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TASK TWO模板式句型一、开头段的引题部分1、介绍背景As one of the most important inventions of the twentieth century, _______has a wide application in all aspects of our lives. 作为20世纪最重要的发明之一,________在我们生活的各个方面都有广泛的运用。
Along with the development of society, more and more problems are brought to our attention, one of which is _______.随着社会的发展,越来越多的问题引起我们的注意,其中一个是________。
As we know, __________ bring many benefits and conveniences to people.正如我们所了解的那样,______给我们带来了很多好处和便利。
As society develops, people are attaching much importance to _______.随着社会的发展,人们意识到_______的重要性。
Along with the rapid development of the society, remarkable changes have taken place in ______.随着社会的快速发展,在______上已经发生了显著的变化。
As the society advances amazingly, people’s demands have become increasingly diversified.随着社会的发展,人们的需求变得多样化。
The human race has entered a completely new stage in its history.With the increasingly rapid economic globalization and urbanization,more problems are brought to our attention.人类已经进入了历史上一个全新的时代。
1. Evaluate a significant experience, achievement, risk you have taken, or ethical dilemma you have faced and its impact on youThe significant experience I have taken is the one that I got alone with my foreign teachers during my high school time, when I taught Chinese to my oral English teacher, an American man from Los Angeles. He is called Nathan, who is kind, friendly and easy-going. He was my oral English teacher and I was his Chinese teacher, but we are good friends. Every Saturday I taught him some Chinese. We began this from the basic Chinese oral words and characters, such as “你好吗”,“吃饭”,“上课”(how are you, have meals, have class),etc. Nathan was very smart and learned these quickly. Day by day he could speak some Chinese quite fluently. During the spare time, we often had some gatherings together. For example, each Wednesday and Friday evening, we got together in his house with his wife and many other friends. He and his wife taught us Bible, explaining the stories, introducing Christianity, and praying God for us. These were rather interesting. And we all were very happy together. What is more, he told us a lot about America, for instance, American history, geography, culture and many many other things, which attracted me strongly. All of these made me more and more interested in America, this powerful nation. And from then on, I have been dreaming of going to America, a totally different country to pursue my further study and to experience American life there.In the course of teaching Nathan, the greatest challenge was that it was so hard for him to write Chinese characters. And what confused me most was how to teach him to write characters. I bought him some pencils and paper. I taught him at firs to write some easy ones, for example “一”,“二”“上”,“下”(1, 2, up, down ). Gradually he almost could do it. But when he met some difficult characters, he was puzzled. I at that time was bewildered and later I thought of buying t him a copybook for calligraphy. I asked him to copy the characters of complicated structure, and practice them frequently without the copybook. Three months later, he improved his calligraphy a lot. What made me pleased most was that he could almost write more than 200 Chinese characters, and write them neatly and clearly.It is this unforgetful experience that has taken great influence on me. It was quite significant to me to a great extent. I have learned so much in teaching Nathan. I learned that to be a teacher I should be patient enough to teach what I know, kind enough to treat my student as friends, and smart enough to deal with every difficulty we encounter.2. Design some issues of personal, local, or international concern and its importance to you.For me, the important issue is the international concern---environmentOn the one hand, the environment all over the world is deteriorating. Now, the air pollution is worsening. More and more people have cars, which consume petroleum, and then emit plenty of carbon dioxide---one of the greenhouse gases, making our globe warmer and warmer. And this will bring a lot of natural catastrophes to people in the whole world. As for the water pollution, it is also rather serious. It is reported that nowadays a number of factories discharge industry effluent into rivers and lakes. As a result, the fishes and water plants in these rivers and lakes are going to die. This is really terrible. Besides, the decrease of forest is worrying. Numbers of trees are cut down every year. The area of forest is sharply lessening,which cause soil erosion. This directly results in that the soil becomes desert, in which any plant can not live. What is more terrible is that when there is wind blowing, there is sand storm.On the other hand, as we know, no man can live without good environment. And our health depends on the environment to a great degree. Air quality is key to our breath. If we breathe fresh air everyday, we can be refreshing and energetic. Then we can work efficiently and rest happily. If the air is polluted, we may breathe into a plenty of dirt, which will do harm to our lung. Gradually, the lung will be polluted and suffer from cancer. It is known to us that the quality ofwater decides the quality of life. So water quality is fairly crucial to our health. Polluted water contains a great deal of heavy mental elements, which are terribly harmful to our body. If a man usually takes in this kind of water, his organs will become poisoned day by day, and he will certainly suffer from cancer and maybe die soon. It is out of question that forest is quite important to us. And forest is made up of a number of trees. Trees absorb carbon dioxide and release oxygen. Trees hold soil and water. Trees protect grass and shrub. Trees bring shade and coolness. All of these are intensively connected with our health.But how can we solve these terrible problems and what can we do to help them?Firstly, in air protection, we should advocate people to go to work by bike and public transportation instead of by car. Thus there will be less carbon dioxide in the air. The government should formulate some policies to prevent factories to emit smoke and waste gas into air. Secondly, as for water resource, it is limited in the nature. We should try our best to save water in our daily life. And also the government should issue some policies to punish those industries that discharge waste effluent into rivers and lakes at random. Thirdly, for deforestation, we should pay much attention to it. We can plant trees in our community, use as less one-off chopsticks and bowels as possible, and recycle paper as we can. And also actions such as cutting trees at random, destroying forest, and converting forest into cultivated land should be prohibited.Therefore, for me the most important issue is the global environment. And we everyone should do our best to protect the environment.3. Indicate a person who has had a significant influence on you, and describe that influence.The person who has had great influence on me is my English teacher in my primary school. She was Miss Chen, who was very responsible, kind, and friendly.Miss Chen was a good English teacher. Her pronunciation was very nice, her intonation was quite right and her spoken English was perfect fluent. She was responsible for each student. She was strict with us. It was she who has given me much more confidence to learn English well.One day in class, after Miss Chen taught the students some new words, she demanded us to read them to practice the pronunciation. Several minutes later, she asked some students to read the words that she had taught before. When it was my turn, I made a mistake. I could not to pronounce the word “those” well. It should be/ ðəuz/. But I mistook /ð/ for /z/. When I read the word, a burst of laugh came into my ears. I was blushed, frightened and hung my head. She said nothing, just smiled and asked me to read it again. I read it in whisper. It was wrong again. There was another burst of laugh. And the laughter at me made me sad. I sobbed immediately and my tears ran down my flushed face. Miss Chen stopped me, asked me to sit down and blamed the students who had laughed at me. I was so sad that time that I did not listen to Miss Chen later in that class.Later that day after class, Miss Chen found me. At first, she taught me to read the word “those” carefully again and again. Next, she helped me to distinguish the pronunciation/ð/ and /z/ patiently. Then she talked to me seriously. She said that I was a good student, my English was so bad as I imagined and I could do better in it if I spent more time in it. I listened to her carefully, and felt much more relieved and smiled happily. I promised to her that I could improve my English with her help and encouragement. I became confident in English. In the following studies I paid more attention to my pronunciation, listened more carefully to her in English class, and spent more of my spare time to learn it well.Since then, I have been done very well in English in my school days. I owe this to my dear English teacher, Miss Chen. I have been so grateful to her. It was she who has corrected my mistakes in the two difficult pronunciations; it was she who has rebuilt my confidence; it was she who has given me much encouragement to learn English well ever since.4. Describe a character in fiction, a historical figure, or a creative work (as in art, music, science, etc.) that has had an influence on you and explain that influence.The character that has had a great influence on me is Jane Eyre, the heroine in the famous novel Jane Eyre written by Charlotte Bronte in the 18th century. I read this book when I was very young.It tells the growing story of Jane Eyre, a poor girl who lost her parents when she was very young and lived in her aunt’s house. She is short and not pretty nor lovely. Her aunt treated her cruelly. Her cousins teased her unfriendly. When she was 8, her aunt sent her to a girl school, which is far away from her aunt’s house and the condition there is rather terrible. Poor girls there don’t have enough food to eat nor clean bed to lie in and of course they are malnourished and are lean. Actually many girls are suffering from tuberculosis, a deadly sickness. And other fit girls did not dare approach those who were suffering it. O ne day Jane’s best friend suddenly was attacked by TB. Other healthy girls did not talk to Helen any more. They dared not sit with her to have meals, let alone looking after her. But Jane did al of these. She helped Helen to wash, fed her food and medicine, and comforted her greatly. Seeing these, Helen was moved. With the help of Jane, day by day, Helen became better and better. However, Jane could not save her because the disease was terribly incurable. At last, Helen died, but she was very thankful to Jane because of her great care and help. This was indeed real friendship.Jane’s story influenced me a lot in my later life. I learned from her that among friends it is trust, care and help that play a great role.I remember one of my experience that when it was in April in 2003 when SARS pervaded all over the country. And one of my friends Jay was suffering from fever for several days. In fact, he was diagnosed as flu but not SARS. However, when Jay went to school, he was isolated, staying alone in a darkroom. And no one dared approach him, afraid of being infected with SARS. At that time because we were going to take high school admission examination, I was worried about Jay because of his missing of a lot of classes. I believed that he just had a flu and I could not be infected with it. So I decided to help him with lessons in spite of his illness. Everyday after school I went to have a look at him, gave him my notes of the lessons, tutored him in homework. Later, he turned out to be fine and most importantly, he did well in his lessons and made it in the great exam. He was quite grateful to me because I trusted him and gave him much help. This was indeed true friendship too.5. A range of academic interests, personal perspectives, and experience actually add much to our educational mix. Given your personal background, describe an experience that illustrates what you would bring to the diversity in a community, or an encounter that demonstrates the importance of diversity to you.For many students, a range of academic interests, personal perspectives, and experience actually add much to our educational mix, but for me the important one I have brought to the college community is dance. I love dancing when I was young, and when I was 7, my mother sent me to a dance training school. Then every weekend I spent my time there. But gradually I hate it very much, because I did not have time to play like any children of my time. So I stopped it two years latter. But when I entered high school, I recollected my interest in it.Once in a dancing ball, I encountered a boy. He danced Latin alone on the stage. He danced so energetically, elegantly and gracefully that I was almost entirely attracted by him. And also there went continuous loud applause from the audience. Shortly after the performance I approached the boy backstage. I said hello to him and he to me too. I realized that he was very kind and friendly. And I got to know that we were in the same year and the same grade butdifferent major. We talked a lot about dance and I told him my dancing experiences. Then we became good friends.Form then on, in the spare time, he taught me to dance. With his help and my interest in it, I learned it quickly. And then we became good partners. Later we often performed in the community and won a lot of praises and medals, of which I was greatly proud. Dance made my life quite colorful. What was the most important was that we brought a great deal of happiness to all the members of the community. In the weekend, almost every member of the community would get together to have a party or a carnival, in which dancing is indispensable. All the time, I was the focus to lead other people to dance to the music. With the melodious music, we began to dance freely. Sometimes I danced alone; sometimes I danced with one of the members; and sometimes I danced with some crazy ones. I heard so many cheers, hurrahs and laughters. I felt very excited, so happy and rather relaxed. And what was most important of all was that I saw all the people were in joy while dancing cheerfully. To be frank, my greatest happiness lied in this. Therefore the important experience I have brought to the diversity of the community is dance. It was dance that made me own friendship, enjoy joy, gain honor and bring great happiness to others.。
英语作文范文范文:Writing an Essay「要求」在进行了许多英文写作练习之后,你对如何写好文章这一问题也一定有不少的体会。
那么就请你以“Writing an essay, while easy for a fortunate few, can be sheer torture for others”为开篇句,以“Writing an Essay”为题写一篇文章。
「范文」Writing an EssayWriting an essay, while easy for a fortunate few,can be sheertorture for others.It involves an interplay of ideas, a good command of grammar and vocabulary, and some knowledge of writing skills.One must have some ideas to write. Without relevant ideas,the essay would be meaningless. A person’s rich experience and wide range of knowledge is the source of ideas upon which he must draw while writing.Given adequate ideas, one needs to write them downby the correct use of grammar and words. An essay full of grammar and spelling mistakes is not readable at all.Furthermore, one must master certain writing skills,otherwise his pen would be awkward. Writing skills enable one to write an essay with unity and coherence. They can also make him drive his ideas in simple and clear language.So if one tries to achieve an easy pen, he must develop his writing ability in terms of these three factors.「评语」本文根据所给的引入句,从写好文章并非易事这一点展开内容。