高中英语写作园地5正反观点类议论文写作外研版选修6
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写作园地
正反观点类议论文写作
[感悟范文]
假如你是Tom,请你根据表格中的信息,给一家英文报社编辑写一封信,告诉他你们班同学对克隆的不同观点,并表达自己的看法。
词数:120~150。
[范文]
①Recently in my class, there is a heated debate about “To clone or not to clone”.
②The students for cloning say that cloning can help the wildlife in dang er, so we can have more and more wildlife in the world. ③Moreover, it can help the old and the sick. ④For example, some cloned organs can be transplanted in their bodies.
⑤However, the students against it say that cloning can speed up the rate of growing o ld and death. ⑥What's worse, cloning can make our society confused. ⑦There would be two or more of you, two or more of your parents and so on.
⑧In my opinion, cloning is a new technology, so scientists should do their best
to make full use of it to help human beings.
[技法讨论]
正反观点类议论文通常给出图表或提纲,学生需将所给的信息表达准确、完整、无遗漏,然后按照要求阐述自己的看法。
正反观点类议论文写作一直是高考写作常考的体裁。
此类文章一般结构如下:
1.开头
提出一种论点或一个问题。
2.主体
论点提出后,我们就要根据汉语提示部分提供的事实,摆出正反双方的论据进行分析、论证,使论点得到足够的支持。
因此,正反双方时常用Some...however( while, but) some...;引入论据时常用表示递进关系的过渡词besides, also, even, what's more, too, in addition等,也用表示列举的firstly, secondly, thirdly, on the one hand, on the other hand等。
3.结尾
对正反双方的观点及理由进行陈述后,在结尾部分我们就要得出结论并发表自己的观点。
这部分常用的词语有:It is my opinion that..., in my opinion, in a word, as has been said, finally, therefore等。
黄金表达
Different people hold different opinions.
Opinions are divided.
People have taken different attitudes towards...
People have different opinions on this problem.
It is often said that...
With regard to..., quite a few people argue that..., but other people think differently.
Some of them hold the opinion that...
However, each coin has two sides.
In my opinion, this point of view doesn't hold water.
I fully agree with...
As far as I'm concerned, I believe that...
亮点分析:
亮点一:②⑤句中the students for/against cloning say that...是陈述讨论双方观点的典型句式。
亮点二:②③④⑥句中的more and more, moreover, for example, what's worse等
句式或词汇的运用非常灵活,增强了各方的论证力度,使行文更加流畅。
亮点三:⑤句中的however表示转折,鲜明地表示出双方的不同观点。
亮点四:⑧句中in my opinion也是表达个人观点的常用短语。
另外,文中的cloned organs, speed up the rate of, make full use of也彰显了作者扎实的英语功底。
[类文演练]
克隆人这一话题在世界上引起了激烈的争论。
请你根据以下提示,用英语写一篇题为On Human Cloning,词数为120左右的短文。
短文的开头已为你写好。
参考词汇:干扰:interfere with 干细胞:stem cells
[联想词汇]
1. ________ 科学突破
答案:scientific breakthrough
2. ________ nature 干扰自然
答案:interfere with
3. ________ 依我看
答案:in my opinion
4. ________ 聚焦于;重点放在……
答案:focus on
[连词成句]
1. ①Human cloning has caused ________.
②There are different opinions among people ________ human cloning.
克隆人这一话题在世界上引起了激烈的争论。
答案:①much debate/hot discussion②as to/about
2. ①Some people suggest...Others, however, ________.
②Some people argue that... Others, ________, believe that...。