IELTS Writing Demo Class

雅思写作是雅思考试中的一部分，主要评估考生的英语写作能力。

Task 1通常要求考生根据所给图表或数据写一篇报告，主要考察考生的数据分析和描述能力；Task 2则要求考生就某一话题发表自己的看法，主要考察考生的议论和表达能力。

雅思写作考试要求考生在限定时间内完成两篇作文，分别是Task 1和Task 2。

雅思写作考试简介0102雅思写作评分标准主要包…任务完成情况、语法和拼写、词汇使用、句子结构和连贯性。

任务完成情况评估考生是否按照题目要求完成了写作任务，是否清晰地回答了题目中的问题。

语法和拼写评估考生的语法和拼写是否正确、准确，是否影响了读者的理解。

词汇使用评估考生使用的词汇是否丰富、准确，是否能够恰当地表达自己的意思。

句子结构和连贯性评估考生的句子结构是否多样、复杂，是否使用了恰当的连接词和过渡语，使文章更加连贯和流畅。

030405雅思写作评分标准03要求考生根据所给的图表或数据写一篇报告，分析数据并得出结论。

常见的图表类型包括柱状图、折线图、饼图等。

图表作文要求考生就某一话题发表自己的看法，并给出理由和证据支持自己的观点。

常见的话题包括教育、环境、科技、社会等。

议论文要求考生在一篇文章中同时完成图表分析和议论两种任务，既需要描述数据又需要发表自己的观点。

这种题型对考生的综合能力要求较高。

混合类型作文雅思写作题型介绍审题与立意仔细阅读题目，理解题意在写作前，务必认真阅读题目，确保完全理解题目的要求和限制。

确定文章主题和观点根据题目要求，明确文章的主题和要表达的观点，确保立意明确、不跑题。

列出要点和论据在审题和立意的基础上，列出文章的主要要点和支持观点的论据，为写作做好准备。

03注意段落内部的逻辑关系在每个段落内部，要注意句子之间的逻辑关系，确保段落内部的连贯性和一致性。

01合理安排段落根据文章的主题和要点，合理安排段落，确保文章结构清晰、层次分明。

02使用合适的转折词和连接词在段落之间和句子之间使用合适的转折词和连接词，使文章更加连贯、流畅。

8 Sample IELTS essays and teacher’s comments1.IELTS Essay, topic: Computers instead of teachersAs computers are being used more and more in education, there will be soon no role for teachers in the classroom.There is no doubt that education and the learning process has changed since the introduction of computers: The search for information has become easier and amusing, and connectivity has expedited the data availability. Though experts systems have made computers more intelligent, they have not yet become a substitute of the human interaction in the learning process. In my opinion; what can be expected, is a change of the teacher’s role but not their disappearance from the classroom.Nobody can argue that the acquisition of knowledge is more fun and easier with computers. The mere activity of touching and exploring this device constitutes an enjoyable task for a kid. This, accompanied with the relaxing attitude and software interactivity, usually conduce to a better grasping of new knowledge. At a higher educational level; the availability of digital books, simulator and other academic materials, provide the student with an ever accessible source of information, that otherwise would not be at hand.But, besides the increasing complexity and behaviour of intelligent software, which is usually embedded in the academic digital material, the need of human interaction in the learning process will always be present, at least in the foreseeable future. There is the necessity for a human being to be able to determine what the specifics needs of each individual are. The expertise of a teacher in how to explain and adapt complex concepts to different individuals can hardly be mimicked by a computer, no matter how sophisticated its software is.As computers are becoming a common tool for teaching, teachers should be more aware of their role as guides in the acquisition of knowledge rather than transmitters of facts. They have to be open minded to the changes that are taking places, keep updated and serve as a problem solvers in the learning process, thus allowing students to discover the fact for themselves.To summarize, in my personal view, teachers play and will play an important role in the classroom, especially at the primary level. No matter how complex computers become, there will be no replacement for the human interaction, but in the way haw this interaction takes place.Excellent essay! Are you a native English speaker? Well done. The only problem: too long, 365 words instead of 250-265 maximum.2. IELTS Essay, topic: Computers replacing teachersAs computers are being used more and more in education, there will be soon no role for teachers in the classroom.There have been immense advances in technology in most aspects of people’s lives, especially in the field of education. Nowadays, an increasing number of students rely on computers for research and to produce a perfect paper for school purposes. Others have decided to leave the original way of learning and to get knowledge through online schools. These changes in the learning process have brought a special concern regarding the possible decrease of importance of teachers in the classroom.Some people believe the role of teachers started to fade because computers have been helping some students to progress in their studies quicker than when compared with an original classroom. For example, in the same classroom, students have different intellectual capacities, thus some would be tied to a slow advance in their studies because of others’ incapacity of understanding. In this way, pupils could progress in their acquisition of knowledge at their own pace using computers instead of learning from teachers.However, the presence of a teacher is essential for students because the human contact influences them in positive ways. Firstly, students realize that they are not dealing with a machine but with a human being who deserves attention and respect. They also learn the importance of studying in group and respect other students, which helps them to improve their social skills.Moreover, teachers are required in the learning process because they acknowledge some students’ deficiencies and help them to solve their problems by repeating the same explanation, giving extra exercises or even suggesting a private tutor. Hence, students can have a bigger chance not to fail in a subject.In conclusion, the role for teachers in the learning process is still very important and it will continue to be in the future because no machine can replace the human interaction and its consequences.This is a great essay. Looks like Band 8 to me. No improvements are necessary, Keep up the good job!3. IELTS Essay, topic: Events bringing people togetherPopular events like the football World Cup and other international sporting occasions are essential in easing international tensions and releasing patriotic emotions in a safe way.Every four years, the whole world stops to watch international sporting events such as the Olympics and the Football World Cup in which athletes show their best performance to make their country proud of them. These sporting occasions have proved to be helpful in easing international tensions in difficult times when powerful leaders were trying to control the world’s economy and other governments were figh ting over land.The Olympic Games are one of the best examples which prove how sporting events can bring nations together, at least temporarily. From ancient History, when Greeks and Romans would interrupt battles to participate in the games, to the more recent international disputes, when athletes from Palestine and Israel would forget their differences, compete pacifically and even embrace each other after an event. Moreover, these popular events have called the world’s attention to the terrible consequences of wars; thus some leaders have tried to accept agreements to end their dispute and live peacefully.Similarly, international sporting events show benefits in some developing countries which live in a daily internal civil war. For example, Brazil has a high rate of unemployment, lack of education, hunger, crime, poverty and corruption which leads to an immense embarrassment of being Brazilian and a low self-esteem. However, when the Football World Cup starts, the Brazilian squad, which is considered the best team in the world, provokes an amazing feeling of pride in their country. Most people seem to forget all their problems and even the criminal activity decreases. They paint roads with the national colours, use wear the Brazilian team shirt and buy national flags. Moreover, the competition brings families and neighbours together and even rival gangs watch the games and celebrate peacefully.In conclusion, popular sporting events play an important role in decreasing international tensions and liberating patriotic feelings as History has shown.This is a great essay, the ideas, language, structure of paragraphs and sentences, grammar show high level of English. In my opinion it is Band 8. Keep up the good work.4.IELTS Essay, topic: Rich countries should help the poorImprovements in health, education and trade are essential for the development of poorer nations. However, the governments of richer nations should take more responsibility for helping the poorer nations in such areas.Today’s world ha s been divided into developing and industrialised countries between which the main difference is the amount of money that governments apply in important sectors such as education, health and commerce. Most of the poorer nations are buried in debts as a result of their unbalanced finances which are reflect in a failed health care, an unstructured education system and a weak international trade. This vicious cycle will continue indefinitely unless wealthier nations show interest in minimizing the worldwide economic differences, as well as taking more responsibility for assisting unfortunate countries.Most of the African countries live in sub-human conditions because of the extreme poverty, upheaval, hunger, disease, unemployment, lack of education and both inexperienced and corrupt administrations. The devastating consequences of the AIDS epidemic in those countries could improve if the infected populations receive free drugs to control the disease, have access to health professionals and get information on how to prevent its spread. But this can only be achieved through international help programs in which leaders of the world’s richest countries donate medicine and also send doctors and nurses to treat and educate those in need.Moreover, most of the poor countries rely on selling agricultural products and raw material to rich nations and buying industrialized products from them resulting in a huge financial deficit. Consequently, they borrow a significant amount of money from the World Bank to try to improve their broken economies, but sometimes the money disappears with no significant changes and they cannot even pay the interest to the bank. Regarding this issue, last year the G8, which is comprised of leaders of the eight richest nations, decided to forgive billions of dollars worth of debt owed by the world’s poorest nations. In addition, they developed adequate loan programs to financially assist those countries.In conclusion, leaders of the industrialised countries play an indispensable role in assisting developing nations deal with essential areas such as health, education and trade. Also, their aid is the key to breaking the vicious cycle, which results in poverty and death. This is an amazing essay, looks like Band 8 to me, nothing to improve here.5. IELTS Essay, topic: Financial educationFinancial education should be mandatory component of the school program. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?It is an obvious fact that financial aspects are a major part of daily life, as an adult and even as a young individual. Each and every one of us has to make financial decisions concerning recreation, health, education and more. The question is whether to start with financial education as part of school program or postpone it for a later stage in life.To begin with, being able to understand the value of money, the way the economic system works and interpret financial news and its implications is a virtue. Without this virtue, an individual, and even a young one, might suffer, to some extent. For an example, a child who doesn’t understand the concept of money might find it more difficult to except choosing only one present out of more possible ones.In addition, many adults are lacking financial analysis capabilities. Quite often, the reason can be a shaky basis or insecurity when it comes to financial terms and concepts. Starting from an early age, building a strong background, can very likely prevent such a situation.However, financial education necessarily involves quantifying and setting prices and value for services and goods. It can be easily turn young people into cynical and cold-hearted human beings. Furthermore, a tendency to self-concentration and egoism might rise when one start measuring everything from a profit making perspective.In conclusion, financial education has both pros and cons. In my opinion, the advantages are stronger than the disadvantages, making financial education an advisable component of school program. The disadvantages should be thought of as a certain price that young people have to pay due to the characteristics of the world that we live in.This is a wonderful essay. It covers the task, is correctly structured, the paragraphs are logically connected, the structure of sentences shows excellent command of English. The vocabulary is fine and both spelling and grammar are very good. See comments underlined in blue for some minor corrections. Overall, looks like a Band 7.5 to 8 essay.6. IELTS Essay, topic: The advantages and disadvantages of globalization Even though globalization affects the world’s economies in a very positive way, its negative side should not be forgotten. Discuss.Globalization is such a commonly used term in the twentieth century. It simply means that the world has become integrated economically, socially, politically and culturally through the advances of technology, transportation and communication. It is undeniable to say that globalization has resulted in both positive and negative effects which must be addressed accordingly.To begin with, globalization has contributed to the world’s economies in many beneficial ways. The advances in science and technology have allowed businesses to easily cross over territorial boundary lines. Consequently, companies tend to become more productive, competitive thereby raising quality of goods, services and the world’s living standard. Secondly, several companies from the more developed countries have already ventured to establish foreign operations or branches to take advantage of the low cost of labour in the poorer countries. This kind of business activity will provide more influx of cash or investment funds into the less developed countries.However, one cannot deny the negative effects which have derived from globalization. One crucial social aspect is the risk and danger of epidemic diseases which can easily be spread as the mode transportatio n is easier and faster in today’s advance society. This is evidenced in the recent bird’s flu disease which has infected most Asian countries over a short time frame.As large corporations invest or take over many off shore businesses, a modern form of colonization will also evolve which may pose certain power pressure on the local governments of the less developed countries. Unemployment rates in the more developed regions like Europe may also escalate as corporations choose to outsource cheaper work force from Asian countries.In conclusion, I like to reiterate that globalization is inevitable and we must urge individuals, companies and governments to use a more balanced approach by taking appropriate steps to deal with matters relating to the financial or economical gains verses the social, political or ecological concerns of the world.This essay is too long, 318 words instead of 250-265. Otherwise (except for some minor grammatical errors) it is a very nice work. It covers the task, has the right structure, the paragraphs are coherent and logically connected by elegantly used linking words, the structure of sentences is fine and so is your vocabulary. Looks like a Band 7.5 or higher essay.7. IELTS Essay, topic: children and rulesIn some countries children have very strict rules of behaviour, in other countries they are allowed to do almost anything they want. To what extent should children have to follow rules?The extent to which children have to follow rules is in itself a very complex issue, since children across the world grow up in very different cultures. In India for example, the level of morality is very high and children are to be very submissive to their parents as well as other adults around them. This, however, is not the case for the Western countries of the world where children follow the motto ?Thou shalt do what thou wilt? as promoted by celebrities and rock stars. I believe that following strict rules has both advantages as well as serious drawbacks as discussed below.Firstly, strict rules of behaviour create responsible and respectful children who in turn mature into respectful adults. This forms a stable society which is virtually free from vices such as prostitution and drug abuse. Secondly, if children do not follow strict rules of behaviour, they will get out of hand and become work- shy and indolent. This will then create a burden on society since the government has to find ways to cater for these social ills.However, forcing children to follow strict rules of behaviour does not always yield positive results as discussed above, most of the time it backfires and works against society. For example, teenagers are more likely to do the opposite of what they are told to do simply because they want to be independent. Children should also have rights to exercise their free will and develop their own pattern of behaviours. Strict rules simply destroy the individuality of children if they are imposed on them.At the end of the day, it is clear that children should be guided by rules, but these rules should not be imposed on them because as human beings, they need to have room to develop their own traits of character and adopt a behavioural pattern of their own.This essay is too long (309 words instead of advised 250-265). Otherwise this work is a very good one; it covers the task, your position is clear, the ideas are well-organized, expressed, explained and supported. The sentences show a wide range of language structures, cohesive devices and the grammar is fine. Overall, looks like a band 7.5 or higher essay.8. IELTS Essay, topic: the positive and the negative sides of globalization Even though globalization affects the world’s economies in a positive way, its negative side should not be forgotten. Discuss.In the present age, globalization is playing increasingly important role in our lives. But in the meantime whether it is a blessing or a curse has sparked much debate. Some people argue the globalization has fundamentally beneficial influence on our lives while many others contend that it has detrimental effect as well.Convincing argument can be made that globalization not only plays a pivotal role in the development of technology and economy, but also promotes the exchange of cultures between different countries. To start with, it is the globalization that impelled many corporate to become an international group, thereby making contribution to local technology and employment. Specifically, when a multinational group establish a factory in a developing country, the new equipment, the new management skill and the job vacancies are all in the best interest of local society. Moreover, people worldwide can know each other better through globalization. It is easy to see that more and more Hollywood blockbusters shows the cultures different from American, some recent examples are Kungfu Panda and Mummy.Admittedly, profit driven globalization severely affected the young people. Today, in the metropolises in different countries, it is very common sight that teenagers are wearing NIKE T-shirt and Adidas footwear, playing Hi-pop music with Apple ipod and having KFC. The culture that took thousand years to form is just seems similar in these cities; it is looks like you can only distinguish them by their language. Meanwhile, in some developing countries, sweat workshop is always the issue that concerned by WHO. For instance, some report shows that some teenagers who employe d by NIKE’s contractor always stay in the factory that is fulfilled by smell over 14 hours a day, but they only work for fifty cents per hour.In summary, I would concede that globalization do come with some adverse effects. Despite that the benefits created by it far outweigh the disadvantages. Overall, I convinced that we should further promote globalization and meanwhile the local government should take some measures to combat culture assimilation and sweat workshop.This essay is extremely long (338 words instead of the advised 250-265). It has a sound structure, your position is clearly expressed, the information is well-organized, and structure-wise the sentences are fine. The vocabulary is impressive and there only were a few grammatical errors (see comments underlined in blue). Overall, looks like a band 7.5 + essay.。

IELTS写作示范及技巧讲解IELTS写作示范及技巧讲解（一）Task 1 :You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.The tables below are the results of research, which examined the average percentage marks scored by boys and girls of different ages in several school subjects. Write report for a university lecturer describing the information below.You should write a minimum of 150 words.Boys:SubjectAge Maths Science Geography Languages Sports763%70%63%62%71%1065%72%68%60%74%1369%74%70%60%75%1567%73%64%58%78%Girls:SubjectAge Maths Science Geography Languages Sports764%69%62%62%65%1065%73%64%67%64%1364%70%62%65%62%1568%72%64%75%60%作者建议:This IELTS task 1 example is quite difficult because it presents the student with a lot of data, and because the significant trends in the data are not overly obvious. Let’s have a look at how we might go about organising the information in the tables into a task 1 answer.1. First, we need to be aware of all of the variables that make up the data: the scores (percentage averages), the school subjects, the age groups and the gender or sex.2. Now we need to sort the information into some sort of sense:a.) The first thing to do with any table is to find the highest and lowest numbers. Looking at these tables we can see that boys tended to score highly in sport and lowly in languages, and that girls on the other hand tended to score highly in languages and lowly in sport. This is the first and most obvious significant feature of the tables - the boys\\\' strong subject is the girls’weak subject and vice versa.b.) But a comparison of subject scores between the two sexes reveals only limited significance. We can see that for most of the subjects the boys and girls got similar scores. Boys scored slightly higher in geography, but by the age of 15 the scores were the same. So, all that we can say about the charts in terms of the differences between boys and girls by subject is that, besides sport and languages, they were negligible (not important).c.) The next logical step then, is to look closely at the scores for the different age groups. When we do this we find that some interesting patterns emerge. For all of the subjects, except the weak subject for each sex (languages and sports), the scores, between the ages of 7 and 15, increased overall, for both sexes. But if we look at the scores for the years between these two we see that the improvement was not constant, and that at a particular age the scores for most subjects fell. Also, the age at which this occurred was not the same for boys and girls. This pattern seems to reveal that both boys and girls went through a slump in academic performance, but at different times, which is certainly an interesting feature of the data in the tables, and definitely needs to be mentioned. The largest difference between scores for two different age groups ( Languages - 10%; 65-75% 13-15yrs) should also be noticed.3. The next thing to do is to take our analysis of the data and make a plan for our report. A plan for these tables might look like this:a.) Introductory sentence- table shows: percentage scores for school subjects (list), different ages (list), different sexes.b.) Highest and lowest subjects for boys/girls- sport/languages- oppositesc.) Other subjects very similar- subjects by sex not too significantd.) More significant- age groups- all subjects increased (overall)- except for slumps(list subject figures)- different ages for boys/girls- 13-15/ 11-13e.) Concluding sentence- boys performed better in sport, girls languages- both sexes experienced performance slump but at different ages.4. After a plan has been made, we can write the report incorporating the facts and figures from the charts. Look at how this has been done below. Keep in mind that the answer below is quite extensive, and that often because of time answers will not be as detailed as this. In those cases the least significant information should be discarded. In this case the least significant information is that about boys being slightly higher in Geography, and the part about the greatest difference between two particular age groups.Notice the way data has been incorporated below. The prepositions and other useful terms are in italics.The tables show averaged percentage scores achieved in the school subjects of Maths, Science, Geography, Languages and Sport by children aged 7, 10, 13, and 15 according to sex.The subjects for which the highest average scores were recorded were Sport,at 78% (boys), and Languages,at 75% (girls). The strongest subject for each sex was revealed to be the weakest for the opposite sex, with these two subjects also comprising the lowest recorded scores,at 60% and 70% respectively.Apart from these two subjects the performance of boys and girls was comparatively similar. Boys tended to score higher in Geography, with scores ranging from 63% to 70%, while scores for girls ranged between 62% and 64%. However, it is significant that at the age of 15 both boys and girls alike averaged a score of 64% for this subject. The differences between the sexes for scores for Maths and Science were negligible.It is more interesting to observe the patterns that emerge when the data is examined in terms of age groups. In general, for both boys and girls, children tended to improve as they got older. For boys, between the ages of 7 and 15, improvement can be observed in these ranges of scores: Maths (63-67%), Science (70-73%), Geography (63-64%), and Sport (71-78%). For girls, it can be observed in these score ranges: Maths (64-68%), Science (69-72%), Geography (62-64%), and Languages (62-75%). The increase in scores for girls for this last subject, Languages, was the greatest overall improvement across the different age groups, and its rise from 65% to 75% also constituted the greatest margin between scores for any two particular age groups.The exceptions to the general trend were Languages, in which scores for boys steadily declined from 62% at 7 years to 58% at 15 years, and Sport, in which scores for girls steadily declined from 65% to 60%. The other significant exceptions that emerged were that both boys and girls recorded a slump between particular ages. For girls this happened between the ages of 10 and 13, when scores in Maths fell by 1%, Science 2%, and Geography, Languages and Sport by 2%. For boys the ages at which this occurred were 13 to 15, when Maths and Languages both fell by 2%, Science 1% and Geography by 6%. Boys’scores for sport actually increased by 3% during this period.To sum up, these tables show that in this study, on average, males in this age range performed better in Sport and females performed better in Languages. The other significant pattern that emerged from the data was that boys and girls both went through a slump in performance, but that this slump happened at different ages for the different sexes.IELTS写作示范及技巧讲解（二）Task 1 :You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.Topic: Compare the types of communication used in 1962 and in 1982.You should write a minimum of 150 words.P-phone C-computer L-letterShort / Simple Introduction.Paragraph talking about one behaviour Pattern.Paragraph talking about contradictory behaviour Pattern.Concluding Remark.Model Answers:1、General Overview /Introduction.The two pie charts compare different methods of communication used in 1962 and 1982. We can see that for the three mediums surveyed, there are significant changes for each.2、Paragraph dealing with information which decreases.In 1962, letter writing was the most popular form of communication, accounting for 50% of the total. However, by 1982, this figure fell to just 10%, the smallest of that years figures. In this paragraph, we make it clear, which time period we are writing about. Don’t repeat “the year”again and again.3、Paragraph dealing with information which increases.By contrast, we can see that the use of the phone and computers during this same period have both risen dramatically. The telephone, at 60% becomes the most used form of communication, rising from 35%. Similarily, the use of computers, doubles to 30%. (No need to use 15%. We can understand OK using this type of phrase.)Overall, we can see some important changes in the forms of communication employed during the two decades surveyed.IELTS写作示范及技巧讲解（三）Task 2 :Topic: Most high level jobs are done by men. Should the government encourage a certain % of these jobs to be reserved for women?You should spend no more than 40 minutes on this task. You should write a minimum of 250 words. You should use your own ideas﹐knowledge and experience to support your arguments with examples and relevant evidence.A: 写作段落大意:1、Introduction - short statement of opinion.2、Body paragraph (1)(2) Different reasons to support opinion. (3) Statement of opposite point of view “balances”essay.3、Conclusion - summarizes Body.B: Model Answers:1、Introduction / opinionMost of the jobs in society that are high-paying，powerful，and demand a lot of responsibility are held by men. I do not believe this situation arose because women are incapable of doing high-level work. I believe society could benefit if more women were in postions of power and therefore I think the government should reserve a percentage of these jobs for females.2、Why should government encourage a certain % of high level jobs for women?(first reason)Firstly, the problem of unfair employment distribution appears to come from social convention and not competence or true ability. At a young age most girls are not encouraged to pursue political office, business success, or professional prestige . On the other hand, boys are told to do these things. As a result, men hold the high level jobs but this does not mean they are very good at what they do. If the government set a quota for hiring women to do high level work, such as working in the government itself, then perhaps women would be more inspired to be ambitious in their life plans and contribute to a less-than perfect society.(second reason) Furthermore, regulations in the workplace for hiring women would not be a new thing. Although not written or made into law, there seems to be rules for who can and cannot have high-level jobs. For instance, if a man and a woman both competed for the presidency of a company or even the country, and both were equally qualified and had the same experience and background, there is little doubt who would get the job. Even more, if the man was less qualified and less experienced than the woman, the man would still probably get the job because of his sex. Therefore, to legislate a percentage of high level jobs for women would work to fight the unwritten sexist rules of the workplace.Other points of view: 3-different arguments against my opinion.On the other hand, there are many arguments against the use of a quota system for women. It is true that the injustice and discrimination could be reversed. This is to say that some qualified men might be denied a job while some unqualified women would be given one. Also, the problem of sexism at work could be worsened instead of being overcome. People would doubt whether a women with a high level job was “truly capable”--men might feel bitterness and resentment, while women might think less of themselves and begin to depend on government “charity”Furthermore, there is the problem of defining what is a high-level job and determining an appropriate percentage. ( Final statement that supports my opinion again.)→Nonetheless, a quota system would break down some barriers in the short-term. Sexism in the workplace will not just magically disappear.3、ConclusionTo sum up, I have outlined some advantages and disadvantages of making quotas for the number of women in high level jobs. Despite some of the obvious problems I believe that men and women can and should share power, wealth, and prestige. It is a cause worthy of our efforts.2000年以后部分IELTS考试作文题目1999/12/4 TASK1让写一封短信给室友，说明考试后不辞而别的原因和回家途中的情况，并邀请他去家乡访问。

雅思写作作文题目传统学校与网课英文回答：Traditional schools and online courses both have their own advantages and disadvantages. As a student who has experienced both, I can provide a comprehensive analysis of the two.In terms of traditional schools, the biggest advantage is the face-to-face interaction with teachers and classmates. This allows for immediate feedback and clarification on any questions or concerns. For example, in my high school, I had a math teacher who would always stay after class to answer any doubts we had. This personalized attention greatly helped me improve my understanding of the subject.Another benefit of traditional schools is the social aspect. Being in a physical classroom allows for social interactions and the opportunity to develop interpersonalskills. In my college, I joined a debate club where I met like-minded individuals and had engaging discussions. These interactions not only enhanced my communication skills but also provided a sense of belonging and camaraderie.However, traditional schools also have their drawbacks. One major disadvantage is the rigid schedule. Students have to adhere to fixed class times and may struggle with balancing their studies and other commitments. For instance, during my college years, I found it challenging to managemy part-time job and attend all my classes on time.Now, let's discuss online courses. One of the main advantages is the flexibility they offer. Students can access course materials and lectures at their own convenience, allowing for better time management. For example, I took an online language course where I could watch the video lessons whenever I had free time, without having to worry about missing a class.Another benefit of online courses is the wide varietyof subjects and courses available. Students can choose froma plethora of options and pursue their interests. This flexibility allows for a more personalized learning experience. For instance, I have a friend who is passionate about photography and was able to find an online course specifically tailored to her interests.However, online courses also have their limitations. One major drawback is the lack of face-to-face interaction. Without physical presence, it can be challenging to ask questions or seek immediate clarification. For example, when I took an online coding course, I encountered aproblem that I couldn't solve on my own. It took me a while to get a response from the instructor, which delayed my progress.中文回答：传统学校和网课都各有优劣。

雅思 TASK 2写作模板目录一．适合题目类型 (2)二. 模板 (2)三. 范文 (3)1、范文一 (3)2、范文二 (4)3、范文三 (5)四. 模板套句 (6)一．适合题目类型 (12)二. 模板 (12)四. 模板套句 (16)一．适合题目类型 (17)二. 模板 (18)三. 范文 (18)四. 模板套句 (19)一．模板 (20)二、范文 (21)1、范文一 (21)2、范文二 (22)三. 模板套句 (23)一．适合题目类型1．讨论双方观点并给出自己的观点。

（Discuss both views and give your opinion. ）1.In order to improve the quality of education, high school students should be encouraged toevaluate and criticize their teachers, but other think it will result in loss of respect and discipline in classroom. Discuss both sides and give you own idea.2.More and more people are working at home rather than in the workplaces. Some people say thiswill bring benefits to the workers and their families, but others think it will bring stress to the home. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.2．同意或是不同意某一观点。

（To what extent, do you agree or disagree ?）puters are widely used in education, and some people think teachers do not play anyimportant roles in the classroom. To what extent do you agree?2.Society would benefit from the ban on all forms of advertising, because it may serve no usefulpurpose and can even be damaging. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?二. 模板开头4句，介绍背景引出话题1 In the current society, it is universally believed that + 句子are playing increasingly important roles in our lives. 或(如果第一句写社会背景介绍不好的现象也可以换成In the present age, it is universally believed that2 But in the meantime, whether+ 句子（有两种观点的辩论话题) has sparked much debate. 或But in the meantime, the view that… (有一种观点的辩论话题) has provoked much controversy..3 Some people assert that+ 句子while many others argue that+ 句子.或I disagree with/ am against/ am opposed to/ object to/ disapprove of this point of view.第二段写倾向的观点，三个分论点并且各写一句支持句Convincing arguments can be made that(“可以提出有说服力的证据来证明…”)这里写本段的观点 .To start with, it is true/ obvious that . .Therefore,.Specifically,. . .In other words, .第三段写不倾向的一方，先支持两句再反驳两句It is undeniable that 不赞同的观点..For instance, …(举例支持第四句)结尾段1 In summary, I side with the (former/latter) view that 你同意的观点in spite of the fact that_____对方观点__________________2 Overall, I am convinced that … should …(提出谁应该做什么,提一个建议) .三.范文1、范文一Some people contend that advertising has positive impact on society while others think it also has negative influence. Discuss both views and give your opinion.In the contemporary society, it is universally believed that Advertising is playing increasingly important roles and vast billboards, TV commercials and flyers are all exerting profound impact on modern life. In the meantime, whether advertising is a blessing or a curse has sparked spirited debate. Some people argue that advertising has fundamentally beneficial influence on our lives while many others contend that it has detrimental effect as well. Personally, I am in favor of the former view.Convincing arguments can be found that advertising brings numerous benefits to our lives. To start with, it is true that advertisements inform us about the latest products on the market. Therefore，with the help of advertisements, customers can make their shopping experience more economical and less time-consuming. Moreover, we can observe easily that elaborate advertisements can be a genuine art form. Specifically, instead of wasting our time, creative advertisements can afford us diverse amusements, thereby brightening up our lives. The third factor that deserves some words here is that some advertising in the media can motivate people to contribute to charities. In other words, I would be hard to imagine how charities can get enough funds without the help of profitable advertisements.It is undeniable that advertising may carry potential drawbacks. One of the reasons for this is that today a large proportion of advertisements are misleading. It is a well-known fact that the huge profits generated by the power of advertising has promoted many companies to present incorrect information about their products. Nevertheless, it is worth noticing that most governments have been taking stringent steps to combat misinformation in advertising. For instance, in China this year, over 350 false advertisements were identified and exposed and their sponsor companies were punished severely as well accordingly on March 15th, the International Consumer Right day.In summary, I side with the (former/latter) view that the benefits created by advertising far outweigh the disadvantages in spite of the proliferation of the distorted advertisements. Overall, I am convinced that we should further promote the development of advertising and meanwhile the government should introduce measures to regulate this industry more effectively.2、范文二Some people think the media should stop reporting details of crimes to the public while others think such reports also have their advantages. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.Nowadays，it is universally accepted that the issue of crimes is increasingly serious. But at the same time, controversy has arisen over whether the media should report the details of crimes. Some people assert that the media coverage of crime details should be banned while others claim that such reports have their own advantages. As far as I am concerned, I would side with the former group.On the one hand, we should acknowledge that reports of criminal details many carry great risk. In the first place, they render many citizens afraid of crimes and worried about their own safety. Obviously, a great number of city residents will fear that the same crimes will happen to them, can even contribute to serious psychological problems. Furthermore, media reports of criminal details are unfair for the victims of crimes. The victims who have suffered greatly from these crimes would feel they were forced to experience a nightmare again. Above all, potential criminals can learn from such reported details to avoid mistakes, which may add to the difficulty that the police have in capturing criminals. It is arguable that detailed media reports of crimes are a serious threat to social safety and there is a definite link between the widespread reports of crimes and the rise of the crime rate.On the other hand, media reports of criminal details may carry certain benefits. The fundamental reason for this is that such repots keep the public alert to crimes. Should all the reports disappear from the media, it would be very hard for the public to know about the crimes (occurring in society). Even so, it can be noted that the news of crimes (spread by the media) tends to be exaggerated. Therefore, the public may have a hard time deciding how dependable and alarming crime report would be.To conclude, although detailed reports of crimes may have their own advantages, I firmly believe that they bring us great risks. Therefore, we should encourage the media to inform the public about the criminal acts, but not in great detail.3、范文三Some people think children who grow up in poor families can deal with problems more effectively in their adult years than children who are raised in rich families. To what extent do you agree or disagree?In present –day society, it is generally recognized that family backgrounds plays a key role in our lives. But at the same time, controversy has arisen about whether children who are raised in impoverished families are better able to solve problems when they become adults. Some people assert that they can generally tackle problems more effectively. Speaking for myself, I believe their view is somewhat overly simplistic.It is evident that in terms of the children’s physical and psychological development, growing up in rich families may create numerous benefits. For one thing, it is obvious that wealthy parents can afford their children more entertainment and pleasure. For instance, going to concert, singing karaoke and even traveling in foreign countries help rich kids to relax their minds and bodies, which decreased the rate of children’s psychological illnesses. Furthermore, generally speaking, kids in rich families are healthier than their poor counterparts. Obviously,they can enjoy better food and health care while the impoverished children have to live on a very tight budget.Above all, there is no doubt that wealth parents have the financial resources to offer their offspring better education. Specifically, wealthy kids can take piano, painting or foreign language lesions after school, which greatly broadens their horizons.On the other hand, I admit that growing up in a poor family may help cultivate some crucial abilities as well. An argument that can be made in favor of this is that many children who grow up in impoverished families have to do part-time jobs to help their parents financially. Clearly, that forces those adolescents to adapt to their environment more quickly than rich kids. Even so, it is worth noting that the shortage of cash and other resources often makes such children live a stressful life. As a result, some of them may end up being overly sensitive or having low self-worth.To conclude, I would say that poor children may have some advantages in dealing with problems when they grow up, still, I firmly believe that being rich helps children to avoid many physical and psychological conditions, and gives them better opportunities to learn knowledge. Therefore, parents should try their best to keep their family financial safe and stable.四. 模板套句开头段第一句介绍背景可能用到的不同写法在当代In the present age = In this day and age = In present-day society = In contemporary society = Today = At present = In current society = In the contemporary world = Nowadays众所周知1 It is generally (or widely/ commonly/ extensively/ universally) believed that…2 It is generally (or widely commonly/ extensively/ universally) accepted that…3 It is generally arguable that…4 We are all agree that…5 It is generally (or widely/ commonly/ extensively/ universally) acknowledged that…6 It is a well-known fact that…7 It is popular/common belief that…8 it is a disputable fact that…9 No one can deny the fact that…越来越重要play an increasingly key (or crucial/ essential/ vitally important/ significant/ critical / indispensable) role in…以惊人的速度向前发展…is advancing at an amazing (or staggering/ remarkable / astonishing/ astounding/ drastic/ rapid/ accelerated/ unprecedented) speed in present-day society越来越流行…is increasingly prevalent/ popular in the contemporary world彻底改变我们的生活…has transformed = fundamentally changed = completely changed our lives=changed dramatically(负面背景)……的问题越来越严重The problem of … is becoming increasingly severe (or grave/ serious/ worrying/ disturbing/ worrisome)开头段第二句引出话题可能用到的备选句型：1 But in the meantime, whether… has become a highly debatable issue.2 However, whether… has sparked (or aroused/ given rise to/ created/ caused/ provoked/ triggered) spirited (or heated) debate (or controversy)3是否……这个问题不同的人持不同看法。

雅思写作6大题型及万能作文演练法不管是否出新题，有几类题目还是会考的，主要有以下几类：1.教育类2.科技影响类3.文化传统类4.国家政策类5.传媒类6.犯罪类练习的侧重点应该是两方面：1 、积累观点(即文章的内容或分论点); 2 、纠正语法，积累常用词汇(这点对最后的得分最重要)1.教育类Schools should teach children some academic subjects which will be beneficial to their future careers. Therefore, other subjects such as music and sports are not important. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?In order to improve the quality of education, high school students should be encouraged to evaluate and criticize their teachers, but others think it will result in loss of respect and discipline in classroom. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.Children who grow up in families which are short of money are better prepared to deal with the problems of adult life than children who are brought up by wealthy parents. To what extent do you agree or disagree?2.科技影响类Many people think that public libraries should only provide books to readers and shouldn’t waste their limited funds on expensive high-tech media, such as computer software, DVD or videos. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?In recent years, working at home for one’s employers has become a growing trend in many countries and is expected to be common for most office workers in the coming decades. Discuss the reasons why it is popular and state your opinion about the social phenomenon.3.文化传统类The government is responsible for protecting a nation’s cultural identity. Thus, some people believe new buildings should be built in traditional styles. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?It is more important for a building to serve its purpose rather than looking beautiful. Architects should not worry about buildings as works of art. To what extent do you agree or disagree?4.国家政策类In many countries, good schools and medical facilities are available only in cities. Some peoplethin new teachers and doctors should work in rural areas for a few years, but others think everyone should be free to choose where they work. Discuss both and five your own opinion.5.传媒类People think that news media have influenced people’s lives nowadays. It is therefore a negative development. To what extent do you agree or disagree?6.犯罪类In recent years, the percentage of crimes committed by young people in major cities throughout the world is increasing. Explain the possible reasons and suggestion some solutions.A类雅思写作常见的十三类题材总结一、教育类：A 理论与实践1 知识和经验的重要性2 为什么要上大学3 大学理论和实践课程的关系4 成功人士所需素质是不是必须从大学或相似的科研学术机构中学习5 高中毕业的学生是否应该在去大学前要工作或旅游一年6 高中生评估和挑战老师，会不会没有尊重没有纪律性B 男女生问题7 大学专业招收的学生男女比例是否应该协调8 男女分校的利弊二、体育活动类：1 学生花时间练习体育运动的利与弊/该不该。