2019年高中英语unit5musicsectionⅤwriting_咨询信教案含解析新人教版必修2
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感顿市安乐阳光实验学校Section ⅣGrammar & Writing第二板块单元写作咨询信课时作业Ⅰ. 用定语从句把下面两个句子合成一个句子1.She has two daughters. One of them is a doctor.She has two daughters, one of whom is a doctor.2.The boy was often late for school. The reason is still unknown.The reason for which/why the boy was often late for school is still unknown.3.China has thousands of islands. Hainan Island is the largest among them.China has thousands of islands, of which Hainan Island is the largest.4.Recently I bought an ancient Chinese vase. Its price was very reasonable.Recently I bought an ancient Chinese vase, the price of which was very reasonable.5.In the distance there is a hill. On the top of it stands a white temple.In the distance there is a hill, on the top of which stands a white temple.6.I have bought two books recently. Neither of them interests my brother.I have bought two books recently, neither of which interests my brother.Ⅱ. 阅读理解AIn between running one of the world's largest charitable agencies and acting as Microsoft's technology advisor, Bill Gates manages to find time to read books, both long and short. Now Gates—who has been labeled a “greedy” reader — has released a list of his favorite books. All of the books are standout reads, according to the billionaire, most of which are focused on business and economy.Here are Bill's top four picks (with parts of his full review of each book).Business Adventures, by John BrooksBrooks' collection was published in 1969 and remains one of Gates' favorites. He reread it again this year, labeling it the best business book he has ever read.“Shortly after we met, Warren Buffett lent me this collection of business articles from The New Yorker from the 1950s and 1960s. I loved them as much as he did. Brooks' insights (洞察力) into business have aged beautifully, and they are as true today as ever. ”Capital in the TwentyFirst Century, by Thomas PikettyPiketty's novel hit the shelves in August 2013 and sparked much discussion concerning income inequality throughout this year. Gates also got to sit down with Piketty himself after reading the nonfiction work to discuss the topic.“As I told him, although I have concerns about some of his secondary points and policy prescriptions, I agree with his most important conclusions: inequality is a growing problem and governments should play a role in reducing it. ”How Asia Works, by Joe StudwellStudwell's work, which was published in May 2014, addresses how countries such as Japan, South Korea and China have continued to achieve high growth, and why other countries have failed to do the same.“The agriculture section of the book was particularly insightful. It provided ample food for thought for me as well as the whole Agriculture team at our foundation. And it left us thinking about whether parts of the Asian model can apply in Africa. ”Making the Modern World: Materials and Dematerialization, by Vaclav SmilSmil's books are a constant favorite of the Microsoft's founder—one of his books makes Gates' list almost every year. Making the Modern World came out late in 2013 and explores the global use of materials, from silicon to wood and plastic.“If anyone tries to tell you we're using fewer materials, send him this book. With his usual skepticism and his love of data, Smil shows how our ability to make things with fewer materials—say, soda cans that need less aluminum—makes them cheaper, which actually encourages more production. ”【解题导语】本文介绍了比尔·盖茨喜欢阅读的四本关于商业和经济的书。
(新课标)高中英语Unit5MusicSectionⅤWriting——求助信讲义新人教版必修2Section ⅤWriting——求助信[文体指导]求助信是向有关组织或个人写信请求帮助,格式大体上同一般书信。
写作时的注意事项如下:1.开门见山,摆出问题直截了当地把你遇到的难题或者困惑告诉对方。
2.态度诚恳,言辞恳切向别人求助,尤其是向长辈或者是自己不熟悉的人求助的时候,态度一定要诚恳,语气要委婉,让对方感到你确实需要并值得帮助。
3.思路清晰,表述明了语言要简练、流畅,层次分明,表述清楚,以便让对方一看就能明白你提出的问题,并能有针对性地给你提出意见和建议。
4.正确把握时态,保证语言准确性写英文求助信的原因就是目前自己在某一方面遇到困难,因此应用一般现在时表达文意,当然描绘自己得到帮助后的进步时应用一般将来时表达文意。
[亮点句式]★自我介绍1.My name is....I'm writing to you for some help.2.I'm writing a letter to you to get some help about...★交代自己所面临的困难1.I have met much difficulty in...2.I find it difficult to...3.I can hardly bear/tolerate/put up with...any longer.★请求对方做某事的表达1.Would you like to...so that...?2.Also,I'd like you to...3.I would appreciate it if...4.I would be grateful if...[写作任务]假如你是李华,你打算与朋友组建一个乐队。
门基乐队的成功给了你很大的鼓舞。
但你和朋友对乐队的名字、主唱、乐器的选择及乐队的类型存在分歧,你决定向门基乐队求助,现在请你写一封词数100左右的求助信。
Section Ⅴ Writing—咨询信咨询信是指写信人就某一个问题向收信人征求或征询建议,希望收信人就写信人提出的问题给出针对性的解决方法或提出合理的建议。
一、基本框架1.开头——简单叙述写咨询信的目的或意图,清楚表明要寻求什么样的帮助。
2.主体——言明要咨询的具体问题和存在的困难,并请求对方给出一些建议。
3.结尾——诚恳地提出希望,表达需要得到帮助的迫切心情并表示感谢。
二、增分佳句1.I'm writing to tell you some advice on how to form a music band.2.Nowadays, both traditional and modern music are enjoyed by people in China.3.For a long time, traditional music has played an important part in people's life.4.I was at a loss what to do with this situation.5.I find it really hard to learn English well and I almost lose heart.6.I would appreciate it if you could give me some precious advice.7.I'm sorry to trouble you, but I feel that I must write you this letter.8.Would you like to give me some advice on it so that I can make rapid progress?[题目要求]假如你是李华,你打算与你的朋友组建一个乐队。
门基乐队的成功给了你很大的鼓舞。
Section ⅤWriting——如何写一封求助信技法指导1.文体特点求助信是写信人向收信人寻求帮助或建议的信件。
写信时,要写出写信的原因、背景,言明自己所遇到的具体的问题。
文章要脉络清晰,条理清楚,有较强的层次感。
语言要简明扼要、目的明确。
2.亮点句式(1)I'm writing to ask for your help/advice on health.我写信是为了请教健康方面的建议。
(2)I have got a problem and I need to ask for your help.我遇到了难题,需要向你求助。
(3)I have some difficulties in getting along with my classmates.我在与同学相处方面有困难。
(4)Would you be so kind to tell me how to solve the problem?你能告诉我如何解决这个问题吗?(5)I am unable to remember words well and feel tired of learning English.我记不住单词,感觉讨厌学英语。
(6)I believe I can make great progress in English with your help.我相信在你的帮助下,我的英语会取得很大的进步。
3.高分模板Dear XX,(首段)My name is ________.I'm writing a letter to you to ask for some help. I have met with many difficulties in ________.(中段)Faced with so many difficulties, I have to ask you for some help. Would you like to introduce to me some good ways to ________ so that I can ________? In the meanwhile, I beg you to teach ________ so that ________.Also, I would like you to introduce some rules and good ways to ________. I'm sure that I can make great progress in ________ with your help.(尾段)I would be grateful/thankful if you could give me some advice/help.Yours,XXX典题演练小伟减肥以后,感到身体疲倦、虚弱,不知如何是好,于是他写了一封电子邮件向健康专家请教。
Section Ⅴ Writing—咨询信
咨询信是指写信人就某一个问题向收信人征求或征询建议,希望收信人就写信人提出的问题给出针对性的解决方法或提出合理的建议。
一、基本框架
1.开头——简单叙述写咨询信的目的或意图,清楚表明要寻求什么样的帮助。
2.主体——言明要咨询的具体问题和存在的困难,并请求对方给出一些建议。
3.结尾——诚恳地提出希望,表达需要得到帮助的迫切心情并表示感谢。
二、增分佳句
1.I'm writing to tell you some advice on how to form a music band.
2.Nowadays, both traditional and modern music are enjoyed by people in China.
3.For a long time, traditional music has played an important part in people's life.
4.I was at a loss what to do with this situation.
5.I find it really hard to learn English well and I almost lose heart.
6.I would appreciate it if you could give me some precious advice.
7.I'm sorry to trouble you, but I feel that I must write you this letter.
8.Would you like to give me some advice on it so that I can make rapid progress?
[题目要求]
假如你是李华,你打算与你的朋友组建一个乐队。
门基乐队的成功给了你很大的鼓舞。
但你和朋友对乐队的名字、主唱、乐器的选择及乐队的类型存在分歧,这让你不知所措,你决定给门基乐队写一封电子邮件,告诉他们你的想法,并征求他们的建议,如何才能使乐队更加成功。
注意:1.可根据内容要点就某一方面或几个方面的问题征求他们的建议;
2.词数100左右。
第一步:审题构思很关键
一、审题
1.确定体裁:本文为咨询信;
2.确定人称:本文的主要人称应为第一人称;
3.确定时态:本文的主要时态应用一般现在时。
二、构思
开头:自我介绍并提出问题。
主体:具体描述自己遇到的问题、困难等。
结尾:再次提出希望,希望对方给自己提出建议。
第二步:核心词汇想周全
1.form_a_band 组建一个乐队
2.inspire 鼓舞;激励
3.instrument 乐器
4.lead_singer 主唱
5.type_of_music 音乐类型
第三步:由词扩句雏形现
开头:自我介绍并提出问题。
1.我叫李华。
我打算与我的三个朋友组建一个乐队。
My name is Li Hua. I'm_going/planning_to_form_a_band with my three friends.
2.你们(门基)乐队的成功给了我们很大的鼓舞。
可是,我们以前没有在乐队里待过。
Your band's success inspired us greatly. However, we have_never_been_in_a_band_before.
3.你能给我们一些建议吗?
Could you please give_us_some_advice/suggestions?
主体:具体描述自己遇到的问题、困难等。
4.我们都喜欢流行音乐,但是我和我的三个朋友无法决定给乐队取什么名字,谁主唱以及选择什么样的乐器等。
My three friends and I like pop music. We can't decide the band's name. We can't decide the lead singer. We can't decide what_instruments_we_choose.
5.此外,我们该演奏什么样的音乐?我们是该只演奏一种音乐还是各种音乐都尝试一下呢?
In_addition/Besides,_what type of music should we play? Should we only play one kind or try_every_type_of_music?
6.你们乐队是如何决定演奏什么的呢?
How did your band decide what_to_play?
结尾:再次提出希望,希望对方给自己提出建议。
7.我们真的希望你们能给我们一些建议。
We really hope you can give_us_some_advice.
第四步:句式升级造亮点
1.用but, as well as等把句4合并成一个含转折关系的并列句
My_three_friends_and_I_like_pop_music,_but_we_c an't_decide_the_band's_name,_the_lead_singer_as_wel l_as_what_instruments_we_choose.
2.对句7的谓语部分进行强调
We_do_hope_you_can_give_us_some_advice.
第五步:过渡衔接联成篇
Dear_Monkees,_
My_name_is_Li_Hua._I'm_going_to_form_a_band_wit h_my_three_friends._Your_band's_success_inspired_us _greatly._However,_we_have_never_been_in_a_band_bef ore._Could_you_please_give_us_some_advice/suggestio ns?
My_three_friends_and_I_like_pop_music,_but_we_c an't_decide_the_band's_name,_the_lead_singer_as_wel l_as_what_instruments_we_choose._In_addition/Beside s,_what_type_of_music_should_we_play?_Should_we_onl y_play_one_kind_or_try_every_type_of_music?_How_did _your_band_decide_what_to_play?
We_do_hope_you_can_give_us_some_advice.
Yours_hopefully,
Li_Hua。