英语观点对比类作文写作技巧.ppt

Discussion
1. Do you like surfing the Internet ? 2. What do you do when you surf the Internet ? 3. Do you think the Internet is good or bad for us ? advantages and disadvantages of the Internet 4. What are your suggestions out using the Internet
The use of the disadvantages of the network
The use of the disadvantages of the network
• 网恋的普及，很多青少年都被诱惑和欺骗 The popularity of online dating, many teenagers are seduction and deception
4. 欣赏音乐、观看体育比赛、玩各种游戏, 放松心情G4
We can enjoy music, watch sports matches, play all kinds of games ,which helps us relax ourselves.
The benefits of use of the network
• 互联网缩短了人与人之间的距离，地球成了名副其实的地球村。 • Internet shortens distance between people ,the earth became a genuine global village.
然而事物都有两面性。
Their reasons are as follows. In the first place… What’s more… In addition…

• In the first place… ，In the second place…
In the third place…
• Finally/ Last but not least/, ....
• 表示递进、强调的关联词
• ... Besides/ What’s more/ In addition/ Furthermore/ Moreover/ Apart from/ What’s worse / to make matters worse…
英语观点比照类 作文的写作技能
Introduction (topic)
Body
(supporting ideas)
Conclusion
The outline of the writing:
Introduction paragraph: …
Body
Point 1… Point 2…
supporting idea 1 supporting idea 2 supporting idea 1
• Eg: they can relax themselves for a while and rest their brains so that they will be
more energetic. What’s more ,...
Conclusion: 小段总结，进一步 亮明观点，前后照应。
Reason 2:活动使精神放松，大 脑休息，有利于学习
• 〔注意：两个观点之间的连接〕 • 表示递进的连接成分通常有哪些： • 〔让学生讨论并在草稿上列出〕
• Eg: moreover ; ...
• 表示递进的连接成分通常有：
• what’s more ；besides ; moreover ; in addition；furthermore ； etc.

Recently our class had a heated discussion about whether middle school students should go to school with mobile phones. Our opinions are as follows. Some students think they should bring mobile phones to school. For one thing, they think mobile phone can help them keep in touch with their friends and their family whenever they need. For another, they think it helpful for them to search for useful information with mobile phones when they have difficulty with their study. In addition, they can relax themselves with the help of mobile phones when they are tired.
On the other hand ，online shopping also has many disadvantages. The pictures of goods shown on the computer screen are not always what they are. As a result ，we can be cheated easily. What's worse ，we cannot see the things in detail. In a word ，despite the disadvantages of online shopping，I think it is an advanced way to do shopping. So we should develop it.

• Pattern: A1, A2, A3; B1, B2, B3. （Allabout Pattern） • Example: Contrast • 1]My hometown is quite different from what it used to be. • Subtopic: 2]Just a little more that ten years ago my
2.1 To examine one thing thoroughly and then
start the other.
• Focus: The aspects examined in the two things should be identical and in the same order.
structure.
• Notes:1) 1],2],3] indicates the level of generality at which
a sentence is in the paragraph.
•
2) C] is the short form of conclusion, that is, the
• C From a dull little village with clusters of shabby houses in the past, my hometown has now transformed into a big city, cheerful, colorful,and prosperous.
• There are two major ways of organizing paragraphs of comparison and contrast.
• One way is to examine one thing thoroughly and then start the other– Allabout pattern; The other way is to examine two things at the same time, discussing them point by point– Seesaw pattern.

第四段：（8， 9, 10句）
1、 Just as an old saying goes, “One coin has two
sides.” In my opinion，…
2、 As far as I am concerned, I agree with the
latter opinion to some extent. I think that …
about whether students should use cellphones.
3、Different people have different opinions.
第二段：（4 ） 1. 30% of the students hold the view that students should not use cellphones. First of all, 理由1 . Besides, 理由2. In addition, 理由3. Last but not least, 理由4. 第三段：（5、7句） On the contrary, the other students don’t think so. The reasons are as follows. For one thing, 理由1. For another, 理由2. What’s worse, 理由3. Most important of all, 理由4.
目前，一些诸如GG、MM 、XiaMi等的网络语言 在青少年中极为盛行，并出现在家庭作业、报告、甚 至全国入学考试的作文中。你班就“Should Internet Slang Be Forbidden”进行了讨论，请你根据下表的 讨论内容用英语写一篇短文。表的讨论内容用英语写 一篇短文。

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三班的同学进行了一场有关英语学习的讨论。讨论的题目 是：学习英语要不要从儿童时期开始？请你根据下表中的 提示写一篇短文，介绍讨论的情况。
一些同学认为(正方) 另一些同学认为（反方）
1．应从儿童时期开始学习英语 1.不应从儿童时期开始学英语
2．儿童时期记忆力好，可以记 2.儿童时期既要学汉语拼音又
住很多单词
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二组织要点，紧扣主题
观点对比类书面表达其要点似乎已被 出题者定位好了。但仍要逐个地，完 整无缺的把内容要点用英语短语或词 组例出来，并根据需要按顺序安排好。
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高考书面表达评分原则以及给分范围
第五档（很好）：（21- 25分） 1. 完全完成了试题规定的任务。 2. 覆盖所有内容要点。 3. 应用了较多的语法结构和词汇。 4. 语法结构或词汇方面有些许错误，但为尽力使用较复杂结
三遣词造句，初步成文
在题材明确，信息全面，要点清晰的 基础上，要根据要点和重点词汇的句 法功能和语法规则，按照提示或说明 中所提供的事实和发展的顺序遣词造 句，然后将零散的句子排列成主谓一 致，时态呼应，脉络分明，合乎逻辑， 内容完整的短文。

进一步介绍正方观点
What’s more, we can …as well as … Besides, it’s …, which …
介绍反方观点
However, … of the students think… On the other hand, …of the students tifferent opinions. But …of the students think… Others argue that …In their opinion,…
进一步介绍反方观点
What’s worse… What’s more… In addition, … Besides, … Plus, … First,… Second, …Third, …
总结句
In short, no agreement has been reached yet. So far, no agreement has been reached. In short, the students have not arrived at any agreement yet.
介绍讨论的主题(开头句 ： 介绍讨论的主题 开头句)： 开头句
我们举行了一场讨论，讨论内容是学生是否可以 我们举行了一场讨论，讨论内容是学生是否可以…… We had a discussion about whether students should be allowed to … 我们已经作了一个调查，调查内容是学生是否可以…… 我们已经作了一个调查，调查内容是学生是否可以 We’ve had a survey on whether students should be allowed to … 我写信是要告诉你我们的一场讨论， 我写信是要告诉你我们的一场讨论，讨论内容是否可 以…… I’m writing to tell you about a discussion we have had about whether students should be allowed to…

B. none
D. neither
2. She doesn’t know anyone here, she has got ____ to talk to. A. anyone B. someone C. everyone D. no one
3. There’s __ cooking oil in the house. Would you go to the corner and get __? A. little; some B. little; any C. a little; some D. a little ; any
•
介绍讨论的主题(开头句)：
• 我们举行了一场讨论，讨论内容是是否可以…… We had a discussion about whether or not … • 我写信是要告诉你我们的一场讨论，讨论内容是 否可以…… I’m writing to tell you about a discussion we have had about whether or not…
• 6. You may drop in or just give me a call. ______ will do. (安徽2006) A. Either B. Each C. Neither D. All
• another
（1）又一,再一 (one more) He drank another glass of beer. （2）另一(个，回…);另外的 That‘s another matter.(那是另外一回事) I don‘t like this one, please show me another.
然而，在这件事上不同的人有不同的看法。
• Different people, however, think quite differently on this matter.

Example
• Classroom instruction
• • • Homework • • • Exam • • • Grading •
•
Professor Yang Professor Wu
Professor Yang Professor Wu
Professor Yang Professor Wu
buying a car vs. leasing a car oranges and bananas Shakespeare and Lu Xun a musician and an architect male and female attitudes about marriage
Activity
Select your topics
Activity : Examine the following groups of topics. Please
pick out the groups that you think are appropriate for discussing similarities and differences, and explain why you think they are appropriate for comparison/contrast.
•
•
Professor Wu: classroom instruction
•
homework
•
exam
•
grading
Point-by-point organization
Point 1: Point 2: Point 3: Point 4:
Subjectct B Subject A Subject B Subject A Subject B

一认真审题，把握题材
审题包括：
1审体裁及格式（记叙文议论文说明文应用文 ---书信、通知、演讲稿、普通格式） 2审人称（根据题目需要对人称进行合理的选 择定位） 3审时态（文章应该主要使用什么时态） 4审要点与段落（文章需写几大段落及要点分 别是什么）
二组织要点，紧扣主题
观点对比类书面表达其要点似乎已被 出题者定位好了。但仍要逐个地，完 整无缺的把内容要点用英语短语或词 组例出来，并根据需要按顺序安排好。
三遣词造句，初步成文
在题材明确，信息全面，要点清晰的 基础上，要根据要点和重点词汇的句 法功能和语法规则，按照提示或说明 中所提供的事实和发展的顺序遣词造 句，然后将零散的句子排列成主谓一 致，时态呼应，脉络分明，合乎逻辑， 内容完整的短文。
四通读审核，查漏补缺
定稿前认真检查，仔细核对，及时 修改，（内容要点是否遗漏，字母 大小写是否正确主谓是否一致，是否有 中式英语出现等）力争使全文信息 完整，结构合理，语句表达准确。
against the opinion
ending sentence
高考英语：观点对比类作文写作技巧P PT下载
高考英语：观点对比类作文写作技巧P PT下载
1 The students of class 3 had a discussion about whether it is necessary to start learning English from childhood. Opinions are divided on this issue.2 Some of them think that English learning should start from childhood. As little boys and girls have a very good memory, they can learn a lot of English words by heart. This wilWl hhealtp’sthmeomrel,ay a solid foundation for their future English learning. But others do not agree. Young children have to learn Chinese pinyin at school. If they study Chinese pinyin and English at the same time, it will be very easy for them to mix them up. This will do a lot of harm not only toWthheaitr’sCwhionressee, learning but also to their future English learning.3 In short, the students have not arrived at any agreement yet.

Different people, however, think quite differently on this matter.
People, however, differ in their opinions on this matter.
People, have taken/adopted different attitudes towards this matter.
总结
作文模板1
__________ had a discussion about whether__________. Opinions are divided on this issue. ________of the students think _________ _____________. What’s more, _______.
think/believe that...
进一步介绍 观点
What’s more… Furthermore/moreover,... Meanwhile,… What’s worse… In addition, … Besides, … Plus, … First,… Second, …Third, …
个人 观点
I think/believe
In my opinion/it’s my opinion that
As far as I’m concerned
the structure of the article
topic sentence
for the opinion
against the opinion
conclusion
my opinion
Recently we had a heated discussion on whether people should keep pets at home in cities.

Sixty percent of the students are for the idea.
Some believe that…
进一步介绍正方观点
What’s more, we can …as well as … Besides, it’s …, which …
介绍反方观点
On the other hand, …of the students think…
在大城市生活的白领一族们，工作日中总是被大量的的工作任务、人际关系所裹挟，常常因为七七八八的事情压得我们透不过来气。 实际上，不管是工作还是生活，帮助我们取得成功的并非是意志，而是行动。 以至于很多人会在失落时忘却，时常违背了自己少年时期的志向。 总是自认为通情练达，自认为精明。 从前的我们多单纯，多纯粹。 而现在，丢弃了单纯与纯粹的我们，也总算是看透了，想穿了。 但也正因为如此，逐渐就变成了少年时间的自己最憎恨的那种人。
Some think that they prefer to stay at home. In their views there are 2 reasons as follows: in the first place,they say it’s both convenient and comfortable. What’s more,they can set aside money for other purposes. Furthermore, in the second place,they will lose the chance of getting to know the outside world.
要 如何算是一篇好文章？
点 全
1.覆盖了所有的要点 2. 应用了较多的语法结构