高考英语满分作文
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高考英语满分作文作文题目假设你是李华，你的英国笔友Bob将于九月到你所在城市的建新华文学校学中文，来信请你在学校附近为他找一套住房。
请根据图画提供的信息，写信介绍住房的情况，并告知住房面积为25平方米，月租500元。
注意：1.词数：100左右：2.参考词汇：房租—Tent(n.).I‟m very happy to receive your letter, and I‟m glad to hear that you will go to China to learn Chinese here. I have already found a fiat for you. It is on Fangcao Street, which is not far from Jianxin Chinese School. Bus No.11 can take you there, and it is one stop before the Chinese School. The flat is on the third floor with 3 rooms, one of which is bedroom, the other two are bathroom and kitchen. There are a bed, a sofa, a desk and some chairs in this 25 square-metres small fiat, and the rent is 500 yuan per month. Maybe this fiat is not as good as your wish, but I‟ll try my best to meet your needs. If it is not suitable enough, write to me and I will look for another better place.Hope you will come here soon!All the best!Yours,Li Hua满分理由本文格式正确，意思表述完整，行文流畅自然。
作者在写作过程中注意长短句并用，还使用了以…which，‟引导的非限定性定语从句，从而使文章层次分明，富于变化，不愧为考场佳作。
===========================================Dear Bob,Welcome to China! You wrote to me to find a place for you.I have found an apartment on Fangcao Street near Jianxin Chinese School. It is on the third floor and there‟re three rooms in it: a bedroom, a kitchen, and a bathroom. There is a bed, a sofa, a desk and a chair in the bedroom. The house is 25 square metres and the rent is 500 yuan per month.Also from this house you can get to your school easily. Just take the No.11 bus at the bus-stop in front of the building. It is only one stop. At last, will you please tell me the time you arrive? Then I‟U be able to meet you at the airport, see you.Best wishes !Yours,Li hua亲爱的鲍勃,欢迎到中国来!你写了一封信给我找个地方给你。
我发现公寓芳草街近健新中文学校。
它在三楼,还有三间,一间卧室,一个厨房和一个浴室。
有床、沙发、桌子和椅子等在卧室里。
这所房子是25平方米,其租金是每月500元。
也从这座房子你就可以到你的学校很容易。
公共汽车把那些生活在公共汽车站在大楼前面。
这只是一个停止。
最后,请你告诉我时间你抵达吗?然后我巴哈可以去机场接你了,再见吧。
最美好的祝福!你的,李华满分理由本文格式正确，内容完整，表述清楚，衔接紧密流畅，时态语态使用准确，特别是结尾末段适度的发挥，既充实了内容，又符合逻辑，成为本文与众不同的亮点。
===========================================Dear Bob,How are you these days?I‟m so glad to know that you‟ll come to our city to learn Chinese. You asked me to find a place for you. Now I‟ve found one which I think is pretty good. The place is on Fang Cao Street which is near the No.11 bus stop. It‟s just one stop away from Jianxin Chinese School.There are three rooms, a kitchen, a bathroom and a bedroom. Though it is not very big, only 25 square metres, I think it is suitable. By the way, the rent is 500 yuan per month. I hope you‟ll like it. If not, I‟ll try to find another place for you.Yours,Li Hua 亲爱的鲍勃,这些日子你怎么样?我很高兴知道你会到我们城市来学中文。
你让我去找一个适合你。
现在我发现了一个我认为这是不错的。
这个地方方在街道曹在11号公车站。
它只是一个停止离开健新中文学校。
有三间,一间厨房,一间浴室和一间卧室。
虽然不太大,只有25平方米的住房,住房里面,我认为这是合适的。
顺便说一句,租金500元每月。
我希望你会喜欢。
如果没有,我会试著找另一个地方给你。
你的,李华满分理由本文内在逻辑性很强，由远及近。
由外及内，层次分明，错落有致。
同时让步状语从句运用得恰到好处，很出彩，再则结构完整，从开头的问候语到结尾都很完备。
===========================================Dear Bob,I‟m glad to hear from you.Welcome to our city in september. I‟ve found a suitable house for you.The house is on Fang Cao Street, not far from the Jianxin Chinese School. If you take the No.11 bus, it is just one stop.It is a flat on the third floor of a building. It has three rooms, a living-room, a bathroom and a kitchen. You can cook yourself. The mirror, the basin and the bathtub are very convenient for you. In the living-room, there is a bed, a sofa and a desk with chair. The desk is next to the window. It will be good for study. The total size is 25 square metres and the rent is 500 yuan a month.Will you be satisfied with th is flat, or you want another one? Just let me know. I‟ll try my best to help you.Yours,Li Hua满分理由本文内容详实，描述具体细腻，用词适当准确，如“suitable house”、“not far from‟‟等，另外文中的选择疑问句也很有新意。
=========================================2009年5月1日世博会志愿者招募仪式正式启动，志愿者是办好世博会的一支重要的工作力量。
另外，志愿者或做家教，教小孩子阅读、算术，或打扫公园与街道，或到医院或疗养院帮忙。
你愿意做志愿者吗?请陈述理由写一篇100字左右的短文。
One possible versionI would like to be a volunteer in my spare time. My reasons are as follows:First of all, it is a good virtue to help others, even in modern society. We all need others‟ help in case we get into trouble. Secondly, we are able to better ourselves by helping others because we gain valuable experience and build up our confidence while serving others. What‟s more, volunteering makes us feel bett er about ourselves, thus making our life more enjoyable. More importantly, we can make the world a better place to live in by volunteering to improve it.In summary, volunteering can make a difference to our life, so I think it is very rewarding to be a volunteer.=========================================不同人都有着不同的习惯，个人习惯直接关系着公共卫生。
