浙江省2012高考英语二轮复习 短文改错+书面表达(16)

浙江省2012高考英语二轮复习专题训练：短文改错+书面表达（32）第一节：短文改错(共10小题；每小题l分，满分l0分)One day Tom and I were walking down the street while we saw an old man fall offhis bike. He was badly hurt. Many people crowded around us. Someone suggestedcarrying the old man to the roadside, so Tom disagreed. He has learned first aid.He said that they ought to leave him where he was and checked him first. At thattime the old man wasn't breathing. Tom asked me to call in the First Aid Center atonce and he began to start the old man's breathing, use the mouth-to-mouth way. Withinfive minutes, the old man began to move little and doctors also arrived. They saidthat we had done was correct. I have learned from this experience that a knowledgeof first aid can make a really difference.第二节：书面表达（满分30分）当今食品安全问题已经成为人们关注的一个话题，请你以Food Safety（食品安全）为题并参考所给要点，写一篇英语短文。

短文改错A（2012全国II ）(每小题1. 5分，共15分)Dear Editor,I‘m writing to tell you opinion about water saving. 1.______ Water is important. We, as well as animal, cannot live 2.______ without water and neither agriculture or industry can go 3.______ without it. Yet it seemed water is becoming less and less. 4.______ Many countries in the world find we don’t have enough water. 5.______ To deal with a problem, I think, we should first go all 6.______ out to plant trees though trees will help save water. Next, no 7.______ drinking water should be left running. Third, we should find 8.______ ways to reuse the water using in washing, especially bath 9.______ water for which is quite a lot, and that will save much water. 10.______ Sincerely,Li HuaBI learned early in life that I had to be more patient and little aggressive. From the time I was about four until I was about six, I destroyed each of my toy. I was happy when the toys worked, but when things did wrong, I got angry and broke it. For a while parents bought me new toys. But before long they began to see which was happening. When I tear apart my fifth birthday toy train, my father said, "That's it. No more toys to you." My punishment lasted a year. Meanwhile, I found out that with more patience I must make my toys to last. My attitude changed from then on.(2010年全国Ⅱ卷高考英语短文改错题)Christie was one of my best friend at high school 76 At that time, we often spend time together. 77 Thank to her help, I made great progress in my 78 study. Last year, she decided to study abroad. In 79 other words, we would be separated for long time. 80 Before her leaving off, I prepared a gift to show 81 my best whishes to him. She said it was the best 82 gift she has ever had. From then on, we’ve 83 kept touch with another through e-mails. I 84 look forward to see her again in the near future. 85D(2010全国Ⅰ卷高考英语短文改错)It was a chance of a lifetime to win the first 76_______ prize on the Story Writing Show. All I had to do 77_______ was to write a story or present it. My teachers 78_______ have been telling me how great my writing was. 79_______ So if they had said was true, I would have a chance 80_______ of winning the prize . What were better , I had useful 81.______ help . There was Uncle Chen , gentleman living 82.______ near my house , who was a very much famous writer 83_______ He agreed to reading my story and gave me some 84_______ advices on how to write like a real writer 85_______Dear editor,In the past my hometown was used to be a beautiful place. 1.______ Thick trees and green grass could be seen in everywhere. In 2.______ order to build house and grow more crops, people cut down 3.______ more and more trees. With time went on, the whole forest was 4.______ almost destroyed. Gradually the green hills have changed into 5.______ wasteland. As a result, sandstorms struck us now and then, from 6.______ which we suffer a lot. However, I do hope all the people should 7.______ realize the terribly result of not caring about our environment. 8.______ What's more, they should take good care of the forests and plant 9.______ trees instead cutting them down to improve our living conditions. 10._____F(2011年全国II高考英语短文改错)Dear George,It's been a week after we left your family and we are now 76._______ back home. Thank you very much for showing them around 77.______ your city and providing us for the wonderful meals. After 78._______ we said goodbye to you, we went to Washington D.C., 79._______ where we stayed for three days. My brother was so much fond 80._______ of the museums there that he begged my parents to staying 81．________ another couple of day. However, my father had to return to 82.________ work on Monday so we fly back last Saturday afternoon. It 83．________ was really a nice experience. If you'd like to make trip to 84._______ our city some day, I will be better than happy to be your guide. 85._______Yours,Mike（2011•全国新课标卷）My summer travel started terribly .I was at the Shanghai Railway Station buy a ticket to Hang Zhou. I was going to visit a friend here and after that I would go to Xiamen for long holiday. I bought my ticket but turned around to pick up my bag .Form the floor and then I realized that someone had stolen it. Luckily I had all my money on my pocket, but the only clothes I had was those I had on. It felt very strange to travel without any luggages . When I finally arrived at my friend he lent to me lots of clothes.I feel very happy that I could change my clothes at last.HThere are lots of great places in the town which you can eat without spending too much because of I'm always short of money! There are also some place where it costs a lot, so don't forget to read the menu before going in. The first place is Gino's. It's an Italian restaurant where serving the usual things like pizzas and spaghetti. It's really cheaply and very friendly. Then there's Black's Bistro. This is a caféwhich is opened all day and you can eat anything there from toast, sandwiches, salads, burgers and full meals. Again it's not expensive and is very popular with young people. And finally, how about Peppers? Go there if you want some really nourishing Mexican food. Mexica food can be bit hot, but you can choose dishes which are milder too.Many parents let their children to watch TV only during certain 1______hours. Television shows like books or movies. A child 2______can learn bad things from one of them and good things from 3______others. Some shows help children to understand the news of 4______Washington and other parts of the world. Some program show us 5______people and place from other countries or other times in history. 6______With television a child does not have to go to the zoo see animals. 7______They can enjoy a wonderful baseball game at home. 8______Some programes even teach children how to cook or how to use 9______tools. Television brings about many places and events to us. 10_____JMr. Grey was a biology professor, and he had a big collectionof rare bones which he was very proud. One year he managed to get a new and better job at an university. As Mr. Grey was very busy, his wife made the arrangements（安排）for all her possessions to be taken in a moving van（货车）to their new homewhile he was away from work. The following week three men startedout take the things out of Mr. Grey’s house and loading（装运）them into the van as one of them brought out a large wooden box. He isjust about to throw it into the van with all the other things when Mrs.Grey ran out from her house and said, “Please treat that box very gentle!That one has all my husbans’s bones in it.” The man was so surprisedthat he nearly dropped the box on his feet.There are more than 3000 languages in world today, 1________But only about 6 of them are major languages.More than 300 million peoples speak English as their 2________First or native language. Another 300 million speak it asa second language. No one know how many people 3________speak it as foreign language. 4________Chinese is only language with more speakers than English.5________This is because the huge population of Chinese. 6________English is the world’s the most important language and 7_________It is the most wide used language. It is the language 8_________Of international business, research and Science. 9_________More than three-fourths of the World’s mail is written by English.More than Three-fifths of the world’s radio station use English.10________LAs the young woman ran by, the old man sat on the park bench 1_____asked, “What are you running for?” the woman smil es. 2_____“I’m not running, I’m jogging,” she said, she continued 3_____her slowly run through the park. Everyday,in all kinds of 4_____the weather, thousands of men and women jog. Why has 5_____jogging -----running slowly for long distances become sopopular? Most joggers begin because they hear it is a very 6_____good exercise. Jogging make the heart stronger and helps 7_____people loss weight. It can also help them feel better about themselves.8_____Many joggers feel that if they can succeed in 9_____jogging, they can succeed in other thing, too. 10____MA boy who were cleaning shoes in the street said 1______ to a man pass by, “let me clean your boots, sir!” 2_____ The man didn’t want to have it cleaned, so he went 3______ away. But the boy said, “You needn’t to pay for it 4______ if you like.” The man agreed this. Soon one if his 5______ boots was cleaned. Then the man put out the another 6______ boot, but the boy said, “You’ll have pay for this one. 7______ I w on’t clean it if you pay me first.” The man did 8______ not want to pay, so he went along with one 9______ clean boot and one dirty boot on.People laughed him, “Look! What a mad man!” 10_____NDear Mrs. Winthorp,So my first week at college is over! No lectures this morning so I think I’d email you and let you know what things are going.I’m glad to say that anything has worked out fine in the dorm. I remember asking for a room as far away from the lifts as possible and they find me a comfortable one on second floor. There are two girls from my course here and I plan to make friend with them so they we can help each other on the course work. Everyone else seems very nice and warmly here.Well, I had better to st op now. I’m going to attend mine first lesson this afternoon, for I’ve got some preparation to make, Keep in touch.Best,Carol。

浙江省2012高考英语二轮复习专题训练：短文改错+书面表达（90）第一节：短文改错（共10小题; 每小题1分，满分10分）假如英语课上老师要求同学们交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。

文中有10处错误，要求你在错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写上该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写上修改后的词。

注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词。

2．只允许修改10处，多者（从11处起）不计分。

As a high school student, I like to talk with foreigners to practise my oral English but learn more about other cultures．There were two foreign teachersin our school in this term．They often go to the English corner so that wecan have a chance to practise a language．I seize every chance to talkthem．However, I sometime find they are not so interesting in what I say,and it’s hard for I to choose a suitable topic．I would like some advicesabout how to communicate proper with foreigners, and what topics to pick．第二节：书面表达（满分30分）最近，你校展开了关于中学生吃早饭问题的一项调查，结果显示，只有少数同学认真对待，多数学生草草了事，甚至不吃早饭。

2012高考英语新题分类汇编短文改错（高考真题+模拟新题）英语D1[2011·全国卷Ⅱ] 第二节短文改错(共10小题；每小题1.5分，满分15分) 此题要求改正所给短文中的错误。

对标有题号的每一行作出判断：如无错误，在该行右边横线上画一个勾(√)；如有错误(每行只有一个错误)，则按下列情况改正：此行多一个词：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉，在该行右边横线上写出该词，并也用斜线划掉。

此行缺一个词：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，在该行右边横线上写出该加的词。

此行错一个词：在错的词下划一横线，在该行右边横线上写出改正后的词。

注意：原行没有错的不要改。

Dear George，It’s been a week after we left your family and we are now 76.________back home. Thank you very much for showing them around 77.________your city and providing us for the wonderful meals. After 78. ________we said goodbye to you, we went to W ashington D．C., 79.________where we stayed for three days. My brother was so much fond 80.________of the museums there that he begged my parents to staying 81. ________another couple of day. However, my father had to return to 82. ________work on Monday so we fly back last Saturday afternoon. It 83. ________was really a nice experience. If you’d like to make trip to 84. ________our city some day, I will be better than happy to be your guide. 85. ________Yours，Mike英语D1[2011·全国卷Ⅱ]【解析】Dear George，It’s been a week after we left your family and we are now 76.__since__back home. Thank you very much for showing them around 77.__us__your city and providing us for the wonderful meals. After 78. __with__we said goodbye to you, we went to Washington D．C., 79.__√__where we stayed for three days. My brother was so much\ fond 80.__much\__of the museums there that he begged my parents to staying 81. __stay__another couple of day. However, my father had to return to 82. __days__work on Monday so we fly back last Saturday afternoon. It 83. __flew__was really a nice experience. If you’d like to make ∧ trip to 84. __a__our city some day, I will be better than happy to be your guide. 85. __more__Yours，Mike76. after改为since“It’s been＋时间段＋since…”为固定句式，表示“自从……有多长时间了” 77. them改为us人称代词指代错误，第一句话中提到的是we。

浙江省2012高考英语二轮复习专题训练：短文改错+书面表达（83）第一节：短文改错（共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分）假如英语课上老师要求同学们交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的一篇作文。

文中共有10处语言错误，要求你在错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），在其下面写上该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写上修改后的词。

注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2．只允许修改10处，多者（从11处起）不记分。

Susan,I'm very gladly to hear you are coming to visit me the next Friday. Unfortunately,I won't be able to meet you at the airport although I have classes in the afternoon.You won't find difficult to get to the city center. The airport bus leaves every30 minute and will take you rightly to the Friendship Hotel. My classes will be overby then or I will pick you up there. I will take you together to a hot pot restaurantfor dinner and we'll talk with our plan for the weekend over dinner. Having a pleasanttrip and see you Friday.Yours,Zhang Ming第二节：书面表达（共1题；满分30 分）假设你是Teens报纸的读者Tom，请你根据所给的背景材料给Peter写封回信。

浙江省2012高考英语二轮复习专题训练：短文改错+书面表达（94）第一节：短文改错（共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分）下面短文中有10处语言错误。

请在有错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词。

增加：在缺词处加上一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写上修改后的词。

注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2．只允许修改10处，多者（从11处起）不计分。

例如：It was very nice to get your invitation to spend/\ weekend with you．LuckilyI wasthe am completely free then, so I’ll to say “yes”．I’ll arrive in Bristol at around 8pm in Friday evening．on Never shall I forget the first English lesson giving by Miss Liu．One Monday morning, when she entered in the classroom, we found that she was young and beautiful lady．Then she introduced herself and said they shouldn’t call her Teacher Liu but Miss Liu．Late, she let us go the blackboard and said something about ourselves in English in turn．When it was my turn, I felt too shy that I did n’t dare to say anything before the class．She went up to me and said kind, “Don’t be afraid．I believe you can do it well．” At last, I went to the blackboard．She praised me for that I had done．第二节：书面表达（满分30分）本周是你校的“文化·艺术周”，周三你们有幸邀请到了在W大学任教的外籍老师Hudson 教授给高一（8）班的学生上了一节英语课。

浙江省2012高考英语二轮复习专题训练：短文改错+书面表达（2）第一节：短文改错（共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分）下面短文中有10处语言错误。

请在有错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词。

增加：在缺词处加上一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写上修改后的词。

注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；Today is Mother’s Day. I love mother so much that I’ve done many things for him. In the morning I buy some flowers with my pocket money and put them in a vase. In the afternoon, I went to buy some vegetable and cooked simple but delicious dinner for my family. After the meal, I gave mother a card what I made myself and said “Happy Mother’s Day”to her. Then I told her to pay more attention on her health and not overwork. I also promised to help her to do some housework from today on. Heard the words, mother was moved to tears.Today is a specially day, warm but meaningful.第二节：书面表达（满分30分）目前一所知名高中决定在初中毕业生中降分招收音乐、体育特长生，这一做法在社会上引起了很大反响。

浙江省2012高考英语二轮复习专题训练：短文改错+书面表达（69）第一节：短文改错（共10小题，每小题1分，满分10分）假如英语课上老师要求同学们交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。

文中共有10处语言错误，要求你在错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（Λ），并在其下面写上该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写上修改后的词。

注意： 1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;2. 只允许修改10处, 多者 ( 从第11处起 ) 不计分。

例如：It was very nice to get your invitation to spend Λ weekend with you.Luckily Ithewas completely free then, so I’ll to say “yes”. I’ll arrive in Bristol at around 8 pm in Friday.am onI firmly believe that everyone in the world loves his mother. So am I. My mother is an ordinary teacher. She always works hardly, just as other mothers do every day. In fact, she isn’t good health. She had been suffering from arthritis (关节炎) for many years. In spite of this, he never stops working or gives up hope. I still remember the day that my mother accepted a card of congratulations for Teachers’ Day from her director. The card was read “Thank you for your hard works; Happy Teachers’ Day to you!” At that moment, I was so moving that tears came to my eyes. I am proud of my mother.第二节：书面表达（满分30分）最近，你校高一学生在校报“答疑解惑”栏目中恳求即将毕业的高三同学告诉他们高中阶段学好英语的秘诀。

为什么会导致老人痴呆痴呆症是一种神经系统的状况，在某些情况下成为失智症。

它是由于大脑中的神经元（神经细胞）失去或被破坏造成的，导致了一系列认知、情感和行为问题。

老年痴呆症是发病率最高的痴呆症之一，占所有痴呆症的60-70％。

随着人口年龄结构的变化和人均寿命的延长，痴呆症的患病率也越来越高。

据统计，全球有超过5000万人患有老年痴呆症。

因此，老年痴呆症已经成为一个非常重要的社会问题。

老年痴呆症有很多种原因，以下是最常见的：1.老年痴呆症家族遗传2.高血压、高血脂3.糖尿病4.阿尔兹海默病5.前额痴呆症6.脑血管意外7.酗酒8.烟草使用9.缺乏运动10.压力和抑郁11.缺乏休息和脑力锻炼治疗方法1.药物治疗药物治疗是治疗老年痴呆症最常用的方法。

药物治疗的主要目的是控制症状和减缓疾病的进展。

某些药物如多巴酚丁胺、地西泮、甘氨酸等可以提高神经元的通透性，增强神经元的代谢活性，促进神经轴突的延长，并对脑细胞的损伤有一定的保护作用。

2.物理治疗物理治疗通过按摩、物理疗法、针灸等手段，可以缓解老年痴呆症的症状。

物理治疗可以增加老年痴呆症患者的身体功能，并通过加强身体和大脑之间的连接，提高患者的记忆和思考能力。

3.脑电刺激脑电刺激既可以治疗中枢神经系统的疾病，也可以诱导脑功能的恢复。

通过脑电刺激，可以促进神经元之间的通信，有效地提高记忆力和思考能力。

注意事项1.保持良好的生活习惯定期进行体检、保证合理的营养和适量的运动，可以有效预防老年痴呆症的发生。

2.适当的社交活动适当的社交活动可以促进大脑活力，并改善老年痴呆症患者的情绪状态和自信心。

3.保持规律的生活老年痴呆症患者需要保持规律的生活，主要包括规律的饮食时间、作息时间以及规律的休息和睡眠时间。

4.提高适应能力老年痴呆症患者的生活可能会遭受较大的改变，因此需要提高自己的适应能力。

例如：纯磨练注意力，法外把有所照顾的宠物陪在身边，用书籍、音乐等方式来放松身心。

总之，预防老年痴呆症非常重要，如果可能，请保持一个健康的生活方式、定期体检、规律的锻炼、适当的社交和建立良好的休息和睡眠习惯。