2011年考研英语大作文分析

2011年考研英语一真题总体分析2011年考研英语已经结束，总体难度较之2010年有所下降。

就各部分来说，第一部分完形填空难度与2010年持平，但是对文意的考查有所加强。

阅读理解A部分相比去年来说，文章和题目的难度都是有所降低的；B部分则是以排序题的形式出现；C部分翻译不单单是考查我们分析理解长难句，也更侧重测试考生联系上下文去进行翻译；最后一部分大作文选取的是环境这一话题，这也是一个老生常谈的话题了，相比于2010年的火锅来说，难度明显降低；小作文选取的是推荐信。

第一部分：完形填空文章是取自2009年3月25日Scientific American（《科学美国人》），原文标题为“How Humor Makes You Friendlier, Sexier”（幽默如何使你更加有人缘且性感），作者为Steve Ayan。

文章探讨的是笑声的作用与情感和肌肉反应之间的相互关系。

除了延续以往对固定搭配和词汇的考查，更侧重于对文章意思的理解。

这也就意味着进一步向阅读靠拢，侧重对文章整体意思和逻辑的把握。

所以也就要求考生在做题时要具备一种全局观。

（点击查看原文：How Humor Makes You Friendlier, Sexier）第二部分：阅读理解A部分Text 1文章取自Commentary（评论）2007年9月版，原文标题为Selling Classical Music，作者为Terry Teachout。

文章分析的是一个交响乐团所面临的困境，以及作者给出的原因和解决途径。

难度一般。

（点击查看原文：Selling Classical Music）Text 2文章取自Business Week（商业周刊）2009年11月5日，原文标题为Top Managers Are Quitting, Without a New Job（顶级经理人在离职，新工作还没着落），作者为Jena McGregor。

文章讲述的是和经济相关的内容，随着金融危机的缓和，工作机会渐增，许多高级经理人在没有找到下家时，就先辞职，也就是现在所谓的“裸辞”。

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2011年大作文：“旅途之余”——旅游与环保Directions:Write an essay of 160-200 words based on the following drawing. In your essay, you should1) describe the drawing briefly,2) explain its intended meaning, and then3) give your comments.二.经典范文赏析（19分作文）As is vividly depicted in the drawing above,（常用套话，引出画面内容） sitting on the boat and enjoying their sightseeing, a couple of youngsters are throwing rubbish into the sea. What is conveyed in the picture is both realistic and thought-provoking.（常用套话，引出象征意义）（描述画面+浅浅点名寓意）The implied meaning of the given picture can be elaborated in terms of （常用套话，引出寓意）environmental protection and public manners. Onthe one hand, along with the development of the economy and society（常用套话）,people tend to attach great importance to personal and economic interests, ignoring ecological balance. As a consequence, environment has been polluted so seriously that environmental protection should be put on the agenda immediately. On the other hand, the inappropriate public manners such as littering and spitting are also one of the major factors causing environmental problems. If we let it go as it is, the nature willTo serve as responsible stewards of the planet, we must promote and popularize the sense of environmental protection.（常用套话，引出解决方案）For one thing, laws and regulations should be issued to（常用解决方案一：政府层面）change the practice of sacrificing long-term environmental health for short-term rapid economic development. For another, some educational campaign should be launched among the public, especially the young, to raise the awareness of public morality.（常用解决方案二：群众层面：提高意识）Only in these ways can we achieve sustainable development and live in a harmonious society.（常用套话，2010年考研大作文：文化火锅——文化交流（史上第一大难题）Directions:Write an essay of 160-200 words based on the following drawing. In your essay, you should1) describe the drawing briefly,2) explain its intended meaning, and then3) give your comments.启蒙；功夫；人本；梁祝；解构；毕昇；礼；后现代；儒；老舍；莎士比亚；爱因斯坦；道；仁；天鹅湖；京剧二.经典范文赏析（19分作文）As is symbolically illustrated in the portrayal,（常用套话，引出画面内容）there is a boiling hot pot containing various ingredients of multi-cultures. These pluralistic cultures can be categorized as celebrities home and abroad as Bi Sheng, Lao She，Shakespeare, and Einstein, philosophical concepts as Buddhism, Taoism, Confucianism, benevolence, ritual, humanism, Enlightenment, post-modernism and deconstruction, as well as performing arts as Beijing Opera, Gong Fu, Liang Zhu and Swan Lake. We are informed that the culture “hot pot” is both delicious and nutritious. （常用套话，引出文字说明）The purpose of the cartoonist is to show us that（常用套话，引出寓意）instead of being outdated and of little value in a rapidly modernizing world,（常用套话）cultural blending should be encouraged and maintained. On the one hand, mosaic cultures are part of the universal heritage of humanity and they are powerful means of bringing together diverse peoples and social groups. Consequently, cultural reintegration has become indispensable as a means of promoting further culture development and maintenance. On the other hand, for China, as for any other rapidly developing country, there is a danger that age-old customs and traditions may become lost in the shadows of modernization. If Liang Zhu, Beijing Opera or Swan Lake Ballet ever perished from the earth, it would be aIn my view, multi-cultures can be kept alive by people with the time to do so, and is extremely vital in ensuring a community’s future development and prosperity.As a consequence of successful commercialization efforts, unwavering government support and growing interest overseas, the future of cultural blending looks brighter and2009年大作文：网络的“近”与“远”——流行文化Directions:Write an essay of 160-200 words based on the following drawing. In your essay, you should1) describe the drawing briefly,2) explain its intended meaning, and then3) give your comments.二.经典范文赏析（19分作文）As is illustrated in the cartoon,（常用套话，引出画面内容） each person sits in their own work room, with a computer in front of them. Everyone looks at the screen carefully, and communicate with their colleagues through the net instead of talking face to face. Their work places are set like a net. And below the cartoon, there is a caption which reads:（常用套话，引出文字说明的内容）the near and far among the Internet.From the cartoon, we can conclude that the cartoonist wants to convey such a massage:（常用套话，引出寓意）with the popularity of computers, people from al of the world become nearer by using the internet to communicate with each other. Meanwhile,people also become far away from their friends. All of us accept the fact that the development of the internet brings lots of conveniences to our daily life, for instance,（常用套话，引出例子） we can buy a book on the net instead of going to a bookstore. Besides, we can communicate with our friends on the net without stepping out of rooms. But we can’t ignore the other side of these:（常用套话，引出话题的相反面）the time we spend with friends or family becomes less. And we hardly see them once in a week. It will make us feel lonely if we continue to use the tool on the net to talk with friendsTo my best understanding,（常用套话，引出个人的意见）we should use the net to communicate with each other in a proper way. It is just a tool when we really need it to serve us. If we want to keep our friendship more effectively, we should spend more time with them in our real life. Only in this way can （常用套话，引出美好未来）we not only make full use of the communication tool on the net but also make our friendship stronger.2008年大作文：青年人团队合作——青年话题Directions:Write an essay of 160-200 words based on the following drawing. In your essay, you should1) describe the drawing briefly,2) explain its intended meaning, and then3) give your comments.二.经典范文赏析（19分作文）As is vividly depicted in the picture,（常用套话，引出画面内容）two disabled men are running fast through teamwork although each of them has only one leg. Obviously, it is teamwork that makes it possible forSimple as it is, what the picture conveys to us is thought-provoking. With the development of economy and society, competition is increasingly fierce.（常用套话，引出寓意） It is impossible for anyone to finish a work all by himself. Hence, people in mounting numbers put great emphasis on teamwork. In fact, it has been universally acknowledged that（常用套话，引出公认的内容） the ability of teamwork is the most essential qualification that anyone who wants to achieve success should possess.Accordingly, it is imperative for us to take some measures to enhance the sense of （常用套话，引出解决方案）teamwork in our society. We should bear in mind that teamwork is of great significance to both our society and ourselves. Every one should have the ability of teamwork. Only in this way can（常用套话，引出美好未来） we achieve success and only in this way2007年大作文：青年人勇于面对挑战，自信满满——青年话题（史上第二大难题）Direction:1)describe the drawing briefly2)explain its intended meaning3)support your view with an example/examples2005年养老足球赛，2006年崇拜足球明星“贝克汉姆”，2007年“点球大战”，考研写作命题连续三年陷入“足球怪圈”。

In the2011Graduate Entrance English Exam,the essay section was designed to test the candidates ability to express their thoughts in English coherently and effectively. Heres a detailed breakdown of what the essay might have included:1.Prompt Analysis:The essay prompt likely presented a scenario,a statement,or a question that required a thoughtful response.It could have been related to a current social issue,a philosophical concept,or a hypothetical situation.2.Introduction:The introduction would have set the stage for the essay by presenting the topic and providing a thesis statement that outlined the main argument or point of view the candidate intended to explore.3.Body Paragraphs:The body of the essay would have been divided into several paragraphs,each focusing on a different aspect of the topic.Each paragraph would start with a topic sentence that introduces the main idea,followed by supporting sentences that provide evidence,examples,or logical reasoning.Paragraph1:This might have discussed one perspective or aspect of the issue, providing evidence or examples to support the point.Paragraph2:The second paragraph could have presented a contrasting view or additional evidence to further support the thesis.Paragraph3:This paragraph might have delved deeper into the implications of the issue,considering its effects on society,individuals,or specific groups.4.Counterarguments:To make the essay more balanced and persuasive,candidates would have addressed potential counterarguments.This section would refute opposing views by providing counterevidence or logical rebuttals.5.Conclusion:The conclusion would have summarized the main points made in the essay, restated the thesis,and provided a final thought or call to action.It would have left a lasting impression on the reader,reinforcing the candidates argument.nguage Use:The essay would have been expected to demonstrate a high level of language proficiency,including a wide range of vocabulary,correct grammar,and effective sentence structures.7.Cohesion and Coherence:The essay would have been evaluated on how well the ideas flow from one to the next,using appropriate transition words and phrases to maintain coherence.8.Originality and Creativity:While adhering to the prompt,candidates would have been encouraged to express their unique perspectives and insights,demonstrating original thinking.9.Adherence to Word Limit:The essay would have had a word limit,requiring candidates to be concise and to the point,while still developing their ideas fully.10.Proofreading:Finally,candidates would have been expected to proofread their work to correct any grammatical errors or typos,ensuring the essay was polished and professional.The2011exam would have been a comprehensive test of a candidates ability to write a wellstructured,persuasive,and coherent essay in English,reflecting their understanding of the topic and their ability to communicate effectively in the language.。

2011考研英语（一）写作真题详解及参考范文(2011-01-15 17:09:07)分类：考研复习标签：杂谈2011年考研英语已经尘埃落定，写作部分比起2010年超纲的“告示”和“变态”的火锅，难度大为降低，现解析如下。

Part A: 小作文Directions:Write a letter to a friend of yours to1) recommend one of your favorite movies and2) give reasons for your recommendation.You should write about 100 words on ANSWER SHEET 2.Do not sign your own name at the end of the letter. Use”Li Ming”instead.Do not write the address.(10 points)题目译文给你的一位朋友写一封信1）推荐你最喜欢的一部电影并2）给出推荐的原因。

真题详解令广大考生欣慰的是，2011年小作文并未考察大纲中已提到六年但并未考察过的摘要题型，也未考察2010年刚刚考察过的告示题型，而是考察了广大考生最为熟悉、从2005到2009已经连续五年考察的书信。

回顾刚刚过去的2010年，中国内地电影票房成功突破100亿元，成为旭日初升的朝阳产业。

从年中的《唐山大地震》、《盗梦空间》、《山楂树之恋》到年底的三大贺岁片《赵氏孤儿》、《让子弹飞》、《非诚勿扰2》，电影已经重新成为全民关注的话题。

今年的考研小作文即考察了“电影”这一热点话题。

本题属于推荐信，在拙著《2011考研英语高分写作》第64-65页详细讲解了推荐信的注意事项、写作方法，提供了经典范文及十大万能句型。

同时，该书76页提供的关于《八十天环游地球》的读书报告范文完全可以用于本文写作，下面的参考范文即由该文改写而成。

2011年考研英语一text2解析一、文章概述2011年考研英语一text2是一篇议论文，讨论了年轻人在人生选择上应该选择稳定工作还是追求梦想的问题。

文章通过列举一些成功人士的故事和观点，以及一些统计数据和调查结果，从不同角度分析了这个问题。

二、文章主要观点文章主要观点包括：1.稳定工作的重要性：文章认为稳定工作可以提供稳定的收入和生活保障，是年轻人应该优先考虑的选择。

2.追求梦想的价值：文章也提到了追求梦想的重要性，认为年轻人应该追求自己的理想和激情，而不是为了稳定而放弃自己的梦想。

三、文章解析1.稳定工作的重要性：文章提到了一些成功人士的故事，比如乔布斯、马云等，他们在年轻时不断努力工作，最终取得了巨大的成功。

这些故事表明了稳定工作的重要性，努力工作可以带来成功和财富。

2.追求梦想的价值：文章也提到了一些追求梦想取得成功的故事，比如一些成功的科技创业者，他们放弃了稳定的工作，追求自己的梦想，最终取得了成功。

这些故事表明了追求梦想的价值，追求梦想可以给人带来成就感和满足感。

四、结论文章并没有给出明确的结论，而是让读者自己去思考和选择。

文章认为每个人在人生选择上应该根据自己的情况和价值观来做决定，既要考虑到稳定工作的重要性，也要尊重追求梦想的价值。

五、个人观点在我看来，稳定工作和追求梦想并不是对立的选择，而是可以相互促进的。

稳定工作可以提供生活保障和经济基础，而追求梦想可以给人带来精神上的满足和成就感。

年轻人在人生选择上应该兼顾稳定和激情，既要有一份稳定的工作，也要有自己的梦想和追求。

六、总结在这个社会中，年轻人面临着各种选择和困难，稳定工作还是追求梦想也是一个常见的问题。

这篇文章充分呈现了这个问题的复杂性和多样性，也给出了一些启发和思考。

希望年轻人可以在自己的人生道路上找到适合自己的答案，既要有稳定的工作，也要有自己的梦想和追求。

七、社会背景与现实困境随着社会的发展和经济的快速变化，年轻人在人生选择上面临着更加复杂的挑战和困难。

2011年考研英语真题及解析考研英语一直是众多考生备考的重点和难点，而研究历年真题对于把握考试方向、提升应试能力具有至关重要的作用。

2011 年的考研英语真题在题型、难度和考点分布上都有其特点，下面我们来详细解析一下。

首先是英语知识运用部分，也就是我们常说的完形填空。

这部分主要考查考生对词汇、语法、固定搭配等基础知识的掌握以及对上下文的理解和逻辑推理能力。

2011 年的完形填空整体难度适中，文章主题清晰，逻辑较为连贯。

其中，词汇题占据了较大比例，需要考生准确理解词汇的含义和用法，并根据语境进行选择。

同时，也有一些涉及语法和固定搭配的题目，比如介词的使用、动词时态等。

阅读理解是考研英语中的重头戏，所占分值比重较大。

2011 年的阅读理解文章题材广泛，涵盖了社会科学、自然科学、人文等多个领域。

文章的长度和难度与往年相比保持稳定，题型主要包括细节题、主旨题、推理题、词义猜测题等。

在做阅读理解时，考生不仅要能够快速准确地获取文章的关键信息，还要具备分析长难句、理解作者观点和态度的能力。

对于细节题，需要考生仔细对照原文，找到准确的依据；主旨题则要求考生从整体上把握文章的主旨大意；推理题需要在理解原文的基础上进行合理的推断；词义猜测题则要结合上下文语境来猜测生词的含义。

新题型部分，2011 年考查的是排序题。

这种题型要求考生根据文章的逻辑和结构，将打乱顺序的段落重新排列。

这对考生的语篇分析能力和逻辑推理能力提出了较高的要求。

在做这类题目时，首先要快速浏览各个段落，把握其大致内容和主题，然后根据段落之间的衔接词、指代词、逻辑关系等线索进行排序。

翻译部分，2011 年的翻译题目主要考查了考生对长难句的理解和翻译能力。

句子结构较为复杂，包含了各种从句、短语和特殊句式。

在翻译时，需要考生准确分析句子结构，理清各部分之间的关系，然后用通顺、准确的汉语表达出来。

同时，要注意翻译的忠实性和流畅性，避免生硬的直译。

写作部分包括小作文和大作文。

2011考研英语一大作文题目及范文：文都版With the rapid development of tourist attractions，a growing number of people throng to the scenic spots during their vacations. As is vividly depicted in the cartoon, in the middle of a lake alive with rubbish rows a boat, riding two tourists, who are littering while enjoying the scenery. We can deduce from the picture that the drawer is trying to capture our attention to the tragedy of the destruction of the rivers and lakes, which is part of the threat to the ecological balance of the planet. It must be admitted that occurrences of water pollution caused by the rapid development of tourism industry is understood by many people with wide and insightful views. Unfortunately, in real practice, tourism has developed in a manner which often conflicts with the environment. To some extent, the faster the tourism economy develops, the worse the environment becomes. What is the significance of tourism development if the ecological balance is destroyed? In my view, measures should be taken without any delay to address the problem before price is paid for the negative development of the tourism. What should be done first is to make more people aware of the importance of environment protection. Otherwise, sightseeing, as a relaxation for most city dwellers, would be an impossible-to-be-realized wish in a few years. Meanwhile, related laws must be laid down to protect the fragile environment and to penalize those who violate the law. Only in this way would we enjoy a wonderful natural ecosystem and an advantageous, fast-growing tourism economy.。