专四写作辅导

专四写作辅导第一节写作要求及评分标准（一）测试要求(a)要求根据所出的题目和列出的写作提纲或图表、数字统计表等(也附有写作提纲)写一篇200词左右的短文。

能做到内容切题、完整、条理清楚，文章结构严谨，语法正确，语言通顺恰当。

考试时间35分钟。

(b)写便条：要求根据提示写大约50--60词的通知、便条、请贴等。

要求格式正确，语言得体。

考试时间10分钟。

（二）题型：本部分为主观试题，分两节：SectionA和SectionB。

Section A：作文(Composition)本节是作文，题目主要属于记叙文、说明文或议论文的范围。

Section B：写便条(Note-writing)本节是写便条。

测试目的：按照教学大纲的要求测试学生在基础阶段末期用英语书面表达思想的能力。

（三）评分标准(a)作文评分标准1.本题满分为15分。

2.阅卷标准共分五等：15分、14-12分、11-9分、8-6分及5-3分。

15分——文章内容切题，表达思想清楚，行文通顺流畅；论证严密，论据充分，基本上无语言错误。

14-12分——文章内容切题，表达思想清楚，语言比较通顺连贯，只有极少量语法错误。

11-9分——文章内容基本切题。

尚能表达中心思想，但说理不够清楚，文字连贯不够好；有少量语言错误。

8-6分——基本切题。

表达思想不清楚，连贯性差。

语言错误多。

5-3分——文章条理不清，语言缺乏连贯，句子错误很多，或语言虽通顺流畅但完全偏题。

(b) 便条写作评分标准与样卷1．评分标准根据2004年新版考试大纲，便条满分为10分，从格式、内容、语言以及语言得体性四方面进行评分。

2007年专业四级便条写作评分标准评分构成分值要求扣分标准日期2右上角，April 22nd,2007//22 April, 2007//Apr. 22, 2007//22/4/2007//4/22/2007//April 22nd//Apr. 22//凡不符合上述正确格式要求均扣1分。

结束语和谦称在同一行，人名没写或用xx 表示扣1分，最多扣2分称呼在日期下一行左侧，DearJimmy,//Dear Jimmy://Jimmy:结尾右下方，Truly yours,//Y ours truly,//Y ours sincerely,//Sincerely yours,//Y ours,内容 3 涵盖invited +declining+explaining 少1点扣1分，最多3项内容扣3分语言 4 语法、词法正确严重语法、词法错误扣1分，一个句子或同类错误扣1分，拼写等小错误2个扣1分，最多扣4分语言得体性 1 总分在8分以上考虑加此分总字数50-60字（包括三部分格式）少于40或多于80字扣1分日期、称呼、结尾全左对齐也可：如：April 22,2007Dear Jimmy,I have…Sincerely yours,Sally（四）样卷分析题目要求Section A CompositionNowadays, the Internet has become part of people’s life, and millions of young people have made friends online.Write on Answer Sheet Two a composition of about 200 words on the following topic:Is it Wise to Make Friends Online?Y ou are to write in three parts.In the first part of your article you should clearly present your view.In the second part you should support your opinion with appropriate details.In the last part you should bring what you have written to a natural conclusion or summary. Marks will be awarded for content, organization, grammar and appropriateness. Failure to follow the above instructions may result in a loss of marks.(14 Pts)Is it Wise to Make Friends Online?With the Internet becoming an indispensable part of modern people’s life, making friends on line enjoys its great popularity, especially among young people. However, is it wise to make friends online, as many parents and teachers are worrying about? As far as I am concerned, I strongly oppose being addicted to making friends online.Firstly, too much attention to online friends distracts your concerns to the true friends and families in the real world. If we look around, we often find a lot of young people staying online and chatting with online friends all day long. By the same time, the communication between them and the friends around them are becoming less and less. Therefore, they feel lonelier in real life and spend more time on Internet.Besides, online friends are often disguised. A large number of cases have proved that many criminals make use of Internet to cheat of money or love. Even if they are not cheaters, they tend to be totally different persons when you get in actual contact with them. There’s always a gap between the real world and the imaginary one.Nevertheless, it is unwise to make friends online. Those who are indulging in Internet should cast your eyesight to the friendship and kinship in the real life. What you should do is to seek solution, but not to escape.(12 pts)Is it Wise to Make Friends Online?Nowadays, it has been a fashion to make friends online, and more and more teenagers, college students and even many adults will spend a lot of time chatting with people on the Internet. But I don’t think it is wise to make friends online.Firstly, most people will not reveal their real identity on the Internet, which will not enable you to make true friends. Just imagine, a young lady you are talking with may be an old man, and I’m sure we will feel very bad when we are exposed to the truth. Besides, the friends online can bring bad effect to people, especially for teenagers. The unhealthy stuff will both physically and psychologically influence young people and, in a certain degree, can lead an unproper way to their whole life. At last, making friends online can do bad to the relationship between you and your family and friends in real life. Being addicted to the Internet makes you ignore the reality. Y ou will be angry about your parents’ persuading and after a long time, maybe you will find you have lost the ability of how to communicate with others properly.In a word, it is not wise to make friends online. I hope everyone can focus on the reality instead of wasting too much time making friends on the Internet.(9 pts)Is it Wise to Make Friends Online?There is a tendency we can’t deny that most of us have access to Internet. Susequently, making friends online has become a common thing. Some may argue that making friends online isn’t a good choice, however, personally, I hold the idea that it is wiser to make friends online.On one hand, it’s a kind of company. When we live in our apartment, we seldom communicate to the neighbors, esp. that our family members are outside, the sense of feel lonely overcome us. Therefore, in order to get rid of this, we need to find someone to talk with. Then making friends online is a good way to solve this problem. Meanwhile, we can not only gain friendship, but also exchange our minds. In this way, we obtain a sense of satisfaction from talking with a stranger who will tend to say beautiful words towards us.On the other hand, making friends online help us enrich our sight. We make friends, coming from different areas, accordingly, we obtain a lot of information that we can’t get from our limited knowledge. Sometimes, friends online encourage us to read helpful books where will be able to learn more.All in all, from my point of view, making friends is helpful for enriching our knowledge and helping us encourage with others, hence, it is advisable to makes friends on line as long as we use it properly.(7 pts)Is it Wise to Make Friends Online?People would like to make the best of Internet to broaden their minds, they can get large information, they can play interesting games, even they can mak friends online. While a question has been arisen: “Is it wise to make friends on line?”The Internet is not reality, you can not trust a person through the Internet. Now I would not like to talk about the advantages of the Internet, while the disadvantages you can not deny is existing. Many people make the most of it to do bad things, such as trick you that he is need of money eagerly and wise you would help him as a friend, or character as your friend to inform your family that you are in danger and need money to save you. All the things can be seen on the newspapers magazines,etc. So it is unwise to trust a so called online friend.I can Jump to the conclude that it is unwise to make friends on line, because it is not reality, also we can not trust others without knowing the person well. So let’s do utmost to make the base use of the advantages of the Internet. Cherish the friends around us!(5pts) Is it Wise to Make Friends Online?I think it is wise to make friends online. First, Now job’s pressure more and more. Everyone cannot better talk face to face. Second, Friends online may speak everything of them.Third, Friends online may help something of them and solve some problem.The forth,Friends online may gain more knowledge and information.All in all, make friends online is wise in the society. Make friends online cann’t change a 潮流。