2015高考新课标卷II 短文改错 解析
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2015年全国卷I第一节短文改错(10分)When I was a child, I hoped to live in the city. I think I would be happy there. Now I am living in a city, but I miss my home in countryside. There the air is clean or the mountains are green. Unfortunately, on the development of industrialization, the environment has been polluted. Lots of studies have been shown that global warming has already become a very seriously problem. The airs we breathe in is getting dirtier and dirtier. Much rare animals are dying out. We must found ways to protect your environment. If we fail to do so, we’ll live to regret it.短文改错:第一行:think改为thought 第二行:in与countryside中间加the第二行:or改为and 第三行:on改为with 第四行去掉been第五行:seriously改为serious airs改为air Much改为Many第六行:found改为find your改为our/the2015年全国卷II四、改错One day, little Tony went to a shopping center with his parent. It was very crowded. Tony saw a toy on a shop window. He liked it so very much that he quickly walked into the shop. After looks at the toy for some time, he turned around and found where his parents were missing. Tony was scared and begun to cry. A woman saw him crying and telling him to wait outside a shop. Five minutes later. Tony saw parents. Mom said,” How nice to see you again! Dad and I were terrible worried.”Tony promised her that this would never happen again.71. parent改为parents72. on改为in73. very去掉74. looks改为looking75. where改为that76. begun改为began77. telling改为told78. a改为the79. saw后加his80. terrible改为terribly2014年全国卷I第一节短文改错(共10小题;每小题1分,满分10分)假段定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。
2015高考英语:短文改错练习(2)及答案解析短文改错议论文【英语卷(解析)·2015届河北省邯郸市馆陶县一中高三7月调研考试(201407)】第一节短文改错(共10小题;每小题1分,满分10分)假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。
文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。
每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写上该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写上修改后的词。
【答案】71.had改为have 解析:考查动词的时态。
句意:许多年轻人都有抽烟的习惯,尽管他们还是中学生。
整个文章用一般现在时来叙述客观事实,故用一般现在时。
72. student 改为students。
解析:考查名词的单复数。
句意:虽然他们还是中学生,根据they 来判断用复数形式。
73.do 改为does 解析:考查动词的时态。
Do harm to 对。
有害。
整篇文章用一般现在时来叙述。
74. realized 后的that去掉解析:考查宾语从句。
句意:越来越多的人意识到这个问题的严重性。
Relize后面引导宾语从句由how来引导,故把that去掉。
75.boring 改为bored 解析:考查形容词辨析。
Be bored with 厌烦。
76. other 改为others 解析:考查代词。
与上文提到some people 相呼应。
77.himself 改为themselves 解析:考查反身代词。
句意:其它人认为抽烟能清醒自己。
与others相呼应。
78. causing 改为caused 解析:考查动词的。
句意:事实上,抽烟导致了许多疾病。
这是个叙述过去发生的事,故用一般过去时。
79. the waste of money 中the 改为a 解析:考查冠词。
A waste of sth浪费某物。
2015年高考全国卷2英语试题第Ⅰ卷第二部分阅读理解(共两节,满分40分)Asignedoff forthenight.Fortunately,Ididn’tgetanychannelsshowingall-nightmoviesorIwou ldneverhavegottentobed.ThenIstarteddevelopingaproblemwiththesetthatinvolvedstatic(静电)noise.Forsomereason,whencertainshowsswitchedintoacommercial,aloudnois ewouldsoundforafewseconds.Gradually,thisnoisebegantoappearduringashow,an dtogetridofit,Ihadtochangetoanotherchannelandthenchangeitback.Sometimest histechniquewouldnotwork,andIhadtopickupthesetandshakeittoremovethesound .Iactuallybegantobuildupmyarmmuscles(肌肉)shakingmyset.Whenneitherofthesemethodsremovedthestaticnoise,Iwouldsithelplesslyan dwaitforthenoisetogoaway.AtlastIendeduphittingthesetwithmyfirst,anditsto ppedworkingaltogether.Mytriptotherepairshopcostme$62,andthesitisworkingw ellnow,butIkeepexpectingmoretrouble.21.WhydidtheauthorsayhewasfooledintobuyingtheTVsetA.Hegotanoldermodelthanhehadexpected.B Hecouldn’treturnitwhenitwasbroken. BHecouldhaveboughtitatalowerprice.DHefailedtofindanymovieshowsonit.22.Whichofthefollowinganbestreplacethephrase“signedoff”inparagraph1A.endedalltheirprogramsBprovidedfewerchannelsCchangedtocommercialsDshowedall-nightmovies23.HowdidtheauthorfinallygetthisTVsetworkingagainA.ByshakingandhittingitBByturningitonandoffCByswitchingchannelsDByhavingitrepaired24.HowdoestheauthorsoundwhentellingthestoryA.CuriousBAnxiousCCautiousDHumorousBHerearesomewaystoturnyourhomeintopartofyourdietplan.Openthecurtainsandturnupthelights.darkenvironmentsaremorelikelytoenc ourageovereating,forpeopleareoftenlessself-conscious(难为情)whenthey’reinpoorlylitplaces–andsomorelikelytoeatlotsoffood.Ifyourh omedoesn’thaveenoughwindowlight,getmorelampsandfloodtheplacewithbrightn ess.lessthanthoseinayelloworredroom.Warmcolorslikeyellowmakefoodappearmo reap petizing,whilecoldcolorsmakeuslesshungry.Sowhenit’stimetorepaint,go blue.Don’tforgettheclock–ortheradio.Peoplewhoeatslowlytendtoconsumeabou t70fewercalories(卡路里)permealthanthosewhorushthroughtheirmeals.Beginkeepingtrackofthetime,a ndtrytomakedinnerlastat30mi nutes.Andwhileyou’reatit,actuallysitdowntoea t.Ifyouneedsomehelpslowingdown,turningonrelaxingmusic.Itmakesyoulesslike lytorushthroughameal.25.Thetextisespeciallyhelpfulforthosewhocareabout____.A.theirhomecomfortsBtheirbodyshapeChousebuyingDhealthydiets26.Ahomeenvironmentinbluecanhelppeople____.A.digestfoodbetterBreducefoodintakeCburnmorecaloriesDregaintheirappetites27.WhatarepeopleadvisedtodoatmealtimesA.Eatquickly.BPlayfastmusicCUsesmallerspoonsDTurndownthelights28.WhatcanbeasuitabletitleforthetextA.IsYourHouseMakingYouFatBWaysofServingDinnerCEffectsofSelf-ConsciousnessDIsYourHomeEnvironmentRelaxingCMorestudentsthaneverbeforearetakingagapyear(间隔年)beforegoingtouniversity.Itusedtobethe“yearoff”betweenschoolandunive rsity.Thegap-yearphenomenonoriginated(起源)withthemonthsleftovertoOxbridgeapplicantsbetweenentranceexamsinNovemb erandthestartofthenextacademicyear.Thisyear,25,310studentswhohaveacceptedplacesinhighereducationinstitu tionshaveputofftheirentryuntilnextyear,accordingtostatisticsonuniversity entranceprovidedbytheUniversityandCollegeAdmissionsService(UCAS).Thatisarecord14.7%increaseinthenumberofstudentstakingagapyear.TonyHi gginsfromUCASsaidthatthestatisticsaregoodnewsforeveryoneinhighereducatio n.“Studentswhotakeawell-plannedyearoutaremorelikelytobesatisfiedwith,an dcomplete,theirchosencourse.Studentswhotakeagapyearareoftenmorematureand responsible,”hesaid.29.WhatdowelearnaboutthegapyearfromthetextA.Itisflexibleinlength.BItisatimeforrelaxationCItisincreasinglypopularDItisrequiredbyuniversitiesA.arebetterpreparedforcollegestudiesBknowalotmoreabouttheirfuturejob CaremorelikelytoleaveuniversityindebtDhaveabetterchancetoentertopuniversities31.HowdoesOwainJamesfeelaboutthegap-yearphenomenonA.He’spuzzled B He’sworriedC He’ssurprisedD He’sannoyed32.WhatwouldmoststudentsdoontheirvacationaccordingtoNUSstatisticsA.Attendadditionalcourses.BMakeplansforthenewterm CEarnmoneyfortheireducationDPreparefortheirgraduatestudiesDChooseYourOne-Day-Tours!TourA-Bath&Stonehenge:includingentrancefeestotheancientRomanbathroomsand Stonehenge-£37until26Marchand£39thereafter.Visitthecitywithover2,000yearsofhistoryandBathAbbey,theRoyalCrescentandt heCostumeMuseum,Stonehengeisoneoftheworld'smostfamousprehistoricmonument sdatingbackover5,000years.TourB-Oxford&StartfordincludingentrancefeestotheUniversityStMary'sChurch TowerandAnneHathaway's-£32until12Marchand£36thereafterOxford:IncludesaguidedtourofEngland'soldestuniversitycityandcolleges.Loo koverthe"cityofdreamingspires(尖顶)"fromStMary’sChurchTower.Stratford:Includesaguide dtourexploringmuchofth eShakespearewonder.TourC-WindsorCastle&HamptonCourtincludingentrancefeestoHamptonCourtPalac e-£34until11Marchand£37thereafter.TourD-CambridgeincludingentrancefeestotheTowerofSaintMarytheGreat-£33until18Marchand£37thereafter.IncludesaguidedtourofCambridge,thefamousuniversitytown,andthegardensofth e18thcentury.33.WhichtourwillyouchooseifyouwanttoseeEngland’soldestuniversitycityA.TourBTourCTourDTour34.Whichofthefollowingtourschargesthelowestfeeon17MarchA.WindsorCastle&HamptonCourtBOxford&StratfordCBath&StonehengeDCambridge35.WhyisHamptonCourtamajortouristattractionA.ItusedtobethehomeofroyalfamiliesB.Itusedtobeawell-knownmazeC.ItistheoldestpalaceinBritainD.Itisaworld-famouscastle第二节((共5小题;每小题2分,满分10分)根据短文内容,从短文后的选项中选出能填入空白处的最佳选项。
2015年高考全国卷2英语试题第Ⅰ卷第一部分听力(共两节,满分30分)略第二部分阅读理解(共两节,满分40分)AMy color television has given me nothing but a headache. I was able to buy it a little over a year ago because I had my relatives give me money for my birthday instead of clothes that wouldn’t fit. I let a salesclerk fool me into buying a discontinued model. I realized this a day later, when I saw newspaper advertisements for the set at seventy-five dollars less than I had paid. The set worked so beautiful when I first got it home that I would keep it on until stations signed off for the night. Fortunately, I didn’t get any channels showing all-night movies or I would never have gotten to bed.Then I started developing a problem with the set that involved static(静电) noise. For some reason, when certain shows switched into a commercial, a loud noise would sound for a few seconds. Gradually, this noise began to appear during a show, and to get rid of it, I had to change to another channel and then change it back. Sometimes this technique would not work, and I had to pick up the set and shake it to remove the sound. I actually began to build up my arm muscles(肌肉) shaking my set.When neither of these methods removed the static noise, I would sit helplessly and wait for the noise to go away. At last I ended up hitting the set with my first, and it stopped working altogether. My trip to the repair shop cost me $62, and the sit is working well now, but I keep expecting more trouble.21. Why did the author say he was fooled into buying the TV set?A.He got an older model than he had expected.B.He couldn’t return it when it was broken.C.He could have bought it at a lower price.D.He failed to find any movie shows on it.【参考答案】C【考查内容】细节理解题【解析思路】根据第一段第四行“when I saw newspaper advertisements for the set at seventy-five dollars less than I had paid.”当我看到报纸上75美元比我买的价格低的时候,我感觉我上当了。
2015年全国高考试题独家解析(新课标卷Ⅱ)英语答案第一部分听力1-5 ACABC 6-10 BABCB 11-15 ABCAB 16-20 CBAAC第二部分阅读理解第一节阅读理解21.C 【解析】依据第一段中的“I let a salesclerk fool me into buying a discontinued model. Idealized this a day later, when I saw newspaper advertisements for the set at seventy-five dollars less than I had paid”。
可知答案。
22.A 【解析】结合画线部分所在的句子“The set worked so beautifully when I first got it home that I would keep it on until stations signed off for the night”可知,此处指作者一开始把它带回家时,一切如此顺利以至于作者一直看到电视台“停止播放节目”。
故选A。
23.D 【解析】依据最后一段的“My trip to the repair shop cost me $62,and the set is working well now”可知,最终作者到维修店才使电视机恢复正常。
24.D 【解析】由文章第一段的“My color television has given me nothing but a headache”,第二段中的“I actually began to build up my arm muscles(肌肉)shaking my set”,以及最后一段中的“but I keep expecting more trouble”可知,作者用幽默的语气描述了这台电视机给自己带来的烦恼。
B25.B 【解析】依据第一段中的“Your house may have an effect on your figure... whether you pack on the pounds or keep them off”,再结合该段最后一句“Here are some ways to turn your home into part of your diet plan”可知,B项正确。
高中英语真题:2015高考英语短文改错(8)及参考答案短文改错下面文中共有10处语言错误,要求你在错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词。
增加:在缺词处加一个漏词符号(/\),并在该句下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;2. 只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Maria was afraid that she was going to have to deliver a bad ne ws to her friend Freddy. She was upsetting about the news hers elf. In the spring, Maria’s mother had said Maria might be allowed bring a frie nd along on the family two-week vacation at the beach. Since then, Maria and Freddy had been doing nothingand planning all the thing they would do together. By the time A ugust had arrived, Maria’s mother had total forgotten her promise. When Maria reminded her, she said that she was sorry but th at it wo uldn’t be enough room for Freddy because Maria’s cousi n, Theresa, would be going to the shore with them. Now Freddy was in his way to Maria’s house.【参考答案】3.Maria was afraid that she was going to have to deliver a bad ne ws to her friendtheFreddy. She was upsetting about the news herself. In the spring , Maria’s mother hadupsetsaid Maria might be allowed∧bring a friend along on the family t wo-week vacation atto family’sthe beach. Since then, Maria and Freddy had been doing nothin g and planning all thebutthing they would do together. By the time August had arrived, M aria’s mother hadthingstotal forgotten her promise. When Maria reminded her, she said that she was sorry buttotallythat it wouldn’t be enough room for Freddy because Maria’s cou sin, Theresa, wouldtherebe going to the shore with them. Now Freddy was in his way to Maria’s house.on4.短文改错(共10小题;每小题1.5分,满分15分)文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。
2015年普通高等学校招生全国统一考试英语本试卷分第Ⅰ卷(选择题)和第Ⅱ卷(非选择题)两部分。
考试结束后,将本试卷和答题卡一并交回。
第二部分阅读理解(共两节,满分40分)第一节(共15小题:每小题2分,满分30分)阅读下列短文,从每题所给的四个选项(A、B、C和D)中,选出最佳选项,并在答题卡上将该项涂黑。
AMy color television has given me nothing but a headache.I was able to buy it a little over a year ago because I had my relatives give me money for my birthday instead of a lot of clothes that wouldn’t fit.I leta salesclerk fool me into buying a discontinued model,I realized this a day late,when I saw newspaper advertisements for the set at seventy-five dollars less than I had paid,The set worked so beautifully when I first got it home that I would keep it on until stations signed off for the night,Fortunately, I didn’t got any channels showing all-night movies or I would never have gotten to bed.Then I started developing a problem with the set that involved static (静电) noise. For some reason,when certain shows switched into a commercial, a loud noise would sound for a few seconds. Gradually,this noise began to appear during a show, and to get rid of it,I had to change to another channel and then change it back.Sometimes this technique would not work,and I had to pick up the set and shake it to remove the sound. I actually began to build up my arm muscles(肌肉) shaking my set.When neither of these methods removed the static noise ,I would sit helplessly and wait for the noise to go away.At last I ended up hitting the set with my fist,and it stopped working altogether .My trip to the repair shop cost me $62, and the set is working well now,but I keep expecting more trouble.21.Why did the author say he was fooled into buying the TV set?A.He got an older model than he had expected.B.He couldn’t return it when it was broken.C.He could have bought it at a lower price.D.He failed to find any movie shows on it.22.Which of the following can best replace the phrase”signed off”in Paragraph 1?A.ended all their programsB.provided fewer channelsC.changed to commercialsD.showed all-night movies23.How did the author finally get his TV set working again?A.By shaking and hitting it. B .By turning it on and off. C.By switching channels.D.By having it repaired.24. How does the anthor sound when telling the story ?A. CuriousB. AnxiousC. CautiousD. HumorousBYour house may have an effect on your figure . Experts say the way you design your home could play arole in whether you pack on the pounds or keep them off . You can make your environment work for you instead of against you . Here are some ways to turn your home into part of diet plan.Open the curtains and turn up the lights . Dark environments are more likely to encourage overeating , for people are often less self-conscious(难为情)when they’re in poorly lit places-and so more likely to eat lots of food . If your home doesn’t have enough window light , get more lamps and flood the place with brightness.Mind the colors . Research suggests warm colors fuel our appetites . In one study , people who ate meals in a blue room consumed 33 percent less than those in a yellow or red room . Warm colors like yellow make tood appear more appetizing , while cold colors make us feel less hungry . So when it’s time to repaint , go blue.Don’t forget the clock-or the radio. People who eat slowly tend to consume about 70 fewer calories(卡路里)per meal than those who rush through their meals. Begin keeping track of the time, and try to make dinner last at least 30 minutes, And while you’re at it, actually sit down to eat. If you need some help slowing down , turn on relaxing music. It makes you less likely to rush through a meal.Downsize the dishs, Big serving bowls and plates can easily make us fat. We eat about 22 percent more when using a 12-inch plate instead of a 10-inch plate. When we choose a large spoon over a smaller one ,total intake(摄入)jumps by 14 percent. And we’ll pour about 30 percent more liquid into a short, wide glass than a tall, skinny glass.25.The text is especially helpful for those who care about_______.A. their home comfortsB. their body shapeC. house buyingD. healthy diets26.A home environment in blue can help people_________.A.digest food betterB.reduce food intakeC.burn more caloriesD.regain their appetites27.What are people advised to do at mealtimes?A.Eat quickly.B.Play fast music.e smaller spoons.D.Turn down the lights.28.What can be a suitable title for the test?A.Is Your Hourse Making You Fat?B.Ways of Serving DinnerC.Effects of Self-ConsciousnessD.Is Your Home Environment Relaxing?CMore students than ever cefore are taking a gap-year (间隔年)before going to university.It used to be called the “year off” between school and university.The gap-year phenomenon originated(起源) with the months left over to Oxbridge applicants between entrance exams in November and the start of the next academic year.This year, 25,310 students who have accepted places in higher education institutions have put off their entry until next year, according to statistics on university entrance provided by University and College Admissions Serbice(UCAS).That is a record 14.7% increase in the number of students taking a gap year. Tony Higgins from UCAS said that the statistics are good news for everyone in higher education. “Students who take a well-planned year out are more likely to be stisfied with, and complete, their chosen course. Students who take a gap year are often more mature and responsible,” he said.But not everyone is happy. Owain James, the president of the National Union of Students(NUS), argued that the increase is evidence of student had ship – young people are being forced into earning money before finishing their education. “New students are now aware that they are likely to leave university up to£15,000 in debt. It is not surprising that more and More students are taking a gap year to earn money to support their study for the degree.NUS statistics show that over 40% of students are forced to work during term time and the figure increases to 90% d uring vacation periods,”he said.29. What do we learn about the gap year from the text?A. It is flexible in length.B. It is a time for relaxation.C. It is increasingly popular.D. It is required by universities.30. According to Tony Higgins,students taking a gap year______.A.are better prepared for college studiesB.know a lot more about their future jobsC.are more likely to leave university in debtD.have a better chance to enter top universities31. How does Owain James feel about the gap-year phenomenon?A. He's puzzled.B. He's worried.C. He's surprised.D. He's annoyed.32. What would most students do on their vacation according to NUS statistics?A.Attend additional courses.B. Make plans for the new term.C.Earn money for their education.D.Prepaer for their graduate studies.DChoose Your One-Day ToursTour A-Bath & Stonchenge including entrance fees to the ancient Roman bathrooms and Stonehenge-£37 until 26 March and £39 thereafter.Visit the city with over 2,000 years of history and Bath Abbey,the Royal Crescent and the Costute Mtsan.Stonehenge is one of the world’s most famous prehistoric monuments dating back over 5,000 years. Tour B-Oxford & Stratford including entrance fees to the University St Mary’s Church Tower and Anne Hathaway's house一£32 until 12 March and £36 thereafter.Oxford: Includes a guided of England’s oldest university city and colleges. Look over the “city of dreaming spires(尖顶)”form St Mary’s Church Tower. Stratford: Includes a guided tour exploring much of the Shakespeare wonder.Tour C—Windsor Castle & Hampton Court including entrance fees to Hampton Court Palace--£34 until March and £37 thereafter.Includes a guided tour of Windsor and Hampton Court, Henry Mill’s favourite palace. Free time to visit Windsor Castle(entrace fees not included). With 500 years of history, Hampton Court was once the home of four Kings and one Queen. Now this former royal palace is open to the public as a major tourist attraction. Visit the palace and its various historic gardens, which include the famous maze(迷宫)where it is easy to get lost!Tour D-Cambridge including entrance fees to the Tower of Saint Mary the Great-£33 .until 18 March and £37 thereafter.Includes a guided tour of Cambridge, the famous university town, and the gardens of the 18th century.33.Which tour will you choose if you want to see England’s oldest university city?A.Tour AB.Tour BC.Tour CD.Tour D34.Which of the following tours charges the lowest fee on 17 March?A.Windsor Castle & Hampton Court.B.Oxford & StratfordC.Bath &Stonehenge.D.Cambridge.35.Why is Hampton Court a major tourist attraction?A.It used to be the home of royal families.B.It used to be a well-known mazeC.It is the oldest palace in BritainD.It is a world-famous castle.第二节(共5小题:每小题2分,满分10分)根据短文容,从短文后的选项中选出能填入空白处的最佳选项。
2015年全国新课标II英语试题分析2015新课标全国卷II仍然延续了去年的命题趋势,从整体上来说难度适中。
突出语境和语感,淡化语法,考查的重点与往年相比基本变化不大。
不存在偏难的试题,阅读和完型的主旨大意很容易读懂;基础题中词汇和语法也都是平时练习到的。
但是要想达到一个相对满意的分数,细节点的关注度需要加强,避免不必要的失分。
与2014年新课标全国卷II相比,2015年的题型、分值和题量没有变化,只有语法填空题在题目要求上有一点小变化,就是由原来的每空不多于3个词,变为未给提示词的,每空只填一个词,给出提示词的,则需要按照语境写出正确的词形、时态或语态。
整套试卷侧重考查学生对语篇信息的理解,以及在语境中综合运用语言的能力。
体现了课标提出的对学生语言知识运用能力的考查。
但本套试题在难度上较去年还是稍有增加,主要体现在以下几个方面:1.词汇要求提升。
今年的文章词汇难度较2014年有明显的提升,主要体现在阅读理解的文章及选项设题上。
2. 题目设置难度增加,主要体现在完形填空文章的理解和设题。
3. 考查的知识点范围扩大。
从语法填空和短文改错来看,知识点的考查范围比去年相比有所扩大。
总的来说,该试题符合了新课标的命题规律,体现了注重基础和能力的命题要求,对今后英语教学具有指导意义。
对于学生来讲,要想考好英语,基础知识、综合语言素质是前提。
阅读写作综合性最强,分值最高,需要做好长期准备。
一、阅读理解阅读理解四篇依然遵循记叙文、说明文、应用文的出题形式,词汇难度也不大。
即使相对偏难的词,比如commercial, appetites, consume, applicant s, responsible, academic 也通过阅读的语境提示而猜测出来,文章整体的行文逻辑也是一目了然的,考生在处理选择题的时候也是很容易定位原文的。
与去年相比,更突出对考生语言运用能力的考查。
阅读理解的4篇文章,仍然延续去年的以说明文、记叙文和应用文为主的局面,较少涉及比较难的议论文,文章的话题多贴近社会和生活,感情色彩正面积极。
2015高考新课标卷II 短文改错解析
山东郯城第一中学高级教师徐保国假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下短文。
短文中共有10处错误,每句中最多有两处。
错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧), 并在此符号下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线, 并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1、每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2、只允许修改10处, 多者(从第11处起) 不计分。
One day, little Tony went to a shopping center with his parent. It was very crowded. Tony saw a toy on a shop window. He liked it so very much that he quickly walked into the shop. After looks at the toy for some time, he turned around and found where his parents were missing. Tony was scared and begun to cry. A woman saw him crying and telling him to wait outside a shop. Five minutes later. Tony saw parents. Mom said, ”How nice to see you again! Dad and I were terrible worried.” Tony promised her that this would never happen again.
第一处:parent改为parents 考查名词。
根据下文,Five minutes later. Tony saw parents.可知此句中parent应该用复数形式。
第二处:on改为in考查介词。
在商店橱窗里,用介词in。
第三处:删去very。
前面有so,不用very,so和that构成固定句式。
第四处:looks改为looking。
考查非谓语动词。
after是介词,后面应该用动名词作宾语。
第五处:where改为that考查宾语从句引导词。
that引导宾语从句,在从句中不做成分,也没有意义,而where引导宾语从句时,在从句中作地点状语,有“在哪里”的意思。
第六处:begun改为began考查动词。
begin是不及物的,没有被动语态,此处直接用过去式形式和前面的was scared一起做并列谓语。
第七处:telling改为told考查谓语动词。
and后tell和saw一起做并列谓语,而并非和crying 并列做宾补。
第八处:a改为the考查冠词。
上面已经提到shop,再次提到用定冠词。
第九处:saw后加his。
名词parents前缺少限定词。
第十处:terrible改为terribly考查副词。
修饰形容词worried,用副词形式。