,因此它是一篇半开放式作文.私人信件一般分为以下几局部：一是说明知道对方的情况后的态度,如果是好的事情,一般用"I'm /feel glad to hear that..."；如果是不好的事情,那么用"I'm sorry to hear that ..." ,然后就是对朋友的抚慰.二是谈一谈自己周围的情况.三是鼓励朋友更加努力以获得更大成就或者提出一些防止不好事情发生的建议.最||后对朋友表示祝愿.【总分值范文】Dear Chris,I'm Li Jin, monitor of Class One, Grade Eleven. I'm glad to hear that you will come to our school as an exchange student. You're welcome to stay with us.Our class is made up of 50 lively boys and girls, who are warm and generous and ready to offer help. They are very friendly and easy to get along with. You will have a good time and get used to the life soon.Yours,Li Jin 【亮点点击】文章由三段构成,结构非常清楚、合理,使阅卷老师一目了然地了解考生想表达的内容 .文中使用了复合句,如:I'm glad to hear that...及where和who引导的非限制性定语从句.恰当地使用短语be located in,be famous for,be made up of,get along with等 .6.2021年北京卷第|一节(15分)你给英国笔友Chris写一封信,内容包括：1. 你们原方案7月份一同去云南旅游；2. 由于脚部受伤,你无法按原方案前往；3. 表达你的歉意并建议将旅行推迟到8月份.注意：1. 词数不少于50 .2. 可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯.3. 开头和结尾已给出,不计入总次数.Dear Chris,____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours,Joe【写作指导】应用文写作包括书信,通知和演讲稿,书信是较为常考的类型.2021年北京(高|考)英语考查的为书信中的抱歉信,学生在写抱歉信时障碍比较小,但如何写出高分作文是难点.写应用文时应保证以下内容：表达歉意Please accept my heartfelt apology.解释原因the reason why I …is that…提出建议I would appreciate it if you can allow me to …结尾Once again, I'm sorry for any inconvenience I caused.考生在写作中一定要注意到格式标准、语气合理,交际感强烈,否那么分数很可能会在12分以下,应用文书写不需要过长的句子,句子长度控制在两行以内,应注意行文流畅,感情真挚,多用sincerely, from the bottom of my heart, I am indeed sorry for the trouble ,使用schedule, postpone等升级||单词难度,但注意不要通篇难词.另外需要提醒的是,书信应有称呼,有结尾,假设开头结尾已给出,需要在答题纸上重新抄写一遍,否那么扣相应分数.【总分值范文】Dear Chris,How is it going?I remember we planned to visit Yunnan in July.But now, because my left foot was injured, I cannot go with you as planned.I'm sorry about it. Can I suggest that we put it off until early August? I wish you could understand . I'm looking forward to hearing from you soon.Yours,Joe第二节假设你是红星中学高三(1 )班的学生李华,请根据以下四幅图的先后顺序,为校刊"英语园地〞写一篇短文,记述你和同学们向学校提建议,解决自行车存放问题的过程.注意：1. 词数不少于60 .2. 短文的开头已给出,不计入总字数.There was a problem with the parking place for bikes in our school.____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ 【写作指导】本篇情景作文属于北京(高|考)的常规出题模式,体裁为稿件,主题是"和谐校园,人人有责〞类.从体裁和主题的角度上来说,考生并不陌生. "提建议〞主题在应用文中出现过,而且其中一些场景"讨论〞在之前的模拟考试屡次出现,自行车拥堵和提交建议也属于日常表达,还是相对容易操作的.只要各位考生关注以下四个方面即可：体裁：北京卷的情景作文主要考查两种体裁,一为"稿件〞,二为"日记〞.前者关注的是"我们做了什么事〞,所以在写作中,重点要突出事件的描写；而后者强调的是"我/我们的感受〞.另外,从时间上看,这题考的是周记,也就意味着图与图之间动作转折性大,不及日记动作衔接紧密.因此,在该题中,假设想分数比较理想的话,重点需要突出事件的描写,以及对动作时间间隔的把握.要点：情景作文的评卷原那么是每幅图的要点3分,所以考生一定要抓住图画要点,比方首||幅图的要点是"发现问题,自行车阻塞〞,第二图的要点是"讨论问题〞,第三幅图的要点是"提交建议〞,最||后一幅图的要点是"又建了一个门,不再堵塞〞.因此,对于考生的最||低要求是将这四个短语变成四句话,写在作文当中.这样的话,作文至||少从要点上来说,没有失分的地方.细节和过渡：情景作文的要点全面是不够的,细节描写也是考官在最||终给分时的一个重要考量.第|一幅图的细节是中文"存车处〞"入口〞以及李华的担忧表情；第二幅图细节在于一个同学在记录"建议〞；第三幅图的细节是钟表的时间"下午五点〞,还有中文字"校长室〞以及"我和另一个同学〞.当然,情景作文的情感描写也是细节的一局部,该题中分别有第|一幅图李华的担忧,第二幅图大家的踊跃积极,第三幅图我们提交建议时的迫不及待,第四幅图我的成就感.如果细节描写不齐全的话,有可能会减掉一定的分数.另外,良好的细节支持是行文连贯即过渡的根底,当然,过渡主要考察学生逻辑思维和过渡情景的能力,它使行文饱满流畅,这点也是将二档文和三档文区分的重要根据.句式多样：句式是否多样取决于考生平时的功夫够不够,语法和句型掌握和准确适用情况如何.这点是高分作文不可或缺的权衡因素.综上,该情景作文难度中等.要点没有偏难词汇和表达.假设要到达及格的分数,首||先保证体裁、要点没问题,不出现大的语法错误(如时态、人称) .但是假设要分数比较理想,还需要良好的细节补充衔接以使行文连贯和多样的句式应用来丰富文章表达.总之情景作文还是考察学生用英语说事的能力,需要学生平时多观察生活,积累语料.在此根底上,建议考生平时学好语法,多写多练多修改多研究范文,这样方能练就一个扎实的写作功底.【总分值范文】【亮点点击】本篇范文要点齐全,言简意赅,句子之间衔接自然.前两句开门见山地介绍了发现的问题,almost blocked两个单词的运用符合图画内容,生动形象；接着用So把第|一幅图画和第二幅图画的内容连接起来,并用"had a discussion and wrote a report"简洁地表达出了第二幅图画的要点；然后又用一个Then 把第二幅图画的内容和第三幅图画的内容自然地连接起来,用两句话概括了第三幅图画的所有内容；最||后,用Soon afterwards引出了最||后一个要点,同时文章最||后一句话也是点睛之笔,起到了总结作用.7.2021年安徽卷为了帮助中学生健康成长,某中学英文报开辟了"HEART -TO -HEART〞专栏.假设你是该栏目的编辑Jamie ,收到一封署名为Worried的求助信.信中该同学向你诉说了自己的困扰：近日容易发脾气,使正常的学习和生活受到了影响 .请用英文给该同学写一封回信.内容要点如下：1．表示理解并给予抚慰；2．提出建议并说明理由.注意：1．词数120左右；2．信中不能出现与本人相关的信息；3．信的开头与结尾已为你拟好,不计入总词数.参考词汇：temper n. 脾气,情绪Hi Worried ,I ,m sorry to know that you ,re having such a bad time at the moment.________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____Yours,Jamie 【写作指导】本文属于半开放性作文,要为你编辑Jamie的口吻回复Worried的求助信,他的困扰：近日容易发脾气,使正常的学习和生活受到了影响.要注意书信的格式和特殊用词.要点：1.很遗憾听说对方有此问题.并解释每个人都可能会遇见这样的问题,所以不必担忧.只有的是要学会控制自己的脾气.2.提出建议：与信任的人进行交流,告诉别人你的困扰,释放自己的压力.同时多参加各种户外活动,和朋友多玩球类运动.保持乐观的心态.对于考生的综合能力要求较高,要求考生有很强的谋篇布局的能力和组织要点的能力.需要注意紧扣文章主题,给出的要点都需要包括,缺一不可.写作时注意准确运用时态,上下文意思连贯,符合逻辑关系,一定要契合给出的开头,不能出现文章脱节问题.尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式,同时也要注意使用高级||词汇和高级||句型使文章显得更有档次.【一句多译】每个人都会有过这样的一段时期,在这时情况都很糟糕,所以你不要太担忧了.(1 )The truth is that everyone will have one of those periods when things seem to be going wrong, so you don't have to worry so much.(2 )It is true that everyone will have one of those periods when things seem to be going wrong, so you don't have to worry so much.。

五年高考（2014-2018年）英语满分作文详解及写作素材积累：话题08 人物介绍“人物介绍”是高中新课标24话题之一，也是高考英语常考的一个热点话题，本话题包括个人情况简介和名人事迹介绍等两个方面，这类文章通常以人物传记和逸闻趣事为主，目的是培养学生高尚的道德情操，树立正确的人生观和价值观。

[高考探究] “人物介绍”这个热点话题通常以阅读理解(人物传记)和书面表达(名人简介)的形式来进行考查，例如2016年全国卷Ⅰ阅读理解A篇；2016年江苏卷阅读理解D篇；2016年北京卷书面表达第一节；2014年江苏卷完形填空；2014年新课标全国卷Ⅰ书面表达等。

【预测题目】（一）中国历史上有很多伟大的女性，孟子的母亲就是其中的一位。

请你根据下面表格所提供的信息，用英语给你所在的学校的英语校报写一篇100词左右的文章，介绍这位伟大的女性。

____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ 【范文】Almost every Chinese knows Mencius’ mother，one of the greatest women in the history of China. She lived in Zou in the Warring States Period. When Mencius was only three years old，his father died. His mother endured a（二）假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。

2021年(高|考)英语总分值作文1.2021年新课标全国卷I假定你是李华,你的新西兰朋友Terry将去中国朋友家做客,发邮件向你询问有关习俗.请你回复邮件,内容包括：1．到达时间；2．适宜的礼物；3．餐桌礼仪.注意：1．词数100左右；2．可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯.____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________2.2021年新课标全国卷II你受学生会委托为校宣传栏"英语天地〞写一那么通知,请大家观看一部英语短片Growing Together ,内容包括：(1)短片内容：学校的开展；(2)放映时间、地点；(3)欢迎对短片提出意见.注意：(1)词数100左右；(2)可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯.____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________3. 2021年新课标全国卷III假定你是李华,你的英国朋友Peter 来信询问你校学生体育运动情况.请给他回信,内容包括：1. 学校的体育场馆；2. 主要的运开工程；3. 你喜欢的工程 .注意：1. 词数100左右：2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯.____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________4.2021年浙江卷第|一节应用文写作假定你是李华,你校英语协会招聘志愿者,接待来访的国外中学生.请你写信应聘,内容包括：1. 口语能力：2. 相关经验；3. 应聘目的.1. 词数80左右；2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯.____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________第二节读后续写阅读下面短文,根据所给情节进行续写,使之构成一个完整的故事.It was summer, and my dad wanted to treat me t o a vacation like never before. He decided to take me on a trip to the Wild West.We took a plane to Albuquerque, a big city in the state of New Mexico. We reached Albuquerque in the late afternoon. Uncle Paul, my dad ,s friend, picked us up from the airport and drove us up to his farm in Pecos.His wife Tina cooked us a delicious dinner and we got to know his sons Ryan and Kyle. My dad and I spent the night in the guestroom of the farm house listenin g to the frogs and water rolling down the river nearb y. Very early in the morning, Uncle Paul woke us up to have breakfast. "The day starts at dawn on my farm," he said. After breakfast, I went to help Aunt Tina feed the chickens. while my dad went with Uncle Paul to take the sheep out to graze(吃草). I was impressed to see my dad and Uncle Paul riding horses. They looked really cool.In the afternoon, I asked Uncle Paul if I could take a horse ride, and he said yes, as long as my dad went with me. I wasn ,t going to take a horse ride by myself anyway. So, my dad and I put on our new cowboy hats, got on our horses, and headed slowly towards the mountains. "Don ,t be late for supper," Uncle Paul cried, "and keep to the track so that you don ,t get lost!" "OK! " my dad cried back. After a while Uncle Paul an d his farm house were out of sight. It was so peaceful and quiet and the colors of the brown rocks, the deep green pine trees, and the late afternoon sun mixed to create a magic scene. It looked like a beautiful woven(编织的)blanket spread out upon the ground just for us.注意：1. 所续写短文的词数应为l50左右；2. 至||少使用5个短文中标有下划线的关键词语：4. 续写完成后,请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语.5.2021年天津卷假设你是晨光中学的机器人兴趣小组组长李津,你的美国朋友Chris就读于天津某国际学校,他曾在机器人技能竞赛中获奖.你打算邀请他参加你的团队,参加即将于7月底在天津举行的世|界青少年机器人技能竞赛.请根据以下提示代表兴趣小组给他写一封电子邮件.(1 )比赛的时间、地点；(2 )邀请他的原因；(3 )训练方案将发送其邮箱,请他提出建议.注意：(1 )词数不少于100；(2 )可适当参加细节,使内容充实、行文连贯；(3 )开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数.参考词汇：世|界青少年机器人技能竞赛the World Adolescent Robotics CompetitionDear Chris,I have good news to tell you. __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________I ,m looking forward to your reply.Yours,Li Jin6.2021年北京卷第|一节(1) 表示欢迎；(2) 推荐他上哪所大学；(3) 建议他做哪些准备工作.注意：(1). 词数不少于50；(2). 开头和结尾已给出 ,不计入总词数.Dear Jim,____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ You rs,Li Hua假设你是红星中学高三学生李华 ,请根据以下四幅图的先后顺序 ,写一篇英文周记 ,记述你们上周接待外国学生 ,带着他们体验中国茶文化的全过程.注意：词数不少于60 .(请务必将作文写在答题卡指定区域内)____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________7.2021年江苏卷请阅读下面文字,并按照要求用英语写一篇150 词左右的文章.【写作内容】1. 用约30个词概括上述利用排名(ratings )进行消费的现象；2. 谈谈你如何看待消费排名,然后用2 -3个理由或论据支撑你的看法.1. 写作过程中不能直接引用原文语句；2. 作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称；3. 不必写标题.【评分标准】内容完整,语言标准,语篇连贯,词数适当.____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ 2021年(高|考)英语总分值作文1.2021年新课标全国卷I假定你是李华,方案暑假期间去英国学习英语,为期六周.下面的广告引起了你的注意,请给该校写封信,询问有关情况(箭头所指内容) .注意：100左右.2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯.3.参考词汇：住宿- accommodation____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ 【写作指导】(一)仔细审题理思路看到英语作文试题后,不要急于往答题卷上书写,应该先对试题所提供的材料及要求进行仔细地审读,理清写作思路,明确写作任务.在审题时,要审清写作文体,审清动词时态,审清使用的人称,审清写作要点及具体的写作要求等.只有进行了充分地试题,才可能有的放矢,才可能圆满地完成写作任务.李华方案暑假期间去英国学习英语为期六周,看到广告后自己感觉有一些问题广告里不清楚,想要给校方写信咨询有关事项,考生要清楚这是一封信,要符合信的格式.这是考生非常熟悉的一个应用文文体.考生要注意动词时态的变化,以一般现在时为主,兼有将来时,比方：功课什么时间开始?这是将来的事情.注意恰当使用一些连词,使文章自然、流畅.使用一些高级||句型和词汇来提高作文档次.(二)精心布局谋好篇在经过仔细审题之后,考生还需要进一步对所要写的作文进行总体精心设计,包括需要涵盖几方面的内容要点,需要分成几个段落来写,需要使用哪些句型等.有些考生可能会感觉这样做没有必要,感觉这样做浪费时间.其实不然,这一环节是为下一步写好作文奠定坚实的根底.(三)搭好框架信心足如果不是因为时间问题,考生最||好先在草稿纸上草拟一个写作小提纲,搭好写作的整体框架,列出主要的要点提纲,列出需要使用的主要词汇、短语、句型等,这样再往答题卷上书写时,就会信心十足,就会条理更加清晰.(四)扩展提纲连成文紧接着就是对写作提纲进行充实扩展,在答题纸上进行书写.写作时应注意要点的完整性,上下文的连贯性,词汇及句式的多样性,语言的准确性.而且需要注意内容充实,积极健康,逻辑清晰,语言标准,交际得体,建议词数保持在80至||120之间.应尽可能运用比较熟悉的词汇、短语和句型,尽量变换句式,在有把握的情况下,才可使用一些使短文能够增色的较高级||的词汇、短语或者句式.(五)过渡词语文紧凑考生在写作时,可在文中穿插一些过渡性词汇、短语或句型,这样会使短文过渡自然,衔接紧密,行文紧凑.例如：表示困果关系- -therefore ,so ,hence ,thus ,accordingly ,consequently ,as a result表示举例示范- -for example ,in other words ,for instance ,that is ,that is to say表示总结概括- -in summary ,to sum up ,in brief ,in short ,on the whole ,in a word ,all in all ,in conclusion ,as has been noted ,on the whole表示递进过渡- -again ,also ,worsestill ,obviously ,then ,besides ,further ,furthermore ,moreover ,next ,similarly ,after a while ,at the same time ,in addition ,meanwhile, suddenly, later, soon, in the same way, what ,s more表示转折让步- -unfortunately ,though/ although ,anyway ,but ,howeve r, otherwise ,still ,yet ,after all ,in spite of ,on the contrary ,on the other hand ,in any case ,whatever(六)卷面整洁悦人目英语作文毕竟是一项主观性试题,考生的作文分数除了受写作水平影响以外,还受阅卷老师的主观评价影响.干净整洁的卷面,漂亮工整的字体,会使人赏心悦目,会使阅卷老师眼前一亮,从而给阅卷老师留下非常好的印象,无疑会使作文增色不少.这样的英语作文相对来说,分数会明显高于写作水平相当,但是卷面比较差的考生.因此,在写作时,书写与卷面是考生应该留意的一个重要方面,需要做到英语字母书写标准,工整清晰,大小适中,卷面整洁,忌潦草凌乱,乱涂乱改,卷面一塌糊涂,令阅卷老师头痛不已. (七)耐心复查把好关作文写完后,并不是完事大吉了,考生还需要对自己的作文进行从头至||尾耐心地复查,把好写作的最||后一道关.这是写作中不可缺少的一个重要环节.在复查的过程中,考生需要查看是否由于粗心而出现了一些低级||错误,如单复数、拼写、搭配、时态、标点符号等.对于查找出来的错误,切忌乱涂乱改,可以按照短文改错的纠错方法在原文上进行单词的添加、删除或者修改.【总分值范文】Dear Sir/Madam,I'm looking forward to your early reply.Yours faithfully,Li Hua 【亮点说明】短文用了一些短语,增加了文章的色彩,如：plan to do sth ;would like to do sth; pay for; look forward to doing/sth等；用了一些过渡词如：First ,Besides等,使文章过渡自然；用了一些连词使句子结构复杂化不再单一.如：I ,d also like to know how much I have to pay for the course and whether accommodation is included.并且wish后用了虚拟语气,增加了文章的亮点.2.2021年新课标全国卷II一家英语报社向中学生征文,主题是"十年后的我" .请根据以下要点和你的畅想完成短文.1.家庭；2.工作；3.业余生活.注意：1.词数100左右；2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯；3.开头语已为你写好.I often imagine what my life will be like in the future.____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ 【写作指导】这是一篇典型的提纲式半开放书面表达.主题是"十年后的我〞.在写作时要注意从家庭、工作和业余生活三方面要点着手,因为提示信息较少,所以要充分发挥想象,增加适当的细节以使行文连贯,充实内容.比方可以联想到的内容有健身,度假,聚会等等.在写作时尽量使用恰当的连接词或者插入语以使文章层次清楚,条理清晰.还要正确使用多种句式结构和高级||亮点词汇来提高文章的档次,如定语从句,宾语从句和状语从句等.此外,因为是畅想未来,所以要用一般将来时.【总分值范文】【亮点点击】本篇范文短小精悍,要点全面,语言简练,时态人称准确,很好的完成了写作任务.在文章开头作者紧扣题目,提出自己对未来的畅想,然后从生活,工作,家庭三个方面描述了自己十年后的生活.在文中作者用到了短语In my free time , In a word , such as等介词短语,防止了文章句式的单一.此外,还用到了宾语从句in whatever I do、I will work in a computer company as a program designer等,这些都给朴素的语言带来了亮点.3.2021重庆卷(1 )请结合材料,按要求用英文写作."My friend falls, I laugh; my phone falls, I cry."要求：(1)就此材料发表你的看法；(2)紧扣材料,有明确的观点；(3)词数不少于60 .____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________【总分值范文】When I hear that someone says, "My friend falls, I laugh; my phone falls, I cry." I feel rather annoyed and surprised. What he says suggests that he cares little about others' pain or trouble, even if they're his friends. Moreover, it seems that he always thinks more of himself than of others.I argue that every one of us should try our best to help those in need. Then we can have someone to turn to when in trouble. Otherwise we'll have to answer for our selfishness sooner or later. That is what the saying goes: "Afriend in need is a friend indeed." Only when you learn to give can you expect to receive.(2 )青少年研究专家Susan Beacham在自己的英文网站上开辟专栏,邀请大家分享心目中的"最||好礼物" .她认为,礼物贵在心意,应为之付出时间和精力.假设你是李华,请用英文发帖,内容应包括：●赞同Susan的看法●你收到或送出的最||好礼物是什么●该礼物的意义●期待大家回复注意：(1)词数不少于80；(2)符合语言标准；(3)开头已给出(不计入总词数) .I am a high school student from China.____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________【总分值范文】I am a high school student from China. I quite agree with you that gifts should be worth time and energy if you want to send them to someone you love. It does't matter whether it is expensive or not. What really matters is whether it comes from your inner heart.Now, it is still hanging on the wall of my bedroom. Whenever I look at it, I couldn't help thinking of my friend. However far away we are, we feel close to each other. So I think a gift full of love and effort is a true and most valuable one.4.2021年浙江卷学校图书馆需要购置一批新书,现向学生征求意见.假设你是李越,你认为学校图书馆最||需要购置科普类图书(popular science books)和文学类图书(literary books) .请你用英语给图书馆||王老师写一封100 -120个词的信,推荐这两类书,并分别说明推荐理由.注意：信的抬头与落款已给出(不计入词数) .Dear Mr. Wang,____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________Yours sincerely,Li Yue 【写作指导】根据提示你用英语给图书馆||王老师写一封100 -120词的信,可知这里应该是考生比较熟悉的书信格式.学校图书馆需要购置一批新书,现向学生征求意见.先写这个内容来引出你要提出的建议.在写推荐的两类书时,要写出为什么要推荐这些书.【总分值范文】Dear Mr. Wang,Knowing that our library is going to buy books, I'd like to give some suggestions.What we need most are popular science bo oks. Usually popular science books explain basic principles of nature in a simple and interesting way. They help us understand science subjects better and arouse our curiosity about scientific discoveries.Yours sincerely,Li Yue 【亮点说明】短文用了一些短语和句式增加了文章的色彩,如：would like to do；help sb do sth；not only...but also;encourage sb to do sth;That is why…等,还用了一些连词使句子结构复杂化,如：What we need most are popular science books这里what引导的主语从句；That is why I recommend another category of books：这里why引导的表语从句；I ,ll be glad if you can consider my recommendation.这里是if引导的条件状语从句 .5.2021年天津卷假设你是晨光中学高二(1)班的班长李津,得知美国学生Chris作为交换生,下学期将到你班学习.请你根据以下提示,给他写封邮件：(1)表示欢迎；(2)介绍与本地生活相关的信息(如气候、饮食等)；(3)介绍本班情况；(4)希望Chris做哪些事情,以增进中美学生间的了解和友谊.注意：(1)请勿提及与考生相关的真实信息；(2)可适当参加细节,使内容充实、行文连贯；(3)词数不少于100；开头已给出,不计入总词数.参考词汇：交换生exchange studentDear Chris,I'm Li Jin, monitor of Class One, Grade Eleven.____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________Li Jin 【写作指导】本试题只给了要写的信的大致内容,而具体的细节需要考生自己发挥,因此它是一篇半开放式作文.私人信件一般分为以下几局部：一是说明知道对方的情况后的态度,如果是好的事情,一般用"I'm /feel glad to hear that..."；如果是不好的事情,那么用"I'm sorry to hear that ..." ,然后就是对朋友的抚慰.二是谈一谈自己周围的情况.三是鼓励朋友更加努力以获得更大成就或者提出一些防止不好事情发生的建议.最||后对朋友表示祝愿.【总分值范文】Dear Chris,I'm Li Jin, monitor of Class One, Grade Eleven. I'm glad to hear that you will come to our school as an exchange student. You're welcome to stay with us.Our class is made up of 50 lively boys and girls, who are warm and generous and ready to offer help. They are very friendly and easy to get along with. You will have a good time and get used to the life soon.Yours,Li Jin 【亮点点击】文章由三段构成,结构非常清楚、合理,使阅卷老师一目了然地了解考生想表达的内容 .文中使用了复合句,如:I'm glad to hear that...及where和who引导的非限制性定语从句.恰当地使用短语be located in,be famous for,be made up of,get along with等 .6.2021年北京卷第|一节(15分)你给英国笔友Chris写一封信,内容包括：1. 你们原方案7月份一同去云南旅游；2. 由于脚部受伤,你无法按原方案前往；3. 表达你的歉意并建议将旅行推迟到8月份.注意：1. 词数不少于50 .2. 可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯.3. 开头和结尾已给出,不计入总次数.Dear Chris,____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours,Joe【写作指导】应用文写作包括书信,通知和演讲稿,书信是较为常考的类型.2021年北京(高|考)英语考查的为书信中的抱歉信,学生在写抱歉信时障碍比较小,但如何写出高分作文是难点.写应用文时应保证以下内容：表达歉意Please accept my heartfelt apology.解释原因the reason why I …is that…提出建议I would appreciate it if you can allow me to …结尾Once again, I'm sorry for any inconvenience I caused.考生在写作中一定要注意到格式标准、语气合理,交际感强烈,否那么分数很可能会在12分以下,应用文书写不需要过长的句子,句子长度控制在两行以内,应注意行文流畅,感情真挚,多用sincerely, from the bottom of my heart, I am indeed sorry for the trouble ,使用schedule, postpone等升级||单词难度,但注意不要通篇难词.另外需要提醒的是,书信应有称呼,有结尾,假设开头结尾已给出,需要在答题纸上重新抄写一遍,否那么扣相应分数.【总分值范文】Dear Chris,How is it going?I remember we planned to visit Yunnan in July.But now, because my left foot was injured, I cannot go with you as planned.I'm sorry about it. Can I suggest that we put it off until early August? I wish you could understand . I'm looking forward to hearing from you soon.Yours,Joe第二节假设你是红星中学高三(1 )班的学生李华,请根据以下四幅图的先后顺序,为校刊"英语园地〞写一篇短文,记述你和同学们向学校提建议,解决自行车存放问题的过程.注意：1. 词数不少于60 .2. 短文的开头已给出,不计入总字数.There was a problem with the parking place for bikes in our school.____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ 【写作指导】本篇情景作文属于北京(高|考)的常规出题模式,体裁为稿件,主题是"和谐校园,人人有责〞类.从体裁和主题的角度上来说,考生并不陌生. "提建议〞主题在应用文中出现过,而且其中一些场景"讨论〞在之前的模拟考试屡次出现,自行车拥堵和提交建议也属于日常表达,还是相对容易操作的.只要各位考生关注以下四个方面即可：体裁：北京卷的情景作文主要考查两种体裁,一为"稿件〞,二为"日记〞.前者关注的是"我们做了什么事〞,所以在写作中,重点要突出事件的描写；而后者强调的是"我/我们的感受〞.另外,从时间上看,这题考的是周记,也就意味着图与图之间动作转折性大,不及日记动作衔接紧密.因此,在该题中,假设想分数比较理想的话,重点需要突出事件的描写,以及对动作时间间隔的把握.要点：情景作文的评卷原那么是每幅图的要点3分,所以考生一定要抓住图画要点,比方首||幅图的要点是"发现问题,自行车阻塞〞,第二图的要点是"讨论问题〞,第三幅图的要点是"提交建议〞,最||后一幅图的要点是"又建了一个门,不再堵塞〞.因此,对于考生的最||低要求是将这四个短语变成四句话,写在作文当中.这样的话,作文至||少从要点上来说,没有失分的地方.细节和过渡：情景作文的要点全面是不够的,细节描写也是考官在最||终给分时的一个重要考量.第|一幅图的细节是中文"存车处〞"入口〞以及李华的担忧表情；第二幅图细节在于一个同学在记录"建议〞；第三幅图的细节是钟表的时间"下午五点〞,还有中文字"校长室〞以及"我和另一个同学〞.当然,情景作文的情感描写也是细节的一局部,该题中分别有第|一幅图李华的担忧,第二幅图大家的踊跃积极,第三幅图我们提交建议时的迫不及待,第四幅图我的成就感.如果细节描写不齐全的话,有可能会减掉一定的分数.另外,良好的细节支持是行文连贯即过渡的根底,当然,过渡主要考察学生逻辑思维和过渡情景的能力,它使行文饱满流畅,这点也是将二档文和三档文区分的重要根据.句式多样：句式是否多样取决于考生平时的功夫够不够,语法和句型掌握和准确适用情况如何.这点是高分作文不可或缺的权衡因素.综上,该情景作文难度中等.要点没有偏难词汇和表达.假设要到达及格的分数,首||先保证体裁、要点没问题,不出现大的语法错误(如时态、人称) .但是假设要分数比较理想,还需要良好的细节补充衔接以使行文连贯和多样的句式应用来丰富文章表达.总之情景作文还是考察学生用英语说事的能力,需要学生平时多观察生活,积累语料.在此根底上,建议考生平时学好语法,多写多练多修改多研究范文,这样方能练就一个扎实的写作功底.【总分值范文】【亮点点击】本篇范文要点齐全,言简意赅,句子之间衔接自然.前两句开门见山地介绍了发现的问题,almost blocked两个单词的运用符合图画内容,生动形象；接着用So把第|一幅图画和第二幅图画的内容连接起来,并用"had a discussion and wrote a report"简洁地表达出了第二幅图画的要点；然后又用一个Then 把第二幅图画的内容和第三幅图画的内容自然地连接起来,用两句话概括了第三幅图画的所有内容；最||后,用Soon afterwards引出了最||后一个要点,同时文章最||后一句话也是点睛之笔,起到了总结作用.7.2021年安徽卷为了帮助中学生健康成长,某中学英文报开辟了"HEART -TO -HEART〞专栏.假设你是该栏目的编辑Jamie ,收到一封署名为Worried的求助信.信中该同学向你诉说了自己的困扰：近日容易发脾气,使正常的学习和生活受到了影响 .请用英文给该同学写一封回信.内容要点如下：1．表示理解并给予抚慰；2．提出建议并说明理由.注意：1．词数120左右；2．信中不能出现与本人相关的信息；3．信的开头与结尾已为你拟好,不计入总词数.参考词汇：temper n. 脾气,情绪Hi Worried ,I ,m sorry to know that you ,re having such a bad time at the moment.________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____Yours,Jamie 【写作指导】本文属于半开放性作文,要为你编辑Jamie的口吻回复Worried的求助信,他的困扰：近日容易发脾气,使正常的学习和生活受到了影响.要注意书信的格式和特殊用词.要点：1.很遗憾听说对方有此问题.并解释每个人都可能会遇见这样的问题,所以不必担忧.只有的是要学会控制自己的脾气.2.提出建议：与信任的人进行交流,告诉别人你的困扰,释放自己的压力.同时多参加各种户外活动,和朋友多玩球类运动.保持乐观的心态.对于考生的综合能力要求较高,要求考生有很强的谋篇布局的能力和组织要点的能力.需要注意紧扣文章主题,给出的要点都需要包括,缺一不可.写作时注意准确运用时态,上下文意思连贯,符合逻辑关系,一定要契合给出的开头,不能出现文章脱节问题.尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式,同时也要注意使用高级||词汇和高级||句型使文章显得更有档次.【一句多译】每个人都会有过这样的一段时期,在这时情况都很糟糕,所以你不要太担忧了.(1 )The truth is that everyone will have one of those periods when things seem to be going wrong, so you don't have to worry so much.(2 )It is true that everyone will have one of those periods when things seem to be going wrong, so you don't have to worry so much.【总分值范文】Hi Worried,I'm sorry to know that you're having such a bad time at the moment. The truth is that everyone will have one of those periods when things seem to be going wrong, so you don't have to worry so much. The important thing is to learn to control your temper so that you may not do or say anything you ,ll regret. Here are three useful tips:I hope you'll soon feel calmer and carry on as normal.Yours,Jamie假定你是中学生李华.美国一个中学校长代表团即将访问你校并出席英语周的一项活动.请根据写作要点和写作要求写一篇欢迎词.写作要点：1.表示对客人的欢迎；2.介绍此项活动(如活动目的、内容等)；3.表达对客人的祝愿.写作要求：1.词数不少于100；2.称呼已经给出,请写欢迎词正文；3.不能使用真实姓名和学校名称.Dear American guests,____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ 【写作指导】这篇文章要求考生写一篇欢迎词,写起来相对容易 .在写作时,首||先,要注意写作要点的齐全,具体应该包括(1)表示欢迎；(2)活动的目的和内容；(3)表示祝愿.在这些要点中可以适当地增加一些内容；使文章内容更丰富；其次,要注意使用一些高级||词汇和连接词,使文章通顺流畅；最||后,按照写作要求,文章应该以一般现在时和一般将来时为主.【总分值范文】Dear American guests,On behalf of our school, I would like to express our warm welcome to you. We are lucky to have you here in the middle of our English Week activities.I sincerely wish you a pleasant time with us. Thank you.【亮点点击】此篇写作要点齐全,表达流畅,符合(高|考)的要求.特别值得一提的是,文章中使用了大量的高级||词汇,如on behalf of, express our warm welcome to, develop our interest in, consist of, benefit from；同时也使用了一些高级||的句型,如As scheduled等.。

2021年(高|考)英语总分值作文1.2021年新课标全国卷I假定你是李华,你的新西兰朋友Terry将去中国朋友家做客,发邮件向你询问有关习俗.请你回复邮件,内容包括：1．到达时间；2．适宜的礼物；3．餐桌礼仪.注意：1．词数100左右；2．可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯.____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ 【试题分析】书面表达具有很强的开放性和选择性,给予考生畅所欲言的空间,摆脱单一方法,唯一答案的思维模式,在展示多彩思维活动的同时,真正考查了考生语言能力、文化意识、思维品质和学习能力,让考生感受英语学习的趣味与魅力,突出英语学科的独有特征 .2021年全国卷I书面表达体裁为应用文电子邮件,内容为回复外国朋友Terry的邮件,向其介绍在中国|家庭做客方面的相关习俗 .要求文中涵盖试题给出的三方面内容要点,即到达时间、适宜的礼物和餐桌礼仪.该题型和内容设计紧密联系考生实际,但是,餐桌礼仪这个普通得再普通不过的日常小节反而在生活中被很多中学生忽略了.如果没有跨文化比照凝练出的思维品格和文化素养的意识,学生很难在短时间内写出中国老百姓的餐桌礼仪文化.例如受邀赴宴客人可以准时到达但切忌过早到达.外地客人所带礼物常见为能表达客人当地特色的物品.但注意,传统的中国人收到礼物后一般不会当着客人的面翻开.中国餐桌为圆桌,正对门的位置为上座,一般为长者位置. 中国人特别尊敬长辈,用餐时,需等长辈先动筷子.吃饭时不得发出声响,强调"食不语寝不言〞等.中国地域广文化差异也很大,给予思维发散的考生提供了充分表达自己的空间和时机.在宣传中国习俗文化的同时,对考生的跨文化意识、思维品质提出了更高的要求,鼓励考生站在外国人的角度讲中国习俗特色,积极调动语言,说明事实,说明差异.【思路点拨】本文是一篇电子邮件类应用文写作.餐桌礼仪也是考生比较熟悉的话题.成文时注意以下几点：一、内容要点要齐全1．到达时间；2．适宜的礼物；3．餐桌礼仪.二、时态：主要用一般现在时和将来时；三、人称：第二、三人称.四、注意使用恰当的高级||词汇、短语或句型,以提高作文的水平；五、适当使用一些连接词和插入语,使文章表达自然、流畅.1. 浏览信息要点2.三个任务点,第|一段内容：问候对方,马上呈现对方所涉及的话题,拜访中国|家庭,做客时间的要求和忌讳! 第二段内容：做客拜访的适宜礼物,可以适当延展,初次拜访,亲密朋友之间拜访,二次拜访,家庭情况适合的礼物,通用的礼物等.第三段：table manners,可以描述两三个通常的中国人的餐桌礼节和忌讳的地方,有鲜明特色之处,最||后一句表达祝愿.3.时态,给对方的建议和说明,用一般现在时,描述风俗礼仪这是客观规律性的东西,用一般现在时.4.头脑风暴短语、句型结构,开始打草稿5.行文6.检查拼写和语法.If you have any other problems, please don ,t hesitate to contact me.YoursLi Hua 【素材积累】做客礼仪：1. 预先约定一个时间以便对方事先作好安排.如果事先已经约定好了时间,就应遵守约定,准时到达,如需提早十分钟二十分钟之内可以接受,不要迟到,以免主人等候,也不要太早到,以免主人未作好准备.这是一个根本礼节问题.2.如果有专属地域文化特色的礼物是最||好的.如果朋友家有长辈,带点烟酒和茶叶或一些老人家用的保健品等；如果朋友家有小孩,带点儿童玩具或买箱牛奶,然后加点烟酒或茶叶；不要送钟、梨、伞等这些东西,被认为不桔祥.3.主人会请客人入座上席,再请长辈入座客人旁.入座的时侯要从椅子的左边进入.在中餐结束时,筷子应整齐地放在靠碗右边的桌上,并应等客人们都放下筷子以后,主人示意离席前方可以离开,不能自己吃完了放下筷子就走,这样做是很没礼貌的表现.常用词语和句子准时on time/punctually餐桌礼仪table manners适宜的、恰当的appropriate拜访pay a visit toYou are supposed/expected/required to do…It ,s a good idea to…It ,s appropriate/suitable to do …It ,s sensible/reasonable/advisable to do …It ,s good manners to do …It ,s noteworthy that…I think it would be more help ful if you could do…It would be wise of you to…It ,s desirable to do …It ,s inappropriate to do …It ,s impolite to do…It ,s unwise/inadvisable to do …Never (助动词/系动词/情态动词)主语+谓语动词…It ,s not suitable for you to do…in such a situation.【备考启示】近年来(高|考)写作的命题常用的思想就是高起点低落点.高起点题目很高,中国文化,中国故事,中国礼仪等等,但最||终都把它们落在应用文的框架里,这就是低落点.写这样的作文,一定要注意不能写过于具体的内容,要找最||重要的,最||熟悉的写,不要面面俱到,中国餐桌礼仪内容太多,100单词无法写.找重点,以点带面.但选择重要内容本身就是一种能力.2.2021年新课标全国卷II你受学生会委托为校宣传栏"英语天地〞写一那么通知,请大家观看一部英语短片Growing Together ,内容包括：(1)短片内容：学校的开展；(2)放映时间、地点；(3)欢迎对短片提出意见.注意：(1)词数100左右；(2)可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯.____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________【写作点拨】英语书面通知的时态应该以一般将来时为主,多使用被动语态、简单句.在通知中不应当过度的使用较复杂的词语和读起来拗口的句子.第二个注意点：层次一定要清晰,一个层次要表达一件事情,使人看起来一目了然.【总分值范文】Boys and girls,To begin with, the name of the movie is Growing together, which is about the development of our beloved school; as a result, it will be not only meaningful but also interesting. Besides, it will be in the library from 2:00 to 4:00 in the afternoon on June 9th. What ,s more, everyone of you will be welcome to take part in it, enjoying the movie, having a heated discussion afterwards and giving your own comments.Hopefully, you would make it to our activity. I have the confidence that you will have a great time.The Student Union3. 2021年新课标全国卷III假定你是李华,你的英国朋友Peter 来信询问你校学生体育运动情况.请给他回信,内容包括：1. 学校的体育场馆；2. 主要的运开工程；3. 你喜欢的工程 .注意：1. 词数100左右：2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯.____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ 【思路点拨】此题作文为提纲式作文,形式依然是书信,即给英国朋友Peter介绍学校体育运动情况,属于学校生活话题.这一话题贴合学生生活的实际,学生并不陌生,有话可说.首||先可以介绍学校的体育场馆,场馆的位置,大小,开放时间等等.然后简要介绍学校主要开设的体育工程有哪些,可挑选一到两个做详细介绍,如学生的活动时间,活动形式,以及此类活动的好处等.再次简要分析自己喜欢的体育工程是什么,并简单分析喜欢的原因,自己从中得到的益处等.文章可主要采用一般现在时态,第|一人称的方式来写.【总分值范文】Dear Peter,I am exceedingly delighted to hear from you. You asked me in your last letter about the physical exercise in our school and the following information may give you a rough sketch.To begin with, a fabulous new stadium has been built up, which has become the new landmark in our school. Moreover, with the stadium set up, a wide range of sports events are able to be held, of which ping -pong, football as well as running competitions enjoy great popularity. As for me, I ,m intoxicated with basketball since it has been giving me strength to confront the challenges in my life.All in all, I sincerely invite you to come to our school and see for yourself.Yours,Li Hua4.2021年浙江卷第|一节应用文写作假定你是李华,你校英语协会招聘志愿者,接待来访的国外中学生.请你写信应聘,内容包括：1. 口语能力：2. 相关经验；3. 应聘目的.注意：1. 词数80左右；2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯.____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________【思路点拨】本篇书面表达属于应用文,要求写应聘信.第|一步：根据提示可知,学校英语协会招聘志愿者,接待来访的国外中学生.要求写封应聘信,内容包括：1. 口语能力：2. 相关经验；3. 应聘目的.第二步：根据写作要求确定关键词(组) .第三步：根据提示和关键词(组)进行遣词造句,注意主谓一致和时态问题.第四步：连句成文,注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接和过渡,书写一定要标准清晰,保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的.本文内容完整,语言标准,语篇连贯,词数适当.另外全文中没有中国式英语的句式,显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力.【范文】Dear Sir or Madam,My name is Li Hua. And I am writing to apply for being a volunteer of our school English association.I have a good command of English and have been to the USA twice. So I can communicate well with native speakers of English. What ,s more, I am kind and friendly to other people. So I can easily get along with foreign students.I ,m particularly interested in this job because I want to further improve my oral English capabilities and interpersonal communication skills.Hopefully I can receive your acce ptance.Yours faithfully,Li Hua第二节读后续写阅读下面短文,根据所给情节进行续写,使之构成一个完整的故事.It was summer, and my dad wanted to treat me to a vacation like never before. He decided to take me on a trip to the Wild West.We took a plane to Albuquerque, a big city in the state of New Mexico. We reached Albuquerque in the late afternoon. Uncle Paul, my dad ,s friend, picked us up from the airport and drove us up to his farm in Pecos.His wife Tina cooked us a delicious dinner and we got to know his sons Ryan and Kyle. My dad and I spent the night in the guestroom of the farm house listening to the frogs and water rolling down the river nearby. Very early in the morning, Uncle Paul woke us up to have breakfast. "The day starts at dawn on my farm," he said. After breakfast, I went to help Aunt Tina feed the chickens. while my dad went with Uncle Paul to take the sheep out to graze(吃草). I was impressed to see my dad and Uncle Paul riding horses. They looked really cool.In the afternoon, I asked Uncle Paul if I could take a horse ride, and he said yes, as long as my dad went with me. I wasn ,t going to take a horse ride by myself anyway. So, my dad and I put on our new cowboy hats, got on our horses, and headed slowly towards the mountains. "Don ,t be late for supper," Uncle Paul cried, "and keep to the track so that you don ,t get lost!" "OK! " my dad cried back. After a while Uncle Paul and his farm house were out of sight. It was so peaceful and quiet and the colors of the brown rocks, the deep green pine trees, and the late afternoon sun mixed to create a magic scene. It looked like a beautiful woven(编织的)blanket spread out upon the ground just for us.注意：1. 所续写短文的词数应为l50左右；2. 至||少使用5个短文中标有下划线的关键词语：3. 续写局局部为两段,每段的开头语已为你写好；4. 续写完成后,请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语.【思路点拨】读后续写要求考生首||先要读懂已有信息,不仅能读懂字面含义,还要理清文章的脉络.续篇这篇短文时,考生要搞清楚故事的开展进程、前因后果、地理位置、人物思想情感的变化等.在此根底上,考生要顺着文章的思路,根据线索,发挥想象,对其后的情节进行合理预测,并用语言表达出来.通过阅读所给文章可知,父亲带儿子去西部荒野的一个朋友家体验农场生活,见父亲和叔叔骑马,儿子也很想骑,于是亲身上马体验.根据第|一段所给首||句Suddenly a little rabbit jumped out in front of my horse.这一句是故事开展的转折点,可从rabbit出现后带来的反响扩展开,可以写马的反响,也可以写人的反响,但要注意与第二段首||句相照应.第二段首||句是We had no idea where we were and it was getting dark.这一句照应前文Uncle Paul的叮嘱- -不要误吃晚饭,可从如何寻路返回农场去写.续写时注意要使用5个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语,我们要熟悉所给划线词语,恰当的时候加以运用.最||后还要注意所续写短文的词数应为150左右；续写完成后要用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语. 【总分值范文】We had no idea where we were and it got dark. Luckily the stars came out and gave us a little light when we were looking for the way to the farm house. After what must have been several hours, we suddenly heard the sound of sheep in the distance. My dad and I both rode our horses towards the sound of the sheep. As we got closer we saw Uncle Paul with a flashlight waving us over. What a night!5.2021年天津卷假设你是晨光中学的机器人兴趣小组组长李津,你的美国朋友Chris就读于天津某国际学校,他曾在机器人技能竞赛中获奖.你打算邀请他参加你的团队,参加即将于7月底在天津举行的世|界青少年机器人技能竞赛.请根据以下提示代表兴趣小组给他写一封电子邮件.(1 )比赛的时间、地点；(2 )邀请他的原因；(3 )训练方案将发送其邮箱,请他提出建议.注意：(1 )词数不少于100；(2 )可适当参加细节,使内容充实、行文连贯；(3 )开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数.参考词汇：世|界青少年机器人技能竞赛the World Adolescent Robotics CompetitionDear Chris,____________________________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________________________I ,m looking forward to your reply.Yours,Li Jin 【思路点拨】本篇书面要求写一封邀请信.写作的时候要注意以下几点：一、动笔前,一定要认真分析要点,理解要点要表达的含义,不能遗漏要点,跑题偏题.内容要点包括：1. 代表兴趣小组发出邀请；2. 介绍比赛的时间、地点等安排；3. 说明邀请他的原因,包括Chris曾在机器人技能竞赛中获奖；4. 告诉他训练方案将发送其邮箱,请他提出建议.二、写作时注意准确运用时态,对于本文来说,以一般将来时为主,上下文意思连贯,符合逻辑关系,尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式,同时也要注意使用高级||词汇和高级||句型使文章显得更有档次.【总分值范文】Dear Chris,I have good news to tell you. The World Adolescent Robotics Competition will be held in Tianjin at the end of July. Hearing that you once took part in a Robotics Skills Competition and won an award, I, on behalf of the Robotics Hobby Group, intend to invite you to join our team in the coming competition. I am sure that your involvement will not only help us in winning the award but also enhance the friendship between our two schools.With this email I also send you our training plan, about which I wish to get your advice because you are more experienced than us. We sincerely hope that we can participate in the competition as team partners.I ,m looking forward to your reply.Yours,Li Jin6.2021年北京卷第|一节假设你是红星中学高三学生李华 ,你的英国朋友Jim在给你的邮件中提到他对中国文化感兴趣 ,方案明年来北京上大学.他向你咨询相关信息.请给他回邮件 ,内容包括：(1) 表示欢迎；(2) 推荐他上哪所大学；(3) 建议他做哪些准备工作.注意：(1). 词数不少于50；(2). 开头和结尾已给出 ,不计入总词数.Dear Jim,____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours,Li Hua【思路点拨】本文为提纲式作文,文章要求写推荐信,为英国朋友介绍北京的大学.首||先可以介绍一下写作背景(Jim对中国文化感兴趣,要来中国学习) ,表达欢迎.然后推荐一所大学,并简要介绍推荐的原因(如大学的特色,可以学到什么等) .再次简单介绍应该做哪方面的准备,如可以提前学习汉语,读点有关中国传统文化的书,了解中国的习俗,让自己更好地适应中国的生活.文章可采用一般现在时,人称可以使用第二人称. 【总分值范文】Dear Jim,I ,m so glad to hear your future education plan in Beijing in your last letter. First I would like to express my warmest welcome to you and I am sure you will have the most unforgettable experience during your college in Beijing.I sincerely hope your dream will come true and it ,s my pleasure to show you around in Beijing when that daycomes. If you have further questions, please feel free to let me know.Yours,Li Hua 第二节假设你是红星中学高三学生李华 ,请根据以下四幅图的先后顺序 ,写一篇英文周记 ,记述你们上周接待外国学生 ,带着他们体验中国茶文化的全过程.注意：词数不少于60 .(请务必将作文写在答题卡指定区域内)____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ 【思路点拨】本文为图片介绍类作文,这类作文是根据给出的一幅或几幅图画所提供的信息写短文.此类题的体裁较广泛,可以是记叙文、说明文,也可以是议论文.按照本文的要求可知,是写一篇记叙文.1. 认真读图,把握中|心.根据提示可知,内容是带着外国学生体验中国茶文化的全过程,介绍了茶具,泡茶,沏茶,品茶的过程,所以这是这组图画所要表达的中|心.3. 连词成句,然后再连句成文.运用适当的单词或短语正确表达各图的意思.然后再将各图的单个句子串连起来.串连时,要注意使用适当的连接词语或过渡性语句,不至||于让读者觉得文章中出现跳跃现象,更使上下文更为紧凑、自然.一篇文章写好后,应进行检查,看短文中是否有错,如拼写、用词、时态、语态及表达方面的错误.5. 宜详那么详,该略那么略.对于一些细节方面的内容,如果是文章必不可少的,在写作过程中是不可将其忽略的.如果是可有可无的细节,那么可视具体情况进行增删.据此,我们在读图时一定要注意阅读各图中的一些细节内容,看其是否影响文章的内容.【总分值范文】Last week, we took the foreign students in our school to experience the authentic tea culture, which turned out be to extremely rewarding.On arriving at the tea house, the foreign students were impressed by the unique tea pots and tea cups. I gave them a vivid and informative introduction of tea culture, including its profound history, its rich variety, and the exquisite craftsmanship of making tea with their interest greatly sparked, I then began to teach them how to make tea.In order to deliver a clear presentation, I slowly explained the traditional procedure of making tea in detail. Absorbed in every move of mine, the foreign students were once again amazed by this unique culture and they couldn ,t help taking pictures fr om time to time.Next came the moment when I asked them to have a try themselves. Washing the tea pots, adding tea leaves, and pouring water into the cups, they followed my instructions and were really immersed in charming tea culture. The tea house witnessed a really enjoyable time for all of us.At the end of the activity, holding the tea bags in our hands, we took a picture to memorize the unforgettable day. It suddenly hit me that traditional culture like tea culture was of great charm and huge value. And I swelled with pride to spread our own culture to people all over the world.【亮点说明】巧妙使用定语从句 ,提升了文章档次：Last week, we took the foreign students in our school to experience the authentic tea culture, which turned out be to extremely rewarding.使用非谓语动词,使句子表达更简洁：On arriving at the tea house…I gave them a vivid and informative introduction of tea culture, including its profound history, its rich variety, Absorbed in every move of mine, the foreign students were once again amazed by this unique cultureholding the tea bags in our hands, we took a picture to memorize the unforgettable day.使用倒装句突出重点 .Next came the moment when I asked them to have a try themselves.使用it做形式主语,使表达更地道.It suddenly hit me that traditional culture like tea culture was of great charm and huge value.7.2021年江苏卷请阅读下面文字,并按照要求用英语写一篇150 词左右的文章.【写作内容】1. 用约30个词概括上述利用排名(ratings )进行消费的现象；2. 谈谈你如何看待消费排名,然后用2 -3个理由或论据支撑你的看法.【写作要求】1. 写作过程中不能直接引用原文语句；2. 作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称；3. 不必写标题.【评分标准】内容完整,语言标准,语篇连贯,词数适当.____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ 【思路点拨】今年作文仍然是读写作文,即先用30词概括阅读材料,然后针对材料中的话题写一篇议论文谈看法.首||先要认真阅读两段有关消费排名现象及观点的纯文字材料,然后进行比较和分析,说明态度,作出价值判断 .文章首||段要简要介绍两段材料,第|一段材料为一对母子买旅行箱看了网上的评论,结果买回来的旅行箱质量很好.第二段材料为一帮人去餐馆吃饭,看了on -line rating ,结果饭菜很不好吃,从而凸显出online rating的不靠谱.然后写你对online rating的看法,说明观点,注意用2 -3个论据来支撑自己的看法.文章属于议论文,要注意主题句的使用,论点之间要注意有条理.文章可主要采用一般现在时,第三人称来写.【总分值范文】Possible version one:As a major channel of consumption information, the rating is an efficient source of information for shopping in our own consumption. Interestingly, the same rating may have different influences on different consumers.There is no doubt that it is unwise to depend completely on the ratings in consumption. The advantages and disadvantages of ratings are often closely related. It is necessary to hold an objective attitude towards ratings. Possible version two:Nowadays, most commodities or services are rated through certain channels. These ratings, easy to access, are playing an increasingly important role in customers' purchase decision. However, results are sometimes unsatisfactory.There is no denying that such ratings might bring convenience to consumers, but they are often misleading and unreliable. As we all know, most of the ratings are based on others , judgment on the product or service concerned. Every judgment comes from a specific need or a unique psychological state. Apparently, blindly following others' advice will affect our own judgment. Another fact should not be neglected that some of the ratings are the outcome of a careful manipulation of companies or sellers. It has become a common practice for some to payfor good ratings on their products or services so as to increase their sales.Therefore, we should give a second thought to these ratings whenever we go shopping.2021年(高|考)英语总分值作文1.2021年新课标全国卷I假定你是李华,方案暑假期间去英国学习英语,为期六周.下面的广告引起了你的注意,请给该校写封信,询问有关情况(箭头所指内容) .注意：100左右.2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯.3.参考词汇：住宿- accommodation____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ 【写作指导】(一)仔细审题理思路看到英语作文试题后,不要急于往答题卷上书写,应该先对试题所提供的材料及要求进行仔细地审读,理清写作思路,明确写作任务.在审题时,要审清写作文体,审清动词时态,审清使用的人称,审清写作要点及具体的写作要求等.只有进行了充分地试题,才可能有的放矢,才可能圆满地完成写作任务.李华方案暑假期间去英国学习英语为期六周,看到广告后自己感觉有一些问题广告里不清楚,想要给校方写信咨询有关事项,考生要清楚这是一封信,要符合信的格式.这是考生非常熟悉的一个应用文文体.考生要注意动词时态的变化,以一般现在时为主,兼有将来时,比方：功课什么时间开始?这是将来的事情.注意恰当使用一些连词,使文章自然、流畅.使用一些高级||句型和词汇来提高作文档次.(二)精心布局谋好篇在经过仔细审题之后,考生还需要进一步对所要写的作文进行总体精心设计,包括需要涵盖几方面的内容要点,需要分成几个段落来写,需要使用哪些句型等.有些考生可能会感觉这样做没有必要,感觉这样做浪费时间.其实不然,这一环节是为下一步写好作文奠定坚实的根底.(三)搭好框架信心足如果不是因为时间问题,考生最||好先在草稿纸上草拟一个写作小提纲,搭好写作的整体框架,列出主要的要点提纲,列出需要使用的主要词汇、短语、句型等,这样再往答题卷上书写时,就会信心十足,就会条理更加清晰.(四)扩展提纲连成文紧接着就是对写作提纲进行充实扩展,在答题纸上进行书写.写作时应注意要点的完整性,上下文的连贯性,词汇及句式的多样性,语言的准确性.而且需要注意内容充实,积极健康,逻辑清晰,语言标准,交际得体,建议词数保持在80至||120之间.应尽可能运用比较熟悉的词汇、短语和句型,尽量变换句式,在有把握的情况下,才可使用一些使短文能够增色的较高级||的词汇、短语或者句式.(五)过渡词语文紧凑考生在写作时,可在文中穿插一些过渡性词汇、短语或句型,这样会使短文过渡自然,衔接紧密,行文紧凑.例如：表示困果关系- -therefore ,so ,hence ,thus ,accordingly ,consequently ,as a result表示举例示范- -for example ,in other words ,for instance ,that is ,that is to say表示总结概括- -in summary ,to sum up ,in brief ,in short ,on the whole ,in a word ,all in all ,in conclusion ,as has been noted ,on the whole表示递进过渡- -again ,also ,worsestill ,obviously ,then ,besides ,further ,furthermore ,moreover ,next ,similarly ,after a while ,at the same time ,in addition ,meanwhile, suddenly, later, soon, in the same way, what ,s more表示转折让步- -unfortunately ,though/ although ,anyway ,but ,howeve r, otherwise ,still ,yet ,after all ,in spite of ,on the contrary ,on the other hand ,in any case ,whatever(六)卷面整洁悦人目英语作文毕竟是一项主观性试题,考生的作文分数除了受写作水平影响以外,还受阅卷老师的主观评价影响.干净整洁的卷面,漂亮工整的字体,会使人赏心悦目,会使阅卷老师眼前一亮,从而给阅卷老师留下非常好的印象,无疑会使作文增色不少.这样的英语作文相对来说,分数会明显高于写作水平相当,但是卷面比较差的考生.因此,在写作时,书写与卷面是考生应该留意的一个重要方面,需要做到英语字母书写标准,工整清晰,大小适中,卷面整洁,忌潦草凌乱,乱涂乱改,卷面一塌糊涂,令阅卷老师头痛不已.(七)耐心复查把好关作文写完后,并不是完事大吉了,考生还需要对自己的作文进行从头至||尾耐心地复查,把好写作的最||后一道关.这是写作中不可缺少的一个重要环节.在复查的过程中,考生需要查看是否由于粗心而出现了一些低级||错误,如单复数、拼写、搭配、时态、标点符号等.对于查找出来的错误,切忌乱涂乱改,可以按照短文改错的纠错方法在原文上进行单词的添加、删除或者修改.【总分值范文】Dear Sir/Madam,I'm looking forward to your early reply.Yours faithfully,Li Hua 【亮点说明】短文用了一些短语,增加了文章的色彩,如：plan to do sth ;would like to do sth; pay for; look forward to。

五年高考（2014-2018年）英语满分作文详解及写作素材积累：话题05 人生感悟人生感悟类话题是常考热门话题之一，包括从日常生活方生的事情当中感悟的道理，考生可以把这些重点话题多练练。

命题者可能从以下一些角度命题：1.幸福幸福是什么?幸福是父母为你营造的温馨的家，幸福是老师望向你的赞许的目光，幸福是孤独时朋友送来的一杯奶茶，幸福是……。

2.感恩对父母心存感恩，因为他们给予我生命，让我健康成长;对老师心存感恩，因为他们给了我教诲，让我抛却愚昧;对朋友心存感恩，因为他们给了我友爱;对社会心存感恩，因为社会给了我智慧和力量。

自从国家实施义务教育以来，书本免费，食宿免费，而且还有贫困助学金等。

面对这些，我们应该心存感恩，感谢祖国对我们的厚望和期盼。

让我们永远记住：感谢父母、感谢老师、感谢朋友、感谢全社会!3. 过程比结果更重要安静地享受过程远比匆忙地寻求结果更智慧，更受人推崇。

除此之外，对结果毫无耐心也不值得提倡，因为它会使人们行动鲁莽，注重结果，破坏期待。

4. 行动的力量行动越多，积累的经验、技能越多，距离终点越近。

梦想引导行动，行动实现梦想。

5. 努力创造机会努力创造机会总是必要的，也是值得的。

尤其是在这个竞争激烈的社会。

等到机会从天而降很大程度上会导致过一种枯燥而没有成就的生活。

一、话题常用单词1.impact影响2.affection喜爱3. ambition 决心4. assessment评价5. campaign活动6. abolish废除7. acquire获取8. allocate分配9. appeal to吸引10. accommodate供给, 调节11. arise出现12.assume假设13.attain获得, 得到14. blossom开花15.boom兴旺16. achievement 成就17. adaptation适应18. adventure冒险19. association联系20. barrier障碍21.willpower/persistence毅力22.withstand challenges经得住挑战23.aggressive有进取心的24.energetic精力充沛的25.striving spirit进取精神26.open-mindednes心胸开阔27.widen one’s knowledge增长见识28.innovation创新29.self-confidence自信心30.ambition雄心壮志31. be happy / sad / upset / nervous / lonely高兴/难过/不安 /紧张/孤独32.be pleased with对……感到高兴。